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** YouWillKnowWhatToDo: The cryptic instructions in general implies this. [[spoiler:By the end of the book, they are still cryptic.]]
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** a variety of different animals who are rough equivalent of those on Earth, but include also [[ThePhoenix phœnices]], [[{{Unicorn}} unicorns]], [[OurGryphonsAreDifferent gryphons]], [[HellHound Ephalius wolves]] and [[SavageWolves dark wolves]], and [[NearlyNormalAnimal Derobus ]][[spoiler:[[NearlyNormalAnimal cats]]; and
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* FiveRaces: While the races featured in the book clearly rely on these divisions, they often occupy the same slot or leave some slots unoccupied:
** [[OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame Dwarves]], in the Kingdom of Brasse in the southwest (Stout);
** [[HumansAreAverage Humans]], in the Kingdom of Ciaró, south of Myles (Mundane);
** [[OurElvesAreBetter Elves]], in the Kingdom of Syrane in the westernmost end of the Land of the Sea, and the [[{{Lunacy}} Moonfolk]] [[IHaveManyNames a.k.a.]] [[SpaceElves Lavrice]], in the northernmost end (Fairy);
** [[WitchSpecies Wizards]], who [[WalkingTheEarth have no fixed domain and wander around]] (High Men);
** [[TheFairFolk The Dark Ones]], [[UndergroundCity inside]] the [[DeathWorld Myles Mountains]] (Fallen; Vampires may also be included, yet too little information is provided to tell).
** [[OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame Dwarves]], in the Kingdom of Brasse in the southwest (Stout);
** [[HumansAreAverage Humans]], in the Kingdom of Ciaró, south of Myles (Mundane);
** [[OurElvesAreBetter Elves]], in the Kingdom of Syrane in the westernmost end of the Land of the Sea, and the [[{{Lunacy}} Moonfolk]] [[IHaveManyNames a.k.a.]] [[SpaceElves Lavrice]], in the northernmost end (Fairy);
** [[WitchSpecies Wizards]], who [[WalkingTheEarth have no fixed domain and wander around]] (High Men);
** [[TheFairFolk The Dark Ones]], [[UndergroundCity inside]] the [[DeathWorld Myles Mountains]] (Fallen; Vampires may also be included, yet too little information is provided to tell).
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** [[HumansAreAverage Humans]], in the Kingdom of Ciaró, south of Myles (Mundane);
** [[OurElvesAreBetter Elves]], in the Kingdom of Syrane in the westernmost end of the Land of the Sea, and the [[{{Lunacy}} Moonfolk]] [[IHaveManyNames a.k.a.]] [[SpaceElves Lavrice]], in the northernmost end (Fairy);
** [[WitchSpecies Wizards]], who [[WalkingTheEarth have no fixed domain and wander around]] (High Men);
** [[TheFairFolk The Dark Ones]], [[UndergroundCity inside]] the [[DeathWorld Myles Mountains]] (Fallen; Vampires may also be included, yet too little information is provided to tell).
** [[OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame Dwarves]], in the Kingdom of Brasse in the southwest (Stout);
** [[HumansAreAverage Humans]], in the Kingdom of Ciaró, south of Myles (Mundane);
** [[OurElvesAreBetter Elves]], in the Kingdom of Syrane in the westernmost end of the Land of the Sea, and the [[{{Lunacy}} Moonfolk]] [[IHaveManyNames a.k.a.]] [[SpaceElves Lavrice]], in the northernmost end (Fairy);
** [[WitchSpecies Wizards]], who [[WalkingTheEarth have no fixed domain and wander around]] (High Men);
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* ConvenientlyTimedDistraction: 'Hat Lad' is momentarily distracted by a pebble that falls out of his pocket while fighting Professor Cole. Neither has hitherto been able to overcome the other, but as soon as that happens, [[ForWantOfANail Cole uses it to successfully lunge a spear through his heart]].
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** The Enchiridion’s title, while a rather faithful translation of the original Hebrew,[[note]]It was originally called ''Sefer haYeda‘'' ספר הידע, which literally means ‘The Book of Knowledge’, which is more or less [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Enchiridion what an enchiridion is]][[/note]] is indeed a reference to ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' by the translator.
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** The Enchiridion’s title, while a rather faithful translation of the original Hebrew,[[note]]It was originally called ''Sefer haYeda‘'' haYeda'' ספר הידע, which literally means ‘The Book of Knowledge’, which is more or less [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Enchiridion what an enchiridion is]][[/note]] is indeed a reference to ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' by the translator.
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* BrokenBird: Lu, who used to have friends in the various boarding schools she attended and ultimately fell out with, ultimately became a [[TheSnarkKnight snarky, world-weary]] [[LittleMissSnarker teen]] over the course of her life, having never really experienced other people caring for her, to the point she [[TheHermit shuns society]] as much as she can. When she finally earns her schoolmates’ affection by [[spoiler:[[CurbStompBattle decisively defeating]] [[AlphaBitch Bridget]], who’s been terrorising them (or at least her [[ValleyGirl Essex girls]] [[GirlPosse posse]]) with her magical abilities, in the SnowballFight scene]], she is mostly [[CelebrityIsOverrated irritated by them]].
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* BrokenBird: Lu, who used to have friends in the various boarding schools she attended and she ultimately fell out with, ultimately became a [[TheSnarkKnight snarky, world-weary]] [[LittleMissSnarker teen]] over the course of her life, having never really experienced other people caring for her, to the point she [[TheHermit shuns society]] as much as she can. When she finally earns her schoolmates’ affection by [[spoiler:[[CurbStompBattle decisively defeating]] [[AlphaBitch Bridget]], who’s been terrorising them (or at least her [[ValleyGirl Essex girls]] [[GirlPosse posse]]) with her magical abilities, in the SnowballFight scene]], she is mostly [[CelebrityIsOverrated irritated by them]].
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* BrokenBird: Lu, who used to have friends in the various boarding schools she attended and ultimately fell out with, ultimately became a [[TheSnarkKnight snarky, world-weary]] [[LittleMissSnarker teen]] over the course of her life, having never really experienced other people caring for her, to the point she [[TheHermit shuns society]] as much as she can. When she finally earns her schoolmates’ affection by [[spoiler:[[CurbStompBattle decisively defeating]] [[AlphaBitch Bridget]], who’s been terrorising them (or at least her [[ValleyGirl Essex girls]] [[GirlPosse posse]]) with her magical abilities, in the SnowballFight scene]], she is mostly [[CelebrityIsOverrated irritated by them]].
