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* The scene where Jaune and Pyrrha rescue some survivors from Mistral's attack on the villages. The relief that they can live in peace is satisfying.
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* The scene where Jaune and Pyrrha rescue some survivors from Mistral's attack on the villages. The relief that they can live in peace is satisfying.satisfying.
* It's endearing seeing how far [[BigBrotherInstinct Hazel]] was willing to go in order to ensure that his little sister was able to have a life of her own and attend Beacon.
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* It's endearing seeing how far [[BigBrotherInstinct Hazel]] was willing to go in order to ensure that his little sister was able to have a life of her own and attend Beacon.
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* [[TrueCompanions The Hunters]] get one of these when they unanimously agree to escape the pressures of Vale, visit Jaune’s family in Ansel, and assist in relief efforts. After several chapters of tense interactions in the group, it’s sweet to see them looking out for each other.
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* [[TrueCompanions The Hunters]] get one of these when they unanimously agree to escape the pressures of Vale, visit Jaune’s family in Ansel, and assist in relief efforts. After several chapters of tense interactions in the group, it’s sweet to see them looking out for each other.other.
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* The scene where Jaune and Pyrrha rescue some survivors from Mistral's attack on the villages. The relief that they can live in peace is satisfying.
!!Book 7
* The scene where Jaune and Pyrrha rescue some survivors from Mistral's attack on the villages. The relief that they can live in peace is satisfying.
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-->[[GoOutWithASmile Cinder chuckled. Her smile spread, becoming more natural, more kind.]] [[TheParagon "Such a naïve fool. A naïve, honourable, beautiful fool.]] I was not as strong as you. I could not fight my destiny. [[WhatCouldHaveBeen Perhaps if I had… perhaps if I'd met you sooner. If I had not lost the hope I once held…"]]
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-->[[GoOutWithASmile Cinder chuckled. Her smile spread, becoming more natural, more kind.]] [[TheParagon "Such a naïve fool. A naïve, honourable, beautiful fool.]] I was not as strong as you. I could not fight my destiny. [[WhatCouldHaveBeen Perhaps if I had… perhaps if I'd met you sooner. If I had not lost the hope I once held…"]]held…"]]
* [[TrueCompanions The Hunters]] get one of these when they unanimously agree to escape the pressures of Vale, visit Jaune’s family in Ansel, and assist in relief efforts. After several chapters of tense interactions in the group, it’s sweet to see them looking out for each other.
* [[TrueCompanions The Hunters]] get one of these when they unanimously agree to escape the pressures of Vale, visit Jaune’s family in Ansel, and assist in relief efforts. After several chapters of tense interactions in the group, it’s sweet to see them looking out for each other.
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* Also doubling as a Tear Jerker; Jaune is prevented from killing Mistral's king, by means of Cinder TakingTheBullet. In her last moments, she tells Jaune that despite her failure to convince Mistral's Nobles to accept peace, she'll never do what others would have done in her place; summon Salem to fix it.
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* Also doubling as a Tear Jerker; Jaune is prevented from killing Mistral's king, by means of Cinder TakingTheBullet. In in her last final moments, she Cinder tells Jaune that that, despite her failure to convince Mistral's Nobles to accept peace, [[FaceDeathWithDignity she'll never do what so many others would have done do in her place; she won't summon Salem to fix it.Salem.]] Her LastWords are spent wondering what might have been had she met [[TheHero Jaune]] earlier.
-->[[GoOutWithASmile Cinder chuckled. Her smile spread, becoming more natural, more kind.]] [[TheParagon "Such a naïve fool. A naïve, honourable, beautiful fool.]] I was not as strong as you. I could not fight my destiny. [[WhatCouldHaveBeen Perhaps if I had… perhaps if I'd met you sooner. If I had not lost the hope I once held…"]]
-->[[GoOutWithASmile Cinder chuckled. Her smile spread, becoming more natural, more kind.]] [[TheParagon "Such a naïve fool. A naïve, honourable, beautiful fool.]] I was not as strong as you. I could not fight my destiny. [[WhatCouldHaveBeen Perhaps if I had… perhaps if I'd met you sooner. If I had not lost the hope I once held…"]]
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-->"Good night, brave Blacksmith."
