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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: It's a bit hard to talk about ''Raven Stratagem'' without mentioning that ''Ninefox Gambit'' ends with [[spoiler:Jedao seemingly dead, and Cheris possibly possessed by his consciousness.]]

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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: FirstEpisodeTwist: It's a bit hard to talk about ''Raven Stratagem'' without mentioning that ''Ninefox Gambit'' ends with [[spoiler:Jedao seemingly dead, and Cheris possibly possessed by his consciousness.]]
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* HealingFactor: Throughout ''Glass Cannon'', [[spoiler: Jedao Two's alien biology [[ExploitedTropeis repeatedly abused]] to BlackComedy levels.]]


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* OhCrap: Combined with InternalReveal and PrecisionFStrike at the end of ''Glass Cannon.'' [[spoiler: When informed that the moth ships are sentient and may be planning their own rebellion, Mikodez can only respond that "We are fucked."]]


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* SplitPeronsalityMerge: In ''Glass Cannon'', [[spoiler: Cheris successfully transfers Jedao's memories to Jedao Two, for all intents and purposes recreating the original Jedao.]]
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''The Machineries of Empire'' is a military ScienceFantasy trilogy by Yoon Ha Lee.

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''The Machineries of Empire'' is a military [[MilitaryScienceFiction military]] ScienceFantasy trilogy by Yoon Ha Lee.

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* SuddenlyVoiced: Brezan is mildly freaked out when one of the Andan servitors suddenly speaks in human words, as he's used to them communicating by machine whirrs and bleeps.

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* SuddenlyVoiced: SuddenlySpeaking: Brezan is mildly freaked out when one of the Andan servitors suddenly speaks in human words, as he's used to them communicating by machine whirrs and bleeps.
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* EqualOpportunityEvil: Despite all the negative aspects of its society, the Hexarchate is notably free of gender-discrimination and homophobia, with men, women, and non-binary people all having representation in the leadership and widespread same-gender relationships with no social disapproval. There is still some lingering bigotry against binary trans people, but even this is depicted as limited to particularly old-fashioned circles.

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* EqualOpportunityEvil: Despite all the negative aspects of its society, the Hexarchate is notably free of gender-discrimination and homophobia, with men, women, and non-binary people all having representation in the leadership and widespread same-gender relationships with no social disapproval. There is still some lingering bigotry against binary trans people, people and body modification, but even this is depicted as limited to particularly old-fashioned circles.
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* YourDaysAreNumbered: The Vrae Tala clause. [[spoiler:It allows a Kel to shut down their own formation instinct, so they can use their own initiative in situations where blindly obeying orders would lead to disaster, but kills them exactly one hundred days after it's activated so they don't just go rogue whenever.]]

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* YourDaysAreNumbered: The Vrae Tala clause. [[spoiler:It allows a Kel to shut down their own formation instinct, so they can use their own initiative in situations where blindly obeying orders would lead to disaster, but kills them exactly one hundred days after it's activated so they don't to keep them from just go going rogue whenever.]]
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* YourDaysAreNumbered: The Vrae Tala clause. [[spoiler:It allows a Kel to shut down formation instinct, but kills them exactly one hundred days after it's activated.]]

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* YourDaysAreNumbered: The Vrae Tala clause. [[spoiler:It allows a Kel to shut down their own formation instinct, so they can use their own initiative in situations where blindly obeying orders would lead to disaster, but kills them exactly one hundred days after it's activated.activated so they don't just go rogue whenever.]]

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* AboveTheInfluence: While the formation instinct would basically force Khiruev to have sex with Jedao, should he order her to, and he's definitely attracted to her, he manages to restrain himself.

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* AboveTheInfluence: While the Jedao is quite attracted to Khiruev, but since formation instinct would basically force Khiruev removes her ability to have sex consent, he restrains himself. [[spoiler: Unfortuantely, after she frees herself with Jedao, should he order her to, and he's definitely attracted the Vrae Tala clause, she's too ill from the side effects to her, he manages do anything about it.]]
** In general, the temptation
to restrain himself.avert this is the main reason that fraternization between Kel soldiers is punishable by execution.



** Continued in ''Raven Strategem'', with action scenes broken up by the interplay between Jedao and Khiruev.



* AmbiguouslyEvil: Shuos Jedao. He claims he doesn't remember much of what happened at Hellspin and that it's currently presumed he had some sort of psychotic break. He seems genuinely regretful for his past actions and is willing to help Cheris and serve the Hexarchate. On the other hand, years of investigation found no issues or problems in his mind, and everyone "in the know" is certain he cannot be trusted.

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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Shuos Jedao. He claims he doesn't remember much of what happened at Hellspin Fortress and that it's currently presumed he had some sort of psychotic break. He seems genuinely regretful for his past actions and is willing to help Cheris and serve the Hexarchate. On the other hand, years of investigation found no issues or problems in his mind, and everyone "in the know" is certain he cannot be trusted. [[spoiler: Becomes more like WellIntentionedExtremist once we learn more about Jedao's plans to rebel against the Hexarchate.]]
** Shuos Mikodez presents himself like this on purpose, using things like the regrettable execution of two Shuos cadets for heresy as a way to improve his reputation for ruthlessness and unpredictability.



** Likewise, [[spoiler: exactly how much of Cheris remains alive and in control]] is left ambiguous both in- and out-of-universe for most of ''Raven Stratagem''.



* TheAtoner: Jedao tells Khiruev that he's defending the Hexarchate from the Hafn because he wants to atone for his actions at Hellspin, though he doesn't expect - nor desire - actual forgiveness. [[spoiler:Enforced, as Nirai Kujen did [[{{Brainwashed}} psych surgery]] on him to turn his guilt into a desire for atonement]]

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* TheAtoner: Jedao tells Khiruev that he's defending the Hexarchate from the Hafn because he wants to atone for his actions at Hellspin, though he doesn't expect - nor desire - actual forgiveness. [[spoiler:Enforced, as Nirai Kujen did [[{{Brainwashed}} psych surgery]] on him to turn his guilt into a desire for atonement]]atonement.]] Also subverted, as [[spoiler:Jedao is gone save for remnant memories at this point, and it's Cheris imitating him.]]



* BatmanGambit: Jedao's master plan. [[spoiler:He used his military genius to become a hero, then murdered everyone in Hellspin fortress knowing that he'll be executed for it, but also knowing that the Kel Command will not let his genius go to waste. This would mean that they'd put him in the black cradle, and that he'll be called out of it whenever a Hexarchate-threatening crisis arises. This in turn would allow him to wait for the perfect moment to ''overthrow'' the Hexarchate.]]

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* BatmanGambit: Jedao's master plan. [[spoiler:He used his military genius to become a hero, then murdered everyone in Hellspin fortress knowing that he'll he'd be executed for it, but also knowing guessed that the Kel Command will not wouldn't want to let his genius go to waste. This would mean that Instead, they'd put "punish" Jedao by installing him in the black cradle, and that he'll Black Cradle, to be called out of it back up whenever a Hexarchate-threatening crisis arises. This in turn would allow arose...giving him the ability to wait for the perfect moment to ''overthrow'' destroy the Hexarchate.]]



