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* LockingMacGyverInTheStoreCupboard: While [[spoiler:Shan]] is at least smart enough to put AntiMagic charms on Sandry, unlike Fin he secures them [[spoiler:with ''ribbons''. Sandry herself snarks at how stupid it was to try and stop a thread mage with cloth before unwinding them all and freeing herself]].
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* TheArchmage: Ishabel Ladyhammer, Berenene's top mage, closest advisor, and the titular "empress' will". If Berenene wants something, Ishabel sees it done, and she's a peerless curseweaver with enough raw magical power to completely shatter [[BarrierWarrior Quen's]] shields. Unlike most examples, she's considerably ''less'' arrogant than the mages around her, taking the full Circle seriously after Daja and Briar defeat her second-in-command and advising Berenene to prepare for the barrier failing, just in case she can't stop them from leaving.
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* TheArchmage: Ishabel Ishabal Ladyhammer, Berenene's top mage, closest advisor, and the titular "empress' will". If Berenene wants something, Ishabel Ishabal sees it done, and she's a peerless curseweaver with enough raw magical power to completely shatter [[BarrierWarrior Quen's]] shields. Unlike most examples, she's considerably ''less'' arrogant than the mages around her, taking the full Circle seriously after Daja and Briar defeat her second-in-command and advising Berenene to prepare for the barrier failing, just in case she can't stop them from leaving.
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* ParanoiaGambit: Ishabel Ladyhammer is an extremely skilled curseweaver, able to cause terrible things to happen to people under the guise of [[MakeItLookLikeAnAccident accidents]], like when she [[spoiler:shatters most of Tris' bones under the guise of a bad staircase tumble]]. As such, the court of Namorn assume that every bad accident might have Ishabel behind it, which keeps a healthy climate of fear that Berenene takes advantage of.
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* ParanoiaGambit: Ishabel Ishabal Ladyhammer is an extremely skilled curseweaver, able to cause terrible things to happen to people under the guise of [[MakeItLookLikeAnAccident accidents]], like when she [[spoiler:shatters most of Tris' bones under the guise of a bad staircase tumble]]. As such, the court of Namorn assume that every bad accident might have Ishabel Ishabal behind it, which keeps a healthy climate of fear that Berenene takes advantage of.
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* TheArchmage: Ishabel Ladyhammer, Berenene's top mage, closest advisor, and the titular "empress' will". If Berenene wants something, Ishabel sees it done, and she's a peerless curseweaver with enough raw magical power to completely shatter [[BarrierWarrior Quen's]] shields. Unlike most examples, she's considerably ''less'' arrogant than the mages around her, taking the full Circle seriously after Daja and Briar defeat her second-in-command and advising Berenene to prepare for the barrier failing, just in case she can't stop them from leaving.
* TheEmpress: Empress Berenene of Namorn, who is absolutely determined to have her way. At first she seems content to run her empire and let the Circle either stay or no, but as soon as Sandry announces her intent to go home, she becomes more and more obsessed with ''forcing'' them to stay and bend the knee to her just because she hates how they defied her.[[spoiler:It culminates in her raising a barrier made to keep out invading armies just to keep them from leaving.]]
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* SmugSuper: Quenaill Shieldsman is the Queen's personal bodyguard and perhaps the best shield mage in the known world, and he knows it. He later tries to trap Daja and Briar, reasoning that as plant and metal mages they aren't any real threat to him, and even starts playing his fiddle as though he's bored. He winds up trapped in a cage of vines and wire and drained of power [[HeartIsAnAwesomePower by the time they're done with him]].
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: While Trisana's powerful weather magic is respected, the rest of the Namornese mages look down on Sandry, Daja, and Briar for having thread, metal, and plant magic instead, and believe that the four only consider themselves dangerous because they have Tris to protect them. They are rapidly proven wrong.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: While travelling in the east, Briar (along with Rosethorn and Evvy) got caught in a war between Gyongxe and Yanjing. A major part of his issues in the book is remaining trauma from that war.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: While travelling traveling in the east, Briar (along with Rosethorn and Evvy) got caught in a war between Gyongxe and Yanjing. A major part of his issues in the book is remaining trauma from that war.
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* WhatTheHellHero: The ''mimander'' of the Trader caravan the protagonists were travelling with takes the time to chew Tris out for her use of lightning to harry the caravan to get them out of a river valley afterward, since it seriously unnerved everyone present.
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* WhatTheHellHero: The ''mimander'' of the Trader caravan the protagonists were travelling traveling with takes the time to chew Tris out for her use of lightning to harry the caravan to get them out of a river valley afterward, since it seriously unnerved everyone present.
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** Sandy's would-be abductors end up [[NiceJobFixingItVillain souring her and her friends on staying in Namorn]] by kidnapping rather than courting her normally. They make moves to leave immediately after the first kidnapping attempt, with Briar, in particular, calling out the Empress for letting it happen. As Sandry keeps emphasizing, she's ''against'' the tradition and is trying to find kindness and reason in an unfamiliar land. If the abductors had played the LongGame and courted her like she was a normal noble, it's likely Berenene would have gotten what she wanted, a few months down the line.
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** Sandy's Sandry's would-be abductors end up [[NiceJobFixingItVillain souring her and her friends on staying in Namorn]] by kidnapping rather than courting her normally. They make moves to leave immediately after the first kidnapping attempt, with Briar, in particular, calling out the Empress for letting it happen. As Sandry keeps emphasizing, she's ''against'' the tradition and is trying to find kindness and reason in an unfamiliar land. If the abductors had played the LongGame and courted her like she was a normal noble, it's likely Berenene would have gotten what she wanted, a few months down the line.
