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* Pretty much defines Defiant [[spoiler:aka Armsmaster]] and Dragon's admittedly [[StalkerWithACrush unconventional]] Transhumanist [[SickeninglySweethearts relationship]]. The chapter in which it is revealed manages to be heart-warming despite containing liberal doses of the Nine attacking a hospital and targeting the [[WouldHurtAChild nursery]] first.
* [[spoiler:After shooting Coil and riding back to their new base, ]] Bitch holds Taylor's hand to offer comfort and support. It was a quiet but very powerful moment considering Bitch's background, the drawbacks of her power, and their history together. It shows just how close they have become and how important she is to Bitch.
** The only reason that Taylor worked so hard and stayed [[spoiler:with Coil, was to rescue Dinah. After finally killing him, she finally comes face to face with her. She apologizes for taking so long to rescue her. Dinah was held captive for months, drugged out of mind, and her power abused causing her terrible pain. But she kept up hope that she would be rescued because her power showed that there was always a chance of escaping due to Taylor. She runs to her rescuer, and hugs her as hard as she can. ]]
* [[spoiler:After shooting Coil and riding back to their new base, ]] Bitch holds Taylor's hand to offer comfort and support. It was a quiet but very powerful moment considering Bitch's background, the drawbacks of her power, and their history together. It shows just how close they have become and how important she is to Bitch.
** The only reason that Taylor worked so hard and stayed [[spoiler:with Coil, was to rescue Dinah. After finally killing him, she finally comes face to face with her. She apologizes for taking so long to rescue her. Dinah was held captive for months, drugged out of mind, and her power abused causing her terrible pain. But she kept up hope that she would be rescued because her power showed that there was always a chance of escaping due to Taylor. She runs to her rescuer, and hugs her as hard as she can. ]]
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* Pretty much defines Defiant [[spoiler:aka Armsmaster]] (a.k.a. Armsmaster) and Dragon's admittedly [[StalkerWithACrush unconventional]] Transhumanist [[SickeninglySweethearts relationship]]. The chapter in which it is revealed manages to be heart-warming despite containing liberal doses of the Nine attacking a hospital and targeting the [[WouldHurtAChild nursery]] first.
*[[spoiler:After shooting Coil and After Skitter shot Coil, when the Undersiders are riding back to their new base, ]] Bitch holds Taylor's her hand to offer comfort and support. It was a quiet but very powerful moment considering Bitch's background, the drawbacks of her power, and their history together. It shows just how close they have become and how important she is to Bitch.
** The only reason that Taylor worked sohard and hard, the only reason she stayed [[spoiler:with with Coil, was to rescue Dinah. After finally killing him, she finally comes face to face with her. She apologizes for taking so long to rescue her. Dinah was held captive for months, drugged out of mind, and her power abused causing her terrible pain. But she kept up hope that she would be rescued because her power showed that there was always a chance of escaping due to Taylor. She runs to her rescuer, and hugs her as hard as she can. ]]
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/04/02/chrysalis-20-5// 20.5]] [[spoiler:over 5]], over a hundred students stand up and form a human barricade to protect Skitter/Taylor from Dragon and Defiant after they exposed her identity.]]
identity. And after the last kernel of them make it out of sight and they stop, each of them, starting with Fern (whom Taylor had just expressed suspicion of that morning), explains the key incidents that gave them a personal allegiance with the Undersiders or her specifically.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/04/02/chrysalis-20-5// 20.5]] [[spoiler:over a hundred students standup stand up and form a human barricade to protect Skitter/Taylor from Dragon and Defiant after they exposed her identity was exposed.identity.]]
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** According to the site's character page, by the time of the story's start they are married to each other. [[spoiler:Which makes her death at the hands of the S9 and his reaction all the more tragic.]]
