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Thornwick: "Bob, I've never seen that before."
Bob: "Well you can't prove I/ didn't/ have it before!"
Bob: "Well you can't prove I/ didn't/ have it before!"
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Thornwick: "Bob, I've never seen seen
that before."
Bob: "Well you can't proveI/ didn't/ I
didn't have itbefore!"before!"
Thornwick: "Well, would you look
at that, there it is."
that before."
Bob: "Well you can't prove
didn't have it
Thornwick: "Well, would you look
at that, there it is."
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* LampshadeHanging: Thornwick and Bob have variably limited knowledge of the 4th wall, and often lean against it.
** Bob: "Dude, we are a C-plot at best."
** Bob: "Dude, we are a C-plot at best."
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* LampshadeHanging: LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Thornwick and Bob have variably limited knowledge of the 4th wall, and often lean against it.use the tropes of their genre to their advantage.
** Bob:"Dude, we are a C-plot at best.""Now to use my trusty hatchet that I always keep strapped to my boot."
Thornwick: "Bob, I've never seen that before."
Bob: "Well you can't prove I/ didn't/ have it before!"
** Bob:
Thornwick: "Bob, I've never seen that before."
Bob: "Well you can't prove I/ didn't/ have it before!"
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* PlayingWithFire: Bob has a tendency to leave a trail of fiery destruction in his wake, sometimes from doing drunken jigs near suspiciously open lanterns, other times just because.
** Thornwick tends to do this after he gets his spell book, his custom spells often just setting his surroundings (and usually Bob) on fire.
** Thornwick tends to do this after he gets his spell book, his custom spells often just setting his surroundings (and usually Bob) on fire.
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* PlayingWithFire: Bob has a tendency to leave a trail of fiery destruction in his wake, sometimes from doing drunken jigs near suspiciously open lanterns, other times just because.
** Thornwick tends to do this after he gets his spell book, his custom spells often just setting his surroundings (and usually Bob) on fire.
** Thornwick tends to do this after he gets his spell book, his custom spells often just setting his surroundings (and usually Bob) on fire.
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* LittleFiresEverywhere: Bob has a tendency to leave a trail of fiery destruction in his wake, sometimes from doing drunken jigs near suspiciously open lanterns, other times just because.
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* LittleFiresEverywhere: PlayingWithFire: Bob has a tendency to leave a trail of fiery destruction in his wake, sometimes from doing drunken jigs near suspiciously open lanterns, other times just because.
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** Thornwick: "Because this is a comedy, and that gives us a certain amount of immortality. "Yeah, but interludes like this make me forget."
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** Thornwick: "Because Thornwick:"Because this is a comedy, and that gives us a certain amount of immortality. "Yeah, immortality." Bob:"Yeah, but interludes like this make me forget.""
*LittleFiresEverywhere: Bob has a tendency to leave a trail of fiery destruction in his wake, sometimes from doing drunken jigs near suspiciously open lanterns, other times just because.
** Thornwick tends to do this after he gets his spell book, his custom spells often just setting his surroundings (and usually Bob) on fire.
*LittleFiresEverywhere: Bob has a tendency to leave a trail of fiery destruction in his wake, sometimes from doing drunken jigs near suspiciously open lanterns, other times just because.
** Thornwick tends to do this after he gets his spell book, his custom spells often just setting his surroundings (and usually Bob) on fire.
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*LampshadeHanging: Thornwick and Bob have variably limited knowledge of the 4th wall, and often lean against it.
**Bob: "Dude, we are a C-plot at best."
**Thornwick: "Because this is a comedy, and that gives us a certain amount of immortality. "Yeah, but interludes like this make me forget."
**Bob: "Dude, we are a C-plot at best."
**Thornwick: "Because this is a comedy, and that gives us a certain amount of immortality. "Yeah, but interludes like this make me forget."
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* TitleThemeTune: Every episode in Season 3 begins with the theme song. Since the show is ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin it doubles as an ExpositoryThemeTune.
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* TitleThemeTune: Every episode in Season 3 begins with the theme song. Since the show is ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: it doubles as an ExpositoryThemeTune.
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Thornwick and Bob are incompetent cowards. So when they go off The Road without the the army, they find themselves going through all sorts of hilarious situations on the way back to The Road.
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Thornwick and Bob are incompetent cowards. So when they go off The Road without the the army, they find themselves going through all sorts of hilarious situations on the way back to The Road.
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* ManEatingPlant: Examples include the trees that eat flesh, and the digestabush. Also elves exist to lure people to be devoured by their tree.
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* ManEatingPlant: Examples include the trees that eat flesh, flesh and the digestabush. Also Also, elves exist to lure people to be devoured by help their tree.trees devour people.
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* GodOfChaos: The adventurers meet Yvarden, their world's God of Chaos, Destruction, and Low Grade Headaches. He is established as a ChaoticStupid entity.
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* GodOfChaos: The adventurers meet Yvarden, their world's God of Chaos, Destruction, and Low Grade Low-Grade Headaches. He is established as a ChaoticStupid entity.
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* GodOfChaos: The adventurers meet Yiovardin, their world's God of Chaos, Destruction, and Low Grade Headaches. He is established as a ChaoticStupid entity.
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* GodOfChaos: The adventurers meet Yiovardin, Yvarden, their world's God of Chaos, Destruction, and Low Grade Headaches. He is established as a ChaoticStupid entity.
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* GodOfChaos: The adventurers meet Yiovardin, their world's God of Chaos, Destruction, and Low Grade Headaches.
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* GodOfChaos: The adventurers meet Yiovardin, their world's God of Chaos, Destruction, and Low Grade Headaches. He is established as a ChaoticStupid entity.
