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It just occurred to me that the liquid substance is probably tar, considering that Charlotte called Hollywoo (well, Hollywood at the time) a tar pit.


** In a moment of BlackComedy, Zach Braff is pushed and roller blades slowly backwards into the void, spouting tongue twisters all the while.

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** In a moment of BlackComedy, Zach Braff is pushed and roller blades slowly backwards into the void, spouting seemingly powerless to control himself, yet he just spouts tongue twisters all the while.



** [=BoJack=] starts to panic and tries to leave, but he can't. Beatrice and Crackerjack are up next, and the two perform a duet of Beatrice twirling a ribbon and Crackerjack playing the trumpet for her. He then wraps himself up with the ribbon and jumps into the void, while Beatrice covers herself with the ribbon, all while a [[BuffySpeak black liquid slime substance]] envelops and her as she disappears.

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** [=BoJack=] starts to panic and tries to leave, but he can't. Beatrice and Crackerjack are up next, and the two perform a duet of Beatrice twirling a ribbon and Crackerjack playing the trumpet for her. He then wraps himself up with the ribbon and jumps into the void, while Beatrice covers herself with the ribbon, all while a [[BuffySpeak black liquid slime substance]] tar envelops and her as she disappears.



** The dark substance then swallows up Herb, [[ItMakesSenseinContext and the red bird that flew in to the house]], and it begins to chase [=BoJack=] throughout the house as he realizes that whatever this is, is death, and that it's coming for him. He realizes that he's drowning in his swimming pool, as he sees a silhouette of himself floating inside said pool. It catches up to him, it starts to envelop him too, and the episode ends on [[HellIsThatNoise the sound of a]] ''flatline''.

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** The dark substance tar then swallows up Herb, [[ItMakesSenseinContext and the red bird that flew in to the house]], house]] (and said bird has a moment where the bird's [[NightmareFace face melts off a few times]]), and it the tar then begins to chase [=BoJack=] throughout the house as he realizes that whatever this is, is death, and that it's coming for him. He realizes that he's drowning in his swimming pool, as he sees a silhouette of himself floating inside said pool. It catches up to him, it starts to envelop him too, and the episode ends on [[HellIsThatNoise the sound of a]] ''flatline''.
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\n** Bojack places one final call to "Diane" before being swallowed up by the slime. It's a bit eerie to hear her voice so calm and pleasant, yet hollow, in the midst of Bojack's apparent final moments.

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** In the same scene, Diane describes her having gone into a spiral after hearing [=BoJack=]'s last voicemail and thinking that he had died.

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** In the same scene, Diane describes her having gone into a spiral after hearing [=BoJack=]'s last voicemail and thinking that he had died.died and that it might have been her fault for not picking up his call.

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* [=BoJack=] explaining to young Sarah Lynn about the scary truths of show business comes across as very sinister. Especially when you realize that it's this that led to Sarah eventually becoming the train-wreck that she is as an adult. The fact that she looks absolutely terrified when [=BoJack=] finishes telling her all this really hammers it in:

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* [=BoJack=] explaining to young Sarah Lynn about the scary truths of show business comes across as very sinister. Especially sinister, especially as [=BoJack=] grows more unhinged and angry as if he is ''threatening'' the little girl. It's gets worse when you realize that it's this advice that led to Sarah eventually becoming the train-wreck that she is as an adult. The fact that she looks absolutely terrified when [=BoJack=] finishes telling her all this really hammers it in:



'''[=BoJack=]:''' Well, those boobs and jerkwads are the best friends you'll ever have. Without them, you're nothing. Remember that. Your family will never understand you, your lovers will leave you or try to change you, but your fans, you be good to them and they'll be good to you. The most important thing is, you gotta give the people what they want, even if it kills you, even if it empties you out until there's nothing left to empty. No matter what happens, no matter how much it hurts, you don't stop dancing, and you don't stop smiling, and you give those people what they '''''want!'''''

