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* '''Subverted''': Lady Alice's power is not Light, it's [[MinovskyPhysics heavy particles]].
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Lady Alice's power is not Light, it's [[MinovskyPhysics heavy particles]].
** Lady Alice's power is not Light, it's [[MinovskyPhysics heavy particles]].
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** Lady Alice's power is ''illusion''; she just makes you think she's using light.
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** "We need to show the audience that [[FriendToAllLivingThings Lady Alice]] is [[LighIsGood one of the good guys!]] Give her light-based power!"
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** "We need to show the audience that [[FriendToAllLivingThings Lady Alice]] is [[LighIsGood [[LightIsGood one of the good guys!]] Give her light-based power!"
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** "We need to show the audience that Alice is one of the good guys! Give her light-based power!"
** "We need a memorable villain that subverts audience's expectation! Give Gloria light-based power!"
** "We need a memorable villain that subverts audience's expectation! Give Gloria light-based power!"
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** "We need to show the audience that Alice [[FriendToAllLivingThings Lady Alice]] is [[LighIsGood one of the good guys! guys!]] Give her light-based power!"
** "We need a memorable villain that subverts audience's expectation! GiveGloria [[LadyOfWar Lady Alice]] [[LightIsNotGood light-based power!"power!]]"
** "We need a memorable villain that subverts audience's expectation! Give
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* '''Discussed''': ???
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* '''Discussed''': ???"But if you choose to join the Solar Knights, you get a lovely package of light powers in return for monster slaying!"
* '''Implied''': One of the items the GovernmentAgencyOfFiction is working on is called [[FunWithAcronyms COPS]] - Combat-Oriented Photon Suit.
* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The god in the setting is associated with light, so anyone with light powers is considered and angel.
* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The god in the setting is associated with light, so anyone with light powers is considered and angel.
* '''Played For Laughs''': "Somebody please turn the lights on... Why, thank you, Alice, but there's a switch right over there."
* '''Played For Drama''': "Alice stop! You're blinding your own allies!"
* '''Played For Drama''': "Alice stop! You're blinding your own allies!"
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* '''Exploited''': The BigBad creates minions immune to or that get stronger with the powers of light, knowing that, [[CripplingOverSpecialization that's the power the heroes will be using against them]].
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* '''Exploited''': The BigBad creates minions immune to or that [[ElementalAbsorption get stronger stronger]] with the powers of light, knowing that, [[CripplingOverSpecialization that's the power the heroes will be using against them]].
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* '''Invoked''': ???
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* '''Invoked''': ???Lady Alice has a tutor teach her how to use the power of Light.
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** Lady Alice is a scientist who's studies focus on protons. Her magic/tools are all built around the concept of using light as a weapon because of her studies.
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** Lady Alice is a scientist who's studies focus on protons.photons. Her magic/tools are all built around the concept of using light as a weapon because of her studies.
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* '''Conversed''': "Ooh, light-based powers! She either TheMessiah or a KnightTemplar, mark my words".
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* '''Conversed''': "Ooh, light-based powers! She either TheMessiah an {{All Loving Hero}}ine or a KnightTemplar, mark my words".
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Lady Alice can change the light level in a room and do things akin to what you could do with a flashlight, but can't attack with it.
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* '''Straight''':
** In ''Heroes of Troperia'', Lady Alice's power is Light, which manifests as [[HardLight a glowing light saber]], glowy Healing spells, and a HolyHandGrenade.
* '''Exaggerated''':
** Lady Alice rides a HumongousMecha ''made of'' Light.
* '''Justified''': The characters are fighting [[CastingAShadow dark-themed monsters.]]
** In ''Heroes of Troperia'', Lady Alice's power is Light, which manifests as [[HardLight a glowing light saber]], glowy Healing spells, and a HolyHandGrenade.
* '''Exaggerated''':
** Lady Alice rides a HumongousMecha ''made of'' Light.
* '''Justified''': The characters are fighting [[CastingAShadow dark-themed monsters.]]
