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* StunGuns: "Dazers". The Greene tribe is particularly well-armed with these because they found an armory a short time before the story begins. They don't damage anything not organic, but can be tuned to a higher power shot to kill.
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* AlasPoorVillain: {{Downplayed|Trope}}. After Complain is told by [[spoiler:Fermour]] that [[spoiler:[[AntiVillain Zac Deight]] didn't mean any harm and was actually striving to make living of the "Foredeck" inhabitants more bearable]], Complain feels quite remorseful for [[spoiler:shooting Deight to death]].
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* AlasPoorVillain: {{Downplayed|Trope}}.{{Downplayed|Trope}} and {{subverted|Trope}}. After Complain is told by [[spoiler:Fermour]] that [[spoiler:[[AntiVillain Zac Deight]] didn't mean any harm and was actually striving to make living of the "Foredeck" inhabitants more bearable]], Complain feels quite remorseful for [[spoiler:shooting Deight to death]].
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* AlsaPoorVillain: {{Downplayed|Trope}}. After Complain is told by [[spoiler:Fermour]] that [[spoiler:[[AntiVillain Zac Deight]] didn't mean any harm and was actually striving to make living of the "Foredeck" inhabitants more bearable]], Complain feels quite remorseful for [[spoiler:shooting Deight to death]].
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* AlsaPoorVillain: AlasPoorVillain: {{Downplayed|Trope}}. After Complain is told by [[spoiler:Fermour]] that [[spoiler:[[AntiVillain Zac Deight]] didn't mean any harm and was actually striving to make living of the "Foredeck" inhabitants more bearable]], Complain feels quite remorseful for [[spoiler:shooting Deight to death]].
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* AlsaPoorVillain: {{Downplayed|Trope}}. After Complain is told by [[spoiler:Fermour]] that [[spoiler:[[AntiVillain Zac Deight]] didn't mean any harm and was actually striving to make living of the "Foredeck" inhabitants more bearable]], Complain feels quite remorseful for [[spoiler:shooting Deight to death]].
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* AVillainNamedZRG: Downplayed with Zilliac[note]Lt. Greene's second in command[/note]. The R and G are missing. His name still sounds obnoxious enough to indicate what a {{Jerkass}} he is.
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* DrunkOnMilk: Nearly entire Greene tribe. Except not on milk but on ''colors''. Just by [[UpToEleven seeing them and coloring their clothes with them]]. Then they throw a wild party ending in something akin to collective hungover.
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* AntiVillain: Both [[spoiler:Crane Curtis and Zac Deight]] and to extension all ''giants'' and so-called ''intruders''. They really mean no harm to the ship's inhabitants. They're just studying them and doing necessary maintenance.
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* AirVentPassageway: In the middle of every cabin's ceiling there is a grate. It leads to a grid of ventilation shafts connecting all rooms [[spoiler:but none of the ship's native inhabitants have a clue about this. [[YouDirtyRat Rats]] use them to spread through the entire ship. Towards the finale it is also revealed that the ''Intruders'' utilize this way to escape frow guarded cells.]]
* AntiVillain: Both [[spoiler:Crane Curtis and Zac Deight]] and to extension all ''giants'' and so-called''intruders''.''Intruders''. They really mean no harm to the ship's inhabitants. They're just studying them and doing necessary maintenance.
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* TheDragon: Lt. Greene has ''two'' - Zilliac and Patch albeit the former of the two is obviously more prominent.
** Downplayed with Hawl. Despite being Gregg's right-hand man he acts considerably less jerkass-y to his people.
** Downplayed with Hawl. Despite being Gregg's right-hand man he acts considerably less jerkass-y to his people.
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* BerserkButton: Lt. Greene, the tribe's elderly chieftain doesn't take losing the women of his tribe to enemy abductors lightly. See HairTriggerTemper below.
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* HairTriggerTemper: Lt. Greene, the tribe's elderly chieftain. When Roy reports to him how he lost his wife to raiders, old Greene throws such a tantrum that he almost has a seizure from it.
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* TheStarscream: Implied by Ozbert Bergass that Zilliac is going to ''remove'' the old Greene chief and seize the power for himself.
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* TheWorldIsJustAwesome: The reaction everybody has when they finally see out a window into space, and more importantly a sun and planet. [[spoiler:It's Earth.]]
