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-->'''Alice''': We need to find the Amazinglight. You should recognize it easily - blue, shining orb... Oh yeah!
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-->'''Alice''': WE'RE DOOMED! WE'RE DOOMED AND IT'S ALL MY FAULT! I just alerted the Whirrers to our location, and we can't even get out of the room because this weapons crate is blocking th- wait. Weapons crate. Full of Weapons. ...Phew!
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** Bob TheMole knows about the Whirrers and tricked Alice into explaining just to let it sink in, and see her reaction.
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** Bob TheMole knows about the Whirrers and tricked Alice into explaining them just to let it sink in, and see her reaction.reaction. He also makes a mental note to taunt her about it once she'll find out.
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* '''Invoked''': The Whirrers wait until Alice starts explaining her plan to Bob before making their presence known.
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* '''Invoked''': '''Invoked''':
** The Whirrers wait until Alice starts explaining her plan to Bob before making their presenceknown.known.
** Bob TheMole knows about the Whirrers and tricked Alice into explaining just to let it sink in, and see her reaction.
** The Whirrers wait until Alice starts explaining her plan to Bob before making their presence
** Bob TheMole knows about the Whirrers and tricked Alice into explaining just to let it sink in, and see her reaction.
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-->'''Alice''': WE'RE DOOMED! WE'RE DOOMED AND IT'S ALL MY FAULT! I just alerted the Whirrers to our location, and we can't even get out of the room because this weapons crate is blocking th- wait. Weapons crate. Full of Weapons. ...Phew!
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* '''Inverted''': Alice and Bob come across a blue orb of light and stop to think.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Alice and Bob come across a blue orb of light and stop to think.
** Alice and Bob come across a blue orb of light and stop to think.
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** Alice explains to Bob in a panicked manner how screwed they are only to realize as she is saying it out loud that things are far less dire than they seemed to be.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character explains something, thinking all is fine, only to realize that the opposite is true.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character explains something, thinking all is fine, only to realize that the opposite is true.true, often mid-sentence.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???Upon realizing the danger, Bob thinks of a plan, to Alice's relief. That relief vanishes when Bob realizes the problem with the idea. But then he think of a solution to that problem. Before realizing it's not enough. Then he thinks of a way to combat that. Then realizes that a new problem is at hand with that. Then he finds a solution to that problem....
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* '''Invoked''': ???
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* '''Invoked''': ???The Whirrers wait until Alice starts explaining her plan to Bob before making their presence known.
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-->'''Alice''': Don't worry, they can't see us here. They're too big to fit in here, so they send their hunting machines, the Whirrers. They're called like this because... OhCrap
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-->'''Alice''': Don't worry, they can't see us here. They're too big to fit in here, so they send their hunting machines, the Whirrers. They're called like this because... OhCrap
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--> ...Whirrers. They're called like this, because... ah, so ''that's'' what's making this noise.
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--> ...Whirrers. They're called like this, because... ah, so ''that's'' what's making this noise.
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-->'''Alice''': We need to find the Tropelight. You should recognize it easily - blue, shining orb... Oh yeah!
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-->'''Alice''': We need to find the Tropelight.Amazinglight. You should recognize it easily - blue, shining orb... Oh yeah!
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-->'''Dan''': Yeah, I know what it is...\\
* Alice says "OhCrap"*\\
* Alice says "OhCrap"*\\
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-->'''Dan''': Yeah, I know what it is...\\
* Aliceis...
-->*Alice says "OhCrap"*\\
* Alice
-->*Alice says "OhCrap"*\\
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-->'''Alice''': Don't worry, they can't see us here. They're too big to fit in here, so they send their hunting machines, the Whirrers. They're called like this because... OhCrap.
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-->'''Alice''': Don't worry, they can't see us here. They're too big to fit in here, so they send their hunting machines, the Whirrers. They're called like this because... OhCrap.OhCrap
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--> ...Whirrers. They're called like this, because... ah, so ''that's'' what's making that noise.
* '''Justified''': Alice has good understanding of theory, but she has never heard Whirrers, so it takes a while for her to connect her knowledge with hard facts.
* '''Justified''': Alice has good understanding of theory, but she has never heard Whirrers, so it takes a while for her to connect her knowledge with hard facts.
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--> ...Whirrers. They're called like this, because... ah, so ''that's'' what's making that this noise.
* '''Justified''': Alice has good understanding of theory, but she has never heardWhirrers, Whirrers before, so it takes a while for her to connect her knowledge with hard facts.the dots.
