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* ''Fanfic/BurningSecret'':
** When the fire starts, Lincoln jumps back and yells, "HOLY COW!".
** When Lincoln realises that the sprinklers aren't working, he yells, "CRAP!".
** Lincoln goes pale and trembles when the newsman threatens the guilty party with expulsion and juvie.
* ''Fanfic/BurningSecret'':
** When the fire starts, Lincoln jumps back and yells, "HOLY COW!".
** When Lincoln realises that the sprinklers aren't working, he yells, "CRAP!".
** Lincoln goes pale and trembles when the newsman threatens the guilty party with expulsion and juvie.
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* ''Fanfic/AnythingForFamily'': In "[[Recap/AnythingForFamilyChapter6 Night Time]]", the Cures, [[Anime/SmilePrecure Nao especially]], all get scared when they realize that [[Anime/FutariWaPrettyCureSplashStar Saki]] allowed Joker to join their quest.
* ''Fanfic/GlitterForceIntoTheGlitterverse'': In [[Recap/GlitterForceIntoTheGlitterverseChapter1 the first chapter]], Honoka's heart drops the second she realizes what the Glitter in the air is.
* ''Fanfic/AnythingForFamily'': In "[[Recap/AnythingForFamilyChapter6 Night Time]]", the Cures, [[Anime/SmilePrecure Nao especially]], all get scared when they realize that [[Anime/FutariWaPrettyCureSplashStar Saki]] allowed Joker to join their quest.
* ''Fanfic/GlitterForceIntoTheGlitterverse'': In [[Recap/GlitterForceIntoTheGlitterverseChapter1 the first chapter]], Honoka's heart drops the second she realizes what the Glitter in the air is.
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* ''Fanfic/TheHospitalToys'': In "Just Friends", the children hold a play wedding for the Goblin and the Winter Princess. When the Ballerina comes to congratulate the two on their marriage, they freak out and run away. As it turns out, they don't want to be married to each other, hence the title "JustFriends".
* ''Fanfic/TheHospitalToys'': In "Just Friends", the children hold a play wedding for the Goblin and the Winter Princess. When the Ballerina comes to congratulate the two on their marriage, they freak out and run away. As it turns out, they don't want to be married to each other, hence the title "JustFriends".
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* ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries'' has several instances.
** From "The Black Turning Funnel" - Part 1's {{cliffhanger}} when the tornado is approaching ("Help. Cry for help."), and ''twice'' in Part 2 - once when Calvin realizes GravityIsAHarshMistress, and once more when Calvin realizes that his parents are coming home, ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext and there are a bunch of barnyard animals in the yard.]]''
** From "The Black Turning Funnel" - Part 1's {{cliffhanger}} when the tornado is approaching ("Help. Cry for help."), and ''twice'' in Part 2 - once when Calvin realizes GravityIsAHarshMistress, and once more when Calvin realizes that his parents are coming home, ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext and there are a bunch of barnyard animals in the yard.]]''
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* ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries'' has several instances. \n** From "The Black Turning Funnel" - Part 1's {{cliffhanger}} when the tornado is approaching ("Help. Cry for help."), and ''twice'' in Part 2 - once when Calvin realizes GravityIsAHarshMistress, and once more when Calvin realizes that his parents are coming home, ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext and there are a bunch of barnyard animals in the yard.]]''
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* During the Avatar Island arc of ''FanFic/DungeonKeeperAmi'', Mercury defeats and kills the Keeper, Self-proclaimed 'Emperor' Zarekos, currently sole despot of the Avatar Islands. The OhCrap moment comes in when [[spoiler:Zarekos]] comes back as a Ghost. Considering the guy was a Dungeon Keeper, and the souls of Dungeon Keepers go to the Realms of the Dark Gods when they are killed or their Dungeon Hearts are destroyed, him coming back after having been physically killed is a major reversal moment. Of course, he was [[AGodAmI in the process of making himself a god prior to his physical death]].
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* During the Avatar Island arc of ''FanFic/DungeonKeeperAmi'', ''Fanfic/DungeonKeeperAmi'', Mercury defeats and kills the Keeper, Self-proclaimed 'Emperor' Zarekos, currently sole despot of the Avatar Islands. The OhCrap moment comes in when [[spoiler:Zarekos]] comes back as a Ghost. Considering the guy was a Dungeon Keeper, and the souls of Dungeon Keepers go to the Realms of the Dark Gods when they are killed or their Dungeon Hearts are destroyed, him coming back after having been physically killed is a major reversal moment. Of course, he was [[AGodAmI in the process of making himself a god prior to his physical death]].
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* There are tons of examples in ''[[FanFic/AnEntryWithABang An Entry with a Bang!]]'', starting with the initial pirate raid in 2005, when people on Earth realize that they're getting visited by what they thought was a purely fictional universe.
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* There are tons of examples in ''[[FanFic/AnEntryWithABang ''[[Fanfic/AnEntryWithABang An Entry with a Bang!]]'', starting with the initial pirate raid in 2005, when people on Earth realize that they're getting visited by what they thought was a purely fictional universe.
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---> '''David:''' "Oh ''[[PrecisionFStrike FUCK!]] '''EVERYONE OFF THE BOAT!!!'''''"
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---> '''David:''' "Oh Oh ''[[PrecisionFStrike FUCK!]] '''EVERYONE OFF THE BOAT!!!'''''"BOAT!!!'''''
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--> '''Regent''': ''Yeah that's nice, only it's not Dragon. I said a dragon. I'm talking about a fire breathing, laser shooting, robot dragon that's tearing up the lobby.''
* While not as loud as other examples, Naruto the Zoroark from ''FanFic/ANewWorldANewWay'' sidestory ''Swarm'' has one when he wakes up in the palace of the Changeling Empire, whom at the time he thinks are Bug Pokémon.
* While not as loud as other examples, Naruto the Zoroark from ''FanFic/ANewWorldANewWay'' sidestory ''Swarm'' has one when he wakes up in the palace of the Changeling Empire, whom at the time he thinks are Bug Pokémon.
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--> '''Regent''': ''Yeah Yeah that's nice, only it's not Dragon. I said a dragon. I'm talking about a fire breathing, laser shooting, robot dragon that's tearing up the lobby.''
lobby.
* While not as loud as other examples, Naruto the Zoroark from''FanFic/ANewWorldANewWay'' ''Fanfic/ANewWorldANewWay'' sidestory ''Swarm'' has one when he wakes up in the palace of the Changeling Empire, whom at the time he thinks are Bug Pokémon.
