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Authority Equals Asskicking cleanup as per TRS. Zero Context Examples. Don't hide trope names. Tropeslashing.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: There's a reason Fu is the undisputed leader of the Emo group.
* [[spoiler: BackStab]]
* BadFuture / CrapsackWorld: It is implied that this hellhole of a world is one. Children committing "crimes" are forced to be placed in this [[HellholePrison free roaming juvenile detention center where the only things that are illegal are escape and firearms]].
* [[spoiler: BackStab]]
* BadFuture / CrapsackWorld: It is implied that this hellhole of a world is one. Children committing "crimes" are forced to be placed in this [[HellholePrison free roaming juvenile detention center where the only things that are illegal are escape and firearms]].
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: There's a reason Fu is the undisputed leader of the Emo group.
* [[spoiler: BackStab]]
* BadFuture / CrapsackWorld: It is implied that this hellhole of a world is one. Children committing "crimes" are forced to be placed in this [[HellholePrison free roaming juvenile detention center where the only things that are illegal are escape and firearms]].%%* BackStab
* BadFuture / CrapsackWorld: It is implied that this hellhole of a world is one. Children committing "crimes" are forced to be placed in this [[HellholePrison free roaming juvenile detention center where the only things that are illegal are escape and firearms]].
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* BigBad: Ōkibo
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* CrapsackWorld: It is implied that this hellhole of a world is one. Children committing "crimes" are forced to be placed in this [[HellholePrison free roaming juvenile detention center where the only things that are illegal are escape and firearms]].
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* HeroesLoveDogs
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* [[spoiler: KarmicDeath]]: Sasoku kills [[spoiler: Ōkibo in the same [[NeckSnap manner that he killed Takeshi]]]]
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* [[spoiler: KarmicDeath]]: KarmicDeath: Sasoku kills [[spoiler: Ōkibo in the same [[NeckSnap manner that he killed Takeshi]]]]Takeshi]]]].
* TheManBehindTheMan: Matsuo, Netamu and Fu suspect that Ōkibo acts on the behalf of his leader but screws up the commands because he's not particularly [[DumbMuscle bright]].
* NeckSnap: The way that [[spoiler:Ōkibo kills Takeshi]].
* TheManBehindTheMan: Matsuo, Netamu and Fu suspect that Ōkibo acts on the behalf of his leader but screws up the commands because he's not particularly [[DumbMuscle bright]].
* NeckSnap: The way that [[spoiler:Ōkibo kills Takeshi]].
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* [[spoiler: NeckLift / NeckSnap: The way that Ōkibo kills Takeshi]]
* [[spoiler: PreciousPuppy: Matsuo finds one after Netamu kills its parents.]]
* [[spoiler: PreciousPuppy: Matsuo finds one after Netamu kills its parents.]]
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* [[spoiler: NeckLift / NeckSnap: The way that Ōkibo kills Takeshi]]
* [[spoiler:PreciousPuppy: [[spoiler: Matsuo finds one after Netamu kills its parents.]]]]
* TheRival: Netamu is this to Matsuo.
%%* TheSilentBob: Heizen
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* TheRival: Netamu is this to Matsuo.
%%* TheSilentBob: Heizen
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* TheManBehindTheMan: Matsuo, Netamu and Fu suspect that Ōkibo acts on the behalf of his leader but screws up the commands because he's not particularly [[DumbMuscle bright]].
* TheRival: Netamu is this to Matsuo
* TheSilentBob: Heizen
* TranquilFury: Fu has been this since the end of chapter 4.
* TheRival: Netamu is this to Matsuo
* TheSilentBob: Heizen
* TranquilFury: Fu has been this since the end of chapter 4.
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* TranquilFury: Fu has been this since the end of chapter 4.
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No potholing trope names
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* [[BigDamnHeroes Big Damn Hero]]: Fu arrives just in time to save Matsuo from the Jock patrollers.
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* [[BigDamnHeroes Big Damn Hero]]: BigDamnHeroes: Fu arrives just in time to save Matsuo from the Jock patrollers.
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* [[ChoiceOfTwoWeapons Choice of Many Weapons]]: Apparently, Matsuo's packed for a war.
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* [[ChoiceOfTwoWeapons Choice of Many Weapons]]: ChoiceOfTwoWeapons: Apparently, Matsuo's packed for a war.
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Removed per TRS.
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* {{Badass}}: Netamu is heralded as the Emo's best fighter and Matsuo has some shades of this trope but the award really goes to Fu. Not only has she scarred the BigBad, but she beats three of his [[BadassArmy patrollers]] that are practically the most skilled fighters in a group and twice her size, but does this in her ''first'' appearance.
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Effectively used as the Chapter 6 title. [[spoiler: Matsuo]] certainly looks to be [[JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope edging closer to the amoral actions of his enemies.
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Effectively used as the Chapter 6 title. [[spoiler: Matsuo]] certainly looks to be [[JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope edging closer to the amoral actions actions]] of his enemies.
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Effectively used as the Chapter 6 title. [[spoiler: Matsuo]] certainly looks to be [[JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope edging closer to the amoral actions of his enemies.
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*AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: There's a reason Fu is the undisputed leader of the Emo group.
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: Downplayed and justified. For all intents and purposes, every single one of them (with the questionable exception of Fu and Netamu) are criminals in various degrees. The only distinction is in how they handle themselves inside the Facility.
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* SmarterThanYouLook: Uttered nearly word for word by Netamu to Matsuo. Later, applied to [[spoiler: Ōkibo]]
* TheManBehindTheMan: Matsuo, Netamu and Fu suspect that Ōkibo acts on the behalf of his leader but screws up the commands because he's not particularly [[DumbMuscle bright]].
* TheManBehindTheMan: Matsuo, Netamu and Fu suspect that Ōkibo acts on the behalf of his leader but screws up the commands because he's not particularly [[DumbMuscle bright]].
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* UnstoppableRage: Matsuo has this in Chapter 6, but the award goes to Sasoku. Even direct orders from Fu don't stop her from taking vengeance against [[spoiler: Ōkibo]]