* BavarianFireDrill: [[spoiler:Jedao]] takes over the Swanknot swarm by waltzing aboard under the pretense of being sent there by the Kel Command and then pulling rank on everyone present.

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* BavarianFireDrill: [[spoiler:Jedao]] takes over the Swanknot swarm in ''Raven Strategem'' by waltzing aboard under the pretense of being sent there by the Kel Command and then pulling rank on everyone present.present.
** Intensified by the fact that [[spoiler:It's not Jedao doing it at all, and instead Cheris imitating him.]]



* BeneathNotice: The servitors see many things because no one pays attention to them. They also make excellent infiltrators. [[spoiler:One of them kills the skilled assassin Vahenz, who was not thinking of threats from that quarter. In the second book, Cheris recruits a large number of them to act as spies and assassins for her.]]

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* BeneathNotice: The servitors see many things because no one pays attention to them. They also make excellent infiltrators. [[spoiler:One of them kills the skilled assassin Vahenz, who was not thinking of threats from that quarter. In the second book, Cheris recruits a large number of them to act as spies spies, assassins, and assassins even soldiers for her.]]



* BodyDouble: Mikodez's siblings have all been modded (up to and including sex change) to be his body doubles, a job that mostly consists of them sitting at meetings and making visits Mikodez himself doesn't have time or patience for.

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* BodyDouble: Mikodez's siblings have all creche-sibling has been modded (up to and including a sex change) to be his body doubles, double, a job that mostly consists of them sitting at meetings and making visits Mikodez himself doesn't have time or patience for.



* BrotherSisterIncest: Mikodez and his brother Istradez are lovers. Their parents know about it and don't even mind, reasoning that their two most energetic children might just as well keep themselves occupied.

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* BrotherSisterIncest: Mikodez and his brother (formerly sister) Istradez are lovers. Their parents know about it and don't even mind, reasoning that their two most energetic children might just as well keep themselves occupied. Averted, to a degree, because parenthood and genetic inheritance are no longer tied together in the Hexarchate, to the point that their language no longer acknowledges the concept.



* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: Kel Command would much rather terminate Jedao, but he's too brilliant to throw away.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: To win, Cheris often has to commit terrible atrocities and send thousands of people to her death. Even though she knows, emotionally, that this is the right thing to do, it weights heavily on her.

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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: Kel Command would much rather terminate Jedao, but he's too brilliant to throw away.
away. [[spoiler:Exactly as Jedao intended.]]
* TheChainsOfCommanding: To win, Cheris and Jedao often has have to commit terrible atrocities and send thousands of people to her death. Even though she knows, emotionally, that this is the right thing their deaths. Despite their commitment to do, their cause, it weights weighs heavily on her.both of them.
** Mikodez also often struggles with the burden, and cost, of being the most stable Shuos Hexarch in decades. [[spoiler:Up to and including sacrificing their beloved sibling.]]



* CruelTwistEnding: Downplayed; [[spoiler:at the end of ''Ninefox Gambit'', the Fortress of Scattered Needles is conquered and Cheris breathes a sigh of relief that she'll finally be rid of Jedao and her life will return to some semblance of normality, only for Kel Command to send a fleet and kill everyone in an attempt to get rid of the undead general once and for all. Cheris is the only survivor and she ends up possessed by Jedao.]]
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Jedao has a few events in his past that messed him up badly, like [[spoiler:his superior raping him (with everyone knowing what happened), him and his fellow agent being bombed by their own allies and the Hellspin Massacre.]]
* DeadlyPrank: In the Shuos academy, Jedao's contribution to the game competition was a game based around breaking rules. One of his friends ended up getting caught by a Doctrine official, while yet another claimed that she was the one to create the game, and both were grievously punished.
* DeadpanSnarker: Most of the cast. The unnamed Nirai wraith who helps Cheris get used to having another mind in her head and keeps and eye on Jedao is particularly snarky towards the undead general.

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* CruelTwistEnding: Downplayed; [[spoiler:at the end of ''Ninefox Gambit'', the Fortress of Scattered Needles is conquered and Cheris breathes a sigh of relief that she'll finally be rid of Jedao and her life will return to some semblance of normality, only for Kel Command to send a fleet and kill everyone in an attempt to get rid of the undead general once and for all. Cheris is the only survivor and she ends up possessed by Jedao.having to ingest Jedao's memories to keep his cause alive.]]
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Jedao has a few events in his past that messed him up badly, like [[spoiler:his superior raping him (with everyone knowing what happened), or him and his fellow agent being bombed by their own allies and allies, or the Hellspin Massacre.]]
* DeadlyPrank: In the Shuos academy, Jedao's contribution to the game competition was a game based around breaking rules.committing minor heresy. One of his friends ended up getting caught by a Doctrine official, while yet another claimed that she was the one to create the game, and both were grievously punished.
* DeadpanSnarker: Most of the cast. The unnamed Nirai wraith who helps Cheris get used to having another mind in her head and keeps and eye on Jedao is particularly snarky towards the undead general. [[spoiler:Which makes sense, as it's probably Kujen.]]



** In the same book, it turns out that [[spoiler:Jedao has actually died at the end of ''Ninefox Gambit'', shielding Cheris from an exotic weapon, and it's Cheris who's been pretending to be Jedao all along, aided by having all of his memories.]]

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** In the same book, it turns out that [[spoiler:Jedao has actually died at the end of ''Ninefox Gambit'', Gambit'' shielding Cheris from an exotic weapon, and it's Cheris who's been pretending to be Jedao all along, aided by having all of his memories.]]



** The Kel culture values martyrdom and total obedience and brainwashing is considered par for the course.
** Polygamy is perfectly normal, as are non-standard sexualities and gender identities.

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** The Kel culture values martyrdom and total obedience obedience, and brainwashing recruits is considered par for the course.standard practice.
** Polygamy is perfectly normal, as are non-standard sexualities and gender identities. identities.
** Mikodez frequently sleeps with his creche-sibling, who has had their gender and appearance altered to match his. Nobody considers this more than "somewhat eccentric."



* DemonicPossession: [[spoiler:Shuos Jedao's mind takes over Cheris's at the end of the first book, though she retains some of her identity and name.]]

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* DemonicPossession: [[spoiler:Shuos Jedao's mind takes In ''Raven Strategem'', [[spoiler:Jedao claims to have taken over Cheris's Cheris at the end of the first book, though she retains some of her identity book. In reality, his consciousness has been destroyed, and name.Cheris is faking possession with the help of his leftover memories.]]



** ''Raven Strategem'', Jedao claims to be protecting the Hexarchate from the Hafn, while in reality he's [[spoiler:working towards the destruction of the Hexarchate.]] Subverted, in that even the people forced by formation instinct to follow him don't believe his claims. [[spoiler:Played straight in that it's Cheris channeling Jedao, and not Jedao at all.]]



** Nirai Kujen is this to anyone who knows his history and capabilities.
** Shuos Mikodez cultivates this reputation as well, as it helps prevent a Shuos-standard KlingonPromotion.



** [[spoiler:Jedao Two sees Dhanneth as having done this because of their [[QuestionableConsent affair]]

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** [[spoiler:Jedao Two sees Dhanneth as having done this because of their [[QuestionableConsent affair]]affair]] ]]



* TheEmpire: The Hexarchate is a powerful entity that enforces its calendar upon everyone, inducts nearby polities by force, if necessary, responds violently to any rebellion and tortures heretics to keep its calendar going.