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/03/12/scourge-19-7/ Scourge 19.7]], Lisa finally reveals her backstory and why she went out of her way to help Taylor so much. Lisa/Tattletale had her trigger event after her brother killed himself, and she spent night after night agonizing about how she should have figured out what was going on with him and spoken up about it. When she first met Taylor, she could see that Taylor was in the same state of utter despair that her brother was in, so she kept going out of her way to help her, feeling the need to save Taylor when she couldn't save her brother. She has taken many reckless risks, partly in order to help both herself and Taylor, and partly because she wants to prove herself because she is constantly driven by guilt about not speaking up sooner about her brother's suspicious behavior before his suicide. After Tattletale reveals all this, Taylor goes to hug her without saying anything.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/03/12/scourge-19-7/ Scourge 19.7]], Lisa finally reveals her backstory and why she went out of her way to help Taylor so much. Lisa/Tattletale had her trigger event after her brother killed himself, and she spent night after night agonizing about how she should have figured out what was going on with him and spoken up about it. When she first met Taylor, she could see that Taylor was in the same state of utter despair that her brother was in, so she kept going out of her way to help her, feeling the need to save Taylor when she couldn't save her brother. She has taken many reckless risks, partly in order to help both herself and Taylor, and partly because she wants to prove herself because she is constantly driven by guilt about not speaking up sooner about her brother's suspicious behavior before his suicide. After Tattletale reveals all this, Taylor goes to hug her without saying anything.anything.
* A little moment in [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/03/16/interlude-19-y/ Interlude 19 (Donation Bonus #2)]]: a Parahumans Online poster called [=WagTheDog=] and longtime fan of Bitch/Hellhound/Rachel starts a thread asking how he might hypothetically become one of her minions. Char sends him a private message.
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Omg.\\
It’s all good.\\
Harder than I thought but all good.
* A little moment in [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/03/16/interlude-19-y/ Interlude 19 (Donation Bonus #2)]]: a Parahumans Online poster called [=WagTheDog=] and longtime fan of Bitch/Hellhound/Rachel starts a thread asking how he might hypothetically become one of her minions. Char sends him a private message.
-->â–º '''WagTheDog''' (Original Poster)\\
Replied on July 3rd, 2011:\\
Omg.\\
It’s all good.\\
Harder than I thought but all good.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/03/12/scourge-19-7/ Scourge 19.7]], Lisa finally reveals her backstory and why she went out of her way to help Taylor so much. Lisa/Tattletale had her trigger event when after her brother killed himself, and she spent night after night agonizing about how she should have figured out what was going on with him and spoken up about it. When she first met Taylor, she could see that Taylor was in the same state of utter despair that her brother was in, so she kept going out of her way to help her, feeling the need to save Taylor when she couldn't save her brother. She has taken many reckless risks, partly in order to help both herself and Taylor, and partly because she wants to prove herself because she is constantly driven by guilt about not speaking up sooner about her brother's suspicious behavior before his suicide. After Tattletale reveals all this, Taylor goes to hug her without saying anything.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/03/12/scourge-19-7/ Scourge 19.7, 7]], Lisa finally reveals her backstory and why she went out of her way to help Taylor so much. Lisa/Tattletale had her trigger event when her brother killed himself, and she spent night after night agonizing about how she should have figured out what was going on with him and spoken up about it. When she first met Taylor, she could see that Taylor was in the same state of utter despair that her brother was in, so she kept going out of her way to help her, feeling the need to save Taylor when she couldn't save her brother. She has taken many reckless risks, partly in order to help both herself and Taylor, and partly because she wants to prove herself because she is constantly driven by guilt about not speaking up sooner about her brother's suspicious behavior before his suicide. After Tattletale reveals all this, Taylor goes to hug her without saying anything.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/02/23/scourge-19-2/ 19.2]], Grue is stuck in an AngstComa after being caught inside Noelle (which, as a side effect, caused flashbacks to worse versions of all his most traumatic memories). Skitter and Aisha sit down with him and get him moving so Aisha can take him home.home.
*In Scourge 19.7, Lisa finally reveals her backstory and why she went out of her way to help Taylor so much. Lisa/Tattletale had her trigger event when her brother killed himself, and she spent night after night agonizing about how she should have figured out what was going on with him and spoken up about it. When she first met Taylor, she could see that Taylor was in the same state of utter despair that her brother was in, so she kept going out of her way to help her, feeling the need to save Taylor when she couldn't save her brother. She has taken many reckless risks, partly in order to help both herself and Taylor, and partly because she wants to prove herself because she is constantly driven by guilt about not speaking up sooner about her brother's suspicious behavior before his suicide. After Tattletale reveals all this, Taylor goes to hug her without saying anything.
