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A Date With Rosie Palms is no longer a trope
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** There's no sex scene, but instead a brief segment during which Alice is casually having ADateWithRosiePalms out of boredom.
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** There's no sex scene, but instead a brief segment during which Alice is casually having ADateWithRosiePalms masturbating out of boredom.
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Return to CoitusEnsues, to get immediately served!
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Return to CoitusEnsues, SexStartsStoryStops, to get immediately served!
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They Fight Crime is no longer a trope
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* '''Discussed''': "So, lovebirds, you got some time to relax before going to [[TheyFightCrime fight crime]] again. Shall I leave you alone to not disturb ya two?"
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* '''Discussed''': "So, lovebirds, you got some time to relax before going to [[TheyFightCrime fight crime]] crime again. Shall I leave you alone to not disturb ya two?"
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** [[TheHero Captain Courage]] just happened to pass by Alice and Bob's house during his nightly patrol as they were doing the deed.
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Dewicking per TRS.
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** Alice and Bob [[NoHuggingNoKissing don't]] [[CelibateHero have sex]] [[{{Asexuality}} at all]].
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** Alice and Bob [[NoHuggingNoKissing don't]] [[CelibateHero have sex]] [[{{Asexuality}} [[UsefulNotes/{{Asexuality}} at all]].
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* '''Downplayed''': There is a little build up to the sex scene, but not very much.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** There is a little build up to the sex scene, but not verymuch.much.
** There's no sex scene, but instead a brief segment during which Alice is casually having ADateWithRosiePalms out of boredom.
** There is a little build up to the sex scene, but not very
** There's no sex scene, but instead a brief segment during which Alice is casually having ADateWithRosiePalms out of boredom.
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** The StoryArc starts with Alice and Bob having sex with each other, despite barely being able to talk to each other previously. [[AllJustADream And then Alice wakes up]]. The whole thing turns out to have been an EroticDream, which don't follow the various rules of storytelling and was fueled entirely by her sexual frustration and lust.
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* '''Justified''': Alice and Bob tried to have something before, but they were distracted at the last moment all those times, so when they manage to get a few free minutes, they decide to have it right here and at the moment.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Alice and Bob tried to have something before, but they were distracted at the last moment all those times, so when they manage to get a few free minutes, they decide to have it right here and at themoment.moment.
** They were both exposed to something that induced extreme lust, so...
** Alice and Bob tried to have something before, but they were distracted at the last moment all those times, so when they manage to get a few free minutes, they decide to have it right here and at the
** They were both exposed to something that induced extreme lust, so...
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How To Write An Example - Irrelevant Pothole.
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* '''Conversed''': "Anyone can explain why sometimes this series looks more like [[PornWithPlot porn with]] [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal some shoehorned sidekick story]]?"
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* '''Conversed''': "Anyone can explain why sometimes this series looks more like [[PornWithPlot porn with]] [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal with some shoehorned sidekick story]]?"
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* '''Reconstructed''': After fighting said henchmen off (cue FullFrontalAssault, [[{{Fanservice}} by the way]]) or escaping them (cue Streaking and NakedPeopleAreFunny), next time they make sure no one is going to disturb them (hiding well, closing doors, shutting windows, double-checking there are no suspicious persons wandering around, etc.).
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* '''Reconstructed''': After fighting said henchmen off (cue FullFrontalAssault, [[{{Fanservice}} by the way]]) or escaping them (cue Streaking {{Streaking}} and NakedPeopleAreFunny), next time they make sure no one is going to disturb them (hiding well, closing doors, shutting windows, double-checking there are no suspicious persons wandering around, etc.).
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* '''Reconstructed''': After fighting said henchmen off (cue FullFrontalAssault, [[Fanservice by the way]]) next time they make sure no one is going to disturb them (hiding well, closing doors, shutting windows, double-checking there are no suspicious persons wandering around, etc.).
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* '''Reconstructed''': After fighting said henchmen off (cue FullFrontalAssault, [[Fanservice [[{{Fanservice}} by the way]]) or escaping them (cue Streaking and NakedPeopleAreFunny), next time they make sure no one is going to disturb them (hiding well, closing doors, shutting windows, double-checking there are no suspicious persons wandering around, etc.).
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* '''Justified''': Alce and Bob tried to have something before, but they were distracted at the last moment all those times, so when they manage to get a few free minutes, they decide to have it right here and at the moment.