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* TheEmpire: The Hexarchate is a powerful powerful, expansionist entity that enforces its calendar upon everyone, inducts nearby polities by force, if necessary, everyone in its borders, responds violently to any rebellion rebellion, and tortures heretics to keep its calendar going.



* FantasticCasteSystem: The Hexarchate government is divided into six factions: Rahal (leadership, policing, law), Nirai (technology), Andan (culture, diplomacy, finance), Vidona (doctrine, calendar, education), Shuos (espionage, sabotage, assassination) and Kel (military). While a lot of people - perhaps even the majority - don't belong to any faction, to have any career in the factions' specialties or government, you must join a faction. All factions (except for Shuos, or so they say) have their exotic effects.

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* FantasticCasteSystem: The Hexarchate government is divided into six factions: Rahal (leadership, policing, law), Nirai (technology), Andan (culture, diplomacy, finance), Vidona (doctrine, calendar, education), Shuos (espionage, sabotage, assassination) and Kel (military). While a lot of people - perhaps even the majority - don't belong to any faction, to have any career in the factions' specialties or government, you must join a faction. All factions (except for Shuos, or so they say) have their own exotic effects.



* FasterThanLightTravel: The mothdrive enables Hexarchate moths to travel between star systems. It's exotic technology.

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* FasterThanLightTravel: The mothdrive enables Hexarchate moths to travel between star systems. It's The fact that it's exotic technology.technology, and thus can't be used outside zones under the Hexarchate calendar, is part of why the Hexarchate fears and brutally punishes calendrical heresy.



* FieldPowerEffect: The Hafn calendric warfare is apparently based on drawing energy from the land, such as their homeworlds, which is why their art is focused on pastoral scenes and why [[spoiler:the Fortress of Spinshot Coins's phantom terrain ends up working against the Hexarchate - the Hafn use it to channel their power.]]

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* FieldPowerEffect: The Hafn calendric warfare is apparently based on drawing energy from the land, such as their homeworlds, which is why their art is focused on pastoral scenes and why [[spoiler:the Fortress of Spinshot Coins's phantom terrain ends up working against the Hexarchate - the Hafn can use it to channel their power.power more efficiently.]]



* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: It's a bit hard to talk about ''Raven Stratagem'' without mentioning that ''Ninefox Gambit'' ends with [[spoiler:Jedao possessing Cheris and completely taking over her body.]]
* FiveSecondForeshadowing: Near the end of ''Ninefox Gambit'', Cheris realizes that [[spoiler:the "friendly" fleet is here to destroy her ships]] just in time to start giving orders, but not in time for anyone to do what she's telling them.

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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: It's a bit hard to talk about ''Raven Stratagem'' without mentioning that ''Ninefox Gambit'' ends with [[spoiler:Jedao possessing seemingly dead, and Cheris and completely taking over her body.possibly possessed by his consciousness.]]
* FiveSecondForeshadowing: Near the end of ''Ninefox Gambit'', Cheris realizes that [[spoiler:the "friendly" fleet is here to destroy her ships]] just in time to start giving orders, but not in time for anyone to do what she's telling them. Of course, Jedao catches on first.



** The ending of ''Ninefox Gambit'' can serve as foreshadowing of the big twist of ''Raven Strategem'': [[spoiler:Jedao is, in fact, very dead, and it's been Cheris imitating him the whole time.]]



** Istradez, Shuos Mikodez's sibling, was born female, and changed gender as part of their modifications to be Mikodez's body double.



* TheGhost: Kel Command, who are responsible for putting Kel Cheris and Shuos Jedao together; they are more dangerous to Cheris than the heretics are because of how much they want Jedao to be dead and because of how incompetently they are using their army. They are a composite mind. We don't meet any of them in ''Ninefox Gambit'', but in ''Raven Stratagem'', one of them, Kel Tsoro, participates in meetings of the Hexarchs.
* {{Glamour}}: The Andan faction ability is enthrallment, which allows them to put any person of lower social status under their spell, though it grows less effective the more often it's used on any given target. It also can only be targetted at one specific person at a time, and for full effectiveness they need to know quite a lot about the target. [[spoiler:This is why Tseya fails to glamour Jedao in ''Raven Strategem'', because the person they think is Jedao is actually a mental hybrid of Cheris and Jedao with rather more Cheris.]]
* GoodWithNumbers: Cheris is practically a prodigy, and a lot of her skill in command comes from her ability to utilize the complex mathematics involved in calendrical warfare.

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* TheGhost: Kel Command, who are responsible for putting Kel Cheris and Shuos Jedao together; they are more dangerous to Cheris than the heretics are because of how much they want Jedao to be dead and because of how incompetently they are using their army. They are a composite mind. We don't meet any of them in ''Ninefox Gambit'', but in ''Raven Stratagem'', one of them, Kel Tsoro, participates in meetings of the Hexarchs.
Hexarchs. [[spoiler:By the end of the book, they're all dead.]]
* {{Glamour}}: The Andan faction ability is enthrallment, which allows them to put any person of lower social status under their spell, though it grows less effective the more often it's used on any given target. It also can only be targetted at one specific person at a time, and for full effectiveness they need to know quite a lot about the target. [[spoiler:This is why Tseya fails to glamour Jedao in ''Raven Strategem'', because the person they think is Jedao is actually a mental hybrid of Cheris and Jedao with rather more Cheris.possessing the majority of Jedao's memories.]]
* GoodWithNumbers: Cheris is practically a prodigy, math genius to the point that people are surprised she's a Kel, and a lot of her skill in command comes from her ability to utilize the complex mathematics involved in calendrical warfare.



* GreyAndGreyMorality: It's hard to say who the good guys and bad guys are. Is it the Hexarchate, TheEmpire that nonetheless leaves most of its citizens to live in peace? The heretics, who took over the Fortress of Scattered Needles but have decent intentions? Shuos Jedao, who's [[spoiler:willing to commit mass murder to destroy the Hexarchate]], but is nonetheless helpful and even friendly to Cheris?

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* GreyAndGreyMorality: It's hard to say who the good guys and bad guys are. Is it the Hexarchate, TheEmpire that nonetheless leaves most whose peace comes at the cost of its citizens to live in peace? the torture and suppression of dissidents and heretics? The heretics, who took over the Fortress of Scattered Needles but have decent intentions? Shuos Jedao, who's [[spoiler:willing to commit mass murder to destroy the Hexarchate]], but is nonetheless helpful and even friendly to Cheris?



* TheHeretic: People who want to leave the Hexarchate and stop using the High Calendar are labeled heretics and if captured, they're tortured by the Vidona to celebrate holidays.

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* TheHeretic: People who want to leave the Hexarchate and stop using the High Calendar are labeled heretics heretics, and if captured, they're tortured by the Vidona to celebrate holidays."remembrances" that power the Hexarchate calendar.



