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* ScrewDestiny: Riley's entire purpose is to send out his Call when the stars are right and end the world. For Andi's sake, he declares that he's going to do no such thing, and to hell with the universal order. The villain is a doomsday cultist who's trying to prod him into getting with the program again.
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** Andromeda Slate: the caracter is supposed to be empty and thus is a blank slate. Also andromeda is, in mythology, a princess sacrificed to a sea monster.
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** Andromeda Slate: the caracter character is supposed to be empty and thus is a blank slate. Also andromeda is, in mythology, a princess sacrificed to a sea monster.
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** One that only counts as a ShoutOut [[spoiler:because of the parody nature--[[TheRoom "You're tearing me apart!"]]]]
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* SesquipedalianSmith: Andromeda Slate.
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A series of young adult ParanormalRomance novels by JustForFun/SerraElinsen, and the title of the first book. It is about a girl named [[MeaningFulName Andromeda]] "Andi" Slate who falls in love with Riley Bay, the human guise of none other than Cthulhu himself. Andi is a really special girl she has dreams of him in her dreams and notices... strange things about him.
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A series of young adult ParanormalRomance novels by JustForFun/SerraElinsen, and the title of the first book.JustForFun/SerraElinsen. It is about a girl named [[MeaningFulName Andromeda]] "Andi" Slate who falls in love with Riley Bay, the human guise of none other than Cthulhu himself. Andi is a really special girl she has dreams of him in her dreams and notices... strange things about him.
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** Riley ''Bay'' is secretly a sea creature-thing
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** Riley ''Bay'' is secretly a sea creature-thing creature-thing; also, Riley is a pun about R'lieh, the city where Cthulhu is "dead yet dreaming".
**Andromeda Slate: the caracter is supposed to be empty and thus is a blank slate. Also andromeda is, in mythology, a princess sacrificed to a sea monster.
**Andromeda Slate: the caracter is supposed to be empty and thus is a blank slate. Also andromeda is, in mythology, a princess sacrificed to a sea monster.
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* ''Arisen'' ''Another'' (TBA)
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* AbductionIsLove: Ehat makes this story so different from other paranormal romances and weirdly interesting is that there are real stakes. It is ''always'' difficult to know what Riley is up to and you can geniuely wonder whether it's going to be the cute kind of kidnapping or not when Riley ties up Andi and brings her to his house while she is passed out.
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* AbductionIsLove: Ehat What makes this story so different from other paranormal romances and weirdly interesting is that there are real stakes. It is ''always'' difficult to know what Riley is up to and you can geniuely wonder whether it's going to be the cute kind of kidnapping or not when Riley ties up Andi and brings her to his house while she is passed out.
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* BeautifulAllAlong: Riley to Andi after he reveals his true form. Closet zoophilia rules !
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* BeautifulAllAlong: Riley to Andi after he reveals his true form. Closet zoophilia rules ! rules!
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* AbductionIsLove: Arguably what makes this story so different from other paranormal romances and weirdly interesting is that there are real stakes. It is ''always'' difficult to know what Riley is up to and you can geniuely wonder whether it's going to be the cute kind of kidnapping or not when Riley ties up Andi and brings her to his house while she is passed out.
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* AbductionIsLove: Arguably what Ehat makes this story so different from other paranormal romances and weirdly interesting is that there are real stakes. It is ''always'' difficult to know what Riley is up to and you can geniuely wonder whether it's going to be the cute kind of kidnapping or not when Riley ties up Andi and brings her to his house while she is passed out.
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* AbductionIsLove: Arguably what makes this story so different from other paranormal romances and weirdly interesting is that there are real stakes. It is ''always'' difficult to know what Riley is up to and you can geniuely wonder whether it's going to be the cute kind of kidnapping or not when Riley ties up Andi and brings her to his house while she is passed out.
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* BeautifulAllAlong: Riley to Andi after he reveals his true form. Closet zoophilia rules !
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* PropertyOfLove: This is present in the couple.
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* PropertyOfLove: This is present in the couple.couple because of Riley's trouble with petty human laws and comfort zones and his sheer, ultimate and entirely fulfilled vision of love.
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* [[SheIsAllGrownUp He Is All Grown Up]]: Vic at the end.
