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* The ''Ace Attorney'' fangame Phoenix Drive is full of lines that play it straight. The [[BlindIdiotTranslation horrible English]] makes things worse. Examples of erotic lines in this game:
** May I do [[ADateWithRosiePalms onanism?]]
** I wash down your pipe. I investigate the inside.
** This stick is energetic... I melt it.
** [[RougeAnglesOfSatin It's... milky cock... cumimg]] (sic)?
** Aaah... Juice hangs down from a cock...
** And that's not even all the examples.
** May I do [[ADateWithRosiePalms onanism?]]
** I wash down your pipe. I investigate the inside.
** This stick is energetic... I melt it.
** [[RougeAnglesOfSatin It's... milky cock... cumimg]] (sic)?
** Aaah... Juice hangs down from a cock...
** And that's not even all the examples.
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* Pretty much ''every'' HGame translated into English is going to have sex of this kind. Part of it is just the difficulty in translating from Japanese to English (and often, they won't even make an effort, just [[BlindIdiotTranslation translating by machine]] -- it might make it ''[[GoodBadTranslation funnier]]'', but not necessarily erotic). Other times it's because there are different writers for the sex scenes and the non-sex scenes. And still other times, it's because the sex is [[ExecutiveMeddling shoehorned in]] because that's what [[SexSells sells games]] -- the writers want to focus on the story and don't care about the sex scenes, and the game itself could be totally enjoyable and comprehensible with the sex scenes deleted entirely. Even when the translation is good, it's often too clinical, and marred with [[UnsoundEffect strange sound effects]].
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* Pretty much ''every'' HGame translated into English is going to have sex of this kind. Part of it is just the difficulty in translating from Japanese to English (and often, they won't even make an effort, just [[BlindIdiotTranslation translating by machine]] -- it might make it ''[[GoodBadTranslation funnier]]'', but not necessarily erotic). Other times it's because there are different writers for the sex scenes and the non-sex scenes. And still other times, it's because the sex is [[ExecutiveMeddling shoehorned in]] because that's what [[SexSells sells games]] -- the writers want to focus on the story and don't care about the sex scenes, and the game itself could be totally enjoyable and comprehensible with the sex scenes deleted entirely. Even when the translation is good, it's often too clinical, and marred with [[UnsoundEffect strange sound effects]].
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But as always, TropesAreTools, and IKEA Erotica has its merits. It can be a {{parody}} of [[StylisticSuck bad writing]]. It can be a way of GettingCrapPastTheRadar. It can be an interesting insight into the psyche of a character who [[TheSpock isn't good with emotions]] or [[SexIsEvil doesn't like sex]]. It can be a way to denote that the character [[LieBackAndThinkOfEngland isn't ''enjoying'' the sex,]] or a possible [[{{Asexuality}} clue]] to divulge the identity or perspective of a narrator. But the rest of the story shouldn't be written that way.
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But as always, TropesAreTools, and IKEA Erotica has its merits. It can be a {{parody}} of [[StylisticSuck bad writing]]. It can be a way of GettingCrapPastTheRadar. It can be an interesting insight into the psyche of a character who [[TheSpock isn't good with emotions]] or [[SexIsEvil doesn't like sex]]. It can be a way to denote that the character [[LieBackAndThinkOfEngland isn't ''enjoying'' enjoying the sex,]] or a possible [[{{Asexuality}} clue]] clue to divulge the identity or perspective of a narrator. But the rest of the story shouldn't be written that way.
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But as always, TropesAreTools, and IKEA Erotica has its merits. It can be a {{parody}} of [[StylisticSuck bad writing]]. It can be a way of GettingCrapPastTheRadar. It can be an interesting insight into the psyche of a character who [[TheSpock isn't good with emotions]] or [[SexIsEvil doesn't like sex]]. It can be a way to denote that the character isn't ''enjoying'' the sex. But the rest of the story shouldn't be written that way.
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But as always, TropesAreTools, and IKEA Erotica has its merits. It can be a {{parody}} of [[StylisticSuck bad writing]]. It can be a way of GettingCrapPastTheRadar. It can be an interesting insight into the psyche of a character who [[TheSpock isn't good with emotions]] or [[SexIsEvil doesn't like sex]]. It can be a way to denote that the character [[LieBackAndThinkOfEngland isn't ''enjoying'' the sex.sex,]] or a possible [[{{Asexuality}} clue]] to divulge the identity or perspective of a narrator. But the rest of the story shouldn't be written that way.
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* In ''WesternAnimation/TucaAndBertie'' episode "[[Recap/TucaAndBertieS1E03TheDeliGuy The Deli Guy]]", Bertie describes her love life with Speckle as being so routine that it might as well be this. Her description is accompanied by an ArtShift which portrays them in the style of furniture instructions.
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Named after the [[UsefulNotes/{{Sweden}} Swedish]] big-box store, IKEA Erotica describes the tendency of badly written sex scenes to be nothing more than "insert tab A into slot B" ''ad nauseam'', as though the readers actually didn't know what goes where. The result is that the participants might as well be doing nothing more interesting than assembling a flat-pack wardrobe, the kind of affordable, Swedish, some-assembly-required furniture [=IKEA=] is known for.
The point of erotica is to make the reader feel something of what the characters do, which in most cases should be arousal rather than boredom. It's often a sign that the writer didn't want to have a sex scene here but [[ExecutiveMeddling got overruled]] or that the writer is sexually inexperienced and writing with the aid of a biology textbook. A lot of FanFiction written by [[MostFanficWritersAreGirls 14-year-old girls]] falls under the latter category — [[ArtisticLicenseBiology often minus the biology textbook]] — making it less of a case of [[AnatomicallyImpossibleSex You Fail Sex Ed]] and more a case of [[IgnorantOfTheirOwnIgnorance You Haven't Even Taken the Course Yet]]. Examples are too numerous to list and too forgettable to remember in any case.
However, it [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools can be used properly]]. IKEA Erotica has its merits as a tool of parody or simply as a means to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar fool the censors]]. If used from the POV of a [[TheSpock certain type of character]], it can be an interesting insight into their psyche — provided, of course, that the rest of the writing is enough to make this StylisticSuck apparent. It can also be used if the character simply thinks that the sex sucks ([[{{Pun}} and not in a fun way]]).
An extremely common feature of PornWithoutPlot. An example of IKEA Erotica is the line, "He pressed his hard sex against her soft sex, and they had sex". A frequently usable antidote: lead up to the act, then pull a SexyDiscretionShot at the end of the chapter, coming back in during the next chapter when it's all over. It works in cinema, and it can work for you, too! Another variant is LewdLustChasteSex, when all the events leading up to it are described in lascivious detail but the deed itself is elided.
The extreme of IKEA Erotica is "verbing the noun", in which the scene is given mostly or entirely in subject-verb-object sentences in which the keywords could be replaced by anything and you'd have difficulty noticing.
Extra bonus points for TheBodyPartsThatMustNotBeNamed.
The point of erotica is to make the reader feel something of what the characters do, which in most cases should be arousal rather than boredom. It's often a sign that the writer didn't want to have a sex scene here but [[ExecutiveMeddling got overruled]] or that the writer is sexually inexperienced and writing with the aid of a biology textbook. A lot of FanFiction written by [[MostFanficWritersAreGirls 14-year-old girls]] falls under the latter category — [[ArtisticLicenseBiology often minus the biology textbook]] — making it less of a case of [[AnatomicallyImpossibleSex You Fail Sex Ed]] and more a case of [[IgnorantOfTheirOwnIgnorance You Haven't Even Taken the Course Yet]]. Examples are too numerous to list and too forgettable to remember in any case.
However, it [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools can be used properly]]. IKEA Erotica has its merits as a tool of parody or simply as a means to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar fool the censors]]. If used from the POV of a [[TheSpock certain type of character]], it can be an interesting insight into their psyche — provided, of course, that the rest of the writing is enough to make this StylisticSuck apparent. It can also be used if the character simply thinks that the sex sucks ([[{{Pun}} and not in a fun way]]).
An extremely common feature of PornWithoutPlot. An example of IKEA Erotica is the line, "He pressed his hard sex against her soft sex, and they had sex". A frequently usable antidote: lead up to the act, then pull a SexyDiscretionShot at the end of the chapter, coming back in during the next chapter when it's all over. It works in cinema, and it can work for you, too! Another variant is LewdLustChasteSex, when all the events leading up to it are described in lascivious detail but the deed itself is elided.
The extreme of IKEA Erotica is "verbing the noun", in which the scene is given mostly or entirely in subject-verb-object sentences in which the keywords could be replaced by anything and you'd have difficulty noticing.
Extra bonus points for TheBodyPartsThatMustNotBeNamed.
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However, it [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools can be used properly]]. IKEA Erotica has its merits as a tool of parody or simply as a means to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar fool the censors]]. If used from the POV of a [[TheSpock certain type of character]], it can be an interesting insight into their psyche — provided, of course, that the rest of the writing is enough to make this StylisticSuck apparent. It can
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But as always, TropesAreTools, and IKEA Erotica has its merits. It can be a {{parody}} of [[StylisticSuck bad writing]]. It can be a way of GettingCrapPastTheRadar. It can be an interesting insight into the psyche of a character who [[TheSpock isn't good with emotions]] or [[SexIsEvil doesn't like sex]]. It can be a way to denote that the character isn't ''enjoying'' the sex. But the rest of the story shouldn't be written that way.
It gets ''really'' weird when combined with TheBodyPartsThatMustNotBeNamed.
The best way to avoid falling afoul of this trope is not to describe the sex at all -- by all means show the characters and lead up to the act, then pull a SexyDiscretionShot and come back when it's all over. What the characters feel about each other is more important than what they're doing to each other, and they ''should'' still be feeling it before and after they have
Extra bonus points for TheBodyPartsThatMustNotBeNamed.
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* The notorious (and now, notoriously hard to find) Badfic "Celebrian" was filthy. But as said by one who got all the way through it...
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* ''FanFic/MyImmortal''. The quote provider for this page from the story reads "Then he put his thingie into my you-know-what and we did it for the first time."
** This gets extra confusing later on as it drifts into AnatomicallyImpossibleSex territory as "He put his boys thingie in mine" as the author begins to go slowly insane.
* Done deliberately by Lamont Cranston in the WesternAnimation/TeenTitans fic ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8358093/1/Love-in-Shades-of-Green-and-Gray Love in Shades of Green and Gray]].'' Raven's first time (described in a [[http://comics.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600061031 separate posting]] on adult-fanfiction.org) is with Aqualad, with him having few feelings for her, and her deliberately suppressing all emotion so as not to blast him with her powers. It is a creepily clinical piece. A later time with Beast Boy (whom she does love) is a definite aversion.
** This gets extra confusing later on as it drifts into AnatomicallyImpossibleSex territory as "He put his boys thingie in mine" as the author begins to go slowly insane.
* Done deliberately by Lamont Cranston in the WesternAnimation/TeenTitans fic ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8358093/1/Love-in-Shades-of-Green-and-Gray Love in Shades of Green and Gray]].'' Raven's first time (described in a [[http://comics.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600061031 separate posting]] on adult-fanfiction.org) is with Aqualad, with him having few feelings for her, and her deliberately suppressing all emotion so as not to blast him with her powers. It is a creepily clinical piece. A later time with Beast Boy (whom she does love) is a definite aversion.
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* ''FanFic/MyImmortal''. The quote provider for ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' is full of this page from in its sex scenes. The first sex scene has the story reads line, "Then he put his thingie into my you-know-what and we did it for the first time."
** This gets extra confusing" It reads ''exactly'' like it was written by a teenage girl who knows nothing about sex. In later on as chapters, it drifts into AnatomicallyImpossibleSex territory as with the line, "He put his boys thingie in mine" as the author begins to go slowly insane.
(spoken by a girl).