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* {{Irony}}: The novel establishes that Sandry isn't interested in marrying for love yet because she's been taking a long time to rule in her uncle's stead, and manage her parents' affairs. Even an ArrangedMarriage hasn't been pushed because she has enough political power without needing alliances. For this reason, Empress Berenene takes an interest in potential matches as well as Sandry's wealth in Namorn. Berenene ends up shooting herself in the foot by allowing Sandy to be abducted, and the lady remains very single by the end of the book.
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* {{Irony}}: The novel establishes that Sandry isn't interested in marrying for love yet because she's been taking a long time to rule in her uncle's stead, and manage her parents' affairs. Even an ArrangedMarriage hasn't been pushed because she has enough political power without needing alliances. For this reason, Empress Berenene takes an interest in potential matches as well as Sandry's wealth in Namorn. Berenene ends up shooting herself in the foot by allowing Sandy Sandry to be abducted, and the lady remains very single by the end of the book.
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* IdiotBall: Near the end, all the kids abruptly adopt a nonsensical NotNowKiddo attitude to Zhegorz warning them about an upcoming kidnap attempt. Granted, they all profusely apologize afterwards.
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** Sandy's would-be abductors end up [[NiceJobFixingItVillain souring her and her friends on staying in Namorn]] by kidnapping rather than courting her normally. They make moves to leave immediately after the first kidnapping attempt, with Briar, in particular, calling out the Empress for letting it happen. As Sandry keeps emphasizing, she's ''against'' the tradition and is trying to find kindness and reason in an unfamiliar land. If the abductors had played the LongGame and courted her like she was a normal noble, it's likely Berenene would have gotten what she wanted, a few months down the line.
** Near the end, all the kids abruptly adopt a nonsensical NotNowKiddo attitude to Zhegorz warning them about an upcoming kidnap attempt. Granted, they all profusely apologizeafterwards.afterward.
** Sandy's would-be abductors end up [[NiceJobFixingItVillain souring her and her friends on staying in Namorn]] by kidnapping rather than courting her normally. They make moves to leave immediately after the first kidnapping attempt, with Briar, in particular, calling out the Empress for letting it happen. As Sandry keeps emphasizing, she's ''against'' the tradition and is trying to find kindness and reason in an unfamiliar land. If the abductors had played the LongGame and courted her like she was a normal noble, it's likely Berenene would have gotten what she wanted, a few months down the line.
** Near the end, all the kids abruptly adopt a nonsensical NotNowKiddo attitude to Zhegorz warning them about an upcoming kidnap attempt. Granted, they all profusely apologize
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* StaircaseTumble: Empress Berenene takes out Tris by having Ishabal magically causing Tris to fall down the stairs in a way that will seriously injure her without actually killing her.
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* TailorMadePrison: Apparently this is standard practice in Namorn when a man kidnaps a mage for his bride. Sandry winds up in a box filled with magic runes that unravel her power. (Fortunately, her abductor didn't realize that she had some non-thread magic from her link with her friends.)
* TailorMadePrison: Apparently this is standard practice in Namorn when a man kidnaps a mage for his bride. Sandry winds up in a box filled with magic runes that unravel her power. (Fortunately, her abductor didn't realize that she had some non-thread magic from her link with her friends.)
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* StaircaseTumble: Empress Berenene takes out Tris by having Ishabal magically causing Tris to fall down the stairs in a way that will seriously injure her without actually killing her.
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** Apparently this is standard practice in Namorn when a man kidnaps a mage for his bride. Sandry winds up in a box filled with magic runes that unravel her power. (Fortunately, her abductor didn't realize that she had some non-thread magic from her link with her friends.)
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** Apparently this is standard practice in Namorn when a man kidnaps a mage for his bride. Sandry winds up in a box filled with magic runes that unravel her power. (Fortunately, her abductor didn't realize that she had some non-thread magic from her link with her friends.)
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* KeepingTheHandicap: When Ishabal brings up the possibility of Tris using her magic to correct her vision at need:
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--> '''Ishabal:''' "If you may correct your vision as you like, why do you wear spectacles?"
--> '''Tris:''' "Because I like them. Because I have better things to do with my magic than fixing my vision when ordinary glass will do.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Berenene is absolutely furious when one of her courtiers attempts to abduct a bride under her roof - the women in her court are supposed to be ''safe'' while in her palace or her general vicinity.
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Empress Berenene ''seems'' charming, but is a ruthless monarch who is happy to subjugate others to her will. She also refuses to make bride-abducting illegal on the grounds of UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming.
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Empress Berenene ''seems'' charming, and has some genuine positive qualities and has done good for her country, but is still a ruthless monarch who is happy to subjugate others to her will. She also refuses to make bride-abducting illegal on the grounds of UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming.
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** Daja first mmet Zhegorz in the psych wing of a Namornese hospital, so mental health care exists — but in this case the treatment was likely making Zhegorz worse rather than better, since they misunderstood a major cause of his distress.
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** But given Rizu's loyalty and (platonic) love for Empress Berenene, and said Empress' [[ManipulativeBastard mindset]], it wouldn't be out of character ''at all''. Especially if Berenene simply nudged things along to nurture Daja and Rizu's romance and simply made some time available [[note]] she IS Rizu's boss, after all[[/note]] for the two of them to get romantic, during a time frame when she knew it was likely that [[spoiler:the abduction attempt would happen]]. Given that [[spoiler: a successful kidnap-marriage]] would almost guarantee success towards keeping Sandry's estates accessible to her, and she wants to keep Sandry's mage-powerful friends in her court almost as much,[[ProperlyParanoid it's exactly the sort of move that Empress Berenene]] ''would'' pull. And given that Daja does (or at least should) have known this, making herself unavailable for ''any'' reason, knowing that Sandry is in constant danger of imprisonment and rape, is a damn stupid thing to do. First love is wonderful... but when you're in hostile territory and surrounded by people who want to manipulate you and your family into giving away your choices, there are more important things in life than getting laid.