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* TheGoodKing: [[ParodiedTrope Parodied]] in the Dark Ones’ narrative poem in ShowWithinAShow below. King Roythebrune is said to have been this, overlooking how he [[YourCheatingHeart slept with his soldier’s wife]] and [[UriahGambit sent him to die in the battlefield when she becomes pregnant with his child]], because he founded the Kingdom of Ciaró and was [[RunningGag a ‘man of copper’]], although of course, ‘Every man, bold and humble alike, must go bald!’ The Dark Ones themselves see it as a parody and roar in laughter when the cantor finishes.
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* TheGoodKing: [[ParodiedTrope Parodied]] in the Dark Ones’ narrative poem recited in the Dark Ones’ banquet (see ShowWithinAShow below.below). King Roythebrune is said to have been this, overlooking how he [[YourCheatingHeart slept with his soldier’s wife]] and [[UriahGambit sent him to die in the battlefield when she becomes pregnant with his child]], because he founded the Kingdom of Ciaró and was [[RunningGag a ‘man of copper’]], although of course, ‘Every man, bold and humble alike, must go bald!’ The Dark Ones themselves see it as a parody and roar in laughter when the cantor finishes.
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* TheDogBitesBack: When Lu starts her snowball fight against Bridget, once it’s clear Bridget doesn’t stand a chance, the rest of the students start cheering and giving her snowballs to throw.
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* TheDogBitesBack: When Lu starts Lu, who has so far tried to ignore and circumvent [[AlphaBitch Bridget]] and her snowball [[GirlPosse posse]] and retaliated only by accident, eventually goes to fight against back when she and her posse throw snowballs at her window one day. [[spoiler:She throws snowballs at Bridget, once turning it into a full-on warlike SnowballFight when she notices Bridget somehow can’t see her, ending in a massive CurbStompBattle. Once it’s clear Bridget doesn’t stand a chance, the rest of the students students, whom she apparently bullied and pushed around as well, start cheering and giving her snowballs to throw.]]
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** [[KingIncognito Princess Incongnito]]: [[spoiler:Cleareye]] was the Ciaró Crown Princess daughter. When she was only twelve, she found herself stranded when [[HellHound Ephalius wolves]] attacked her and her friend, killing him just after he urges her to run. [[spoiler:Like Lu]], she reached the Moonfolk Forest, and stayed there for a while before [[spoiler:Shadow]] sent her to the Refugee Camp. She came to call it home and enjoy her incognito life there, seeing it as her home, but two years later, rumours of the Ciaró princess’ disappearance came in; two years after that, once she felt mature enough, she decided to [[RightfulKingReturns return and reclaim her royal status]], but on her way back to Ciaró she [[spoiler:became a Lavrice while wandering through the Moonfolk Forest again]], and has been living in anonymity since.
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* {{Goth}}: Lu, in a sense. She wears nothing but black clothing ([[spoiler:though she switches to silver when she moves in with Cleareye Fullmoonnight]]), mentions ‘[[MetalScream screams]]’ in the music she listens to, and is very snarky and ''hates'' Essex girls, but doesn’t show many other traits of the subculture.
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* {{Goth}}: Lu, in a sense.Lu (mostly) is, of the gloomy variety. She wears nothing but black clothing ([[spoiler:though she switches to silver when she moves in with Cleareye Fullmoonnight]]), mentions ‘[[MetalScream screams]]’ in the music she listens to, and is very snarky and ''hates'' Essex girls, but doesn’t show many other traits of the subculture.
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* {{Goth}}: Lu, in a sense. She wears nothing but black clothing ([[spoiler:though she switches to silver when she moves in with Cleareye Fullmoonnight]]) Fullmoonnight]]), mentions ‘[[MetalScream screams]]’ in the music she listens to, and is very snarky and ''hates'' Essex girls, but doesn’t show many other traits of the subculture.
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* HereditaryCurse: Lu learns that there is a race known as the ‘Race of the Cursed’ in Greywall’d, who live in the Castle of Bayrone passed the River Trocus at the easternmost end of the continent, which no-one can cross. Granted, [[DownplayedTrope they are more fiction than fact]], given that since no-one can get there, it’s actually ShroudedInMyth.
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** Aucasis, who [[spoiler:goes hunting shortly after being rescued from [[BadassInDistress the Dark Ones’ prison]]]], despite [[spoiler:still being [[HandicappedBadass lame in her right leg]]]].
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** Hallwad, who [[spoiler:joins Lu in fighting the Dark Ones despite being tortured by them shortly beforehand]].
** Aucasis, who [[spoiler:goes huntingshortly almost immediately after being rescued from [[BadassInDistress the Dark Ones’ prison]]]], rescued]], despite [[spoiler:still being [[spoiler:even more injured than Hallwad, [[HandicappedBadass lame in her right leg]]]].physically]] and [[BrokenBird emotionally]]]].
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** a bracelet with seven green leaves made of metal welded onto it, which turn out to be special stones used to [[spoiler:cross between Earth and Greywall’d]];
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* CatsAreMagic: A magic cat [[spoiler:saves Lu’s life when she battles two people sent to kill her]]. [[spoiler:Lu discovers later on that there is a special type of cats named Derobus cats, which are ‘large black cats with glistening eyes and [[NearlyNormalAnimal almost human consciousness]]’; she doesn’t make the connection though.]]
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** The Enchiridion’s title, while a rather faithful translation of the original Hebrew,[[note:It was originally called ''Sefer haYeda‘'' ספר הידע, which literally means ‘The Book of Knowledge’, which is more or less [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Enchiridion what an enchiridion is]][[/note]] is indeed a reference to ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' by the translator.
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** The Enchiridion’s title, while a rather faithful translation of the original Hebrew,[[note:It Hebrew,[[note]]It was originally called ''Sefer haYeda‘'' ספר הידע, which literally means ‘The Book of Knowledge’, which is more or less [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Enchiridion what an enchiridion is]][[/note]] is indeed a reference to ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' by the translator.
