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* A red-light brainwashed woman breaks into TSV's house, leading to a very tense series of tweets from his point of view as he hides under the furniture while she walks around in search of him. If not for Danyon's BigDamnHeroes moment, TSV would have been in serious trouble.
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* The protagonist at one point locks up their house for security, only for one of the lights to eventually burst in. When it's all said and done, they go down to check the door, seeing it ''unlocked and '''WIDE OPEN.''''' Nothing you do can protect you from them.
* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurrences along the way and ''[[WhamShot these]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg end]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXsQjCV4AAy6pC?format=jpg up]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXyeHAV4AAeeWI?format=jpg happening]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just as unhinged as everything else.]]
* The sheer fact that the protagonist seems to be going slightly insane and growing accusatory towards his friends, culminating in refusing to answer a personal question in order to prove that they're still them.
** It gets worse later on, with the protagonist incoherently screaming that "Danyon is back".
* It gets worse. Further into the story while the protagonist is outside in a tent waiting for Danyon to return he hears ‘’something’’ circling the tent...
** He follows "it" into the field and finds [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1019064563814330374?s=20 this]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/WMOdz2y.jpg brightened]]). For scale the vegetation around it is ''seven feet tall''.
* The protagonist at one point locks up their house for security, only for one of the lights to eventually burst in. When it's all said and done, they go down to check the door, seeing it ''unlocked and '''WIDE OPEN.''''' Nothing you do can protect you from them.
* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurrences along the way and ''[[WhamShot these]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg end]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXsQjCV4AAy6pC?format=jpg up]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXyeHAV4AAeeWI?format=jpg happening]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just as unhinged as everything else.]]
* The sheer fact that the protagonist seems to be going slightly insane and growing accusatory towards his friends, culminating in refusing to answer a personal question in order to prove that they're still them.
** It gets worse later on, with the protagonist incoherently screaming that "Danyon is back".
* It gets worse. Further into the story while the protagonist is outside in a tent waiting for Danyon to return he hears ‘’something’’ circling the tent...
** He follows "it" into the field and finds [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1019064563814330374?s=20 this]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/WMOdz2y.jpg brightened]]). For scale the vegetation around it is ''seven feet tall''.
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* The protagonist at one point locks up their house for security, only for one of the lights to eventually burst in. When it's all said and done, they go down to check the door, seeing it ''unlocked and '''WIDE OPEN.''''' Nothing you do can protect you from them.
* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurrences along the way and ''[[WhamShot these]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg end]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXsQjCV4AAy6pC?format=jpg up]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXyeHAV4AAeeWI?format=jpg happening]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just as unhinged as everything else.]]
* The sheer fact that the protagonist seems to be going slightly insane and growing accusatory towards his friends, culminating in refusing to answer a personal question in order to prove that they're still them.
** It gets worse later on, with the protagonist incoherently screaming that "Danyon is back".
* It gets worse. Further into the story while the protagonist is outside in a tent waiting for Danyon to return he hears ‘’something’’ circling the tent...
** He follows "it" into the field and finds [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1019064563814330374?s=20 this]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/WMOdz2y.jpg brightened]]). For scale the vegetation around it is ''seven feet tall''.
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* Early in the story, TSV locks up his house while still hoping that this will blow over. Then, later on, he checks the door and finds it ''unlocked and wide-open''. The door isn't even damaged; they somehow opened it from the outside. Nothing can protect you.
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* Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurrences along the way and ''[[WhamShot these]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg end]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXsQjCV4AAy6pC?format=jpg up]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXyeHAV4AAeeWI?format=jpg happening]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just as unhinged as everything else.]]
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* TSV and Danyon are forced to camp out in a tent in the middle of nowhere; Danyon leaves and doesn't come back. While waiting for Danyon to return, he hears ''something’’ circling the tent...
** He follows "it" into the field and finds [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1019064563814330374?s=20 this]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/WMOdz2y.jpg brightened]]). For scale, the vegetation around it is ''seven feet tall''.
* After being separated from Danyon, TSV is forced to wander alone, eventually being forced to drink from a lake. He finds out too late that [[WaterSourceTampering the invaders have done something to the water source]]. According to Tucker, it acts like mercury poisoning, damaging both the mind and body. The poison slowly turns the veins in his arm dark black, while inducing SanitySlippage in him as well. His already-intense paranoia eventually gives way to a full-on mental breakdown, screaming and rambling about Danyon being in the room with him while posting pictures showing he's alone. Then his hallucination disappears, and he begs and pleads for Danyon to come back.
