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* InnocentlyInsensitive: [=McAdams=] suggests that maybe the reason Dr. Soong was able to do what no one else could has something to do with how much he wanted it to happen. Data asks if that means he didn't want Lal to live. [[spoiler:In retrospect, it's potentially an intentional {{Invok|ed Trope}}ing of this trope to further conceal her true identity]]
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: [=McAdams=] suggests that maybe the reason Dr. Soong was able to do what no one else could has have something to do with how much he wanted it to happen. Data asks if that means he didn't want Lal to live. [[spoiler:In retrospect, it's potentially an intentional {{Invok|ed Trope}}ing of this trope to further conceal her true identity]]
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** Trying to console Data, Picard quotes ''Farewell to Arms'', specifically "the world breaks everyone, and afterwards everyone is strong at the broken places". Unfortunately, he's dealing with Data, who finishes the quote, specifically: "those is does not break, it kills."
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** Trying to console Data, Picard quotes ''Farewell to Arms'', specifically "the world breaks everyone, and afterwards everyone is strong at the broken places". Unfortunately, he's dealing with Data, who finishes the quote, specifically: "those is it does not break, it kills."
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** Much, around Vaslovik. For starters, the fact he's an old man in the Soong flashbacks, which were ''decades'' before the main story, and yet is still around and active during the modern parts, something a little suspicious even with the longer ages of people in ''Star Trek'', and moreso considering that Graves and Soong, who were much younger than Vaslovik appeared to be, were both old men by the time they appeared on the series, while Vaslovik is still in much the same condition he was in those older memories. Also, the fact he doesn't like Starfleet captains (especially gung-ho types).
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** Much, around Vaslovik. For starters, the fact he's an old man in the Soong flashbacks, which were ''decades'' before the main story, and yet is still around and active during the modern parts, something a little suspicious which even with the longer ages of people in ''Star Trek'', and moreso Trek'' is still more than a little unusual -- especially considering that Graves and Soong, who were much younger than Vaslovik appeared to be, in those flashbacks, were both old men by the time they appeared on the series, while Vaslovik is not only still in much alive (and without any of the same condition he was age-related ailments that Graves and Soong displayed in those older memories.their appearances), but has seemingly barely aged at all in all that time. Also, the fact he doesn't like Starfleet captains (especially gung-ho types).
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* TheFriendsWhoNeverHang: While Data and Doctor Crusher ''do'' spend time together, Crusher muses at one point that she and Data arguably spend the least time together of all the senior staff as Data obviously doesn't often have need of her medical services.
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* {{Rewrite}}: Back in "What Little Girls Are Made Of", Ruk explained that the Old Ones grew fearful of their servants, apparently without cause, and tried turning them off, so the robots turned on them in self-defense. Here, we get the testimony of an Old One, which states the situation was more complex than that. There is some wiggle room since even in the original episode Ruk's memory was pretty hazy after fifty thousand years alone.
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* AndIMustScream: The way [[spoiler:Sam]] talks about it suggests that he was to some degree aware during the half million years that his android body was lying inert in the lab.
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* AndIMustScream: The way [[spoiler:Sam]] talks about it suggests that he was to some degree aware during for at least some portion of the half million years that his android body was lying inert in the lab.
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: While the other androids go into stasis, Ruk alone is left active to wait for someone to show up. It takes ''five hundred thousand years'' for this to happen. By then, Ruk is so far gone he can't even remember his reason for being and consequently forgets that he's supposed to wake the other androids at this point (or for that matter that said other androids even exist).
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: While the other androids go into stasis, Ruk alone is left active to wait for someone to show up. It takes ''five hundred thousand years'' for this to happen. By then, Ruk is so far gone he can't even remember his reason for being and consequently forgets being, so when the moment comes, he doesn't even remember that he's supposed to wake the other androids at this point (or for ''exist'', let alone that matter he's meant to revive them, and ultimately dies without ever completing the very task he was put in that said other androids even exist).situation for in the first place.
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: While the other androids go into stasis, Ruk alone is left active to wait for someone to show up. It takes ''five hundred thousand years'' for this to happen. By then, Ruk is so far gone he can't even remember his reason for being.
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: While the other androids go into stasis, Ruk alone is left active to wait for someone to show up. It takes ''five hundred thousand years'' for this to happen. By then, Ruk is so far gone he can't even remember his reason for being.being and consequently forgets that he's supposed to wake the other androids at this point (or for that matter that said other androids even exist).
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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Sam's]] statement suggests that he was to some degree aware during the half million years that his android body was lying inert in the lab.
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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Sam's]] statement The way [[spoiler:Sam]] talks about it suggests that he was to some degree aware during the half million years that his android body was lying inert in the lab.
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* HiddenInPlainSight: How do you disguise an advanced prototype android with a sophisticated AI that everyone and their brother is looking for? Why you just [[spoiler:give it a fake Starfleet record and stick it on the Federation flagship as its Chief of Security, of course!]]
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* HiddenInPlainSight: HiddenInPlainSight:
** How do you disguise an advanced prototype android with a sophisticated AI that everyone and their brother is looking for? Why you just [[spoiler:give it a fake Starfleet record and stick it on the Federation flagship as its Chief of Security, of course!]]
** How do you disguise an advanced prototype android with a sophisticated AI that everyone and their brother is looking for? Why you just [[spoiler:give it a fake Starfleet record and stick it on the Federation flagship as its Chief of Security, of course!]]
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* AmnesiacResonance: [[spoiler:M-5 doesn't remember its past, evidently a precaution of Vaslovik's, but the programming of "survival at any cost" is still hardwired into it.
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* AmnesiacResonance: [[spoiler:M-5 doesn't remember its past, evidently a precaution of Vaslovik's, but the programming of "survival at any cost" is still hardwired into it.it]].
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* DelayedReaction: A pretty impressive one, fifty thousand years after the rest of the androids went into stasis, Ruk finally figures out the underlying meaning of being told "patience is your best attribute".
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* DelayedReaction: A pretty impressive one, fifty one -- five hundred thousand years after the rest of the androids went into stasis, Ruk finally figures out the underlying meaning of being told "patience is your best attribute".
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* AmnesiacResonance: [[spoiler:M-5 doesn't remember its past, evidently a precaution of Vaslovik's, but the programming of "survival at any cost" is still hardwired into it.]]
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* AmnesiacResonance: [[spoiler:M-5 doesn't remember its past, evidently a precaution of Vaslovik's, but the programming of "survival at any cost" is still hardwired into it.]]it.
* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Sam's]] statement suggests that he was to some degree aware during the half million years that his android body was lying inert in the lab.
* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Sam's]] statement suggests that he was to some degree aware during the half million years that his android body was lying inert in the lab.
