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* TrainingTheGiftOfMagic: The book establishes the principle that Discworld magic-worker have a unique gift, but still need training and competence to use it safely. (Even Rincewind has the gift, though he lacks any competence whatsoever.) The gift is defined here as the ability to see octarine light (see above), though that is largely forgotten in later books.
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* TrainingTheGiftOfMagic: The book establishes the principle that Discworld magic-worker magic-workers have a unique gift, but still need training and competence to use it safely. (Even Rincewind has the gift, though he lacks any competence whatsoever.) The gift is defined here as the ability to see octarine light (see above), though that is largely forgotten in later books.
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* [[YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo You Said You Would Let Me Go]]: This was the reward the High Priest of Krull promised his architect, a man so brilliant he had already been mutilated by three previous employers so he could never surpass his work for them. Unfortunately for the architect, ILied.
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* [[YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo You Said You Would Let Me Go]]: This was the reward the High Priest of Krull promised his architect, a man so brilliant he had already been mutilated by three previous employers so he could never surpass his work for them. Unfortunately for the architect, ILied.[[ILied he lied]].
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* Creator/HPLovecraft: Bel-Shamharoth's temple
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: [[EldritchAbomination Bel-Shamharoth]]
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* ChestMonster: The Luggage, a walking chest made of sapient pearwood. One of the few good-guy examples... [[HeroicComedicSociopath for a given value of "good"]]
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* ChestMonster: The Luggage, a walking chest made of sapient pearwood. One of the few good-guy examples... [[HeroicComedicSociopath for a given value of "good"]]"good"]].
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Noted in-universe when Rincewind has an inner monologue of exposition about Bel-Shamharoth and how wizards never say the number between seven and nine because "you'll be eight alive" as the saying goes. (The Discworld Companion later {{lampshaded}} the way that apparently saying 'ate' doesn't summon Bel-Shamharoth despite sounding identical to 'eight').
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** Garrett's levitator ended up flying home over an ocean that he'd persuaded himself to loath.
** Garrett is not usually listed among Pratchett's influencers but was in the right time and genre to be one.
** Garrett is not usually listed among Pratchett's influencers but was in the right time and genre to be one.
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* ComicBookAdaptation: Innovation Comics published one in 1991. Having come out some time after the original, it alters some of the EarlyInstallmentWeirdness, such as removing Death's casual murders and having Vetinari more in line with his later depiction.
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* RejectedByTheEmpathicWeapon: Kring, the magic talking sword, is picked up not by the mighty hero he expects but by freakin' [[LovableCoward Rincewind]]. The sword realizes it has to make the best of the situation, but is passive-aggressive and snarky the entire time until Rincewind is finally able to hand it off to Hrun, to their mutual relief.
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The very first ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'' novel, from 1983. Written as a travelogue in which cowardly failed wizard Rincewind and FishOutOfWater Twoflower, the world's first tourist, travel much of the Disc while running away from things with big teeth and men with swords. Unlike most of the later ones, it was primarily a vehicle for Creator/TerryPratchett to mock, play with, and deconstruct ''specific'' other fantasy series, rather than the much broader field of his later work. Introduced his interest in using nuclear physics (his previous area of expertise as a scientific journalist) as a metaphor and parody for how magic works. And unlike later Discworld novels, is split into six parts rather than a continuous chapterless piece.
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The very first ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'' novel, from 1983. Written as a travelogue in which cowardly failed wizard Rincewind and FishOutOfWater Twoflower, the world's first tourist, travel much of the Disc while running away from things with big teeth and men with swords. Unlike most of the later ones, it was primarily a vehicle for Creator/TerryPratchett to mock, play with, and deconstruct ''specific'' other fantasy series, rather than the much broader field of his later work. Introduced work; introduced his interest in using nuclear physics (his previous area of expertise as a scientific journalist) as a metaphor and parody for how magic works. And works; and, unlike later Discworld novels, is split into six parts rather than a continuous chapterless piece.