* While not as loud as other examples, Naruto the Zoroark from
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* ''FanFic/MonstersInParadise'': During a Pokémon battle, a Delcatty uses Ice Beam to freeze a Blastoise's cannon, preventing it from successfully using Hydro Pump. A bit later, he is forced to use Return to counter Blastoise's Skull Bash, only to realize too late that the resulting clash broke the ice apart.
* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8806961/1/The-False-God-and-the-Lonely-God The False God and the Lonely God]] - Count Iblis from the original Battlestar Galactica meets the Doctor.
* In ''FanFic/TheStoryToEndAllStories'', Batman realizes he is about to be swallowed up by the Nothing. Also towards the end when it seems our heroes can no longer outrun it.
* There are multiple cases of this in ''FanFic/FantasyOfUtterRidiculousness''. As one example, Sakuya realizes while spying on Coop, Jamie and Kiva that the "statue" she was hiding against was really a magus. She was wrong about this, but considering Megas had just gotten done blasting a hole in the moon, her fear was justified.
* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8806961/1/The-False-God-and-the-Lonely-God The False God and the Lonely God]] - Count Iblis from the original Battlestar Galactica meets the Doctor.
* In ''FanFic/TheStoryToEndAllStories'', Batman realizes he is about to be swallowed up by the Nothing. Also towards the end when it seems our heroes can no longer outrun it.
* There are multiple cases of this in ''FanFic/FantasyOfUtterRidiculousness''. As one example, Sakuya realizes while spying on Coop, Jamie and Kiva that the "statue" she was hiding against was really a magus. She was wrong about this, but considering Megas had just gotten done blasting a hole in the moon, her fear was justified.
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* ''FanFic/MonstersInParadise'': ''Fanfic/MonstersInParadise'': During a Pokémon battle, a Delcatty uses Ice Beam to freeze a Blastoise's cannon, preventing it from successfully using Hydro Pump. A bit later, he is forced to use Return to counter Blastoise's Skull Bash, only to realize too late that the resulting clash broke the ice apart.
*[[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8806961/1/The-False-God-and-the-Lonely-God The False God and the Lonely God]] God]]'' - Count Iblis from the original Battlestar Galactica meets the Doctor.
* In''FanFic/TheStoryToEndAllStories'', ''Fanfic/TheStoryToEndAllStories'', Batman realizes he is about to be swallowed up by the Nothing. Also towards the end when it seems our heroes can no longer outrun it.
* There are multiple cases of this in''FanFic/FantasyOfUtterRidiculousness''.''Fanfic/FantasyOfUtterRidiculousness''. As one example, Sakuya realizes while spying on Coop, Jamie and Kiva that the "statue" she was hiding against was really a magus. She was wrong about this, but considering Megas had just gotten done blasting a hole in the moon, her fear was justified.
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* In
* There are multiple cases of this in
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* There are several in ''FanFic/ChildOfTheStorm,'' but perhaps the most epic is Lucius Malfoy's in chapter 77, when he finds out just how badly he's been OutGambitted:
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* There are several in ''FanFic/ChildOfTheStorm,'' ''Fanfic/ChildOfTheStorm,'' but perhaps the most epic is Lucius Malfoy's in chapter 77, when he finds out just how badly he's been OutGambitted:
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* In crossover ''FanFic/AFakeHero'', Shirou's overall reaction when he saw the number of missed call's he had from Irisviel and the realization what she will do to him when he gets home.
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* In crossover ''FanFic/AFakeHero'', ''Fanfic/AFakeHero'', Shirou's overall reaction when he saw the number of missed call's he had from Irisviel and the realization what she will do to him when he gets home.
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* A thoroughly deserved one in ''Fanfic/WithPearlAndRubyGlowing'': a small group of {{DirtyCop}}s just gang-raped Huan Beifong, thinking he was just another troublemaker. Then Toph Beifong, one of Calisota County's wealthy elite, walks into the station to pick him up, and Chief of Police Lin is seen addressing her as "Mother". Said cops make themselves scarce immediately, not that it ultimately helps.
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* A thoroughly deserved one in ''Fanfic/WithPearlAndRubyGlowing'': a small group of {{DirtyCop}}s {{Dirty Cop}}s just gang-raped Huan Beifong, thinking he was just another troublemaker. Then Toph Beifong, one of Calisota County's wealthy elite, walks into the station to pick him up, and Chief of Police Lin is seen addressing her as "Mother". Said cops make themselves scarce immediately, not that it ultimately helps.
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* A more [[PlayedForLaughs comedic example]] happens in ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13141582/5/Sora-and-the-Princess-of-Power Sora and the Princess of Power]]'' when Sora realizes a bit too late that telling the [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder Science and Technology-Obsessed]] Princess Entrapata about [[Film/{{Tron}} Tron]] and [[{{Cyberspace}} The Grid]] was probably not the best idea. Cue being [[TheGlomp Glomped]] and suffocated...
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* A more [[PlayedForLaughs comedic example]] happens in ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13141582/5/Sora-and-the-Princess-of-Power Sora and the Princess of Power]]'' when Sora realizes a bit too late that telling the [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder Science and Technology-Obsessed]] Princess Entrapata about [[Film/{{Tron}} Tron]] Film/{{Tron}} and [[{{Cyberspace}} The Grid]] was probably not the best idea. Cue being [[TheGlomp Glomped]] and suffocated...
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* Used as a PrecisionFStrike in ''FanFic/KiraIsJustice'', when [[OriginalCharacter Justin]] realizes Near figures out Kira is in Chicago. He literally thinks, "Oh, crap."
* The entire fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9644493/1/Zenith-Darkness-Reverie Zenith, Darkness, Reverie]]'' was intended as a combination of these and [[FridgeHorror Fridge Horror.]] From [[spoiler: Kira's]] "Salutations, Kali", Kali's mental state does not improve...
* ''FanFic/{{Rules}}'': Comedic example. [[spoiler:After convincing her to give up the Death Note]], Light breaks up with Misa. Misa, [[StalkerWithACrush being Misa]], harasses him by constantly calling him, begging him to take her back, which only ends thanks to a BoyfriendBluff using FriendlyEnemy Charlie. Thus, you can imagine how horrified Light is when she shows up in person, ''on campus'', trying to win him back.
