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* CoolLoser: Lake and Willow.
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* GrayEyes: Keiran and Keenan.
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* AMinorKidntroduction: The reader gets to see all the important characters as children.
* BeautyIsBad: Practically any named male character described as good looking is a jerk, Jesse being an exception.
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* HotGuysAreBastards: Practically any named male character described as good looking, Jesse being an exception.
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* AMinorKintroduction: The reader gets to see all the important characters as children.
* AbusiveParents: Mitch Masters, Kieran's and Keenan's father actually sold Kieran into slavery and nearly murdered Keenan. Also Mario Fulton who has been pimping out his daughter Diana since she was in elementary school.
* AbusiveParents: Mitch Masters, Kieran's and Keenan's father actually sold Kieran into slavery and nearly murdered Keenan. Also Mario Fulton who has been pimping out his daughter Diana since she was in elementary school.
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* AMinorKintroduction: AMinorKidntroduction: The reader gets to see all the important characters as children.
* AbusiveParents: Mitch Masters, Kieran's and Keenan's father actually sold Kieran into slavery and nearly murdered Keenan. Also Mario Fulton who has been pimping out his daughter Diana since she was in elementary school. The Chambers are awful parents as well although not to Mitch's degree. Mrs. Chambers is obsessed with appearances and worries more about money than her granddaughter's kidnapping, fails to emotionally support her daughter in a difficult time. Cale Chambers tried to force his son to marry a woman he does not care for.
* AbusiveParents: Mitch Masters, Kieran's and Keenan's father actually sold Kieran into slavery and nearly murdered Keenan. Also Mario Fulton who has been pimping out his daughter Diana since she was in elementary school. The Chambers are awful parents as well although not to Mitch's degree. Mrs. Chambers is obsessed with appearances and worries more about money than her granddaughter's kidnapping, fails to emotionally support her daughter in a difficult time. Cale Chambers tried to force his son to marry a woman he does not care for.
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* ParentsAsPeople: John Masters is an absentee parent but he is dealing with a lot of guilt over Keiran's childhood, Sophia's disappearance and the stress of keeping Mitch away. Keiran and Keenan do not make it easy either, with their propensity to get into trouble. Lake's Aunt Carissa has not noticed that her niece has been horribly bullied for a decade. Willow's mother Mrs. Waters is rather indifferent to her children particularly her daughter in favor to looking after her husband, but she was impregnated and abandoned. Likely feels grateful to Mr. Waters for accepting her and another man's child.
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* RichBitch: Melissa Chambers full stop. Also Rosalyn.
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* HotGuysAreBastards: Practically any named male character described as good looking, Jesse being an exception.
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* DubiousConsent: How Keiran's and Lake's sexual relationship begins. He likely would have not touched her had she said no but she never felt like she could refuse. In Breaking Love he admits to Willow that what he did to Lake was rape.
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* QuestionableConsent: How Keiran's and Lake's sexual relationship begins. He likely would have not touched her had she said no but she never felt like she could refuse. In Breaking Love he admits to Willow that what he did to Lake was rape.
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: Keiran's and Lake's dynamic. He had a platonic version with Lily when they were children.
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* DubiousConsent: How Keiran's and Lake's sexual relationship begins. He likely would have not touched her had she said no but she never felt like she could refuse. In Breaking Love he admits to Willow that what he did to Lake was rape.
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Dash and Willow.
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* ''Fear Us'' (Sheldon and Keenan's story) forthcoming 2015
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* ''Fear Us'' (Sheldon and Keenan's story) forthcoming Fall 2015
* ''Breaking Love'' (Willow's and Dash's story) Winter 2015
* ''Fearless'' (Lake and Keiran once again) forthcoming.
* ''Breaking Love'' (Willow's and Dash's story) Winter 2015
* ''Fearless'' (Lake and Keiran once again) forthcoming.
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* AwfulTruth: Keiran's past. The mystery of Sophia Blackwood-Masters. What happened to the Monroes.
* BrokenBird: Keiran because of his horrible childhood. Lake because of Keiran's bullying. Keenan after he finds out a few harsh truths. Sheldon after she catches Keenan with the new teacher.
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* DisappearedDad: Mitch Masters, unfortunately he does not stay that way. John Masters also is away most of the year, causing Keiran and Keenan to be unsupervised and get up to no good.
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* DisappearedDad: Mitch Masters, unfortunately he does not stay that way. John Masters also is away most of the year, causing Keiran and Keenan to be unsupervised and get up to no good. Mr. Monroe, Lake's father and his wife have been missing for nearly ten years.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Anya toward Lake.
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* FieryRedhead: Willow.
* FreakyFashionMildMind: Willow. Her textile creations might get wild but she herself is a very down to earth girl.
