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'''12 Beast''' is a one-shot by {{Pixiv}} artist Takemaru "Okayado" Inui that has become an ongoing manga series.
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'''12 Beast''' is a one-shot by {{Pixiv}} artist Takemaru "Okayado" Inui that became an ongoing manga series.
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'''12 Beast''' is a one-shot by {{Pixiv}} artist Takemaru "Okayado" Inui that became has become an ongoing manga series.
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Detached Sleeves is being cut, as decided by TRS discussion.
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* DetachedSleeves: If Aero, for any reason, needs to hide her [[CuteMonsterGirl true]] [[HarpingOnAboutHarpies appearance,]] she can rely on these to hide her talons.
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* YoureDrinkingBreastmilk: Subverted. The female Minotaurus have a tendency of serving their guests raw milk. While it is implied that they made it, judging from the dialogue, the focus on their very large breats, and the other characters' [[{{Squick}} reactions]], a cutaway to a picture of cows show that they milked the cows instead.
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* YoureDrinkingBreastmilk: Subverted. The female Minotaurus have a tendency of serving their guests raw milk. While it is implied that they made it, judging from the dialogue, the focus on their very large breats, breasts, and the other characters' [[{{Squick}} reactions]], a cutaway to a picture of cows show that they milked the cows instead.
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* FastballSpecial: Eita manages to defeat the giant octopus by getting on Astoria's hammer, and then having the super strong Minotaurus launch him with it straight at the octopus.
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* GiantSquid: The group are attacked at the beach by a giant octopus....who like most cephalopod's that appear in manga captures Aero and Jawea and starts groping them.
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* BeachEpisode: Chapter 10 has the group rest up at a beach.
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* BoobsOfSteel: War Leader Jawea has quite the impressive chest, and the fighting skills to match. [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking She didn't get that position and title for nothing, after all.]]
** Another example would be Shei the Lizardwoman in the one-shot.
** Another example would be Shei the Lizardwoman in the one-shot.
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* BoobsOfSteel: War Leader Jawea has quite the impressive chest, and the fighting skills to match. [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking She didn't get that position and title for nothing, after all.]]
**]] Another example would be Shei the Lizardwoman in the one-shot.one-shot. And the bustiest girls in the manga so far are also the strongest, namely the minotaurs of the labyrinth.
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* WorldOfBuxom: So far every female in the story has 'at least' large breasts.
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* WorldOfBuxom: So far every female in the story has 'at least' ''at least'' large breasts.
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* FunbagAirbag: Asterio the [[ALoadOfBull Minotaurus]] is happy to cushion Eita's fall with her large breasts...
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* FunbagAirbag: Asterio the [[ALoadOfBull Minotaurus]] is happy to and able to cushion Eita's fall with her large breasts...boobs without a hint of discomfort from either of him despite him falling from at least a hundred feet up.
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* WorldOfBuxom: So far every female in the story has 'at least' large breasts.
** No female minotaur shown has breasts smaller than their head.
** No female minotaur shown has breasts smaller than their head.
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* AmazonianBeauty: Female minotaurs are almost twice as tall as humans.
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** Another example would be Shei the Lizardwoman in the one-shot.
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** Another example would be Shei the Lizardwoman in the one-shot.
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* YoureDrinkingBreastmilk: The female Minotaurus have a tendency of serving their guests milk. It is implied that they made it, judging from the dialogue and the other characters' [[{{Squick}} reactions]]...
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* YoureDrinkingBreastmilk: Subverted. The female Minotaurus have a tendency of serving their guests raw milk. It While it is implied that they made it, judging from the dialogue dialogue, the focus on their very large breats, and the other characters' [[{{Squick}} reactions]]...reactions]], a cutaway to a picture of cows show that they milked the cows instead.
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* YoureDrinkingBreastmilk: The female Minotaurus have a tendency of serving their guests milk. It is implied that they made it, judging from the dialogue and the other characters' [[Squick reactions]]...
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* YoureDrinkingBreastmilk: The female Minotaurus have a tendency of serving their guests milk. It is implied that they made it, judging from the dialogue and the other characters' [[Squick [[{{Squick}} reactions]]...
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* DungeonCrawlingDungeonCrawling: The Labyrinth is a classic example, filled with treasure and death traps.
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* GagBoobs: Expected to be done whenever there are large chested girls about.
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* BizarreSexualDimorphism: Male Minotaurus look like traditional Minotaurs, complete with large size, muscled bodies, and a bovine head. Female Minotaurus, on the other hand, have female human heads and are much more slender. But they are still very large, have hoofed feet, and very, very strong.