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* NoTimeToExplain: On the journey north, while the protagonists and the Trader caravan they're travelling with are fording a river, Tris suddenly starts using lighting to harry everyone into crossing and getting out of the valley they're in as soon as possible. Why? Because she was scrying on the wind and saw the dam upstream collapse.
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* NoTimeToExplain: On the journey north, while the protagonists and the Trader caravan they're travelling with are fording a river, Tris suddenly starts using lighting lightning to harry everyone into crossing and getting out of the valley they're in as soon as possible. Why? Because she was scrying on the wind and saw the dam upstream collapse.
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* VictimBlaming: UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming: Empress Berenene's attitude towards forced marriage is that if a girl "really" doesn't want it, she should just escape. After all, Berenene herself escaped two times, how hard can it be? Of course, she's conveniently ignoring that ''royalty'' is sure going to be treated a lot better and tied up less tightly than a poor peasant girl whose family doesn't have two coppers to their name. name.
* WhatTheHellHero: The ''mimander'' of the Trader caravan the protagonists were travelling with takes the time to chew Tris out for her use of lightning to harry the caravan to get them out of a river valley afterward, since it seriously unnerved everyone present.
* WhatTheHellHero: The ''mimander'' of the Trader caravan the protagonists were travelling with takes the time to chew Tris out for her use of lightning to harry the caravan to get them out of a river valley afterward, since it seriously unnerved everyone present.
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* FantasticHonorifics: In addition to the Namornese address for mages, the titles used for various noble ranks (clehame/countess, saghad/baron) are used throughout. The glossary at the back says that each title actually translates to a type of weapon. Yanjing also has its own title for mage.
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* CourtlyLove: Briar has with Berenene for a bit. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]].
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* CourtlyLove: Briar has this toward Berenene in ''Will of the Empress''. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]].
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* CourtlyLove: Briar has this toward with Berenene in ''Will of the Empress''.for a bit. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]].
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Sandry's family is revealed to breed mules. A mule is the offspring of a horse and a donkey, and they're always sterile, meaning you can't actually breed them in family lines the way something like horse breeding works. This has led to a theory that they actually use magic to create fertile mules. Alternately, "breed" could have been a shorthand for their having found the best horse-donkey combos for ideal mules, but that's less fun than wacky magic.
* BigDamnHeroes: After [[spoiler: Fin]] abducts Sandry, she calls Briar for help, so ''he'' calls Tris to help him get Sandry from a secret underground room. Tris literally blows the door open, scattering the guards and their gear, then holds them in place with lightning while Briar saunters in after her to free Sandry.
* BlessedWithSuck:
** Zhegorz, first seen as an unnamed but helpful mental ward patient during the [[spoiler:hospital fire]] in ''[[Literature/TheCircleOpens Cold Fire]]''. He was driven insane by a combination of hearing and seeing things on the wind, being ''mistaken'' for insane because he was hearing and seeing things on the wind, and [[ThereAreNoTherapists being]] [[BedlamHouse "treated"]] for his half-existent insanity.
** Sandry's land property in Namorn is the source of her troubles, as the Empress wants to keep her in Namorn, and various Namornese nobles attempt to marry her (that is, force her into a marriage with them), all so they can have those lands for themselves. After Sandry [[spoiler:and Tris]] suffer very badly from all this, Sandry decides to [[spoiler:sign over her lands to her cousin Ambros]].
* BlessedWithSuck:
** Zhegorz, first seen as an unnamed but helpful mental ward patient during the [[spoiler:hospital fire]] in ''[[Literature/TheCircleOpens Cold Fire]]''. He was driven insane by a combination of hearing and seeing things on the wind, being ''mistaken'' for insane because he was hearing and seeing things on the wind, and [[ThereAreNoTherapists being]] [[BedlamHouse "treated"]] for his half-existent insanity.
** Sandry's land property in Namorn is the source of her troubles, as the Empress wants to keep her in Namorn, and various Namornese nobles attempt to marry her (that is, force her into a marriage with them), all so they can have those lands for themselves. After Sandry [[spoiler:and Tris]] suffer very badly from all this, Sandry decides to [[spoiler:sign over her lands to her cousin Ambros]].
* CallBack: In ''Magic Steps'', it's established that every time Sandry says "I really must insist", she's about to use her magic to remove anyone and anything in her way. Here, Ambros tells Sandry that Empress Berenene is determined to make sure she and her inheritance remain in the empire. Sandry cheerfully says that Berenene seems reasonable, and when it comes time to leave, she's sure that she won't have to insist.
* ConflictBall: All over the place, as the four foster siblings all insist on taking just about everything the others say in the worst possible way. Especially annoying is that Briar's big reason for acting the way he does took place completely between books and isn't properly explained until a later prequel.
** Partially explained in that they haven't been together for several years and are getting used to being together again. Little resentments abound. Sandry felt left behind when the others extended their travels. Sandry, Daja, and Briar are all wealthy now from their magic, while Tris scrapes by because she can't use her magic in a profitable, non-destructive way. Briar has PTSD and doesn't think the others would understand. They are all kicked out of Discipline, because they are grown adults and the cottage and temple are meant for students and those who've taken vows. Each also has dealt with death closely in some way, and no one wants to talk about it.
* CourtlyLove: Briar has this toward Berenene in ''Will of the Empress''. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]].
* CutHimselfShaving: After Briar and a jealous courtier get into a fight over Berenene's partiality for Briar, they tell the people who find them that their argument was over magic.