* '''Justified''': Alice has good understanding of theory, but she has never heard
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-->'''Alice''': We'll need to find the Tropelight. You should recognize it easily - blue, shining orb... Oh yeah!
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-->'''Alice''': We'll We need to find the Tropelight. You should recognize it easily - blue, shining orb... Oh yeah!
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'''Alice''': Yeah, I did, why... OhCrap.
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'''Alice''': Yeah, I did, why... OhCrap.OhCrap
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* '''Averted''': Alice and Bob sneak around unchallanged.
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* '''Averted''': Alice and Bob sneak around unchallanged.realizes outright what the sounds mean.
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-->'''Producer''': But how will the viewers know what the Whirrers are.\\
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-->'''Producer''': But how will the viewers know what the Whirrers are.\\are?\\
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-->'''Alice''': ...whirring... OhCrap.\\
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'''Bob''': Speak of the devil...
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'''Bob''': Speak of the devil...Yeah, took you a while to figure this one out.
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-->'''Claire''': Now she does too.
* '''Implied''': Bob tells the story of his and Alice's encounter with Whirrers as an anecdote.
* '''Implied''': Bob tells the story of his and Alice's encounter with Whirrers as an anecdote.
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'''Claire''': Now she does too.
* '''Implied''': Bob tells the story of his and Alice's encounter with Whirrers as an
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* '''Played For Laughs''': After Alice's realization, she and Bob are running away from a Whirrer, and she herself is running away from furious Bob.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': After Alice's realization, she and Bob are is running away from a Whirrer, and she herself Alice is running away from furious ''furious'' Bob.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Alice's loud "OhCrap" makes villain realize that his surprise had been blown and he launches his attack.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Alice's loud "OhCrap" makes the villain realize that his surprise had been blown and he launches his attack.
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You can go back to ExplainExplainOhCrap, Evulz is in the Playing With page... OhCrap.
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You can go back to ExplainExplainOhCrap, Evulz is in the Playing With page... OhCrap.OhCrap
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'''Basic Trope''': A character explains something, thinking all is fine, only to realize that the opposite is true.
* '''Straight''': Alice and Bob are sneaking through corridors and hear odd whirring. Bob is uneasy.
-->'''Alice''': Don't worry, they can't see us here. They're too big to fit in here, so they send their hunting machines, the Whirrers. They're called like this because... OhCrap.
* '''Exaggerated''': Upon realizing what she just said, Alice has a FreakOut.
* '''Downplayed''':
--> ...Whirrers. They're called like this, because... ah, so ''that's'' what's making that noise.
* '''Justified''': Alice has good understanding of theory, but she has never heard Whirrers, so it takes a while for her to connect her knowledge with hard facts.
* '''Inverted''': Alice and Bob come across a blue orb of light and stop to think.
-->'''Alice''': We'll need to find the Tropelight. You should recognize it easily - blue, shining orb... Oh yeah!
* '''Subverted''': Alice explains the Whirrers and pauses for a moment, but fails to connect it with sounds she's hearing and simply says "let's move on".
* '''Double Subverted''': A moment later:
-->'''Bob''': Wait, did you say "whirring sounds"?\\
'''Alice''': Yeah, I did, why... OhCrap.
* '''Parodied''': Alice is pouring sauce on her pancakes.
-->'''Alice''': Funny thing, it was the same bottle of sauce that was used in its advertisement. Anyway, did you know that the adverts are using motor oil instead of... *looks at her plate* '''NOOOOOOOO!!!'''
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Averted''': Alice and Bob sneak around unchallanged.
* '''Enforced''':
-->'''Producer''': But how will the viewers know what the Whirrers are.\\
'''Writer''': We'll have Alice explain that.\\
'''Producer''': But it will ruin all the surprise!\\
'''Writer''': So... we'll have her explain that just a moment before the Whirrers find them.
* '''Lampshaded''':
-->'''Alice''': ...whirring... OhCrap.\\
*the Whirrer shows up*\\
'''Bob''': Speak of the devil...
* '''Invoked''': ???
* '''Exploited''': Bob, now knowing about the Whirrers, has a few precious seconds to prepare for their attack, negating surprise the villain was going for.
* '''Defied''': Alice lists all of villain's mooks they may encounter before entering the lair.
