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* ImpactSilhouette: Elizabeth fought a dragon in the past. While she won, she hit the ground with enough force that the hole took her outline. She was in a rather awarded pose and seemed to be the first thing that phased her.
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* ModestyTowel: Elizabeth ditches Reus and drags Karen off to a hot spring she found years ago. Both of them wear towels in the water.
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* FaintInShock: In Chapter 2, Chloe gets this twice when Elizabeth gets into dangerous maneuvers, once accidentally and once intentionally.
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* GivingUpTheGhost: It happened several times: In Chapter 2, Chloe has this ''twice'', paired with FaintInShock, when Elizabeth (1) fell from the windowsill and is likely to land head first (TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening causes her to land safely) and (2) after trying out her magic, jumps out from the window from her second-floor room (and uses her magic to land safely). Elizabeth herself also gets this in Chapter 7, when Karen befriends her, since this is the first time Elizabeth gets befriended for all her life.
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* KillSteal: This is what Elizabeth [[DefiedTrope wants to avoid]] when she and Karen enter a battle since she knows Karen wants to become stronger. However, Elizabeth emits such strong KillingIntent that is enough to drive monsters away.
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* StatusBuff: According to Luna's exposition in Chapter, this is one of Karen's main magical powers.
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* SuperBreath: Part of Elizabeth's CharlesAtlasSuperpower. She can just use her lungs to blow out Reus' fire ''magic''.
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* WhiteMagicianGirl: Karen, whose powers are mainly that of healing and StatusBuff, and being a RomanceGame protagonist she has the AllLovingHero personality as well.
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* YourDaysAreNumbered: {{Subverted|Trope}}. Before her incarnation, Elizabeth was born so sickly that doctors initially predicted she couldn't survive through her third birthday. However, she kept beating these predictions, causing the doctors to MovingTheGoalposts regarding how long she could live. When she finally died at the age of 16, her doctors had already given up giving her firm predictions on her lifespan, just predicting her parents wouldn't see the day she married. Her ScrewDestiny worldview partly comes from her having repeatedly beating these forecasts.
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Descriptions of God, some more tropes in Chapter 8-10, and some trope description modifications:
Charles Atlas Superpower: Liz is an example, but the description appears to indicate a misunderstanding of that trope—the trope actually means "superpower obtained through mundane training," which is true as it comes to Liz's physical strength (and lung capacity).
Delicate And Sickly: the most recent TRS
defines it as "attractive guys/cute girls with a debilitating sickness," which means some words about the "attractive" part needs to be raised. On top of that, while the protagonist does have a debilitating sickness, she's also a Determinator because of that, which means the trope isn't played entirely straight. The first scene definitively play it straight though. On the other hand, the TRS also clarifies it's not a trope of a charactering having debilitating sicknesses, so I cut most discussions of it beyond proving it's debilitating.
Charles Atlas Superpower: Liz is an example, but the description appears to indicate a misunderstanding of that trope—the trope actually means "superpower obtained through mundane training," which is true as it comes to Liz's physical strength (and lung capacity).
Delicate And Sickly: the most recent TRS
defines it as "attractive guys/cute girls with a debilitating sickness," which means some words about the "attractive" part needs to be raised. On top of that, while the protagonist does have a debilitating sickness, she's also a Determinator because of that, which means the trope isn't played entirely straight. The first scene definitively play it straight though. On the other hand, the TRS also clarifies it's not a trope of a charactering having debilitating sicknesses, so I cut most discussions of it beyond proving it's debilitating.Changed line(s) 22 (click to see context) from:
* CharlesAtlasSuperpower: When Karen is being bullied during the weapons training drills, Elizabeth steps up to teach the bullies a lesson by picking up a whole tree as a weapon. [[WrongGenreSavvy One of the bullies thinks that Elizabeth is using magic as a bluff.]] [[OhCrap She's not. She really IS that strong.]]
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* CharlesAtlasSuperpower: When Karen is being bullied during the weapons training drills, Elizabeth steps up to teach the bullies has such physical strength that she can [[TelephonePolearm yank a lesson by picking up a whole tree as a weapon. [[WrongGenreSavvy One of from the bullies thinks that Elizabeth is using magic as a bluff.]] [[OhCrap She's not. She really IS that strong.]]ground]], which she got strictly through training.
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* DelicateAndSickly: Before she became Elizabeth, she was a sickly girl on Earth and spent her entire life in the hospital. The doctors kept predicting she likely wouldn't survive another few years but she kept beating their predictions until she was 16.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: At the end of Chapter 9, Elizabeth declares the following to Karen's bullies, enough to make Karen blush in response:
-->'''Elizabeth''': Karen is my FirstFriend ever. I won't allow anyone to hurt her. It doesn't matter who it is. I'll even fight the entire world for her!
