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* GroinAttackGroinAttack: the attack is quick, but the priest's reaction takes an entire two paragraphs.
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* BarbarianLonghair: The protagonist, northern barbarian Grignr, has long red hair. It's also described as "robust", but given the author's attitude towards adjectives, that could mean almost anything.
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Examples include "the stygian cloud of charcoal ebony." [[hottip:*:Which amounts to "the dark cloud of black black."]]
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Examples include "the stygian cloud of charcoal ebony." [[hottip:*:Which ebony", which amounts to "the dark cloud of black black."]]black".
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* PurpleProse[[hottip:*:nay, ''ultraviolet'']], SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, and DelusionsOfEloquence: At least the ''title'' is concise and looks like a normal title[[note]] apart from the name of a fairly well-known gas[[/note]]. The very first sentence is where things get fun.
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* PurpleProse[[hottip:*:nay, ''ultraviolet'']], PurpleProse, SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, and DelusionsOfEloquence: At least the ''title'' is concise and looks like a normal title[[note]] apart from the name of a fairly well-known gas[[/note]]. The very first sentence is where things get fun.
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* PurpleProse, SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, and DelusionsOfEloquence: At least the ''title'' is concise and looks like a normal title[[note]] apart from the name of a fairly well-known gas[[/note]]. The very first sentence is where things get fun.
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* PurpleProse, PurpleProse[[hottip:*:nay, ''ultraviolet'']], SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, and DelusionsOfEloquence: At least the ''title'' is concise and looks like a normal title[[note]] apart from the name of a fairly well-known gas[[/note]]. The very first sentence is where things get fun.
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* {{Stripperiffic}}: Both male and female examples exist: Grignr wears a g-string (with folds), while Carthena wears [[DiamondsInTheBuff beads.]]
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* {{Stripperiffic}}: Both male and female examples exist: Grignr wears a g-string (with folds), while Carthena wears [[DiamondsInTheBuff beads.]]
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* CostumePorn: Oh, so very much, coupled with PurpleProse.
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* {{Stripperiffic}}: Both male and female examples exist: Grignr wears a g-string (with folds), while Carthena wears [[DiamondsInTheBuff beads.]]
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* OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank: At the end of the story, a leech... thing sucks a ridiculous amount of Grignr's blood.
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* SickSadWorld
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* TheUnpronounceableL ''You'' try pronouncing "Grignr", "Agafnd" or "Mrifk". This gets particularly amusing when already consonant-heavy words lose their few vowels through typos - the aforementioned Agafnd becomes "Agfnd" at one point. One gets the impression that the author has an irrational dislike of vowels.
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* TheUnpronounceableL TheUnpronounceable: ''You'' try pronouncing "Grignr", "Agafnd" or "Mrifk". This gets particularly amusing when already consonant-heavy words lose their few vowels through typos - the aforementioned Agafnd becomes "Agfnd" at one point. One gets the impression that the author has an irrational dislike of vowels.
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating - Agaphim only stays in power because he has such a [[TheHorde vast army]].
* {{Angrish}} - Prince Agaphim starts to spout "Muffled, syllibant gibberish" when Grignir calls him a fat idiot.
* AntiClimax - After pages of over-the-top fight scenes, Grignr's final enemy is a mystical leech that sucks [[OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank an absurd amount of blood]] from his leg only to die when burned with a torch.
* AuthorAppeal - Almost every chapter contains at least a mention of breasts. A character even ''speaks'' "bustily".
* AuthorVocabularyCalendar - Unfortunately, [[{{Malaproper}} few, if any words are used correctly]].
* BarbarianHero - Grignr, a very obvious CaptainErsatz of ConanTheBarbarian.
* BattleCry - Grignr's is "hoarsely piercing." Usually includes the phrase "by the surly beard of Mrifk!"
* BeautyEqualsGoodness - The prince and shamen [sic] are always described as fat and disgusting, while Grignr and Carthena are usually portrayed as attractive. Grignr is a male SheCleansUpNicely.
* {{BFS}} - Inverted. Most of the swords described are "a foot of blinding steel", which is actually really short (dagger-like, in fact; a good sword is at least three feet).
* BoobyTrap - Grignr narrowly escapes one.
* TheCaligula - Agaphim
* {{Angrish}} - Prince Agaphim starts to spout "Muffled, syllibant gibberish" when Grignir calls him a fat idiot.
* AntiClimax - After pages of over-the-top fight scenes, Grignr's final enemy is a mystical leech that sucks [[OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank an absurd amount of blood]] from his leg only to die when burned with a torch.
* AuthorAppeal - Almost every chapter contains at least a mention of breasts. A character even ''speaks'' "bustily".
* AuthorVocabularyCalendar - Unfortunately, [[{{Malaproper}} few, if any words are used correctly]].
* BarbarianHero - Grignr, a very obvious CaptainErsatz of ConanTheBarbarian.
* BattleCry - Grignr's is "hoarsely piercing." Usually includes the phrase "by the surly beard of Mrifk!"
* BeautyEqualsGoodness - The prince and shamen [sic] are always described as fat and disgusting, while Grignr and Carthena are usually portrayed as attractive. Grignr is a male SheCleansUpNicely.
* {{BFS}} - Inverted. Most of the swords described are "a foot of blinding steel", which is actually really short (dagger-like, in fact; a good sword is at least three feet).
* BoobyTrap - Grignr narrowly escapes one.
* TheCaligula - Agaphim
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating - ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Agaphim only stays in power because he has such a [[TheHorde vast army]].
*{{Angrish}} - {{Angrish}}: Prince Agaphim starts to spout "Muffled, "muffled, syllibant gibberish" when Grignir calls him a fat idiot.
*AntiClimax - AntiClimax: After pages of over-the-top fight scenes, Grignr's final enemy is a mystical leech that sucks [[OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank an absurd amount of blood]] from his leg only to die when burned with a torch.
*AuthorAppeal - AuthorAppeal: Almost every chapter contains at least a mention of breasts. A character even ''speaks'' "bustily".