* ImmuneToMindControl: Kel Brezan is a crashhawk, meaning the formation instinct didn't take and he doesn't feel the need to slavishly obey orders of his superiors. On one hand, this allows him to oppose [[spoiler:Shuos Jedao when he utilizes the instinct to take over the Swanknot swarm]], but on the other, crashhawks are usually kicked out of Kel upon being discovered because they're considered unreliable.

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* ImmuneToMindControl: Kel Brezan is a crashhawk, meaning the formation instinct didn't take and he doesn't feel the need to slavishly obey orders of his superiors. On one hand, this allows him to oppose [[spoiler:Shuos Jedao when he utilizes the instinct to take over the Swanknot swarm]], but on the other, crashhawks are usually kicked out of Kel upon being discovered because they're considered unreliable. [[spoiler:It turns out that Kel Command is right to mistrust Brezan's loyalty.]]



* KlingonPromotion: Among the Shuos, it's considered natural that to get promoted, you have to assassinate your superior. For this reason, the position of a Shuos hexarch changes hands exceptionally often - or at least it used to until Shuos Mikodez got the job.

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* KlingonPromotion: Among the Shuos, it's considered natural that to get promoted, you have to assassinate your superior. For this reason, the position of a Shuos hexarch changes hands exceptionally often - or at least it used to to, until Shuos Mikodez got the job.



* LongGame: Jedao is playing one; [[spoiler:he's essentially tricked the Hexarchate to put him in the black cradle so that he can wait for the best moment - and the right host - to turn against it.]]
* MadScientist: Nirai Kujen, whose experiments have taken the lives of more than a few people and who often tinkers with people's minds to make them docile just because he can. He came up with the concept of the High Calendar and designed it to be based on ritual torture even though he could have chosen other ways.

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* LongGame: Jedao is playing one; [[spoiler:he's essentially tricked the Hexarchate to put into putting him in the black cradle Black Cradle so that he can wait for the best moment - and the right host - to turn against it.]]
* MadScientist: Nirai Kujen, whose experiments have taken the lives of more than a few people people, and who often tinkers with people's minds to make them docile just because he can. He came up with the concept of the High Calendar and designed it to be based on ritual torture even though he could have chosen other ways.



** Cheris takes up the mantle [[spoiler:after Jedao dies and she ingests his memories.]]



* TheMirrorShowsYourTrueSelf: When looking in a mirror, Cheris sees Jedao instead of herself.

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** Nirai Kujen practices this as a hobby, sculpting minds like others might carve clay or marble.
* TheMirrorShowsYourTrueSelf: When looking Anyone possessed by a revenant sees their possessor's face in a the mirror, Cheris sees Jedao instead of herself.their own.



** Both [[spoiler:Cheris and Jedao]] are influenced by the Hexarchate hitting this for them, in-universe.



** Mikodez really is a sociopath with morality, who maintains an overall good orientation despite his lack of morals, because he intellectually thinks that treating other people well is more effective in keeping society stable and avoiding trouble.

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** Mikodez really is a sociopath with morality, who maintains an overall good orientation despite his lack of morals, because he intellectually thinks reasons that treating other people well is more effective in keeping society stable and avoiding trouble.



** In ''Raven Strategem'', it becomes Jedao explaining to Khiruev. Occasionally Mikodez will explain things to one of his subordinates, as well.



* NoKillLikeOverkill: To make sure they [[spoiler:get rid of Jedao]] once and for all, the Kel Command [[spoiler:destroys the entire fleet.]]

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** This is how Jedao justified [[spoiler:his plan for the Hellspin Massacre]] to himself.
* NoKillLikeOverkill: To make sure they [[spoiler:get rid of Jedao]] once and for all, the Kel Command [[spoiler:destroys the entire fleet.fleet he's commanding.]]



* NonPromotion: To lead the siege of the Fortress of Scattered Needles, Cheris is given the rank of brevet general. Unfortunately, Kel formation instinct doesn't respond to brevet rank, and she has to prove herself to her subordinates the hard way.

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* NonPromotion: To lead the siege of the Fortress of Scattered Needles, Cheris is given the rank of brevet general. Unfortunately, Kel formation instinct doesn't respond as strongly to brevet rank, and she still has to prove herself to her subordinates the hard way.way.
** Averted with Kel Brezan's promotion to High General in ''Raven Stratagem'', precisely because brevet promotions don't trigger formation instinct as deeply. [[spoiler:Comes back to bite Kel Command when Brezan joins Cheris/Jedao of his own free will.]]



* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: At the end of ''Raven Stratagem'' [[spoiler:Cheris changes the calendar to make all calendric effects - including formation instinct - voluntary for the recipients, and Mikodez kills all other hexarchs. The book ends on what's very clearly the opening days of a civil war.]]

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* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: At the end of ''Raven Stratagem'' [[spoiler:Cheris changes the Hexarchate's calendar to make all calendric effects - including formation instinct - voluntary for the recipients, and Mikodez kills all other hexarchs. The book ends on what's very clearly the opening days of a civil war.]]



** Mikodez himself can't quite suppress his own sorrow and horror [[spoiler: at sending his sibling to die in a suicide attack.]]



* OurGhostsAreDifferent: Jedao is kept in the black cradle when not attached to a living human. He can't control Cheris's body and can't read her mind, but he can see in all directions at once, including watching her expression. He can talk to Cheris and is visible for her in mirrors, and his signifier replaces hers. He'll take a hit from any exotic weapon for her, and can be physically pushed into her body if she swallows wraith glass.

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* OurGhostsAreDifferent: Jedao is kept in the black cradle Black Cradle when not attached to a living human. He can't control Cheris's body and can't read her mind, but he can see in all directions at once, including watching her expression. He can talk to Cheris and is visible for her in mirrors, and his signifier replaces hers. He'll take a hit from any exotic weapon for her, and can be physically pushed into her body if she swallows wraith glass.glass.
** Nirai Kujen operates by similar principles, except that he ''can'' control his hosts, albeit with effort, and can jump to nearby hosts at will if his current host is killed.



** The High Calendar is partly dependent on torturing large numbers of heretics on holidays.

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** The High Calendar is partly dependent on torturing large numbers of heretics on holidays.holidays known as "remembrances."



** To cow Jedao and Cheris into submission, the Hexarchs threaten to purge the Mwennin, a minority to which the latter belongs (Jedao's own Shparoi are long gone by this point). [[spoiler:As Cheris's mind is dead at this point, Jedao refuses to let it cow him and they follow through with the threat, with less than a few thousand Mwenning managing to escape the ensuing genocide.]]

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** To cow Jedao and Cheris into submission, the Hexarchs threaten to purge the Mwennin, a minority to which the latter belongs (Jedao's own Shparoi are long gone by this point). [[spoiler:As Cheris's mind is dead at this point, Jedao [[spoiler:Jedao refuses to let it cow him and they follow through with the threat, with less than a few thousand Mwenning managing to escape the ensuing genocide.genocide. Subverted when it's revealed that "Jedao" was Cheris the entire time, and she allowed the sacrifice knowingly.]]



* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Nirai Kujen is, famously, the only man in Hexarchate who managed to achieve immortality using the calendar. He's a prominent character in Jedao's backstory, which happened several hundred years ago, and he's still the Nirai hexarch. Oh, and he still appears to be in the prime of his youth.