* The entire fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9644493/1/Zenith-Darkness-Reverie Zenith, Darkness, Reverie]]'' was intended as a combination of these and [[FridgeHorror Fridge Horror.]] From [[spoiler: Kira's]] "Salutations, Kali", Kali's mental state does not improve...
* ''FanFic/{{Rules}}'': Comedic example. [[spoiler:After convincing her to give up the Death Note]], Light breaks up with Misa. Misa, [[StalkerWithACrush being Misa]], harasses him by constantly calling him, begging him to take her back, which only ends thanks to a BoyfriendBluff using FriendlyEnemy Charlie. Thus, you can imagine how horrified Light is when she shows up in person, ''on campus'', trying to win him back.
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* Used as a PrecisionFStrike in ''FanFic/KiraIsJustice'', ''Fanfic/KiraIsJustice'', when [[OriginalCharacter Justin]] realizes Near figures out Kira is in Chicago. He literally thinks, "Oh, crap."
* The entire fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9644493/1/Zenith-Darkness-Reverie Zenith, Darkness, Reverie]]'' was intended as a combination of these and[[FridgeHorror Fridge Horror.]] FridgeHorror. From [[spoiler: Kira's]] "Salutations, Kali", Kali's mental state does not improve...
*''FanFic/{{Rules}}'': ''Fanfic/{{Rules}}'': Comedic example. [[spoiler:After convincing her to give up the Death Note]], Light breaks up with Misa. Misa, [[StalkerWithACrush being Misa]], harasses him by constantly calling him, begging him to take her back, which only ends thanks to a BoyfriendBluff using FriendlyEnemy Charlie. Thus, you can imagine how horrified Light is when she shows up in person, ''on campus'', trying to win him back.
* The entire fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9644493/1/Zenith-Darkness-Reverie Zenith, Darkness, Reverie]]'' was intended as a combination of these and
*
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* In the Anime/DigimonTamers fic ''{{FanFic/Dimensions}}'', during the first ''Extra Dimensions'' side-story,[[spoiler: Rika gets one when her mother uses Rika's point-of-view gun to make Rika model for a photo shoot.]]
* The ''FanFic/TamersForeverSeries'' has multiple examples:
* The ''FanFic/TamersForeverSeries'' has multiple examples:
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* In the Anime/DigimonTamers ''Anime/DigimonTamers'' fic ''{{FanFic/Dimensions}}'', ''{{Fanfic/Dimensions}}'', during the first ''Extra Dimensions'' side-story,[[spoiler: Rika gets one when her mother uses Rika's point-of-view gun to make Rika model for a photo shoot.]]
* The''FanFic/TamersForeverSeries'' ''Fanfic/TamersForeverSeries'' has multiple examples:
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'''Android 17:''' What do you mean 'no'? ''(starts noticing the hovering balls of ki)'' Ohhh! ''(And more...)'' Ohhhh... ''(And even more)'' [[ThisIsGonnaSuck Ohhhh, shit...]]
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'''Android 17:''' What do you mean 'no'? ''(starts ''[starts noticing the hovering balls of ki)'' ki]'' Ohhh! ''(And ''[And more...)'' ]'' Ohhhh... ''(And ''[And even more)'' more]'' [[ThisIsGonnaSuck Ohhhh, shit...]]
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* ''FanFic/ABrighterDark'' has Takumi and Scarlet's reaction to finding out that several Hoshidan provinces have seceded and are calling their troops back, especially since the message telling them this is dated before the battle at Fort Dragonfall, meaning that their troops died in a battle they had no obligation to participate in.
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* ''FanFic/ABrighterDark'' ''Fanfic/ABrighterDark'' has Takumi and Scarlet's reaction to finding out that several Hoshidan provinces have seceded and are calling their troops back, especially since the message telling them this is dated before the battle at Fort Dragonfall, meaning that their troops died in a battle they had no obligation to participate in.
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-->'''Yushari''': "Chono-San, You always taught us to be innovative! We thought-"\\
'''Ami''': "You KNOW the rules! I can't raise the Type-90. PLEASE tell me it's SDF crewed?"\\
'''Yushari''' ''(taken aback)'': "No. We, uh... we borrowed it."\\
'''Ami''': "You what? That tank isn't restricted by the conduct of Sensha-Dou! It has no legal ammunition, it fires live rounds! Who are they aiming for?"\\
'''Yushari''': ''(gulps)'' "Yours."\\
'''Ami''': "You KNOW the rules! I can't raise the Type-90. PLEASE tell me it's SDF crewed?"\\
'''Yushari''' ''(taken aback)'': "No. We, uh... we borrowed it."\\
'''Ami''': "You what? That tank isn't restricted by the conduct of Sensha-Dou! It has no legal ammunition, it fires live rounds! Who are they aiming for?"\\
'''Yushari''': ''(gulps)'' "Yours."\\
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-->'''Yushari''': "Chono-San, Chono-San, You always taught us to be innovative! We thought-"\\
thought-\\
'''Ami''':"You You KNOW the rules! I can't raise the Type-90. PLEASE tell me it's SDF crewed?"\\
crewed?\\
'''Yushari'''''(taken aback)'': "No.''[taken aback]'': No. We, uh... we borrowed it."\\
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'''Ami''':"You You what? That tank isn't restricted by the conduct of Sensha-Dou! It has no legal ammunition, it fires live rounds! Who are they aiming for?"\\
for?\\
'''Yushari''':''(gulps)'' "Yours."\\''[gulps]'' Yours.\\
'''Ami''':
'''Yushari'''
'''Ami''':
'''Yushari''':
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'''Ami''': "Tell that Tank not to fir-!" ''(the tank fires, killing Ami's crew and putting her into a coma)''
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'''Ami''': "Tell Tell that Tank not to fir-!" ''(the fir-! ''[the tank fires, killing Ami's crew and putting her into a coma)''coma]''
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* ''FanFic/HuntingTheUnicorn'': When David realizes that [[spoiler: Blaine's StalkerWithACrush has gotten past campus security [[RightUnderTheirNoses disguised as a delivery guy]],]] his expression is this. As are the Dalton staff's expressions when ''they'' find out.
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* ''FanFic/HuntingTheUnicorn'': ''Fanfic/HuntingTheUnicorn'': When David realizes that [[spoiler: Blaine's StalkerWithACrush has gotten past campus security [[RightUnderTheirNoses disguised as a delivery guy]],]] his expression is this. As are the Dalton staff's expressions when ''they'' find out.