*AuthorVocabularyCalendar - AuthorVocabularyCalendar: Unfortunately, [[{{Malaproper}} few, if any words are used correctly]].
*BarbarianHero - BarbarianHero: Grignr, a very obvious CaptainErsatz of ConanTheBarbarian.
*BattleCry - BattleCry: Grignr's is "hoarsely piercing." Usually includes the phrase "by the surly beard of Mrifk!"
*BeautyEqualsGoodness - BeautyEqualsGoodness: The prince and shamen [sic] are always described as fat and disgusting, while Grignr and Carthena are usually portrayed as attractive. Grignr is a male SheCleansUpNicely.
*{{BFS}} - {{BFS}}: Inverted. Most of the swords described are "a foot of blinding steel", which is actually really short (dagger-like, in fact; a good sword is at least three feet).
*BoobyTrap - BoobyTrap: Grignr narrowly escapes one.
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment - Examples include "the stygian cloud of charcoal ebony." [[hottip:*:Which amounts to "the dark cloud of black black."]]
* DeusExMachina - One priest randomly faints of an epileptic fit for no apparent reason.
* DeusExMachina - One priest randomly faints of an epileptic fit for no apparent reason.
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment - DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Examples include "the stygian cloud of charcoal ebony." [[hottip:*:Which amounts to "the dark cloud of black black."]]
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* {{Fainting}} - one of the shamen [sic] faints for no reason, Carthena passes out quite a few times, but Grignr--despite losing a bathtub's-worth of blood and not eating for days on end--never faints.
* FatBastard - Agaphim.
* FateWorseThanDeath - Agafnd persuades Agaphim that sentencing Grignr to a life of slave labor would be more of a punishment than being tortured to death.
* FatBastard - Agaphim.
* FateWorseThanDeath - Agafnd persuades Agaphim that sentencing Grignr to a life of slave labor would be more of a punishment than being tortured to death.
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* {{Fainting}} - one {{Fainting}}: One of the shamen [sic] faints for no reason, Carthena passes out quite a few times, but Grignr--despite losing a bathtub's-worth of blood and not eating for days on end--never faints.
*FatBastard - FatBastard: Agaphim.
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* FieryRedhead - Grignr.
* {{Gorn}} - Grignr takes a quarter of a chapter to rip a rat in half, and no grody detail is spared.
* {{Gorn}} - Grignr takes a quarter of a chapter to rip a rat in half, and no grody detail is spared.
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* FieryRedhead - FieryRedhead: Grignr.
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* HeroesWantRedheads - Grignr falls for Carthena.
* HookerWithAHeartOfGold - Carthena turns out to be the prostitute who serviced Grignr at the start of the story.
* HumanSacrifice - Grignr rescues Carthena from this fate.
* IHaveYouNowMyPretty - Carthena in the hands of the head shaman.
* HookerWithAHeartOfGold - Carthena turns out to be the prostitute who serviced Grignr at the start of the story.
* HumanSacrifice - Grignr rescues Carthena from this fate.
* IHaveYouNowMyPretty - Carthena in the hands of the head shaman.
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* HeroesWantRedheads - HeroesWantRedheads: Grignr falls for Carthena.
*HookerWithAHeartOfGold - HookerWithAHeartOfGold: Carthena turns out to be the prostitute who serviced Grignr at the start of the story.
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* ImprovisedWeapon - Grignr stabs a guard with the sharpened pelvic bone of a rat.
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* ImprovisedWeapon - ImprovisedWeapon: Grignr stabs a guard with the sharpened pelvic bone of a rat.
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* MoralDissonance - Grignr and Carthena both exhibit this in spades.
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* MoralDissonance - MoralDissonance: Grignr and Carthena both exhibit this in spades.
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* NobleSavage - Gringr claims to be one, although by this point in the story he's gone out of his way to steal a petty bauble.
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* NobleSavage - NobleSavage: Gringr claims to be one, although by this point in the story he's gone out of his way to steal a petty bauble.
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* NoEnding - The most widely-circulated copy of the story ends abruptly during Grignr's final battle. Some people continue to believe that this is how the original version actually ended.
* ProducePelting - Agaphim is "often assaulted by hurtling stones and rotting fruits" when he leaves his palace.
* PurpleProse, SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, and DelusionsOfEloquence - At least the ''title'' is concise and looks like a normal title[[note]] apart from the name of a fairly well-known gas[[/note]]. The very first sentence is where things get fun.
* RedheadedHero - Grignr.
* ReligionOfEvil - The worshippers of Argon.
* ProducePelting - Agaphim is "often assaulted by hurtling stones and rotting fruits" when he leaves his palace.
* PurpleProse, SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, and DelusionsOfEloquence - At least the ''title'' is concise and looks like a normal title[[note]] apart from the name of a fairly well-known gas[[/note]]. The very first sentence is where things get fun.
* RedheadedHero - Grignr.
* ReligionOfEvil - The worshippers of Argon.
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* NoEnding - NoEnding: The most widely-circulated copy of the story ends abruptly during Grignr's final battle. Some people continue to believe that this is how the original version actually ended.
*ProducePelting - ProducePelting: Agaphim is "often assaulted by hurtling stones and rotting fruits" when he leaves his palace.
* PurpleProse, SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, andDelusionsOfEloquence - DelusionsOfEloquence: At least the ''title'' is concise and looks like a normal title[[note]] apart from the name of a fairly well-known gas[[/note]]. The very first sentence is where things get fun.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin - The original version had some atrocious spelling, although less faithful transcriptions sometimes correct these.
* SaidBookism - So very, very, very much.
* SaidBookism - So very, very, very much.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin - RougeAnglesOfSatin: The original version had some atrocious spelling, although less faithful transcriptions sometimes correct these.
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* SignificantGreenEyedRedhead - Grignr.
* TheStoner - The illustration on Page 32 of the facsimile (presumably of Agaphim the evil prince) shows him smoking something that looks like a joint.