* TSV checks his phone, finding an album he didn't create, simply called "Remember", containing random, context-less images of various random things. According to his phone, these images are ''four years old'', but he's just now seeing them. New images randomly appear as the story goes along.
** He follows "it" into the field and finds [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1019064563814330374?s=20 this]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/WMOdz2y.jpg brightened]]). For scale, the vegetation around it is ''seven feet tall''.
* After being separated from Danyon, TSV is forced to wander alone, eventually being forced to drink from a lake. He finds out too late that [[WaterSourceTampering the invaders have done something to the water source]]. According to Tucker, it acts like mercury poisoning, damaging both the mind and body. The poison slowly turns the veins in his arm dark black, while inducing SanitySlippage in him as well. His already-intense paranoia eventually gives way to a full-on mental breakdown, screaming and rambling about Danyon being in the room with him while posting pictures showing he's alone. Then his hallucination disappears, and he begs and pleads for Danyon to come back.
* TSV checks his phone, finding an album he didn't create, simply called "Remember", containing random, context-less images of various random things. According to his phone, these images are ''four years old'', but he's just now seeing them. New images randomly appear as the story goes along.
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* [[EldritchAbomination The Lights]]. Strange, glowing orbs of red light that fly around, [[HellIsThatNoise making strange and unsettling noises all the while]]. Staring into them for too long causes you to undergo SanitySlippage, mentally deteriorating and losing your memories, before finally going completely mad. The Infected appear to be completely EmptyShells, hunting down survivors while screaming about the sun being back.
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* [[EldritchAbomination The Lights]]. Strange, glowing orbs of red light that fly around, [[HellIsThatNoise making strange and unsettling noises all the while]]. Staring into them for too long causes you to undergo SanitySlippage, mentally deteriorating and losing your memories, before finally going completely mad. The Infected appear to be completely EmptyShells, Everyone infected slowly becomes a complete EmptyShell, hunting down survivors while screaming about the sun being back.
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* The very concept of the story. Imagine waking up one morning to find the sun just ''gone.'' Imagine then being hunted by ''things'' that absolutely refuse to leave you alone. Imagine your friends being corrupted by these things, eliminating any chance of trust.
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* One of the people the protagonist speaks with is a poster from British Columbia. They're very helpful, explaining not to look into the red lights and just why... eventually, without context, they send the protagonist [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdICRZSVMAELEHg.jpg this.]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/C3MR8cb.jpg brightened]])
** What's worse? They apparently stop talking to the protagonist after this. [[NothingIsScarier This was the last message sent to him.]]
* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurences along the way and ''[[WhamShot these]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg end]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXsQjCV4AAy6pC?format=jpg up]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXyeHAV4AAeeWI?format=jpg happening]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just as unhinged as everything else.]]
** What's worse? They apparently stop talking to the protagonist after this. [[NothingIsScarier This was the last message sent to him.]]
* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurences along the way and ''[[WhamShot these]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg end]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXsQjCV4AAy6pC?format=jpg up]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXyeHAV4AAeeWI?format=jpg happening]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just as unhinged as everything else.]]
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* "...the sun is back...the sun is back...the sun IS BACK"
* "...the sun is back...the sun is back...the sun IS BACK"
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** He follows "it" into the field and finds [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1019064563814330374?s=20 this]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/WMOdz2y.jpg brightened]]). For scale the vegetation around it is ''seven feet tall''.tall''.
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* The very concept of the story. Imagine waking up one morning to find the sun just ''gone.'' Imagine then being hunted by ''things'' that absolutely refuse to leave you alone. Imagine your friends being corrupted by these things, eliminating any chance of trust.
* [[EldritchAbomination The Lights]]. Strange, glowing orbs of red light that fly around, [[HellIsThatNoise making strange and unsettling noises all the while]]. Staring into them for too long causes you to undergo SanitySlippage, mentally deteriorating and losing your memories, before finally going completely mad. The Infected appear to be completely EmptyShells, hunting down survivors while screaming about the sun being back.
* Later on, TSV finally manages to get a picture of one of the things that fly around the sky randomly. This should give us some answers, except... what ''is'' [[WhamShot that]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DeVG3tvUQAE5Oxu.jpg thing?]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/37MP12j.jpg brightened]])
** For those who can't view the image: [[spoiler:It's a giant diamond object, hovering in the sky. It looks like some kind of ''spaceship''.]]
** We later find out more about these things. Wherever they go, they cause the temperature to raise dramatically (10-15 degrees each time), creating intense heat waves. In addition, they have a strange blue headlight, which causes [[HellIsThatNoise incredibly loud static noises]] whenever they activate ([[https://mobile.twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1046568900341698560 this is the sound]]). While the effects of the blue light aren't known, it's implied to be horrific and gory by someone who's seen it.