* GrayEyes: Keiran and Keenan.
* GreenEyedMonster: Anya toward Lake. Trevor toward Keiran.
* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Lily and Lake.
* InnocentBlueEyes: Lake and Lily.
* FreakyFashionMildMind: Willow. Her textile creations might get wild but she herself is a very down to earth girl.
* GrayEyes: Keiran and Keenan.
* GreenEyedMonster: Anya toward Lake. Trevor toward Keiran.
* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Lily and Lake.
* InnocentBlueEyes: Lake and Lily.
* MadeASlave: Keiran since he was a baby.
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* MissingMom: Sophia Blackwood. Keiran and Keenan's mother.
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* MissingMom: Sophia Blackwood. Keiran and Keenan's mother. Mrs. Monroe, Lake's mother.
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* AMinorKintroduction: The reader gets to see all the important characters as children.
* CasualKink: Keiran spanks Lake on two separate occasions and often ties her hands with his belt. It is implied that Keenan and Sheldon enjoy it as well.
* CoolLoser: Lake and Willow.
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* DisapearedDad: Mitch Masters, unfortunately he does not stay that way. John Masters also is away most of the year, causing Keiran and Keenan to be unsupervised and get up to no good.
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* DisapearedDad: DestructiveRomance: All the three portrayed couples qualify. The series is not called Broken Love for nothing.
* DisappearedDad: Mitch Masters, unfortunately he does not stay that way. John Masters also is away most of the year, causing Keiran and Keenan to be unsupervised and get up to no good.
* DisappearedDad: Mitch Masters, unfortunately he does not stay that way. John Masters also is away most of the year, causing Keiran and Keenan to be unsupervised and get up to no good.
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* PropertyOfLove: What the boys want the girls to be. Too bad for them the gals are a bit too strong minded.
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* ManlyGay: Quentin and Jesse. Keiran is flabbergasted when he finds out.
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* NoPeriodsPeriod: Lake is never shown menstruating but she and Sheldon do have a conversation about their periods much to Keenan's disgust.
* ReallyGetsAround: Keenan is quite the man whore much to Sheldon's distress.
* StockholmSyndrome: One explanation for Lake's feelings for Keiran, other than him being hot like burning.
* TallDarkAndHandsome: The Masters men but expecially Keiran.
* TitleDrop: Lake questions Keiran if their Broken Love can endure.
* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Poor Lily. Sophia has shades of this as well.
* ReallyGetsAround: Keenan is quite the man whore much to Sheldon's distress.
* StockholmSyndrome: One explanation for Lake's feelings for Keiran, other than him being hot like burning.
* TallDarkAndHandsome: The Masters men but expecially Keiran.
* TitleDrop: Lake questions Keiran if their Broken Love can endure.
* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Poor Lily. Sophia has shades of this as well.
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AbusiveParents: Mitch Masters, Kieran's and Keenan's father actually sold Kieran into slavery and nearly murdered Keenan. Also Mario Fulton who has been pimping out his daughter Diana since she was in elementary school.
AlphaBitch: Anya.
BetaCouple: Keenan and Sheldon. Dash and Willow.
IronicName: Keenan means wise, something he most certainly is not.
LovableAlphaBitch: Sheldon is very popular, in the cheerleading squad and yet she is a very kind girld who becomes good friends with the unpopular Lake and Willow.
MeaningfulName: Keiran means black or dark. Perfect for this brooding bad boy with a dark and tormented past.
TroubledButCute: Keiran and Keenan.
AlphaBitch: Anya.
BetaCouple: Keenan and Sheldon. Dash and Willow.
IronicName: Keenan means wise, something he most certainly is not.
LovableAlphaBitch: Sheldon is very popular, in the cheerleading squad and yet she is a very kind girld who becomes good friends with the unpopular Lake and Willow.
MeaningfulName: Keiran means black or dark. Perfect for this brooding bad boy with a dark and tormented past.
TroubledButCute: Keiran and Keenan.
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* AbusiveParents: Mitch Masters, Kieran's and Keenan's father actually sold Kieran into slavery and nearly murdered Keenan. Also Mario Fulton who has been pimping out his daughter Diana since she was in elementary school.
* AlphaBitch: Anya.
* BetaCouple: Keenan and Sheldon. Dash and Willow.
IronicName: Keenan means wise, something he most certainly is not.* ClingyJealousGirl: Anya and Rosalyn.
LovableAlphaBitch: Sheldon is very popular, in the cheerleading squad and yet she is a very kind girld who becomes good friends with the unpopular Lake and Willow.
MeaningfulName:* CrazyJealousGuy: Keiran means black or dark. Perfect goes nuts if anyone as much as looks at Lake. When Lake needs to distract him from making a perfect score at bowling she pretends to admire another guy. Same goes for this brooding bad boy with a dark and tormented past.Dash toward Willow.