* TheStoner - The illustration on Page 32 of the facsimile (presumably of Agaphim the evil prince) shows him smoking something that looks like a joint.
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* SignificantGreenEyedRedhead - SignificantGreenEyedRedhead: Grignr.
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* ThongOfShielding - Grignr wears a G-string. How it manages to have folds is anyone's guess.
* ThudAndBlunder - An example of the depths that this subgenre can sink to.
* TitleDrop - at the end of chapter 3½.
* UnexplainedRecovery - Counselor Agafnd dies ''twice''.
* TheUnpronounceable - ''You'' try pronouncing "Grignr", "Agafnd" or "Mrifk". This gets particularly amusing when already consonant-heavy words lose their few vowels through typos - the aforementioned Agafnd becomes "Agfnd" at one point. One gets the impression that the author has an irrational dislike of vowels.
* UnusualChapterNumbers - There are a two fractional chapters: Chapters 3½ and 7½.
* UnusualEuphemism - "Mrifk". In addition, while "slut" is a real word, using it as an insult against men is [[CurseOfTheAncients somewhat antiquated]].
* VampiricDraining - The blob at the end sucks blood like a leech.
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* ThudAndBlunder - An example of the depths that this subgenre can sink to.
* TitleDrop - at the end of chapter 3½.
* UnexplainedRecovery - Counselor Agafnd dies ''twice''.
* TheUnpronounceable - ''You'' try pronouncing "Grignr", "Agafnd" or "Mrifk". This gets particularly amusing when already consonant-heavy words lose their few vowels through typos - the aforementioned Agafnd becomes "Agfnd" at one point. One gets the impression that the author has an irrational dislike of vowels.
* UnusualChapterNumbers - There are a two fractional chapters: Chapters 3½ and 7½.
* UnusualEuphemism - "Mrifk". In addition, while "slut" is a real word, using it as an insult against men is [[CurseOfTheAncients somewhat antiquated]].
* VampiricDraining - The blob at the end sucks blood like a leech.
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* ThongOfShielding - ThongOfShielding: Grignr wears a G-string. How it manages to have folds is anyone's guess.
*ThudAndBlunder - ThudAndBlunder: An example of the depths that this subgenre can sink to.
*TitleDrop - TitleDrop: at the end of chapter 3½.
*UnexplainedRecovery - UnexplainedRecovery: Counselor Agafnd dies ''twice''.
*TheUnpronounceable - TheUnpronounceableL ''You'' try pronouncing "Grignr", "Agafnd" or "Mrifk". This gets particularly amusing when already consonant-heavy words lose their few vowels through typos - the aforementioned Agafnd becomes "Agfnd" at one point. One gets the impression that the author has an irrational dislike of vowels.
*UnusualChapterNumbers - UnusualChapterNumbers: There are a two fractional chapters: Chapters 3½ and 7½.
*UnusualEuphemism - UnusualEuphemism: "Mrifk". In addition, while "slut" is a real word, using it as an insult against men is [[CurseOfTheAncients somewhat antiquated]].
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* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe - "sayeth the king" would be correct, except that it's the wrong tense. Carthena starts out talking this way, and Grignr does too shortly thereafter, when up till that point he only talked in vulgarities.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord - Many instances: Gringr is constantly described as wearing a g-string, with ''folds''; one character speaks "bustily", another's nose is both "lithe" and "opaque".
* YouTalkTooMuch - Grignr doesn't say this to Carthena, but he thinks it--even though she doesn't seem to be any more talkative than he is.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord - Many instances: Gringr is constantly described as wearing a g-string, with ''folds''; one character speaks "bustily", another's nose is both "lithe" and "opaque".
* YouTalkTooMuch - Grignr doesn't say this to Carthena, but he thinks it--even though she doesn't seem to be any more talkative than he is.
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* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe - "sayeth YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: "Sayeth the king" would be correct, except that it's the wrong tense. Carthena starts out talking this way, and Grignr does too shortly thereafter, when up till that point he only talked in vulgarities.
*YouKeepUsingThatWord - YouKeepUsingThatWord: Many instances: Gringr is constantly described as wearing a g-string, with ''folds''; one character speaks "bustily", another's nose is both "lithe" and "opaque".
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* FateWorseThanDeath - The straight lines from the original story are not left un-riffed. It happens so frequently it's lampshaded.
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* FateWorseThanDeath - FateWorseThanDeath: The straight lines from the original story are not left un-riffed. It happens so frequently it's lampshaded.
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* HeroicBSOD - The abrupt, non-existent ending leaves Crow utterly broken, and the others are forced to leave him behind in the theater. [[http://keithpalmer.ca/mst3k/favourites/book-ads.txt Fortunately]], he recovers.
* MagicTheGathering - "Tor Giant?"
* {{MST}} - [[http://www.bmsc.washington.edu/people/merritt/books/Eye_of_Argon.html One of the classics]], written by Creator/AdamCadre in 1996.
* MagicTheGathering - "Tor Giant?"
* {{MST}} - [[http://www.bmsc.washington.edu/people/merritt/books/Eye_of_Argon.html One of the classics]], written by Creator/AdamCadre in 1996.
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* HeroicBSOD - HeroicBSOD: The abrupt, non-existent ending leaves Crow utterly broken, and the others are forced to leave him behind in the theater. [[http://keithpalmer.ca/mst3k/favourites/book-ads.txt Fortunately]], he recovers.
*MagicTheGathering - MagicTheGathering: "Tor Giant?"
*{{MST}} - {{MST}}: [[http://www.bmsc.washington.edu/people/merritt/books/Eye_of_Argon.html One of the classics]], written by Creator/AdamCadre in 1996.
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* TarotTroubles - Tom Servo is reading Crow's future with a pack of Tarot cards he found somewhere. Poor Crow gets [[RasputinianDeath nine Deaths]] and a [[http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=2656 Tor Giant]].