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* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Darkness]]: Harpies in general do not like the dark, and would freak out if someone turns out the lights.
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* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Darkness]]: Harpies in general do not like the dark, and would freak out if someone turns out the lights.
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* BoobyTrap
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* WhoWearsShortShorts: A lot of Harpies do! Appropriately enough, their style mimics ''Manga/DeadlineSummonner'''s Aero's shorts, said manga being another of Okayado's works. Though, they aren't "short shorts" so much as they're [[PantyShot underwear]].
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* WhoWearsShortShorts: A lot of Harpies do! Appropriately enough, their style mimics ''Manga/DeadlineSummonner'''s Aero's shorts, said manga being another of Okayado's works. Though, they aren't "short shorts" so much as they're [[PantyShot underwear]].underwear]].
* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Darkness]]: Harpies in general do not like the dark, and would freak out if someone turns out the lights.
* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Darkness]]: Harpies in general do not like the dark, and would freak out if someone turns out the lights.
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* OurCentaursAreDifferent: They have horse ears, but otherwise are the same as the original myth.
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* OurCentaursAreDifferent: The Centaurs here are similar to ones found in Okayado's [[{{Expy}} other]] [[Manga/DailyLifeWithMonsterGirl two]] [[Manga/DeadlineSummonner works]]. They are more like English knights of a royal court instead of a barbarian horde. They also wear full suits of armor to battle in the one-shot. They also have horse ears, but otherwise are the same as the original myth.ears instead of human ears.
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* AccidentalPervert: Some of Eita's moments came when in dangerous situations, like grabbing Jawea's breasts in a desperate attempt to not fall down a hundred feet from the air...
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* AccidentalPervert: Eita attracts dangerous, violent trouble in three ways: being sought after for his heroism and combat prowess, acting on his heroism and combat prowess, or accidentally groping, ogling, and/or offending the various females of both Earth and Live-Earth. Sometimes all three at once.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Eita. Not that it does him much good.
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* TheBlacksmith: The Smith of the Labyrinth.
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* HotSpringsEpisode: The setting of the mini-chapter 4.5, with Aero and Jawea bathing while Eita tries his best to hide from the two of them (especially Jawea).
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* AttackAttackAttack: The Harpies' initial plan to defeat the Gigas was essentially this. It did not work as well as they thought.
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* AttackAttackAttack: The Harpies' initial plan to defeat the Gigas was essentially this. [[CurbStompBattle It did not work as well as they thought.]]
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* BattleBoomerang: A very large one was used by War Leader Jawea. She claims that it can slice through metal.
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* BattleBoomerang: A very large one was used by War Leader Jawea.Jawea as her weapon-of-choice. She claims that it can slice through metal.
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*** However, during his first battle against a full-sized Gigas, it was destroyed. This prompts him to go to the Minotaurus to have it fixed.
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* TheStrategist: Eita plays this role as the general of his army in the One-shot. He also does it again when the Gigas attack the harpies.
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* AccidentalPervert: Some of Eita's moments came when in dangerous situations, like grabbing Jawea's breasts in a desperate attempt to not fall down a hundred feet from the air...
* ALoadOfBull: The Minotaurus of the Labyrinth. Stories that Aero and Jawea paint them as savage blood-thirsty monsters, although reality proves this is not the case...
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* {{Ecchi}}: Hoo boy.
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* {{Ecchi}}: Hoo boy.Less racy than Okayado's better known [[Manga/DailyLifeWithMonsterGirl work]], but is still loaded with fan service.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Eita in spades. In our world he was actually training in ninja arts, though apparently reluctantly. This makes him far more dangerous and skilled then his outward otaku personality might imply. [[UpToEleven Then he got an army to back him up.]]
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: Eita in spades. In our world he was actually training in ninja arts, though apparently reluctantly. This makes him far more dangerous and skilled then his outward otaku personality might imply. [[UpToEleven Then he got an army to back him up.]]
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* TheNudifier: One of the Gigas' weapons. It is a beam that dissolves clothes.
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* TheNudifier: One of the Gigas' weapons. It attack of the Gigas is releasing a beam conductive liquid on a crowd and then coursing some kind of electrical weapon though the afflicted targets. A side affect of the liquid is that is dissolves clothes.clothing.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Eita in spades. In our world he was actually training in ninja arts, though apparently reluctantly. This makes him far more dangerous and skilled then his outward otaku personality might imply. [[UpToEleven Then he got an army to back him up.]]
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* AttackAttackAttack: The Harpies' initial plan to defeat the Gigas was essentially this. It did not work as well as they thought.