* Done deliberately by Lamont Cranston in the WesternAnimation/TeenTitans fic ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8358093/1/Love-in-Shades-of-Green-and-Gray Love in Shades of Green andGray]].'' Gray]]''. Raven's first time (described in a [[http://comics.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600061031 separate posting]] post]] on adult-fanfiction.org) is with Aqualad, with him having few feelings but he feels little for her, and her she deliberately suppressing suppresses all emotion so as not to [[EmotionBomb blast him with her powers. It is powers]], leading to a creepily clinical piece. A later time with Beast Boy (whom she does love) is a definite aversion.
** This gets extra confusing
* Done deliberately by Lamont Cranston in the WesternAnimation/TeenTitans fic ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8358093/1/Love-in-Shades-of-Green-and-Gray Love in Shades of Green and
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* In the Hispanic world, we have the infamous writer Perla Shumajer. Mostly focused on ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' fanfics, her descriptions of sex are bizarre. In one of her fanfics, Severus Snape took out "his" penis outside of Harry´s pants (without magic). Another bizarre fanfic is one about ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'', named "Married in Marriage". Not so rich in sex descriptions, but clear in her intentions.
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* In the Hispanic world, we have the infamous Spanish fanfic writer Perla Shumajer. Mostly focused on Shumajer is infamous for this, particularly in her ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' fanfics, her descriptions of sex are bizarre. fanfics. In one of her fanfics, Severus one, she describes Snape took out taking "his" penis outside out of Harry´s Harry's pants (without magic). Another bizarre fanfic is one about ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'', named "Married magic), and in Marriage". Not so rich another, she describes characters as "married in sex descriptions, marriage". It's not really ''rich'' in its depictions, but clear it makes up for it in her intentions.its bizarreness.
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%%* ''Film/TheRoom''. The roses and cheesy [=R&B=] do not help.
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* The [[RRatedOpening very first scene]] of ''Film/BeforeTheDevilKnowsYoureDead'' is an achingly passionless sex scene between Andy and his wife. [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools Used effectively]] in that it's meant to demonstrate the casual emptiness of Andy's life.
* In ''Film/VanWilder'', Richard, the JerkAss premed love rival to the titular character, uses anatomical terms to describe what he's doing during sex with Gwen.
* Film screenplays often veer into this, as they are meant to declare the on-camera shots, not describe them. For instance, in [[http://cinemascopian.com/pics/2008oscars/Atonement_Script.pdf the script for]] ''{{Literature/Atonement}}'', the sex scene (on page 33) may sound rather BeigeProse-like. However, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=izs4_0X7UlY the actual scene itself]] is generally recognized as one of the best filmed.
* In ''Film/VanWilder'', Richard, the JerkAss premed love rival to the titular character, uses anatomical terms to describe what he's doing during sex with Gwen.
* Film screenplays often veer into this, as they are meant to declare the on-camera shots, not describe them. For instance, in [[http://cinemascopian.com/pics/2008oscars/Atonement_Script.pdf the script for]] ''{{Literature/Atonement}}'', the sex scene (on page 33) may sound rather BeigeProse-like. However, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=izs4_0X7UlY the actual scene itself]] is generally recognized as one of the best filmed.
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* The [[RRatedOpening very first scene]] of ''Film/BeforeTheDevilKnowsYoureDead'' is an achingly passionless sex scene between Andy and his wife. [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools Used It's used effectively]] in that it's meant to demonstrate the casual emptiness of Andy's life.
* In ''Film/VanWilder'', Richard, the JerkAsspremed pre-med [[LoveTriangle love rival rival]] to the titular character, protagonist, uses anatomical terms to describe what he's doing during sex with Gwen.
* Film screenplays often veer into this, as they are meant to declare the on-camera shots, not describe them. For instance, in [[http://cinemascopian.com/pics/2008oscars/Atonement_Script.pdf the script for]] ''{{Literature/Atonement}}'', the sex scene (on page 33) may sound rather BeigeProse-like. However, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=izs4_0X7UlY the actual scene itself]] is generally recognized as one of the best ever filmed.
* In ''Film/VanWilder'', Richard, the JerkAss
* Film screenplays often veer into this, as they are meant to declare the on-camera shots, not describe them. For instance, in [[http://cinemascopian.com/pics/2008oscars/Atonement_Script.pdf the script for]] ''{{Literature/Atonement}}'', the sex scene (on page 33) may sound rather BeigeProse-like. However, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=izs4_0X7UlY the actual scene itself]] is generally recognized as one of the best ever filmed.
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* The ''Literature/EarthsChildren'' series (with the exception of the first book) has pages and pages of this stuff (the sex scenes average at least six pages each) largely devoted to the fact that Ayla and Jondalar have genitals of a complementary size, and are in fact, the only people with genitals of such a size. Also, they sometimes like to watch horses do it, or mammoths.
* Laurell K. Hamilton, whose last few ''Literature/AnitaBlake'' books have devolved into exactly this sort of porn. And when Ms. Hamilton isn't utilizing this trope, she typically just has some weird mystic happening to affect all the characters so they wake up hours (or days) later having had insanely hot orgies that they don't even remember. This really saves her from having to find new words to describe obscenely large werewolf-genitalia (which then get inserted into slot B).
* Laurell K. Hamilton, whose last few ''Literature/AnitaBlake'' books have devolved into exactly this sort of porn. And when Ms. Hamilton isn't utilizing this trope, she typically just has some weird mystic happening to affect all the characters so they wake up hours (or days) later having had insanely hot orgies that they don't even remember. This really saves her from having to find new words to describe obscenely large werewolf-genitalia (which then get inserted into slot B).
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* The ''Literature/EarthsChildren'' series (with the exception of the first book) has pages and pages of this stuff (the stuff. The sex scenes average at least about six pages each) long, largely devoted to the fact that Ayla and Jondalar have genitals of a complementary size, and are in fact, the only people with genitals of such a size. Also, they sometimes like to watch horses do it, or mammoths.
*Laurell K. Hamilton, whose The last few ''Literature/AnitaBlake'' books have devolved devolve into exactly this sort of porn. And when Ms. dialogue. Author Laurell K. Hamilton isn't utilizing wasn't interested in writing about stories so much as writing about sex, and it's usually this trope, kind of thing. Sometimes she typically just has avoids it by describing some weird mystic happening to affect event affecting all the characters so they characters, who wake up hours (or days) later having had insanely hot orgies that [[WhatDidIDoLastNight they don't even remember. This really remember]], which saves her from having to find new words to describe obscenely large werewolf-genitalia (which then werewolf genitalia to get inserted into slot B).Slot B.
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* PlayedForLaughs in ''Creator/DaveBarry In Cyberspace'', with a "cybersex" session including the ridiculous line: "I AM THRUSTING MY MASSIVE KNOCKWURST OF LOVE INTO YOUR PASSION PERSIMMON!"
** And then it turns out that the guy is Al Gore. No, really.
*** It gets better. The woman he's doing it with? Tipper Gore. ''And neither of them knew at first.''
--->'''[=HunniBunni=]:''' It feels like when you ''break a tie vote in the Senate''?
--->'''[=Born2Bone=]:''' Umm, listen, what I meant was...
--->'''[=HunniBunni=]:''' This is ''you'', isn't it, Al? ''ISN'T IT''?? YOU ''BASTARD''!!! YOU TOLD ME YOU WERE ATTENDING A STATE FUNERAL THIS AFTERNOON!!!
--->'''[=Born2Bone=]:''' ''Tipper''?
--->'''[=HunniBunni=]:''' Whoops.
* The sex scenes in Creator/GregEgan's novels are so frighteningly banal and usually misjudged from the characters' perspective that he's clearly subverting the whole idea of the things. Yes, people bump naughty bits together from time to time. They also urinate, get cramps, digest food, and flake off skin; there's no tradition of putting scenes specifically depicting ''those'' activities into novels.
* The sex scenes in Creator/TomClancy's ''Literature/JackRyan'' series are nowhere near as well-written as the explanations of technical details of the hardware that puts the "techno" in "technothriller", with awkward word choices and phrasing taking any hint of eroticism out of the scenes.
* Creator/JohnVarley's novel ''Mammoth'' contained an IKEA Erotica scene cringe-inducingly unerotic. "His stiffness into her wetness" or something like that.
* ''Literature/HowNOTToWriteANovel'' points out in a section entitled "Assembly Instructions: Wherein the sex is drained of sex" that this is the likely result of a writer being uncomfortable with the scene; "The result will be something that reads like a medical brochure about erectile dysfunction. What's more, it will read as more perverse than a straightforward 'They fucked all night', and in a disturbing Norman Bates-y way."
** And then it turns out that the guy is Al Gore. No, really.
*** It gets better. The woman he's doing it with? Tipper Gore. ''And neither of them knew at first.''
--->'''[=HunniBunni=]:''' It feels like when you ''break a tie vote in the Senate''?
--->'''[=Born2Bone=]:''' Umm, listen, what I meant was...
--->'''[=HunniBunni=]:''' This is ''you'', isn't it, Al? ''ISN'T IT''?? YOU ''BASTARD''!!! YOU TOLD ME YOU WERE ATTENDING A STATE FUNERAL THIS AFTERNOON!!!
--->'''[=Born2Bone=]:''' ''Tipper''?
--->'''[=HunniBunni=]:''' Whoops.
* The sex scenes in Creator/GregEgan's novels are so frighteningly banal and usually misjudged from the characters' perspective that he's clearly subverting the whole idea of the things. Yes, people bump naughty bits together from time to time. They also urinate, get cramps, digest food, and flake off skin; there's no tradition of putting scenes specifically depicting ''those'' activities into novels.
* The sex scenes in Creator/TomClancy's ''Literature/JackRyan'' series are nowhere near as well-written as the explanations of technical details of the hardware that puts the "techno" in "technothriller", with awkward word choices and phrasing taking any hint of eroticism out of the scenes.
* Creator/JohnVarley's novel ''Mammoth'' contained an IKEA Erotica scene cringe-inducingly unerotic. "His stiffness into her wetness" or something like that.
* ''Literature/HowNOTToWriteANovel'' points out in a section entitled "Assembly Instructions: Wherein the sex is drained of sex" that this is the likely result of a writer being uncomfortable with the scene; "The result will be something that reads like a medical brochure about erectile dysfunction. What's more, it will read as more perverse than a straightforward 'They fucked all night', and in a disturbing Norman Bates-y way."
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* PlayedForLaughs in ''Creator/DaveBarry In Cyberspace'', with a "cybersex" session including the ridiculous line: "I AM THRUSTING MY MASSIVE KNOCKWURST OF LOVE INTO YOUR PASSION PERSIMMON!"
** And then itPERSIMMON!" It turns out that the guy is participants are Al Gore. No, really.
*** It gets better. The woman he's doing it with?and Tipper Gore. ''And Gore -- neither of them whom knew who the other was, at first.''
--->'''[=HunniBunni=]:'''least at first:
-->'''[=HunniBunni=]:''' It feels like when you ''break a tie vote in theSenate''?
--->'''[=Born2Bone=]:'''Senate''?\\
'''[=Born2Bone=]:''' Umm, listen, what I meantwas...
--->'''[=HunniBunni=]:'''was...\\
'''[=HunniBunni=]:''' This is ''you'', isn't it, Al? ''ISN'T IT''?? YOU ''BASTARD''!!! YOU TOLD ME YOU WERE ATTENDING A STATE FUNERAL THISAFTERNOON!!!
--->'''[=Born2Bone=]:''' ''Tipper''?
--->'''[=HunniBunni=]:'''AFTERNOON!!!\\
'''[=Born2Bone=]:''' ''Tipper''?\\
'''[=HunniBunni=]:''' Whoops.
* The sex scenes in Creator/GregEgan's novels are so frighteningly banal and usually misjudged from the characters' perspective that he's clearly subverting the whole idea of thethings.thing. Yes, people bump naughty bits together from time to time. They also urinate, get cramps, digest food, and flake off skin; there's no tradition of putting scenes specifically depicting ''those'' activities into novels.
* The sex scenes in Creator/TomClancy's ''Literature/JackRyan'' series are nowhere near as well-written as the explanations of technical details of the hardware that puts the "techno" in"technothriller", "techno-thriller", with awkward word choices and phrasing taking any hint of eroticism out of the scenes.