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* TarotTroubles - TarotTroubles: Tom Servo is reading Crow's future with a pack of Tarot cards he found somewhere. Poor Crow gets [[RasputinianDeath nine Deaths]] and a [[http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=2656 Tor Giant]].
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* BeautyEqualsGoodness - The prince and shamen [sic] are always described as fat and disgusting, while Grignr and Carthena are usually portrayed as attractive.
** Grignr is a male SheCleansUpNicely.
** Grignr is a male SheCleansUpNicely.
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* BeautyEqualsGoodness - The prince and shamen [sic] are always described as fat and disgusting, while Grignr and Carthena are usually portrayed as attractive.
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* MundaneMadeAwesome - The following describes Grignr's wine being kicked over:
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** The following describes Grignr's wine being kicked over:
** The following describes Grignr's wine being kicked over:
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* PurpleProse, SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, and DelusionsOfEloquence - At least the ''title'' is concise and looks like a normal title. The very first sentence is where things get fun.
** ...Apart from the use of the name of a fairly well-known gas.
** ...Apart from the use of the name of a fairly well-known gas.
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* PurpleProse, SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, and DelusionsOfEloquence - At least the ''title'' is concise and looks like a normal title. title[[note]] apart from the name of a fairly well-known gas[[/note]]. The very first sentence is where things get fun.
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** ...Apart from the use of the name of a fairly well-known gas.
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* TheUnpronounceable - ''You'' try pronouncing "Grignr", "Agafnd" or "Mrifk".
** This gets particularly amusing when already consonant-heavy words lose their few vowels through typos - the aforementioned Agafnd becomes "Agfnd" at one point. One gets the impression that the author has an irrational dislike of vowels.
** This gets particularly amusing when already consonant-heavy words lose their few vowels through typos - the aforementioned Agafnd becomes "Agfnd" at one point. One gets the impression that the author has an irrational dislike of vowels.
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* TheUnpronounceable - ''You'' try pronouncing "Grignr", "Agafnd" or "Mrifk".
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* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe - "sayeth the king" would be correct, except that it's the wrong tense.
** Carthena starts out talking this way, and Grignr does too shortly thereafter, when up till that point he only talked in vulgarities.
** Carthena starts out talking this way, and Grignr does too shortly thereafter, when up till that point he only talked in vulgarities.
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* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe - "sayeth the king" would be correct, except that it's the wrong tense.
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** This message brought to you by the Booze Council.
*** Later replaced by the Death Council.
*** Later replaced by the Death Council.
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** After the titualar "scarlet emerald" is introduced, mention of something's red color often leads to a remark that it "looks just like an emerald".
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** After the titualar titular "scarlet emerald" is introduced, mention of something's red color often leads to a remark that it "looks just like an emerald".
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* FateWorseThanDeath - The straight lines from the original story iare not left un-riffed. It happens so frequently it's lampshaded.
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* ImpossibleHourglassFigure: Carthena is described as both "slender" with a "trim build" and [[BuxomIsBetter endowed with a "bulging bosom"]].
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* {{MST}} - [[http://www.bmsc.washington.edu/people/merritt/books/Eye_of_Argon.html One of the classics]], written by AdamCadre in 1996.
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* {{MST}} - [[http://www.bmsc.washington.edu/people/merritt/books/Eye_of_Argon.html One of the classics]], written by AdamCadre Creator/AdamCadre in 1996.
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As reading it raw may cause brain damage, you can settle for [[http://www.bmsc.washington.edu/people/merritt/books/Eye_of_Argon.html the MST'd version]], or this [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ikM_Lh8Q0xo Dramatic Reading of Chapter One on You Tube]]. For those whom who are unable to read it sober, we have the DrinkingGame over [[DrinkingGame/EyeOfArgon here]].
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The most widely-known and -circulated circulated copy of the story comes to an abrupt and unsatisfactory halt, and for many years it was believed that the ending was lost forever (or even, in some quarters, that the story was never completed). Recent years have seen the separate discoveries of two intact copies of the fanzine in which ''The Eye of Argon'' debuted, so it is now known how the tale ends. (With multiple exclamation marks, it turns out.)
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* MundaneMadeAwesome - The following describes Grignr's wine being kicked over:
--> "''A flying foot caught the mug Grignr had taken hold of, sending its blood red contents sloshing over a flickering crescent; leashing tongues of bright orange flame to the foot trodden floor.''"
** He also spends about six long sentences describing a guy falling over after being [[GroinAttack kicked in the crotch]].
--> "''A flying foot caught the mug Grignr had taken hold of, sending its blood red contents sloshing over a flickering crescent; leashing tongues of bright orange flame to the foot trodden floor.''"
** He also spends about six long sentences describing a guy falling over after being [[GroinAttack kicked in the crotch]].
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--> "''A flying foot caught the mug Grignr had taken hold of, sending its blood red contents sloshing over a flickering crescent; leashing tongues of bright orange flame to the foot trodden floor.''"
** He also spends about six long sentences describing a guy falling over after being [[GroinAttack kicked in the crotch]].
--> "''A flying foot caught the mug Grignr had taken hold of, sending its blood red contents sloshing over a flickering crescent; leashing tongues of bright orange flame to the foot trodden floor.''"
** He also spends about six long sentences describing a guy falling over after being [[GroinAttack kicked in the crotch]].
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Described as "the worst fantasy novella ever", ''[[http://ansible.co.uk/misc/eyeargon.html The Eye Of Argon]]'' by Jim Theis, who was 16 when he wrote it, is the tale of Grignr, a foul-mouthed barbarian warrior who is trying to escape the dungeons of EvilOverlord Agaphim and rescue a young woman named Carthena from a pagan cult who want to sacrifice her to their idol - a statue with one eye called "The Eye of Argon" (a "scarlet emerald", complete with some interesting plumbing).