* DelicateAndSickly:Before she became Elizabeth, she {{Zigzagged|Trope}}. There's no doubt that Elizabeth was a sickly girl on Earth in her previous life and spent her entire life in the hospital. The doctors kept predicting hospital, and the first scene follows the conventional portrayal of the death of a consumptive heroine, being very depressing as well as her spent a significant part of it lamenting her condition. She was also, at a minimum, [[GenericCuteness generically cute]] with no physical signs of being a chronically bedridden person. That said, the second scene establishes her being a {{Determinator}}, making her a subversion of sorts in that she likely wouldn't survive another few years but she kept beating their predictions until she was 16.isn't delicate in spirit.
-->'''Elizabeth''': Karen is my FirstFriend ever. I won't allow anyone to hurt her. It doesn't matter who it is. I'll even fight the entire world for her!
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* GodIsGood: The actions God has performed so far are for the general good: trying to resolve the issue of ''The Saint and the Four Knights'' where Elizabeth turns into a demon lord by ''specifically'' choosing a soul to reincarnate as her; and in his perspective, this is also in the protagonist's favor, as he thinks she would have an easier life post-reincarnation.
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* ShockwaveStomp: In Chapter 8, upon seeing Karen being bullied during training, Elizabeth's first response is to stomp the ground ''really'' hard such that people thought it was an earthquake, and the ground even cracks.
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* TheCharmer: In Luna's perspective, Karen is a "[[LampshadeHanging Natural-born Charmer]] who is Dangerously Cute" and was able to conquer all 4 romantic interests of the Game easily. What Luna isn't expecting is that she can even charm women (i.e. Elizabeth) as well.
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* DelicateAndSickly: Before she became Elizabeth, she was a sickly girl on Earth and spent her entire life in the hospital. The doctors kept predicting she likely wouldn't survive another few years but she kept beating their predictions until she was 16. Different points before and after reincarnation indicate her health problems might involve a heart defect which also affects her lungs.[[note]]Her heart may stop when excited, as well as if she doesn't move slowly and steadily, she'd have palpitations and/or shortness of breath[[/note]]
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* DelicateAndSickly: Before she became Elizabeth, she was a sickly girl on Earth and spent her entire life in the hospital. The doctors kept predicting she likely wouldn't survive another few years but she kept beating their predictions until she was 16. Different points before and after reincarnation indicate her health problems might involve a heart defect which also affects her lungs.[[note]]Her heart may stop when excited, as well as if she doesn't move slowly and steadily, she'd have palpitations and/or shortness of breath[[/note]]
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* DiseaseByAnyOtherName: While it's explicitly stated that in her past life, Elizabeth was very frail and sickly, there's no discussion as to what caused it. The fact that she solely mentioned symptoms associated with the heart before and after her reincarnation[[note]]Her heart might stop when excited, she needed to use ''conscious'' effort to control her heart rate else she'd have a "rough time", and if if she didn't move slowly and steadily, she'd have palpitations and/or shortness of breath[[/note]] indicates her past-life health problems mainly arises from a congenital heart defect.
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* InUniverseNickname: Despite having properly introduced himself, Elizabeth keeps calling Luna "Mr. Cat." ("Kuroneko-san", or "Mr. Black Cat" in Japanese).
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* HotBlooded: Reus gets fired up when he smells a fight or a challenge. This is notability different than how he was in the game.
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* HotBlooded: Reus gets fired up when he smells a fight or a challenge. This is notability notably different than how he was in the game.
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1. After pondering Action Survivor and Sickly Prodigy, I decided that in God's view pre-incarnation Liz is the latter, since it seems her ability to fight repaers without even realizing is an unusual ability.
2. Traumatic Superpower Awakening: That's my interpretation of Ch.2 Pg.16, given Chloe doesn't give more info as to whether Liz demonstrated magic powers before 6.
1. After pondering Action Survivor and Sickly Prodigy, I decided that in God's view pre-incarnation Liz is the latter, since it seems her ability to fight repaers without even realizing is an unusual ability.
2. Traumatic Superpower Awakening: That's my interpretation of Ch.2 Pg.16, given Chloe doesn't give more info as to whether Liz demonstrated magic powers before 6.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: According to God, in Elizabeth's past life she has been killing {{grim reaper}}s left and right all her life without realizing it, causing God to describe her as an ActionSurvivor. This carries over to her present life: without even realizing she is doing it, she defeats the wraiths and reapers drawn to her dark magic while doing radio exercises, allowing her to level up to that of a soldier at the age of six.
* ActionSurvivor: While Elizabeth considers her past life as an [[DelicateAndSickly invalid]] trying not to die, God sees her more as this, especially in the area of battling the dark forces (such as death). He considers her being able to significantly extend her life expectancy impressive and compares her to a veteran.
* ActionSurvivor: While Elizabeth considers her past life as an [[DelicateAndSickly invalid]] trying not to die, God sees her more as this, especially in the area of battling the dark forces (such as death). He considers her being able to significantly extend her life expectancy impressive and compares her to a veteran.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: According to God, in Elizabeth's past life she has been killing {{grim reaper}}s left and right all her life without realizing it, causing God to describe her as an ActionSurvivor.SicklyProdigy. This carries over to her present life: without even realizing she is doing it, she defeats the wraiths and reapers drawn to her dark magic while doing radio exercises, allowing her to level up to that of a soldier at the age of six.