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* '''Straight''':
**'''Straight''': In ''Heroes of Troperia'', Lady Alice's power is Light, which manifests as [[HardLight a glowing light saber]], glowy Healing spells, and a HolyHandGrenade.
*'''Exaggerated''':
**'''Exaggerated''': Lady Alice rides a HumongousMecha ''made of'' Light.
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** The characters are fighting [[CastingAShadow dark-themed monsters.]]
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** The characters are fighting [[CastingAShadow dark-themed monsters.]]
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* '''Deconstructed''': Users of Light are blind, due to constant exposure to strong light.
* '''Reconstructed''': Users of Light learn to blind their enemies.
* '''Reconstructed''': Users of Light learn to blind their enemies.
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* '''Exploited''': The BigBad creates minions immune to the powers of light, knowing that, that's the power the heroes will be using against them.
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* '''Exploited''': The BigBad creates minions immune to or that get stronger with the powers of light, knowing that, [[CripplingOverSpecialization that's the power the heroes will be using against them.them]].
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* '''Conversed''': "Ooh, light-based powers! She either TheMessiah or a KnightTemplar, mark my words.'
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* '''Conversed''': "Ooh, light-based powers! She either TheMessiah or a KnightTemplar, mark my words.'words".
* '''Deconstructed''': Users of Light are blind, due to constant exposure to strong light.
* '''Reconstructed''': Users of Light learn to blind their enemies.
* '''Deconstructed''': Users of Light are blind, due to constant exposure to strong light.
* '''Reconstructed''': Users of Light learn to blind their enemies.
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** Lady Alice is a scientist who's studies focus on protons. Her magic/tools are all built around the concept of using light as a weapon because of her studies.
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** In ''Heroes of Troperia'', Lady Alice's power is Light, which manifests as [[HardLight a glowing light saber]], glowy Healing spells, and the ability to throw a KamehameHadoken.
** Still in ''Heroes of Troperia'', Archangel Gloria is literally glowing, has a HolyHalo, and throws FantasticNuke around to destroy forces of evil. [[KnightTemplar She doesn't care if some relatively innocent people get caught in the blast]].
** Still in ''Heroes of Troperia'', Archangel Gloria is literally glowing, has a HolyHalo, and throws FantasticNuke around to destroy forces of evil. [[KnightTemplar She doesn't care if some relatively innocent people get caught in the blast]].
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** In ''Heroes of Troperia'', Lady Alice's power is Light, which manifests as [[HardLight a glowing light saber]], glowy Healing spells, and the ability to throw a KamehameHadoken.
** Still in ''Heroes of Troperia'', Archangel Gloria is literally glowing, has a HolyHalo, and throws FantasticNuke around to destroy forces of evil. [[KnightTemplar She doesn't care if some relatively innocent people get caught in the blast]].HolyHandGrenade.
** Still in ''Heroes of Troperia'', Archangel Gloria is literally glowing, has a HolyHalo, and throws FantasticNuke around to destroy forces of evil. [[KnightTemplar She doesn't care if some relatively innocent people get caught in the blast]].
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** Archangel Gloria's FantasticNuke is enough to destroy a whole continent...at the ''lowest power'' configuration.
* '''Justified''': Compared to other elements, Light is the most effective tool against the generic forces of evil (or just any force, really). Not surprisingly, a lot of people ([[LightIsNotGood with varying moral dispositions]]) learn to wield the power of Light.
* '''Justified''': Compared to other elements, Light is the most effective tool against the generic forces of evil (or just any force, really). Not surprisingly, a lot of people ([[LightIsNotGood with varying moral dispositions]]) learn to wield the power of Light.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Oooooh shiny!"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Oooooh "Oooooh... shiny!"
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Back to LightEmUp
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* '''Straight''': In ''Heroes of Troperia'', Lady Alice's power is Light, which manifests as [[HardLight a glowing light saber]], glowy Healing spells, and the ability to throw a KamehameHadoken.
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* '''Straight''': '''Straight''':
** In ''Heroes of Troperia'', Lady Alice's power is Light, which manifests as [[HardLight a glowing light saber]], glowy Healing spells, and the ability to throw a KamehameHadoken.
