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* '''Inverted''': Both of them are either exactly tomboyish or equally feminine.
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** Both of them are either exactly tomboyish or equallyfeminine.feminine.
** Becky is both a [[TomboyWithAGirlyStreak tomboy]] and a [[GirlyGirlWithATomboyStreak girly girl]].
** Both of them are either exactly tomboyish or equally
** Becky is both a [[TomboyWithAGirlyStreak tomboy]] and a [[GirlyGirlWithATomboyStreak girly girl]].
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** [[AmazonianBeauty Alice]] is a LadyOfWar ActionGirl who values her strength. [[{{Bishoujo}} Carol]] is a kind and gentle [[FriendToAllChildren teacher]] who reveres her [[HappilyMarried commitment]].
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** [[AmazonianBeauty Alice]] is a LadyOfWar ActionGirl who values her strength. Her sister [[{{Bishoujo}} Carol]] is a kind and gentle [[FriendToAllChildren teacher]] who reveres her [[HappilyMarried commitment]].
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* '''Played For Laugh''': Carol is a ladylike fashionista but she is a GonkyFemme with [[LadyLooksLikeADude very manly physical appearances]] while Alice is an UnkemptBeauty tomboy with soft face and runway model-like body, causing Alice to becomes an UnwillinglyGirlyTomboy mannequin of Carol's clothes.
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* '''Played For Laugh''': Laughs''': Carol is a ladylike fashionista but she is a GonkyFemme with [[LadyLooksLikeADude very manly physical appearances]] while Alice is an UnkemptBeauty tomboy with soft face and runway model-like body, causing Alice to becomes an UnwillinglyGirlyTomboy mannequin of Carol's clothes.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice literally has no feminine interests while Carol has no masculine interests too.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice literally has no feminine interests while Carol has no zero masculine interests too.interests.
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** '''Moderate Girly Girl and Proper Girly Girl''': Alice is a moderate girly girl, while wearing dresses and cooking, she also engages in sports and non-feminine activities. Carol does not.
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** '''Moderate Girly Girl and Proper Girly Girl''': Alice is a moderate girly girl, girl - while wearing she wears dresses and likes cooking, she also engages in sports and non-feminine activities. Carol does not.
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** '''Butch Tomboy and Moderate Girly Girl''': Alice is so manly, to the point she has only masculine interests, while Carol although is mostly girly, still has some typical masculine interests like video games and soccer.
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** '''Butch Tomboy and Moderate Girly Girl''': Alice is so extremely manly, to the point she has only masculine interests, while Carol Carol, although is mostly girly, still has some typical masculine interests like video games and soccer.
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** Alice comes from a tribe of manly barbarians full of hotblooded martial artists, while Carol comes from a noble family that abhors "hyper stereotypes" and respects each other no matter masculine or feminine.
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** Alice comes from a tribe of manly barbarians full of hotblooded martial artists, while Carol comes from a noble family that abhors "hyper stereotypes" "stereotypes" and respects each other no matter whether masculine or feminine.
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** Alice comes from a tribe of manly barbarians full of [[RatedMForManly hotblooded martial artists]], while Carol comes from a noble family that abhors "hyper stereotypes" and respects each other no matter masculine or feminine.
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** Alice comes from a tribe of manly barbarians full of [[RatedMForManly hotblooded martial artists]], artists, while Carol comes from a noble family that abhors "hyper stereotypes" and respects each other no matter masculine or feminine.
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** '''Butch Tomboy and Moderate Girly Girl''': Alice is so manly, to the point she has only masculine interests, while Carol although is mostly girly, still has some typicla masculine interests like video games and soccer.
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** '''Butch Tomboy and Moderate Girly Girl''': Alice is so manly, to the point she has only masculine interests, while Carol although is mostly girly, still has some typicla typical masculine interests like video games and soccer.
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* '''Played For Laugh''': Carol is a ladylike fashionista but she is a GonkyFemme with [[LadyLooksLikeADude very manly physical appearances]] while Alice is an UnkemptBeauty tomboy with soft face and runway model-like body, causing Alice to becomes an UnwillinglyGirlyTomboy mannequin of Carol's clothes.
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** Alice is talented at traditionally masculine activities, and this is why he engages in them. In contrast, Carol is talented at traditionally feminine activities.
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** Alice is talented at traditionally masculine activities, and this is why he she engages in them. In contrast, Carol is talented at traditionally feminine activities.
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** Alice is talented at traditionally masculine activities, and this is why he engages in them. In contrast, Carol is talented at traditionally feminine activities.
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** '''Butch Tomboy''' Alice and Proper Girly Girl''' Carol are polar opposites in different ways.
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** '''Butch Tomboy''' Alice and Proper '''Proper Girly Girl''' Carol are polar opposites in different ways.
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** '''Butch Tomboy''' Alice and Proper Girly Girl''' Carol are polar opposites in different ways.
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** Alice comes from a tribe of manly barbarians full of TestosteronePoisoning, while Carol comes from a noble family that abhors "toxic masculinity".
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** Alice comes from a tribe of manly barbarians full of TestosteronePoisoning, [[RatedMForManly hotblooded martial artists]], while Carol comes from a noble family that abhors "toxic masculinity"."hyper stereotypes" and respects each other no matter masculine or feminine.
