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* Meta example for Cornelius and Wilbur's story: the authors have confirmed that there will be a separate story where the pair get proper resolution for their traumas.
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* In ''Shard Times'', when Geumsaegi finds Jasper in an alley after a video of her losing it at Pink Diamond Resort goes viral, he treats her to lunch and offers to hook her up with a job at [=WaddleWorld=] because he sees a lot of himself in her and feels that she can change for the better like how he did.
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* In ''Shard Times'', when Geumsaegi finds Jasper in an alley after a video of her losing it at Pink Diamond Resort goes viral, he treats her to lunch and offers to hook her up with a job at [=WaddleWorld=] because he sees a lot of himself in her and feels that she can change for the better like how he did. Come ''Day Jobs'' and it's shown that not only did she take him up on it, but the two are rather friendly with each other and Jasper has mellowed out somewhat as well.
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** While her initial reaction to Dodger trying to swipe [[TragicKeepsake the pearls that are her last memento of her late brother]] is violent, after hearing a mental voice that sounds like said brother beseeching her to "look at him", Wilhelmina sees Dodger for what he is: a terrified child who's only after the pearls from desperation. She calms him down enough to get his story and then puts him in contact with Fagin, whose freedom he and the rest of the gang have been trying to buy (due to obviously being unaware Scrooge had saved Fagin from the Ark), after which she drags him open for dinner. Later, she offers the same safety to the rest of the gang when they come to rescue Dodger (and also Rita, who initially came alone, decided to stay and forgot to tell Einstein, Tito, Francis and Oliver this).
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** It's a small moment, but when Top Cat reports Warden Synder to Dibble, he almost calls him "dad". Considering how Dibble looked out for him ever since he was a kid being neglected by his parents, it's sweet that he sees him as a father figure.
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** It's a small moment, but when Top Cat reports Warden Synder to Dibble, he almost calls him "dad". Considering how Dibble looked out for him ever since he was a kid being neglected by his parents, it's sweet that he sees him as a father figure.figure.
* While Part 4 is among the bleaker stories, by reading between the lines, one can realize that Luz has been returned home and reunited with her mother, which, after all the trauma she endured, is the closest thing she's getting to a happy ending.
* While Part 4 is among the bleaker stories, by reading between the lines, one can realize that Luz has been returned home and reunited with her mother, which, after all the trauma she endured, is the closest thing she's getting to a happy ending.
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** Pepe assuring Mertle that, much like he did, she's just someone who made a mistake and is in no way a monster. Mertle, in response, hugs him.
** Lola's question to Rey? How she does her hair because Lola really liked it. Rey, for her part is flattered and once she shares her story, offers to do Lola's hair the same way.
** Lola's question to Rey? How she does her hair because Lola really liked it. Rey, for her part is flattered and once she shares her story, offers to do Lola's hair the same way.
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** Pepe assuring assures Mertle that, much like he did, she's just someone who made a mistake and is in no way a monster. Mertle, in response, hugs him.
**Lola's question to Rey? How Lola asks Rey how she does her hair because Lola she really liked likes it. Rey, for her part part, is flattered and once she shares her story, offers to do Lola's hair the same way. She also tells her that she's nothing like Darla Dimple since she didn't know what would happen to Lori and that she feels bad about lying.
** When Sasha tells Ginger and Nancy that she hurts herself because she thinks she's ugly, they tell her that she isn't, and even if she was, she doesn't deserve to be hurt just because of it. They advise that she tell a grownup about how she feels and accompany her when she goes up to talk to Baymax.
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** When Sasha tells Ginger and Nancy that she hurts herself because she thinks she's ugly, they tell her that she isn't, and even if she was, she doesn't deserve to be hurt just because of it. They advise that she tell a grownup about how she feels and accompany her when she goes up to talk to Baymax.
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* In "Cat Out of the Bag", after Massimo hears from Pinocchio, Mermando, and Huckleberry that the Coach was Alberto's father and he had tried to drown him for being too old, he promptly walks up to Bagheera and asks how he can adopt the boy.
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* In "Cat Out of the Bag", after Bag"
** After Massimo hears from Pinocchio, Mermando, and Huckleberry that the Coach was Alberto's father and he had tried to drown him for being too old, he promptly walks up to Bagheera and asks how he can adopt theboy.boy.
