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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: The book is an examination of the world through the eyes of a kobold, implying their [[AlwaysChaoticEvil Always Lawful Evil]] status wickedness is because of the way they're treated. It's implied in the conclusion [[spoiler:that Ren is beginning to feel this way as well.]]
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* RebelliousPrincess: In a way, Ren is a version of this. Sorcerers are a privileged upper class; they can own things, are a lot more independent, and the rules of their LawfulEvil society don't apply as strictly. However, they are still expected to contribute and Tzala does not allow her to leave the city.
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* RebelliousPrincess: In a way, Ren is a version of this. Sorcerers are a privileged upper class; they can own things, are a lot more independent, and the rules of their LawfulEvil society don't apply as strictly. However, they are still expected to contribute and Tzala does not allow her to leave the city.
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* TakeThat: To the Pathfinder RPG. It's subtle, but Ren quickly realises that Quennax is too powerful for her. In the Pathfinder RPG, Summoners (the base class who are granted Eidolons as pets) are widely considered to be overpowered, primarily because of their Eidolons. (... and their reduced spell-level spells)
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* TakeThat: To the Pathfinder RPG.''TabletopGame/{{Pathfinder}}''. It's subtle, but Ren quickly realises that Quennax is too powerful for her. In the Pathfinder RPG, ''Pathfinder'', Summoners (the base class who are granted Eidolons as pets) are widely considered to be overpowered, primarily because of their Eidolons. (... and their reduced spell-level spells)
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* [[OurGnomesAreWeirder Our Kobolds Are Different]]: The kobolds have a racial memory. They're born being able to speak and sometimes have memories and experiences of their ancestors. For example, when Ren first puts on a chainmail shirt, she instantly knows how to use it because one of her ancestors did. Khavi, too, when he picks up Jedra's spear. [[spoiler:Also, Ren is a half dragon, a fact that should be fairly obvious under the game mechanics rules, but aside from a tinge of her scales she looks otherwise normal.]]
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Amulets exist that can allow the wearer to assume the form of another species, but the change has an effect on the mind of the wearer. For example, a kobold who wears an amulet of human-shape may no longer be able to understand Draconic and will have a harder time telling individual kobolds apart, but is more easily able to tell ''humans'' apart than they were before.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Dragons are able to take a variety of forms other than their natural shape, such as appearing as a gnome, kobold, or human. Amulets also exist that allow the wearer to take the shape of another species. [[spoiler:Tzala is revealed to be a gnome who came to Atikala with an amulet that made her a kobold, and Ren uses one to briefly infiltrate the human village of Ivywood.]]
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[[http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00EZ4CEO2/?tag=wwwlacunavers-20 "Ren of Atikala"]] is the first novel of the Kobolds series.series by David Adams. Inspired by the Pathfinder RPG and set in the world of Drathari where Gods once existed but are now dead, it's a view of a stereotypical sword-and-sorcery fantasy world through the eyes of a race typically considered monsters.
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* DeathOfTheOldGods: In the backstory for the world of Drathari, the Gods promised to do something unprecedented on the final day of the Age of Immortality. They died. Now the clerical magic of the [[TabletopGame/{{Pathfinder}} Pathfinder ruleset]] no longer has any effect, and prophesy has ceased to be.
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* InterspeciesRomance: [[spoiler:By ''The Empire of Dust'', Ren and Tyermumtican have started a secret romance, though it's [[DownplayedTrope downplayed]] because the majority of their romance takes place with Tyermumtican assuming kobold form.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler:After Ren inadvertently orders the Ssarsdale Darkguard to massacre the inhabitants of Ivywood, Tzala and Dorydd tear into her before leaving her company. Tyermumtican does the same, only relenting when she swears that she didn't mean for it to happen.]]
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** [[spoiler:The series as a whole ends on a downer; while Ren's quest to kill Contremulus is ultimately successful, her mission to conquer the surface and improve the live of both the Kobolds of Ssarsdale and the humans on the surface come to naught, the destruction of Ivywood caused Tzala and Dorydd to leave her, and Tyermumtican is dead. Ren is left crippled and unable to cast spells, and dares not return to Ssarsdale for fear that she might be killed on sight for being useless to kobold society now.]]