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* ReligionOfEvil: [[Signus’ cult is apparently this.]]
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* HitSoHardTheCalendarFeltIt: Lu is quite surprised to learn that the year is not 2012 in Greywall’d, but rather 521. It turns out the The locals count their years from the ‘Fall of [[BiggerBad Signus]]’.Signus]]’. Considering that Signus [[spoiler:has worshippers, which implies he’s a GodOfEvil]], it was apparently a major event.
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*** Being stuck without any [[InvisibilityCloak Invisibility Potion]] in the Dark Ones’ tunnels, Lu [[spoiler:tells the Dark Ones she’s there to renew the ancient pact the Killers had with them]]. [[spoiler:They only pretend to buy into it, or at least only their king, Gleaborne, does.]]
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*** Being stuck without any [[InvisibilityCloak Invisibility Potion]] in the [[TheFairFolk Dark Ones’ tunnels, Ones]]’ [[UndergroundCity tunnels]], Lu [[spoiler:tells the Dark Ones she’s there to renew the ancient pact the Killers had with them]]. [[spoiler:They only pretend to buy into it, or at least only their king, Gleaborne, does.]]
*** Everything Lu tells Castor, the Dark Ones’ prison warden, about the ‘[[TorturePorn traditional Killer torture methods]]’, is nonsense used to coax him to provide useful information. [[spoiler:It works.]]
*** Everything Lu tells Castor, the Dark Ones’ prison warden, about the ‘[[TorturePorn traditional Killer torture methods]]’, is nonsense used to coax him to provide useful information. [[spoiler:It works.]]
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* TheChosenOne: Lu.
** [[spoiler:TheChosenMany: It turns out Hallwad and Aucasis are actually still on a mission given by Déaspor and Shadow, not just Lu.]]
** ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: Lu definitely thinks so, enough to offer Hallwad, a boy she meets on the Myles Mountains about halfway to the Refugee Camp, to help him resuce his sister, and even [[spoiler:simply stop her journey in the middle]] to [[spoiler:move in]] with Cleareye Fullmoonnight, a Moondaughter she meets in the Moonfolk Forest after crossing the mountains. ‘Hat Lad’ calls her out on this, emphasising in no uncertain terms how incredibly important her mission is.
** [[spoiler:TheChosenMany: It turns out Hallwad and Aucasis are actually still on a mission given by Déaspor and Shadow, not just Lu.]]
** ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: Lu definitely thinks so, enough to offer Hallwad, a boy she meets on the Myles Mountains about halfway to the Refugee Camp, to help him resuce his sister, and even [[spoiler:simply stop her journey in the middle]] to [[spoiler:move in]] with Cleareye Fullmoonnight, a Moondaughter she meets in the Moonfolk Forest after crossing the mountains. ‘Hat Lad’ calls her out on this, emphasising in no uncertain terms how incredibly important her mission is.
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* TheChosenOne: Lu.
**[[spoiler:TheChosenMany: It turns out Hallwad and Aucasis are actually still on a mission given by Déaspor and Shadow, not just Lu.]]
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** [[spoiler:DistressedDude: Hallwad gets captured by the Dark Ones as well when he [[LeeroyJenkins jumps in to save her]] from the Dark Ones torturing her, then [[DefiantStoneThrow runs off to make them follow him and leave her alone]]. Lu ends up rescuing both of them.]]
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** JadeColoredGlasses: She didn’t start off as snarky, but having gone through a rough childhood and experienced her faith in people broken repeatedly, she ultimately became this.
** LittleMissSnarker: She turns 16 about a third of the way in.
** TheSnarkKnight: Naturally, based on her biography. She points a few of those barbs at herself too.
** StepfordSnarker: When she talks about herself in earnest, Lu tends to use harsh self-deprecating language and see little worth in her own existence.
** SurroundedByIdiots: Feels that way often, occasionally based on shallow points such as appearance (while ignoring, or regarding with disdain, people’s friendly attitude towards her), but after [[spoiler:the CurbStompBattle victory against [[AlphaBitch Bridget]] at the SnowballFight]], her attitude seems [[CelebrityIsOverrated justified]].
** LittleMissSnarker: She turns 16 about a third of the way in.
** TheSnarkKnight: Naturally, based on her biography. She points a few of those barbs at herself too.
** StepfordSnarker: When she talks about herself in earnest, Lu tends to use harsh self-deprecating language and see little worth in her own existence.
** SurroundedByIdiots: Feels that way often, occasionally based on shallow points such as appearance (while ignoring, or regarding with disdain, people’s friendly attitude towards her), but after [[spoiler:the CurbStompBattle victory against [[AlphaBitch Bridget]] at the SnowballFight]], her attitude seems [[CelebrityIsOverrated justified]].
* [[spoiler:DistressedDude: Hallwad gets captured by the Dark Ones as well when he [[LeeroyJenkins jumps in to save]] [[BigBrotherInstinct his sister Aucasis]] from the Dark Ones torturing her, then [[DefiantStoneThrow runs off to make them follow him and leave her alone]]. Lu ends up rescuing both of them.]]
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** GothGirlsKnowMagic: Averted. Lu is a competent magic-wielder, but this has nothing with her being goth―even Bridget, an Essex girl, is one too.
** PerkyGoth: She has her moments, particularly after [[spoiler:moving in with Cleareye Fullmoonnight]].
** PerkyGoth: She has her moments, particularly after [[spoiler:moving in with Cleareye Fullmoonnight]].
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** PerkyGoth: She has her moments, particularly after [[spoiler:moving in with Cleareye Fullmoonnight]].
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** VaguenessIsComing: ‘Had Lad’ tells Lu she has to stop the war between Ciaró and the Killers, lest [[BiggerBad Signus]] returns, but [[LockedOutOfTheLoop refuses to give details about either the war or Signus]].
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** LonerTurnedFriend: She later befriends Hallwad Caurn, a boy she meets on the Myles Mountains in Greywall’d, [[spoiler:and his sister Aucasis]].
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: She suffers from this even after [[spoiler:heroically saving Hallwad and Aucasis from the Dark Ones’ tunnels]].
* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: Lu definitely thinks so, enough to offer Hallwad, a boy she meets on the Myles Mountains about halfway to the Refugee Camp, to help him resuce his sister, and even [[spoiler:simply stop her journey in the middle]] to [[spoiler:move in]] with Cleareye Fullmoonnight, a Moondaughter she meets in the Moonfolk Forest after crossing the mountains. ‘Hat Lad’ calls her out on this, emphasising in no uncertain terms how incredibly important her mission is.
* JadeColoredGlasses: Lu didn’t start off as snarky, but having gone through a rough childhood and experienced her faith in people broken repeatedly, she ultimately became this.
* LittleMissSnarker: Lu, who pretty much mocks any fault she can find at anyone she interacts with, turns 16 about a third of the way in.
* LonerTurnedFriend: Lu comes from a FriendlessBackground and feeling SurroundedByIdiots, but later befriends Hallwad Caurn, a boy she meets on the Myles Mountains in Greywall’d, [[spoiler:and his sister Aucasis]].
* LonerTurnedFriend: Lu comes from a FriendlessBackground and feeling SurroundedByIdiots, but later befriends Hallwad Caurn, a boy she meets on the Myles Mountains in Greywall’d, [[spoiler:and his sister Aucasis]].
* PerkyGoth: Despite her crippling SelfDeprecation, Lu has her moments, particularly after [[spoiler:moving in with Cleareye Fullmoonnight]].
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** RescueIntroduction: How Lu and Aucasis first meet.
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** HeroicSelfDeprecation: She suffers from this even after [[spoiler:heroically saving Hallwad and Aucasis from the Dark Ones’ tunnels]].
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* TheSnarkKnight: Lu became this naturally, based on her biography. She mocks most people around her in her {{Inner Monologue}}s, but also points a few of those barbs at herself too.
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* StepfordSnarker: Lu often uses sarcasm to vent her negative emotions, but when talks about herself in earnest, she tends to use harsh self-deprecating language and see little worth in her own existence.
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* SurroundedByIdiots: Lu feels that way often, occasionally based on shallow points such as appearance (while ignoring, or regarding with disdain, people’s friendly attitude towards her), but after [[spoiler:the CurbStompBattle victory against [[AlphaBitch Bridget]] at the SnowballFight]], her attitude seems [[CelebrityIsOverrated justified]].
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* VaguenessIsComing: ‘Had Lad’ tells Lu she has to stop the war between Ciaró and the Killers, lest [[BiggerBad Signus]] returns, but [[LockedOutOfTheLoop refuses to give details about either the war or Signus]].
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* AlphaBitch: Bridget, a shameless [[ValleyGirl Essex Girl]] unrepentant [[TheBully bully]].
** GirlPosse: Includes four other Essex girls named Lola, Dakota, Kailey, and an unnamed fourth.
*** [[spoiler:BackstabbingTheAlphaBitch: After Bridget suffers a [[CurbStompBattle humiliating defeat]] by Lu at the SnowballFight, Lola, who [[TheStarscream seemed to be the closest to Bridget beforehand]], is the only one of the girls mentioned by name who tries to befriend Lu.]]
** GirlPosse: Includes four other Essex girls named Lola, Dakota, Kailey, and an unnamed fourth.
*** [[spoiler:BackstabbingTheAlphaBitch: After Bridget suffers a [[CurbStompBattle humiliating defeat]] by Lu at the SnowballFight, Lola, who [[TheStarscream seemed to be the closest to Bridget beforehand]], is the only one of the girls mentioned by name who tries to befriend Lu.]]
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* AlphaBitch: Bridget, a shameless [[ValleyGirl Essex Girl]] (i.e. the polar opposite of [[{{Goth}} Lu]]) unrepentant [[TheBully bully]].
** GirlPosse: Includes four other Essex girls named Lola, Dakota, Kailey, and an unnamed fourth.
*** [[spoiler:BackstabbingTheAlphaBitch: After Bridget suffers a [[CurbStompBattle humiliating defeat]] by Lu at the SnowballFight, Lola, who [[TheStarscream seemed to be the closest to Bridget beforehand]], is the only one of the girls mentioned by name who tries to befriend Lu.]]bully]].
** GirlPosse: Includes four other Essex girls named Lola, Dakota, Kailey, and an unnamed fourth.
*** [[spoiler:BackstabbingTheAlphaBitch: After Bridget suffers a [[CurbStompBattle humiliating defeat]] by Lu at the SnowballFight, Lola, who [[TheStarscream seemed to be the closest to Bridget beforehand]], is the only one of the girls mentioned by name who tries to befriend Lu.]]
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* AwakeningTheSleepingGiant: Lu has extremely powerful magic powers, and...
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* AwakeningTheSleepingGiant: Lu has extremely powerful magic powers, and...and…
* [[spoiler:BackstabbingTheAlphaBitch: After Bridget suffers a [[CurbStompBattle humiliating defeat]] by Lu at the SnowballFight, Lola, who [[TheStarscream seemed to be the closest to Bridget beforehand]], is the only one of the girls mentioned by name who tries to befriend Lu.]]
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*** BadassUnintentional: Especially at the beginning.
*** BadassBookworm: After [[spoiler:moving in with Cleareye]], she starts reading Cleareye’s library passionately; becoming an {{Omniglot}} after crossing to Greywall’d becomes a useful skill here.
*** LittleMissBadass: She is only a teenager.
*** TookALevelInBadass: While she has proven herself quite a {{Badass}} back on Earth, ‘Hat Lad’ teaches her how to control her powers, she gains more powers once she crosses over to Greywall’d, and Hallwad teaches her some survival skills.
*** BadassBookworm: After [[spoiler:moving in with Cleareye]], she starts reading Cleareye’s library passionately; becoming an {{Omniglot}} after crossing to Greywall’d becomes a useful skill here.
*** LittleMissBadass: She is only a teenager.
*** TookALevelInBadass: While she has proven herself quite a {{Badass}} back on Earth, ‘Hat Lad’ teaches her how to control her powers, she gains more powers once she crosses over to Greywall’d, and Hallwad teaches her some survival skills.
* BadassUnintentional: Lu, especially at the beginning, when she takes down both Bridget and Professor Cole without even trying.