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* '''Justified''': Alce Alice and Bob tried to have something before, but they were distracted at the last moment all those times, so when they manage to get a few free minutes, they decide to have it right here and at the moment.
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* '''Discussed''': ???
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* '''Discussed''': ???"So, lovebirds, you got some time to relax before going to [[TheyFightCrime fight crime]] again. Shall I leave you alone to not disturb ya two?"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Looks like both of you hadn't been laid for along time, right?"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Looks like both of you hadn't been laid for along a long time, right?"
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* '''Defied''': Alice proposes having an intercourse right here and right now, but Bod declines her proposal, citing that he has no time or wish for it. Or vice versa.
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* '''Defied''': Alice proposes having an intercourse right here and right now, but Bod Bob declines her proposal, citing that he has no time or wish for it. Or vice versa.
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* '''Conversed''': "Anyone can explain why sometimes this series looks more like [[PornWithPlot porn with]] [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal some shoehorned sidekick story]]."
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* '''Conversed''': "Anyone can explain why sometimes this series looks more like [[PornWithPlot porn with]] [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal some shoehorned sidekick story]]."story]]?"
* '''Deconstructed''': Alice and Bob were too, erm, busy to notice Mr. Mennacer's henchmen coming after them.
* '''Reconstructed''': After fighting said henchmen off (cue FullFrontalAssault, [[Fanservice by the way]]) next time they make sure no one is going to disturb them (hiding well, closing doors, shutting windows, double-checking there are no suspicious persons wandering around, etc.).
* '''Deconstructed''': Alice and Bob were too, erm, busy to notice Mr. Mennacer's henchmen coming after them.
* '''Reconstructed''': After fighting said henchmen off (cue FullFrontalAssault, [[Fanservice by the way]]) next time they make sure no one is going to disturb them (hiding well, closing doors, shutting windows, double-checking there are no suspicious persons wandering around, etc.).
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** Alice and Bob [[NoHuggingNoKissing don't]] [[CelibateHero have sex]] [[Asexuality at all]].
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** Alice and Bob [[NoHuggingNoKissing don't]] [[CelibateHero have sex]] [[Asexuality [[{{Asexuality}} at all]].
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Looks like both of you hadn't had sex for along time, right?"
* '''Invoked''': ???
* '''Invoked''': ???
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Looks like both of you hadn't had sex been laid for along time, right?"
* '''Invoked''':???YouNeedToGetLaid.
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* '''Defied''': Alice proposes having an intercourse right here and right now, but Bod declines her proposal, citing that he has no time for it. Or vice versa.
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* '''Defied''': Alice proposes having an intercourse right here and right now, but Bod declines her proposal, citing that he has no time or wish for it. Or vice versa.
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* '''Justified''': ???
* '''Inverted''': Alice and Bob refuse to have sex event though it would make a lot of sense and be very climatic for them to do so.
* '''Subverted''': The scene goes on for a while and at first it seems like it's random, but then an important plot element pops up
* '''Inverted''': Alice and Bob refuse to have sex event though it would make a lot of sense and be very climatic for them to do so.
* '''Subverted''': The scene goes on for a while and at first it seems like it's random, but then an important plot element pops up
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* '''Justified''': ???
Alce and Bob tried to have something before, but they were distracted at the last moment all those times, so when they manage to get a few free minutes, they decide to have it right here and at the moment.
* '''Inverted''': Alice and Bob refuse to have sexevent even though it would make a lot of sense and be very climatic for them to do so.
* '''Subverted''': The scene goes on for a while and at first it seems like it's random, but then an important plot element popsupup...
* '''Inverted''': Alice and Bob refuse to have sex
* '''Subverted''': The scene goes on for a while and at first it seems like it's random, but then an important plot element pops
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** Alice and Bob don't have sex
** Alice and Bob have a SexyDiscretionShot
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* '''Lampshaded''': ???
** Alice and Bob have a SexyDiscretionShot
* '''Enforced''': ???
* '''Lampshaded''': ???
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** Alice and Bob don't [[NoHuggingNoKissing don't]] [[CelibateHero have sex
sex]] [[Asexuality at all]].
** Alice and Bob have aSexyDiscretionShot
SexyDiscretionShot.
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PornWithPlot. Or a hard case of AuthorAppeal.