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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Nirai Kujen is, famously, the only man in Hexarchate who managed to achieve immortality using the calendar. He's a prominent character in Jedao's backstory, which happened several hundred years ago, and he's still the Nirai hexarch. Oh, and he still appears to be in the prime of his youth. [[spoiler:Easy enough to achieve, when you're a revenant body-surfing different hosts all the time.]]



** Jedao is revealed to be [[spoiler:Cheris pulling off a very detailed imitation, when she uses her genius-level math skills to alter the Hexarchate's calendar on a fundamental level.]]



** Jedao suffers this at the hands of Heptarch Shuos Khiaz, through the more mundane means of coercion and power differential.



* SuicideAttack: [[spoiler:Mikodez kills the other hexarchs by sending his own brother Istradez to blow himself up, although Istradez volunteered.]]

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* SuicideAttack: [[spoiler:Mikodez kills the other hexarchs by sending his own brother Istradez to blow himself up, although Istradez volunteered.volunteers for the duty.]]



** Played more straight with Kujen and his hosts, because of his greater ability to control them.



* TraumaInducedAmnesia: Jedao has only snippets and flashes of memories from the Hellspin Massacre as a result of what he did there.

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* TraumaInducedAmnesia: Jedao has only snippets and flashes of memories from the Hellspin Massacre as a result of what he did there. [[spoiler:Supposedly.]]



** ''Raven Strategem'' has chapters from the perspectives of Hexarchs Mikodez and Kujen, though Mikodez is more AmbiguouslyEvil.



** Exposure to the Heptarchy's constant wars of suppression and expansion are what drove Jedao to [[spoiler:his long-term plans for the Heptarchy's overthrow, leading the slaughter at Hellspin Fortress.]]
** The same slow grind is what eventually drives [[spoiler:Cheris, Khiruev, and Brezan to side against the Hexarchy, and even influences Mikodez's scheming against the other Hexarchs.]]



* WithFriendsLikeThese: The various factions of the Hexarchate are always infighting, and the Kel Command is almost as dangerous to Cheris as the heretics in the Fortress of Scattered Needles are, if not more so.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:When Cheris, Jedao and their fleet retake the Fortress, the Kel Command shows up to execute them.]] Interestingly, it's implied heavily that [[spoiler:Nirai Kujen]] had a hand in arranging this because he was attempting to strike before his co-conspirator could do this to ''him'', as [[spoiler:with Cheris's mathematical skill, Jedao doesn't need him any more.]]

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* WithFriendsLikeThese: The various factions of the Hexarchate are always infighting, and the Kel Command is almost as dangerous to Cheris as the heretics in the Fortress of Scattered Needles are, if not more so.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:When Cheris, Jedao and their fleet retake the Fortress, the Kel Command shows up sends another fleet to execute them.]] Interestingly, it's implied heavily that [[spoiler:Nirai Kujen]] had a hand in arranging this because he was attempting to strike before his co-conspirator could do this to ''him'', as [[spoiler:with Cheris's mathematical skill, Jedao doesn't need him any more.]]



* ZeroApprovalGambit: [[spoiler:Jedao deliberately massacred his people at Hellspin so that he'd be executed and put in the black cradle.]]

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* ZeroApprovalGambit: [[spoiler:Jedao deliberately massacred his people at Hellspin so that he'd be executed and put in the black cradle.Black Cradle.]]


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** Played with by Shuos Mikodez, who cultivates a reputation for ruthlessness and unpredictability among his rivals, but is benevolent to those who can be trusted.
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* DeadpanSnarker: The unnamed Nirai wraith who helps Cheris get used to having another mind in her head and keeps and eye on Jedao is incredibly snarky towards the undead general.

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* DeadpanSnarker: Most of the cast. The unnamed Nirai wraith who helps Cheris get used to having another mind in her head and keeps and eye on Jedao is incredibly particularly snarky towards the undead general.general.



* DrivenToSuicide:
** The calendric rot's EmotionBomb makes Cheris suicidal until Jedao talks her through it.
** [[spoiler:Back when Jedao was still alive, his hexarch raped him, and he would've killed himself because of it if it wasn't for his friend finding him and dragging him out to spend some time in other people's company.]] It seems he's had suicidal tendencies ever since.
** Jedao mentions at one point that one of his siblings committed suicide on an anniversary of the Hellspin Massacre.

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* DrivenToSuicide:
** The calendric rot's EmotionBomb makes Cheris suicidal until Jedao talks her through it.
DrivenToSuicide: Several of the characters.
** [[spoiler:Back when Jedao was still alive, his hexarch raped him, and he would've killed himself because of it if it wasn't for his friend finding him and dragging him out to spend some time in other people's company.]] It seems he's had suicidal tendencies ever since.
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since. [[spoiler:Even Jedao mentions at one point that one Two isn't immune to this, because he blames himself for Dhanneth's rape and death.]]
** [[spoiler:Jedao Two sees Dhanneth as having done this because
of his siblings their [[QuestionableConsent affair]]
** [[spoiler:Jedao's brother
committed suicide on an the anniversary of the Hellspin Massacre.massacre, presumably out of shame.]]



* {{Foil}}: Cheris and Jedao. Cheris is a straightforward Kel who's a math prodigy to the point where everyone's surprised she's not a Nirai. She's an infantry captain and her signifier, the Ashhawk Sheathed Wings, means she's very stable mentally. By contrast, Jedao is a cunning Shuos, has dyscalculia, has mostly led fleets throughout his career and his signifier, Immolation Fox, is considered an alarm bell by people who know the meaning of it.

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* {{Foil}}: Cheris and Jedao. Cheris is a straightforward Kel who's a math prodigy to the point where everyone's surprised she's not a Nirai. She's an infantry captain and her signifier, the Ashhawk Sheathed Wings, means she's very stable mentally. She's also really bad at lying. By contrast, Jedao is a cunning Shuos, has dyscalculia, has mostly led fleets throughout his career and his signifier, Immolation Fox, is considered an alarm bell by people who know the meaning of it.



* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Nirai Kujen is, famously, the only man in Hexarchate who managed to achieve immortality using the calendar. He's a prominent character in Jedao's backstory, which happened several hundred years ago, and he's still the Nirai hexarch.

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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Nirai Kujen is, famously, the only man in Hexarchate who managed to achieve immortality using the calendar. He's a prominent character in Jedao's backstory, which happened several hundred years ago, and he's still the Nirai hexarch. Oh, and he still appears to be in the prime of his youth.



* SapientShip: [[spoiler:All moths are sentient]].

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* SapientShip: [[spoiler:All moths are sentient]].sentient. Jedao's moth, The Revenant, is a DeadpanSnarker]].



* WellIntentionedExtremist: Jedao is willing to [[spoiler:murder a million people to have a shot at overthrowing the Hexarchate]].

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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Jedao is willing to [[spoiler:murder [[spoiler:murdered a million people to have a shot at overthrowing the Hexarchate]].
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* TheAtoner: Jedao tells Khiruev that he's defending the Hexarchate from the Hafn because he wants to atone for his actions at Hellspin, though he doesn't expect - nor desire - actual forgiveness.