*ActionSurvivor: While AllGirlsWantBadBoys: During Lux's proper introduction in Chapter 16, some girls find him dreamy but are wary of his TheCasanova tendencies. At least one girl, however, says that the "bad boy" factor has its own appeal.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Chloe wished [[CreepyLonerGirl her charge]] would become more energetic. In her perspective, Elizabethconsiders her past life as an [[DelicateAndSickly invalid]] trying not to die, God sees her did have a personality change [[PluckyGirl in that direction]], which makes Chloe even more as this, especially in the area of battling the dark forces (such as death). He considers her being able to significantly extend her life expectancy impressive and compares her to a veteran.{{beleaguered|Assistant}}.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Chloe wished [[CreepyLonerGirl her charge]] would become more energetic. In her perspective, Elizabeth
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* {{Determinator}}: While she [[AchievementsInIgnorance did not realize]] the ActionSurvivor aspect of her past life, she was already a determined person despite (or maybe ''because of'') her poor health. This is demonstrated by her explanation to God why she [[JumpedAtTheCall needs no further information about her next life]]:
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* {{Determinator}}: While she [[AchievementsInIgnorance did not realize]] the ActionSurvivor SicklyProdigy aspect of her past life, she was already a determined person despite (or maybe ''because of'') her poor health. This is demonstrated by her explanation to God why she [[JumpedAtTheCall needs no further information about her next life]]:
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* ElementalHairColors: Elizabeth is a dark-elemental mage with jet-black hair. Karen is a light-elemental mage with white/silver hair.
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* ElementalHairColors: Elizabeth is a dark-elemental mage with jet-black hair. Karen is a light-elemental mage with white/silver hair. Reus is a fire mage with red hair.
* ElementalPersonalities: In this timeline, Reus is a HotBlooded fire mage.
* ElementalPersonalities: In this timeline, Reus is a HotBlooded fire mage.
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* FantasticRacism: Zelvians consider people with black hair and black eyes as a bad omen owing to being similar to the [[MaouTheDemonKing demon lord]] in the legends. Luna mentions that in many routes of ''The Saint and the Four Knights'' Elizabeth [[ThenLetMeBeEvil falls into darkness because of this]] and even worry the current Elizabeth can't handle the discrimination. Fortunately, Elizabeth reassures Luna that she gets used to it thanks to her {{big brother|bully}}, not to mention, even with that considered, she still thinks her current life as an improvement over her past life.
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* FantasticRacism: Zelvians consider people with black hair and black eyes as a bad omen owing to being similar to the [[MaouTheDemonKing demon lord]] in the legends. Luna mentions that in many routes of ''The Saint and the Four Knights'' Elizabeth [[ThenLetMeBeEvil falls into darkness because of this]] and even worry the current Elizabeth can't handle the discrimination. Fortunately, Elizabeth reassures Luna that she gets used to it thanks to her {{big brother|bully}}, not to mention, even with that considered, she still thinks her current life as is an improvement over her past life.life.
* FieryRedhead: In this timeline, Reus is a [[ElementalHairColors fire mage]] with red hair and is HotBlooded.
* FieryRedhead: In this timeline, Reus is a [[ElementalHairColors fire mage]] with red hair and is HotBlooded.
* SicklyProdigy: Elizabeth does consider herself fighting against death in her past life, but only figuratively--she was too frail back then to even leave the bed. However, in [[TheOmniscient God]]'s perspective, she's been [[AchievementsInIgnorance killing reapers without realizing it]] throughout her past life and considers her a veteran in this aspect, and her health problems "the worst handicap she could have had."
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* SummonEverymanHero: Subverted. At first, Luna thought God conned a simple-minded girl into playing Elizabeth's role, but after showing Elizabeth [[AchievementsInIgnorance defeating the wraiths and reapers drawn to her dark magic]] while [[MundaneLuxury indulging in radio exercises]], God explains his choice is very much [[TheChosenOne deliberate]], due to Him seeing the person He summoned being an ActionSurvivor.
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* SummonEverymanHero: Subverted. At first, Luna thought God conned a simple-minded girl into playing Elizabeth's role, but after showing Elizabeth [[AchievementsInIgnorance defeating the wraiths and reapers drawn to her dark magic]] while [[MundaneLuxury indulging in radio exercises]], God explains his choice is very much [[TheChosenOne deliberate]], due to Him seeing the person He summoned being an ActionSurvivor.a SicklyProdigy.
* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: On the day Elizabeth regains her PastLifeMemories, she also awakens her magic when she falls from the windowsill head first when she attempts to open it when the magic allows her to land on her feet.
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* WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises: Happens twice in the first chapter: once when the protagonist is told her wish will be granted, and when God explains to Luna that the girl he reincarnated into Elizabeth's body isn't [[SummonEverymanHero just a random girl]] and she was more of an ActionSurvivor / SicklyProdigy.
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* WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises: Happens twice in the first chapter: once when the protagonist is told her wish will be granted, and when God explains to Luna that the girl he reincarnated into Elizabeth's body isn't [[SummonEverymanHero just a random girl]] and she was more of an ActionSurvivor / a SicklyProdigy.
