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* AllPowerfulBystander: The Ark society has power surpassing even the gods, but they sit back and watch. They explain that their only purpose is to maintain the stability of the barriers between dimensions, and hint that the last time they tried to influence a mortal world it went ''really'' badly.
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* AllPowerfulBystander: The Ark society has power surpassing even the gods, but they sit back and watch. They explain that their only purpose is to maintain the stability of the barriers between dimensions, and hint that the last time they tried to influence directly interefere with a mortal world it went ''really'' badly.
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* AristocratsAreEvil: With the exception of the child king, ''every'' member of the Tols royal family is a major {{Jerkass}}. [[{{Warhawk}} The Regent]] is a [[FantasticRacism human supremacist]], his sons are {{entitled bastard}}s, Prince Rennes is an ArrogantKungFuGuy and Penny is a CombatSadomasochist. Even the child king's father was a jerk for sentencing the Barol clan to genocide because he feared their power.
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* AristocratsAreEvil: With the exception of the child king, ''every'' member of the Tols royal family is a major {{Jerkass}}. [[{{Warhawk}} The Regent]] is a [[FantasticRacism human supremacist]], his sons are {{entitled bastard}}s, Prince Rennes is an ArrogantKungFuGuy and Penny is a CombatSadomasochist. Even the child king's father was a jerk for sentencing the Barol clan to genocide because he feared their power. [[spoiler:Oh, and he ''murdered Tols' wife'' to harden him up. The child king himself is a WellIntentionedExtremist who endorses all of the above because he's given up on humanity facing the gods directly.]]
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* GivingRadioToTheRomans: Xiang Ye's contribution will bring many bits of modern tech to this new world, some of which is still on the drawing board, like mecha.
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* GivingRadioToTheRomans: Xiang Ye's contribution will bring many bits of modern tech Ye uses AppliedPhlebotinum to this new world, some of which is still on take all the drawing board, like mecha.technological blueprints he memorized as an honors student and materialize them in reality. The kingdom reaches ''22nd'' century technology levels since nanoprinting entire structures for testing is hundreds of times faster than Earth's best 3D printers.
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Xiang Ye is looked upon as "useless lumber" because he doesn't have the ability to use magic, but when he joins the human "forging branch," his keen drawing skills and knowledge of modern tech makes him someone to be reckoned with.
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Xiang Ye is looked upon as "useless lumber" because he doesn't have the ability to use magic, but when he joins the human "forging branch," branch" with their unique ability to materialize objects from mental blueprints, his keen drawing skills and knowledge of modern tech makes him someone to be reckoned with.
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** A king that's still a child is going to be almost entirely at the mercy of his Regent unless he's got a powerful mentor shielding him, and even then there's not much he can do to go against the Regent directly, regardless of the Regent's actions.
** Even with magic, there are things this world and its people don't understand. The physics of Xiang Ye's world are still in this one but because of divergent paths, no one knows about them. Such as [[spoiler:radiation and its lethal potential. Rennes ends up suffering from that when he absorbs the heat of a tactical nuke to survive it. He ends up suffering acute organ failure minutes later]].
** Even with magic, there are things this world and its people don't understand. The physics of Xiang Ye's world are still in this one but because of divergent paths, no one knows about them. Such as [[spoiler:radiation and its lethal potential. Rennes ends up suffering from that when he absorbs the heat of a tactical nuke to survive it. He ends up suffering acute organ failure minutes later]].
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** A king that's still a child is going to be almost entirely at the mercy of his Regent unless he's got a powerful mentor shielding him, and even then there's not much he can do to go against the Regent directly, regardless of the Regent's actions.
actions. [[spoiler:This gets subverted, but the theme is still consistent: the human kingdom is practically a third-world country compared to the gods' civilization, and the king couldn't be more externally pressured if an elephant fell on him.]]
** Even with magic, there are things this world and its people don't understand. The physics of Xiang Ye's world are still in this one but because of divergent paths, no one knows about them. Such as [[spoiler:radiation and its lethal potential. Rennes ends up suffering from that when he absorbs the heat of a tactical nuke to survive it. He ends up suffering acute organ failure minuteslater]].later.]]
** Even with magic, there are things this world and its people don't understand. The physics of Xiang Ye's world are still in this one but because of divergent paths, no one knows about them. Such as [[spoiler:radiation and its lethal potential. Rennes ends up suffering from that when he absorbs the heat of a tactical nuke to survive it. He ends up suffering acute organ failure minutes
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* WorldOfBadass: '''Everybody''' has to be able to kick ass. Not just the swordsmen, cavalry, and wizards. The forgers, ''and even the chefs'' have to have some kind of combat utility. Xiang Ye's knowledge of modern tools, equipment, and vehicles has brought the long overlooked "Forging" Branch to center stage.
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* WorldOfBadass: '''Everybody''' has to be able to kick ass. Not just the swordsmen, cavalry, and wizards. The forgers, forgers (blacksmiths), ''and even the chefs'' have to have some kind of combat utility. Xiang Ye's knowledge of modern tools, equipment, and vehicles has brought the long overlooked "Forging" Branch to center stage.
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* AllPowerfulBystander: The Ark society has power surpassing even the gods, but they sit back and watch. They explain that their only purpose is to maintain the stability of the barriers between dimensions, and hint that the last time they tried to influence a mortal world it went ''really'' badly.
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* RelationshipUpgrade: After experiencing many adventures, [[spoiler:Isabella returns Xiang Ye's feelings. After ousting Lilian, Xiang Ye and Isabella Osa marry one other.]]
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* TheyDo: After experiencing many adventures, [[spoiler:Isabella returns Xiang Ye's feelings. After ousting Lilian, Xiang Ye and Isabella Osa marry one other.]]
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* InnocentCohabitation: Isabella and Xiang live in the same room, but absolutely no hanky-panky goes on.
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* MadeOfIndestructium: Uselss Lumber is nearly indestructible. Xiang Ye uses it to craft sturdy combat utensils.
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* MadeOfIndestructium: Uselss Useless Lumber is nearly indestructible. Xiang Ye uses it to craft sturdy combat utensils.
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* MirroringFactions: Aside from cosmetic differences, the demons shown to date could easily pass for humans, in appearance, culture, and behavior. In fact, Isabella does so, once she's lost her magical power completely and sports a human body.
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* TheyDo: After experiencing many adventures, [[spoiler:Isabella returns Xiang Ye's feelings. After ousting Lilian, Xiang Ye and Isabella Osa marry one other.]]
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* MarriageBeforeRomance: More like cohabitation before romance. Isabella Osa and Xiang Ye lived and adventured together for many months before entering the Demon Kingdom. [[spoiler:After ousting Lilian, Isabella proposes marriage to Xiang Ye as she reclaims her status as the Demon Queen.]]
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* MarriageBeforeRomance: More like cohabitation before romance. Isabella Osa and Xiang Ye lived and adventured together for many months before entering the Demon Kingdom. [[spoiler:After ousting Lilian, Isabella proposes marriage to marries Xiang Ye as she reclaims before reclaiming her status as the Demon Queen.throne.]]