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The series consists of three novels, three novellas, and a short story.
[[AC:Kobolds]]
# ''Ren of Atikala'' (2013)
# ''The Scars of Northaven'' (2015)
# ''The Empire of Dust'' (2016)
[[AC:The Pariahs (Novellas, 2015)]]
# ''The Pariahs''
# ''Freelands''
# ''Elfholme''
[[AC:Short Stories]]
* ''Sacrifice''
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# ''Ren of Atikala'' (2013)
# ''The Scars of Northaven'' (2015)
# ''The Empire of Dust'' (2016)
[[AC:The Pariahs (Novellas, 2015)]]
# ''The Pariahs''
# ''Freelands''
# ''Elfholme''
[[AC:Short Stories]]
* ''Sacrifice''
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->''I was born dead.''
-->-- '''Ren of Atikala'''
[[http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00EZ4CEO2/?tag=wwwlacunavers-20 "Ren of Atikala"]] is the first novel of the Kobolds series. Inspired by the Pathfinder RPG and set in the world of Drathari where Gods once existed but are now dead, it's a view of a stereotypical sword-and-sorcery fantasy world through the eyes of a race typically considered monsters.
The protagonist, Ren of Atikala, is a young kobold sorceress and warrior who struggles with a lack of identity, the prejudices of her people, and the destruction of her home city.
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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler:Khavi.]]
* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: Most kobolds are black, rust coloured, or some other strange colour. Ren is gold, an unfortunate colour as it implies gold dragon heritage, which is seen as evil.
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler: Tzala]] loses her arm.
* Arc Words: "No mercy for monsters" appears in a few contexts.
* BackStab: Twice, by [[spoiler:Vrax. First when he sends the Atikalan refugees out to die, then Vrax again after Ren, Tzala and Khavi return, he takes Ren and Khavi to Contremulus.]]
* Badass: Vrax is smarter than his large size would let on.
* BarbarianHero: Not explicitly stated, but Khavi fits. He can't even read, although this is common of non-sorcerers.
* BearerOfBadNews: Ren relays Atikala's destruction to Melicandra and the guards at Ssarsdale. [[spoiler: It's unclear if Vrax and the other leaders already knew or not.]]
* BecauseDestinySaysSo: Ren convinces Khavi to visit the copper dragon Tyermumtican by saying that, after everything they've been through, their story can't end with them being turned into dragon shit.
* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: The novel implies this, in a roundabout way, is why kobolds are evil. [[spoiler: It's implied in the epilogue that this happens to Ren after she's made a prisoner of Contremulus.]]
* BerserkerTears: Ren, [[spoiler:when Khavi is killed.]] Also Khavi technically counts when [[spoiler:he cries after seeing the destroyed gnome city.]]
* BewareTheNiceOnes: [[spoiler: Tzala kills more humans than all the other kobolds combined.]]
* BigBad: [[spoiler:Contremulus]]. Vrax probably counts too.
* BigDamnHeroes: Khavi, saving Ren [[spoiler:from the gnome]] outside the mists. [[spoiler:And again, but GoneHorriblyRight when he saves her from the humans who had just started to warm to her, killing a child in the process.]]
* BigScrewedUpFamily: Ren doesn't know her parents, and there's significant resistance to her finding out [[spoiler:because her mother is a powerful sorceress and her father is an evil gold dragon.]]
* BizarreAlienBiology: Kobolds have an estrus cycle and lay eggs. Played straight in-universe, for laughs, when Khavi asks how many eggs a human lays a year, and again when No-Kill takes off her boot, which Ren and Khavi mistake for part of her foot.
* BreakTheCutie: No-Kill [[spoiler: asks for a MercyKill when she sees that her city has been destroyed. Khavi, after a moment's hesitation, obliges.]]
* BodyHorror: Pewdt begins dissecting [[spoiler:Ren while she's paralysed and still alive]].
* CharacterDevelopment: Ren changes a lot over the course of the novel, as does Khavi.
* ChekhovsGun: Ren seeks permission to visit a nearby dragon in the beginning of the story, to learn more of her origins. [[spoiler:After Atikala's destruction, she realises she finally has nobody stopping her.]]