* DefeatByModesty: Sandry makes good use of this, but in a genuinely disabling manner. She undoes every single stitch on their bodies, from clothing to the leather on their armor — and at the suggestion of one of her guards, the tack on their horses to boot.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Ealaga's rebuttal to Ambros near the end. Replace "kidnap" with "rape" and note the resemblance to modern-day discussions about rape culture, not to mention all the UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming that Berenene engages in. Of course, Briar earlier explicitly calls [[AndNowYouMustMarryMe abduction marriages]] rape.
-->"Each time a man succeeds, we place our daughters and our sisters under new safeguards. We put their lives under new restrictions. We give them new signs that a man in whose company they find themselves might plan to kidnap them. Don’t we teach our women to view all men according to the actions of a few?"
* ConflictBall: All over the place, as the four foster siblings all insist on taking just about everything the others say in the worst possible way. Especially annoying is that Briar's big reason for acting the way he does took place completely between books and isn't properly explained until a later prequel.
** Partially explained in that they haven't been together for several years and are getting used to being together again. Little resentments abound. Sandry felt left behind when the others extended their travels. Sandry, Daja, and Briar are all wealthy now from their magic, while Tris scrapes by because she can't use her magic in a profitable, non-destructive way. Briar has PTSD and doesn't think the others would understand. They are all kicked out of Discipline, because they are grown adults and the cottage and temple are meant for students and those who've taken vows. Each also has dealt with death closely in some way, and no one wants to talk about it.
* CourtlyLove: Briar has this toward Berenene in ''Will of the Empress''. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]].
* CutHimselfShaving: After Briar and a jealous courtier get into a fight over Berenene's partiality for Briar, they tell the people who find them that their argument was over magic.
* DefeatByModesty: Sandry makes good use of this, but in a genuinely disabling manner. She undoes every single stitch on their bodies, from clothing to the leather on their armor — and at the suggestion of one of her guards, the tack on their horses to boot.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Ealaga's rebuttal to Ambros near the end. Replace "kidnap" with "rape" and note the resemblance to modern-day discussions about rape culture, not to mention all the UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming that Berenene engages in. Of course, Briar earlier explicitly calls [[AndNowYouMustMarryMe abduction marriages]] rape.
-->"Each time a man succeeds, we place our daughters and our sisters under new safeguards. We put their lives under new restrictions. We give them new signs that a man in whose company they find themselves might plan to kidnap them. Don’t we teach our women to view all men according to the actions of a few?"
* DoubleAesop: As Sandry, Daja and Briar prepare for the final fight, Sandry remarks “People shouldn’t always get what they want. It’s very bad for their character,” meaning [[spoiler: Berenene's wish to keep them in Namorn]]. In the end [[spoiler:Sandry realizes that her wish to keep her Namornese land, even after her clash with Berenene, is just as foolish, so she signs the land over to her cousin Ambros.]]
* ExtendedDisarming: Briar does this to intimidate an opponent. Daja helps by carrying on a casual conversation throughout.
* FantasticHonorifics: In addition to the Namornese address for mages, the titles used for various noble ranks (clehame/countess, saghad/baron) are used throughout. The glossary at the back says that each title actually translates to a type of weapon. Yanjing also has its own title for mage.
* FantasyContraception: Droughtwort, first mentioned here. Briar uses it. A lot.
* ExtendedDisarming: Briar does this to intimidate an opponent. Daja helps by carrying on a casual conversation throughout.
* FantasticHonorifics: In addition to the Namornese address for mages, the titles used for various noble ranks (clehame/countess, saghad/baron) are used throughout. The glossary at the back says that each title actually translates to a type of weapon. Yanjing also has its own title for mage.
* FantasyContraception: Droughtwort, first mentioned here. Briar uses it. A lot.
* GoldDigger: Several of the men courting and/or trying to abduct Sandry. It turns out House Landreg is absolutely ''loaded'', and Berenene wants to pair Sandry off to a pliable courtier so that she'll have access to all that income.
* GoodOldWays: "Horse-rump" marriages in Namorn, the nickname for marriage by abduction. In most cases it's done to spice up a relationship or as a way for a couple to elope. However, it can be inflicted on unwilling women as well, and even the Empress has had it tried on her twice. Local authorities tend to be very lenient when a punishment is required for it, as it's a tradition from the Empire's seed country.
** The current regime largely allows it to continue due to the Empress' thought that should a woman not want to wed, she should simply escape like the Empress herself did, not taking into consideration that no one is going to seriously harm or manhandle reigning royalty, and dismissing the notion that the Empress was allowed ample opportunity to escape due to her status.
* GrowingUpSucks: The central theme. [[spoiler:Averted… eventually… when the four accept that there really ''are'' some attitudes from childhood that you would do well to keep, such as trust, openness and optimism. Their "grown up" cynicism gets them ''into'' trouble; their recovered trust and idealism ''saves'' them from it.]]
* HandOrObjectUnderwear: A man does this while shouting at Sandry when she unravels his clothes, as well as the clothes of twenty others who tried to kidnap her.
* HandWave: Anytime some apparently traditional/popular Namornese custom or style is mentioned in ''Empress'', where it was absent in ''Cold Fire'', it's explained as only being popular in the western part of the empire.
* HeroicBSOD: As ''Empress'' opens, Briar seems to be suffering [=PTSD/BPD=] from an unspecified event, most noticeably a newly developed tendency to sleep with any woman willing to hold still. Turns out [[spoiler:he and Rosethorn got caught in a war]].
* IdiotBall: Near the end, all the kids abruptly adopt a nonsensical NotNowKiddo attitude to Zhegorz warning them about an upcoming kidnap attempt. Granted, they all profusely apologize afterwards.
* IdleRich: Sandry is forced to confront the uncomfortable truth that her parents were both selfish pleasure-seekers who didn't care a whit about properly managing their estate.