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* TheAtoner: Jedao tells Khiruev that he's defending the Hexarchate from the Hafn because he wants to atone for his actions at Hellspin, though he doesn't expect - nor desire - actual forgiveness. [[spoiler:Enforced, as Nirai Kujen did [[{{Brainwashed}} psych surgery]] on him to turn his guilt into a desire for atonement]]



* ArcWords: In ''Ninefox Gambit'', "Yours in calendrical heresy, Vh."

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* ArcWords: In ''Ninefox Gambit'', "Yours in calendrical heresy, Vh."" In ''Revenant Gun'', "I'm your gun."
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** Mikodez is good enough that he’s outplayed his rivals to hold the Shuos hexarch’s seat for sixty years. Very few of his predecessors managed more than a decade. While it’s not suggested he intended the consequences it’s also notable that he was very keen to bring Cheris and Jedao together, rather than one of Kujen’s candidates after confirming her math skills are the same level as Kujen’s and things tend to work out to his advantage.

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** Mikodez is good enough that he’s outplayed his rivals to hold the Shuos hexarch’s seat for sixty years. Very few of his predecessors managed more than a decade. While it’s not suggested he intended the consequences it’s also notable that he was very keen made great efforts to bring Cheris and Jedao together, rather than use one of Kujen’s candidates as anchor, after confirming her math skills are the same level as Kujen’s Kujen’s. It’s never made clear if he knew that [[spoiler: Jedao’s long term plan depended on being anchored to a math genius to compensate for his dyscalculia and was intentionally assisting with this]]; but things do tend to work out to his advantage.

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* TheChessmaster: Jedao is a brilliant planner, and knows how to manipulate both individuals and armies into doing what he wants them to.

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* TheChessmaster: Jedao TheChessmaster:
**Jedao
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**Mikodez is good enough that he’s outplayed his rivals to hold the Shuos hexarch’s seat for sixty years. Very few of his predecessors managed more than a decade. While it’s not suggested he intended the consequences it’s also notable that he was very keen to bring Cheris and Jedao together, rather than one of Kujen’s candidates after confirming her math skills are the same level as Kujen’s and things tend to work out to his advantage.
** Kujen is an almost thousand year old parasitic intelligence who invented much of the setting’s tech and been manipulating civilisation, both to ensure his own survival and for his [[ForTheEvulz own amusement]] for centuries.


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* GambitPileup: In book three the schemes of [[spoiler: Cheris!Jedao, Kujen, Mikodez, Moth!Jedao and the Moths’]] collide.

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* MoralSociopathy: Explored with at least three different characters.
** Mikodez really is a sociopath with morality, who maintains an overall good orientation despite his lack of morals, because he intellectually thinks that treating other people well is more effective in keeping society stable and avoiding trouble.
** Jedao really tries to be one, because he thinks it's necessary, but is deeply tormented as a result.
** [[spoiler:Kujen deliberately turned himself into a sociopath because he found being a WellIntentionedExtremist too painful and thought he could continue to achieve good ends, but ended up as just a sociopathic villain because he didn't account for MotiveDecay.]]



* SociopathicHero: Explored with at least three different characters.
** Mikodez really is a Sociopathic Hero, who maintains an overall good orientation despite his lack of morals, because he intellectually thinks that treating other people well is more effective in keeping society stable and avoiding trouble.
** Jedao really tries to be a Sociopathic Hero, because he thinks it's necessary, but is deeply tormented as a result.
** [[spoiler:Kujen tried to turn himself into a SociopathicHero because he found being a WellIntentionedExtremist too painful, but ended up as just a sociopathic villain because he didn't account for MotiveDecay.]]

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* PropagandaPiece: [[invoked]] Jedao has Cheris drop dozens of propaganda leaflets, alcohol and drugs to shake the resolve of the Fortress's occupants.

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* PropagandaPiece: [[invoked]] PropagandaPiece:
**[[invoked]] in ''Ninefox Gambit'' when
Jedao has Cheris drop dozens of propaganda leaflets, alcohol and drugs to shake the resolve of the Fortress's occupants.occupants.
** Invoked again in ''Revenant Gun'', when Mikodez, Brezan, and Tseya decide that it will be more effective to reveal the truth about Kujen via a drama than a bald press statement.
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* FantasticSlur: "Crashhawk", for a Kel with free will.


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* QuestionableConsent: Zig-zagged in ''Revenant Gun'' with Jedao and Dhanneth. [[spoiler:Both of them are attracted to each other but Jedao is convinced that formation instinct makes it impossible for Dhanneth to truly consent, until Dhanneth persuades Jedao, already desperate for some relaxation and affection, that he is genuinely attracted to him. Then Kujen reveals to Jedao that he intentionally brainwashed Dhanneth to be sexually attracted to Jedao, and at a pivotal moment, when Jedao tries to save Dhanneth's life, Dhanneth deliberately kills himself to force Jedao to save another character instead. This leads Jedao to confess to Cheris that he raped Dhanneth and although he has at least two ulterior motives[[note]]He's trying to provoke Cheris into killing him out of general suicidal tendencies, and he wants to cover up the fact that the ''Revenant'' is sentient to protect it[[/note]], he does believe it.]]


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* SapientShip: [[spoiler:All moths are sentient]].


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* SociopathicHero: Explored with at least three different characters.
** Mikodez really is a Sociopathic Hero, who maintains an overall good orientation despite his lack of morals, because he intellectually thinks that treating other people well is more effective in keeping society stable and avoiding trouble.
** Jedao really tries to be a Sociopathic Hero, because he thinks it's necessary, but is deeply tormented as a result.
** [[spoiler:Kujen tried to turn himself into a SociopathicHero because he found being a WellIntentionedExtremist too painful, but ended up as just a sociopathic villain because he didn't account for MotiveDecay.]]
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* ShoutOut: In the fencing scene in ''Revenant Gun'', Jedao's calendrical sword blade is, of course, [[Franchise/StarWars red]].

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* HumanSacrifice: Regular ritual-torture-to-death is required to keep the Hexarchate's calendar functioning. [[spoiler:Cheris powers her calendar spike by sacrificing the Kel Command and everybody else aboard their space station.]]

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* HumanSacrifice: HumanSacrifice:
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Regular ritual-torture-to-death is required to keep the Hexarchate's calendar functioning. functioning.
**
[[spoiler:Cheris powers her calendar spike by sacrificing the Kel Command and everybody else aboard their space station.]]
** [[spoiler:In ''Revenant Gun'', Kujen plans to reimpose the Hexarchate calendar permanently with a spike created by forcing Jedao Two to re-enact Hellspin, by massacring both Kujen's force and the combined Protectorate-Compact force with threshold winnowers on the original event's anniversary.
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* {{Glamour}}: The Andan faction ability is enthrallment, which allows them to put any person of lower social status under their spell, though it grows less effective the more often it's used on any given target.

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* {{Glamour}}: The Andan faction ability is enthrallment, which allows them to put any person of lower social status under their spell, though it grows less effective the more often it's used on any given target. It also can only be targetted at one specific person at a time, and for full effectiveness they need to know quite a lot about the target. [[spoiler:This is why Tseya fails to glamour Jedao in ''Raven Strategem'', because the person they think is Jedao is actually a mental hybrid of Cheris and Jedao with rather more Cheris.]]
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: All sorts. The Vidona make a speciality of coming up with them. Notable examples:
** The "feast of burning veins", which involves causing somebody's blood to catch fire, slowly burning them alive from inside.
** "Corpse calligraphy" (actually an Andan rather than Vidona speciality), which fatally poisons people in a manner that makes a written inscription appear on their skin. This is sometimes used as a means of [[{{Seppuku}} suicide as political protest]].