* ColdBloodedTorture: Pewdt sings beautiful melodies as he [[spoiler: flays Ren alive.]]
* DarkerandEdgier: Despite being inspired by the PathfinderRPG and the Legend of Drizzt, Ren of Atikala is darker, more bloody and sex and reproduction play an important role.
* DeathIsCheap: Averted. Aside from Ren as an egg, nobody comes back to life after they're dead. Not even Gods.
* DeathOrGloryAttack: Khavi's suicidal charge into Stonehaven.
* DeathSeeker: Khavi sometimes has shades of this, especially after the destruction of Atikala.
* DeusExMachina: The humans persuing Ren and Khavi abandon their chase because of the losses they've suffered. [[spoiler:And because they know that if they ask Vrax, he will turn them over anyway.]]
* DisabilitySuperpower: Ren's golden scales are a distinct social disadvantage but grant her sorcerer powers.
* Distant Prologue: The story begins with Ren's death/rebirth as an egg and resumes when she's an adult.
* [[AlwaysChaoticEvil Always Lawful Evil]]: Kobolds are LawfulEvil. Ren and Tzala are shown to be more NeutralGood, Faala is TrueNeutral, while Khavi is NeutralEvil or ChaoticEvil.
* DontTouchItYouIdiot: When presented with a giant spider's web, Khavi can't help but touch it. Ren lampshades it by saying essentially this.
* [[spoiler:Downer Ending:]] At the conclusion of the first book, [[spoiler:Tzala loses her arm, Khavi is beheaded and Ren is taken away as the prisoner of a gold dragon.]]
* TheDragon: Metaphorically with Jhora and Vrax. Literally with Tyermumtican, [[spoiler: Contremulus and with Ren, being a half-dragon.]]
* DualWielding: Pewdt and his stilettos.
* DumbMuscle: Khavi, although he has moments of insight as well.
* EldritchAbomination: Quennax the eidolon.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Khavi cries when he sees how many gnomes have died.
* EyeScream: Pewdt carefully and deliberately stabs out Faala's eye as both she and Ren are paralysed and forced to watch.
* FaceDeathWithDignity: [[spoiler: Ren, when she realises that she cannot beat Quennax the eidolon.]]
* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler: No-Kill asks to be killed when she sees the ruins of Stonehaven.]]
* [[Foreshadowing]]: Anyone who's heard anything of [[spoiler:Contremulus]] does not think he's a good guy.
* GeniusBruiser: Khavi is sometimes smarter than he looks (and sometimes dumber). Vrax is tall and strong, but also understands--far better than Ren and Khavi--what the humans are like and what it takes to keep them from destroying Ssarsdale. [[spoiler: Appeasement.]]
* GiantSpider: Six-Legs is a giant, talking, fiendish spider who speaks in rhymes.
* GoodPowersBadPeople: [[spoiler:Contremulus is a gold dragon.]]
* [[HalfHumanHybrid Half Kobold Hybrid]]: [[spoiler:Ren is the child of a dragon, making her a half-dragon. Vrax is also a lot larger than he should be.]]
* HappinessInSlavery: Faala, Khavi and Jedra all agree that the kobold way of life, despite its hardships, is the best.
* HeWhoFightsMonsters: The book is an examination of the world through the eyes of a kobold, implying their [[AlwaysChaoticEvil Always Lawful Evil]] status is because of the way they're treated. It's implied in the conclusion [[spoiler:that Ren is beginning to feel this way as well.]]
* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Khavi, when he realises he can't get revenge on the gnomes because they didn't destroy Atikala and are already dead anyway. Ren, when Khavi is killed.]]
* HeroOfAnotherStory: Lots of small things, such as the world map being much, much larger than covered in the story, imply that Ren is just a small player in the scheme of things and part of a much bigger world.
* HesBack: Khavi, as Ren is digging the graves at No-Kill's behest.
* HitPoints: Averted. Despite being inspired by the Pathfinder RPG, the novel takes the view that narrative trumps mechanics.
* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: The kobolds think this.
* HumansThroughAlienEyes: The theme of the novel.
* IAteWhat: Ren mistakes horse's hay as food left out for her. Melicandra is amused by this.