* ImpoverishedPatrician: The [[spoiler:fer Roths]] gambled away most of their estate. [[spoiler:Shan went to the capital in the hopes that he could marry Berenene and gain access to her riches. Failing that, he tried wooing — and then abducting — Sandry instead.]]
* IOweYouMyLife: Rizu towards Berenene. Berenene saved her from an unwanted arranged marriage and gave her a powerful position, ensuring that she no longer had to rely on her family and could look for love as she chose. [[spoiler:This is part of why she refuses to leave with Daja.]]
* LipstickLesbian: Rizuka fa Dalach, Wardrobe Mistress of the Empress of Namorn, is a lesbian.
* MeaninglessVillainVictory: Empress Berenene's goal is to get Sandry to stay in Namorn so that the sizable income from Sandry's estates goes into the imperial coffers and not Emelan's. She also wants the services of Sandry's friends (a powerful weather mage, smith mage, and garden mage) to strengthen her rule. In the end, [[spoiler:Berenene does partially get what she wants as Sandry's only way to escape completely is to sign over her land and titles to her seneschal, but Tris, Daja, and Briar reject the offers of wealth and power and manage to get Sandry out of the country. Sandry isn't really losing any political power since her uncle wants to make her his heir in Emelan where she'll be unfettered by Berenene's rule, and now she and her powerful friends are Berenene's powerful ''enemies''.]]
* NoBisexuals: Averted. It's stated quite clearly that [[spoiler:Rosethorn]] likes both women and men.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Comes in the form of a "fall down the stairs" curse that [[spoiler:Ishabal uses on Tris]]. The description of the injuries and the other characters' horrified reactions to them (with the healers saying it's damn near miraculous she wasn't ''dead'') is quite disturbing.
* NoodleIncident: The four remember the time they tried alcohol. It ended with a barn being destroyed.
* GoodOldWays: "Horse-rump" marriages in Namorn, the nickname for marriage by abduction. In most cases it's done to spice up a relationship or as a way for a couple to elope. However, it can be inflicted on unwilling women as well, and even the Empress has had it tried on her twice. Local authorities tend to be very lenient when a punishment is required for it, as it's a tradition from the Empire's seed country.
** The current regime largely allows it to continue due to the Empress' thought that should a woman not want to wed, she should simply escape like the Empress herself did, not taking into consideration that no one is going to seriously harm or manhandle reigning royalty, and dismissing the notion that the Empress was allowed ample opportunity to escape due to her status.
* GrowingUpSucks: The central theme. [[spoiler:Averted… eventually… when the four accept that there really ''are'' some attitudes from childhood that you would do well to keep, such as trust, openness and optimism. Their "grown up" cynicism gets them ''into'' trouble; their recovered trust and idealism ''saves'' them from it.]]
* HandOrObjectUnderwear: A man does this while shouting at Sandry when she unravels his clothes, as well as the clothes of twenty others who tried to kidnap her.
* HandWave: Anytime some apparently traditional/popular Namornese custom or style is mentioned in ''Empress'', where it was absent in ''Cold Fire'', it's explained as only being popular in the western part of the empire.
* HeroicBSOD: As ''Empress'' opens, Briar seems to be suffering [=PTSD/BPD=] from an unspecified event, most noticeably a newly developed tendency to sleep with any woman willing to hold still. Turns out [[spoiler:he and Rosethorn got caught in a war]].
* IdiotBall: Near the end, all the kids abruptly adopt a nonsensical NotNowKiddo attitude to Zhegorz warning them about an upcoming kidnap attempt. Granted, they all profusely apologize afterwards.
* IdleRich: Sandry is forced to confront the uncomfortable truth that her parents were both selfish pleasure-seekers who didn't care a whit about properly managing their estate.
* ImpoverishedPatrician: The [[spoiler:fer Roths]] gambled away most of their estate. [[spoiler:Shan went to the capital in the hopes that he could marry Berenene and gain access to her riches. Failing that, he tried wooing — and then abducting — Sandry instead.]]
* IOweYouMyLife: Rizu towards Berenene. Berenene saved her from an unwanted arranged marriage and gave her a powerful position, ensuring that she no longer had to rely on her family and could look for love as she chose. [[spoiler:This is part of why she refuses to leave with Daja.]]
* LipstickLesbian: Rizuka fa Dalach, Wardrobe Mistress of the Empress of Namorn, is a lesbian.
* MeaninglessVillainVictory: Empress Berenene's goal is to get Sandry to stay in Namorn so that the sizable income from Sandry's estates goes into the imperial coffers and not Emelan's. She also wants the services of Sandry's friends (a powerful weather mage, smith mage, and garden mage) to strengthen her rule. In the end, [[spoiler:Berenene does partially get what she wants as Sandry's only way to escape completely is to sign over her land and titles to her seneschal, but Tris, Daja, and Briar reject the offers of wealth and power and manage to get Sandry out of the country. Sandry isn't really losing any political power since her uncle wants to make her his heir in Emelan where she'll be unfettered by Berenene's rule, and now she and her powerful friends are Berenene's powerful ''enemies''.]]
* NoBisexuals: Averted. It's stated quite clearly that [[spoiler:Rosethorn]] likes both women and men.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Comes in the form of a "fall down the stairs" curse that [[spoiler:Ishabal uses on Tris]]. The description of the injuries and the other characters' horrified reactions to them (with the healers saying it's damn near miraculous she wasn't ''dead'') is quite disturbing.
* NoodleIncident: The four remember the time they tried alcohol. It ended with a barn being destroyed.
* NotNowKiddo: Rather "not now, homeless semi-madman". Zhegorz gets this when he tries to report the things he's hearing and seeing on the winds, as the others assume that Tris sent him with them to keep him busy [[spoiler:rather than as a genuine substitute for herself while she recovers from injuries]].
* ThePowerOfFriendship: Deconstructed; Sandry still wants it to apply, but they've grown older and had so many disparate experiences that they clash more often than not. Then it gets reconstructed.