* BadassBookworm: After [[spoiler:moving in with Cleareye]], Lu starts reading Cleareye’s library passionately; becoming an {{Omniglot}} after crossing to Greywall’d becomes a useful skill here.
* BadassBookworm: After [[spoiler:moving in with Cleareye]], Lu starts reading Cleareye’s library passionately; becoming an {{Omniglot}} after crossing to Greywall’d becomes a useful skill here.
* BewareTheSuperman: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]]. The man in Lu’s visions quotes a prophecy saying that his and his wife’s daughter will either save the world or destroy it. [[spoiler:The daughter is actually Lu.]]
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** BullyingADragon: Bridget should have known better than to throw snowballs at Lu’s window…
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** RefusalOfTheCall: Lu’s reaction. She fiercely tries to chalk up her magical experience to [[SanitySlippage going mad]] or [[AllJustADream bizarre dreams]] to avoid it.
* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler:Shadow and Déaspor planned for the Derobus cat to save Lu from the men who attacked her, and are implied to have been those men in disguise, and have sent to the Refugee Camp not only Lu, but also Hallwad and Aucasis, and, eighteen years before the book’s beginning, Cleareye.]]
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** JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: The Dark Ones’ method of extracting information from Aucasis.
*** TortureAlwaysWorks: Averted. Aucasis tells them nothing, not even false information to stop the torture.
**** InterrogatedForNothing: This might be because they ask her where Hallwad is, and she probably has no idea, although she did know he was heading for the Refugee Camp when she was kidnapped.
** TorturePorn: Lu describes ‘[[BlatantLies traditional Killer]]’ torture techniques she invents on the spot to [[spoiler:the Dark Ones’ warden Castor]] in order to [[spoiler:get him to reveal details about the security system]].
*** TortureAlwaysWorks: Averted. Aucasis tells them nothing, not even false information to stop the torture.
**** InterrogatedForNothing: This might be because they ask her where Hallwad is, and she probably has no idea, although she did know he was heading for the Refugee Camp when she was kidnapped.
** TorturePorn: Lu describes ‘[[BlatantLies traditional Killer]]’ torture techniques she invents on the spot to [[spoiler:the Dark Ones’ warden Castor]] in order to [[spoiler:get him to reveal details about the security system]].
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*** TortureAlwaysWorks: Averted. Aucasis tells
**** InterrogatedForNothing: This might be
** TorturePorn: Lu describes ‘[[BlatantLies traditional Killer]]’ torture techniques she invents on the spot to [[spoiler:the
* EncyclopediaExposita: Used on two occasions:
** [[GreatBigBookOfEverything The Enchiridion]], which Lu can read only once (about a third of the way in), which is how she learns how crossing between Earth (or [[CallARabbitASmeerp ‘Gæa’, as the Enchiridion calls it]]) and Greywall’d works.
** [[GreatBigLibraryOfEverything Cleareye Fullmoonnight’s library]], which appears in the last third or so of the book, is full of those, and Lu reads them eagerly, explaining the basic geography of Greywall’d and discovering that for some reason, [[spoiler:‘Hat Lad’ gave her inaccurate directions to the Refugee Camp]].
** [[GreatBigBookOfEverything The Enchiridion]], which Lu can read only once (about a third of the way in), which is how she learns how crossing between Earth (or [[CallARabbitASmeerp ‘Gæa’, as the Enchiridion calls it]]) and Greywall’d works.
** [[GreatBigLibraryOfEverything Cleareye Fullmoonnight’s library]], which appears in the last third or so of the book, is full of those, and Lu reads them eagerly, explaining the basic geography of Greywall’d and discovering that for some reason, [[spoiler:‘Hat Lad’ gave her inaccurate directions to the Refugee Camp]].
* EvilWearsBlack:
** Professor Cole wears black when fighting ‘Hat Lad’.
** The two assassins sent to kill Lu both wear black, and Lu [[spoiler:takes one of their cloaks [[RobbingTheDead after killing them]]]].
** The Dark Ones wear black clothes, or at least a variety of dark colours.
** Professor Cole wears black when fighting ‘Hat Lad’.
** The two assassins sent to kill Lu both wear black, and Lu [[spoiler:takes one of their cloaks [[RobbingTheDead after killing them]]]].
** The Dark Ones wear black clothes, or at least a variety of dark colours.
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* {{Exposition}}: Usually given in spades, relying mostly on ShowDontTell or Lu’s {{Inner Monologue}}s, but two exceptions stand out after Lu reaches Greywall’d:
** EncyclopediaExposita:
*** [[GreatBigBookOfEverything The Enchiridion]], which opens only in specific times when Lu needs it to, which happens only once throughout the book, allowing Lu to read about how crossing between Earth (or [[CallARabbitASmeerp ‘Gæa’, as the Enchiridion calls it]]) and Greywall’d works.
*** Cleareye Fullmoonnight’s library is full of those, and Lu reads them eagerly, explaining the basic geography of Greywall’d and discovering that for some reason, [[spoiler:‘Hat Lad’ gave her inaccurate directions to the Refugee Camp]].
** InstructionalDialogue: A kind, mysterious stranger (who is [[spoiler:actually Déaspor]]) explains to Lu the different races and nations in the Land of the Sea and the types of currency they use.
** EncyclopediaExposita:
*** [[GreatBigBookOfEverything The Enchiridion]], which opens only in specific times when Lu needs it to, which happens only once throughout the book, allowing Lu to read about how crossing between Earth (or [[CallARabbitASmeerp ‘Gæa’, as the Enchiridion calls it]]) and Greywall’d works.
*** Cleareye Fullmoonnight’s library is full of those, and Lu reads them eagerly, explaining the basic geography of Greywall’d and discovering that for some reason, [[spoiler:‘Hat Lad’ gave her inaccurate directions to the Refugee Camp]].
** InstructionalDialogue: A kind, mysterious stranger (who is [[spoiler:actually Déaspor]]) explains to Lu the different races and nations in the Land of the Sea and the types of currency they use.
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* {{Exposition}}: Usually given in spades, relying mostly on ShowDontTell or Lu’s {{Inner Monologue}}s, but two exceptions stand out after Lu reaches Greywall’d:
** EncyclopediaExposita:
*** [[GreatBigBookOfEverything The Enchiridion]], which opens only in specific times when Lu needs it to, which happens only once throughout the book, allowing Lu to read about how crossing between Earth (or [[CallARabbitASmeerp ‘Gæa’, as the Enchiridion calls it]])Greywall’d; see EncyclopediaExposita and Greywall’d works.