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'''[=BoJack=]:''' Well, those boobs and jerkwads are the best friends you'll ever have. Without them, you're nothing. Remember that. Your family will never understand you, your lovers will leave you or try to change you, but your fans, you be good to them and they'll be good to you. The most important thing is, you gotta give the people what they want, even if it kills you, even if it empties you out until there's nothing left to empty. No matter what happens, no matter how much it hurts, you don't stop dancing, and you don't stop smiling, and you give those people what they '''''want!''''''''''want!'''''.\\
(beat)\\
'''Director:''' And action!\\
'''[=BoJack=]:''' (as The Horse) [[SlasherSmile Why aren't you dressed for school, prickly muffin?]]

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*** From the beginning of the episode up to right before the performance, we see Sarah Lynn slowly age from her child to teen appearances she had on ''Horsin Around'', to her 20-something pop star appearance, to her 30-year-old appearance, showing both [=BoJack=]'s shifting memory of her and her edging closer to death.



** Secretariat recites a poem about what it was like ''jumping off a bridge'', talking about [[TitleDrop the view from halfway down]] during the fall, and all the while, the spotlight keeps shining on the door as it inches closer to Secretariat, almost as if it's beckoning him. Worse still is that as Secretariat continues reading, he starts to sound more panicked and scared, then eventually falls backwards into it, and it's just very hard to watch.

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** Secretariat recites a poem about what it was like ''jumping off a bridge'', talking about [[TitleDrop the view from halfway down]] during the fall, and all the while, the spotlight keeps shining on the door as it inches closer to Secretariat, almost as if it's beckoning him. Worse still is that as Secretariat continues reading, he starts to sound more panicked and scared, then eventually falls backwards into it, and it's just very hard to watch.watch, ''especially'' for viewers who have been suicidal in the past.



** Shortly before his performance his Beatrice, Crackerjack is briefly shown ''with a bleeding hole in his head''.

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** Shortly before his performance his with Beatrice, Crackerjack is briefly shown ''with a bleeding hole in his head''.



*** The whole scene really hammers in just how frightened Bojack is about confronting his mortality. This bit of dialogue he has just before it's ''his turn'' to enter that [[NothingIsScarier pitch black door to nowhere]] doesn't ease his intense feeling of dread.

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*** The whole scene really hammers in just how frightened Bojack [=BoJack=] is about confronting his mortality. This bit of dialogue he has just before it's ''his turn'' to enter that [[NothingIsScarier pitch black door to nowhere]] doesn't ease his intense feeling of dread.



* While it isn't the kind of extreme, short term trauma of other events of the series, Bojack getting out of prison for a day and ending the night with Diane, someone who was his best friend and closest confidant for the better part of a decade, telling him they'll never talk to each other again.

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* While it isn't the kind of extreme, short term trauma of other events of the series, Bojack [=BoJack=] getting out of prison for a day and ending the night with Diane, someone who was his best friend and closest confidant for the better part of a decade, telling him they'll never talk to each other again.again. There's a definite sense of AdultFear in the idea that a relationship like that can just dissolve into nothing.
** In the same scene, Diane describes her having gone into a spiral after hearing [=BoJack=]'s last voicemail and thinking that he had died.

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* While it might not reach the level of trauma of other events of the series, Bojack getting out of prison for a day and ending the night with Diane, someone who was his best friend and closest confidant for the better part of a decade, telling him they'll never talk to each other again.