* PrettyBoy: Berenene keeps her court filled with handsome, young, unmarried men as ornaments and prospective lovers.
* SacredHospitality: It's generally understood that men are ''not'' supposed to abduct their wives inside someone's halls, but only out in the open. Otherwise it's a deadly insult to the liege lord or lady, plus a severe embarrassment that shows they can't even protect someone in their own house.
* PrettyBoy: Berenene keeps her court filled with handsome, young, unmarried men as ornaments and prospective lovers.
* SacredHospitality: It's generally understood that men are ''not'' supposed to abduct their wives inside someone's halls, but only out in the open. Otherwise it's a deadly insult to the liege lord or lady, plus a severe embarrassment that shows they can't even protect someone in their own house.
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* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The nice map at the front of the book labels the Canyon Inn as the place where Shan ambushes Sandry's group, which leads directly to the climax of the book. Not only were many fans displeased, there was absolutely no reason to add this excess info to the map.
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* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: SmugSnake: Finlach. He's terribly smug when he abducts Sandry and tells her all about how she's going to give him an heir and that the Namornese know how to handle mage-wives, but he didn't reckon on her friends.
* StandardRoyalCourt: Empress Berenene rules hers with an iron fist, though she piles on the decadence and parties and amusements all she can. Ishabal Ladyhammer does triple-duty as her chief mage, head of her armies, and chief adviser.
* StaircaseTumble: Empress Berenene takes out Tris by having Ishabal magically causing Tris to fall down the stairs in a way that will seriously injure her without actually killing her.
* TailorMadePrison: Apparently this is standard practice in Namorn when a man kidnaps a mage for his bride. Sandry winds up in a box filled with magic runes that unravel her power. (Fortunately, her abductor didn't realize that she had some non-thread magic from her link with her friends.)
** Later, when Sandry is freed and demands justice from the Empress, the latter orders that the mage responsible be arrested and placed into "a cell for wizards". Those presumably can block a wide range of magic powers.
* TakeThat: Near the end, Sandry complains about the way men, in general, treat Namornese women (i.e. as property) after freeing Gudruny from an abusive forced marriage and escaping two attempts on herself. Ambros scolds her with, basically, "not all guys are like that"[[note]]a familiar refrain when women talk about sexism and worse[[/note]]. Ealaga retorts that by legally condoning this kind of misogyny, women ''have'' to assume that any man is a potential abductor and, in fact, even she and Ambros have taught their daughters this sort of caution. So instead of blaming women for resenting legally-sanctioned abuse, they should perhaps stop legally sanctioning abuse and thus remove the root cause of that resentment.
* TantrumThrowing:
** After Daja finds out her love interest isn't going to come with her when they leave Namorn, she locks herself up in her room, crying. Tris comes in to yell at her for tossing a fit and snapping at Zhegorz and Daja throws a dish at her, which Tris ducks away from. The next thing Daja throws, Tris bats away with her wind magic.
** After she is [[spoiler:kidnapped and nearly forced into marriage]], Sandry is understandably distraught. She's perfectly within her rights to be angry at the kidnapper, at the empress, and at the entire custom; what's ''not'' alright is the temper tantrum she throws at Daja for not coming to her rescue (she was having sexy-times, so had blocked off her mind), or angrily insinuating Rizu was in-on-it.
* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted, although with varying degrees of success.
** Daja first mmet Zhegorz in the psych wing of a Namornese hospital, so mental health care exists — but in this case the treatment was likely making Zhegorz worse rather than better, since they misunderstood a major cause of his distress.
** After seeing how afflicted Briar has become when the foster-siblings reunite, Tris insists on Briar seeing a "mind healer" for his PTSD.
* TitleDrop: "Will of the empress" is dropped word for word twice, with "her will" and "imperial will" several more times.
* TooDumbToLive: Everyone trying to kidnap Sandry. Let's face it, even if they managed to keep ''her'' magic bound, they'd still have to spend the rest of their lives fearing metal, plants… and also [[EverythingTryingToKillYou air, water, and ground]].
* TrailersAlwaysSpoil:
** The nice map at the front of the book labels the Canyon Inn as the place where Shan ambushes Sandry's group, which leads directly to the climax of the book. Not only were many fans displeased, there was absolutely no reason to add this excess info to themap.map.
** The Booklist summary on the Amazon.com page for ''Empress'' revealed the plot twist that Daja likes girls. Surprise!
* VictimBlaming: Empress Berenene's attitude towards forced marriage is that if a girl "really" doesn't want it, she should just escape. After all, Berenene herself escaped two times, how hard can it be? Of course, she's conveniently ignoring that ''royalty'' is sure going to be treated a lot better and tied up less tightly than a poor peasant girl whose family doesn't have two coppers to their name.
* StandardRoyalCourt: Empress Berenene rules hers with an iron fist, though she piles on the decadence and parties and amusements all she can. Ishabal Ladyhammer does triple-duty as her chief mage, head of her armies, and chief adviser.
* StaircaseTumble: Empress Berenene takes out Tris by having Ishabal magically causing Tris to fall down the stairs in a way that will seriously injure her without actually killing her.
* TailorMadePrison: Apparently this is standard practice in Namorn when a man kidnaps a mage for his bride. Sandry winds up in a box filled with magic runes that unravel her power. (Fortunately, her abductor didn't realize that she had some non-thread magic from her link with her friends.)
** Later, when Sandry is freed and demands justice from the Empress, the latter orders that the mage responsible be arrested and placed into "a cell for wizards". Those presumably can block a wide range of magic powers.