* Creator/JohnVarley's novel ''Mammoth''contained contains an IKEA Erotica scene cringe-inducingly unerotic. "His that includes the cringe-inducing description of "his stiffness into her wetness" or something like that.
wetness".
* ''Literature/HowNOTToWriteANovel''points out in has a section devoted to this entitled "Assembly Instructions: Wherein the sex is drained of sex" that sex". It attributes this is the likely result of to a writer being uncomfortable with the scene; "The scene:
-->"The result will be something that reads like a medical brochure about erectile dysfunction. What's more, it will read as more perverse than a straightforward 'They fucked all night', and in a disturbing Norman Bates-y way."
** And then it
*** It gets better. The woman he's doing it with?
--->'''[=HunniBunni=]:'''
-->'''[=HunniBunni=]:''' It feels like when you ''break a tie vote in the
--->'''[=Born2Bone=]:'''
'''[=Born2Bone=]:''' Umm, listen, what I meant
--->'''[=HunniBunni=]:'''
'''[=HunniBunni=]:''' This is ''you'', isn't it, Al? ''ISN'T IT''?? YOU ''BASTARD''!!! YOU TOLD ME YOU WERE ATTENDING A STATE FUNERAL THIS
--->'''[=Born2Bone=]:''' ''Tipper''?
--->'''[=HunniBunni=]:'''
'''[=Born2Bone=]:''' ''Tipper''?\\
'''[=HunniBunni=]:''' Whoops.
* The sex scenes in Creator/GregEgan's novels are so frighteningly banal and usually misjudged from the characters' perspective that he's clearly subverting the whole idea of the
* The sex scenes in Creator/TomClancy's ''Literature/JackRyan'' series are nowhere near as well-written as the explanations of technical details of the hardware that puts the "techno" in
* Creator/JohnVarley's novel ''Mammoth''
* ''Literature/HowNOTToWriteANovel''
-->"The result will be something that reads like a medical brochure about erectile dysfunction. What's more, it will read as more perverse than a straightforward 'They fucked all night', and in a disturbing Norman Bates-y way."
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* A rare example of IKEA erotica being used on purpose, for a reason: in Creator/GregBear's novel ''Slant'', a couple of sex scenes are described with clinical precision, but it's clear that there's not meant to be any sort of romance or passion. In the first scene, a call girl has sex with a client: she doesn't enjoy it, of course, and he's only doing it to infect her. In the second scene, a man is jumped by his very horny wife and doesn't really get a chance to enjoy himself either. The obsessively detailed style is repeated throughout the novel to create the feeling of being bombarded by information.
* Used in ''Literature/TheHandmaidsTale'', in order to emphasise the fact that The Ceremony (ritual sex involving a Handmaid), for Offred, is now nothing more than a duty. She even refers to the act as "fucking", as no other word describes what is happening to her. This language, and much of the rest of the book, often leads to controversies over its use in high school literature classes.
* ''Kramer's War'' by Creator/DerekRobinson mentions IKEA erotica but doesn't indulge in it. One character actually thinks the words "Insert Tab A into Slot B" ironically; luckily, we are spared the sex scene. Other novels by Robinson prove immune to IKEA erotica.
* ''Literature/TheSubjectSteve'' has this. And IKEA {{gorn}}. And IKEA social interaction. And IKEA human life. All deliberate, mind you.
* Done for comedic effect in one of Creator/MichaelMoorcock's "Dancers at the End of Time" novels. The characters are often described as "making love" in a nonspecific manner, but when they actually decide to do it for real (in order to conceive a baby — Jherek Carnelian, the central character) they have some difficulty working out "what goes into where, and so on."
* Used in ''Literature/TheHandmaidsTale'', in order to emphasise the fact that The Ceremony (ritual sex involving a Handmaid), for Offred, is now nothing more than a duty. She even refers to the act as "fucking", as no other word describes what is happening to her. This language, and much of the rest of the book, often leads to controversies over its use in high school literature classes.
* ''Kramer's War'' by Creator/DerekRobinson mentions IKEA erotica but doesn't indulge in it. One character actually thinks the words "Insert Tab A into Slot B" ironically; luckily, we are spared the sex scene. Other novels by Robinson prove immune to IKEA erotica.
* ''Literature/TheSubjectSteve'' has this. And IKEA {{gorn}}. And IKEA social interaction. And IKEA human life. All deliberate, mind you.
* Done for comedic effect in one of Creator/MichaelMoorcock's "Dancers at the End of Time" novels. The characters are often described as "making love" in a nonspecific manner, but when they actually decide to do it for real (in order to conceive a baby — Jherek Carnelian, the central character) they have some difficulty working out "what goes into where, and so on."
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* A rare example of IKEA erotica being used on purpose, for a reason: in In Creator/GregBear's novel ''Slant'', a couple of sex scenes are described with clinical precision, but it's clear that there's not meant to be any sort of romance or passion. In the first scene, a call girl has sex with a client: client; she doesn't enjoy it, of course, and he's only doing it to infect her. In the second scene, a man is jumped by his very horny wife and doesn't really get a chance to enjoy himself either. The obsessively detailed style is repeated throughout the novel to create the feeling of being bombarded by information.
* Used in ''Literature/TheHandmaidsTale'', in order to emphasise the fact thatThe the Ceremony (ritual sex involving a Handmaid), for Offred, is now nothing more than a duty. She even refers to the act as "fucking", as no other word describes what is happening to her. This language, and much of the rest of the book, often leads to controversies over its use in high school literature classes.
* ''Kramer's War'' by Creator/DerekRobinson mentions IKEAerotica Erotica but doesn't indulge in it. One character actually thinks the words "Insert Tab A into Slot B" ironically; luckily, we are spared the sex scene. Other novels by Robinson prove immune to IKEA erotica.
* ''Literature/TheSubjectSteve'' hasthis.IKEA erotica. And IKEA {{gorn}}. And IKEA social interaction. And IKEA human life. All deliberate, mind you.
as a means of evoking the correct atmosphere.
* Done for comedic effect in one of Creator/MichaelMoorcock's"Dancers ''Dancers at the End of Time" Time'' novels. The characters are often described as "making love" in a nonspecific manner, but when they actually decide to do it for real (in order to conceive a baby — -- Jherek Carnelian, the central character) character), they have some difficulty working out "what goes into where, and so on."
* Used in ''Literature/TheHandmaidsTale'', in order to emphasise the fact that
* ''Kramer's War'' by Creator/DerekRobinson mentions IKEA
* ''Literature/TheSubjectSteve'' has
* Done for comedic effect in one of Creator/MichaelMoorcock's
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* ''Literature/FiftyShadesOfGrey'':
** The words inner goddess and subconscious are used as metaphors for vagina and erection or enormous length for penis. E.g. the IG doing a salsa merengue (used to describe an oral sex scene), or the inner goddess jumping up and down like a cheerleader waving pom-poms (and it gets worse than that, even).
** This trope is also played to the hilt in a scene where period sex occurs. "He reaches between my legs and pulls on the blue string what?! and gently pulls my tampon out and tosses it into the nearby toilet. Holy fuck. Sweet mother of all Jeez. And then he's inside me."
* Michael Grant's ''Literature/{{Gone}}''. "She sighed as he entered her."
** The words inner goddess and subconscious are used as metaphors for vagina and erection or enormous length for penis. E.g. the IG doing a salsa merengue (used to describe an oral sex scene), or the inner goddess jumping up and down like a cheerleader waving pom-poms (and it gets worse than that, even).
** This trope is also played to the hilt in a scene where period sex occurs. "He reaches between my legs and pulls on the blue string what?! and gently pulls my tampon out and tosses it into the nearby toilet. Holy fuck. Sweet mother of all Jeez. And then he's inside me."
* Michael Grant's ''Literature/{{Gone}}''. "She sighed as he entered her."
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* ''Literature/FiftyShadesOfGrey'':
** The words inner goddess and subconscious are used as''Literature/FiftyShadesOfGrey'' falls victim to this routinely. It also uses some very bizarre metaphors for vagina sex and erection or enormous length for penis. E.g. sexual organs, which are then extended to the IG breaking point in the sex scenes. Most infamous is the "Inner Goddess", which the narrator uses repeatedly to refer to her vagina; an oral sex scene is described by the "Inner Goddess" doing a salsa merengue (used to describe an oral merengue, and another sex scene), or the inner goddess scene has her jumping up and down like a cheerleader waving pom-poms (and pom-poms. Even though it gets worse than that, even).
** This trope is''tries'' to avoid IKEA Erotica, the metaphors are [[BluntMetaphorsTrauma so blunt and transparent]] that it has the same effect. There's also played to the hilt in a scene where this dialogue describing period sex occurs. "He sex, which is much more "traditional" IKEA Erotica:
-->"He reaches between my legs and pulls on the blue string what?! and gently pulls my tampon out and tosses it into the nearby toilet. Holy fuck. Sweet mother of all Jeez. And then he's inside me."
* Michael Grant's''Literature/{{Gone}}''. ''Literature/{{Gone}}'': "She sighed as he entered her."
** The words inner goddess and subconscious are used as
** This trope is
-->"He reaches between my legs and pulls on the blue string what?! and gently pulls my tampon out and tosses it into the nearby toilet. Holy fuck. Sweet mother of all Jeez. And then he's inside me."
* Michael Grant's
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* Used deliberately in ''Creator/JohnGreen'''s ''Literature/LookingForAlaska'' when Pudge receives oral sex from Lara in order to demonstrate their lack of an emotional connection.
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* Used deliberately in ''Creator/JohnGreen'''s ''Literature/LookingForAlaska'' ''Literature/LookingForAlaska'', when Pudge receives oral sex from Lara Lara, in order to demonstrate their lack of an emotional connection.
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-->'''Learner:''' I read modern writers, and it's "screw this", "he licked her", "she sucked that", "he bit the other", you know, "someone put it there", "he held it", I mean, where's the sensuality?
-->'''Marenghi:''' Where's "he glided in liquid smooth"? Where's "her wispy mound"?
* ''Series/NightCourt'' parodied this once. Mac was discussing assembling a train set, saying "Insert tab A into slot B. Who can't do that?" and Dan (the in-house pervert) just gave him a look and said, "You'd be surprised."
-->'''Marenghi:''' Where's "he glided in liquid smooth"? Where's "her wispy mound"?
* ''Series/NightCourt'' parodied this once. Mac was discussing assembling a train set, saying "Insert tab A into slot B. Who can't do that?" and Dan (the in-house pervert) just gave him a look and said, "You'd be surprised."
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-->'''Learner:''' I read modern writers, and it's "screw this", "he licked her", "she sucked that", "he bit the other", you know, "someone put it there", "he held it", I mean, where's the sensuality?
-->'''Marenghi:'''sensuality?\\
'''Marenghi:''' Where's "he glided in liquid smooth"? Where's "her wispy mound"?
* ''Series/NightCourt'' parodied this once. Mac was discussing assembling a train set, saying "Insert tab A into slot B. Who can't do that?" andDan (the in-house pervert) Dan, the resident pervert, just gave him a look and said, "You'd be surprised."
-->'''Marenghi:'''
'''Marenghi:''' Where's "he glided in liquid smooth"? Where's "her wispy mound"?
* ''Series/NightCourt'' parodied this once. Mac was discussing assembling a train set, saying "Insert tab A into slot B. Who can't do that?" and
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* ''[[Series/ThatMitchellAndWebbLook The Mitchell and Webb Situation]]'' has a series of sketches where they play two guys who are [[ItWillNeverCatchOn in the process of inventing something we're all familiar with, discussed in a way that makes it sound really stupid]]. In one, the thing they're inventing is apparently the human body, and Webb is trying to convince Mitchell that where one kind has "a bit that goes out," the other should have "a bit that goes in."