** It's a small moment, but when Top Cat reports Warden Synder to Dibble, he almost calls him "dad". Considering how Dibble looked out for him ever since he was a kid being neglected by his parents, it's sweet that he sees him as a father figure.
** After Massimo hears from Pinocchio, Mermando, and Huckleberry that the Coach was Alberto's father and he had tried to drown him for being too old, he promptly walks up to Bagheera and asks how he can adopt the
** It's a small moment, but when Top Cat reports Warden Synder to Dibble, he almost calls him "dad". Considering how Dibble looked out for him ever since he was a kid being neglected by his parents, it's sweet that he sees him as a father figure.
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* Noir, Peter Porker, Peni and Gwen are here [[RelatedInTheAdaptation part of Peter B's family]] and are almost immediately in his hospital room.
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* Noir, Peter Porker, Peni and Gwen are here [[RelatedInTheAdaptation part of Peter B's Miles' Peter's family]] and are almost immediately in his hospital room.
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** It doesn't happen until later, but when Malina discovers Kuzco's past after they walk past someone he thinks raped him while he was in the Ark, her first reaction is to offer to beat the guy up.
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What? Just because an AU is about RapeAsBackstory it can’t have cute and heartwarming moments?
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What? Just because an AU [[Fanfic/WithPearlAndRubyGlowing AU]] is about RapeAsBackstory it can’t have cute and heartwarming moments?moments?
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* In ''Shard Times'', when Geumsaegi finds Jasper in an alley after a video of her losing it at Pink Diamond Resort goes viral, he treats her to lunch and offers to hook her up with a job at [=WaddleWorld=] because he sees a lot of himself in her and feels that she can change for the better like how he did.
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* In ''Shard Times'', when Geumsaegi finds Jasper in an alley after a video of her losing it at Pink Diamond Resort goes viral, he treats her to lunch and offers to hook her up with a job at [=WaddleWorld=] because he sees a lot of himself in her and feels that she can change for the better like how he did.did.
* In "Cat Out of the Bag", after Massimo hears from Pinocchio, Mermando, and Huckleberry that the Coach was Alberto's father and he had tried to drown him for being too old, he promptly walks up to Bagheera and asks how he can adopt the boy.
* In "Cat Out of the Bag", after Massimo hears from Pinocchio, Mermando, and Huckleberry that the Coach was Alberto's father and he had tried to drown him for being too old, he promptly walks up to Bagheera and asks how he can adopt the boy.
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** It's also nice that in this universe, Kuzco has a loving living parent in his father, who put his son's need to stay in America until the people who enslaved him are completely taken care of over his own desire to bring his son home. He also ''completely'' trusts Pacha with Kuzco's safety after the above rescue.
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** It's also nice that in this universe, Kuzco has a loving living parent in his father, who put his son's need to stay in America until the people who enslaved trafficked him are completely taken care of over his own desire to bring his son home. He also ''completely'' trusts Pacha with Kuzco's safety after the above rescue.
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** When Edith proposes the idea that Agnes could be her daughter to Della, Della admits that she would be interested in building a relationship with her, but doesn't want to take her away from Edith or Gru.
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** When Edith proposes the idea that Agnes could be her daughter to Della, Della admits that she would be interested in building a relationship with her, but doesn't want to take her away from Edith or Gru.Gru.
* In ''Shard Times'', when Geumsaegi finds Jasper in an alley after a video of her losing it at Pink Diamond Resort goes viral, he treats her to lunch and offers to hook her up with a job at [=WaddleWorld=] because he sees a lot of himself in her and feels that she can change for the better like how he did.
* In ''Shard Times'', when Geumsaegi finds Jasper in an alley after a video of her losing it at Pink Diamond Resort goes viral, he treats her to lunch and offers to hook her up with a job at [=WaddleWorld=] because he sees a lot of himself in her and feels that she can change for the better like how he did.
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What? Just because an AU is filled with AdultFear and RapeAsBackstory it can’t have cute and heartwarming moments?
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What? Just because an AU is filled with AdultFear and about RapeAsBackstory it can’t have cute and heartwarming moments?