* TakeThat: Near the end, Sandry complains about the way men, in general, treat Namornese women (i.e. as property) after freeing Gudruny from an abusive forced marriage and escaping two attempts on herself. Ambros scolds her with, basically, "not all guys are like that"[[note]]a familiar refrain when women talk about sexism and worse[[/note]]. Ealaga retorts that by legally condoning this kind of misogyny, women ''have'' to assume that any man is a potential abductor and, in fact, even she and Ambros have taught their daughters this sort of caution. So instead of blaming women for resenting legally-sanctioned abuse, they should perhaps stop legally sanctioning abuse and thus remove the root cause of that resentment.
* TantrumThrowing:
** After Daja finds out her love interest isn't going to come with her when they leave Namorn, she locks herself up in her room, crying. Tris comes in to yell at her for tossing a fit and snapping at Zhegorz and Daja throws a dish at her, which Tris ducks away from. The next thing Daja throws, Tris bats away with her wind magic.
** After she is [[spoiler:kidnapped and nearly forced into marriage]], Sandry is understandably distraught. She's perfectly within her rights to be angry at the kidnapper, at the empress, and at the entire custom; what's ''not'' alright is the temper tantrum she throws at Daja for not coming to her rescue (she was having sexy-times, so had blocked off her mind), or angrily insinuating Rizu was in-on-it.
* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted, although with varying degrees of success.
** Daja first mmet Zhegorz in the psych wing of a Namornese hospital, so mental health care exists — but in this case the treatment was likely making Zhegorz worse rather than better, since they misunderstood a major cause of his distress.
** After seeing how afflicted Briar has become when the foster-siblings reunite, Tris insists on Briar seeing a "mind healer" for his PTSD.
* TitleDrop: "Will of the empress" is dropped word for word twice, with "her will" and "imperial will" several more times.
* TooDumbToLive: Everyone trying to kidnap Sandry. Let's face it, even if they managed to keep ''her'' magic bound, they'd still have to spend the rest of their lives fearing metal, plants… and also [[EverythingTryingToKillYou air, water, and ground]].
* TrailersAlwaysSpoil:
** The nice map at the front of the book labels the Canyon Inn as the place where Shan ambushes Sandry's group, which leads directly to the climax of the book. Not only were many fans displeased, there was absolutely no reason to add this excess info to the
** The Booklist summary on the Amazon.com page for ''Empress'' revealed the plot twist that Daja likes girls. Surprise!
* VictimBlaming: Empress Berenene's attitude towards forced marriage is that if a girl "really" doesn't want it, she should just escape. After all, Berenene herself escaped two times, how hard can it be? Of course, she's conveniently ignoring that ''royalty'' is sure going to be treated a lot better and tied up less tightly than a poor peasant girl whose family doesn't have two coppers to their name.
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* AbductionIsLove: It's a Namornese tradition to kidnap women in order to marry them, which Sandry is horrified to learn about. It ''started'' as a mutual agreement for young couples trying who wanted to marry but faced parental disapproval, or a way to "spice up" marriage vows, but has since become quite ugly. A lot of men are sure their new wives will come around eventually, but of course many ''don't''. When she was a princess, Berenene escaped from would-be abductors, and is noted to be unsympathetic to unwilling brides who didn't escape like she did. Sandry foils one abduction attempt by magically disrobing the perpetrators. Later on, when Shan and Fin kidnap her... it ends badly. For them.
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* AbductionIsLove: It's a Namornese tradition to kidnap women in order to marry them, which Sandry is horrified to learn about. It ''started'' as a mutual agreement for young couples trying who wanted to marry but faced parental disapproval, or a way to "spice up" marriage vows, but has since become quite ugly. A lot of men are sure their new wives will come around eventually, but of course many ''don't''. When she was a princess, Berenene escaped from would-be abductors, and is noted to be unsympathetic to unwilling brides who didn't escape like she did. Sandry foils one abduction attempt by magically disrobing the perpetrators. Later on, when Shan and Fin kidnap her... it ends badly. For them.
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''The Will of the Empress'' is the ninth book in Creator/TamoraPierce's ''Literature/{{Circleverse}}'', and the first not to be part of a subseries. It was first published in 2005.
The four protagonists have been apart for years, as Briar, Tris and Daja went on long journeys with their teachers while Sandry stayed in Summersea. However, their long time apart and the things they have experienced mean they find themselves arguing, unable to reconnect like they all expected.
Sandry has been invited to Namorn by her cousin, Empress Berenene, to visit the imperial court and the estates she has long avoided. Her great-uncle, Duke Vedris, suggests she take her friends with her, so they will have time to reforge their bond. But the four are walking into a trap: Berenene wants their powerful magic bent to her service, and is willing to do whatever it takes to keep them there.
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!!Tropes:
* AbdicateTheThrone: In a non-royal variant, Sandry signs over the Landreg estates and title to her cousin Ambros, who had already been looking after them anyway, so Berenene has no more control over her.
* AbductionIsLove: It's a Namornese tradition to kidnap women in order to marry them, which Sandry is horrified to learn about. It ''started'' as a mutual agreement for young couples trying who wanted to marry but faced parental disapproval, or a way to "spice up" marriage vows, but has since become quite ugly. A lot of men are sure their new wives will come around eventually, but of course many ''don't''. When she was a princess, Berenene escaped from would-be abductors, and is noted to be unsympathetic to unwilling brides who didn't escape like she did. Sandry foils one abduction attempt by magically disrobing the perpetrators. Later on, when Shan and Fin kidnap her... it ends badly. For them.
* BadassInDistress: As previously noted, Sandry (a powerful mage) is kidnapped by Shan and Fin with the intent to force her to marry one of them. Thanks to her magical bond with her foster siblings, the others are able to come to her rescue.
* TheBusCameBack: Zhegorz Fiavrus, who first appeared as the unnamed mental patient who helped Daja evacuate other mental patients during the hospital fire in ''[[Literature/TheCircleOpens Cold Fire]]'', makes a surprise return in this book and plays a major role.