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* While it might not reach isn't the level kind of extreme, short term trauma of other events of the series, Bojack getting out of prison for a day and ending the night with Diane, someone who was his best friend and closest confidant for the better part of a decade, telling him they'll never talk to each other again.
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*While it might not reach the level of trauma of other events of the series, Bojack getting out of prison for a day and ending the night with Diane, someone who was his best friend and closest confidant for the better part of a decade, telling him they'll never talk to each other again.
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* This episode is a counterpart to the above mentioned "Stupid Piece of Sh*t" in that it employs DerangedAnimation to convey serious depression, this time representing Diane's thoughts as she works on her memoir. She sees herself and the figures in her life as scraggly incomplete scribbles, words on the page running together, and eventually all of the figures in her life grow monstrous and begin to overtake her.
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* The [[WhamEpisode shocking revelation]] that Sarah Lynn was [[NotQuiteDead only barely still alive in the planetarium]], right when [=BoJack=] had thought she died in his arms after [[PleaseWakeUp calling out to her several times]]. That's not the terrifying part. The actual terrifying part is what happened next: ''[[EtTuBrute [=BoJack=] abandoned Sarah Lynn]]''. He failed to call for help until seventeen minutes had passed, and by then it was already too late for her. [=BoJack=] saw Sarah Lynn as a surrogate daughter, and he confessed in the interview that he had also loved her, and yet in the end [[ItsAllAboutMe he cared more about covering his tracks that night than doing everything he can to get help right away]].

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* The [[WhamEpisode shocking revelation]] that Sarah Lynn was [[NotQuiteDead only barely still alive in the planetarium]], right when [=BoJack=] had thought she died in his arms after [[PleaseWakeUp calling out to her several times]]. That's not the terrifying part. The actual terrifying part is what happened next: ''[[EtTuBrute [=BoJack=] abandoned Sarah Lynn]]''. He failed to call for help until seventeen minutes had passed, and by then it was already too late for her. [=BoJack=] saw Sarah Lynn as a surrogate daughter, and he confessed in the interview that he had also loved her, and yet in the end [[ItsAllAboutMe he cared more about covering his tracks that night than night, instead of doing everything he can to get help for Sarah Lynn right away]].
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* The [[WhamEpisode shocking revelation]] that Sarah Lynn was [[NotQuiteDead only barely still alive in the planetarium]], right when [=BoJack=] had thought she died in his arms after [[PleaseWakeUp calling out to her several times]]. That's not the terrifying part. The actual terrifying part is what happened next: ''[[EtTuBrute [=BoJack=] abandoned Sarah Lynn]]''. He failed to call for help until seventeen minutes had passed, and by then it was already too late for her. [=BoJack=] saw Sarah Lynn as a surrogate daughter, and he confessed in the interview that he had also loved her, and yet in the end [[ItsAllAboutMe he cared more about covering his tracks that night than doing everything he can to get help right away]].
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** Shortly before his performance his Beatrice, Crackerjack is briefly shown ''with a bleeding hole in his head''.
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'''Herb:''' ''(with sadness in his voice, as the blackness creeps out the door and slowly consumes him)'' Oh, [=BoJack=], no... [[CessationOfExistence there is no other side]]. This is it. ''(is eaten entirely by the blackless)''

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'''Herb:''' ''(with sadness in his voice, as the blackness darkness creeps out the door and slowly consumes him)'' Oh, [=BoJack=], no... [[CessationOfExistence there is no other side]]. This is it. ''(is eaten entirely by the blackless)''darkness)''
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* Several people with claustrophobia have called this episode one of the most nightmarish things they've ever sat through, with a whole half hour of Bojack stuck underwater with only a small glass bubble to keep him from drowning, and unable to communicate at all.

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* Several people with claustrophobia have called this episode one of the most nightmarish things they've ever sat through, with a whole half hour of Bojack [=BoJack=] stuck underwater with only a small glass bubble to keep him from drowning, and unable to communicate at all.



* The opening goes through a massive overhaul, with one very subtle bit of horror; the moment where Bojack tips over his balcony and lands in a swimming pool is altered so he's now at the observatory. When he falls over the balcony, there's no swimming pool, just darkness.

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* The opening goes through a massive overhaul, with one very subtle bit of horror; the moment where Bojack [=BoJack=] tips over his balcony and lands in a swimming pool is altered so he's now at the observatory. When he falls over the balcony, there's no swimming pool, just darkness.