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** Drones are shaped like stylized animals, with a particular animal depending on the owners' faction and the drone's purpose.

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** Drones Servitors are shaped like stylized animals, with a particular animal depending on the owners' faction and the drone's servitor's purpose.



* AttackDrone: Generally averted, as drones are incapable of channeling formation effects... under Hexarchate calendar. When Cheris realizes this isn't true for the heretic calendar, she utilizes drones in combat as well.

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* AttackDrone: Generally averted, as drones servitors are incapable of channeling formation effects... under Hexarchate calendar. When Cheris realizes this isn't true for the heretic calendar, she utilizes drones servitors in combat as well.



* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: The drones try to help Cheris because she treats them as friends rather than equipment.
* BeneathNotice: The drones see many things because no one pays attention to them. They also make excellent infiltrators. [[spoiler:One of them kills the skilled assassin Vahenz, who was not thinking of threats from that quarter. In the second book, Cheris recruits a large number of them to act as spies and assassins for her.]]
* BenevolentAI: Drones are uniformly helpful and courteous toward humans, in spite of being treated with contempt. Many of them even go beyond their duties to protect people.

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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: The drones servitors try to help Cheris because she treats them as friends rather than equipment.
* BeneathNotice: The drones servitors see many things because no one pays attention to them. They also make excellent infiltrators. [[spoiler:One of them kills the skilled assassin Vahenz, who was not thinking of threats from that quarter. In the second book, Cheris recruits a large number of them to act as spies and assassins for her.]]
* BenevolentAI: Drones Servitors are uniformly helpful and courteous toward humans, in spite of being treated with contempt. Many of them even go beyond their duties to protect people.



* BoardingPod: Used to deliver propaganda, Shuos infiltrators and drones into the Fortress.

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* BoardingPod: Used to deliver propaganda, Shuos infiltrators and drones servitors into the Fortress.



* DistractedByTheSexy: The drones' favourite meeting place on Cheris's ship is near the spot where the various couples aboard go to make out, as they're so busy with each other, they don't realize there's a secret conspiracy meeting going on a few metres away.

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* DistractedByTheSexy: The drones' servitors' favourite meeting place on Cheris's ship is near the spot where the various couples aboard go to make out, as they're so busy with each other, they don't realize there's a secret conspiracy meeting going on a few metres away.



* FantasticCasteSystem: The Hexarchate government is divided into six factions: Rahal (leadership, policing, law), Nirai (technology), Andan (culture, diplomacy, finance), Vidona (doctrine, calendar, education), Shuos (espionage, sabotage, assassination) and Kel (military). While a lot of people - perhaps even majority - don't belong to any faction, to have any career in the factions' specialties or government, you must join a faction. All factions (except for Shuos, or so they say) have their exotic effects.

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* {{Fangirl}}: Hemiola in ''Revenant Gun'' is a fangirl whose main hobby is making fanvids for its favourite drama.
* FantasticCasteSystem: The Hexarchate government is divided into six factions: Rahal (leadership, policing, law), Nirai (technology), Andan (culture, diplomacy, finance), Vidona (doctrine, calendar, education), Shuos (espionage, sabotage, assassination) and Kel (military). While a lot of people - perhaps even the majority - don't belong to any faction, to have any career in the factions' specialties or government, you must join a faction. All factions (except for Shuos, or so they say) have their exotic effects.



* GadgeteerGenius: Kel Khiruev can build an assassin drone from a music box, pieces of a watch and some junk lying around her room.

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* GadgeteerGenius: Kel Khiruev can build an assassin drone servitor from a music box, pieces of a watch and some junk lying around her room.



* HistoricalHeroUpgrade: In-universe, the drama ''A Labyrinth of Foxes'' depicts Jedao and Heptarch Shuos Khiaz as having a mutual affair, when in reality she was a sadistic sexual predator who [[AdaptationalConsent raped him]].



* HollywoodHacking: In the ShowWithinAShow Cheris is watching with a group of drones, the Nirai love interest's "hacking" leaves the drones snickering and mocking the screenwriter.

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* HollywoodHacking: In the ShowWithinAShow Cheris is watching with a group of drones, servitors, the Nirai love interest's "hacking" leaves the drones servitors snickering and mocking the screenwriter.



* MadScientistLaboratory: Khiruev's subordinates joke that the drones must see her room as this, thanks to her habit of collecting various pieces of junk and assembling and disassembling machines. As the story goes, drones use it to scare baby drones into behaving.

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* MadScientistLaboratory: Khiruev's subordinates joke that the drones servitors must see her room as this, thanks to her habit of collecting various pieces of junk and assembling and disassembling machines. As the story goes, drones servitors use it to scare baby drones servitors into behaving.



* ObfuscatingStupidity: The drones pretend to be less sentient and stupider than they actually are to give themselves more freedom of movement and so that people wouldn't suspect them of scheming.

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* ObfuscatingStupidity: The drones servitors pretend to be less sentient and stupider than they actually are to give themselves more freedom of movement and so that people wouldn't suspect them of scheming.



** In ''Revenant Gun'':
*** [[spoiler:Jedao Two isn't even human, he's a moth in humanoid form.]]
*** [[spoiler:Moths are sentient, and servitors are aware of this.]]
*** [[spoiler:Dhanneth is the former commander of the swarm that Kujen put Jedao in charge of.]]



* RobotBuddy: Cheris is very friendly with drones, and they help her and are friends with her in turn.

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* RobotBuddy: Cheris is very friendly with drones, servitors, and they help her and are friends with her in turn.



* ScienceFantasy: You have spaceships, space forts, guns and sentient drones, but you also have shapeshifting shadows, possession and calendar-based RealityWarping.

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* ScienceFantasy: You have spaceships, space forts, guns and sentient drones, servitors, but you also have shapeshifting shadows, possession and calendar-based RealityWarping.



** The dramas that Cheris is watching with the drones in her spare time.

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** The dramas that Cheris is watching with the drones servitors in her spare time.



* SuddenlyVoiced: Brezan is mildly freaked out when one of the Andan drones suddenly speaks in human words, as he's used to them communicating by machine whirrs and bleeps.

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* SuddenlyVoiced: Brezan is mildly freaked out when one of the Andan drones servitors suddenly speaks in human words, as he's used to them communicating by machine whirrs and bleeps.



* TheUnintelligible: Most drones "speak" in bleeps, whirrs and other machine noises, meaning few people can understand them.