* '''Lampshaded''':???"Looks like both of you hadn't had sex for along time, right?"
** Alice and Bob have a
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* '''Defied''': ???
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* '''Defied''': ???Alice proposes having an intercourse right here and right now, but Bod declines her proposal, citing that he has no time for it. Or vice versa.
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* '''Conversed''': ???
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* '''Conversed''': ???"Anyone can explain why sometimes this series looks more like [[PornWithPlot porn with]] [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal some shoehorned sidekick story]]."
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'''Basic Trope:''' A sex scene that comes out of nowhere and serves little purpose.
* '''Played Staight:''' Alice and Bob spontaneously have sex for no discernible reason.
* '''Played Staight:''' Alice and Bob spontaneously have sex for no discernible reason.
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'''Basic Trope:''' Trope''': A sex scene that comes out of nowhere and serves little purpose.
*'''Played Staight:''' '''Straight''': Alice and Bob spontaneously have sex for no discernible reason.
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* '''Lampshaded:'''
* '''Invoked:''' ?
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* '''Enforced:'''
'''Enforced''': ???
*'''Lampshaded:'''
'''Lampshaded''': ???
*'''Invoked:''' ?
'''Invoked''': ???
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice and Bob have never met before. They've never even spoken before. The audience has never seen them before.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice and Bob have never met before. They've never even spoken before. are extras. The audience has never seen them before.doesn't even know if their names are Alice and Bob. Nor do we know if they know each other.
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* '''Inverted''': Alice and Bob refuse to have sex when it would make a lot of sense and be very climatic for them to do so.
* '''Subverted''': The scene goes on for a while and at first it seems like it's conveying nothing important, but then an important plot element pops up
* '''Double Subverted''': But Alice and Bob aren't interested in talking about it right now. They return top plotless sex.
* '''Subverted''': The scene goes on for a while and at first it seems like it's conveying nothing important, but then an important plot element pops up
* '''Double Subverted''': But Alice and Bob aren't interested in talking about it right now. They return top plotless sex.
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* '''Inverted''': Alice and Bob refuse to have sex when event though it would make a lot of sense and be very climatic for them to do so.
* '''Subverted''': The scene goes on for a while and at first it seems like it'sconveying nothing important, random, but then an important plot element pops up
* '''Double Subverted''': But Alice and Bob aren't interested in talking about it right now. They returntop to plotless sex.
* '''Subverted''': The scene goes on for a while and at first it seems like it's
* '''Double Subverted''': But Alice and Bob aren't interested in talking about it right now. They return
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* '''Zig Zagged''':Zagged''': A minor detail is introduced via the scene. Fans hotly debate weather or not that detail is significant.
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**Alice and Bob don't have sex
**Alice and Bob have a SexyDiscretionShot
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* '''Invoked:''' ?
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**Alice and Bob don't have sex
**Alice and Bob have a SexyDiscretionShot
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* '''Invoked:''' ?
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'''Basic Trope:''' A sex scene that comes out of nowhere and serves little purpose.
*'''Played Staight:''' Alice and Bob spontaneously have sex for no discernible reason.
* '''Exaggerated''': Alice and Bob have never met before. They've never even spoken before. The audience has never seen them before.
* '''Downplayed''': There is a little build up to the sex scene, but not very much.
* '''Justified''':
* '''Inverted''': Alice and Bob refuse to have sex when it would make a lot of sense and be very climatic for them to do so.
* '''Subverted''': The scene goes on for a while and at first it seems like it's conveying nothing important, but then an important plot element pops up
* '''Double Subverted''': But Alice and Bob aren't interested in talking about it right now. They return top plotless sex.
* '''Parodied''':
* '''Zig Zagged''':
*'''Played Staight:''' Alice and Bob spontaneously have sex for no discernible reason.
* '''Exaggerated''': Alice and Bob have never met before. They've never even spoken before. The audience has never seen them before.
* '''Downplayed''': There is a little build up to the sex scene, but not very much.
* '''Justified''':
* '''Inverted''': Alice and Bob refuse to have sex when it would make a lot of sense and be very climatic for them to do so.
* '''Subverted''': The scene goes on for a while and at first it seems like it's conveying nothing important, but then an important plot element pops up
* '''Double Subverted''': But Alice and Bob aren't interested in talking about it right now. They return top plotless sex.
* '''Parodied''':
* '''Zig Zagged''':