** How stressed is she? She ''nearly microvawes her daughter''!

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** How stressed is she? She ''nearly microvawes microwaves her daughter''!
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--> '''[=BoJack=]:''' Hey, you see those people?
--> '''Sarah Lynn:''' Yeah.
--> '''[=BoJack=]:''' Well, those boobs and jerkwads are the best friends you'll ever have. Without them, you're nothing. Remember that. Your family will never understand you, your lovers will leave you or try to change you, but your fans, you be good to them and they'll be good to you. The most important thing is, you gotta give the people what they want, even if it kills you, even if it empties you out until there's nothing left to empty. No matter what happens, no matter how much it hurts, you don't stop dancing, and you don't stop smiling, and you give those people what they '''''want!'''''

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--> '''[=BoJack=]:''' -->'''[=BoJack=]:''' Hey, you see those people?
-->
people?\\
'''Sarah Lynn:''' Yeah.
-->
Yeah.\\
'''[=BoJack=]:''' Well, those boobs and jerkwads are the best friends you'll ever have. Without them, you're nothing. Remember that. Your family will never understand you, your lovers will leave you or try to change you, but your fans, you be good to them and they'll be good to you. The most important thing is, you gotta give the people what they want, even if it kills you, even if it empties you out until there's nothing left to empty. No matter what happens, no matter how much it hurts, you don't stop dancing, and you don't stop smiling, and you give those people what they '''''want!'''''



-->'''Diane''': "I ATE TOO MANY PANCAKES!!!"
-->'''[=BoJack=]''': "Oh shit, I'm still tripping."

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-->'''Diane''': "I --->'''Diane:''' I ATE TOO MANY PANCAKES!!!"
-->'''[=BoJack=]''': "Oh
PANCAKES!!!
'''[=BoJack=]:''' Oh,
shit, I'm still tripping."
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* This entire episode is about Bojack trying to reconnect with his family and loved ones ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg as well as]] Zach Braff and Corduroy Jackson Jackson), even though they're all dead. He's aware that it's all a dream that he thinks he can wake up from, but they all decide to put on a show, and Bojack has no choice but to watch.

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* This entire episode is about Bojack [=BoJack=] trying to reconnect with his family and loved ones ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg as well as]] Zach Braff and Corduroy Jackson Jackson), Jackson-Jackson), even though they're all dead. He's aware that it's all a dream that he thinks he can wake up from, but they all decide to put on a show, and Bojack [=BoJack=] has no choice but to watch.



** Bojack starts to panic and tries to leave, but he can't. Beatrice and Crackerjack are up next, and the two perform a duet of Beatrice twirling a ribbon and Crackerjack playing the trumpet for her. He then wraps himself up with the ribbon and jumps into the void, while Beatrice covers herself with the ribbon, all while a [[BuffySpeak black liquid slime substance]] envelops and her as she disappears.
** The dark substance then swallows up Herb, [[ItMakesSenseinContext and the red bird that flew in to the house]], and it begins to chase Bojack throughout the house as he realizes that whatever this is, is death, and that it's coming for him. He realizes that he's drowning in his swimming pool, as he sees a silhouette of himself floating inside said pool. It catches up to him, it starts to envelop him too, and the episode ends on [[HellIsThatNoise the sound of a]] ''flatline''.

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** Bojack [=BoJack=] starts to panic and tries to leave, but he can't. Beatrice and Crackerjack are up next, and the two perform a duet of Beatrice twirling a ribbon and Crackerjack playing the trumpet for her. He then wraps himself up with the ribbon and jumps into the void, while Beatrice covers herself with the ribbon, all while a [[BuffySpeak black liquid slime substance]] envelops and her as she disappears.
** The dark substance then swallows up Herb, [[ItMakesSenseinContext and the red bird that flew in to the house]], and it begins to chase Bojack [=BoJack=] throughout the house as he realizes that whatever this is, is death, and that it's coming for him. He realizes that he's drowning in his swimming pool, as he sees a silhouette of himself floating inside said pool. It catches up to him, it starts to envelop him too, and the episode ends on [[HellIsThatNoise the sound of a]] ''flatline''.
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---> '''Bojack''': Is it terrifying?
---> '''Herb''': No, I don't think so. It's just the way it is, you know? Everything has to end. The drip finally stops.
---> '''Bojack''': See you on the other side.
---> '''Herb''': Oh Bojack, [[CessationOfExistence there is no other side]]. [[TheNothingAfterDeath This is it]].

