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* '''Lampshaded''': ???
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* '''Lampshaded''': ???"Look Sophia, we're not going to be around forever to take care of you, and you're not getting any younger. If Hawke truly loves you, surely he'd want you to be happy instead of wasting your best years?"
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* '''Defied''': ???
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* '''Defied''': ???Sophia tells her parents that it is dishonorable to back on a promise, and that true love should be able to bear the pain/burden of long separation. They submit to her arguments.
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* '''Parodied''': Hawke has barely walked out of sight before Sophia's parents start hounding her to find another lover.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Hawke has barely walked out of sight before Sophia's parents start hounding her to find anotherlover.lover.
** Anytime Hawke leaves Sophia for any reason - even if it's to get groceries or have a smoke - her parents immediately appear with a list of eligible suitors.
** Hawke has barely walked out of sight before Sophia's parents start hounding her to find another
** Anytime Hawke leaves Sophia for any reason - even if it's to get groceries or have a smoke - her parents immediately appear with a list of eligible suitors.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Sophia's parents don't force her to entertain suitors immediately, but after the journey has lasted a year, they begin telling her about the dashing Jack and how he'd be a good husband...
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': The waiting has been taking its toll on Sophia; the once vibrant young woman has become introspective and withdrawn, having basically put her life on hold as much as possible while waiting for Hawke's return. She villainizes her family for wanting her to move on, creating an even greater rift between them and causing her parents to start despising Hawke, blaming him for their unfortunate situation.
* '''Reconstructed''': But in her new, more thoughtful state, she proceeds to study magic and other matters; when Hawke does return, matured by his experiences, she has also matured.
* '''Reconstructed''': But in her new, more thoughtful state, she proceeds to study magic and other matters; when Hawke does return, matured by his experiences, she has also matured.
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* '''Averted''': Lovers never part.
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* '''Averted''': Lovers never part.???
* '''Deconstructed''': The waiting has been taking its toll on Sophia; the once vibrant young woman has become introspective and withdrawn, having basically put her life on hold as much as possible while waiting for Hawke's return. She villainizes her family for wanting her to move on, creating an even greater rift between them and causing her parents to start despising Hawke, blaming him for their unfortunate situation.
* '''Reconstructed''': But in her new, more thoughtful state, she proceeds to study magic and other matters; when Hawke does return, matured by his experiences, she has also matured.
* '''Reconstructed''': But in her new, more thoughtful state, she proceeds to study magic and other matters; when Hawke does return, matured by his experiences, she has also matured.
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
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* '''Reconstructed''': ???
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Averted''': ???
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Averted''': ???
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* '''Reconstructed''': ???
But in her new, more thoughtful state, she proceeds to study magic and other matters; when Hawke does return, matured by his experiences, she has also matured.
* '''ZigZagged''': ???
Zagged''': Her parents try to force her to marry Jack, but when he falls out of favor with the king, they break off the engagement on the grounds it was invalid, and then Sophia starts to fall in love with Richard, and her parents encourage her, and suddenly she breaks off, remembering Hawke.
* '''Averted''':???Lovers never part.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???'''Exploited''': Sophia's father forces her to marry Jack because that will make Hawke show up.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
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* '''Played For Laughs''': ??? Sophia is obviously more in love with the vision of herself as the endlessly faithful lover than with Hawke, and Hawke is a MilesGloriosus whose return nevertheless deeply relieves Jack, who was afraid he'd have to marry the silly girl.