-->'''Mitchell:''' What, to help stacking?\\
-->'''Mitchell:''' What, to help stacking?\\
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* ''[[Series/ThatMitchellAndWebbLook The ''Series/ThatMitchellAndWebbLook'':
** A recurring sketch on ''That Mitchell and WebbSituation]]'' Situation'' has a series of sketches where they play two guys who are [[ItWillNeverCatchOn in the process of inventing something characters describe a new invention that we're all familiar with, discussed [[ItWillNeverCatchOn in a way that makes it sound really stupid]]. In one, the thing they're inventing One such invention is apparently the human body, and body itself, with Webb is trying to convince Mitchell that where one kind has should have "a bit that goes out," out" and the other should have "a bit that goes in."
-->'''Mitchell:''' --->'''Mitchell:''' What, to help stacking?\\
** A recurring sketch on ''That Mitchell and Webb
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'''Mitchell:''' I'm not sure it would, actually. I'm not sure it would go in that easily. I think you'd have to sort of work it in because it's got no purchase because it's floppy.\\
'''Webb:''' No it wouldn't, because the thing that sticks out, that could change shape. It would go sort of rigid.\\
'''Mitchell:''' What, when you need to stack them?...
** In ''That Mitchell and Webb Look'', a man who writes porno movies states that he gets the basic outline, which is about a man and a woman meeting, with large blank spaces in between "they have sex" written several times over, with his job being to fill in the blanks.
* In the ''Series/DharmaAndGreg'' episode "The Story of K", Kitty turns out to have been writing some pretty steamy, RomanceNovel style erotica- However, in one of her stories, read aloud by Dharma, the sex is simply described as "They kissed. They kissed a second time. It was time for sex. She knew what he wanted, he knew what she wanted, so the sex was pretty good."
* ''Series/LastWeekTonightWithJohnOliver'' plays a clip of New Zealand Prime Minister Bill English narrating [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c-5ZXXs3hV8 the world's saddest exercise video]]. Oliver then jokes that he wants to see English make a sex tape, speculating that he would provide narration that would be a hilarious example of this trope.
* ''Series/ResidentAlien'': {{Discussed}}. When he shares a cup of coffee with her in the morning, Harry describes everything he and his wife are going to do in the sack in meticulous, mechanical detail with a deadpan tone, gradually boring her. [[spoiler:Then the sedative kicks in and Isabelle crashes to the floor.]]
'''Webb:''' No it wouldn't, because the thing that sticks out, that could change shape. It would go sort of rigid.\\
'''Mitchell:''' What, when you need to stack them?...
** In ''That Mitchell and Webb Look'', a man who writes porno movies states that he gets the basic outline, which is about a man and a woman meeting, with large blank spaces in between "they have sex" written several times over, with his job being to fill in the blanks.
* In the ''Series/DharmaAndGreg'' episode "The Story of K", Kitty turns out to have been writing some pretty steamy, RomanceNovel style erotica- However, in one of her stories, read aloud by Dharma, the sex is simply described as "They kissed. They kissed a second time. It was time for sex. She knew what he wanted, he knew what she wanted, so the sex was pretty good."
* ''Series/LastWeekTonightWithJohnOliver'' plays a clip of New Zealand Prime Minister Bill English narrating [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c-5ZXXs3hV8 the world's saddest exercise video]]. Oliver then jokes that he wants to see English make a sex tape, speculating that he would provide narration that would be a hilarious example of this trope.
* ''Series/ResidentAlien'': {{Discussed}}. When he shares a cup of coffee with her in the morning, Harry describes everything he and his wife are going to do in the sack in meticulous, mechanical detail with a deadpan tone, gradually boring her. [[spoiler:Then the sedative kicks in and Isabelle crashes to the floor.]]
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'''Mitchell:''' I'm not sure it would, actually. I'm not sure it would go in that easily. I think you'd have to sort of work it in in, because it's got no purchase purchase-- because it's floppy.\\
'''Webb:''' No it wouldn't, because the thing that sticksout, out-- that could change shape. It would go sort of rigid.\\
'''Mitchell:''' What, when you need to stackthem?...
them?
**In ''That Mitchell and Webb Look'', a A man who writes porno movies states that he gets the describes routinely receiving a basic outline, which is about outline of the relationship between a man and a woman meeting, woman, with large blank spaces in between containing only the words "they have sex" written several times over, with his over. His job being is to fill in the blanks.
* In the ''Series/DharmaAndGreg'' episode "The Story of K", Kitty turns out to have been writing some pretty steamy, RomanceNovel styleerotica- erotica. However, in one of her stories, read aloud by Dharma, the sex is simply described as "They thus:
-->"They kissed. They kissed a second time. It was time for sex. She knew what he wanted, he knew what she wanted, so the sex was pretty good."
* ''Series/LastWeekTonightWithJohnOliver'' plays a clip ofNew Zealand UsefulNotes/NewZealand Prime Minister Bill English narrating [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c-5ZXXs3hV8 the world's saddest exercise video]]. Oliver then jokes that he wants to see English make a sex tape, speculating that he would provide narration that would be a hilarious example of this trope.
* {{Discussed}} in ''Series/ResidentAlien'':{{Discussed}}. When he shares a cup of coffee with her in the morning, Harry describes everything he and his wife are going to do in the sack in meticulous, mechanical detail with a deadpan tone, gradually boring her. [[spoiler:Then the sedative kicks in and Isabelle crashes to the floor.]]
'''Webb:''' No it wouldn't, because the thing that sticks
'''Mitchell:''' What, when you need to stack
**
* In the ''Series/DharmaAndGreg'' episode "The Story of K", Kitty turns out to have been writing some pretty steamy, RomanceNovel style
-->"They kissed. They kissed a second time. It was time for sex. She knew what he wanted, he knew what she wanted, so the sex was pretty good."
* ''Series/LastWeekTonightWithJohnOliver'' plays a clip of
* {{Discussed}} in ''Series/ResidentAlien'':
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQlIhraqL7o "I Just Had Sex"]] by ''Music/TheLonelyIsland'' employs this in combination with HaveIMentionedIAmSexuallyActiveToday. The chorus is "I just had sex/And it felt so good/A woman let me put my penis inside her". Other lines include "It felt so good when I did it with my penis" and "When I had the sex/Man my penis felt great".
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQlIhraqL7o "I Just Had Sex"]] by ''Music/TheLonelyIsland'' employs this in combination with HaveIMentionedIAmSexuallyActiveToday. The chorus is "I HaveIMentionedIAmSexuallyActiveToday:
-->'''♫''' ''I just hadsex/And sex\\
And it felt sogood/A good\\
A woman let me put my penis insideher". Other lines include "It felt so good when I did it with my penis" and "When I had the sex/Man my penis felt great".her.'' '''♫'''
-->'''♫''' ''I just had
And it felt so
A woman let me put my penis inside
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* ''TabletopGame/{{FATAL}}'' has formulae for calculating the exact measurements of a character's primary and secondary sex characteristics. Thankfully this part is optional, but it's there.
** Well, theoretically optional, but given the rest of the manual's emphasis on the least arousing sex this side of court-ordered chemical sterilization, you might as well just do it. You're already a sex offender just for agreeing to play the game; just as well hang for a sheep as a lamb.
** And the parts about the act itself have even more numbers. No link because decidedly NSFW, but these rules are examined in detail on page 24 of the troper liveblog.
** Well, theoretically optional, but given the rest of the manual's emphasis on the least arousing sex this side of court-ordered chemical sterilization, you might as well just do it. You're already a sex offender just for agreeing to play the game; just as well hang for a sheep as a lamb.
** And the parts about the act itself have even more numbers. No link because decidedly NSFW, but these rules are examined in detail on page 24 of the troper liveblog.
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* ''TabletopGame/{{FATAL}}'' has is infamous for this. It ostensibly wants to be an erotic tabletop RPG, but it does this by employing formulae for calculating the exact measurements of a character's primary and secondary sex characteristics. Thankfully this part is characteristics, and more formulae for working out the results of a sexual encounter. It's ''technically'' optional, but it's there.
** Well, theoretically optional, butthere's no other ''point'' to playing the game, especially given the rest of the manual's emphasis on the least arousing sex this side kind of court-ordered chemical sterilization, you might as well just do it. You're already a sex offender just for agreeing to play the game; just as well hang for a sheep as a lamb.
** And the parts about the act itself have even more numbers. No link because decidedly NSFW, but these rules are examined in detail on page 24 of the troper liveblog.sex.
** Well, theoretically optional, but
** And the parts about the act itself have even more numbers. No link because decidedly NSFW, but these rules are examined in detail on page 24 of the troper liveblog.
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* Considering the purposes for which they're purchased, it's ''amazing'' just how bad the writing in most English (translated) hentai games is when it comes to sex scenes. In most cases, the writers probably either:
## Have much more interest in writing a story than shoehorning in what the [[ExecutiveMeddling executives]] consider being the selling point of these games. Game requires adult content to sell? Fine, here's a stupid sex scene, now let me get back to the interesting bit. In some of these games, you can cut the sex completely without missing anything in the plot, and probably make it ''better'' — these may get an all-ages console release.
## Know exactly how silly the games for which they're writing are, so why bother making it good? In fact, why not make the sex even dumber than it already is? They may even garner some cheap laughs from [[SoBadItsGood how bad it is]].
## Got some [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ghostwriter ghostwriters]] involved somewhere in the process. You can tell from the clear difference in writing between the erotic scenes and the rest of the game.
## Just used a machine translation and didn't bother even trying to hide the fact that a human never touched the translated script. This has become much more common once Steam stopped bothering with quality control and allowed just anything to be placed on the market.
* It can probably be explained mostly with a poor translation job by people who had little to no actual experience, since those games were originally in Japanese.
** Sometimes even when the translation is good, it's often too clinical, and marred with [[UnsoundEffect strange sound effects]].
## Have much more interest in writing a story than shoehorning in what the [[ExecutiveMeddling executives]] consider being the selling point of these games. Game requires adult content to sell? Fine, here's a stupid sex scene, now let me get back to the interesting bit. In some of these games, you can cut the sex completely without missing anything in the plot, and probably make it ''better'' — these may get an all-ages console release.
## Know exactly how silly the games for which they're writing are, so why bother making it good? In fact, why not make the sex even dumber than it already is? They may even garner some cheap laughs from [[SoBadItsGood how bad it is]].
## Got some [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ghostwriter ghostwriters]] involved somewhere in the process. You can tell from the clear difference in writing between the erotic scenes and the rest of the game.
## Just used a machine translation and didn't bother even trying to hide the fact that a human never touched the translated script. This has become much more common once Steam stopped bothering with quality control and allowed just anything to be placed on the market.
* It can probably be explained mostly with a poor translation job by people who had little to no actual experience, since those games were originally in Japanese.
** Sometimes even when the translation is good, it's often too clinical, and marred with [[UnsoundEffect strange sound effects]].
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* Considering Pretty much ''every'' HGame translated into English is going to have sex of this kind. Part of it is just the purposes for which they're purchased, difficulty in translating from Japanese to English (and often, they won't even make an effort, just [[BlindIdiotTranslation translating by machine]] -- it might make it ''[[GoodBadTranslation funnier]]'', but not necessarily erotic). Other times it's ''amazing'' just how bad because there are different writers for the writing in most English (translated) hentai games is when it comes to sex scenes and the non-sex scenes. In most cases, And still other times, it's because the writers probably either:
## Have much more interest in writing a story than shoehorning in what thesex is [[ExecutiveMeddling executives]] consider being shoehorned in]] because that's what [[SexSells sells games]] -- the selling point of these games. Game requires adult content writers want to sell? Fine, here's a stupid sex scene, now let me get back to focus on the interesting bit. In some of these games, you can cut story and don't care about the sex completely without missing anything in scenes, and the plot, game itself could be totally enjoyable and probably make it ''better'' — these may get an all-ages console release.
## Know exactly how silly the games for which they're writing are, so why bother making it good? In fact, why not makecomprehensible with the sex even dumber than it already is? They may even garner some cheap laughs from [[SoBadItsGood how bad it is]].
## Got some [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ghostwriter ghostwriters]] involved somewhere in the process. You can tell from the clear difference in writing between the eroticscenes and the rest of the game.
## Just used a machine translation and didn't bother even trying to hide the fact that a human never touched the translated script. This has become much more common once Steam stopped bothering with quality control and allowed just anything to be placed on the market.
