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* ArtificialLimbs: See {{Conscription}} below.
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* KarmicNod: See TorchesAndPitchforks below.
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* TheVietnamVet: See {{Conscription}} above.
* WhatTheHellHero: See AttemptedRape above.
* WhatTheHellHero: See AttemptedRape above.
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* TimeTitle: Named for the astral dream TimeTravel's destination time.
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* KarmicNod: See TorchesAndPitchforks below.
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* ArtificialLimbs: See {{Conscription}} below.
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* {{Conscription}}: Jon and Karl were drafted into the Vietnam War due to their parents pissing off some members of the draft board.
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* {{Conscription}}: Jon and Karl were drafted into the Vietnam War due to their parents pissing off some members of the draft board. They faced horrors they faced during their service.
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* TheVietnamVet: Jon and Karl are this tragically by force due to the draft along with the horrors they faced during their service.
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* TheVietnamVet: Jon and Karl are this tragically by force due to the draft along with the horrors they faced during their service.See {{Conscription}} above.
* WhatTheHellHero: See AttemptedRape above.
* WhatTheHellHero: See AttemptedRape above.
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* TimeTravel: Jon's astral dream which takes him to 2150 A.D. serves as this.
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* InYourNatureToDestroyYourselves: Jon, Karl, the Marco Society and many other people know very well about this human tendency. The Macro Society however has learned to get rid of it.
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* InYourNatureToDestroyYourselves: Jon, Karl, the Marco Macro Society and many other people know very well about this human tendency. The Macro Society however has learned to get rid of it.
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* PlotTwist: Jon later finds out that Karl his roommate, life long, friend, academic partner and fellow soldier is also his soul twin Carol in 2150 AD!
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: Jon and Karl being best friends, roommates, academic partners as well as soldiers in war clearly qualify.
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: Jon and Karl being best friends, roommates, academic partners as well as soldiers in war clearly qualify. Not to mention, they are even soulmates in the future as incarnations of their current souls!
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* PublicExecution: Jon and his soulmate Carol tragically suffer one of these due to the Micro Government tying them to a rock to be at the mercy of a violent micro crowd as punishment for their misendeavours on the island.
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* PublicExecution: Jon and his soulmate Carol tragically suffer one of these due to the Micro Government tying them to a rock to be at the mercy of a violent violent, sharp rock throwing micro crowd as punishment for their misendeavours on the island.
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* PublicExecution: Jon and his soulmate Carol tragically suffer one of these due to the Micro Government tying them to a rock to be at the mercy of a violent micro crowd as punishment for their misendeavours on the island.
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* TheVietnamVet: Jon and Karl are this tragically by force due to the draft along with the horrors they faced during their service.
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* TheFuture: Over a hundred years into the future from the current year of 1971 to 2150 AD Jon finds the world is very different.
* TheHeroDies: Jon Lake dies at the end to "evolate" to move on to the next life to learn more.
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* TheFuture: Over a hundred years into the future from the current year of 1971 to 2150 AD Jon finds the world is very different.
* TheHeroDies: Jon Lake dies at the end to "evolate" to move on to the next life to learn more.
* TheHeroDies: Jon Lake dies at the end to "evolate" to move on to the next life to learn more.
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* {{Utopia}}: In 2150 A.D., rudimentary work has been automated and society spends its time in leisure. Besides artistic pursuits, everyone's daily work is to expand their awareness.
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* {{Utopia}}: In 2150 A.D., rudimentary work AbusiveParents: Neda has been automated an emotionally abusive mother who berates her day after day and society spends its time makes her feel like nothing. Jon is able to take Neda in leisure. Besides artistic pursuits, everyone's daily work is to expand their awareness.and free her from all that.
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* {{Utopia}}: In 2150 A.D., rudimentary work has been automated and society spends its time in leisure. Besides artistic pursuits, everyone's daily work is to expand their awareness.
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* {{Diary}}: Jon keeps track of his life in 2150 A.D. in a journal in 1971.