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: [[spoiler: Vrax's justification for betraying Ren and Khavi.]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Khavi impales a gnome on a crystal.
* InfantImmortality: A specific example in Ren's case, but there were many other eggs incinerated that day. [[spoiler: And Pewdt crushes the Jedra/Khavi egg before the eyes of its parents, then flees to the surface with the Faala/Khavi egg.]]
* In the Blood: Ren's power comes from a draconic source, but the exact nature of this is not clear to her. [[spoiler: It's an evil gold dragon.]]
* InterplayOfSexAndViolence: Even though all parties consent to the arrangement, Khavi mating with Jedra and Faala, seen through Ren's eyes, is violent. Especially with the latter.
* IronicEcho: A few. "Dragons can eat anything." "No mercy for monsters." "I forge my own destiny."
* [[Jerkass]]: Vrax, who [[spoiler:sends the Atikalan refugees out to fight a hopeless battle in exchange for sanctuary for those who survive, then betrays the survivors anyway.]]
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Khavi. Sometimes.
* Klingon Promotion: Occurs frequently within kobold society, but less due to malicious intent and more due to their short and dangerous lives.
* LawfulEvil: The typical alignment of kobolds, especially Vrax.
* LightIsNotGood: [[spoiler:Contremulus the Sunscale, gold dragon, is decidedly ungood.]]
* LizardFolk: Kobolds are reptilians and while shorter than lizardfolk are remarkably similar.
* LukeIAmYourFather: Discovering her parentage is a significant motivator for Ren throughout the story. [[spoiler: Tzala being her mother is hardly a surprise though, neither is Contremulus being her father as almost every other male character in the story apart from Vrax or [[Main/Squick Six-Legs]] is either the wrong race, wrong type entirely or too young.
* MeaningfulEcho: [[spoiler:No mercy for monsters.]]
* MeaningfulName: Ren had her name stripped from the archives, so her true name is not known. Ren simply means 'nothing'.
* MenAreTheExpendableGender: Inverted. Most kobolds are female, and males are fairly rare; this is for reasons of biology. A female given many males can still only produce one egg every gestation period, but a male given many females can produce many more. That said, males are still expected to work and fight.
* MercyKill: [[spoiler:No-Kill begs for this. Ren also kneels and lets Quennax kill her, partially because she knows she's overmatched and partially because she's genuinely sorry about the human deaths.]]
* MoodWhiplash: The book has lighthearted moments, such as Ren and Khavi's comical misunderstanding of gnome biology, to dark moments [[spoiler:such as Pewdt crushing a freshly laid egg with his bare hands.]]
* MultiArmedAndDangerous: Quennax the eidolon has four arms.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Initially hating gnomes and having few compulsions about killing them, [[spoiler: Ren softens her attitude towards them after meeting No-Kill.]]
* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Ren explains to Melicandra that she is different from her kin and that she, unlike most kobolds, has at least one friend.
* NobodyPoops: Averted. Some of No-Kill's party void their bowels on death.
* NonHumanSidekick: Khavi.
* OddFriendship: Ren and Laughless/Tyermumtican, [[spoiler:Tyermumtican and Chime]].
* OurKoboldsAreDifferent: The kobolds have a racial memory. They're born being able to speak and sometimes have memories and experiences of their ancestors. For example, when Ren first puts on a chainmail shirt, she instantly knows how to use it because one of her ancestors did. Khavi, too, when he picks up Jedra's spear. [[spoiler:Also, Ren is a half dragon, a fact that should be fairly obvious under the game mechanics rules, but aside from a tinge of her scales she looks otherwise normal.]]
* PetTheDog: Khavi does a few nice things that pull him away from simply being AxeCrazy.
* PostVictoryCollapse: A couple.
* PowerGlows: Most magic has a visual effect.
* ThePowerOfLove: Tyermumtican speaks highly of love, and the effect its loss has on a copper dragon, known for their ability to laugh and tell jokes.
* PrecisionFStrike: A few times. Most notably, [[spoiler:Khavi saying he doesn't want to have sex with Ren, because he doesn't fuck gnomes. This is a terrible insult to her, akin to saying he doesn't fuck dogs or hunks of slime.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Vrax gives a roundabout one to Ren and Khavi, explaining how little they know of the world and how he's able to be the leader of Ssarsdale without being a sorcerer.