* '''Discussed''':
-->'''Bob''': You know, this sound... I'm not sure if I want to think about it.\\
'''Alice''': Yeah... we may arrive at quite an unhappy conclusion.
* '''Conversed''': Claire and Dan are watching the show and hear the sound, then Alice, the hero, starts explaining.
-->'''Dan''': Yeah, I know what it is...\\
-->'''Claire''': Now she does too.
* '''Implied''': Bob tells the story of his and Alice's encounter with Whirrers as an anecdote.
* '''Deconstructed''': Later, Alice berates herself for not realizing what she was facing sooner, and remembers the sounds made by all the mooks by heart, so that none may surprise her later.
* '''Reconstructed''': She didn't think to remember that Whirrers are sound-activated, and so she starts explaining to another rookie, Cass, what they are right in front of one, before getting to this one element and going "oh crap".
* '''Played For Laughs''': After Alice's realization, she and Bob are running away from a Whirrer, and she herself is running away from furious Bob.
-->'''Bob''': How could you possibly ''not realize what you're talking about''?!
* '''Played For Drama''': Alice's loud "OhCrap" makes villain realize that his surprise had been blown and he launches his attack.
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* '''Straight''': Alice and Bob are sneaking through corridors and hear odd whirring. Bob is uneasy.
-->'''Alice''': Don't worry, they can't see us here. They're too big to fit in here, so they send their hunting machines, the Whirrers. They're called like this because... OhCrap.
* '''Exaggerated''': Upon realizing what she just said, Alice has a FreakOut.
* '''Downplayed''':
--> ...Whirrers. They're called like this, because... ah, so ''that's'' what's making that noise.
* '''Justified''': Alice has good understanding of theory, but she has never heard Whirrers, so it takes a while for her to connect her knowledge with hard facts.
* '''Inverted''': Alice and Bob come across a blue orb of light and stop to think.
-->'''Alice''': We'll need to find the Tropelight. You should recognize it easily - blue, shining orb... Oh yeah!
* '''Subverted''': Alice explains the Whirrers and pauses for a moment, but fails to connect it with sounds she's hearing and simply says "let's move on".
* '''Double Subverted''': A moment later:
-->'''Bob''': Wait, did you say "whirring sounds"?\\
'''Alice''': Yeah, I did, why... OhCrap.
* '''Parodied''': Alice is pouring sauce on her pancakes.
-->'''Alice''': Funny thing, it was the same bottle of sauce that was used in its advertisement. Anyway, did you know that the adverts are using motor oil instead of... *looks at her plate* '''NOOOOOOOO!!!'''
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Averted''': Alice and Bob sneak around unchallanged.
* '''Enforced''':
-->'''Producer''': But how will the viewers know what the Whirrers are.\\
'''Writer''': We'll have Alice explain that.\\
'''Producer''': But it will ruin all the surprise!\\
'''Writer''': So... we'll have her explain that just a moment before the Whirrers find them.
* '''Lampshaded''':
-->'''Alice''': ...whirring... OhCrap.\\
*the Whirrer shows up*\\
'''Bob''': Speak of the devil...
* '''Invoked''': ???
* '''Exploited''': Bob, now knowing about the Whirrers, has a few precious seconds to prepare for their attack, negating surprise the villain was going for.
* '''Defied''': Alice lists all of villain's mooks they may encounter before entering the lair.
* '''Discussed''':
-->'''Bob''': You know, this sound... I'm not sure if I want to think about it.\\
'''Alice''': Yeah... we may arrive at quite an unhappy conclusion.
* '''Conversed''': Claire and Dan are watching the show and hear the sound, then Alice, the hero, starts explaining.
-->'''Dan''': Yeah, I know what it is...\\
-->'''Claire''': Now she does too.
* '''Implied''': Bob tells the story of his and Alice's encounter with Whirrers as an anecdote.
* '''Deconstructed''': Later, Alice berates herself for not realizing what she was facing sooner, and remembers the sounds made by all the mooks by heart, so that none may surprise her later.
* '''Reconstructed''': She didn't think to remember that Whirrers are sound-activated, and so she starts explaining to another rookie, Cass, what they are right in front of one, before getting to this one element and going "oh crap".
* '''Played For Laughs''': After Alice's realization, she and Bob are running away from a Whirrer, and she herself is running away from furious Bob.
-->'''Bob''': How could you possibly ''not realize what you're talking about''?!
* '''Played For Drama''': Alice's loud "OhCrap" makes villain realize that his surprise had been blown and he launches his attack.
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