** In ''Heroes of Troperia'', Lady Alice's power is Light, which manifests as [[HardLight a glowing light saber]], glowy Healing spells, and the ability to throw a KamehameHadoken.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Lady Alice rides a HumongousMecha ''made of'' Light.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Lady Alice rides a HumongousMecha ''made of'' Light.
** Lady Alice rides a HumongousMecha ''made of'' Light.
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** Alternatively, '[[StealthPun Light]]' powers involve [[Manga/DeathNote killing people by writing their names in a deadly notebook]].
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* '''Enforced''': "We need to show the audience that Alice is one of the good guys! Give her light-based power!"
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** "We need to show the audience that Alice is one of the good guys! Give her light-based power!"
** "We need to show the audience that Alice is one of the good guys! Give her light-based power!"
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** Alternatively, '[[StealthPun Light]]' powers involve [[DeathNote killing people by writing their names in a deadly notebook]].
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** Alternatively, '[[StealthPun Light]]' powers involve [[DeathNote [[Manga/DeathNote killing people by writing their names in a deadly notebook]].
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* '''Straight''': In ''Heroes of Troperia'', Lady Alice's power is Light, which manifests as: [[HardLight a glowing light saber]], glowy Healing spells, and the ability to throw a KamehameHadoken.
** Still in ''Heroes of Troperia'', Archangel Gloria is literally glowing, has HolyHalo, and throws FantasticNuke around to destroy forces of evil. [[KnightTemplar She doesn't care if some relatively innocent people gets caught in the blast]].
** Still in ''Heroes of Troperia'', Archangel Gloria is literally glowing, has HolyHalo, and throws FantasticNuke around to destroy forces of evil. [[KnightTemplar She doesn't care if some relatively innocent people gets caught in the blast]].
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* '''Straight''': In ''Heroes of Troperia'', Lady Alice's power is Light, which manifests as: as [[HardLight a glowing light saber]], glowy Healing spells, and the ability to throw a KamehameHadoken.
** Still in ''Heroes of Troperia'', Archangel Gloria is literally glowing, has a HolyHalo, and throws FantasticNuke around to destroy forces of evil. [[KnightTemplar She doesn't care if some relatively innocent peoplegets get caught in the blast]].
** Still in ''Heroes of Troperia'', Archangel Gloria is literally glowing, has a HolyHalo, and throws FantasticNuke around to destroy forces of evil. [[KnightTemplar She doesn't care if some relatively innocent people
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** Archangel Gloria's FantasticNuke is enough to destroy a whole continent... at the ''lowest power'' configuration.
* '''Justified''': Compared to other elements, Light is the most effective tool against the generic forces of evil (or just any force, really). Not surprisingly, a lot of people ([[LightIsNotGood with varying moral disposition]]) learn to wield the power of Light.
* '''Justified''': Compared to other elements, Light is the most effective tool against the generic forces of evil (or just any force, really). Not surprisingly, a lot of people ([[LightIsNotGood with varying moral disposition]]) learn to wield the power of Light.
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** Archangel Gloria's FantasticNuke is enough to destroy a whole continent... at the ''lowest power'' configuration.
* '''Justified''': Compared to other elements, Light is the most effective tool against the generic forces of evil (or just any force, really). Not surprisingly, a lot of people ([[LightIsNotGood with varying moraldisposition]]) dispositions]]) learn to wield the power of Light.
* '''Justified''': Compared to other elements, Light is the most effective tool against the generic forces of evil (or just any force, really). Not surprisingly, a lot of people ([[LightIsNotGood with varying moral
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???Lady Alice gains and loses her powers of Light several times throughout the story.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
The BigBad creates minions immune to the powers of light, knowing that, that's the power the heroes will be using against them.
* '''Defied''':???Lady Alice refuses to learn how to wield the power of Light in favour of more [[FireIceLightning traditional]] powers.
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* '''Conversed''': ???
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* '''Conversed''': ???"Ooh, light-based powers! She either TheMessiah or a KnightTemplar, mark my words.'