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---> '''Bojack''': ---->'''[=BoJack=]:''' Is it terrifying?
---> '''Herb''':
terrifying?\\
'''Herb:'''
No, I don't think so. It's just the way it is, you know? Everything has to end. The drip finally stops.
---> '''Bojack''':
stops. ''(sticks his arm into The Black Door)''\\
'''[=BoJack=]:'''
See you on the other side.
---> '''Herb''': Oh Bojack,
side.\\
'''Herb:''' ''(with sadness in his voice, as the blackness creeps out the door and slowly consumes him)'' Oh, [=BoJack=], no...
[[CessationOfExistence there is no other side]]. [[TheNothingAfterDeath This is it]].it. ''(is eaten entirely by the blackless)''
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---> '''Herb''': Oh Bojack, [[CessationOfExistence there is no other side]]. [[TheNothingAfterDeath This is it.]]

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---> '''Herb''': Oh Bojack, [[CessationOfExistence there is no other side]]. [[TheNothingAfterDeath This is it.]]it]].

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---> '''Herb''': Oh Bojack, [[CessationOfExistence there is no other side]]. This is it.

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---> '''Herb''': Oh Bojack, [[CessationOfExistence there is no other side]]. [[TheNothingAfterDeath This is it.]]
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--> '''Bojack''': Is it terrifying?
--> '''Herb''': No, I don't think so. It's just the way it is, you know? Everything has to end. The drip finally stops.
--> '''Bojack''': See you on the other side.
--> '''Herb''': Oh Bojack, [[CessationOfExistence there is no other side]]. This is it.

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--> ---> '''Bojack''': Is it terrifying?
--> ---> '''Herb''': No, I don't think so. It's just the way it is, you know? Everything has to end. The drip finally stops.
--> ---> '''Bojack''': See you on the other side.
--> ---> '''Herb''': Oh Bojack, [[CessationOfExistence there is no other side]]. This is it.
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*** The whole scene really hammers in just how frightened Bojack is about confronting his mortality. This bit of dialogue he has just before it's ''his turn'' to enter that [[NothingIsScarier pitch black door to nowhere]] doesn't ease his intense feeling of dread.
--> '''Bojack''': Is it terrifying?
--> '''Herb''': No, I don't think so. It's just the way it is, you know? Everything has to end. The drip finally stops.
--> '''Bojack''': See you on the other side.
--> '''Herb''': Oh Bojack, [[CessationOfExistence there is no other side]]. This is it.
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** The dark substance then swallows up Herb, [[ItMakesSenseinContext and the red bird that flew in to the house]], and it begins to chase Bojack throughout the house as he realizes that whatever this is, is death, and that it's coming for him. He realizes that he's drowning in his swimming pool, as he sees a silhouette of himself floating inside said pool. It catches up to him, it starts to envelop him too, and the episode ends on the sound of a ''flatline''.

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** The dark substance then swallows up Herb, [[ItMakesSenseinContext and the red bird that flew in to the house]], and it begins to chase Bojack throughout the house as he realizes that whatever this is, is death, and that it's coming for him. He realizes that he's drowning in his swimming pool, as he sees a silhouette of himself floating inside said pool. It catches up to him, it starts to envelop him too, and the episode ends on [[HellIsThatNoise the sound of a a]] ''flatline''.
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** The dark substance then swallows up Herb, [[ItMakesSenseinContext and the red bird that flew in to the house]], and it begins to chase Bojack throughout the house as he realizes that whatever this is, is death, and that it's coming for him. He realizes that he's drowning in his swimming pool, as he sees a silhouette of himself floating inside said pool. It catches up to him, it starts to envelop him too, and the episode ends on a ''flatline''.