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* In ''FanFic/{{Sluagh}}'', after suffering heavy losses breaching the outer defenses at the Battle of Druim Cett, Neville and company realizes that the BigBad is surrounded by a magical army of ''hundreds'' (not to mention a homicidal sentient forest), not the seventy men as previously reported, cue trope.
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* In ''FanFic/{{Sluagh}}'', ''Fanfic/{{Sluagh}}'', after suffering heavy losses breaching the outer defenses at the Battle of Druim Cett, Neville and company realizes that the BigBad is surrounded by a magical army of ''hundreds'' (not to mention a homicidal sentient forest), not the seventy men as previously reported, cue trope.
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13962010/22/Like-Tenfold-Shields Like Tenfold Shields]] Dumbledore has the leader of a group of attackers covered.
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13962010/22/Like-Tenfold-Shields Like Tenfold Shields]] Shields]]'' Dumbledore has the leader of a group of attackers covered.
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'''Harry:''' Exactly. [Harry fires]
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'''Harry:''' Exactly. [Harry fires]
''[Harry fires]''
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* The characters of ''FanFic/YouGotHaruhiRolled'' have this reaction once they realize that Chapters 50-53 are a parody of the ''Franchise/SilentHill'' franchise.
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* The characters of ''FanFic/YouGotHaruhiRolled'' ''Fanfic/YouGotHaruhiRolled'' have this reaction once they realize that Chapters 50-53 are a parody of the ''Franchise/SilentHill'' franchise.
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* In the ''Heroes'' universe forum ''[[http://eclipse913.proboards.com/index.cgi Eclipse]]'', three words have all but become synonymous with this reaction: "''Heaven Have Mercy''". Having captured Ryan Alcroft and Adele Couteau - arguably the most ruthless and psychotic [[BattleCouple Battle Couple]] Eclipse has - a Company agent employs the services of a mercenary illusionist to try separating the two by having them simultaneously witness the murder of their counterparts. Suffice to say, it doesn't end well.
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* In the ''Heroes'' universe forum ''[[http://eclipse913.proboards.com/index.cgi Eclipse]]'', three words have all but become synonymous with this reaction: "''Heaven Have Mercy''". Having captured Ryan Alcroft and Adele Couteau - arguably the most ruthless and psychotic [[BattleCouple Battle Couple]] BattleCouple Eclipse has - a Company agent employs the services of a mercenary illusionist to try separating the two by having them simultaneously witness the murder of their counterparts. Suffice to say, it doesn't end well.
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* Many times in ''FanFic/{{Hivefled}}'', a prime example being: "[[TickleTorture Shall we]] [[TheNotSoHarmlessPunishment immortalise]] [[GlasgowGrin the moment]]?"
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* Many times in ''FanFic/{{Hivefled}}'', ''Fanfic/{{Hivefled}}'', a prime example being: "[[TickleTorture Shall we]] [[TheNotSoHarmlessPunishment immortalise]] [[GlasgowGrin the moment]]?"
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--> '''Spitelout''': That's all very nice and everything, but what does... ''oh, shite'' ...he, the king, [[IHaveYourWife he has them]].
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-->'''Queen Bee:''' Oh, beeswax.
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* In Fanfic/KamenRiderKage, [[GeneralRipper General Kyo Takeshi]] realizes that his genetically engineered MixAndMatchCritter that he can no longer control survived it's failsafe. The only description given for his reaction is "OhCrap".
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* In Fanfic/KamenRiderKage, ''Fanfic/KamenRiderKage'', [[GeneralRipper General Kyo Takeshi]] realizes that his genetically engineered MixAndMatchCritter that he can no longer control survived it's failsafe. The only description given for his reaction is "OhCrap".
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* In Fanfic/LillyEpilogueFamilyMatters, Hisao has this reaction after hearing that Lilly's family is coming to visit. To put things into perspective, in Lilly's good ending she [[spoiler:refused to come to Scotland to live with her parents so that she could stay with Hisao]], and Hisao thus fears they will not take her decision well, potentially forcing her to come home.
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* In Fanfic/LillyEpilogueFamilyMatters, ''Fanfic/LillyEpilogueFamilyMatters'', Hisao has this reaction after hearing that Lilly's family is coming to visit. To put things into perspective, in Lilly's good ending she [[spoiler:refused to come to Scotland to live with her parents so that she could stay with Hisao]], and Hisao thus fears they will not take her decision well, potentially forcing her to come home.
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* In Defense, one of the stories of Fanfic/TheReluctantFatherUniverse, [[UnstoppableRage Roxas defends Xion]] [[LimitBreak violently,]] leading to this reaction from the card soldiers.
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* In Defense, ''Defense'', one of the stories of Fanfic/TheReluctantFatherUniverse, [[UnstoppableRage Roxas defends Xion]] [[LimitBreak violently,]] leading to this reaction from the card soldiers.
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* Used in ''FanFic/{{Seduction}}'' when Sarakshi Ishin (who's agreed to let MagnificentBastard Tora Igarashi take off her shirt if she loses to him), realizes Tora knows the person he just defeated isn't a guy, but her dressed as one.
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* Used in ''FanFic/{{Seduction}}'' ''Fanfic/{{Seduction}}'' when Sarakshi Ishin (who's agreed to let MagnificentBastard Tora Igarashi take off her shirt if she loses to him), realizes Tora knows the person he just defeated isn't a guy, but her dressed as one.
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* ''FanFic/MegaManDefenderOfTheHumanRace'' has this happen a lot.
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* ''FanFic/MegaManDefenderOfTheHumanRace'' ''Fanfic/MegaManDefenderOfTheHumanRace'' has this happen a lot.
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->"Oh no. ''No."'' I speak aloud, patting my empty pockets.
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-->'''Natsuki''': "Duran! DURAN! [[ThisIsGonnaSuck Duran...?]] Oh, crap..."
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-->'''Natsuki''': "Duran! Duran! DURAN! [[ThisIsGonnaSuck Duran...?]] Oh, crap..."
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** Canon!Twilight has two during her and her friends' fight against [[EmpoweredBadassNormal Marcus]]. First is when she sees that Marcus is [[AntiMagic impervious to magic]]. The second is when Fluttershy's trademark Stare fails to subdue him.
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** Canon!Twilight Canon Twilight has two during her and her friends' fight against [[EmpoweredBadassNormal Marcus]]. First is when she sees that Marcus is [[AntiMagic impervious to magic]]. The second is when Fluttershy's trademark Stare fails to subdue him.