The story is well known for its abundant cliches, shoddy spelling, [[FlatCharacter flat characters]], wooden dialogue and [[PurpleProse overly colourful writing]]. Every woman is a "wench", eyes are "emerald orbs". [[SaidBookism Nothing is ever "said"]] - instead it is "queried" or [[HaveAGayOldTime "ejaculated"]] or "husked" or "stated [[PerfectlyCromulentWord whimsicoracally]]". There's an extended scene involving elderly priests groping Carthena, and a scene where Grignr has sex with (or possibly just hugs) a "half-naked harlot... with a lithe, opaque nose". One cult member [[DeusExMachina randomly faints by an epileptic fit in battle]], and another suffers a savage, multi-paragraph GroinAttack.
The most widely-known and -circulated copy of the story comes to an abrupt and unsatisfactory halt, and for many years it was believed that the ending was lost forever (or even, in some quarters, that the story was never completed). Recent years have seen the separate discoveries of two intact copies of the fanzine in which ''The Eye of Argon'' debuted, so it is now known how the tale ends. (With multiple exclamation marks, it turns out.)
At science fiction conventions, ''The Eye Of Argon'' is now a sort of parlor game. All participants sit in a circle with a hard copy of the story, and the first one starts reading aloud--pronouncing every word as it's misspelled, and including every adjective. When he or she finally bursts into laughter, the copy is passed to the next person. If a person manages to make it through more than a page, the copy is sometimes passed anyway, on the grounds that the reader must have special training as a news anchor.
A [[http://ansible.co.uk/misc/eyeargon.html nicely-retyped transcription]], not perfect but quite a bit better, has long been in circulation, with a transcriber's note apologising for its inability to reproduce the original's typesetting and illustrations. It is now also possible to view a [[http://ansible.co.uk/misc/eyeargon.pdf facsimile copy]] of the original publication, in all its strangely-set and oddly-illustrated glory(?). This facsimile ''does'' include the lost ending.
As reading it raw may cause brain damage, you can settle for [[http://www.bmsc.washington.edu/people/merritt/books/Eye_of_Argon.html the MST'd version]], or this [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ikM_Lh8Q0xo Dramatic Reading of Chapter One on You Tube]]. For those whom are unable to read it sober, we have the DrinkingGame over [[DrinkingGame/EyeOfArgon here]].
Compare ''AtlantaNights'' and ''MyImmortal''.
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!!This story provides examples of:
* ZeroPercentApprovalRating - Agaphim only stays in power because he has such a [[TheHorde vast army]].
* AccidentallyAccurate - There is in fact such a thing as [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Red_beryl scarlet emerald]]. It's not known if the author knew this, however.
* {{Angrish}} - Prince Agaphim starts to spout "Muffled, syllibant gibberish" when Grignir calls him a fat idiot.
* AntiClimax - After pages of over-the-top fight scenes, Grignr's final enemy is a mystical leech that sucks [[OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank an absurd amount of blood]] from his leg only to die when burned with a torch.
* AuthorAppeal - Almost every chapter contains at least a mention of breasts. A character even ''speaks'' "bustily".
* AuthorVocabularyCalendar - Unfortunately, [[{{Malaproper}} few, if any words are used correctly]].
* BarbarianHero - Grignr, a very obvious CaptainErsatz of ConanTheBarbarian.
* BattleCry - Grignr's is "hoarsely piercing." Usually includes the phrase "by the surly beard of Mrifk!"
* BeautyEqualsGoodness - The prince and shamen [sic] are always described as fat and disgusting, while Grignr and Carthena are usually portrayed as attractive.
** Grignr is a male SheCleansUpNicely.
* {{BFS}} - Inverted. Most of the swords described are "a foot of blinding steel", which is actually really short (dagger-like, in fact; a good sword is at least three feet).
* BoobyTrap - Grignr narrowly escapes one.
* TheCaligula - Agaphim
* DenOfIniquity
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment - Examples include "the stygian cloud of charcoal ebony." [[hottip:*:Which amounts to "the dark cloud of black black."]]
* DeusExMachina - One priest randomly faints of an epileptic fit for no apparent reason.
* DidNotDoTheResearch - Too many to count. Among them, a reference to the testicles as a ''urinary gland'', and "segregation" to mean "dismemberment"
* {{Fainting}} - one of the shamen [sic] faints for no reason, Carthena passes out quite a few times, but Grignr--despite losing a bathtub's-worth of blood and not eating for days on end--never faints.
* FatBastard - Agaphim.
* FateWorseThanDeath - Agafnd persuades Agaphim that sentencing Grignr to a life of slave labor would be more of a punishment than being tortured to death.
-->'''Agaphim''': ''Take this uncouth heathen to the vault of misery, and be sure that his agonies are long and drawn out...''
* FieryRedhead - Grignr.
* {{Gorn}} - Grignr takes a quarter of a chapter to rip a rat in half, and no grody detail is spared.
* GreeneyedRedhead - Grignr.
* GroinAttack
-->"''Cocking her right foot backwards, she leashed it desperately outwards with the strength of a demon possessed, lodging her sandled foot squarely between the shaman's testicles.''"
* HeroesWantRedheads - Grignr falls for Carthena.
* HookerWithAHeartOfGold - Carthena turns out to be the prostitute who serviced at the start of the story.
* HumanSacrifice - Grignr rescues Carthena from this fate.
* IHaveYouNowMyPretty - Carthena in the hands of the head shaman.
* ImprovisedWeapon - Grignr stabs a guard with the sharpened pelvic bone of a rat.
* LowFantasy
* MoralDissonance - Grignr and Carthena both exhibit this in spades.
* NobleSavage - Gringr claims to be one, although by this point in the story he's gone out of his way to steal a petty bauble.
--> '''Grignr''': My people are not tarnished by petty luxuries and baubles. They remain fierce and unconquerable in their native climes.
* NoEnding - The most widely-circulated copy of the story ends abruptly during Grignr's final battle. Some people continue to believe that this is how the original version actually ended.
* ProducePelting - Agaphim is "often assaulted by hurtling stones and rotting fruits" when he leaves his palace.
* PurpleProse, SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, and DelusionsOfEloquence - At least the ''title'' is concise and looks like a normal title. The very first sentence is where things get fun.