* It can probably be explained mostly with a poor translation job by people who had little to no actual experience, since those games were originally in Japanese.
** Sometimes evendeleted entirely. Even when the translation is good, it's often too clinical, and marred with [[UnsoundEffect strange sound effects]]. effects]].
## Have much more interest in writing a story than shoehorning in what the
## Know exactly how silly the games for which they're writing are, so why bother making it good? In fact, why not make
## Got some [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ghostwriter ghostwriters]] involved somewhere in the process. You can tell from the clear difference in writing between the erotic
## Just used a machine translation and didn't bother even trying to hide the fact that a human never touched the translated script. This has become much more common once Steam stopped bothering with quality control and allowed just anything to be placed on the market.
* It can probably be explained mostly with a poor translation job by people who had little to no actual experience, since those games were originally in Japanese.
** Sometimes even
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* [[Franchise/{{Nasuverse}} Kinoko Nasu]], writer of ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' and ''VisualNovel/{{Tsukihime}}'' among others, is infamous for his inability to write sex scenes, to the point that making fun of TYPE-MOON's sex scenes is a RunningGag amongst the fans. There's some evidence that the sex was forced into the story in order to make the games sell better, as later stories and remakes of the old games tend to lack any sex scenes at all (to the point that certain plot events had to be [[RetCon RetConned]] into happening a different way).
* ''VisualNovel/DiviDead'' [[UpToEleven takes it to a whole other level]] with such gems as "shove your eggplant up to my ribcage!", and the hero always, always, '''always''' finishes with '''"I'm BLASTING!"'''
** Considering the rest of the game's [[BlindIdiotTranslation bad translation job]] and clear editing (rewriting what is obviously a rape scene by the voice acting to a consensual one), it's hard to say who is at fault — the original writers, or the translators.
* ''VisualNovel/DiviDead'' [[UpToEleven takes it to a whole other level]] with such gems as "shove your eggplant up to my ribcage!", and the hero always, always, '''always''' finishes with '''"I'm BLASTING!"'''
** Considering the rest of the game's [[BlindIdiotTranslation bad translation job]] and clear editing (rewriting what is obviously a rape scene by the voice acting to a consensual one), it's hard to say who is at fault — the original writers, or the translators.
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* [[Franchise/{{Nasuverse}} Kinoko Nasu]], writer of ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' and ''VisualNovel/{{Tsukihime}}'' among others, is infamous for his inability to write sex scenes, to the point that making fun of TYPE-MOON's sex scenes is a RunningGag amongst the fans. There's some evidence that the sex was forced into the story in order to make the games sell better, as later stories and remakes of the old games tend to lack any sex scenes at all (to the point that certain plot events had to be [[RetCon RetConned]] {{retcon}}ned into happening a different way).
* ''VisualNovel/DiviDead'' [[UpToEleven takes it to a whole other level]] with such gems as "shove your eggplant up to my ribcage!", and the hero always, always,'''always''' ''always'' finishes with '''"I'm BLASTING!"'''
**"I'm BLASTING!" Considering the rest of the game's [[BlindIdiotTranslation bad translation job]] and clear obvious editing (rewriting what is obviously a rape scene by the voice acting to a consensual one), it's hard to say who is at fault — -- the original writers, or the translators.
* ''VisualNovel/DiviDead'' [[UpToEleven takes it to a whole other level]] with such gems as "shove your eggplant up to my ribcage!", and the hero always, always,
**
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* The PornWithoutPlot of certain fixations and fetishes can turn into matherotica, when the author decides that the best way to spark the reader's libido is by rattling off measurements. A blend of IKEA Erotica and a failure to ShowDontTell, it misunderstands the thrill of the impossible which fuels these fantasies as "her breasts had become even bigger and heavier, growing five pounds and a full two inches in diameter in the course of one day, making her a [=62FF=]."[[note]]That example would be particularly funny because the “writer” doesn’t understand how bra sizes are listed, and thus that someone with those measurements would be morbidly obese.[[/note]] Often, LudicrousPrecision ensues, which only intensifies the {{Narm}}.
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* The PornWithoutPlot of certain fixations and fetishes can turn into matherotica, "matherotica", when the author decides that the best way to spark the reader's libido is by rattling off measurements. A blend of IKEA Erotica and a failure to ShowDontTell, it misunderstands the thrill of the impossible which fuels these fantasies as "her breasts had become even bigger and heavier, growing five pounds and a full two inches in diameter in the course of one day, making her a [=62FF=]."[[note]]That example would be particularly funny because the “writer” doesn’t "writer" doesn't understand how bra sizes are listed, and thus that someone with those measurements would be morbidly obese.[[/note]] Often, LudicrousPrecision ensues, which only intensifies the {{Narm}}.
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* The Wiki/SCPFoundation fic (which is no longer on the site due to [[UnPerson complications]] [[SmallNameBigEgo with the author]]) "Union" actually uses this for effect, since it's based on SCP-217, a virus that converts organisms into clockwork, both literally and figuratively.
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* The Wiki/SCPFoundation fic "Union" (which is no longer on the site due to [[UnPerson complications]] [[SmallNameBigEgo with the author]]) "Union" actually uses this for effect, since it's based on SCP-217, a virus that converts organisms into clockwork, both literally and figuratively.
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** With Bender: "Come on, it's just like making love. Y'know: Left, down, rotate 62 degrees, engage rotor."
--->'''Amy''' (angrily): "I know how to make love!"
** Zoidberg can only think of sex in this manner. Knowing what happens to his species when they have sex, he's probably the better off for it.
* Shows up in the ''WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy'' movie ''Stewie Griffin: The Untold Story''. "Get in there! Get in there and... (while reading from ''The Joy of Sex'') insert your ''pen-is'' into her ''vag-in-a!''"
** The episode "Peterotica" spoofs the whole concept. Peter gets an erotic novel and is disappointed by its writing style because it tries to ''avert'' this trope instead of just getting down to business ("'He rubbed her shoulder sensually.' What the hell is that, that's not sexy! You can't do someone in the shoulder!"), so he decides to [[StartMyOwn write one himself]]. Despite the fact that he writes the same way he talks (that is, rambling disjointed stream-of-consciousness)[[note]]"...and then Captain Leeroy Hot Dog Zanzibar and [[WriteWhoYouKnow Gina from my work]] got in the backseat of his really cool spaceship. Gina was finally wearing that tank top I got her and nothing else. Zanzibar knew he couldn't control his [[RecycledInSpace space horniness]] any longer, and then they totally did it. And if I'd have been there, I would've been like 'Aw, sweet.'"[[/note]], he becomes a best-selling author and is lauded as a genius of erotic literature; even Lois, who usually dismisses Peter's low-brow antics, says that the above passage really painted a picture for her.
* This gem from ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'' (which also sounds like it might be a schoolground rhyme):
-->It's a man's obligation to stick his boneration in a woman's separation. This sort of penetration increases the population of the younger generation.
** Another ''South Park'' example, showing both the sheer terrifying wonder of Butters' twisted crazy upbringing and perhaps a little TruthInTelevision:
--->You see, Jimmy, when a man's penis becomes hard, the man puts it into a lady, into her vagina. Then, the hard penis sneezes milk inside the lady's tunnel and after it's all done sneezing milk the penis stops being hard and the man loses interest in the lady.
--->'''Amy''' (angrily): "I know how to make love!"
** Zoidberg can only think of sex in this manner. Knowing what happens to his species when they have sex, he's probably the better off for it.
* Shows up in the ''WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy'' movie ''Stewie Griffin: The Untold Story''. "Get in there! Get in there and... (while reading from ''The Joy of Sex'') insert your ''pen-is'' into her ''vag-in-a!''"
** The episode "Peterotica" spoofs the whole concept. Peter gets an erotic novel and is disappointed by its writing style because it tries to ''avert'' this trope instead of just getting down to business ("'He rubbed her shoulder sensually.' What the hell is that, that's not sexy! You can't do someone in the shoulder!"), so he decides to [[StartMyOwn write one himself]]. Despite the fact that he writes the same way he talks (that is, rambling disjointed stream-of-consciousness)[[note]]"...and then Captain Leeroy Hot Dog Zanzibar and [[WriteWhoYouKnow Gina from my work]] got in the backseat of his really cool spaceship. Gina was finally wearing that tank top I got her and nothing else. Zanzibar knew he couldn't control his [[RecycledInSpace space horniness]] any longer, and then they totally did it. And if I'd have been there, I would've been like 'Aw, sweet.'"[[/note]], he becomes a best-selling author and is lauded as a genius of erotic literature; even Lois, who usually dismisses Peter's low-brow antics, says that the above passage really painted a picture for her.
* This gem from ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'' (which also sounds like it might be a schoolground rhyme):
-->It's a man's obligation to stick his boneration in a woman's separation. This sort of penetration increases the population of the younger generation.
** Another ''South Park'' example, showing both the sheer terrifying wonder of Butters' twisted crazy upbringing and perhaps a little TruthInTelevision:
--->You see, Jimmy, when a man's penis becomes hard, the man puts it into a lady, into her vagina. Then, the hard penis sneezes milk inside the lady's tunnel and after it's all done sneezing milk the penis stops being hard and the man loses interest in the lady.
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--->'''Bender:''' Come on, it'sjust {{just like making love. Y'know: Left, love}}. Y'know... left, down, rotate 62 degrees, engage rotor."
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love!
** Zoidberg can only think of sex in this manner. Knowing [[DeathBySex what happens to his species when they havesex, sex]], he's probably the better off for it.
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** In the''WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy'' movie ''Stewie Griffin: The Untold Story''. "Get Story'':
--->"Get in there! Get in there and... (while reading from ''The Joy of Sex'') insert your ''pen-is'' into her ''vag-in-a!''"
** The episode "Peterotica" spoofs the whole concept. Peter gets an erotic novel and is disappointed by its writing style because it [[MillsAndBoonProse tries to''avert'' avert this trope instead of just getting down to business ("'He rubbed her shoulder sensually.' What the hell is that, that's not sexy! You can't do someone in the shoulder!"), trope]], so he decides to [[StartMyOwn write one himself]]. Despite the fact that He becomes a best-selling author and lauded as a genius of erotic literature, even though he writes the same way he talks (that -- that is, rambling disjointed stream-of-consciousness)[[note]]"...a rambling, disjointed, stream of consciousness:
--->"...and then Captain Leeroy Hot Dog Zanzibar and [[WriteWhoYouKnow Gina from my work]] got in the backseat of his really cool spaceship. Gina was finally wearing that tank top I got her and nothing else. Zanzibar knew he couldn't control his [[RecycledInSpace space horniness]] any longer, and then they totally did it. And if I'd have been there, I would've been like 'Aw, sweet.'"[[/note]], he becomes a best-selling author and is lauded as a genius of erotic literature; even Lois, who usually dismisses Peter's low-brow antics, says that the above passage really painted a picture for her.
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** Thisgem from ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'' (which also sounds like it might should be a schoolground rhyme):
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**Another ''South Park'' example, showing both the sheer terrifying wonder of Butters' parents [[TheTalk describe sex to him]] this way, in keeping with Butters' [[HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood twisted crazy upbringing and perhaps a little TruthInTelevision:
--->Youupbringing]]:
--->"You see, Jimmy, when a man's penis becomes hard, the man puts it into a lady, into her vagina. Then, the hard penis sneezes milk inside the lady's tunnel and after it's all done sneezing milk the penis stops being hard and the man loses interest in the lady."
--->'''Bender:''' Come on, it's
--->'''Amy''' (angrily): "I
'''Amy:''' ''(angrily)'' I know how to make
** Zoidberg can only think of sex in this manner. Knowing [[DeathBySex what happens to his species when they have
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** The episode "Peterotica" spoofs the whole concept. Peter gets an erotic novel and is disappointed by its writing style because it [[MillsAndBoonProse tries to
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* ''Series/ResidentAlien'': {{Discussed}}. When he shares a cup of coffee with her in the morning, Harry describes everything he and his wife are going to do in the sack in meticulous, mechanical detail with a deadpan tone, gradually boring her. [[spoiler:Then the sedative kicks in and Izabella crashes to the floor.]]