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* Later on, TSV finds some [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1002763771012698112 research notes]] from someone who tried to study the Lights. [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1002765355180285952 The first few experiments go fairly well]], giving us some insight into how the Lights operate. Then, the researcher accidentally looks into one of them, and [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1002771616907087872 this]] is all he writes.
* One of the people TSV speaks with is a poster from British Columbia. They're very helpful, explaining why you shouldn't look into the red lights, but then they stop communicating. Eventually, without context, they send the protagonist [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdICRZSVMAELEHg.jpg this.]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/C3MR8cb.jpg brightened]]) They immediately stop talking to the protagonist after this. [[NothingIsScarier This was the last message sent to him.]]
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* The very concept of the story. Imagine waking up one morning to find the sun just ''gone.'' Imagine then being hunted by ''things'' that absolutely refuse to leave you alone. Imagine your friends being corrupted by these things, eliminating any chance of trust.
* [[EldritchAbomination The Lights]]. Strange, glowing orbs of red light that fly around, [[HellIsThatNoise making strange and unsettling noises all the while]]. Staring into them for too long causes you to undergo SanitySlippage, mentally deteriorating and losing your memories, before finally going completely mad. The Infected appear to be completely EmptyShells, hunting down survivors while screaming about the sun being back.
* Later on, TSV finally manages to get a picture of one of the things that fly around the sky randomly. This should give us some answers, except... what ''is'' [[WhamShot that]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DeVG3tvUQAE5Oxu.jpg thing?]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/37MP12j.jpg brightened]])
** For those who can't view the image: [[spoiler:It's a giant diamond object, hovering in the sky. It looks like some kind of ''spaceship''.]]
** We later find out more about these things. Wherever they go, they cause the temperature to raise dramatically (10-15 degrees each time), creating intense heat waves. In addition, they have a strange blue headlight, which causes [[HellIsThatNoise incredibly loud static noises]] whenever they activate ([[https://mobile.twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1046568900341698560 this is the sound]]). While the effects of the blue light aren't known, it's implied to be horrific and gory by someone who's seen it.
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[[folder:@TheSunVanished (TSV)]]
* Later on, TSV finds some [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1002763771012698112 research notes]] from someone who tried to study the Lights. [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1002765355180285952 The first few experiments go fairly well]], giving us some insight into how the Lights operate. Then, the researcher accidentally looks into one of them, and [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1002771616907087872 this]] is all he writes.
* One of the people TSV speaks with is a poster from British Columbia. They're very helpful, explaining why you shouldn't look into the red lights, but then they stop communicating. Eventually, without context, they send the protagonist [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdICRZSVMAELEHg.jpg this.]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/C3MR8cb.jpg brightened]]) They immediately stop talking to the protagonist after this. [[NothingIsScarier This was the last message sent to him.]]
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* One of the people the protagonist speaks with is a poster from British Columbia. They're very helpful, explaining not to look into the red lights and just why... eventually, without context, they send the protagonist [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdICRZSVMAELEHg.jpg this.]]]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/C3MR8cb.jpg brightened]])
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* We finally get to see what the hell's been causing all that [[HellIsThatNoise noise]] whenever it flies over the protagonist's house, which sounds like it'd finally give us some answers. Except... what ''is'' [[WhamShot that]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DeVG3tvUQAE5Oxu.jpg thing?]]thing?]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/37MP12j.jpg brightened]])
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** He follows "it" into the field and finds [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1019064563814330374?s=20 this]].this]] ([[https://i.imgur.com/WMOdz2y.jpg brightened]]). For scale the vegetation around it is ''seven feet tall''.
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** He follows ‘’it’’ "it" into the field and finds [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1019064563814330374?s=20 this]]. For scale the vegetation around it is ''seven feet tall''.
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* It gets worse... further into the story while the protagonist is outside in a tent waiting for Danyon to return he hears ‘’something’’ circling the tent...
** He follows ‘’it’’ into the field and finds THIS [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1019064563814330374?s=20]] For scale the vegetation around it is 7 FEET HIGH.
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* [[spoiler:"...the sun is back...the sun is back...the sun IS BACK"]]
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* We finally get to see what the hell's been causing all that [[HellIsThatNoise noise]] whenever it flies over the protagonist's house, which sounds like it'd finally give us some answers. Except... what ''is'' [[WhamShot that]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DeVG3tvUQAE5Oxu.jpg thing?]]