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* TheWorldIsJustAwesome: The reaction everybody has when they finally see out a window into space, and more importantly a sun and a planet. [[spoiler:It's Earth.]]]]
* WoundedGazelleGambit: When Zilliac[[note]]the Greene's guard commander[[/note]] while pursuing Marapper darts into Roy's cabin Roy pretends he's been hit by the door. First Zilliac briefly trash-talks him but as soon as he turns his back on him, Roy hits him over the head with a chair.
* WoundedGazelleGambit: When Zilliac[[note]]the Greene's guard commander[[/note]] while pursuing Marapper darts into Roy's cabin Roy pretends he's been hit by the door. First Zilliac briefly trash-talks him but as soon as he turns his back on him, Roy hits him over the head with a chair.
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* MeaningfulName: The protagonist's name is Roy ''Complain''. It matches his personality quite well.
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* {{Precursors}}: The Giants, whose dead bodies and mysterious articles are sometimes found by the characters. They are later found [[spoiler: to be BenevolentPrecursors and very much alive]].
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* {{Precursors}}: The Giants, whose dead bodies and mysterious articles are sometimes found by the characters. They are later found [[spoiler: to be BenevolentPrecursors and very much alive]].alive. In fact they're actually Earthlings]].
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* ThePlague: The cause of loss of control of the ship and the mythologizing of its past. [[spoiler: A result of alien proteins that were in the water the ship took on at Procyon before its return journey. Only a tiny portion of the ship's crew survived.]]
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* ThePlague: The cause of loss of control of the ship and the mythologizing of its past. [[spoiler: A result of alien proteins that were in the water the ship took on at Procyon before its return journey. In the captain's journal it is called the 9-day fever. Only a tiny portion of the ship's crew survived.survived it. The protein caused them to mutate and now they live [[HyperactiveMetabolism 4 times faster]] than normal humans.]]
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* NotEvilJustMisunderstood: The Giants and Intruders don't mean any harm. They're there just to study the inhabitants and tend to the ship. [[spoiler:In fact they came from Earth.]]
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* AntiVillain: Both [[spoiler:Crane Curtis and Zac Deight]] and to extension all ''giants'' and so-called ''intruders''. They really mean no harm to the ship's inhabitants. They're just studying them and doing necessary maintenance.
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* TheWorldIsJustAwesome: The reaction everybody has when they finally see out a window into space, and more importantly a sun and planet. [[spoiler:It's Earth.]]
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* ScaryAmoralReligion: The Code practiced by most of the ship's inhabitants started as a bunch of psychological babble before the plague. The ritual greeting is "expansion to your ego" with the appropriate response being "at your expense". Everyone is taught to "leap before they look" and watch out only for themselves, with no compunctions against just killing anyone in your way. When Marapper the priest murders a guard to allow their escape, his companions comment that it's refreshing to watch a priest practice what he preaches so well. [[spoiler:The Earth humans find the religion horrible, but acknowledge that it has probably helped them to survive.]]
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* ArtificialGravity: Most of the ship has this, but there are areas of the ship where the gravity has failed, "where feet turn into hands and the floor moves away from you and you swim in the air like an insect."
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* OceanAwe: Roffery and Roy are over-awed when they come upon the largest body of water they have ever seen. Roffery says this must be the sea, and that it proves they're not actually on a ship. Neither one understands what the sign next to it saying "swimming pool" means.
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* MothMenace: Moths seem to have mutated to become telepathic, and although it's never proven, Roy suspects that they are acting as scouts for the rats. [[spoiler:At the end of the novel a huge swarm of moths accidentally short out the control that splits the ship into its component decks, forcing the Earth humans to come rescue the inhabitants.]]
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* StunGuns: "Dazers". The Greene tribe is particularly well-armed with these because they found an armory a short time before the story begins. They don't damage anything not organic, but can be tuned to a higher power shot to kill.
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* TheGrotesque: Gregg's right-hand man Hawl, a mutant whose head is only about the size of two fists.
* ThePlague: The cause of loss of control of the ship and the mythologizing of its past. [[spoiler: A result of alien proteins that were in the water the ship took on at Procyon before its return journey. Only a tiny portion of the ship's crew survived.]]
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* TheGrotesque: Gregg's right-hand man Hawl, a mutant whose head is only about the size of two fists.