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* ''Series/ResidentAlien'': {{Discussed}}. When he shares a cup of coffee with her in the morning, Harry describes everything he and his wife are going to do in the sack in meticulous, mechanical detail with a deadpan tone, gradually boring her. [[spoiler:Then the sedative kicks in and Izabella Isabelle crashes to the floor.]]
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* ''Series/ResidentAlien'': {{Discussed}}. When he shares a cup of coffee with her in the morning, Harry describes everything he and his wife are going to do in the sack in meticulous, mechanical detail with a deadpan tone, gradually boring her. [[spoiler:Then the sedative kicks in and Izabella crashes to the floor.]]
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* The infamously bad third-party ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' 3.0 ''Book of Erotic Fantasy'' wound up with this, due to trying to link a character's sexual ability to a skill check.
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* In the Hispanic world, we have the infamous writer Perla Shumajer. Mostly focused on "Harry Potter" fanfics, her descriptions of sex are bizarre. In one of her fanfics, Severus Snape took out "his" penis outside of Harry´s pants (without magic). Another bizarre fanfic is one about Super Mario Brothers, named "Married in Marriage". Not so rich in sex descriptions, but clear in her intentions.
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* In the Hispanic world, we have the infamous writer Perla Shumajer. Mostly focused on "Harry Potter" ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' fanfics, her descriptions of sex are bizarre. In one of her fanfics, Severus Snape took out "his" penis outside of Harry´s pants (without magic). Another bizarre fanfic is one about Super Mario Brothers, ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'', named "Married in Marriage". Not so rich in sex descriptions, but clear in her intentions.
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* Micheal Grant's GONE. "She sighed as he entered her." Really?
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* Micheal Michael Grant's GONE.''Literature/{{Gone}}''. "She sighed as he entered her." Really?"
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An extremely common feature of PornWithoutPlot. An example of IKEA Erotica is the line, "He pressed his hard sex against her soft sex, and they had sex". A frequently usable antidote: lead up to the act, then pull a {{discretion shot}} at the end of the chapter, coming back in during the next chapter when it's all over. It works in cinema, and it can work for you, too!
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An extremely common feature of PornWithoutPlot. An example of IKEA Erotica is the line, "He pressed his hard sex against her soft sex, and they had sex". A frequently usable antidote: lead up to the act, then pull a {{discretion shot}} SexyDiscretionShot at the end of the chapter, coming back in during the next chapter when it's all over. It works in cinema, and it can work for you, too!
too! Another variant is LewdLustChasteSex, when all the events leading up to it are described in lascivious detail but the deed itself is elided.
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Not to be confused with [[http://www.furnitureporn.com/ furniture]] [[http://www.strangehorizons.com/2006/20060213/copley-woods-f.shtml porn]]. Or [[http://www.cockeyed.com/pranks/ikea_party/ikea01.shtml The IKEA Fancy Dress Dinner Party]]. Also not to be confused with a CargoShip.
Or [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ezwhZC4R-eI&feature=related furniture porn]]. Or [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eu196vZSe_I even more furniture porn]].
See also FetishRetardant and {{Narm}}, common consequences of IKEA Erotica, and ShowDontTell, which is a related piece of writing advice. Contrast with MillsAndBoonProse.
Or [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ezwhZC4R-eI&feature=related furniture porn]]. Or [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eu196vZSe_I even more furniture porn]].
See also FetishRetardant and {{Narm}}, common consequences of IKEA Erotica, and ShowDontTell, which is a related piece of writing advice. Contrast with MillsAndBoonProse.
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Or [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ezwhZC4R-eI&feature=related furniture porn]]. Or [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eu196vZSe_I even more furniture porn]].
Not to be confused with CargoShip.
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Named after the [[UsefulNotes/{{Sweden}} Swedish]] big-box store, '''IKEA Erotica''' describes the tendency of badly written sex scenes to be nothing more than "insert tab A into slot B" ''ad nauseam'', as though the readers actually didn't know what goes where. The result is that the participants might as well be doing nothing more interesting than assembling a flat-pack wardrobe, the kind of affordable, Swedish, some-assembly-required furniture [=IKEA=] is known for.
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Named after the [[UsefulNotes/{{Sweden}} Swedish]] big-box store, '''IKEA Erotica''' IKEA Erotica describes the tendency of badly written sex scenes to be nothing more than "insert tab A into slot B" ''ad nauseam'', as though the readers actually didn't know what goes where. The result is that the participants might as well be doing nothing more interesting than assembling a flat-pack wardrobe, the kind of affordable, Swedish, some-assembly-required furniture [=IKEA=] is known for.
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However, it [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools can be used properly]]. IKEA Erotica has its merits as a tool of parody or simply as a means to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar fool the censors]]. If used from the POV of a [[TheSpock certain type of character]], it can be an interesting insight into their psyche — provided, of course, that the rest of the writing is enough to make this StylisticSuck apparent. It can also be used if the character simply thinks that the sex sucks ([[IncrediblyLamePun and not in a fun way]]).
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However, it [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools can be used properly]]. IKEA Erotica has its merits as a tool of parody or simply as a means to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar fool the censors]]. If used from the POV of a [[TheSpock certain type of character]], it can be an interesting insight into their psyche — provided, of course, that the rest of the writing is enough to make this StylisticSuck apparent. It can also be used if the character simply thinks that the sex sucks ([[IncrediblyLamePun ([[{{Pun}} and not in a fun way]]).
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However, it [[TropesAreNotBad can be used properly]]. IKEA Erotica has its merits as a tool of parody or simply as a means to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar fool the censors]]. If used from the POV of a [[TheSpock certain type of character]], it can be an interesting insight into their psyche — provided, of course, that the rest of the writing is enough to make this StylisticSuck apparent. It can also be used if the character simply thinks that the sex sucks ([[IncrediblyLamePun and not in a fun way]]).
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However, it [[TropesAreNotBad [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools can be used properly]]. IKEA Erotica has its merits as a tool of parody or simply as a means to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar fool the censors]]. If used from the POV of a [[TheSpock certain type of character]], it can be an interesting insight into their psyche — provided, of course, that the rest of the writing is enough to make this StylisticSuck apparent. It can also be used if the character simply thinks that the sex sucks ([[IncrediblyLamePun and not in a fun way]]).
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* The [[RRatedOpening very first scene]] of ''Film/BeforeTheDevilKnowsYoureDead'' is an achingly passionless sex scene between Andy and his wife. [[TropesAreNotBad Used effectively]] in that it's meant to demonstrate the casual emptiness of Andy's life.
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* The [[RRatedOpening very first scene]] of ''Film/BeforeTheDevilKnowsYoureDead'' is an achingly passionless sex scene between Andy and his wife. [[TropesAreNotBad [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools Used effectively]] in that it's meant to demonstrate the casual emptiness of Andy's life.
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* The ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' webnovel had a [[https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BwyW7ZpWYsQBaThmR0Foa2ZfOG8/edit pretty infamous one]]. The phrase "glopping sound" is used, and semen can apparently be measured in years. It's widely believed this was an example of StylisticSuck. One can understand why this scene was left out when it was published.
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* The ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' webnovel had a [[https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BwyW7ZpWYsQBaThmR0Foa2ZfOG8/edit pretty infamous one]]. The phrase "glopping sound" is used, and semen can apparently be measured in years. It's widely believed this was an example of StylisticSuck. One can understand why this scene was left out when it the series was published.remade for publishing.
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%%* Used intentionally in ''Anime/SpeedGrapher''. If a sex scene isn't FanDisservice, it's this trope.
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* The ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' novel had a [[https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BwyW7ZpWYsQBaThmR0Foa2ZfOG8/edit pretty infamous one]]. The phrase "glopping sound" is used, and semen can apparently be measured in years. It's widely believed this was an example of StylisticSuck.
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* The ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' webnovel had a [[https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BwyW7ZpWYsQBaThmR0Foa2ZfOG8/edit pretty infamous one]]. The phrase "glopping sound" is used, and semen can apparently be measured in years. It's widely believed this was an example of StylisticSuck. One can understand why this scene was left out when it was published.
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* ''VisualNovel/DiviDead'' [[UpToEleven takes it to a whole other level]] with such gems as "shove your eggplant up to my ribcage!", and the hero always, always, '''always''' finishes with '''"I'm BLASTING!"'''
** Considering the rest of the game's [[BlindIdiotTranslation bad translation job]] and clear editing (rewriting what is obviously a rape scene by the voice acting to a consensual one), it's hard to say who is at fault — the original writers, or the translators.
** Considering the rest of the game's [[BlindIdiotTranslation bad translation job]] and clear editing (rewriting what is obviously a rape scene by the voice acting to a consensual one), it's hard to say who is at fault — the original writers, or the translators.
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** Considering the rest of the game's [[BlindIdiotTranslation bad translation job]] and clear editing (rewriting what is obviously a rape scene by the voice acting to a consensual one), it's hard to say who is at fault — the original writers, or the translators.
** Considering the rest of the game's [[BlindIdiotTranslation bad translation job]] and clear editing (rewriting what is obviously a rape scene by the voice acting to a consensual one), it's hard to say who is at fault — the original writers, or the translators.
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* "[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Please put your...that!]] [[{{Rule34}} Y-your pOnOs!]] [[{{Doujinshi}} To my...my...Here!]] [[{{Narm}} ...My vagOOO!!!]] [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments And J-J-JAM IT IN!]]" MemeticMutation [[http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/jam-it-in-you-lost-me ahoy]].
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* "[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Please ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'': "Please put your...that!]] [[{{Rule34}} that! Y-your pOnOs!]] [[{{Doujinshi}} pOnOs! To my...my...Here!]] [[{{Narm}} ...Here! ...My vagOOO!!!]] [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments vagOOO!!! And J-J-JAM IT IN!]]" MemeticMutation IN!" [[http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/jam-it-in-you-lost-me Memes ahoy]].
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The point of erotica is to make the reader feel something of what the characters do, which in most cases should be arousal rather than boredom. It's often a sign that the writer didn't want to have a sex scene here but [[ExecutiveMeddling got overruled]] or that the writer is sexually inexperienced and writing with the aid of a biology textbook. A lot of FanFiction written by [[MostFanficWritersAreGirls 14-year-old girls]] falls under the latter category—[[ArtisticLicenseBiology often minus the biology textbook]]—making it less of a case of [[AnatomicallyImpossibleSex You Fail Sex Ed]] and more a case of [[IgnorantOfTheirOwnIgnorance You Haven't Even Taken the Course Yet]]. Examples are too numerous to list and too forgettable to remember in any case.
However, it [[TropesAreNotBad can be used properly]]. IKEA Erotica has its merits as a tool of parody or simply as a means to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar fool the censors]]. If used from the POV of a [[TheSpock certain type of character]], it can be an interesting insight into their psyche -- provided, of course, that the rest of the writing is enough to make this StylisticSuck apparent. It can also be used if the character simply thinks that the sex sucks ([[IncrediblyLamePun and not in a fun way]]).
However, it [[TropesAreNotBad can be used properly]]. IKEA Erotica has its merits as a tool of parody or simply as a means to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar fool the censors]]. If used from the POV of a [[TheSpock certain type of character]], it can be an interesting insight into their psyche -- provided, of course, that the rest of the writing is enough to make this StylisticSuck apparent. It can also be used if the character simply thinks that the sex sucks ([[IncrediblyLamePun and not in a fun way]]).
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The point of erotica is to make the reader feel something of what the characters do, which in most cases should be arousal rather than boredom. It's often a sign that the writer didn't want to have a sex scene here but [[ExecutiveMeddling got overruled]] or that the writer is sexually inexperienced and writing with the aid of a biology textbook. A lot of FanFiction written by [[MostFanficWritersAreGirls 14-year-old girls]] falls under the latter category—[[ArtisticLicenseBiology category — [[ArtisticLicenseBiology often minus the biology textbook]]—making textbook]] — making it less of a case of [[AnatomicallyImpossibleSex You Fail Sex Ed]] and more a case of [[IgnorantOfTheirOwnIgnorance You Haven't Even Taken the Course Yet]]. Examples are too numerous to list and too forgettable to remember in any case.