*** Cleareye Fullmoonnight’s library is full of those, and Lu reads them eagerly, explaining the basic geography of Greywall’d and discovering thatInstructionalDialogue for some reason, [[spoiler:‘Hat Lad’ gave her inaccurate directions to the Refugee Camp]].
** InstructionalDialogue: A kind, mysterious stranger (who is [[spoiler:actually Déaspor]]) explains to Lu the different races and nations in the Land of the Sea and the types of currency they use.more.
** EncyclopediaExposita:
*** [[GreatBigBookOfEverything The Enchiridion]], which opens only in specific times when Lu needs it to, which happens only once throughout the book, allowing Lu to read about how crossing between Earth (or [[CallARabbitASmeerp ‘Gæa’, as the Enchiridion calls it]])
*** Cleareye Fullmoonnight’s library is full of those, and Lu reads them eagerly, explaining the basic geography of Greywall’d and discovering that
** InstructionalDialogue: A kind, mysterious stranger (who is [[spoiler:actually Déaspor]]) explains to Lu the different races and nations in the Land of the Sea and the types of currency they use.
FantasyAxisOfEvil[=/=]FiveRaces (see the respective entries for those); while the races featured in the book clearly rely on these divisions, they often occupy the same slot or leave some slots unoccupied:
** [[OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame Dwarves]], in the Kingdom of Brasse in the southwest (Stout);
** [[HumansAreAverage Humans]], in the Kingdom of Ciaró, south of Myles (Mundane);
** [[OurElvesAreBetter Elves]], in the Kingdom of Syrane in the westernmost end of the Land of the Sea, and the [[{{Lunacy}} Moonfolk]] [[IHaveManyNames a.k.a.]] [[SpaceElves Lavrice]], in the northernmost end (Fairy);
** [[WitchSpecies Wizards]], who [[WalkingTheEarth have no fixed domain and wander around]] (High Men);
** [[TheFairFolk The Dark Ones]], [[UndergroundCity inside]] the [[DeathWorld Myles Mountains]] (Fallen); and
** [[OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame Dwarves]], in the Kingdom of Brasse in the southwest (Stout);
** [[HumansAreAverage Humans]], in the Kingdom of Ciaró, south of Myles (Mundane);
** [[OurElvesAreBetter Elves]], in the Kingdom of Syrane in the westernmost end of the Land of the Sea, and the [[{{Lunacy}} Moonfolk]] [[IHaveManyNames a.k.a.]] [[SpaceElves Lavrice]], in the northernmost end (Fairy);
** [[WitchSpecies Wizards]], who [[WalkingTheEarth have no fixed domain and wander around]] (High Men);
** [[TheFairFolk The Dark Ones]], [[UndergroundCity inside]] the [[DeathWorld Myles Mountains]] (Fallen); and
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** FantasyAxisOfEvil[=/=]FiveRaces: Played with. While the races featured in the book clearly rely on these divisions, they often occupy the same slot or leave some slots unoccupied. Specifically:
*** [[OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame Dwarves]], in the Kingdom of Brasse in the southwest (Stout);
*** [[HumansAreAverage Humans]], in the Kingdom of Ciaró, south of Myles (Mundane);
*** [[OurElvesAreBetter Elves]], in the Kingdom of Syrane in the westernmost end of the Land of the Sea, and the [[{{Lunacy}} Moonfolk]] [[IHaveManyNames a.k.a.]] [[SpaceElves Lavrice]], in the northernmost end (Fairy);
*** [[WitchSpecies Wizards]], who [[WalkingTheEarth have no fixed domain and wander around]] (High Men);
*** [[TheFairFolk The Dark Ones]], [[UndergroundCity inside]] the [[DeathWorld Myles Mountains]] (Fallen); and
*** [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Vampires]], who live in the southern Kingdom of Caminore (still unknown).
** A [[ShroudedInMyth mysterious]] ‘Race of the Cursed’, living in the Castle of Bayrone past the River Trocus at the easternmost side of the Land of the Sea, who are more fiction than fact.
** A variety of different animals who are rough equivalent of those on Earth, but include also [[ThePhoenix phœnices]], [[{{Unicorn}} unicorns]], [[OurGryphonsAreDifferent gryphons]], [[HellHound Ephalius wolves]] and [[SavageWolves dark wolves]], and [[NearlyNormalAnimal Derobus cats]].
** A variety of different Gods worshipped by different sects: Promius by the Dark Ones (and probably humans, whom he created, according to Cleareye), Lady Lias (moon goddess) by the Moonfolk, and others not mentioned by name.
*** [[OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame Dwarves]], in the Kingdom of Brasse in the southwest (Stout);
*** [[HumansAreAverage Humans]], in the Kingdom of Ciaró, south of Myles (Mundane);
*** [[OurElvesAreBetter Elves]], in the Kingdom of Syrane in the westernmost end of the Land of the Sea, and the [[{{Lunacy}} Moonfolk]] [[IHaveManyNames a.k.a.]] [[SpaceElves Lavrice]], in the northernmost end (Fairy);
*** [[WitchSpecies Wizards]], who [[WalkingTheEarth have no fixed domain and wander around]] (High Men);
*** [[TheFairFolk The Dark Ones]], [[UndergroundCity inside]] the [[DeathWorld Myles Mountains]] (Fallen); and
*** [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Vampires]], who live in the southern Kingdom of Caminore (still unknown).
** A [[ShroudedInMyth mysterious]] ‘Race of the Cursed’, living in the Castle of Bayrone past the River Trocus at the easternmost side of the Land of the Sea, who are more fiction than fact.
** A variety of different animals who are rough equivalent of those on Earth, but include also [[ThePhoenix phœnices]], [[{{Unicorn}} unicorns]], [[OurGryphonsAreDifferent gryphons]], [[HellHound Ephalius wolves]] and [[SavageWolves dark wolves]], and [[NearlyNormalAnimal Derobus cats]].