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* TheUnintelligible: Most drones servitors "speak" in bleeps, whirrs and other machine noises, meaning few people can understand them.
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* InappropriatelyCloseComrades: The Kel has an extremely strong taboo against sexual relationships with any other Kel, even in completely different units, to the point that it's an executable offence. This is because formation instinct means that any sexual activity between people of different ranks would be QuestionableConsent at best. The Kel attempt to reduce this further by supplying troops on campaign with libido-supressing drugs, copious supplies of porn and, for the higher ranks, courtesans. However, it still doesn't entirely prevent it. In one example we see, the questionably-moral point-of-view character convinces themselves that they don't need to report it because the lower-ranking person [[NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalisation seems to be enjoying themselves]].
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* BeneathNotice: The drones see many things because no one pays attention to them. They also make excellent infiltrators. [[spoiler:One of them kills the skilled assassin Vahenz, who was not thinking of threats from that quarter.]]

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* BeneathNotice: The drones see many things because no one pays attention to them. They also make excellent infiltrators. [[spoiler:One of them kills the skilled assassin Vahenz, who was not thinking of threats from that quarter. In the second book, Cheris recruits a large number of them to act as spies and assassins for her.]]
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* TheRemnant: [[spoiler:By the time of the main action of ''Revenant Gun'', the Hexarchate has split into two major successors: the Compact, a democracy practicing Cheris's ideals and led by Brezan and (covertly) Mikodez, and the larger Protectorate, an example of this trope led by Kel Inesser as a military dictatorship attempting to continue the Hexarchate's system.]]

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* HumanSacrifice: Regular ritual-torture-to-death is required to keep the Hexarchate's calendar functioning. [[spoiler:Cheris powers her calendar spike by sacrificing the Kel Command and everybody else aboard their space station.]]



* NonPOVProtagonist: Shuos Jedao is pretty much the main character of the series, but apart from a few flashback sequences seen through Cheris's eyes, he's never a point-of-view character in the books.

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* NonPOVProtagonist: Shuos Jedao is pretty much the main character of the series, but apart from a few flashback sequences seen through Cheris's eyes, he's never a point-of-view character in the books. [[spoiler:Until the final volume, but that isn't the Jedao that we've previously known.]]



* ThePurge: To cow Jedao and Cheris into submission, the Hexarchs threaten to purge the Mwennin, a minority to which the latter belongs (Jedao's own Shparoi are long gone by this point). [[spoiler:As Cheris's mind is dead at this point, Jedao refuses to let it cow him and they follow through with the threat, with less than a few thousand Mwenning managing to escape the ensuing genocide.]]

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* ThePurge: ThePurge:
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To cow Jedao and Cheris into submission, the Hexarchs threaten to purge the Mwennin, a minority to which the latter belongs (Jedao's own Shparoi are long gone by this point). [[spoiler:As Cheris's mind is dead at this point, Jedao refuses to let it cow him and they follow through with the threat, with less than a few thousand Mwenning managing to escape the ensuing genocide.]]
** [[spoiler:Mikodez decides to improve the chances of Cheris's plan succeeding by having all the other hexarchs murdered at the same time as her calendar spike.
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* SplitPersonalityTakeover: In ''Raven Stratagem'', Cheris's body has entirely been taken over by Jedao's mind. [[spoiler:Apparently, she's actually Cheris with access to Jedao's memories and talents, Jedao's personality is completely dead, and she's impersonating him to take advantage of his reputation and his formation-instinct power over the Kel swarm.]]

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* SplitPersonalityTakeover: In ''Raven Stratagem'', Cheris's body has entirely been taken over by Jedao's mind. [[spoiler:Apparently, she's [[spoiler:Apparently. She's actually Cheris with access to Jedao's memories and talents, Jedao's personality is completely dead, and she's impersonating him to take advantage of his reputation and his formation-instinct power over the Kel swarm.]]
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* TheGhost: The Kel Command, who are responsible for putting Kel Cheris and Shuos Jedao together and who are just as dangerous to Cheris as the heretics are because of how much they want Jedao to be dead.

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* TheGhost: The Kel Command, who are responsible for putting Kel Cheris and Shuos Jedao together and who together; they are just as more dangerous to Cheris as than the heretics are because of how much they want Jedao to be dead.dead and because of how incompetently they are using their army. They are a composite mind. We don't meet any of them in ''Ninefox Gambit'', but in ''Raven Stratagem'', one of them, Kel Tsoro, participates in meetings of the Hexarchs.
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* SplitPersonalityTakeover: In ''Raven Stratagem'', Cheris's body has entirely been taken over by Jedao's mind. [[spoiler:Apparently, she's actually Cheris with access to Jedao's memories and talents, and Jedao's personality is completely dead.]]

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* SplitPersonalityTakeover: In ''Raven Stratagem'', Cheris's body has entirely been taken over by Jedao's mind. [[spoiler:Apparently, she's actually Cheris with access to Jedao's memories and talents, and Jedao's personality is completely dead.dead, and she's impersonating him to take advantage of his reputation and his formation-instinct power over the Kel swarm.]]
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* SplitPersonalityTakeover: In ''Raven Stratagem'', Cheris's body has entirely been taken over by Jedao's mind. [[spoiler:Apparently, she's actually Cheris with access to Jedao's memories and talents, and Jedao's personality is completely dead.]]

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* MilitaryScienceFiction: For all the calendric warfare, possession and mind control, this is still a story about navies and armies of various factions duking it out.



* MilitaryScienceFiction: For all the calendric warfare, possession and mind control, this is still a story about navies and armies of various factions duking it out.

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* MilitaryScienceFiction: For all MindRape: This is what the calendric warfare, possession Rahal "scrying" ability feels like, when you're on the receiving end -- it involves forcing people into incredibly traumatic nightmares in order to bring out revealing reactions and mind control, this is still a story about navies and armies of various factions duking it out.break down their resistance to interrogation.



* TouchOfDeath: The Vidona faction ability is "deathtouch", which works by turning the target into flat piece of paper.


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* TortureTechnician: Every single member of the Vidona is expected to at least have a theoretical knowledge of how to torture people, and most of them regularly do it.
* TouchOfDeath: The Vidona faction ability is "deathtouch", which works by turning the target into flat piece of paper.
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* EqualOpportunityEvil: Despite all the negative aspects of its society, the Hexarchate is notably free of gender-discrimination and homophobia, with men, women, and non-binary people all having representation in the leadership and widespread same-gender relationships with no social disapproval.

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* EqualOpportunityEvil: Despite all the negative aspects of its society, the Hexarchate is notably free of gender-discrimination and homophobia, with men, women, and non-binary people all having representation in the leadership and widespread same-gender relationships with no social disapproval. There is still some lingering bigotry against binary trans people, but even this is depicted as limited to particularly old-fashioned circles.



* SexualExtortion: It's mentioned that sexual relationships between Kel, [[UnequalPairing especially Kel of different rank]], are strictly forbidden, because the formation instinct means the junior Kel has no choice but to obey a superior, making it impossible for the sex to be truly consensual. Despite draconian punishments, and attempts to reduce the problem with libido-suppressing drugs and plenty of [[ADateWithRosiePalms porn]], it still happens quite frequently

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* SexualExtortion: It's mentioned that sexual relationships between Kel, [[UnequalPairing especially Kel of different rank]], are strictly forbidden, because the formation instinct means the junior Kel has no choice but to obey a superior, making it impossible for the sex to be truly consensual. Despite draconian punishments, and attempts to reduce the problem with libido-suppressing drugs and plenty of [[ADateWithRosiePalms porn]], it still happens quite frequentlyfrequently.

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