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: Khavi tries this when they attack the gnome city. [[spoiler:Too bad all the gnomes are dead or long gone.]]
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Khavi's eyes glow red when he's angry. Vrax also has red eyes, as do many other kobolds; it's the most common colour.
* RoaringRampageofRevenge: [[spoiler:The humans against the kobolds, after Khavi kills a number of them, including a child.]]
* RebelliousPrincess: In a way, Ren is a version of this. Sorcerers are a privileged upper class; they can own things, are a lot more independent, and the rules of their LawfulEvil society don't apply as strictly. However, they are still expected to contribute and Tzala does not allow her to leave the city.
* RPGMechanicsVerse: Although based on the PathfinderRPG, most notably the use of a summoner/eidolon, narrative takes precedence over rules.
* SenselessSacrifice: [[spoiler: No-Kill. Almost all of the Atikalan refugees. The guards/innocents in the human village. Khavi.]]
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Ren is smarter than most kobolds, so her internal monologue and her use of language are somewhat higher order than most other kobolds.
* ShipTease: Ren and Khavi. [[spoiler:Until his head gets chopped off.]]
* StopHelpingMe: Ren, after she gets covered in tiny spiders and Khavi sets her on fire.
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Jedra suggests that Ren is related to Yeznen due to her jaw line being similar.
* SupernaturalGoldEyes: Ren has these. [[spoiler:So does Contremulus for obvious reasons.]]
* TakeThat: To the Pathfinder RPG. It's subtle, but Ren quickly realises that Quennax is too powerful for her. In the Pathfinder RPG, Summoners (the base class who are granted Eidolons as pets) are widely considered to be overpowered, primarily because of their Eidolons. (... and their reduced spell-level spells)
* TooDumbToLive: Khavi, sometimes.
* UndergroundCity: Atikala, Ssarsdale and the gnome city of Stonehaven.
* UnstoppableRage: Khavi is probably a barbarian given how often he shrugs off poisons, magic and beatings due to being angry.
* [[Wangst]]: After Atikala is destroyed, Ren and Khavi engage in some.
* WideEyedIdealist: Ren walks straight into the human village, against Khavi's advice. [[spoiler: It doesn't end well.]]
* WhamLine: [[spoiler:"Kill the other one instead."]]
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The entire point of the novel.
[[caption-width-right:240:It's basically [[Literature/TheDarkElfTrilogy Drizzt Do'Urden]] meets Goblins. With kobolds. ]]
->''I was born dead.''
-->-- '''Ren of Atikala'''
[[http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00EZ4CEO2/?tag=wwwlacunavers-20 "Ren of Atikala"]] is the first novel of the Kobolds series. Inspired by the Pathfinder RPG and set in the world of Drathari where Gods once existed but are now dead, it's a view of a stereotypical sword-and-sorcery fantasy world through the eyes of a race typically considered monsters.
The protagonist, Ren of Atikala, is a young kobold sorceress and warrior who struggles with a lack of identity, the prejudices of her people, and the destruction of her home city.
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!!These books contain examples of:
* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler:Khavi.]]
* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: Most kobolds are black, rust coloured, or some other strange colour. Ren is gold, an unfortunate colour as it implies gold dragon heritage, which is seen as evil.
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler: Tzala]] loses her arm.
* Arc Words: "No mercy for monsters" appears in a few contexts.
* BackStab: Twice, by [[spoiler:Vrax. First when he sends the Atikalan refugees out to die, then Vrax again after Ren, Tzala and Khavi return, he takes Ren and Khavi to Contremulus.]]
* Badass: Vrax is smarter than his large size would let on.
* BarbarianHero: Not explicitly stated, but Khavi fits. He can't even read, although this is common of non-sorcerers.
* BearerOfBadNews: Ren relays Atikala's destruction to Melicandra and the guards at Ssarsdale. [[spoiler: It's unclear if Vrax and the other leaders already knew or not.]]
* BecauseDestinySaysSo: Ren convinces Khavi to visit the copper dragon Tyermumtican by saying that, after everything they've been through, their story can't end with them being turned into dragon shit.
* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: The novel implies this, in a roundabout way, is why kobolds are evil. [[spoiler: It's implied in the epilogue that this happens to Ren after she's made a prisoner of Contremulus.]]
* BerserkerTears: Ren, [[spoiler:when Khavi is killed.]] Also Khavi technically counts when [[spoiler:he cries after seeing the destroyed gnome city.]]
* BewareTheNiceOnes: [[spoiler: Tzala kills more humans than all the other kobolds combined.]]
* BigBad: [[spoiler:Contremulus]]. Vrax probably counts too.
* BigDamnHeroes: Khavi, saving Ren [[spoiler:from the gnome]] outside the mists. [[spoiler:And again, but GoneHorriblyRight when he saves her from the humans who had just started to warm to her, killing a child in the process.]]
* BigScrewedUpFamily: Ren doesn't know her parents, and there's significant resistance to her finding out [[spoiler:because her mother is a powerful sorceress and her father is an evil gold dragon.]]
* BizarreAlienBiology: Kobolds have an estrus cycle and lay eggs. Played straight in-universe, for laughs, when Khavi asks how many eggs a human lays a year, and again when No-Kill takes off her boot, which Ren and Khavi mistake for part of her foot.
* BreakTheCutie: No-Kill [[spoiler: asks for a MercyKill when she sees that her city has been destroyed. Khavi, after a moment's hesitation, obliges.]]
* BodyHorror: Pewdt begins dissecting [[spoiler:Ren while she's paralysed and still alive]].
* CharacterDevelopment: Ren changes a lot over the course of the novel, as does Khavi.
* ChekhovsGun: Ren seeks permission to visit a nearby dragon in the beginning of the story, to learn more of her origins. [[spoiler:After Atikala's destruction, she realises she finally has nobody stopping her.]]
* ColdBloodedTorture: Pewdt sings beautiful melodies as he [[spoiler: flays Ren alive.]]
* DarkerandEdgier: Despite being inspired by the PathfinderRPG and the Legend of Drizzt, Ren of Atikala is darker, more bloody and sex and reproduction play an important role.
* DeathIsCheap: Averted. Aside from Ren as an egg, nobody comes back to life after they're dead. Not even Gods.
* DeathOrGloryAttack: Khavi's suicidal charge into Stonehaven.
* DeathSeeker: Khavi sometimes has shades of this, especially after the destruction of Atikala.
* DeusExMachina: The humans persuing Ren and Khavi abandon their chase because of the losses they've suffered. [[spoiler:And because they know that if they ask Vrax, he will turn them over anyway.]]
* DisabilitySuperpower: Ren's golden scales are a distinct social disadvantage but grant her sorcerer powers.
* Distant Prologue: The story begins with Ren's death/rebirth as an egg and resumes when she's an adult.
* [[AlwaysChaoticEvil Always Lawful Evil]]: Kobolds are LawfulEvil. Ren and Tzala are shown to be more NeutralGood, Faala is TrueNeutral, while Khavi is NeutralEvil or ChaoticEvil.
* DontTouchItYouIdiot: When presented with a giant spider's web, Khavi can't help but touch it. Ren lampshades it by saying essentially this.
* [[spoiler:Downer Ending:]] At the conclusion of the first book, [[spoiler:Tzala loses her arm, Khavi is beheaded and Ren is taken away as the prisoner of a gold dragon.]]
* TheDragon: Metaphorically with Jhora and Vrax. Literally with Tyermumtican, [[spoiler: Contremulus and with Ren, being a half-dragon.]]
* DualWielding: Pewdt and his stilettos.
* DumbMuscle: Khavi, although he has moments of insight as well.
* EldritchAbomination: Quennax the eidolon.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Khavi cries when he sees how many gnomes have died.
* EyeScream: Pewdt carefully and deliberately stabs out Faala's eye as both she and Ren are paralysed and forced to watch.
* FaceDeathWithDignity: [[spoiler: Ren, when she realises that she cannot beat Quennax the eidolon.]]
* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler: No-Kill asks to be killed when she sees the ruins of Stonehaven.]]
* [[Foreshadowing]]: Anyone who's heard anything of [[spoiler:Contremulus]] does not think he's a good guy.