** A variety of different Gods worshipped by different sects: Promius by the Dark Ones (and probably humans, whom he created, according to Cleareye), Lady Lias (moon goddess) by the Moonfolk, and others not mentioned by name.
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** FantasyAxisOfEvil[=/=]FiveRaces: Played with. While a variation on FantasyAxisOfEvil[=/=]FiveRaces (see the races featured in the book clearly rely on these divisions, they often occupy the same slot or leave some slots unoccupied. Specifically:
*** [[OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame Dwarves]], in the Kingdom of Brasse in the southwest (Stout);
*** [[HumansAreAverage Humans]], in the Kingdom of Ciaró, south of Myles (Mundane);
*** [[OurElvesAreBetter Elves]], in the Kingdom of Syrane in the westernmost end of the Land of the Sea, and the [[{{Lunacy}} Moonfolk]] [[IHaveManyNames a.k.a.]] [[SpaceElves Lavrice]], in the northernmost end (Fairy);
*** [[WitchSpecies Wizards]], who [[WalkingTheEarth have no fixed domain and wander around]] (High Men);
*** [[TheFairFolk The Dark Ones]], [[UndergroundCity inside]] the [[DeathWorld Myles Mountains]] (Fallen); and
***respective entries for those);
** [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Vampires]], who live in the southern Kingdom ofCaminore (still unknown).
Caminore;
**A a [[ShroudedInMyth mysterious]] ‘Race of the Cursed’, living in the Castle of Bayrone past the River Trocus at the easternmost side of the Land of the Sea, who are more fiction than fact.
fact; and
**A a variety of different animals who are rough equivalent of those on Earth, but include also [[ThePhoenix phœnices]], [[{{Unicorn}} unicorns]], [[OurGryphonsAreDifferent gryphons]], [[HellHound Ephalius wolves]] and [[SavageWolves dark wolves]], and [[NearlyNormalAnimal Derobus cats]].
cats]]; and
**A a variety of different Gods worshipped by different sects: Promius by the Dark Ones (and probably humans, whom he created, according to Cleareye), Lady Lias (moon goddess) by the Moonfolk, and others not mentioned by name.
*** [[OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame Dwarves]], in the Kingdom of Brasse in the southwest (Stout);
*** [[HumansAreAverage Humans]], in the Kingdom of Ciaró, south of Myles (Mundane);
*** [[OurElvesAreBetter Elves]], in the Kingdom of Syrane in the westernmost end of the Land of the Sea, and the [[{{Lunacy}} Moonfolk]] [[IHaveManyNames a.k.a.]] [[SpaceElves Lavrice]], in the northernmost end (Fairy);
*** [[WitchSpecies Wizards]], who [[WalkingTheEarth have no fixed domain and wander around]] (High Men);
*** [[TheFairFolk The Dark Ones]], [[UndergroundCity inside]] the [[DeathWorld Myles Mountains]] (Fallen); and
***
** [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Vampires]], who live in the southern Kingdom of
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** TheUnfrozenCavemanLawyer: She adapts and survives skilfully after crossing, though.
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** InSpiteOfANail: He’s NotQuiteDead, though.
* FounderOfTheKingdom: King Roythebrune, who is mentioned in the Dark Ones’ narrative poem (see ShowWithinAShow below).
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* BewareTheSuperman: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]]. The man in Lu’s visions quotes a prophecy saying that his and his wife’s daughter will either save the world or destroy it. [[spoiler:The daughter is actually Lu.]]
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* BewareTheSuperman: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]]. The man in Lu’s visions quotes a prophecy saying that his GirlPosse: Includes four other Essex girls named Lola, Dakota, Kailey, and his wife’s daughter will either save the world or destroy it. [[spoiler:The daughter is actually Lu.]]an unnamed fourth.
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* GreatBigBookOfEverything: The Enchiridion.
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* GreatBigBookOfEverything: The Enchiridion.Enchiridion, which opens only in specific times when Lu needs it to, which happens only once throughout the book.
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** ComeWithMeIfYouWantToLive: Déaspor and the Wizard warn the Caurns to come with them immediately because they were no longer safe where they were. This doesn’t work very well: their mother dies and Aucasis is captured by the Dark Ones.
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** EvilWearsBlack:
*** Professor Cole wears black when fighting ‘Hat Lad’.
*** The two assassins sent to kill Lu both wear black, and Lu [[spoiler:takes one of their cloaks [[RobbingTheDead after killing them]]]].
*** The Dark Ones wear black clothes, or at least a variety of dark colours.
*** Professor Cole wears black when fighting ‘Hat Lad’.
*** The two assassins sent to kill Lu both wear black, and Lu [[spoiler:takes one of their cloaks [[RobbingTheDead after killing them]]]].
*** The Dark Ones wear black clothes, or at least a variety of dark colours.
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** EvilWearsBlack:
*** Professor Cole wears black when fighting ‘Hat Lad’.
*** The two assassins sent to kill Lu both wear black, and Lu [[spoiler:takes one of their cloaks [[RobbingTheDead after killing them]]]].
*** The Dark Ones wear black clothes, or at least a variety of dark colours.See EvilWearsBlack above.
*** Professor Cole wears black when fighting ‘Hat Lad’.
*** The two assassins sent to kill Lu both wear black, and Lu [[spoiler:takes one of their cloaks [[RobbingTheDead after killing them]]]].
*** The Dark Ones wear black clothes, or at least a variety of dark colours.
* InSpiteOfANail: Despite his loss to Professor Cole brought on by a momentary minor distraction, ‘Hat Lad’ turns out to be NotQuiteDead.
* InstructionalDialogue: A kind, mysterious stranger (who is [[spoiler:actually Déaspor]]) explains to Lu the different races and nations in the Land of the Sea and the types of currency they use.
* InterrogatedForNothing: [[TheFairFolk The Dark Ones]]’ [[TortureAlwaysWorks torture]] of Aucasis might [[TortureIsIneffective be this]] because they ask her where Hallwad is, and she probably has no idea, although she did know he was heading for the Refugee Camp when she was kidnapped.
* JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: The Dark Ones’ method of extracting information from Aucasis.
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** FounderOfTheKingdom: King Roythebrune, who is mentioned in the Dark Ones’ narrative poem (see ShowWithinAShow below).