** ...Apart from the use of the name of a fairly well-known gas.
* RedheadedHero - Grignr.
* ReligionOfEvil - The worshippers of Argon.
* RodentsOfUnusualSize
* RougeAnglesOfSatin - The original version had some atrocious spelling, although less faithful transcriptions sometimes correct these.
* SaidBookism - So very, very, very much.
* SickSadWorld
* TheStoner - The illustration on Page 32 of the facsimile (presumably of Agaphim the evil prince) shows him smoking something that looks like a joint.
* TalkingIsAFreeAction
-->"Prepare to embrace your creators in the stygian haunts of hell, barbarian", gasped the first soldier.
* ThongOfShielding - Grignr wears a G-string. How it manages to have folds is anyone's guess.
* ThudAndBlunder - An example of the depths that this subgenre can sink to.
* TitleDrop - at the end of chapter 3½.
* UnexplainedRecovery - Counselor Agafnd dies ''twice''.
* TheUnpronounceable - ''You'' try pronouncing "Grignr", "Agafnd" or "Mrifk".
** This gets particularly amusing when already consonant-heavy words lose their few vowels through typos - the aforementioned Agafnd becomes "Agfnd" at one point. One gets the impression that the author has an irrational dislike of vowels.
* UnusualChapterNumbers - There are a two fractional chapters: Chapters 3½ and 7½.
* UnusualEuphemism - "Mrifk". In addition, while "slut" is a real word, using it as an insult against men is [[CurseOfTheAncients somewhat antiquated]].
* VampiricDraining - The blob at the end sucks blood like a leech.
* VomitIndiscretionShot -
-->The vile stench of the Shaman's hot fetid breath over came the nauseated female with a deep soul searing sickness, causing her to wrench her head backwards and regurgitate a slimy, orangewhite stream of swelling gore over the richly woven purple robe of the enthused acolyte.
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome - The following describes Grignr's wine being kicked over:
--> "''A flying foot caught the mug Grignr had taken hold of, sending its blood red contents sloshing over a flickering crescent; leashing tongues of bright orange flame to the foot trodden floor.''"
** He also spends about six long sentences describing a guy falling over after being [[GroinAttack kicked in the crotch]].
* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe - "sayeth the king" would be correct, except that it's the wrong tense.
** Carthena starts out talking this way, and Grignr does too shortly thereafter, when up till that point he only talked in vulgarities.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord - Many instances: Gringr is constantly described as wearing a g-string, with ''folds''; one character speaks "bustily", another's nose is both "lithe" and "opaque".
* YouTalkTooMuch - Grignr doesn't say this to Carthena, but he thinks it--even though she doesn't seem to be any more talkative than he is.
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!!AdamCadre's ''Mystery Science Theater 3000'' fan-{{MSTing}} presentation has examples of:
* FateWorseThanDeath - The straight lines from the original story is not left un-riffed. It happens so frequently it's lampshaded.
-->'''Agaphim''': The prince would surely have submitted them to the most ghastly of tortures--
-->'''Crow''': Insert joke about having to read THE EYE OF ARGON here.
* HeroicBSOD - The abrupt, non-existent ending leaves Crow utterly broken, and the others are forced to leave him behind in the theater. [[http://keithpalmer.ca/mst3k/favourites/book-ads.txt Fortunately]], he recovers.
* MagicTheGathering - "Tor Giant?"
* {{MST}} - [[http://www.bmsc.washington.edu/people/merritt/books/Eye_of_Argon.html One of the classics]], written by AdamCadre in 1996.
-->'''Theis''': '' The paunchy noble's sagging round face flushed suddenly pale,...''\\
'''Crow''': ''It flushed pale? Did it blanch red after that?''\\
'''Theis''': ''... then pastily lit up to a lustrous cherry red radiance.''\\
'''Crow''': ''Hold me.''
* RunningGag -
--> '''Story''': "[some bit of PurpleProse, such as 'crimson droplets of escaping life fluid']"\\
'''Crow''': "You mean [the normal word, such as 'blood']?"\\
'''Mike''': "Let's not jump to conclusions."
** And anytime the word "slut" is used:
---> '''Crow''': "A slut? Where?"
** And the first few times Grignr's name is mentioned, Tom remarks on the absurdity of his name ([[WheelOfFortune "I'd like to buy a vowel!"]]). [[OverusedRunningGag Then the others persuade him he's getting tiresome, and he stops]].
*** And, also:
---> '''Story''': "[Something about a mount]"\\
'''Mike''': Vesuvius! [a different mountain each time]
** And ''also''...
--->'''Story''': "...[adjective] gore..."
--->'''Mike''': "Albert's cousin from [American state]."
** This message brought to you by the Booze Council.
*** Later replaced by the Death Council.
** And ''also'' also...
---> '''Story''': Groped/groping...\\
'''Tom''': --a 17-year-old Senate page.
*** There are also repeated references to Clarence Thomas.
** And more also...
---> '''Mike''': [[NeverSayThatAgain Never say [word used in previous extract] again]].
** And [[OverlyLongGag more]] ''[[OverlyLongGag also]]''...
---> '''Story''': [Grignr displaying some character trait, e.g. logic, wisdom, deep psychological insight]
---> '''Mike''': When I think of [character trait], I think of three names: [two noted names in the field of said trait], Grignr.
** "You tell me, you're the writer!"
* TarotTroubles - Tom Servo is reading Crow's future with a pack of Tarot cards he found somewhere. Poor Crow gets [[RasputinianDeath nine Deaths]] and a [[http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=2656 Tor Giant]].
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Described as "the worst fantasy novella ever", ''[[http://ansible.co.uk/misc/eyeargon.html The Eye Of Argon]]'' by Jim Theis, who was 16 when he wrote it, is the tale of Grignr, a foul-mouthed barbarian warrior who is trying to escape the dungeons of EvilOverlord Agaphim and rescue a young woman named Carthena from a pagan cult who want to sacrifice her to their idol - a statue with one eye called "The Eye of Argon" (a "scarlet emerald", complete with some interesting plumbing).