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** The dark substance then swallows up Herb, [[ItMakesSenseinContext and the red bird that flew in to the house]], and it begins to chase Bojack throughout the house as he realizes that whatever this is, is death, and that it's coming for him. He realizes that he's drowning in his swimming pool, as he sees a silhouette of himself floating inside said pool. It catches up to him, it starts to envelop him too, and the episode ends on the sound of a ''flatline''.
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* This entire episode is about Bojack trying to reconnect with his family and loved ones ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg as well as]] Zach Braff and Corduroy Jackson Jackson), even though they're all dead. He's aware that it's all a dream that he thinks he can wake up from, but they all decide to put on a show, and Bojack has no choice but to watch.
** Sarah Lynn's performance is a reprise of Gina's song from a season prior, albeit with a more modern flair, and as she wraps up her performance, a door appears on the stage. [[NothingIsScarier It is pitch black beyond the door]], her singing slows down, and she falls backwards into the nothingness.
** In a moment of BlackComedy, Zach Braff is pushed and roller blades slowly backwards into the void, spouting tongue twisters all the while.
** Secretariat recites a poem about what it was like ''jumping off a bridge'', talking about [[TitleDrop the view from halfway down]] during the fall, and all the while, the spotlight keeps shining on the door as it inches closer to Secretariat, almost as if it's beckoning him. Worse still is that as Secretariat continues reading, he starts to sound more panicked and scared, then eventually falls backwards into it, and it's just very hard to watch.
** Bojack starts to panic and tries to leave, but he can't. Beatrice and Crackerjack are up next, and the two perform a duet of Beatrice twirling a ribbon and Crackerjack playing the trumpet for her. He then wraps himself up with the ribbon and jumps into the void, while Beatrice covers herself with the ribbon, all while a [[BuffySpeak black liquid slime substance]] envelops and her as she disappears.
** The dark substance then swallows up Herb, [[ItMakesSenseinContext and the red bird that flew in to the house]], and it begins to chase Bojack throughout the house as he realizes that whatever this is, is death, and that it's coming for him. He realizes that he's drowning in his swimming pool, as he sees a silhouette of himself floating inside said pool. It catches up to him, it starts to envelop him too, and the episode ends on a ''flatline''.
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* When Joseph not so subtly threatens to have Beatrice lobotomised like her mother, the background is nothing but fire, essentially being Hell. Joseph turns his body slightly so that it faces the audience and his ears actually resemble ''horns.'' This may not even have been intentional on the animators part, but it certainly makes Joseph look that much more evil.

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* When Joseph not so subtly threatens to have Beatrice lobotomised lobotomized like her mother, the background is nothing but fire, essentially being Hell. Joseph turns his body slightly so that it faces the audience and his ears actually resemble ''horns.'' This may not even have been intentional on the animators part, but it certainly makes Joseph look that much more evil.
** The scene where the silhouette of Beatrice's lobotomized mother appears besides Joseph, who is bathed in hellfire, is also accompanied by the faint sounds of a woman's screams. Screams that could either mean that Honey was in pain due to the procedure, or worse, she was screaming in fear of the procedure taking away her identity.

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[[caption-width-right:350:"[[DissonantSerenity I promise]], one day, [[BlatantLies this will all be a pleasant memory]]."]]

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->''There is no shame in dying for nothing. That's why most people die.''
->--'''Creator/HenryWinkler''' about Herb's death, "Still Broken". Pretty good summation of the show's PrimalFear.

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\n->''There ->''"There is no shame in dying for nothing. That's why most people die.''
->--'''Creator/HenryWinkler'''
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-->--'''Creator/HenryWinkler'''
about Herb's death, "Still Broken". Pretty good summation of the show's PrimalFear.
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* Diane and Guy investigate an apparent workplace accident at a Whitewhale factory with the plot to make an exposé video about it. [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Jeremiah Whitewhale]] finds out and, rather than put a stop to it, smugly informs her that such a video won't harm his company, and the lack of moral restriction actually ''[[MisaimedFandom increases the company's value]].'' He then nonchalantly admits that the employee didn't die of an accident, but was ''murdered'' for "taking too many bathroom breaks." He then reveals that Congress passed a bill where murder is legal for the rich.