* LittleMissBadass: Both Lu and Aucasis, who are only teenagers.
* RainRainGoAway: The rain in Greywall’d becomes so heavy at one point that Lu has to [[RainRainGoAway stop her quest]] and stay at the Chopped Tree Inn until it passes.
* RefusalOfTheCall: Lu’s reaction to ‘Hat Lad’ [[CallToAdventure informing her of her mission]]. She fiercely tries to chalk up her magical experience to [[SanitySlippage going mad]] or [[AllJustADream bizarre dreams]] to avoid it.
* TookALevelInBadass:
** While Lu has proven herself quite a {{Badass}} back on Earth, ‘Hat Lad’ teaches her how to control her powers, she gains more powers once she crosses over to Greywall’d, Hallwad teaches her some survival skills, and she practices her knife skills [[spoiler:while she’s staying in with Cleareye]], further honing her skills.
** Humans who manage to cross over to Greywall’d and make it to the Refugee Camp are more likely than not somewhat {{Badass}} to begin with, and the Camp itself is meant to hone their survival skills further.
* TortureAlwaysWorks: Averted. Aucasis tells her interrogators nothing about her brother’s whereabouts ([[InterrogatedForNothing which she may or may not know anything about]]), not even false information to stop the torture.
** While Lu has proven herself quite a {{Badass}} back on Earth, ‘Hat Lad’ teaches her how to control her powers, she gains more powers once she crosses over to Greywall’d, Hallwad teaches her some survival skills, and she practices her knife skills [[spoiler:while she’s staying in with Cleareye]], further honing her skills.
** Humans who manage to cross over to Greywall’d and make it to the Refugee Camp are more likely than not somewhat {{Badass}} to begin with, and the Camp itself is meant to hone their survival skills further.
* TortureAlwaysWorks: Averted. Aucasis tells her interrogators nothing about her brother’s whereabouts ([[InterrogatedForNothing which she may or may not know anything about]]), not even false information to stop the torture.
* TorturePorn: Lu describes ‘[[BlatantLies traditional Killer]]’ torture techniques she invents on the spot to [[spoiler:the Dark Ones’ warden Castor]] in order to [[spoiler:get him to reveal details about the security system]].
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** TheChessmaster: [[spoiler:They planned for the Derobus cat to save Lu from the men who attacked her, and are implied to have been those men in disguise, and have sent to the Refugee Camp not only Lu, but also Hallwad and Aucasis, and, eighteen years before the book’s beginning, Cleareye.]]
** TricksterMentor: ‘Hat Lad’ for Lu, giving her cryptic directions and pulling off NotQuiteDead on her twice.
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** TricksterMentor: ‘Hat Lad’ for Lu, giving her cryptic directions and pulling off NotQuiteDead on her twice.
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* TheUnfrozenCavemanLawyer: She adapts and survives skilfully after crossing, though.
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* WhenItRainsItPours:
** The book begins on September 1st, 2011, and Lu leaves Greywall’d on February 14th, 2012. [[JustifiedTrope Naturally]], the rain falling during that period [[http://www.metoffice.gov.uk/climate/uk/ee/ has a tendency to be heavy]].
** The rain in Greywall’d becomes so heavy at one point that Lu has to [[RainRainGoAway stop her quest]] and stay at the Chopped Tree Inn until it passes.
** The book begins on September 1st, 2011, and Lu leaves Greywall’d on February 14th, 2012. [[JustifiedTrope Naturally]], the rain falling during that period [[http://www.metoffice.gov.uk/climate/uk/ee/ has a tendency to be heavy]].
** The rain in Greywall’d becomes so heavy at one point that Lu has to [[RainRainGoAway stop her quest]] and stay at the Chopped Tree Inn until it passes.
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* WhenItRainsItPours:
**WhenItRainsItPours: The book begins on September 1st, 2011, and Lu leaves Greywall’d on February 14th, 2012. [[JustifiedTrope Naturally]], the rain falling during that period [[http://www.metoffice.gov.uk/climate/uk/ee/ has a tendency to be heavy]].
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* HeroicFantasy: The novel becomes more or less this after Lu crosses over to Greywall’d: she’s the centre of focus, but there is some moderate WorldBuilding, she uses magic almost exclusively to fight (despite being very fit skilled in non-magical fighting as well), and her [[SavingTheWorld mission]] is more of a staple of HighFantasy.
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* HeroicFantasy: The novel becomes more or less this after Lu crosses over to Greywall’d: she’s the centre of focus, but there is some moderate WorldBuilding, she uses magic almost exclusively to fight (despite being very fit and skilled in non-magical fighting as well), and her [[SavingTheWorld mission]] is more of a staple of HighFantasy.
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** Mike is the ButtMonkey {{Nerd}} who sits next to Lu and seems to have NoSocialSkills. His wears ‘glasses that made his eyes several times larger, as well as horrid grey trousers and a jumper several times his size’. Lu still prefers his company over the [[ValleyGirl Essex girls]] in the school.
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** Mike is the ButtMonkey {{Nerd}} who sits next to Lu and seems to have NoSocialSkills. His wears ‘glasses glasses that made his eyes several times larger, as well as horrid grey trousers and a jumper several times his size’. Lu still prefers his company over the [[ValleyGirl Essex girls]] in the school.
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* UrbanFantasy: Starts off as this, until Lu crosses over to [[MagicalLand Greywall’d]].
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* IntentionallyAwkwardTitle: The book received its name as it deals with the themes of NatureVersusNurture, and more specifically with InTheBlood, as its heroine wonders if she inherited her clan’s notorious murderous inclinations. Naturally, some people find the title a tad intimidating when given without context.
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* DidIMentionItsChristmas: Lu spends the period between September 1st, 2011 and January 17th, 2012 in England, but never so much as mentions any holidays and barely even mentions [[UsefulNotes/BritishWeather the weather]], despite it being [[http://www.theguardian.com/uk/2011/jan/05/december-coldest-uk-month-100-years the coldest in the UK in 100 years]]. Apparently, she is just ''that'' apathetic.
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* TortureIsIneffective: The Dark Ones fail to get any information from their prisoner Aucasis about her brother Hallwad’s whereabouts. While it’s likely she has no idea herself, she doesn’t even give them false information to get them to leave her alone.