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** TCB!Trixie gets a ''massive'' one during ''The Answer Part 2'' when she overhears some guards talking and realizes that Queen Celestia is planning to modify the ponification serum and turn the newfoals from a bunch of [[StepfordSmiler perpetually smiling]] {{Extreme Doormat}}s into an army of soldiers, willing to kill... meaning the Queen has upward of over a ''[[ZergRush billion potential new soldiers]]'' [[WeHaveReserves at her disposal]].
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** TCB!Trixie TCB Trixie gets a ''massive'' one during ''The Answer Part 2'' when she overhears some guards talking and realizes that Queen Celestia is planning to modify the ponification serum and turn the newfoals from a bunch of [[StepfordSmiler perpetually smiling]] {{Extreme Doormat}}s into an army of soldiers, willing to kill... meaning the Queen has upward of over a ''[[ZergRush billion potential new soldiers]]'' [[WeHaveReserves at her disposal]].
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* At the climax of [[FanFic/RainboomsAndRoyalty the Dashverse]] story ''May the Best Friends Win'', this is pretty much Trixie's reaction when she realizes that [[spoiler:Twilight's [[EngineeredPublicConfession tricked her]] into revealing her [[BitchInSheepsClothing true self]] to Rainbow Dash]].
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* At the climax of [[FanFic/RainboomsAndRoyalty [[Fanfic/RainboomsAndRoyalty the Dashverse]] story ''May the Best Friends Win'', this is pretty much Trixie's reaction when she realizes that [[spoiler:Twilight's [[EngineeredPublicConfession tricked her]] into revealing her [[BitchInSheepsClothing true self]] to Rainbow Dash]].
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'''Fuyutsuki:''' ''"I am Sub-Commander Fuyutsuki. Would you like to tell me why I was capable of hearing your voice from the Commander's office, Pilot Soryu?"''\\
'''Asuka:''' (embarrassed) ''"Sub... shit. Um... sorry sir, I've never seen you in person before."''
'''Fuyutsuki:''' ''"I am Sub-Commander Fuyutsuki. Would you like to tell me why I was capable of hearing your voice from the Commander's office, Pilot Soryu?"''\\
'''Asuka:''' (embarrassed) ''"Sub... shit. Um... sorry sir, I've never seen you in person before."''
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-->'''Asuka:''' ''"Who Who the hell are you, old man?"''\\
man?\\
'''Fuyutsuki:'''''"I I am Sub-Commander Fuyutsuki. Would you like to tell me why I was capable of hearing your voice from the Commander's office, Pilot Soryu?"''\\
Soryu?\\
'''Asuka:'''(embarrassed) ''"Sub...''[embarrassed]'' Sub... shit. Um... sorry sir, I've never seen you in person before."''
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'''Asuka:'''
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-->'''Shiki:''' ''"Hey, Leader. There are two Israfel halves right?"''\\
'''Leader:''' ''"Right."''\\
'''Shiki:''' ''"Meaning the core would be split in two, right?"''\\
'''Leader:''' ''"Also correct."''\\
'''Shiki:''' ''"Then what does that one having a core with five sections mean?"''\\
'''Leader:''' ''"....Scheiße."''\\
'''Shiki:''' ''"Leader, what does it mean?"''\\
'''Leader:''' ''"It means-"'' (Unit-02 charges the Angel and cuts it in half) ''"-hold onto something because this is gonna be a bumpy ride."''
'''Leader:''' ''"Right."''\\
'''Shiki:''' ''"Meaning the core would be split in two, right?"''\\
'''Leader:''' ''"Also correct."''\\
'''Shiki:''' ''"Then what does that one having a core with five sections mean?"''\\
'''Leader:''' ''"....Scheiße."''\\
'''Shiki:''' ''"Leader, what does it mean?"''\\
'''Leader:''' ''"It means-"'' (Unit-02 charges the Angel and cuts it in half) ''"-hold onto something because this is gonna be a bumpy ride."''
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-->'''Shiki:''' ''"Hey, Hey, Leader. There are two Israfel halves right?"''\\
right?\\
'''Leader:'''''"Right."''\\
Right.\\
'''Shiki:'''''"Meaning Meaning the core would be split in two, right?"''\\
right?\\
'''Leader:'''''"Also Also correct."''\\
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'''Shiki:'''''"Then Then what does that one having a core with five sections mean?"''\\
'''Leader:''' ''"....mean?\\
'''Leader:''' ....Scheiße."''\\
\\
'''Shiki:'''''"Leader, Leader, what does it mean?"''\\
mean?\\
'''Leader:'''''"It means-"'' (Unit-02 It means- ''[Unit-02 charges the Angel and cuts it in half) ''"-hold half]'' -hold onto something because this is gonna be a bumpy ride."''
ride.
'''Leader:'''
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'''Leader:'''
'''Shiki:'''
'''Leader:''' ''"....
'''Leader:''' ....Scheiße.
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'''Leader:'''
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* Happens with Psycho Pink in one power rangers/hellsing fic after [[spoiler: Cassie's vampire side got loose after Ashley was nearly killed.]]
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* Happens with Psycho Pink in one power rangers/hellsing ''Power Rangers/Hellsing'' fic after [[spoiler: Cassie's vampire side got loose after Ashley was nearly killed.]]
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** PlayedForLaughs during Chapter 39. Naofumi and Raphtalia have just kissed each other a lot, when Raphtalia suddenly begins worrying that she may have gotten pregnant from kissing Naofumi. It takes a moment for the gears to turn in his head, but then Naofumi reacts as such when he realizes one crucial fact: [[spoiler:He had forgotten to ensure that Raphtalia had TheTalk]].
--->[Naofumi's] eyes had widened in realization. A cold sweat broke out on his skin. A cold, dreadful feeling ran down his spine. It'd been so long since he last thought about this happening. [[spoiler:Raphtalia had been acting mature and grown-up for so long that it was hard to picture the little girl she'd been two months ago.]]
** From the same fanfiction is a more serious one when [[spoiler: Maya and Raphtalia find out that not only is Rabier's army a day away (earlier than planned), but has also received reinforcements from the Church of the Three Heroes]].
* ''Fanfic/HopeOfTheShieldHero'':
** PlayedForLaughs during Chapter 39. Naofumi and Raphtalia have just kissed each other a lot, when Raphtalia suddenly begins worrying that she may have gotten pregnant from kissing Naofumi. It takes a moment for the gears to turn in his head, but then Naofumi reacts as such when he realizes one crucial fact: [[spoiler:He had forgotten to ensure that Raphtalia had TheTalk]].