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* Diane and Guy investigate an apparent workplace accident at a Whitewhale factory with the plot to make an exposé video about it. [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Jeremiah Whitewhale]] finds out and, rather than put a stop to it, smugly informs her that such a video won't harm his company, and [[CorruptCorporateExecutive the lack of moral restriction restriction]] actually ''[[MisaimedFandom increases the company's value]].'' He then nonchalantly admits that the employee didn't die of an accident, but was ''murdered'' for "taking too many bathroom breaks." He then reveals that Congress passed a bill where murder is legal for the rich.
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[[caption-width-right:340: Just one question: ''[[NightmareRetardant where did you]] [[ComicallyMissingThePoint get the syrup bottle?]]'']]

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[[caption-width-right:350:"[[DissonantSerenity I promise]],
one question: ''[[NightmareRetardant where did you]] [[ComicallyMissingThePoint get the syrup bottle?]]'']]
day, [[BlatantLies this will all be a pleasant memory]]."]]



** Pictured at the top-right corner is a vision of Diane randomly [[TransformationHorror mutating into a hideous abomination]].

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** Pictured at the top-right corner is a vision of At one point, Diane randomly [[TransformationHorror mutating mutates into a hideous abomination]].



* As with ''The Old Sugarman Place'', this is an episode that makes terrifyingly effective use of sound, particularly towards the end. As Beatrice's memory of her doll being burned gets entangled with [=BoJack=]'s birth and Hollyhock's birth, the music moves from bittersweet but triumphant, to a moment of calm...only to slide into a discordant and eerie noise as a young Beatrice frantically begs the servants not to burn her belongings, cut with Hollyhock's separation from her mother. There's a ScareChord when Henrietta screams as her baby is taken from her, followed quickly by the echoing and ethereal scream as Honey's lobotomized silhouette appears in the flames behind Beatrice's father and his horrifying DissonantSerenity. The effect is downright chilling.

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* As with ''The Old Sugarman Place'', this is an episode that makes terrifyingly effective use of sound, particularly towards the end. As Beatrice's memory of her doll being burned gets entangled with [=BoJack=]'s birth and Hollyhock's birth, the music moves from bittersweet but triumphant, to a moment of calm...only to slide into a discordant and eerie noise as a young Beatrice frantically begs the servants not to burn her belongings, cut with Hollyhock's separation from her mother. There's a ScareChord when Henrietta screams as her baby is taken from her, followed quickly by the echoing and ethereal scream as Honey's lobotomized silhouette appears in the flames behind Beatrice's father and his horrifying DissonantSerenity. The effect is downright chilling.chilling, and is pictured above.
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** How stressed is she? She ''nearly microvawes her daughter''!
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* Diane and Guy investigate an apparent workplace accident at a Whitewhale factory with the plot to make an exposé video about it. [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Jeremiah Whitewhale]] finds out and, rather than put a stop to it, smugly informs her that such a video won't harm his company, and the lack of moral restriction actually ''increases the company's value.'' He then nonchalantly admits that the employee didn't die of an accident, but was ''murdered'' for "taking too many bathroom breaks." He then reveals that Congress passed a bill where murder is legal for the rich.

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* Diane and Guy investigate an apparent workplace accident at a Whitewhale factory with the plot to make an exposé video about it. [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Jeremiah Whitewhale]] finds out and, rather than put a stop to it, smugly informs her that such a video won't harm his company, and the lack of moral restriction actually ''increases ''[[MisaimedFandom increases the company's value.value]].'' He then nonchalantly admits that the employee didn't die of an accident, but was ''murdered'' for "taking too many bathroom breaks." He then reveals that Congress passed a bill where murder is legal for the rich.

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