However, it [[TropesAreNotBad can be used properly]]. IKEA Erotica has its merits as a tool of parody or simply as a means to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar fool the censors]]. If used from the POV of a [[TheSpock certain type of character]], it can be an interesting insight into their psyche-- — provided, of course, that the rest of the writing is enough to make this StylisticSuck apparent. It can also be used if the character simply thinks that the sex sucks ([[IncrediblyLamePun and not in a fun way]]).
However, it [[TropesAreNotBad can be used properly]]. IKEA Erotica has its merits as a tool of parody or simply as a means to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar fool the censors]]. If used from the POV of a [[TheSpock certain type of character]], it can be an interesting insight into their psyche
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* The [[{{RRatedOpening}} [[RRatedOpening very first scene]] of ''Film/BeforeTheDevilKnowsYoureDead'' is an achingly passionless sex scene between Andy and his wife. [[{{TropesAreNotBad}} [[TropesAreNotBad Used effectively]] in that it's meant to demonstrate the casual emptiness of Andy's life.
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* The sex scenes in Creator/TomClancy's ''Literature/JackRyan'' series are nowhere near as well written as the explanations of technical details of the hardware that puts the "techno" in "technothriller", with awkward word choices and phrasing taking any hint of eroticism out of the scenes.
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* The sex scenes in Creator/TomClancy's ''Literature/JackRyan'' series are nowhere near as well written well-written as the explanations of technical details of the hardware that puts the "techno" in "technothriller", with awkward word choices and phrasing taking any hint of eroticism out of the scenes.
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* ''Kramer's War'' by Creator/DerekRobinson mentions IKEA erotica but doesn't indulge in it. One character actually thinks the words "Insert Tab A into Slot B" ironically; luckily we are spared the sex scene. Other novels by Robinson prove immune to IKEA erotica.
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* ''Kramer's War'' by Creator/DerekRobinson mentions IKEA erotica but doesn't indulge in it. One character actually thinks the words "Insert Tab A into Slot B" ironically; luckily luckily, we are spared the sex scene. Other novels by Robinson prove immune to IKEA erotica.
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* Done for comedic effect in one of Creator/MichaelMoorcock's "Dancers at the End of Time" novels. The characters are often described as "making love" in a nonspecific manner, but when they actually decide to do it for real (in order to conceive a baby - Jherek Carnelian, the central character) they have some difficulty working out "what goes into where, and so on."
* Used to great effectiveness in ''Literature/TheBluestEye'' when [[spoiler: Cholly rapes his daughter Pecola.]] The BeigeProse does absolutely nothing to detract from the {{Squick}}.
* Used to great effectiveness in ''Literature/TheBluestEye'' when [[spoiler: Cholly rapes his daughter Pecola.]] The BeigeProse does absolutely nothing to detract from the {{Squick}}.
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* Done for comedic effect in one of Creator/MichaelMoorcock's "Dancers at the End of Time" novels. The characters are often described as "making love" in a nonspecific manner, but when they actually decide to do it for real (in order to conceive a baby - — Jherek Carnelian, the central character) they have some difficulty working out "what goes into where, and so on."
* Used to great effectiveness in ''Literature/TheBluestEye'' when[[spoiler: Cholly [[spoiler:Cholly [[ParentalIncest rapes his daughter Pecola.]] daughter]] Pecola]]. The BeigeProse does absolutely nothing to detract from the {{Squick}}.
* Used to great effectiveness in ''Literature/TheBluestEye'' when
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* Considering the purposes for which they're purchased it's ''amazing'' just how bad the writing in most English (translated) hentai games is when it comes to sex scenes. In most cases, the writers probably either:
## Have much more interest in writing a story than shoehorning in what the [[ExecutiveMeddling executives]] consider being the selling point of these games. Game requires adult content to sell? Fine, here's a stupid sex scene, now let me get back to the interesting bit. In some of these games, you can cut the sex completely without missing anything in the plot, and probably make it ''better'' - these may get an all-ages console release.
## Know exactly how silly the games for which they're writing are, so why bother making it good? In fact, why not make the sex even dumber than it already is. They may even garner some cheap laughs from [[SoBadItsGood how bad it is]].
## Have much more interest in writing a story than shoehorning in what the [[ExecutiveMeddling executives]] consider being the selling point of these games. Game requires adult content to sell? Fine, here's a stupid sex scene, now let me get back to the interesting bit. In some of these games, you can cut the sex completely without missing anything in the plot, and probably make it ''better'' - these may get an all-ages console release.
## Know exactly how silly the games for which they're writing are, so why bother making it good? In fact, why not make the sex even dumber than it already is. They may even garner some cheap laughs from [[SoBadItsGood how bad it is]].
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* Considering the purposes for which they're purchased purchased, it's ''amazing'' just how bad the writing in most English (translated) hentai games is when it comes to sex scenes. In most cases, the writers probably either:
## Have much more interest in writing a story than shoehorning in what the [[ExecutiveMeddling executives]] consider being the selling point of these games. Game requires adult content to sell? Fine, here's a stupid sex scene, now let me get back to the interesting bit. In some of these games, you can cut the sex completely without missing anything in the plot, and probably make it ''better''- — these may get an all-ages console release.
## Know exactly how silly the games for which they're writing are, so why bother making it good? In fact, why not make the sex even dumber than it alreadyis. is? They may even garner some cheap laughs from [[SoBadItsGood how bad it is]].
## Have much more interest in writing a story than shoehorning in what the [[ExecutiveMeddling executives]] consider being the selling point of these games. Game requires adult content to sell? Fine, here's a stupid sex scene, now let me get back to the interesting bit. In some of these games, you can cut the sex completely without missing anything in the plot, and probably make it ''better''
## Know exactly how silly the games for which they're writing are, so why bother making it good? In fact, why not make the sex even dumber than it already
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** Considering the rest of the game's [[BlindIdiotTranslation bad translation job]] and clear editing (rewriting what is obviously a rape scene by the voice acting to a consensual one), it's hard to say who is at fault - the original writers, or the translators.
* It can probably be explained mostly with poor translation job by people who had little to no actual experience since those games were originally in Japanese.
* It can probably be explained mostly with poor translation job by people who had little to no actual experience since those games were originally in Japanese.
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** Considering the rest of the game's [[BlindIdiotTranslation bad translation job]] and clear editing (rewriting what is obviously a rape scene by the voice acting to a consensual one), it's hard to say who is at fault - — the original writers, or the translators.
* It can probably be explained mostly with a poor translation job by people who had little to no actualexperience experience, since those games were originally in Japanese.
* It can probably be explained mostly with a poor translation job by people who had little to no actual
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* There is a certain IKEA bed called [[http://img01.lachschon.de/images/TBV-1045681140.jpg "Gutvik"]], and caused quite some amusement in Germany (where it's pronounced ''goot fick'' - identically to the German words "gut fick", which means "good fuck" or "good screw"). [[MemeticMutation This trope]] [[HilarityEnsues naturally followed]].
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* There is a certain IKEA bed called [[http://img01.lachschon.de/images/TBV-1045681140.jpg "Gutvik"]], and caused quite some amusement in Germany (where it's pronounced ''goot fick'' - — identically to the German words "gut fick", which means "good fuck" or "good screw"). [[MemeticMutation This trope]] [[HilarityEnsues naturally followed]].
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* The ''Literature/ClanOfTheCaveBear'' series (with the exception of the first book) has pages and pages of this stuff (the sex scenes average at least six pages each) largely devoted to the fact that Ayla and Jondalar have genitals of a complementary size, and are in fact, the only people with genitals of such a size. Also, they like to watch horses do it. And mammoths.
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* The ''Literature/ClanOfTheCaveBear'' ''Literature/EarthsChildren'' series (with the exception of the first book) has pages and pages of this stuff (the sex scenes average at least six pages each) largely devoted to the fact that Ayla and Jondalar have genitals of a complementary size, and are in fact, the only people with genitals of such a size. Also, they sometimes like to watch horses do it. And it, or mammoths.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQlIhraqL7o "I Just Had Sex"]] by ''Music/TheLonelyIsland'' employs this in combination with HaveIMentionedIAmSexuallyActiveToday. The chorus is "I just had sex/And it felt so good/A woman let me put my penis inside her". Other lines include "It felt so good when I did it with my penis" and "When I had the sex/Man my penis felt great".
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQlIhraqL7o "I Just Had Sex"]] by ''Music/TheLonelyIsland'' employs this in combination with HaveIMentionedIAmSexuallyActiveToday. The chorus is "I just had sex/And it felt so good/A woman let me put my penis inside her". Other lines include "It felt so good when I did it with my penis" and "When I had the sex/Man my penis felt great".
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQlIhraqL7o "I Just Had Sex"]] by The Lonely Island. The chorus is "I just had sex/And it felt so good/A woman let me put my penis inside her". Other lines include "It felt so good when I did it with my penis" and "When I had the sex/Man my penis felt great".
** This song is that rare and wonderful thing, a successful attempt at deliberately creating something [[SoBadItsGood so bad it's good]].
** This song is that rare and wonderful thing, a successful attempt at deliberately creating something [[SoBadItsGood so bad it's good]].
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The point of erotica is to make the reader feel something of what the characters do, which in most cases should be arousal rather than boredom. It's often a sign that the writer didn't want to have a sex scene here but [[ExecutiveMeddling got overruled]] or that the writer is sexually inexperienced and writing with the aid of a biology textbook. A lot of FanFiction written by [[MostFanficWritersAreGirls 14-year-old girls]] falls under the latter category—[[ArtisticLicenseBiology often minus the biology textbook]]—making it less of a case of [[AnatomicallyImpossibleSex You Fail Sex Ed]] and more a case of [[IgnorantOfTheirOwnIgnorance You Haven't Even Taken the Course Yet]]. Examples are too numerous to list, and too forgettable to remember in any case.
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The point of erotica is to make the reader feel something of what the characters do, which in most cases should be arousal rather than boredom. It's often a sign that the writer didn't want to have a sex scene here but [[ExecutiveMeddling got overruled]] or that the writer is sexually inexperienced and writing with the aid of a biology textbook. A lot of FanFiction written by [[MostFanficWritersAreGirls 14-year-old girls]] falls under the latter category—[[ArtisticLicenseBiology often minus the biology textbook]]—making it less of a case of [[AnatomicallyImpossibleSex You Fail Sex Ed]] and more a case of [[IgnorantOfTheirOwnIgnorance You Haven't Even Taken the Course Yet]]. Examples are too numerous to list, list and too forgettable to remember in any case.
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An extremely common feature of PornWithoutPlot. An example of IKEA Erotica is the line, "He pressed his hard sex against her soft sex and they had sex". A frequently usable antidote: lead up to the act, then pull a {{discretion shot}} at the end of the chapter, coming back in during the next chapter when it's all over. It works in cinema, and it can work for you, too!
The extreme of IKEA Erotica is "verbing the noun", in which the scene is given mostly or entirely in subject-verb-object sentences in which the key words could be replaced by anything and you'd have difficulty noticing.
The extreme of IKEA Erotica is "verbing the noun", in which the scene is given mostly or entirely in subject-verb-object sentences in which the key words could be replaced by anything and you'd have difficulty noticing.
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An extremely common feature of PornWithoutPlot. An example of IKEA Erotica is the line, "He pressed his hard sex against her soft sex sex, and they had sex". A frequently usable antidote: lead up to the act, then pull a {{discretion shot}} at the end of the chapter, coming back in during the next chapter when it's all over. It works in cinema, and it can work for you, too!
The extreme of IKEA Erotica is "verbing the noun", in which the scene is given mostly or entirely in subject-verb-object sentences in which thekey words keywords could be replaced by anything and you'd have difficulty noticing.