* GeniusBruiser: Khavi is sometimes smarter than he looks (and sometimes dumber). Vrax is tall and strong, but also understands--far better than Ren and Khavi--what the humans are like and what it takes to keep them from destroying Ssarsdale. [[spoiler: Appeasement.]]
* GiantSpider: Six-Legs is a giant, talking, fiendish spider who speaks in rhymes.
* GoodPowersBadPeople: [[spoiler:Contremulus is a gold dragon.]]
* [[HalfHumanHybrid Half Kobold Hybrid]]: [[spoiler:Ren is the child of a dragon, making her a half-dragon. Vrax is also a lot larger than he should be.]]
* HappinessInSlavery: Faala, Khavi and Jedra all agree that the kobold way of life, despite its hardships, is the best.
* HeWhoFightsMonsters: The book is an examination of the world through the eyes of a kobold, implying their [[AlwaysChaoticEvil Always Lawful Evil]] status is because of the way they're treated. It's implied in the conclusion [[spoiler:that Ren is beginning to feel this way as well.]]
* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Khavi, when he realises he can't get revenge on the gnomes because they didn't destroy Atikala and are already dead anyway. Ren, when Khavi is killed.]]
* HeroOfAnotherStory: Lots of small things, such as the world map being much, much larger than covered in the story, imply that Ren is just a small player in the scheme of things and part of a much bigger world.
* HesBack: Khavi, as Ren is digging the graves at No-Kill's behest.
* HitPoints: Averted. Despite being inspired by the Pathfinder RPG, the novel takes the view that narrative trumps mechanics.
* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: The kobolds think this.
* HumansThroughAlienEyes: The theme of the novel.
* IAteWhat: Ren mistakes horse's hay as food left out for her. Melicandra is amused by this.
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: [[spoiler: Vrax's justification for betraying Ren and Khavi.]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Khavi impales a gnome on a crystal.
* InfantImmortality: A specific example in Ren's case, but there were many other eggs incinerated that day. [[spoiler: And Pewdt crushes the Jedra/Khavi egg before the eyes of its parents, then flees to the surface with the Faala/Khavi egg.]]
* In the Blood: Ren's power comes from a draconic source, but the exact nature of this is not clear to her. [[spoiler: It's an evil gold dragon.]]
* InterplayOfSexAndViolence: Even though all parties consent to the arrangement, Khavi mating with Jedra and Faala, seen through Ren's eyes, is violent. Especially with the latter.
* IronicEcho: A few. "Dragons can eat anything." "No mercy for monsters." "I forge my own destiny."
* [[Jerkass]]: Vrax, who [[spoiler:sends the Atikalan refugees out to fight a hopeless battle in exchange for sanctuary for those who survive, then betrays the survivors anyway.]]
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Khavi. Sometimes.
* Klingon Promotion: Occurs frequently within kobold society, but less due to malicious intent and more due to their short and dangerous lives.
* LawfulEvil: The typical alignment of kobolds, especially Vrax.
* LightIsNotGood: [[spoiler:Contremulus the Sunscale, gold dragon, is decidedly ungood.]]
* LizardFolk: Kobolds are reptilians and while shorter than lizardfolk are remarkably similar.
* LukeIAmYourFather: Discovering her parentage is a significant motivator for Ren throughout the story. [[spoiler: Tzala being her mother is hardly a surprise though, neither is Contremulus being her father as almost every other male character in the story apart from Vrax or [[Main/Squick Six-Legs]] is either the wrong race, wrong type entirely or too young.
* MeaningfulEcho: [[spoiler:No mercy for monsters.]]
* MeaningfulName: Ren had her name stripped from the archives, so her true name is not known. Ren simply means 'nothing'.
* MenAreTheExpendableGender: Inverted. Most kobolds are female, and males are fairly rare; this is for reasons of biology. A female given many males can still only produce one egg every gestation period, but a male given many females can produce many more. That said, males are still expected to work and fight.
* MercyKill: [[spoiler:No-Kill begs for this. Ren also kneels and lets Quennax kill her, partially because she knows she's overmatched and partially because she's genuinely sorry about the human deaths.]]