--->[Naofumi's] eyes had widened in realization. A cold sweat broke out on his skin. A cold, dreadful feeling ran down his spine. It'd been so long since he last thought about this happening. [[spoiler:Raphtalia had been acting mature and grown-up for so long that it was hard to picture the little girl she'd been two months ago.]]
** From the same fanfiction is a more serious one when [[spoiler: Maya and Raphtalia find out that not only is Rabier's army a day away (earlier than planned), but has also received reinforcements from the Church of the Three Heroes]].
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* In ''FanFic/FourDeadlySecrets'', India has a moment upon realizing the giant scythe Ruby is swinging around is [[MixAndMatchWeapon also a gun]].
-->'''India''': ''Sweet fuck, a sniper [[CurseCutShort scy–]]
-->'''India''': ''Sweet fuck, a sniper [[CurseCutShort scy–]]
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* In ''FanFic/FourDeadlySecrets'', ''Fanfic/FourDeadlySecrets'', India has a moment upon realizing the giant scythe Ruby is swinging around is [[MixAndMatchWeapon also a gun]].
-->'''India''':''Sweet Sweet fuck, a sniper [[CurseCutShort scy–]]
-->'''India''':
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* The story ''FanFic/ANewOrder'' has one done by [[BigBad Beryl]] when she hears that [[spoiler:a shadow warrior has defected and is helping the senshi]].
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* In ''FanFic/RobbReturns'', this is present in about one out of every two or three chapters.
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'''Blackhawk:''' ''(into radio)'' Starfleet Command, this is COS. Sally Blackhawk of Listening Post Two-Zero-Four-Romeo-Tango, authorization Charlie-Papa-Oscar-3255-Alpha-Whiskey-24827! Case Zulu! Repeat, Zulu, Zulu, Zulu! Details to follow!
* In ''Fanfic/WrittenInTheStars'', this is the reaction of Fem!Kirk Prime when John Harrison reveals himself as [[spoiler: Khan]].
* In ''Fanfic/WrittenInTheStars'', this is the reaction of Fem!Kirk Prime when John Harrison reveals himself as [[spoiler: Khan]].
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'''Blackhawk:''' ''(into radio)'' ''[into radio]'' Starfleet Command, this is COS. Sally Blackhawk of Listening Post Two-Zero-Four-Romeo-Tango, authorization Charlie-Papa-Oscar-3255-Alpha-Whiskey-24827! Case Zulu! Repeat, Zulu, Zulu, Zulu! Details to follow!
* In ''Fanfic/WrittenInTheStars'', this is the reaction ofFem!Kirk Fem Kirk Prime when John Harrison reveals himself as [[spoiler: Khan]].
* In ''Fanfic/WrittenInTheStars'', this is the reaction of
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* PlayedForLaughs during Chapter 39 of ''Fanfic/HopeOfTheShieldHero''. Naofumi and Raphtalia have just kissed each other a lot, when Raphtalia suddenly begins worrying that she may have gotten pregnant from kissing Naofumi. It takes a moment for the gears to turn in his head, but then Naofumi reacts as such when he realizes one crucial fact: [[spoiler:He had forgotten to ensure that Raphtalia had TheTalk]].
-->[Naofumi's] eyes had widened in realization. A cold sweat broke out on his skin. A cold, dreadful feeling ran down his spine. It'd been so long since he last thought about this happening. [[spoiler:Raphtalia had been acting mature and grown-up for so long that it was hard to picture the little girl she'd been two months ago.]]
** From the same fanfiction is a more serious one when [[spoiler: Maya and Raphtalia find out that not only is Rabier's army a day away (earlier than planned), but has also received reinforcements from the Church of the Three Heroes]].
* PlayedForLaughs during Chapter 39 of ''Fanfic/HopeOfTheShieldHero''. Naofumi and Raphtalia have just kissed each other a lot, when Raphtalia suddenly begins worrying that she may have gotten pregnant from kissing Naofumi. It takes a moment for the gears to turn in his head, but then Naofumi reacts as such when he realizes one crucial fact: [[spoiler:He had forgotten to ensure that Raphtalia had TheTalk]].
-->[Naofumi's] eyes had widened in realization. A cold sweat broke out on his skin. A cold, dreadful feeling ran down his spine. It'd been so long since he last thought about this happening. [[spoiler:Raphtalia had been acting mature and grown-up for so long that it was hard to picture the little girl she'd been two months ago.]]
** From the same fanfiction is a more serious one when [[spoiler: Maya and Raphtalia find out that not only is Rabier's army a day away (earlier than planned), but has also received reinforcements from the Church of the Three Heroes]].
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'''Bobby:''' (frowning) He's not here. If you had bothered to make an appointment, you would know he got called out to D.C. last night on urgent business. You wouldn't have ended up pulling me out of bed. The professor isn't going to be back until this afternoon sometime.\\
'''Elaine Gray:''' (glaring) We have a standing invitation to come tour the school and meet the students.\\
'''Elaine Gray:''' (glaring) We have a standing invitation to come tour the school and meet the students.\\
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'''Bobby:''' (frowning) ''[frowning]'' He's not here. If you had bothered to make an appointment, you would know he got called out to D.C. last night on urgent business. You wouldn't have ended up pulling me out of bed. The professor isn't going to be back until this afternoon sometime.\\
'''Elaine Gray:'''(glaring) ''[glaring]'' We have a standing invitation to come tour the school and meet the students.\\
'''Elaine Gray:'''
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*** The Steel Sabers are on this end en masse, [[NoSell with none of their weapons being able to scratch, dent or even break his armor]].
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*** The Steel Sabers are on this end en masse, [[NoSell with none of their weapons being able to scratch, break, dent or even break scratch his armor]].
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12405025/1/The-Price-of-Betrayal The Price of Betrayal]]'' after dicovering that he and Hermione were given a LovePotion, Harry shoots Dumbledore in the Great Hall, then points the gun at Ron.
-->'''Harry:''' Hermione and I were betrothed, recognized by magic, the morning after she was released from the infirmary, after the Department of Mysteries last year.\\
'''Ron:''' Oh shit.\\
'''Harry:''' Exactly. [Harry fires]
-->'''Harry:''' Hermione and I were betrothed, recognized by magic, the morning after she was released from the infirmary, after the Department of Mysteries last year.\\
'''Ron:''' Oh shit.\\
'''Harry:''' Exactly. [Harry fires]
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*** If the Slayer isn't involved in any aspect, they are still memorable.