The extreme of IKEA Erotica is "verbing the noun", in which the scene is given mostly or entirely in subject-verb-object sentences in which the
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* In the hispanic world, we have the infamous writter Perla Shumajer. Mostly focused in "Harry Potter" fanfics, her descriptions of sex are bizarre. In one of her fanfics, Severus Snape took out "his" penis outside of Harry´s pants (without magic). Another bizarre fanfic is one about Super Mario Brothers, named "Married in Marriage". Not so rich in sex descriptions, but clear in her intentions.
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* In the hispanic Hispanic world, we have the infamous writter writer Perla Shumajer. Mostly focused in on "Harry Potter" fanfics, her descriptions of sex are bizarre. In one of her fanfics, Severus Snape took out "his" penis outside of Harry´s pants (without magic). Another bizarre fanfic is one about Super Mario Brothers, named "Married in Marriage". Not so rich in sex descriptions, but clear in her intentions.
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%%* This is one of main reasons ''{{Film/Showgirls}}'' was such a critical flop.
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* Laurell K. Hamilton, whose last few ''Literature/AnitaBlake'' books have devolved into exactly this sort of porn. And when Ms. Hamilton isn't utilizing this trope, she typically just has some weird mystic happening affect all the characters so they wake up hours (or days) later having had insanely hot orgies that they don't even remember. This really saves her from having to find new words to describe obscenely large werewolf-genitalia (which then get inserted into slot B).
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* Laurell K. Hamilton, whose last few ''Literature/AnitaBlake'' books have devolved into exactly this sort of porn. And when Ms. Hamilton isn't utilizing this trope, she typically just has some weird mystic happening to affect all the characters so they wake up hours (or days) later having had insanely hot orgies that they don't even remember. This really saves her from having to find new words to describe obscenely large werewolf-genitalia (which then get inserted into slot B).
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* A rare example of IKEA erotica being used on purpose, for a reason: in Creator/GregBear's novel ''Slant'', a couple of sex scenes are described with clinical precision, but it's clear that there's not meant to be any sort of romance or passion. In the first scene, a call girl has sex with a client: she doesn't enjoy it, of course, and he's only doing it to infect her. In the second scene, a man is jumped by his very horny wife, and doesn't really get a chance to enjoy himself either. The obsessively detailed style is repeated throughout the novel to create the feeling of being bombarded by information.
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* A rare example of IKEA erotica being used on purpose, for a reason: in Creator/GregBear's novel ''Slant'', a couple of sex scenes are described with clinical precision, but it's clear that there's not meant to be any sort of romance or passion. In the first scene, a call girl has sex with a client: she doesn't enjoy it, of course, and he's only doing it to infect her. In the second scene, a man is jumped by his very horny wife, wife and doesn't really get a chance to enjoy himself either. The obsessively detailed style is repeated throughout the novel to create the feeling of being bombarded by information.
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* ''Kramer's War'' by Creator/DerekRobinson mentions IKEA erotica, but doesn't indulge in it. One character actually thinks the words "Insert Tab A into Slot B" ironically; luckily we are spared the sex scene. Other novels by Robinson prove immune to IKEA erotica.
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* ''Kramer's War'' by Creator/DerekRobinson mentions IKEA erotica, erotica but doesn't indulge in it. One character actually thinks the words "Insert Tab A into Slot B" ironically; luckily we are spared the sex scene. Other novels by Robinson prove immune to IKEA erotica.
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* British magazine ''The Literary Review'' has an annual [[https://literaryreview.co.uk/bad-sex-in-fiction-award Bad Sex Award]]. Examples can be found in the linked page. \\
"Each year since 1993, the Bad Sex in Fiction Award has honoured an author who has produced an outstandingly bad scene of sexual description in an otherwise good novel. The purpose of the prize is to draw attention to poorly written, perfunctory or redundant passages of sexual description in modern fiction. The prize is not intended to cover pornographic or expressly erotic literature."
"Each year since 1993, the Bad Sex in Fiction Award has honoured an author who has produced an outstandingly bad scene of sexual description in an otherwise good novel. The purpose of the prize is to draw attention to poorly written, perfunctory or redundant passages of sexual description in modern fiction. The prize is not intended to cover pornographic or expressly erotic literature."
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* British magazine ''The Literary Review'' has an annual [[https://literaryreview.co.uk/bad-sex-in-fiction-award Bad Sex Award]]. Examples can be found in the linked page. \\
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-->"Each year since 1993, the Bad Sex in Fiction Award has honoured an author who has produced an outstandingly bad scene of sexual description in an otherwise good novel. The purpose of the prize is to draw attention to poorly written, perfunctory or redundant passages of sexual description in modern fiction. The prize is not intended to cover pornographic or expressly erotic literature."
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-->"Each year since 1993, the Bad Sex in Fiction Award has honoured an author who has produced an outstandingly bad scene of sexual description in an otherwise good novel. The purpose of the prize is to draw attention to poorly written, perfunctory or redundant passages of sexual description in modern fiction. The prize is not intended to cover pornographic or expressly erotic literature."
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* ''Series/NightCourt'' parodied this once. Mac was discussing assembling a train set, saying "Insert tab A into slot B. Who can't do that?" and Dan (the in-house pervert) just gave him a look and said "You'd be surprised."
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* ''Series/NightCourt'' parodied this once. Mac was discussing assembling a train set, saying "Insert tab A into slot B. Who can't do that?" and Dan (the in-house pervert) just gave him a look and said said, "You'd be surprised."
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'''Mitchell:''' I'm not sure it would, actually. I'm not sure it would go in that easily. I think you'd have to sort of work it in, because it's got no purchase, because it's floppy.\\
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'''Mitchell:''' I'm not sure it would, actually. I'm not sure it would go in that easily. I think you'd have to sort of work it in, in because it's got no purchase, purchase because it's floppy.\\
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** In ''That Mitchell and Webb Look'', a man who writes porno movies states that he gets the basic outline, which is about a man and a woman meeting, with large blank spaces inbetween "they have sex" written several times over, with his job being to fill in the blanks.
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** In ''That Mitchell and Webb Look'', a man who writes porno movies states that he gets the basic outline, which is about a man and a woman meeting, with large blank spaces inbetween in between "they have sex" written several times over, with his job being to fill in the blanks.
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** Well, theoretically optional, but given the rest of the manual's emphasis on the least arousing sex this side of a court-ordered chemical sterilization, you might as well just do it. You're already a sex offender just for agreeing to play the game; just as well hang for a sheep as a lamb.
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** Well, theoretically optional, but given the rest of the manual's emphasis on the least arousing sex this side of a court-ordered chemical sterilization, you might as well just do it. You're already a sex offender just for agreeing to play the game; just as well hang for a sheep as a lamb.
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## Have much more interest in writing a story than shoehorning in what the [[ExecutiveMeddling executives]] consider to be the selling point of these games. Game requires adult content to sell? Fine, here's a stupid sex scene, now let me get back to the interesting bit. In some of these games, you can cut the sex completely without missing anything in the plot, and probably make it ''better'' - these may get an all-ages console releases.
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## Have much more interest in writing a story than shoehorning in what the [[ExecutiveMeddling executives]] consider to be being the selling point of these games. Game requires adult content to sell? Fine, here's a stupid sex scene, now let me get back to the interesting bit. In some of these games, you can cut the sex completely without missing anything in the plot, and probably make it ''better'' - these may get an all-ages console releases.release.
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** Considering the rest of the game's [[BlindIdiotTranslation bad translation job]] and clear editing (rewriting what is obviously a rape scene by the voice acting to a consensual one), it's hard to say who is at fault - the original writers, or the the translators.
* It can probably be explained mostly with poor translation job by people who had little to no actual experience, since those games were originally in Japanese.
* It can probably be explained mostly with poor translation job by people who had little to no actual experience, since those games were originally in Japanese.
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** Considering the rest of the game's [[BlindIdiotTranslation bad translation job]] and clear editing (rewriting what is obviously a rape scene by the voice acting to a consensual one), it's hard to say who is at fault - the original writers, or the the translators.
* It can probably be explained mostly with poor translation job by people who had little to no actualexperience, experience since those games were originally in Japanese.
* It can probably be explained mostly with poor translation job by people who had little to no actual
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* ''The Internet Oracle'' was once asked by a supplicant, "What is sex". The oracle used the "Tab A into Slot B" example, continuing the description about certain situations where Tab F wants to insert itself in Tab R, and finalizes in how corrugated cardboard boxes are made.
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* ''The Internet Oracle'' was once asked by a supplicant, "What is sex". The oracle used the "Tab A into Slot B" example, continuing the description about certain situations where Tab F wants to insert itself in Tab R, R and finalizes in how corrugated cardboard boxes are made.
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-->'''Amy''' (angrily): "I know how to make love!"
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** Another ''South Park'' example, showing both the sheer terrifying wonder of Butters' twisted crazy upbringing, and perhaps a little TruthInTelevision:
-->You see, Jimmy, when a man's penis becomes hard, the man puts it into a lady, into her vagina. Then, the hard penis sneezes milk inside the lady's tunnel and after it's all done sneezing milk the penis stops being hard and the man loses interest in the lady.
-->You see, Jimmy, when a man's penis becomes hard, the man puts it into a lady, into her vagina. Then, the hard penis sneezes milk inside the lady's tunnel and after it's all done sneezing milk the penis stops being hard and the man loses interest in the lady.
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** Another ''South Park'' example, showing both the sheer terrifying wonder of Butters' twisted crazy upbringing, upbringing and perhaps a little TruthInTelevision:
-->You --->You see, Jimmy, when a man's penis becomes hard, the man puts it into a lady, into her vagina. Then, the hard penis sneezes milk inside the lady's tunnel and after it's all done sneezing milk the penis stops being hard and the man loses interest in the lady.
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->''"He was a notable example of the fact that nothing can be duller than dull pornography.” ''
-->-- '''Creator/AgathaChristie''', ''Literature/TheClocks''
-->-- '''Creator/AgathaChristie''', ''Literature/TheClocks''
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* ''FanFic/MyImmortal''. An actual quote from the story reads "Then he put his thingie into my you-know-what and we did it for the first time."
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* ''FanFic/MyImmortal''. An actual The quote provider for this page from the story reads "Then he put his thingie into my you-know-what and we did it for the first time.""
** This gets extra confusing later on as it drifts into AnatomicallyImpossibleSex territory as "He put his boys thingie in mine" as the author begins to go slowly insane.
** This gets extra confusing later on as it drifts into AnatomicallyImpossibleSex territory as "He put his boys thingie in mine" as the author begins to go slowly insane.
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Extra bonus points for TheBodyPartsThatMustNotBeNamed.
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See also FetishRetardant and {{Narm}}, common consequences of IKEA Erotica, and ShowDontTell, which is a related piece of writing advice. Bonus points for TheBodyPartsThatMustNotBeNamed. Contrast with MillsAndBoonProse.
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See also FetishRetardant and {{Narm}}, common consequences of IKEA Erotica, and ShowDontTell, which is a related piece of writing advice. Bonus points for TheBodyPartsThatMustNotBeNamed. Contrast with MillsAndBoonProse.
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Hentai is a genre; can't be contrasted with a trope.
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See also FetishRetardant and {{Narm}}, common consequences of IKEA Erotica, and ShowDontTell, which is a related piece of writing advice. Contrast with MillsAndBoonProse. Also contrast {{Hentai}}, which may be loving and sweet or go fully into the [[{{Squick}} opposite]] direction.
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See also FetishRetardant and {{Narm}}, common consequences of IKEA Erotica, and ShowDontTell, which is a related piece of writing advice. Bonus points for TheBodyPartsThatMustNotBeNamed. Contrast with MillsAndBoonProse. Also contrast {{Hentai}}, which may be loving and sweet or go fully into the [[{{Squick}} opposite]] direction.
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* In the hispanic world, we have the infamous writter Perla Shumajer. Mostly focused in "Harry Potter" fanfics, her descriptions of sex are bizarre. In one of her fanfics, Severus Snape took out "his" penis outside of Harry´s pants (without magic). Another bizarre fanfic is one about Super Mario Brothers, named "Married in Marriage". Not so rich in sex descriptions, but clear in her intentions.