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* In Chapter 22, [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-22-page-04 the conversation between Greg and Kili after]] [[spoiler:Kili has been turned male]].
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* In Chapter 22, [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-22-page-04 the conversation between Greg and Kili after]] [[spoiler:Kili Kili has been turned male]].male.
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** At the end, when [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-6-page-30 while Mori is getting some sleep after the excitement of the previous night.]]
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** At the end, when [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-6-page-30 while Mori is getting some sleep after the excitement of the previous night.]]
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* In Chapter 20, [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-20-page-37 a glimpse of Goro and Aki with their child, Hitomi.]]
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* In Chapter 20, [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-20-page-37 a glimpse of Goro and Aki with their child, Hitomi.]]]]
* In Chapter 22, [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-22-page-04 the conversation between Greg and Kili after]] [[spoiler:Kili has been turned male]].
* In Chapter 22, [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-22-page-04 the conversation between Greg and Kili after]] [[spoiler:Kili has been turned male]].
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** ...and then returns to fight the demon once more by ''[[RetCon making up]]'' [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/the-end-page-13 a whole history for herself]] [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-19-page-14 to replace what the demon stole]], and finally answering the ArmorPiercingQuestion that [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/the-end-page-08-bw the demon used to deliver its final blow:]] [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-19-page-15 "Why does Sarin love you?"]]
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** ...and then returns to fight the demon once more by ''[[RetCon making up]]'' [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/the-end-page-13 a whole history for herself]] [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-19-page-14 to replace what the demon stole]], and finally answering the ArmorPiercingQuestion that [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/the-end-page-08-bw the demon used to deliver its final blow:]] [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-19-page-15 "Why does Sarin love you?"]]you?"]]
* In Chapter 20, [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-20-page-37 a glimpse of Goro and Aki with their child, Hitomi.]]
* In Chapter 20, [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-20-page-37 a glimpse of Goro and Aki with their child, Hitomi.]]
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* In Chapter 17, we learn what Goro was doing [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-13-page-22 in the moments before she passed out unconscious at Tanica's roots:]] [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-17-page-20 writing Aki's name in the soil.]] Because she realized at that moment that [[NotAfraidToDie dying to prove she was a badass]] wasn't worth hurting [[WorthLivingFor the people who cared about her]].
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* In Chapter 17, we learn what Goro was doing [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-13-page-22 in the moments before she passed out unconscious at Tanica's roots:]] [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-17-page-20 writing Aki's name in the soil.]] Because she realized at that moment that [[NotAfraidToDie dying to prove she was a badass]] wasn't worth hurting [[WorthLivingFor the people who cared about her]].her]].
* In Chapter 19, after a demon tries to destroy Mori by [[LaserGuidedAmnesia asking her questions while stealing her memory of the answers]], thereby leaving her an empty husk:
** ...[[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/the-end-page-12 she gets rescued by someone she helped, but never knew:]] [[FromBeyondTheFourthWall one of Speedball's Patreon donors.]]
--->'''Speedball:''' By now you should have figured out that the demon that Mori's fighting isn't her worst enemy. It's MINE.
** ...and then returns to fight the demon once more by ''[[RetCon making up]]'' [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/the-end-page-13 a whole history for herself]] [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-19-page-14 to replace what the demon stole]], and finally answering the ArmorPiercingQuestion that [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/the-end-page-08-bw the demon used to deliver its final blow:]] [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-19-page-15 "Why does Sarin love you?"]]
* In Chapter 19, after a demon tries to destroy Mori by [[LaserGuidedAmnesia asking her questions while stealing her memory of the answers]], thereby leaving her an empty husk:
** ...[[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/the-end-page-12 she gets rescued by someone she helped, but never knew:]] [[FromBeyondTheFourthWall one of Speedball's Patreon donors.]]
--->'''Speedball:''' By now you should have figured out that the demon that Mori's fighting isn't her worst enemy. It's MINE.
** ...and then returns to fight the demon once more by ''[[RetCon making up]]'' [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/the-end-page-13 a whole history for herself]] [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-19-page-14 to replace what the demon stole]], and finally answering the ArmorPiercingQuestion that [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/the-end-page-08-bw the demon used to deliver its final blow:]] [[http://dragondoctors.dhscomix.com/archives/comic/ch-19-page-15 "Why does Sarin love you?"]]