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*** Eraserhead, Pixie-Bob, 13 and Rock Lock are left shocked or terrified when the Slayer grabs the black hole 13 sent to him and [[BeyondTheImpossible crushes it with his bare hands]].
*** Then the former alongside Hawks, Miruko, Izuku, Mirio, Ochako and Bakugou become downright shocked and fearful when despite All Might giving it his all, the Slayer still stood, undefeated.
*** If the Slayer isn't involved in any aspect, they are still memorable.
*** All Might and Miruko panic when Bakugou tries to launch an attack on the Slayer while the area is doused in gasoline. Fortunately, the Slayer picks up on their panic and tosses them aside along with the explosive idiot.
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12562072/44/Harry-Potter-and-the-Daft-Morons Harry Potter and the Daft Morons]]'' this is Madam Bones' reaction when Dumbledore has a heart attack while being questioned under a larger than usual dose of Veritaserum. Dumbledore also has this reaction at several points in the fic when things aren't going his way, including one [[BringMyBrownPants very literal]] instance when [[ItMakesSenseInContext Flitwick lunges at him with a ''large'' battle-axe]].
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12562072/44/Harry-Potter-and-the-Daft-Morons Harry Potter and the Daft Morons]]'' this is Madam Bones' reaction when Dumbledore has a heart attack while being questioned under a larger than usual dose of Veritaserum. Dumbledore also has this reaction at several points in the fic when things aren't going his way, including one [[BringMyBrownPants very literal]] instance when [[ItMakesSenseInContext Flitwick lunges at him with a ''large'' battle-axe]].large battle-axe]], embedding it several inches in the desk Dumbledore is sitting at.
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12562072/44/Harry-Potter-and-the-Daft-Morons Harry Potter and the Daft Morons]]'' this is Madam Bones' reaction when Dumbledore has a heart attack while being questioned under a larger than usual dose of Veritaserum.
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12562072/44/Harry-Potter-and-the-Daft-Morons Harry Potter and the Daft Morons]]'' this is Madam Bones' reaction when Dumbledore has a heart attack while being questioned under a larger than usual dose of Veritaserum. Dumbledore also has this reaction at several points in the fic when things aren't going his way, including one [[BringMyBrownPants very literal]] instance when [[ItMakesSenseInContext Flitwick lunges at him with a ''large'' battle-axe]].
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*** Volcano's attempt to use his Nanomachines Quirk on the Slayer becomes alarming to him when he finds out that the Slayer's armor is ''hotter'' than lava.
----> '''Curator''': What the hell are you doing, Volcano?! Absorb his armor!\\
'''Volcano''': [[NoSell I-I can't!]]
----> '''Curator''': What the hell are you doing, Volcano?! Absorb his armor!\\
'''Volcano''': [[NoSell I-I can't!]]
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* ''WebVideo/TheBuggerAnthology'': Unlike the Recon Dalek in "[[Recap/DoctorWho2019NYSResolution Resolution]]", Iron Dalek fails to deflect an incoming shell from a tank with one of its own missiles. The Dalek can only utter '''"OH, ''BUGGER!''"''' before it gets sent flying by the resulting explosion.
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* ''WebVideo/TheBuggerAnthology'': Unlike the Recon Dalek in "[[Recap/DoctorWho2019NYSResolution Resolution]]", Iron Dalek fails to deflect an incoming shell from a tank with one of its own missiles. The Dalek can only utter '''"OH, ''BUGGER!''"''' "[[AC:Oh, ''bugger!'']]" before it gets sent flying by the resulting explosion.
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* ''Fanfic/TheChaoticMasters'': There's several moments of this from the heroes infiltrating [[AuctionOfEvil Roulette's auction of magical artifacts]] when they see some of the other attendees. Especially from Constantine when he realizes that he's previously scammed most of them at one point or another.
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*** In the latter part of the Slayer's fight against Nine, Nine has this reaction when the Slayer turns around to glare at him.
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*** In the latter part of the Slayer's fight against Nine, Nine has this reaction immediately staggers back when the Slayer turns around to glare at him.
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---> '''Mr. Brave''': Did he just-?!\\
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---> '''Narration''': The Doom Slayer could see the look of fear written all over Nine’s face as he coughed up blood. Now the bastard could see just how ''grossly'' outclassed he was.
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*** Wolfram has this reaction when he pushes the Slayer's [[BerserkButton Berserk Button]]. Hawks and Miruko have this reaction when seeing the Slayer [[CruelAndUnusualDeath viciously end Wolfram.]]
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*** Wolfram has this reaction breaks into a cold sweat and nearly shits himself when he pushes the Slayer's [[BerserkButton Berserk Button]]. BerserkButton by critically injuring Miruko. Hawks and Miruko have this reaction are left speechless and horrified when seeing they watch the Slayer [[CruelAndUnusualDeath viciously end Wolfram.]]
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*** Recovery Girl and the hospital staff are panicked and alarmed when Ragdoll has disappeared after attacking a nurse and stole a scalpel. Hawks and Aizawa are left with grim expressions when realizing that Ragdoll's madness had gotten worse.
*** Miruko is stunned and horrified when she finds out that Ragdoll had lost her mind and was now actively trying to [[EyeScream gouge out her eye with a scalpel.]]
*** Miruko is stunned and horrified when she finds out that Ragdoll had lost her mind and was now actively trying to [[EyeScream gouge out her eye with a scalpel.]]
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* In ''Fanfic/ItsAlwaysTheQuietOnes'', Flitwick puts together the clues, realizes [[Literature/TheShadowOverInnsmouth what family]] Luna's descended from and what her family spell is going to do, and drops a very much justified PrecisionFStrike.
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10256543/6/Nymphadora-s-Beau Nymphadora's Beau]]'':
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10256543/6/Nymphadora-s-Beau ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/14773032/chapters/34166370 Nymphadora's Beau]]'':
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* ''Fanfic/AThingOfVikings'': King Henry is horrified to see the generous treaty Stoick dropped and planned to offer before the ambush, because it means that he attacked a man coming in peace and Berk has previously proved that doing so is a ''colossal mistake''.