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-->"Good night, brave Blacksmith.""
* Also doubling as a Tear Jerker; Jaune is prevented from killing Mistral's king, by means of Cinder TakingTheBullet. In her last moments, she tells Jaune that despite her failure to convince Mistral's Nobles to accept peace, she'll never do what others would have done in her place; summon Salem to fix it.
* Also doubling as a Tear Jerker; Jaune is prevented from killing Mistral's king, by means of Cinder TakingTheBullet. In her last moments, she tells Jaune that despite her failure to convince Mistral's Nobles to accept peace, she'll never do what others would have done in her place; summon Salem to fix it.
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* Jaune finally confronts Blake after [[spoiler:the attack on TRE]] [[UnresolvedSexualTension on the feelings they share even as she continues to deny there is anything between them.]] Once he's had enough talking he decides to [[BigDamnKiss show Blake how much he cares. She readily reciprocates.]]
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* Jaune finally confronts Blake after [[spoiler:the the attack on TRE]] TRE [[UnresolvedSexualTension on the feelings they share even as she continues to deny there is anything between them.]] Once he's had enough talking he decides to [[BigDamnKiss show Blake how much he cares. She readily reciprocates.]]
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* Even as [[spoiler:Jaune]] lies dying on the temple floor, all he can think about is how scared [[spoiler:Blake]] looks [[SorryThatImDying and apologize for putting her through this]] [[FaceDeathWithDignity before reassuring her and the rest of the group that he's content with his death and only wants what's best for them.]]
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* Even as [[spoiler:Jaune]] Jaune lies dying on the temple floor, all he can think about is how scared [[spoiler:Blake]] Blake looks [[SorryThatImDying and apologize for putting her through this]] [[FaceDeathWithDignity before reassuring her and the rest of the group that he's content with his death and only wants what's best for them.]]
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* While it definitely doubles as a Tear Jerker, Cinder’s remorse over her role in the betrayal of Vale definitely counts. After being shown numerous overly-cruel Mistal soldiers, and the self-proclaimed “God King” who orchestrated the whole thing, Cinder’s genuine sorrow at having to follow [[CharmPerson her liege’s]] orders is touching. She’s surprised and horrified to find out her King’s plan to wipe out undefended towns as the Army invaded only after it had already happened, and tries to give Jaune and the Hunter’s clemency and her personal protection in the battle. Her grief over the dying Jaune and well-wishes for him in the afterlife are sincerely tender.
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* While it definitely doubles as a Tear Jerker, Cinder’s remorse over her role in the betrayal of Vale definitely counts. After being shown numerous overly-cruel Mistal soldiers, and the self-proclaimed “God King” who orchestrated the whole thing, Cinder’s genuine sorrow at having to follow [[CharmPerson her liege’s]] orders is touching. She’s surprised and horrified to find out her King’s plan to wipe out undefended towns as the Army invaded only after it had already happened, and tries to give Jaune and the Hunter’s clemency and her personal protection in the battle. Her grief over the dying Jaune and well-wishes for him in the afterlife are sincerely tender.tender.
-->"If there is a life after this, it is my hope you come back as something better," Cinder said. "You, of all people, deserve to be a Hero. More than I."
-->Above us, Phoenix warbled mournfully.
-->Cinder's skin was warm, or perhaps it was I whose skin was cold. Her fingertips brushed over my eyes, closing them. I didn't have the strength to open them.
-->"Good night, brave Blacksmith."
-->"If there is a life after this, it is my hope you come back as something better," Cinder said. "You, of all people, deserve to be a Hero. More than I."
-->Above us, Phoenix warbled mournfully.
-->Cinder's skin was warm, or perhaps it was I whose skin was cold. Her fingertips brushed over my eyes, closing them. I didn't have the strength to open them.
-->"Good night, brave Blacksmith."
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-->"It's good to be back.""