The story is well known for its abundant cliches, shoddy spelling, [[FlatCharacter flat characters]], wooden dialogue and [[PurpleProse overly colourful writing]]. Every woman is a "wench", eyes are "emerald orbs". [[SaidBookism Nothing is ever "said"]] - instead it is "queried" or [[HaveAGayOldTime "ejaculated"]] or "husked" or "stated [[PerfectlyCromulentWord whimsicoracally]]". There's an extended scene involving elderly priests groping Carthena, and a scene where Grignr has sex with (or possibly just hugs) a "half-naked harlot... with a lithe, opaque nose". One cult member [[DeusExMachina randomly faints by an epileptic fit in battle]], and another suffers a savage, multi-paragraph GroinAttack.
The most widely-known and -circulated copy of the story comes to an abrupt and unsatisfactory halt, and for many years it was believed that the ending was lost forever (or even, in some quarters, that the story was never completed). Recent years have seen the separate discoveries of two intact copies of the fanzine in which ''The Eye of Argon'' debuted, so it is now known how the tale ends. (With multiple exclamation marks, it turns out.)
At science fiction conventions, ''The Eye Of Argon'' is now a sort of parlor game. All participants sit in a circle with a hard copy of the story, and the first one starts reading aloud--pronouncing every word as it's misspelled, and including every adjective. When he or she finally bursts into laughter, the copy is passed to the next person. If a person manages to make it through more than a page, the copy is sometimes passed anyway, on the grounds that the reader must have special training as a news anchor.
A [[http://ansible.co.uk/misc/eyeargon.html nicely-retyped transcription]], not perfect but quite a bit better, has long been in circulation, with a transcriber's note apologising for its inability to reproduce the original's typesetting and illustrations. It is now also possible to view a [[http://ansible.co.uk/misc/eyeargon.pdf facsimile copy]] of the original publication, in all its strangely-set and oddly-illustrated glory(?). This facsimile ''does'' include the lost ending.
As reading it raw may cause brain damage, you can settle for [[http://www.bmsc.washington.edu/people/merritt/books/Eye_of_Argon.html the MST'd version]], or this [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ikM_Lh8Q0xo Dramatic Reading of Chapter One on You Tube]]. For those whom are unable to read it sober, we have the DrinkingGame over [[DrinkingGame/EyeOfArgon here]].
Compare ''AtlantaNights'' and ''MyImmortal''.
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!!This story provides examples of:
* ZeroPercentApprovalRating - Agaphim only stays in power because he has such a [[TheHorde vast army]].
* AccidentallyAccurate - There is in fact such a thing as [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Red_beryl scarlet emerald]]. It's not known if the author knew this, however.
* {{Angrish}} - Prince Agaphim starts to spout "Muffled, syllibant gibberish" when Grignir calls him a fat idiot.
* AntiClimax - After pages of over-the-top fight scenes, Grignr's final enemy is a mystical leech that sucks [[OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank an absurd amount of blood]] from his leg only to die when burned with a torch.
* AuthorAppeal - Almost every chapter contains at least a mention of breasts. A character even ''speaks'' "bustily".
* AuthorVocabularyCalendar - Unfortunately, [[{{Malaproper}} few, if any words are used correctly]].
* BarbarianHero - Grignr, a very obvious CaptainErsatz of ConanTheBarbarian.
* BattleCry - Grignr's is "hoarsely piercing." Usually includes the phrase "by the surly beard of Mrifk!"
* BeautyEqualsGoodness - The prince and shamen [sic] are always described as fat and disgusting, while Grignr and Carthena are usually portrayed as attractive.
** Grignr is a male SheCleansUpNicely.
* {{BFS}} - Inverted. Most of the swords described are "a foot of blinding steel", which is actually really short (dagger-like, in fact; a good sword is at least three feet).
* BoobyTrap - Grignr narrowly escapes one.
* TheCaligula - Agaphim
* DenOfIniquity
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment - Examples include "the stygian cloud of charcoal ebony." [[hottip:*:Which amounts to "the dark cloud of black black."]]
* DeusExMachina - One priest randomly faints of an epileptic fit for no apparent reason.
* DidNotDoTheResearch - Too many to count. Among them, a reference to the testicles as a ''urinary gland'', and "segregation" to mean "dismemberment"
* {{Fainting}} - one of the shamen [sic] faints for no reason, Carthena passes out quite a few times, but Grignr--despite losing a bathtub's-worth of blood and not eating for days on end--never faints.
* FatBastard - Agaphim.
* FateWorseThanDeath - Agafnd persuades Agaphim that sentencing Grignr to a life of slave labor would be more of a punishment than being tortured to death.
-->'''Agaphim''': ''Take this uncouth heathen to the vault of misery, and be sure that his agonies are long and drawn out...''
* FieryRedhead - Grignr.
* {{Gorn}} - Grignr takes a quarter of a chapter to rip a rat in half, and no grody detail is spared.
* GreeneyedRedhead - Grignr.
* GroinAttack
-->"''Cocking her right foot backwards, she leashed it desperately outwards with the strength of a demon possessed, lodging her sandled foot squarely between the shaman's testicles.''"
* HeroesWantRedheads - Grignr falls for Carthena.
* HookerWithAHeartOfGold - Carthena turns out to be the prostitute who serviced at the start of the story.
* HumanSacrifice - Grignr rescues Carthena from this fate.
* IHaveYouNowMyPretty - Carthena in the hands of the head shaman.
* ImprovisedWeapon - Grignr stabs a guard with the sharpened pelvic bone of a rat.
* LowFantasy
* MoralDissonance - Grignr and Carthena both exhibit this in spades.
* NobleSavage - Gringr claims to be one, although by this point in the story he's gone out of his way to steal a petty bauble.
--> '''Grignr''': My people are not tarnished by petty luxuries and baubles. They remain fierce and unconquerable in their native climes.
