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* When Geary calls Desjani to talk about the nightmares that he's having, it's made clear that she would've stayed up all night to comfort him if she had to.
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* When Geary calls Desjani to talk about the nightmares that he's having, it's made clear that she would've stayed up all night to comfort him if she had to.
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* When Geary calls Desjani to talk about the nightmares that he's having, it's made clear that she would've stayed up all night to comfort him if she had to.
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* When Geary calls Desjani to talk about the nightmares that he's having, it's made clear that she would've stayed up all night to comfort him if she had to.to.
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* When Geary calls Desjani to talk about the BadDreams that he's having, it's made clear that she would've stayed up all night to comfort him if she had to.
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* When Geary calls Desjani to talk about the BadDreams nightmares that he's having, it's made clear that she would've stayed up all night to comfort him if she had to.
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* The reason the Dancers are so insistent on going to Kansas on Old Earth? To return the perfectly preserved remains of an astronaut who participated in Project Long Jump, a long ago set of tests with prototype jumpdrives, and who died whilst still inside jumpspace.
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* The reason the Dancers are so insistent on going to Kansas on Old Earth? To return the perfectly preserved remains of an astronaut who participated in Project Long Jump, a long ago set of tests with prototype jumpdrives, and who died whilst still inside jumpspace.jumpspace.
* When Geary calls Desjani to talk about the BadDreams that he's having, it's made clear that she would've stayed up all night to comfort him if she had to.
* When Geary calls Desjani to talk about the BadDreams that he's having, it's made clear that she would've stayed up all night to comfort him if she had to.
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* When Benan finds out about Rione and Geary's affair the latter's first question is "Are you in danger?" Rione stares. The idea that Benan would EVER harm or threaten her is clearly so alien that she can barely process it.
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* The reason the Dancers are so insistent on going to Kansas on old earth? To return the perfectly preserved remains of an Astronaut who participated in Project Long Jump, the very first set of tests with prototype jumpdrives, and who died whilst still inside jumpspace.
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* The reason the Dancers are so insistent on going to Kansas on old earth? Old Earth? To return the perfectly preserved remains of an Astronaut astronaut who participated in Project Long Jump, the very first a long ago set of tests with prototype jumpdrives, and who died whilst still inside jumpspace.
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* The Reason the Dancers are so insistant on going to Kanas on old earth? to return the Perfectly preserved, undesercrated Remains of an Astronaught who Participated in Project Long Jump, literally the FIRST set of tests with prototype jumpdrive's, and died whilst still inside jumpspace.
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*The Reason the Dancers are so insistant on going to Kanas on old earth? to return the Perfectly preserved, undesercrated Remains of an Astronaught who Participated in Project Long Jump, literally the FIRST set of tests with prototype jumpdrive's, and died whilst still inside jumpspace.
*The Reason the Dancers are so insistant on going to Kanas on old earth? to return the Perfectly preserved, undesercrated Remains of an Astronaught who Participated in Project Long Jump, literally the FIRST set of tests with prototype jumpdrive's, and died whilst still inside jumpspace.
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* Geary explaining to Benin why he let Rione go:
--> "She didn't love me. She never loved me. The only man she loves enough to give everything for is you." -- Benin is reduced to tears.
--> "She didn't love me. She never loved me. The only man she loves enough to give everything for is you." -- Benin is reduced to tears.
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* Geary explaining to Benin Commander Benan why he let Rione go:
--> "She didn't love me. She never loved me. The only man she loves enough to give everything for is you."-- Benin --
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--> "She didn't love me. She never loved me. The only man she loves enough to give everything for is you."
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--> "She didn't love me. She never loved me. The only man she loves enough to give everything for is you."
" -- Benin is reduced to tears.
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-- Benin is reduced to tears.
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* Michael Geary, who's lived in the shadow of 'Black Jack's' legend all his life and is bitter about it, saying to the real John Geary; "Tell [my sister] I didn't hate you anymore."
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* Michael Geary, who's lived in the shadow of 'Black Jack's' legend all his life and is bitter about it, saying to the real John Geary; "Tell [my sister] I didn't hate you anymore.""
* Geary explaining to Benin why he let Rione go:
--> "She didn't love me. She never loved me. The only man she loves enough to give everything for is you."
Benin is reduced to tears.
* Geary explaining to Benin why he let Rione go:
--> "She didn't love me. She never loved me. The only man she loves enough to give everything for is you."
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* Michael Geary, who's lived in the shadow of 'Black Jack's' legend all his life and is bitter about it, saying to the real John Geary; "Tell [my sister] I didn't hate you anymore."