* MoodWhiplash: The book has lighthearted moments, such as Ren and Khavi's comical misunderstanding of gnome biology, to dark moments [[spoiler:such as Pewdt crushing a freshly laid egg with his bare hands.]]
* MultiArmedAndDangerous: Quennax the eidolon has four arms.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Initially hating gnomes and having few compulsions about killing them, [[spoiler: Ren softens her attitude towards them after meeting No-Kill.]]
* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Ren explains to Melicandra that she is different from her kin and that she, unlike most kobolds, has at least one friend.
* NobodyPoops: Averted. Some of No-Kill's party void their bowels on death.
* NonHumanSidekick: Khavi.
* OddFriendship: Ren and Laughless/Tyermumtican, [[spoiler:Tyermumtican and Chime]].
* OurKoboldsAreDifferent: The kobolds have a racial memory. They're born being able to speak and sometimes have memories and experiences of their ancestors. For example, when Ren first puts on a chainmail shirt, she instantly knows how to use it because one of her ancestors did. Khavi, too, when he picks up Jedra's spear. [[spoiler:Also, Ren is a half dragon, a fact that should be fairly obvious under the game mechanics rules, but aside from a tinge of her scales she looks otherwise normal.]]
* PetTheDog: Khavi does a few nice things that pull him away from simply being AxeCrazy.
* PostVictoryCollapse: A couple.
* PowerGlows: Most magic has a visual effect.
* ThePowerOfLove: Tyermumtican speaks highly of love, and the effect its loss has on a copper dragon, known for their ability to laugh and tell jokes.
* PrecisionFStrike: A few times. Most notably, [[spoiler:Khavi saying he doesn't want to have sex with Ren, because he doesn't fuck gnomes. This is a terrible insult to her, akin to saying he doesn't fuck dogs or hunks of slime.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Vrax gives a roundabout one to Ren and Khavi, explaining how little they know of the world and how he's able to be the leader of Ssarsdale without being a sorcerer.
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: Khavi tries this when they attack the gnome city. [[spoiler:Too bad all the gnomes are dead or long gone.]]
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Khavi's eyes glow red when he's angry. Vrax also has red eyes, as do many other kobolds; it's the most common colour.
* RoaringRampageofRevenge: [[spoiler:The humans against the kobolds, after Khavi kills a number of them, including a child.]]
* RebelliousPrincess: In a way, Ren is a version of this. Sorcerers are a privileged upper class; they can own things, are a lot more independent, and the rules of their LawfulEvil society don't apply as strictly. However, they are still expected to contribute and Tzala does not allow her to leave the city.
* RPGMechanicsVerse: Although based on the PathfinderRPG, most notably the use of a summoner/eidolon, narrative takes precedence over rules.
* SenselessSacrifice: [[spoiler: No-Kill. Almost all of the Atikalan refugees. The guards/innocents in the human village. Khavi.]]
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Ren is smarter than most kobolds, so her internal monologue and her use of language are somewhat higher order than most other kobolds.
* ShipTease: Ren and Khavi. [[spoiler:Until his head gets chopped off.]]
* StopHelpingMe: Ren, after she gets covered in tiny spiders and Khavi sets her on fire.
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Jedra suggests that Ren is related to Yeznen due to her jaw line being similar.
* SupernaturalGoldEyes: Ren has these. [[spoiler:So does Contremulus for obvious reasons.]]
* TakeThat: To the Pathfinder RPG. It's subtle, but Ren quickly realises that Quennax is too powerful for her. In the Pathfinder RPG, Summoners (the base class who are granted Eidolons as pets) are widely considered to be overpowered, primarily because of their Eidolons. (... and their reduced spell-level spells)
* TooDumbToLive: Khavi, sometimes.
* UndergroundCity: Atikala, Ssarsdale and the gnome city of Stonehaven.
* UnstoppableRage: Khavi is probably a barbarian given how often he shrugs off poisons, magic and beatings due to being angry.
* [[Wangst]]: After Atikala is destroyed, Ren and Khavi engage in some.
* WideEyedIdealist: Ren walks straight into the human village, against Khavi's advice. [[spoiler: It doesn't end well.]]
* WhamLine: [[spoiler:"Kill the other one instead."]]
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The entire point of the novel.