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** The Sunspire Citadel (of Doom),Castle Stabyoureyes
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** The Sunspire Citadel (of Doom),Castle Doom)
** Castle Stabyoureyes
** Castle Stabyoureyes
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* IDontLikeTheSoundOfThatPlace: Almost every episode is named for where it takes place. Examples include:
** The Forest of Madness and Terror
** The Valley of Unwitting Ends
** The Desert of Terror Birds Who Swoop Down On You And Devour You Terribly. In the Desert
** The Sunspire Citadel (of Doom),Castle Stabyoureyes
** The Jungle of Person Murder
** The Room of So Many Axes.
** The Forest of Madness and Terror
** The Valley of Unwitting Ends
** The Desert of Terror Birds Who Swoop Down On You And Devour You Terribly. In the Desert
** The Sunspire Citadel (of Doom),Castle Stabyoureyes
** The Jungle of Person Murder
** The Room of So Many Axes.
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* TitleThemeTune: Every episode in Season 3 begins with the theme song. Since the show is ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin it doubles as an ExpositoryThemeTune.
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* KickTheDog: Lord Egregious buys "boots of puppy kicking".
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* StupidEvil: Lord Egregious kills some of his own men to show that human life means nothing to him.
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* GenreSavvy: Thornwhick and Bob often remark they expect situations going certain ways according to adventure genre stereotypes.
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* GenreSavvy: Thornwhick and Bob often remark they expect situations going certain ways according to adventure genre stereotypes. They expect a MacGuffinMelee, and later make sure nobody AccidentallyBrokeTheMacGuffin.
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* [=Breaking The Fourth Wall=]: The protagonists are aware that they are in a weekly podcast with multiple seasons.
* [=Genre Savvy=]: Thornwhick and Bob often remark they expect situations going certain ways according to adventure genre stereotypes.
* [=Man Eating Plant=]: Examples include the trees that eat flesh, and the digestabush. Also elves exist to lure people to be devoured by their tree.
* [=Genre Savvy=]: Thornwhick and Bob often remark they expect situations going certain ways according to adventure genre stereotypes.
* [=Man Eating Plant=]: Examples include the trees that eat flesh, and the digestabush. Also elves exist to lure people to be devoured by their tree.
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* [=Breaking The Fourth Wall=]: BreakingTheFourthWall: The protagonists are aware that they are in a weekly podcast with multiple seasons.
*[=Genre Savvy=]: GenreSavvy: Thornwhick and Bob often remark they expect situations going certain ways according to adventure genre stereotypes.
*[=Man Eating Plant=]: ManEatingPlant: Examples include the trees that eat flesh, and the digestabush. Also elves exist to lure people to be devoured by their tree.
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* [=Fakin' MacGuffin=]: The protagonists switch the Nurian Box of Secrets with a cardboard box filled with snakes.
* [=God Of Chaos=]: The adventurers meet Yiovardin, their world's God of Chaos, Destruction, and Low Grade Headaches.
* [=Narration=]: Thornwick suffers Narration (which is just a microscopic being trying to burrow through his skull) and the duo go on a quest to cure him.
* [=God Of Chaos=]: The adventurers meet Yiovardin, their world's God of Chaos, Destruction, and Low Grade Headaches.
* [=Narration=]: Thornwick suffers Narration (which is just a microscopic being trying to burrow through his skull) and the duo go on a quest to cure him.
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* [=Fakin' MacGuffin=]: FakinMacGuffin: The protagonists switch the Nurian Box of Secrets with a cardboard box filled with snakes.
*[=God Of Chaos=]: GodOfChaos: The adventurers meet Yiovardin, their world's God of Chaos, Destruction, and Low Grade Headaches.
*[=Narration=]: InteractiveNarrator: Thornwick suffers Narration (which is just a microscopic being trying deadly disease that causes him to burrow through hear someone narrating his skull) life, and the duo go on a quest to cure him.
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Thornwick and Bob are incompetent cowards. So when they find themselves off The Road without the rest of the army, they find themselves going through all sorts of hilarious situations on the way back to The Road.
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Thornwick and Bob are incompetent cowards. So when they find themselves go off The Road without the rest of the army, they find themselves going through all sorts of hilarious situations on the way back to The Road.
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Thornwick and Bob are incompetent cowards. So when they find themselves off The Road without the rest of the army, they find themselves going through all sorts of hilarious situations on the way back to The Road.
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!! This show provides examples of:
* [=Breaking The Fourth Wall=]: The protagonists are aware that they are in a weekly podcast with multiple seasons.
* [=Genre Savvy=]: Thornwhick and Bob often remark they expect situations going certain ways according to adventure genre stereotypes.
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!! Episodes of this series provide examples of:
* [=Fakin' MacGuffin=]: The protagonists switch the Nurian Box of Secrets with a cardboard box filled with snakes.
* [=God Of Chaos=]: The adventurers meet Yiovardin, their world's God of Chaos, Destruction, and Low Grade Headaches.
* [=Narration=]: Thornwick suffers Narration (which is just a microscopic being trying to burrow through his skull) and the duo go on a quest to cure him.
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!! This show provides examples of:
* [=Breaking The Fourth Wall=]: The protagonists are aware that they are in a weekly podcast with multiple seasons.
* [=Genre Savvy=]: Thornwhick and Bob often remark they expect situations going certain ways according to adventure genre stereotypes.
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!! Episodes of this series provide examples of:
* [=Fakin' MacGuffin=]: The protagonists switch the Nurian Box of Secrets with a cardboard box filled with snakes.
* [=God Of Chaos=]: The adventurers meet Yiovardin, their world's God of Chaos, Destruction, and Low Grade Headaches.
* [=Narration=]: Thornwick suffers Narration (which is just a microscopic being trying to burrow through his skull) and the duo go on a quest to cure him.
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