*In Scourge 19.7, Lisa finally reveals her backstory and why she went out of her way to help Taylor so much. Lisa/Tattletale had her trigger event when her brother killed himself, and she spent night after night agonizing about how she should have figured out what was going on with him and spoken up about it. When she first met Taylor, she could see that Taylor was in the same state of utter despair that her brother was in, so she kept going out of her way to help her, feeling the need to save Taylor when she couldn't save her brother. She has taken many reckless risks, partly in order to help both herself and Taylor, and partly because she wants to prove herself because she is constantly driven by guilt about not speaking up sooner about her brother's suspicious behavior before his suicide. After Tattletale reveals all this, Taylor goes to hug her without saying anything.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/02/23/scourge-19-2/ 19.2]], Grue is stuck in a massive HeroicBSOD an AngstComa after being caught inside Noelle (which, as a side effect, caused flashbacks to worse versions of all his most traumatic memories). Skitter and Aisha sit down with him and get him moving so Aisha can take him home.
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* Considering how dark Worm is and how many broken families Taylor knows, her reuniting Dinah with her parents was very sweet. Especially because Dinah was absolutely convinced that her parents wouldn't want her back. No matter what anyone else says about her she was a true hero during that moment.
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* Considering how dark Worm is and how many broken families Taylor knows, her reuniting Dinah with her parents was very sweet. Especially because Dinah was absolutely convinced that her parents wouldn't want her back. No matter what anyone else says about her she was a true hero during that moment.moment.
* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/02/23/scourge-19-2/ 19.2]], Grue is stuck in a massive HeroicBSOD after being caught inside Noelle (which, as a side effect, caused flashbacks to worse versions of all his most traumatic memories). Skitter and Aisha sit down with him and get him moving so Aisha can take him home.
* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/02/23/scourge-19-2/ 19.2]], Grue is stuck in a massive HeroicBSOD after being caught inside Noelle (which, as a side effect, caused flashbacks to worse versions of all his most traumatic memories). Skitter and Aisha sit down with him and get him moving so Aisha can take him home.
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** The only reason that Taylor worked so hard and stayed [[spoiler:with Coil, was to rescue Dinah. After finally killing him, she finally comes face to face with her. She apologizes for taking so long to rescue her. Dinah was held captive for months, drugged out of mind, and her power abused causing her terrible pain. But she kept up hope that she would be rescued because her power showed that there was always a chance of escaping due to Taylor. She runs to her rescuer, and hugs her as hard as she can. ]]
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** The only reason that Taylor worked so hard and stayed [[spoiler:with Coil, was to rescue Dinah. After finally killing him, she finally comes face to face with her. She apologizes for taking so long to rescue her. Dinah was held captive for months, drugged out of mind, and her power abused causing her terrible pain. But she kept up hope that she would be rescued because her power showed that there was always a chance of escaping due to Taylor. She runs to her rescuer, and hugs her as hard as she can. ]]]]
*Considering how dark Worm is and how many broken families Taylor knows, her reuniting Dinah with her parents was very sweet. Especially because Dinah was absolutely convinced that her parents wouldn't want her back. No matter what anyone else says about her she was a true hero during that moment.
*Considering how dark Worm is and how many broken families Taylor knows, her reuniting Dinah with her parents was very sweet. Especially because Dinah was absolutely convinced that her parents wouldn't want her back. No matter what anyone else says about her she was a true hero during that moment.
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* In the 15th interlude, Brian is suffering from symptoms of PTSD from his captivity. He can't sleep, has vivid flashbacks, and is hitting a body bag till his hands are bloody. Taylor comes by to cook him dinner and offers to let him practice his power on her. She offers words of comfort and promises to be there for him as they share a moment in the darkness. They share their first kiss, and snuggle up together on the couch. Just before he falls asleep, Brian thinks to himself that it feels like he can finally breathe.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/10/25/interlude-15-donation-bonus-2/ the 15th interlude, second part-15 interlude,]] Brian is suffering from symptoms of PTSD from his captivity. He can't sleep, has vivid flashbacks, and is hitting a body bag till his hands are bloody. Taylor comes by to cook him dinner and offers to let him practice his power on her. She offers words of comfort and promises to be there for him as they share a moment in the darkness. They share their first kiss, and snuggle up together on the couch. Just before he falls asleep, Brian thinks to himself that it feels like he can finally breathe.