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** '''Effeminate Tomboy''' Alice and '''Moderate Girly Girl''' Carol are gender-neutral in different ways.
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** '''Effeminate Tomboy and Proper Girly Girl''': Alice is a tomboy, but has some feminine traits, while Carol only has feminine traits.
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** '''Effeminate Tomboy and Proper Girly Girl''': Alice is a tomboy, but has some feminine traits, interests, like knitting, shopping and gardening, while Carol has only has feminine traits.traits.
** '''Butch Tomboy and Moderate Girly Girl''': Alice is so manly, to the point she has only masculine interests, while Carol although is mostly girly, still has some typicla masculine interests like video games and soccer.
** '''Butch Tomboy and Moderate Girly Girl''': Alice is so manly, to the point she has only masculine interests, while Carol although is mostly girly, still has some typicla masculine interests like video games and soccer.
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** Alice comes from a tribe of barbarians, while Carol comes from a noble family.
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** Alice comes from a tribe of barbarians, manly barbarians full of TestosteronePoisoning, while Carol comes from a noble family.family that abhors "toxic masculinity".
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** '''Effeminate Tomboy and Moderate Girly Girl''': Alice is a tomboy, but has some feminine traits, while Carol is mostly feminine, but has some [[GirlyGirlWithATomboyStreak tomboyish qualities]] (or at least some traits that are not traditionally associated with girls).
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** '''Effeminate Tomboy and Moderate Proper Girly Girl''': Alice is a tomboy, but has some feminine traits, while Carol is mostly feminine, but only has some [[GirlyGirlWithATomboyStreak tomboyish qualities]] (or at least some traits that are not traditionally associated with girls).feminine traits.
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** '''Effeminate Tomboy and Moderate Girly Girl''': Alice is a tomboy, but has some feminine traits, while Carol is mostly feminine, but has some [[GirlyGirlWithATomboyStreak tomboyish qualities]] (or at least some traits that are not traditionally associated with girls).
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** '''Butch Tomboy and Effeminate Tomboy''': Alice is a very masculine girl, to the point of being "manly", while Carol is a fairly masculine girl, who, although more masculine than a typical woman, nonetheless still has some feminine qualities and interests.
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** '''Butch Tomboy and Effeminate Tomboy''': Alice is a [[TheLadette very masculine girl, girl]], to the point of being "manly", while Carol is a fairly masculine girl, who, although more masculine than a typical woman, nonetheless still has some feminine qualities and interests.
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** Alice comes from a rural family in the country, while Carol comes from a rich urban family.
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** Conversely, Alice comes from a rural family in the country, while Carol comes from a rich urban family.family in the city.
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* '''Straight''': Alice wears masculine clothing and loves sports while her sister Carol wears feminine clothing and prefers sewing and music.
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** Alice wears masculine clothing and loves sports while her sister Carol wears feminine clothing and prefers sewing andmusic.music.
** [[AmazonianBeauty Alice]] is a LadyOfWar ActionGirl who values her strength. [[{{Bishoujo}} Carol]] is a kind and gentle [[FriendToAllChildren teacher]] who reveres her [[HappilyMarried commitment]].
** Alice wears masculine clothing and loves sports while her sister Carol wears feminine clothing and prefers sewing and
** [[AmazonianBeauty Alice]] is a LadyOfWar ActionGirl who values her strength. [[{{Bishoujo}} Carol]] is a kind and gentle [[FriendToAllChildren teacher]] who reveres her [[HappilyMarried commitment]].
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** Alice and Carol keep [[FreakyFridayFlip switching bodies]] throughout the story.
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* '''Gender Inverted''': ManlyManAndSensitiveGuySensitiveGuyAndManlyMan
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** '''Butch Tomboy and Effeminate Tomboy''': Alice is a very masculine tomboy, to the point of being "manly", while Carol is a less masculine tomboy, who, although more masculine than a typical girly girl, nonetheless still has some feminine qualities and interests.
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** '''Butch Tomboy and Effeminate Tomboy''': Alice is a very masculine tomboy, girl, to the point of being "manly", while Carol is a less fairly masculine tomboy, girl, who, although more masculine than a typical girly girl, woman, nonetheless still has some feminine qualities and interests.
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** '''Butch tomboy and effeminate tomboy''': Alice is a very masculine tomboy, to the point of being "manly", while Carol is a less masculine tomboy, who, although more masculine than a typical girly girl, nonetheless still has some feminine qualities and interests.
** '''Moderate girly girl and Proper girly girl''': Alice is a moderate girly girl, while wearing dresses and cooking, she also engages in sports and non-feminine activities. Carol does not.
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** '''Moderate girly girl and Proper girly girl''': Alice is a moderate girly girl, while wearing dresses and cooking, she also engages in sports and non-feminine activities. Carol does not.
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** '''Butch tomboy Tomboy and effeminate tomboy''': Effeminate Tomboy''': Alice is a very masculine tomboy, to the point of being "manly", while Carol is a less masculine tomboy, who, although more masculine than a typical girly girl, nonetheless still has some feminine qualities and interests.
** '''Moderategirly girl Girly Girl and Proper girly girl''': Girly Girl''': Alice is a moderate girly girl, while wearing dresses and cooking, she also engages in sports and non-feminine activities. Carol does not.
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