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* ''Fanfic/AThingOfVikings'': ''Fanfic/AThingOfVikings'':
** This is generally the reaction of anyone outside of Berk when they find out just how many dragons Hooligans have:
*** Mac Bethad's court were shocked that the number of {{Dragon Rider}}s number at least ''five hundred'', with the number of unbonded dragons that could carry a person numbering ''three or four thousand''.
*** Two for the Byzantine empire:
**** Snotlout/Sigurd was ordered to reveal the number of dragons his homeland had to the Byzantine Court, and they went into an uproar when he admits it's over ''ten thousand''.
**** When their emissary came back, he gives an updated number. Because the dragons have been breeding, they now have ''tens of thousands'' of dragons. Those present almost reacted with hysteria before Theodora calmed them down.
** Chapter 23: Hallr and his men have this reaction when they find out that [[SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil thrall takers are executed instead of enslaved]], assuming they'll be sold as thralls where they could easily escape.
** Chapter 25: This is Godwin's response during the entirety of the Battle of the Sound of Berk, during which he can do little but watch in horror as the fleet he's in is absolutely decimated by Hiccup's battle strategy.
** Chapter 26: Spitelout figures out why [[spoiler:Heather]] betrayed them.
--> '''Spitelout''': That's all very nice and everything, but what does... ''oh, shite'' ...he, the king, [[IHaveYourWife he has them]].
** Chapter 116: Gregor recognises Jonna, who also recognises him and identifies him as a spy. He flees in panic.
** Chapter 148: Viggo is shocked to learn Astrid is descended from Dror as he knows how Christians besides himself are likely to interpret a pagan descended from a Jew wiping out a Christian army, the last group being the perpetrators of a massacre be damned.
** Chapter 150: King Henry is horrified to see the generous treaty Stoick dropped and planned to offer before the ambush, because it means that he attacked a man coming in peace and Berk has previously proved that doing so is a ''colossal mistake''.
** This is generally the reaction of anyone outside of Berk when they find out just how many dragons Hooligans have:
*** Mac Bethad's court were shocked that the number of {{Dragon Rider}}s number at least ''five hundred'', with the number of unbonded dragons that could carry a person numbering ''three or four thousand''.
*** Two for the Byzantine empire:
**** Snotlout/Sigurd was ordered to reveal the number of dragons his homeland had to the Byzantine Court, and they went into an uproar when he admits it's over ''ten thousand''.
**** When their emissary came back, he gives an updated number. Because the dragons have been breeding, they now have ''tens of thousands'' of dragons. Those present almost reacted with hysteria before Theodora calmed them down.
** Chapter 23: Hallr and his men have this reaction when they find out that [[SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil thrall takers are executed instead of enslaved]], assuming they'll be sold as thralls where they could easily escape.
** Chapter 25: This is Godwin's response during the entirety of the Battle of the Sound of Berk, during which he can do little but watch in horror as the fleet he's in is absolutely decimated by Hiccup's battle strategy.
** Chapter 26: Spitelout figures out why [[spoiler:Heather]] betrayed them.
--> '''Spitelout''': That's all very nice and everything, but what does... ''oh, shite'' ...he, the king, [[IHaveYourWife he has them]].
** Chapter 116: Gregor recognises Jonna, who also recognises him and identifies him as a spy. He flees in panic.
** Chapter 148: Viggo is shocked to learn Astrid is descended from Dror as he knows how Christians besides himself are likely to interpret a pagan descended from a Jew wiping out a Christian army, the last group being the perpetrators of a massacre be damned.
** Chapter 150: King Henry is horrified to see the generous treaty Stoick dropped and planned to offer before the ambush, because it means that he attacked a man coming in peace and Berk has previously proved that doing so is a ''colossal mistake''.
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* ''Fanfic/AThingOfVikings'': King Henry is horrified to see the generous treaty Stoick dropped and planned to offer before the ambush, because it means that he attacked a man coming in peace and Berk has previously proved that doing so is a ''colossal mistake''.
* ''Fanfic/AThingOfVikings'': King Henry is horrified to see the generous treaty Stoick dropped and planned to offer before the ambush, because it means that he attacked a man coming in peace and Berk has previously proved that doing so is a ''colossal mistake''.
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*** When Curator, the Volcano Thieves and Chainsaw show up in the mid-part of Chapter 14, the Volcano Thieves are immediately disturbed at the river of blood and mangled corpses they're seeing.
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*** In the middle of the the Slayer's fight against Nine, Nine and his lieutenants are shocked and left reeling that everything they tossed at the Slayer [[NoSell did jackshit against him]].
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*** Izuku, Ochako, Shoto, Miruko and Melissa all have this reaction when the Slayer bursts through the blockade.
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*** Izuku, Ochako, Shoto, Miruko and Melissa all have this reaction when the Slayer bursts through the rooftop blockade.
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*** Curator and the Volcano Thieves have this reaction when Volcano's magma ''doesn't'' melt the Slayer's armor.
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*** Curator and the Volcano Thieves have this reaction are shocked when Volcano's magma ''doesn't'' melt the Slayer's armor.armor.
*** Ragdoll becomes terrified when she reads the Slayer's mind and sees bits and pieces of his DarkAndTroubledPast and finds out that he's not from their world and that Hell exists. Unfortunately for her, [[GoMadFromTheRevelation her mind breaks as a result]].
*** Ragdoll becomes terrified when she reads the Slayer's mind and sees bits and pieces of his DarkAndTroubledPast and finds out that he's not from their world and that Hell exists. Unfortunately for her, [[GoMadFromTheRevelation her mind breaks as a result]].
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*** All the heroes who watched Ragdoll try to find the Slayer's location jerk back when Ragdoll screams her lungs out and are forced to sedate her before she rips her own head open.
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* Gray Ghost in ''Fanfic/ManehattansLoneGuardian'' has this reaction when an ever-bombastic friend starts into a heartsong, knowing that her children are within range.
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--> '''Mr. Brave''': Did he just-?!\\
'''Loud Cloud''': Miruko wasn't kidding, [[AxCrazy this guy really is a nut]].
'''Loud Cloud''': Miruko wasn't kidding, [[AxCrazy this guy really is a nut]].
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'''Loud Cloud''': Miruko wasn't kidding, [[AxCrazy this guy really is a
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--> '''Narration''': The Doom Slayer could see the look of fear written all over Nine’s face as he coughed up blood. Now the bastard could see just how ''grossly'' outclassed he was.
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--> '''Narration''': Curator was 2nd in command of the LOV and was just as scary as All for One. If he was here, then it meant they ''really'' screwed up.
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