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** Not to mention, in case you missed it: Aisha set the whole thing up -- first, by asking Taylor to come over; second, by making sure Brian stayed in the base long enough for Taylor to arrive; and third, by getting out of the way so they could be alone together.
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* [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2011/12/10/interlude-5/ Interlude 5]]. Mercenaries, yes; villains, yes; but Faultline's team feels like a group of people who really care about each other and want to help each other succeed and be happy.
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* Pretty much defines Defiant [[spoiler:aka Armsmaster]] and Dragon's admittedly [[StalkerWithACrush unconventional]] Transhumanist [[SickeninglySweethearts relationship]]. The chapter in which it is revealed manages to be heart-warming despite containing liberal doses of the [[NightmareFuel Ni]][[CompleteMonster ne]] attacking a hospital and targeting the [[WouldHurtAChild nursery]] first.
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* Pretty much defines Defiant [[spoiler:aka Armsmaster]] and Dragon's admittedly [[StalkerWithACrush unconventional]] Transhumanist [[SickeninglySweethearts relationship]]. The chapter in which it is revealed manages to be heart-warming despite containing liberal doses of the [[NightmareFuel Ni]][[CompleteMonster ne]] Nine attacking a hospital and targeting the [[WouldHurtAChild nursery]] first.
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* Pretty much defines Defiant [[spoiler:aka Armsmaster]] and Dragon's admittedly [[StalkerWithACrush unconventional]] Transhumanist [[SickeninglySweethearts relationship]]. The chapter in which it is revealed manages to be heart-warming despite containing liberal doses of the [[NightmareFuel Ni]][[CompleteMonster ne]] attacking a hospital and targeting the [[WouldHurtAChild nursery]] first.first.
* [[spoiler:After shooting Coil and riding back to their new base, ]] Bitch holds Taylor's hand to offer comfort and support. It was a quiet but very powerful moment considering Bitch's background, the drawbacks of her power, and their history together. It shows just how close they have become and how important she is to Bitch.
** The only reason that Taylor worked so hard and stayed [[spoiler:with Coil, was to rescue Dinah. After finally killing him, she finally comes face to face with her. She apologizes for taking so long to rescue her. Dinah was held captive for months, drugged out of mind, and her power abused causing her terrible pain. But she kept up hope that she would be rescued because her power showed that there was always a chance of escaping due to Taylor. She runs to her rescuer, and hugs her as hard as she can. ]]
* [[spoiler:After shooting Coil and riding back to their new base, ]] Bitch holds Taylor's hand to offer comfort and support. It was a quiet but very powerful moment considering Bitch's background, the drawbacks of her power, and their history together. It shows just how close they have become and how important she is to Bitch.
** The only reason that Taylor worked so hard and stayed [[spoiler:with Coil, was to rescue Dinah. After finally killing him, she finally comes face to face with her. She apologizes for taking so long to rescue her. Dinah was held captive for months, drugged out of mind, and her power abused causing her terrible pain. But she kept up hope that she would be rescued because her power showed that there was always a chance of escaping due to Taylor. She runs to her rescuer, and hugs her as hard as she can. ]]
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* In the 15th interlude, Brian is suffering from symptoms of PTSD from his captivity. He can't sleep, has vivid flashbacks, and is hitting a body bag till his hands are bloody. Taylor comes by to cook him dinner and offers to let him practice his power on her. She offers words of comfort and promises to be there for him as they share a moment in the darkness. They share their first kiss, and snuggle up together on the couch. Just before he falls asleep, Brian thinks to himself that it feels like he can finally breathe.
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* In the 15th interlude, Brian is suffering from symptoms of PTSD from his captivity. He can't sleep, has vivid flashbacks, and is hitting a body bag till his hands are bloody. Taylor comes by to cook him dinner and offers to let him practice his power on her. She offers words of comfort and promises to be there for him as they share a moment in the darkness. They share their first kiss, and snuggle up together on the couch. Just before he falls asleep, Brian thinks to himself that it feels like he can finally breathe.breathe.
* Pretty much defines Defiant [[spoiler:aka Armsmaster]] and Dragon's admittedly [[StalkerWithACrush unconventional]] Transhumanist [[SickeninglySweethearts relationship]]. The chapter in which it is revealed manages to be heart-warming despite containing liberal doses of the [[NightmareFuel Ni]][[CompleteMonster ne]] attacking a hospital and targeting the [[WouldHurtAChild nursery]] first.
