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* KillEmAll: Everyone in town dies while trying to kill Edwin the 4th.
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[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3321843/1/The-Once-Peaceful-Village The Once Peaceful Village]] is a short story by Tropers/{{Therealjackieboy}} (also the author of Literature/FindingHope).
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* BigBad: King Edwin the 4th.
** TheDragon: Sir Edgar Skrave.
** TheDragon: Sir Edgar Skrave.
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* ForTheEvulz: When he's bored, Edgar would often sneak out of the village and kill thieves to steal some money.
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* NoNameGiven: The lone, one armed survivor who manages to kill both Edgar and Edwin.
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* LaResistance: An entire town composes one.
* TheSociopath: King Edwin the 4th, who doesn't care about his village.
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* WouldHurtAChild: It's implied that Edgar has killed children if the head of the family doesn't have enough money for taxes.
** Edwin's also not afraid to send children to be tortured instead of Edgar whenever the latter comes back with stolen treasure.
** Edwin's also not afraid to send children to be tortured instead of Edgar whenever the latter comes back with stolen treasure.
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** It's implied that Edgar has killed children if the head of the family doesn't have enough money for taxes.
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* AintToProudToBeg: Edwin is not afraid to start begging once he's cornered.
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* AintToProudToBeg: AintTooProudToBeg: Edwin is not afraid to start begging once he's cornered.
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* AintToProudToBeg: Edwin is not afraid to start begging once he's cornered.
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* TheHedonist: King Edwin the 4th would usually spend the village's money on wigs and clothes rather than actual help the village improve.
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* ForTheEvulz: When he's bored, Edgar would often sneak out of the village and kill thieves to steal some money.
* TheHedonist: King Edwin the 4th would usually spend the village's money onwigs wigs, clothes, and clothes other things that make him happy rather than actual help the village improve.improve.
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Edwin would often slap Edgar for stealing money from bloodthirsty warriors and sending someone in his place to be tortured... mainly because Edgar got caught, and Edwin sees him as getting sloppy.
* TheHedonist: King Edwin the 4th would usually spend the village's money on
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Edwin would often slap Edgar for stealing money from bloodthirsty warriors and sending someone in his place to be tortured... mainly because Edgar got caught, and Edwin sees him as getting sloppy.
* LaResistance: An entire town composes one.
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* VillainousGlutton: Subverted. While King Edwin the 4th usually has a 12-course meal everyday, he barely eats it at all, forcing his wife to eat it.
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* VillainousGlutton: Subverted. While King Edwin the 4th usually has a 12-course meal everyday, he barely eats it at all, forcing his wife to eat it.it.
* VillainProtagonist: The first half of the story follows Edwin and Edgar's routine of leading the village before jumping to the townsfolk's perspective in the second half.
* WouldHurtAChild: It's implied that Edgar has killed children if the head of the family doesn't have enough money for taxes.
** Edwin's also not afraid to send children to be tortured instead of Edgar whenever the latter comes back with stolen treasure.
* VillainProtagonist: The first half of the story follows Edwin and Edgar's routine of leading the village before jumping to the townsfolk's perspective in the second half.
* WouldHurtAChild: It's implied that Edgar has killed children if the head of the family doesn't have enough money for taxes.
** Edwin's also not afraid to send children to be tortured instead of Edgar whenever the latter comes back with stolen treasure.
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[[http://therealjackieboy.deviantart.com/art/The-Once-Peaceful-Village-634204936 The Once Peaceful Village]] is a short story by Tropers/{{Therealjackieboy}} (also the author of Literature/FindingHope).
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The story can be found [[http://therealjackieboy.deviantart.com/art/The-Once-Peaceful-Village-634204936 here]].
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* BittersweetEnding: Edwin the 4th is slain, but at the cost of everyone in town. However, a couple managed to come across the village, starting another civilization with a better ruler.
* ChubbyChaser: Implied with King Edwin the 4th, who constantly feeds his new wife a 12-course meal every day becoming fat in the process.
* DirtyCoward: When cornered by the lone survivor, Edwin promises that he can change if she were to spare him.
* FedToPigs: If Sir Edgar were to kill a villager, he would then feed their body to the pigs as a way to get rid of it.
* TheHedonist: King Edwin the 4th would usually spend the village's money on wigs and clothes rather than actual help the village improve.
* ChubbyChaser: Implied with King Edwin the 4th, who constantly feeds his new wife a 12-course meal every day becoming fat in the process.
* DirtyCoward: When cornered by the lone survivor, Edwin promises that he can change if she were to spare him.
* FedToPigs: If Sir Edgar were to kill a villager, he would then feed their body to the pigs as a way to get rid of it.
* TheHedonist: King Edwin the 4th would usually spend the village's money on wigs and clothes rather than actual help the village improve.
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* TheSociopath: King Edwin the 4th, who doesn't care about his village.
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* NoNameGiven: The lone, one armed survivor who manages to kill both Edgar and Edwin.
* OffWithHisHead: What Sir Edgar does to villagers who don't have enough money in order to live.
* TheSociopath: King Edwin the 4th, who doesn't care about hisvillage.village.
* VillainousGlutton: Subverted. While King Edwin the 4th usually has a 12-course meal everyday, he barely eats it at all, forcing his wife to eat it.
* OffWithHisHead: What Sir Edgar does to villagers who don't have enough money in order to live.
* TheSociopath: King Edwin the 4th, who doesn't care about his
* VillainousGlutton: Subverted. While King Edwin the 4th usually has a 12-course meal everyday, he barely eats it at all, forcing his wife to eat it.
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* BigBad: King Edwin the 4th.
** TheDragon: Sir Edgar Skrave.
* KillEmAll: Everyone in town dies while trying to kill Edwin the 4th.
** TheDragon: Sir Edgar Skrave.
* KillEmAll: Everyone in town dies while trying to kill Edwin the 4th.
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[[http://therealjackieboy.deviantart.com/art/The-Once-Peaceful-Village-634204936 The Once Peaceful Village]] is a short story by Tropers/{{Therealjackieboy}} (also the author of Literature/FindingHope).
Once upon a time, there was a peaceful village. One that was ruled by a great king, King Edwin the 3rd. One day, he was murdered by his son, Edwin the 4th, wanting his power. Edwin the 4th rules the kingdom with an iron fist, creating terrible rules and letting his sadistic knight have fun with them. Until one day, the town just can't take it anymore. A mob ensues.
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*TheSociopath: King Edwin the 4th, who doesn't care about his village.
Once upon a time, there was a peaceful village. One that was ruled by a great king, King Edwin the 3rd. One day, he was murdered by his son, Edwin the 4th, wanting his power. Edwin the 4th rules the kingdom with an iron fist, creating terrible rules and letting his sadistic knight have fun with them. Until one day, the town just can't take it anymore. A mob ensues.
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!!This story provides examples of:
*TheSociopath: King Edwin the 4th, who doesn't care about his village.