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* {{Mutants}}: The most disfigured mutants aren't allowed to live much beyond birth by the tribes of Quarters. Some are allowed to live as second-class citizens. Gregg's band of raiders are at least half mutants. But it's the non-human mutants that are possibly the most unnerving, including telepathic rabbits and moths, and intelligent rats.
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* TheGrotesque: Gregg's right-hand man Hawl, a mutant whose head is only about the size of two fists.
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* SwarmOfRats: As a fire spreads through the ship swarms of rats are seen migrating to undamaged areas. Roy and friends are nearly overwhelmed by a massive swarm heading for the front of the ship.
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* SwarmOfRats: As a fire spreads through the ship swarms of rats are seen migrating to undamaged areas. Roy and friends are nearly overwhelmed [[DevouredByTheHorde overwhelmed]] by a massive swarm heading for the front of the ship.
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* SwarmOfRats: As a fire spreads through the ship swarms of rats are seen migrating to undamaged areas. Roy and friends are nearly overwhelmed by a massive swarm heading for the front of the ship.
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* {{Precursors}}: The Giants, whose dead bodies and mysterious articles are sometimes found by the characters. They are later found [[spoiler: to be BenevolentPrecursors and very much alive]].
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* {{Precursors}}: The Giants, whose dead bodies and mysterious articles are sometimes found by the characters. They are later found [[spoiler: to be BenevolentPrecursors and very much alive]].alive]].
* YouDirtyRat: The rats of the ship have mutated to the point of gaining some measure of intelligence. Whole rat villages are found, and the rats keep other animals in cages and have developed packs and sledges. They're still vicious, perfectly happy to torture humans for information by slowly eating them alive.
* YouDirtyRat: The rats of the ship have mutated to the point of gaining some measure of intelligence. Whole rat villages are found, and the rats keep other animals in cages and have developed packs and sledges. They're still vicious, perfectly happy to torture humans for information by slowly eating them alive.
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* HungryJungle: The 'ponics tangle is full of hostile tribes, mutants, madmen, and of course the rats.
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* MouseWorld: The characters are physically small [[spoiler:due to generations of natural selection for tight spaces and a severely congested ecosystem]].
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* MouseWorld: The characters inhabitants of the ship are physically small all under five feet tall [[spoiler:due to generations of natural selection for tight spaces and a severely congested ecosystem]].
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Roy Complain is a hunter in the Greene tribe of "Quarters", prowling the tangled "ponics" jungle for small game. The Greene tribe is nomadic, always moving to different corridors and rooms, searching for ancient caches of the mysterious giants, who some say built the world. When Roy loses his wife Gwenny to raiders in the ponics, he becomes more open to a priest's planned expedition to the fabled "control", where the priest plans to seize control of the entire ship. Roy and his companions will face enemy tribes, mutant rats, and the mysterious Giants on their quest.
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* ClockDiscrepancy: When the characters count the generations that the ship must have needed to reach its destination, they found the lapse is off by a factor of four. [[spoiler:This is because they are unknowningly living at four times the speed of normal humans.]]
* ColonyShip: The ship is actually [[spoiler:''back'' on Earth orbit after colonising another planet, but its passengers cannot be allowed to land because they carry a plague]].
* ColonyShip: The ship is actually [[spoiler:''back'' on Earth orbit after colonising another planet, but its passengers cannot be allowed to land because they carry a plague]].
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* ClockDiscrepancy: When the characters count the generations that the ship must have needed to reach its destination, they found find the lapse is off by journey should have ended in a factor quarter of four. the time passed. [[spoiler:This is because they are unknowningly unknowingly living at four times the speed of normal humans.]]
* ColonyShip: The ship is actually [[spoiler:''back'' on Earth orbit after colonising another planet, butits passengers cannot be allowed the survivors have mutated so much from base humans that the Earth government fears to land because they carry a plague]].let them return]].
* ColonyShip: The ship is actually [[spoiler:''back'' on Earth orbit after colonising another planet, but
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* MileLongShip: It takes several days for the characters to cross, albeit battling an encroaching jungle.
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'''''Non-Stop''''' is a 1958 {{science fiction}} novel by British writer Creator/BrianAldiss. Some editions in the United States were published under the name ''Starship''.
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