* While it definitely doubles as a Tear Jerker, Cinder’s remorse over her role in the betrayal of Vale definitely counts. After being shown numerous overly-cruel Mistal soldiers, and the self-proclaimed “God King” who orchestrated the whole thing, Cinder’s genuine sorrow at having to follow [[CharmPerson her liege’s]] orders is touching. She’s surprised and horrified to find out her King’s plan to wipe out undefended towns as the Army invaded only after it had already happened, and tries to give Jaune and the Hunter’s clemency and her personal protection in the battle. Her grief over the dying Jaune and well-wishes for him in the afterlife are sincerely tender.
* While it definitely doubles as a Tear Jerker, Cinder’s remorse over her role in the betrayal of Vale definitely counts. After being shown numerous overly-cruel Mistal soldiers, and the self-proclaimed “God King” who orchestrated the whole thing, Cinder’s genuine sorrow at having to follow [[CharmPerson her liege’s]] orders is touching. She’s surprised and horrified to find out her King’s plan to wipe out undefended towns as the Army invaded only after it had already happened, and tries to give Jaune and the Hunter’s clemency and her personal protection in the battle. Her grief over the dying Jaune and well-wishes for him in the afterlife are sincerely tender.
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!!Book 1
* When Blake effortlessly defeats Cardin in her first practice match, the entire crowd goes silent [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer and not a single person claps for her as they did for the previous matches.]] Jaune is having ''none of that.''
-->I clapped my hands louder.
-->[...]She'd saved my life.
-->I wouldn't be where I was, I wouldn't have had this opportunity, if it wasn't for Blake stepping in to distract the Beowolf-and then to try and cover for me while I retreated. And I would be damned before I let her be humiliated on stage like that. She won... she deserved applause, even if I was the only person to think so.
-->Except that... [[TheParagon I wasn't.]]
* Crosses over with SugarWiki/FunnyMoments, but when Jaune sees Blake outside of the shared dormitory with a packed bag and she says that she is leaving, [[RousingSpeech he launches into an impassioned speech about how the opinions of her detractors don't matter and she is the only one who can decide how her life is lived...]] until an amused and touched Blake clarifies that she is just leaving the shared dorms. She was moving into her own room.
!!Book 2
* After Kaedin divulges some of the information on Weiss' passive to Jaune and states that she may have never acquired a Sentinel if she had stayed in Atlas, Jaune assures him that Weiss doesn't need one.
-->"She doesn't need a Sentinel," I repeated. [[TrueCompanions "Whether as a friend or someone to protect her. Weiss has a Guild. We protect our own."]]
* After assisting in relief efforts for the buried Fang village, Jaune ruminates to Ruby on his shortcomings as a leader and she assures him that ''he'' is the person everyone in the guild trusts with the position.
-->"We trust you because you'd do the same for us," she whispered. "If we were in trouble and something was going wrong, [[{{Determinator}} you'd do something that isn't even humanly possible to try and save us.]] That's why we follow you."
!!Book 3
* [[{{Conman}} Torchwick]] pulls another one over the guild by putting them in debt to contractors hired to work on their hall. He even managed to fake Jaune's signature on the official documents and the head workman identifies Jaune as the person who authorized the repairs [[GuileHero and not even he can talk his way out of this.]] [[BigDamnHeroes Until...]]
-->[[SixthRanger "You once said if I ever changed my mind about joining, your doors would be open. Does that still hold true?"]]
* Jaune finally confronts Blake after [[spoiler:the attack on TRE]] [[UnresolvedSexualTension on the feelings they share even as she continues to deny there is anything between them.]] Once he's had enough talking he decides to [[BigDamnKiss show Blake how much he cares. She readily reciprocates.]]
!!Book 4
* Even as [[spoiler:Jaune]] lies dying on the temple floor, all he can think about is how scared [[spoiler:Blake]] looks [[SorryThatImDying and apologize for putting her through this]] [[FaceDeathWithDignity before reassuring her and the rest of the group that he's content with his death and only wants what's best for them.]]
* Basically all of Beacon's end-of-year festival. [[WhenSheSmiles All]] [[HeroicVow of]] [[TheirFirstTime it.]]
!!Book 6
* Jaune reuniting with his family after over a year when he finally returns to Ansel definitely counts.