* Pretty much defines Defiant [[spoiler:aka Armsmaster]] and Dragon's admittedly [[StalkerWithACrush unconventional]] Transhumanist [[SickeninglySweethearts relationship]]. The chapter in which it is revealed manages to be heart-warming despite containing liberal doses of the [[NightmareFuel Ni]][[CompleteMonster ne]] attacking a hospital and targeting the [[WouldHurtAChild nursery]] first.
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* In the 15th interlude, Bryan Brian is suffering from symptoms of PTSD from his captivity. He can't sleep, has vivid flashbacks, and is hitting a body bag till his hands are bloody. Taylor comes by to cook him dinner and offers to let him practice his power on her. She offers words of comfort and promises to be there for him as they share a moment in the darkness. They share their first kiss, and snuggle up together on the couch. Just before he falls asleep, Bryan Brian thinks to himself that it feels like he can finally breathe.
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Brian became a villain in order to get money and a respectable facade so he can take care of his younger sister and gain custody away from his extremely messed up mother.
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* In the 15th interlude, Bryan is suffering from symptoms of PTSD from his captivity. He can't sleep, has vivid flashbacks, and is hitting a body bag till his hands are bloody. Taylor comes by to cook him dinner and offers to let him practice his power on her. She offers words of comfort and promises to be there for him as they share a moment in the darkness. They share their first kiss, and snuggle up together on thecouch and just couch. Just before he falls asleep, Bryan thinks to himself that it feels like he can finally breathe.
* In the 15th interlude, Bryan is suffering from symptoms of PTSD from his captivity. He can't sleep, has vivid flashbacks, and is hitting a body bag till his hands are bloody. Taylor comes by to cook him dinner and offers to let him practice his power on her. She offers words of comfort and promises to be there for him as they share a moment in the darkness. They share their first kiss, and snuggle up together on the
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Brian became a villain in order to get money and a respectable facade so he can take care of his younger sister and gain custody away from his extremely messed up mother.
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In the 15th interlude, Bryan is suffering from symptoms of PTSD from his captivity. He can't sleep, has vivid flashbacks, and is hitting a body bag till his hands are bloody. Tyler comes by to cook him dinner and offers to let him practice his power on her. She offers words of comfort and promises to be there for him as they share a moment in the darkness. They snuggle up together on the couch and just before he falls asleep, Bryan thinks to himself that it feels like he can finally breathe.
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In the 15th interlude, Bryan is suffering from symptoms of PTSD from his captivity. He can't sleep, has vivid flashbacks, and is hitting a body bag till his hands are bloody. Tyler Taylor comes by to cook him dinner and offers to let him practice his power on her. She offers words of comfort and promises to be there for him as they share a moment in the darkness. They snuggle up together on the couch and just before he falls asleep, Bryan thinks to himself that it feels like he can finally breathe.
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In the 15th interlude, Bryan is suffering from symptoms of PTSD from his captivity. He can't sleep, has vivid flashbacks, and is hitting a body bag till his hands are bloody. Tyler comes by to cook him dinner and offers to let him practice his power on her. She offers words of comfort and promises to be there for him as they share a moment in the darkness. Bryan thanks her, and they share their first kiss together. Then they snuggle up together on the couch and just before he falls asleep, Bryan thinks to himself that it feels like he can finally breathe.
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In the 15th interlude, Bryan is suffering from symptoms of PTSD from his captivity. He can't sleep, has vivid flashbacks, and is hitting a body bag till his hands are bloody. Tyler comes by to cook him dinner and offers to let him practice his power on her. She offers words of comfort and promises to be there for him as they share a moment in the darkness. Bryan thanks her, and they share their first kiss together. Then they They snuggle up together on the couch and just before he falls asleep, Bryan thinks to himself that it feels like he can finally breathe.
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In the 15th interlude, Bryan is suffering from symptoms of PTSD from his captivity. He can't sleep, has vivid flashbacks, and is hitting a body bag till his hands are bloody. Tyler comes by to cook him dinner and offers to let him practice his power on her. She offers words of comfort and promises to be there for him as they share a moment in the darkness. Bryan thanks her, and they share their first kiss together. Then they snuggle up together on the couch and just before he falls asleep, Bryan thinks to himself that it feels like he can finally breathe.