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** For that matter, perfectly reversed in the German translation, where Twoflower is named Zweiblum ("Zweiblumen" actually is the plural form and would correspond to "Twoflowers"; also, the German translator rendered Twoflower as Zweiblum to make it sound like a genuine German [[labelnote:note]] contrary to popular perception, not exclusively Jewish, despite the the ''-blum'' ending [[/labelnote]] name). The name of the aforementioned counterpart is, obviously, reverse-translated as Jack Twoflower.
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** For that matter, perfectly reversed in the German translation, where Twoflower is named Zweiblum ("Zweiblumen" actually is the plural form and would correspond to "Twoflowers"; also, the German translator rendered Twoflower as Zweiblum to make it sound like a genuine German [[labelnote:note]] contrary to popular perception, not exclusively Jewish, despite the the ''-blum'' ending [[/labelnote]] name). The name of the aforementioned counterpart is, obviously, reverse-translated as Jack Twoflower.
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* ILied: The Arch-astronomer of Krull, after the spaceship is completed, promised that Dactylos would be simply be released from his services, rather than mutilated as he was by previous employers. The the Arch-astronomer has him shot with an arrow, even admitting that he lied about it.
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* ILied: The Arch-astronomer of Krull, after the spaceship is completed, promised that Dactylos would be simply be released from his services, rather than mutilated as he was by previous employers. The the Arch-astronomer has him shot with an arrow, even admitting that he lied about it.
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** The Assassin's Guild is depicted as a bunch of thuggish cutthroats as opposed to their later characterization as refined, elegant gentlemen.
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-->"ILied." ''(arrow shot)''
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** Rincewind's explanation of hydrophobic wizards' ability to levitate over water is a rewording of the way levitation was controlled by the protagonist of Creator/RandallGarrett's ''What The Left Hand Was Doing'':
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* InMysteriousWays: The gods not only play dice with the universe, they play ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons''. Many of the seemingly capricious plot events that befall Rincewind and Twoflower are manifestations of an exciting tabletop gaming session between Fate and [[LadyLuck The Lady]].
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* AccidentalIncantation: The heroes end up in the lair of Bel-Shamharoth, a.k.a. the Soul Eater, an EldritchAbomination so horrible even Time doesn't go near it. Rincewind realizes exactly where they are; and since he knows that eight is its sacred number, tells everyone not to say the number that corresponds to the sum of seven plus one, or three plus five, or ten minus two... (Even the narration gets in on it, describing the 7a passages as branching off from the room with four times two walls). Cue Hrun's talking sword asking why Rincewind doesn't want them to say "eight"; the words "EIGHT, Hate, ate" echoing around the temple without fading away; and of course, Bel-Shamharoth waking up.
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-->Whoever would be wearing those suits, Rincewind decided, was expecting [[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries to boldly go where no man--other than the occasional luckless sailor, who didn't really count--had boldly gone before]].
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** Rincewind's explanation of hydrophobic wizards' ability to levitate over water is a rewording of the way levitation was controlled by the protagonist of Creator/RandallGarrett's ''What The Left Hand Was Doing'':
--->''The Colour of Magic'': “You mean they hate water?” said Twoflower. “No, that wouldn’t work,” said Rincewind. “Hate is an attracting force, just like love. They really loathe it, the very idea of it revolts them.”
--->''What The Left Hand Was Doing'': He didn’t hate it. That would be deadly, for hate implies as much attraction as love... Only loathing could save him. The earth beneath was utterly repulsive to him.
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--->''The Colour of Magic'': “You mean they hate water?” said Twoflower. “No, that wouldn’t work,” said Rincewind. “Hate is an attracting force, just like love. They really loathe it, the very idea of it revolts them.”
--->''What The Left Hand Was Doing'': He didn’t hate it. That would be deadly, for hate implies as much attraction as love... Only loathing could save him. The earth beneath was utterly repulsive to him.