-->Just like that, the tension I'd felt since leaving Beacon slipped away. The fear of my family's reaction pushed aside, at least for now. The rejection, the pain, the anger at my own lies. All of it ceased to matter as I sat at a simple wooden table in a small dining room, on uncomfortable benches with my countryside bumpkin of a family.
-->I'd not thought I'd feel this way coming home, but I did. Despite all my attempts to leave, my desperate desire to be more than this, I finally felt at home. Content. I smiled back at them all, lifting my cup to meet theirs.
-->"It's good to be back."
* When Blake effortlessly defeats Cardin in her first practice match, the entire crowd goes silent [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer and not a single person claps for her as they did for the previous matches.]] Jaune is having ''none of that.''
-->I clapped my hands louder.
-->[...]She'd saved my life.
-->I wouldn't be where I was, I wouldn't have had this opportunity, if it wasn't for Blake stepping in to distract the Beowolf-and then to try and cover for me while I retreated. And I would be damned before I let her be humiliated on stage like that. She won... she deserved applause, even if I was the only person to think so.
-->Except that... [[TheParagon I wasn't.]]
* Crosses over with SugarWiki/FunnyMoments, but when Jaune sees Blake outside of the shared dormitory with a packed bag and she says that she is leaving, [[RousingSpeech he launches into an impassioned speech about how the opinions of her detractors don't matter and she is the only one who can decide how her life is lived...]] until an amused and touched Blake clarifies that she is just leaving the shared dorms. She was moving into her own room.
!!Book 2
* After Kaedin divulges some of the information on Weiss' passive to Jaune and states that she may have never acquired a Sentinel if she had stayed in Atlas, Jaune assures him that Weiss doesn't need one.
-->"She doesn't need a Sentinel," I repeated. [[TrueCompanions "Whether as a friend or someone to protect her. Weiss has a Guild. We protect our own."]]
* After assisting in relief efforts for the buried Fang village, Jaune ruminates to Ruby on his shortcomings as a leader and she assures him that ''he'' is the person everyone in the guild trusts with the position.
-->"We trust you because you'd do the same for us," she whispered. "If we were in trouble and something was going wrong, [[{{Determinator}} you'd do something that isn't even humanly possible to try and save us.]] That's why we follow you."
!!Book 3
* [[{{Conman}} Torchwick]] pulls another one over the guild by putting them in debt to contractors hired to work on their hall. He even managed to fake Jaune's signature on the official documents and the head workman identifies Jaune as the person who authorized the repairs [[GuileHero and not even he can talk his way out of this.]] [[BigDamnHeroes Until...]]
-->[[SixthRanger "You once said if I ever changed my mind about joining, your doors would be open. Does that still hold true?"]]
* Jaune finally confronts Blake after [[spoiler:the attack on TRE]] [[UnresolvedSexualTension on the feelings they share even as she continues to deny there is anything between them.]] Once he's had enough talking he decides to [[BigDamnKiss show Blake how much he cares. She readily reciprocates.]]
!!Book 4
* Even as [[spoiler:Jaune]] lies dying on the temple floor, all he can think about is how scared [[spoiler:Blake]] looks [[SorryThatImDying and apologize for putting her through this]] [[FaceDeathWithDignity before reassuring her and the rest of the group that he's content with his death and only wants what's best for them.]]
* Basically all of Beacon's end-of-year festival. [[WhenSheSmiles All]] [[HeroicVow of]] [[TheirFirstTime it.]]
!!Book 6
* Jaune reuniting with his family after over a year when he finally returns to Ansel definitely counts.
-->Just like that, the tension I'd felt since leaving Beacon slipped away. The fear of my family's reaction pushed aside, at least for now. The rejection, the pain, the anger at my own lies. All of it ceased to matter as I sat at a simple wooden table in a small dining room, on uncomfortable benches with my countryside bumpkin of a family.
-->I'd not thought I'd feel this way coming home, but I did. Despite all my attempts to leave, my desperate desire to be more than this, I finally felt at home. Content. I smiled back at them all, lifting my cup to meet theirs.
-->"It's good to be back."