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* [[SheIsAllGrownUp He Is All Grown Up]]: Vic at the end. DeconstructedTrope because he has lost all the attaching traits of the {{Adorkable}} UnluckyChildhoodFriend he used to be when [[spoiler: Ms. Epistola's MindRape]] turned him into a decent LoveInterest.
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* {{Alien Geometries}}: Riley's home is like this.
* {{Abduction is Love}}: Riley ties up Andi and brings her to his house while she is passed out.
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* {{Alien Geometries}}: AlienGeometries: Riley's home is like this.
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* {{Mythology Gag}}: No names are given, but Nyarlathotep mentions how he and Nikola Tesla used to mess with HP Lovecraft.
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* {{Tome of Eldritch Lore}}: Two in the series including the Necromonicon
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* XMeetsY: {{Literature/Twilight}} meets the Franchise/CthulhuMythos.
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* {{Tome of Eldritch Lore}}: TomeOfEldritchLore: Two in the series including the Necromonicon
* XMeetsY: {{Literature/Twilight}} meets the Franchise/CthulhuMythos.Necromonicon
* XMeetsY: {{Literature/Twilight}} meets the Franchise/CthulhuMythos.
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* YouGoGirl: Andi confronting Riley.Riley.
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** Ms. Scarlett Epistola. Epistola means "letter".
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*** Not "letter" as in "character of the alphabet." "Letter" as in "the thing you send home from camp" (as in [[EpistolaryNovel an epistolary novel]]).
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** Ms. Scarlett Epistola. Epistola means "letter".
*** Not"letter" as in "character of the alphabet." "Letter" as (as in "the thing you send home from camp" (as in [[EpistolaryNovel camp", or an epistolary novel]]).{{epistolary novel}}).
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* FatBestFriend: Bridget "Bree" Fifan
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* FatBestFriend: Bridget "Bree" FifanFifan. Her full name is actually [[SignificantAnagram an anagram for "big fat friend."]]
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* {{Alien Geometries}}: Riley's home is like this.
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Remember, we\'re trying to make this look legit. Work it as a normal trope entry, and avoid using \"I\"
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** That's not badass while avoiding ridicule. That's MagnificentBastard level of genius, and Serra proving once again she is SmarterThanYouLook.
*** What ? I look dumb ? That's what you mean ? Yeah, I'm talking to you !
**** Excuse me, but you're not supposed to put spaces between the final word of a sentence and the punctuation. Wow, sometimes I don't think you wrote your book at all, just based on writing style.
*** What ? I look dumb ? That's what you mean ? Yeah, I'm talking to you !
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**** Excuse me, but you're not supposed to put spaces between the final word of a sentence and the punctuation. Wow, sometimes I don't think you wrote your book at all, just based on writing style.
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* BreakHisHeartToSaveHim: [[spoiler: Riley does this in chapter 19]]
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* BreakHisHeartToSaveHim: [[BreakHisHeartToSaveHim Break Her Heart To Save Her]]: [[spoiler: Riley does this in chapter 19]]
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* AudienceSurrogate: Andi, who progressively comes to grip with the fact that something in the town is weird and is the only character GenreSavvy enough to guess that something is off with Riley.
* BastardBoyfriend: This seems to be the cause of Riley's ambiguous reception by the fandom. He is LoveItOrHateIt as of this post, which is understandable considering his backstory and how he got there. Still, his behavior gives this vibe, which creates an interesting self-loathing attraction dynamic. A case like this can be dictated by Serra´s own taste for this type.
* BastardBoyfriend: This seems to be the cause of Riley's ambiguous reception by the fandom. He is LoveItOrHateIt as of this post, which is understandable considering his backstory and how he got there. Still, his behavior gives this vibe, which creates an interesting self-loathing attraction dynamic. A case like this can be dictated by Serra´s own taste for this type.
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* ByronicHero: Riley is Cthulhu in disguise. He cannot bear the thought that ''a mere girl'' could be SpannerInTheWorks and challenge his position, thus, in the name of his own sense of self-worth and superior intellect, he chooses to study her. [[spoiler: He maybe eventually considers neutralizing her given his reaction in the end of the teaser]].
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* TheChick: Andi should be the TropeCodifier, since this is her main talent. She´s such a perfect example she could even beat Optimus Prime´s girlfriend, the pink one - whatever they call her - when it comes to seem adorable and fragile without doing anything. Everything is in the description and the angst.