** Garrett's levitator ended up flying home over an ocean that he'd persuaded himself to loath.
** Garrett is not usually listed among Pratchett's influencers but was in the right time and genre to be one.
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* DarkSkinnedBlonde: Taken to Drow-like extremes with the natives of Krull, whose skin is pitch black and hair, pale like moonlight.
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* VancianMagic: The narration states this is how spellcasting works (at least with wizards), though nobody is shown using magic at least to a point where this would be demonstrated in practice. [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness This does not seem to be the case in any later books.]]
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* CoolSword: Kring, Hrun's {{talking|Weapon}} sword.
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* MagicSword: Kring, Hrun's talking sword.
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* FantasticNuke: The Wyrmberg area suffered a direct hit by one during the Mage Wars, and the ensuing magical fallout means that it is home to an upside-down mountain, imaginary dragons, and coins land on their edge or don't come down at all.
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* FantasticNuke: The Wyrmberg area suffered a direct hit by one during the Mage Wars, and the ensuing magical fallout FantasticFallout means that it is home to an upside-down mountain, imaginary dragons, and coins land on their edge or don't come down at all.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: Goldeneyes Silverhand Dactylos pretty much knows he's going to die when he finishes his latest construction, and sure enough, his current employer has him shot in the chest with a crossbow. He calmly examines the bolt and comments on its shoddy workmanship before expiring.
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* ChainmailBikini: Liessa.
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** The Ankh is treated as an actual river, wherein it's entirely possible to drown with ease, as opposed to the highly euphemistic river (or more accurately, mud with some water in it) of later books.
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** The Ankh is treated as an actual river, wherein it's entirely possible to drown with ease, as opposed to the highly euphemistic river (or more accurately, mud with some water in it) of later books. Though it is described as being very polluted.
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* OldMagic: The dryad Druellae calls her magic "Not your weasel-faced tame magic, but root-and-branch magic, the old magic. Wild magic." Rincewind remembers just enough magical theory to understand what she's doing (which, ironically, is a {{magitek}} Faraday disc), and that UU strictly forbids it.
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* FantasyAliens: Tethys the water troll hails from another planet and arrived on the disc by falling off his previous world.
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** The Discworld Companion suggests he's still in the lake that Rincewind lands in in The Light Fantastic.
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** Death acts psychotically, randomly killing people out of spite, unlike his later sympathetic view on humanity, seeing his role as a duty and not being the one who decides who dies and when. Also, some of the details of his job aren't quite ironed out, showing him actively taking souls, rather than just severing the link between corpse and spirit.
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** Death acts psychotically, randomly killing people out of spite, unlike his later sympathetic view on humanity, seeing his role as a duty and not being the one who decides who dies and when. Also, some of the details of his job aren't quite ironed out, showing him actively taking souls, rather than just severing the link between corpse and spirit.spirit, and mentioning Famine as an underling, rather than a co-worker.
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* AndroclesLion: A fairly straight example; Rincewind saves a frog from being swept over the Edge and it later turns out to have had The Lady "riding in its mind". Being that The Lady is... The Lady, it is implied she set this up herself
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* AndroclesLion: A fairly straight example; Rincewind saves a frog from being swept over the Edge and it later turns out to have had The Lady "riding in its mind". Being that The Lady is... The Lady, it is implied she set this up herselfherself.
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** Death telling Rincewind that they have an appointment in a far away city and offering him [[SchmuckBait to loan him his horse to get there]] is an inverted version of the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Appointment_in_Samarra Appointment in Samarra]] folktale.
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** Rincewind throws a wine bottle at the Guestmaster, who freezes it in the air with magic. The next time the Guestmaster comes in, the spell wears off and the bottle smashes into his head.
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* GravityScrew: After Rincewind threw a wine bottle at the Guestmaster, he retaliated with Atavarr's Personal Gravitational Upset, a spell that left Rincewind standing on the wall.
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* GravityScrew: After Rincewind threw a wine bottle at the Guestmaster, he retaliated with Atavarr's Personal Gravitational Upset, a spell that left Rincewind standing on the wall.wall, unable to get back to the floor.
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