* DisapearedDad: Mitch Masters, unfortunately he does not stay that way. John Masters also is away most of the year, causing Keiran and Keenan to be unsupervised and get up to no good.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Everyone knows that Keiran Masters is obsessed with Lake Monroe, except her.
* GreenEyedMonster: Anya toward Lake.
* IronicName: Keenan means wise, something he most certainly is not.
* LovableAlphaBitch: Sheldon is very popular, in the cheerleading squad and yet she is a very kind girld who becomes good friends with the unpopular Lake and Willow.
* ObliviousToLove: It takes Lake quite a while to realize what everyone knows. That Keiran has a thing for her.
* MeaningfulName: Keiran means black or dark. Perfect for this brooding bad boy with a dark and tormented past.
* MissingMom: Sophia Blackwood. Keiran and Keenan's mother.
* TroubledButCute: Keiran andKeenan.Keenan.
* WouldNotHitAGirl: Keiran might have made Lake's life a misery but he never has hit her. Neither Keenan or Dash would dream of hitting a girl. Trevor nearly gets murdered by Keiran when he hits Lake.
* AlphaBitch: Anya.
* BetaCouple: Keenan and Sheldon. Dash and Willow.
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* DisapearedDad: Mitch Masters, unfortunately he does not stay that way. John Masters also is away most of the year, causing Keiran and Keenan to be unsupervised and get up to no good.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Everyone knows that Keiran Masters is obsessed with Lake Monroe, except her.
* GreenEyedMonster: Anya toward Lake.
* IronicName: Keenan means wise, something he most certainly is not.
* LovableAlphaBitch: Sheldon is very popular, in the cheerleading squad and yet she is a very kind girld who becomes good friends with the unpopular Lake and Willow.
* ObliviousToLove: It takes Lake quite a while to realize what everyone knows. That Keiran has a thing for her.
* MeaningfulName: Keiran means black or dark. Perfect for this brooding bad boy with a dark and tormented past.
* MissingMom: Sophia Blackwood. Keiran and Keenan's mother.
* TroubledButCute: Keiran and
* WouldNotHitAGirl: Keiran might have made Lake's life a misery but he never has hit her. Neither Keenan or Dash would dream of hitting a girl. Trevor nearly gets murdered by Keiran when he hits Lake.
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A series following a group of damaged high school students struggling with feelings of love. The first two books tell the story of Lake Monroe and Keiran Masters. They met when they were children and Keiran became a rather dark version of a pigtail puller. At the beginning Keiran had been in juvie for a year for a crime he did not commit and thinks that Lake set him up. He is determined to get his revenge by 'ruining' her.
* ''Fear Me'' (Lake and Keiran's first book) published 2015
* ''Fear You''(Lake and Keiran's second book)published 2015
* ''Fear Us'' (Sheldon and Keenan's story) forthcoming 2015
Unmarked spoilers beyond. '''You have been warned!!!'''
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!!This series provides examples of:
AbusiveParents: Mitch Masters, Kieran's and Keenan's father actually sold Kieran into slavery and nearly murdered Keenan. Also Mario Fulton who has been pimping out his daughter Diana since she was in elementary school.
AlphaBitch: Anya.
BetaCouple: Keenan and Sheldon. Dash and Willow.
IronicName: Keenan means wise, something he most certainly is not.
LovableAlphaBitch: Sheldon is very popular, in the cheerleading squad and yet she is a very kind girld who becomes good friends with the unpopular Lake and Willow.
MeaningfulName: Keiran means black or dark. Perfect for this brooding bad boy with a dark and tormented past.
TroubledButCute: Keiran and Keenan.
* ''Fear Me'' (Lake and Keiran's first book) published 2015
* ''Fear You''(Lake and Keiran's second book)published 2015
* ''Fear Us'' (Sheldon and Keenan's story) forthcoming 2015
Unmarked spoilers beyond. '''You have been warned!!!'''
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!!This series provides examples of:
AbusiveParents: Mitch Masters, Kieran's and Keenan's father actually sold Kieran into slavery and nearly murdered Keenan. Also Mario Fulton who has been pimping out his daughter Diana since she was in elementary school.
AlphaBitch: Anya.
BetaCouple: Keenan and Sheldon. Dash and Willow.
IronicName: Keenan means wise, something he most certainly is not.
LovableAlphaBitch: Sheldon is very popular, in the cheerleading squad and yet she is a very kind girld who becomes good friends with the unpopular Lake and Willow.
MeaningfulName: Keiran means black or dark. Perfect for this brooding bad boy with a dark and tormented past.
TroubledButCute: Keiran and Keenan.