* TheChosenOne: Andi is the only one who might one day come even close to stop Ctuhlu from causing the Apocalypse. This is due to her natural charm and knack for beautiful DidYouThinkICantFeel speeches which make her the perfect example of TheChick ; a nice change from the usual boring AudienceSurrogate who uses work or skills during three hundred pages of boring conflict, because she immediately solves many problems simply by ´´being there´´. Yes, you read well, she´s awesome like this, even when not lifting one single finger. To make it worse, she is the only one able to do that in the entire town. This is just ho boring and unexceptionnal every other character is.
* DidYouJustRomanceCthulhu: The premise.
* TheDitherer: Andi, with very good reasons. While critics have found it strange and think this is supposed to make her an audience surrogate (keeping silent on important matters a la Nick Carraway), Andi is a teenage girl who suddenly attracts the attention of a CuteButPsycho [[spoiler: Alien King]] and her UnluckyChildhoodFriend in a town where her mother keeps asking her whether she is fine while she is not and she visibly chose not to speak about it. Also there's this stuff with the WomanScorned who tries to destroy the world... because of reasons and the bell keeps ringing at 3:35 ! Life is not easy for Andi but haters will never show sympathy.
* TheChosenOne: Andi is the only one who might one day come even close to stop Ctuhlu from causing the Apocalypse. This is due to her natural charm and knack for beautiful DidYouThinkICantFeel speeches which make her the perfect example of TheChick ; a nice change from the usual boring AudienceSurrogate who uses work or skills during three hundred pages of boring conflict, because she immediately solves many problems simply by ´´being there´´. Yes, you read well, she´s awesome like this, even when not lifting one single finger. To make it worse, she is the only one able to do that in the entire town. This is just ho boring and unexceptionnal every other character is.
* DidYouJustRomanceCthulhu: The premise.
* TheDitherer: Andi, with very good reasons. While critics have found it strange and think this is supposed to make her an audience surrogate (keeping silent on important matters a la Nick Carraway), Andi is a teenage girl who suddenly attracts the attention of a CuteButPsycho [[spoiler: Alien King]] and her UnluckyChildhoodFriend in a town where her mother keeps asking her whether she is fine while she is not and she visibly chose not to speak about it. Also there's this stuff with the WomanScorned who tries to destroy the world... because of reasons and the bell keeps ringing at 3:35 ! Life is not easy for Andi but haters will never show sympathy.
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* TheChosenOne: Andi is the only one who might one day come even close to stop Ctuhlu from causing the Apocalypse. This is due to her natural charm and knack for beautiful DidYouThinkICantFeel speeches which make her the perfect example of TheChick ; a nice change from the usual boring AudienceSurrogate who uses work or skills during three hundred pages of boring conflict, because she immediately solves many problems simply by ´´being there´´. Yes, you read well, she´s awesome like this, even when not lifting one single finger. To make it worse, she is the only one able to do that in the entire town. This is just ho boring and unexceptionnal every other character is.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Andi, constantly, to the point it wouldn't be adorable if it was pushed too far and not handled with Serra's subtelty.
** She does push it a bit far with all the "most ordinary girl in the world" stuff, at least after the hundredth time she insists on this onwards...
*** You could argue it makes her all the more relatable, because she isn't one of those [[BoisterousBruiser expansive]] [[BloodKnight aggressive]] [[GoodBadGirl sex-crazed]] modern heroines, but a somewhat more clever and rational person who is capable of discerning her own faults, and knows that she can't do anything when she isn't competent and needs to ask adapted help like a real person in a real situation.
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** She does push it a bit far with all the "most ordinary girl in the world" stuff, at least after the hundredth time she insists on this onwards...
*** You could argue it makes her all the more relatable, because she isn't one of those [[BoisterousBruiser expansive]] [[BloodKnight aggressive]] [[GoodBadGirl sex-crazed]] modern heroines, but a somewhat more clever and rational person who is capable of discerning her own faults, and knows that she can't do anything when she isn't competent and needs to ask adapted help like a real person in a real situation.
******** This happens only when the "real person" is an angry teenage girl with horrible self-esteem.
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**Ms. Scarlett Epistola. Epistola means"letter"."letter".
** Riley ''Bay'' is secretly a sea creature-thing
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* {{Stripperiffic}}: Scarlett Epistola [[spoiler: becomes increasingly so as the story goes on. Justified, since she leads her cult via seduction]]