* NoEnding - The most widely-circulated copy of the story ends abruptly during Grignr's final battle. Some people continue to believe that this is how the original version actually ended.
* ProducePelting - Agaphim is "often assaulted by hurtling stones and rotting fruits" when he leaves his palace.
* PurpleProse, SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, and DelusionsOfEloquence - At least the ''title'' is concise and looks like a normal title. The very first sentence is where things get fun.
** ...Apart from the use of the name of a fairly well-known gas.
* RedheadedHero - Grignr.
* ReligionOfEvil - The worshippers of Argon.
* RodentsOfUnusualSize
* RougeAnglesOfSatin - The original version had some atrocious spelling, although less faithful transcriptions sometimes correct these.
* SaidBookism - So very, very, very much.
* SickSadWorld
* TheStoner - The illustration on Page 32 of the facsimile (presumably of Agaphim the evil prince) shows him smoking something that looks like a joint.
* TalkingIsAFreeAction
-->"Prepare to embrace your creators in the stygian haunts of hell, barbarian", gasped the first soldier.
* ThongOfShielding - Grignr wears a G-string. How it manages to have folds is anyone's guess.
* ThudAndBlunder - An example of the depths that this subgenre can sink to.
* TitleDrop - at the end of chapter 3½.
* UnexplainedRecovery - Counselor Agafnd dies ''twice''.
* TheUnpronounceable - ''You'' try pronouncing "Grignr", "Agafnd" or "Mrifk".
** This gets particularly amusing when already consonant-heavy words lose their few vowels through typos - the aforementioned Agafnd becomes "Agfnd" at one point. One gets the impression that the author has an irrational dislike of vowels.
* UnusualChapterNumbers - There are a two fractional chapters: Chapters 3½ and 7½.
* UnusualEuphemism - "Mrifk". In addition, while "slut" is a real word, using it as an insult against men is [[CurseOfTheAncients somewhat antiquated]].
* VampiricDraining - The blob at the end sucks blood like a leech.
* VomitIndiscretionShot -
-->The vile stench of the Shaman's hot fetid breath over came the nauseated female with a deep soul searing sickness, causing her to wrench her head backwards and regurgitate a slimy, orangewhite stream of swelling gore over the richly woven purple robe of the enthused acolyte.
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome - The following describes Grignr's wine being kicked over:
--> "''A flying foot caught the mug Grignr had taken hold of, sending its blood red contents sloshing over a flickering crescent; leashing tongues of bright orange flame to the foot trodden floor.''"
** He also spends about six long sentences describing a guy falling over after being [[GroinAttack kicked in the crotch]].
* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe - "sayeth the king" would be correct, except that it's the wrong tense.
** Carthena starts out talking this way, and Grignr does too shortly thereafter, when up till that point he only talked in vulgarities.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord - Many instances: Gringr is constantly described as wearing a g-string, with ''folds''; one character speaks "bustily", another's nose is both "lithe" and "opaque".
* YouTalkTooMuch - Grignr doesn't say this to Carthena, but he thinks it--even though she doesn't seem to be any more talkative than he is.
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!!AdamCadre's ''Mystery Science Theater 3000'' fan-{{MSTing}} presentation has examples of:
* FateWorseThanDeath - The straight lines from the original story is not left un-riffed. It happens so frequently it's lampshaded.
-->'''Agaphim''': The prince would surely have submitted them to the most ghastly of tortures--
-->'''Crow''': Insert joke about having to read THE EYE OF ARGON here.
* HeroicBSOD - The abrupt, non-existent ending leaves Crow utterly broken, and the others are forced to leave him behind in the theater. [[http://keithpalmer.ca/mst3k/favourites/book-ads.txt Fortunately]], he recovers.
* MagicTheGathering - "Tor Giant?"
* {{MST}} - [[http://www.bmsc.washington.edu/people/merritt/books/Eye_of_Argon.html One of the classics]], written by AdamCadre in 1996.
-->'''Theis''': '' The paunchy noble's sagging round face flushed suddenly pale,...''\\
'''Crow''': ''It flushed pale? Did it blanch red after that?''\\
'''Theis''': ''... then pastily lit up to a lustrous cherry red radiance.''\\
'''Crow''': ''Hold me.''
* RunningGag -
--> '''Story''': "[some bit of PurpleProse, such as 'crimson droplets of escaping life fluid']"\\
'''Crow''': "You mean [the normal word, such as 'blood']?"\\
'''Mike''': "Let's not jump to conclusions."
** And anytime the word "slut" is used:
---> '''Crow''': "A slut? Where?"
** And the first few times Grignr's name is mentioned, Tom remarks on the absurdity of his name ([[WheelOfFortune "I'd like to buy a vowel!"]]). [[OverusedRunningGag Then the others persuade him he's getting tiresome, and he stops]].
*** And, also:
---> '''Story''': "[Something about a mount]"\\
'''Mike''': Vesuvius! [a different mountain each time]
** And ''also''...
--->'''Story''': "...[adjective] gore..."
--->'''Mike''': "Albert's cousin from [American state]."
** This message brought to you by the Booze Council.
*** Later replaced by the Death Council.
** And ''also'' also...
---> '''Story''': Groped/groping...\\
'''Tom''': --a 17-year-old Senate page.
*** There are also repeated references to Clarence Thomas.
** And more also...
---> '''Mike''': [[NeverSayThatAgain Never say [word used in previous extract] again]].
** And [[OverlyLongGag more]] ''[[OverlyLongGag also]]''...
---> '''Story''': [Grignr displaying some character trait, e.g. logic, wisdom, deep psychological insight]
---> '''Mike''': When I think of [character trait], I think of three names: [two noted names in the field of said trait], Grignr.
** "You tell me, you're the writer!"
* TarotTroubles - Tom Servo is reading Crow's future with a pack of Tarot cards he found somewhere. Poor Crow gets [[RasputinianDeath nine Deaths]] and a [[http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=2656 Tor Giant]].
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