* ButchLesbian: Daja, the muscular blacksmith and least traditionally feminine of the girls, discovers she's gay when she gets into a brief relationship with Rizu.
* DomesticAbuse: At Landreg, Sandry takes in and hires as her maid a woman, Gudruny, who had fled with her children from her abusive husband. Sandry then uses her authority as ''clehame'' to dissolve the marriage when the husband arrives.
* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Empress Berenene ''seems'' charming, but is a ruthless monarch who is happy to subjugate others to her will.
* GogglesDoSomethingUnusual: Tris has taken to wearing dark-lensed glasses to give her some relief from the images she sees on the wind. Later, Zhegorz gets a pair of living metal glasses and earplugs that do the same for him.
* NoTimeToExplain: On the journey north, while the protagonists and the Trader caravan they're travelling with are fording a river, Tris suddenly starts using lighting to harry everyone into crossing and getting out of the valley they're in as soon as possible. Why? Because she was scrying on the wind and saw the dam upstream collapse.
* PowerIncontinence: It turns out that Zhegorz can see and hear things on the wind. Because of how rare a power this is, it's speculated to be why he was committed to an asylum in the first place.
* PowerNullifier: When Shan and Fin abduct Sandry, they lock her in a box designed to prevent her from using her magic, which they got from Fin's mage uncle. However, it ''doesn't'' nullify Sandry's magical bond with her foster siblings, which allows her to alert them to her situation so they can come rescue her.
* ShellShockedVeteran: While travelling in the east, Briar (along with Rosethorn and Evvy) got caught in a war between Gyongxe and Yanjing. A major part of his issues in the book is remaining trauma from that war.
* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The nice map at the front of the book labels the Canyon Inn as the place where Shan ambushes Sandry's group, which leads directly to the climax of the book. Not only were many fans displeased, there was absolutely no reason to add this excess info to the map.
* TheXOfY: ''The Will '''of''' the Empress''.
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The four protagonists have been apart for years, as Briar, Tris and Daja went on long journeys with their teachers while Sandry stayed in Summersea. However, their long time apart and the things they have experienced mean they find themselves arguing, unable to reconnect like they all expected.
Sandry has been invited to Namorn by her cousin, Empress Berenene, to visit the imperial court and the estates she has long avoided. Her great-uncle, Duke Vedris, suggests she take her friends with her, so they will have time to reforge their bond. But the four are walking into a trap: Berenene wants their powerful magic bent to her service, and is willing to do whatever it takes to keep them there.
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!!Tropes:
* AbdicateTheThrone: In a non-royal variant, Sandry signs over the Landreg estates and title to her cousin Ambros, who had already been looking after them anyway, so Berenene has no more control over her.
* AbductionIsLove: It's a Namornese tradition to kidnap women in order to marry them, which Sandry is horrified to learn about. It ''started'' as a mutual agreement for young couples trying who wanted to marry but faced parental disapproval, or a way to "spice up" marriage vows, but has since become quite ugly. A lot of men are sure their new wives will come around eventually, but of course many ''don't''. When she was a princess, Berenene escaped from would-be abductors, and is noted to be unsympathetic to unwilling brides who didn't escape like she did. Sandry foils one abduction attempt by magically disrobing the perpetrators. Later on, when Shan and Fin kidnap her... it ends badly. For them.
* BadassInDistress: As previously noted, Sandry (a powerful mage) is kidnapped by Shan and Fin with the intent to force her to marry one of them. Thanks to her magical bond with her foster siblings, the others are able to come to her rescue.
* TheBusCameBack: Zhegorz Fiavrus, who first appeared as the unnamed mental patient who helped Daja evacuate other mental patients during the hospital fire in ''[[Literature/TheCircleOpens Cold Fire]]'', makes a surprise return in this book and plays a major role.
* ButchLesbian: Daja, the muscular blacksmith and least traditionally feminine of the girls, discovers she's gay when she gets into a brief relationship with Rizu.
* DomesticAbuse: At Landreg, Sandry takes in and hires as her maid a woman, Gudruny, who had fled with her children from her abusive husband. Sandry then uses her authority as ''clehame'' to dissolve the marriage when the husband arrives.
* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Empress Berenene ''seems'' charming, but is a ruthless monarch who is happy to subjugate others to her will.
* GogglesDoSomethingUnusual: Tris has taken to wearing dark-lensed glasses to give her some relief from the images she sees on the wind. Later, Zhegorz gets a pair of living metal glasses and earplugs that do the same for him.
* NoTimeToExplain: On the journey north, while the protagonists and the Trader caravan they're travelling with are fording a river, Tris suddenly starts using lighting to harry everyone into crossing and getting out of the valley they're in as soon as possible. Why? Because she was scrying on the wind and saw the dam upstream collapse.
* PowerIncontinence: It turns out that Zhegorz can see and hear things on the wind. Because of how rare a power this is, it's speculated to be why he was committed to an asylum in the first place.
* PowerNullifier: When Shan and Fin abduct Sandry, they lock her in a box designed to prevent her from using her magic, which they got from Fin's mage uncle. However, it ''doesn't'' nullify Sandry's magical bond with her foster siblings, which allows her to alert them to her situation so they can come rescue her.
* ShellShockedVeteran: While travelling in the east, Briar (along with Rosethorn and Evvy) got caught in a war between Gyongxe and Yanjing. A major part of his issues in the book is remaining trauma from that war.
* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The nice map at the front of the book labels the Canyon Inn as the place where Shan ambushes Sandry's group, which leads directly to the climax of the book. Not only were many fans displeased, there was absolutely no reason to add this excess info to the map.
* TheXOfY: ''The Will '''of''' the Empress''.
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