* We finally get to see what the hell's been causing all that [[HellIsThatNoise noise]] whenever it flies over the protagonist's house, which sounds like it'd finally give us some answers. Except... what ''is'' [[WhamShot that]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DeVG3tvUQAE5Oxu.jpg thing?]]
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* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurences along the way and ''[[WhamShot these]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg end]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXsQjCV4AAy6pC?format=jpg up]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXyeHAV4AAeeWI?format=jpg happening]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just as unhinged as everything else.]]
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* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurences along the way and ''[[WhamShot these]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg end]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXsQjCV4AAy6pC?format=jpg up]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXyeHAV4AAeeWI?format=jpg happening]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just as unhinged as everything else.]]]]
*The sheer fact that the protagonist seems to be going slight insane and growing accusatory towards his friends culminating in refusing to answer a personal question in order to prove that they're still them.
*The sheer fact that the protagonist seems to be going slight insane and growing accusatory towards his friends culminating in refusing to answer a personal question in order to prove that they're still them.
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* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurences along the way and ''[[WhamShot these]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg end]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXsQjCV4AAy6pC?format=jpg up]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXyeHAV4AAeeWI?format=jpg happening]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just unhinged as everything else.]]
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* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurences along the way and ''[[WhamShot these]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg end]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXsQjCV4AAy6pC?format=jpg up]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXyeHAV4AAeeWI?format=jpg happening]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just as unhinged as everything else.]]
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* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurences along the way and ''[[WhamShot this]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg happens]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just unhinged as everything else.]]
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* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurences along the way and ''[[WhamShot this]]'' these]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg happens]].end]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXsQjCV4AAy6pC?format=jpg up]] [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdXyeHAV4AAeeWI?format=jpg happening]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just unhinged as everything else.]]
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* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurences along the way and [[WhamShot this]][[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg happens]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just unhinged as everything else.]]
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* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurences along the way and [[WhamShot this]][[https://pbs.''[[WhamShot this]]'' [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg happens]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just unhinged as everything else.]]
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* One of the people the protagonist speaks with is a poster from British Columbia. They're very helpful, explaining not to look into the red lights and just why... eventually, without context, they send the protagonist [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdICRZSVMAELEHg.jpg this.]]
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* One of the people the protagonist speaks with is a poster from British Columbia. They're very helpful, explaining not to look into the red lights and just why... eventually, without context, they send the protagonist [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdICRZSVMAELEHg.jpg this.]]
* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurences along the way and [[WhamShot this]][[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg happens]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just unhinged as everything else.]]
* The protagonist's friend Danyon seems trustworthy and sane enough. But as the tweets go on, he encounters several occurences along the way and [[WhamShot this]][[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdUtlioVAAAtjj1?format=jpg happens]]. [[ParanoiaFuel Imagine having a friend you trust only to find out they've become just unhinged as everything else.]]
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* The protagonist at one point locks up their house for security, only for one of the lights to eventually burst in. When it's all said and done, they go down to check the door, seeing it ''unlocked and 'WIDE OPEN.''' Nothing you do can protect you from them.
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* The protagonist at one point locks up their house for security, only for one of the lights to eventually burst in. When it's all said and done, they go down to check the door, seeing it ''unlocked and 'WIDE '''WIDE OPEN.''' ''''' Nothing you do can protect you from them.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Do NOT walk into the light.]]
* The very concept of the story. Imagine waking up one morning to find the sun just ''gone.'' Imagine then being hunted by ''things'' that absolutely refuse to leave you alone. Imagine your friends being corrupted by these things, eliminating any chance of trust.
* The protagonist at one point locks up their house for security, only for one of the lights to eventually burst in. When it's all said and done, they go down to check the door, seeing it ''unlocked and 'WIDE OPEN.''' Nothing you do can protect you from them.
* One of the people the protagonist speaks with is a poster from British Columbia. They're very helpful, explaining not to look into the red lights and just why... eventually, without context, they send the protagonist [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdICRZSVMAELEHg.jpg this.]]
[[caption-width-right:350:Do NOT walk into the light.]]
* The very concept of the story. Imagine waking up one morning to find the sun just ''gone.'' Imagine then being hunted by ''things'' that absolutely refuse to leave you alone. Imagine your friends being corrupted by these things, eliminating any chance of trust.
* The protagonist at one point locks up their house for security, only for one of the lights to eventually burst in. When it's all said and done, they go down to check the door, seeing it ''unlocked and 'WIDE OPEN.''' Nothing you do can protect you from them.
* One of the people the protagonist speaks with is a poster from British Columbia. They're very helpful, explaining not to look into the red lights and just why... eventually, without context, they send the protagonist [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdICRZSVMAELEHg.jpg this.]]
