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* When Ann bombards Violet with a flurry of requests - reading a story, playing with dolls, hunting with bugs - Violet asks her to sort them "in order of priority".
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* When Ann bombards Violet with a flurry of requests - reading a story, playing with dolls, hunting with bugs - an unflappable Violet asks her to sort them "in order of priority".
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* Poor Benedict turns out to have sprained his ankle. Stylish though those high heels of his might be, [[RealityEnsues walking on them isn't without risk]].
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* When Ann bombards Violet with a flurry of requests - reading a story, playing with dolls, hunting with bugs - Violet asks her to sort them "in order of priority".
* Poor Benedict turns out to have sprained his ankle. Stylish though those high heels of his might be, [[RealityEnsues walking on them isn't without risk]].
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* When Ann bombards Violet with a flurry of requests - reading a story, playing with dolls, hunting with bugs - Violet asks her to sort them "in order of priority".
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* Leon the woman-hater's [[NotSoAboveItAll reaction]] to meeting Violet for the first time.
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* Leon the woman-hater's [[NotSoAboveItAll reaction]] to meeting Violet for the first time. And it just keeps rolling downhill from there...
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'''Violet''': "You you really think I will go along with anything, so long as you say it's a mission?"
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'''Violet''': "You "Do you really think I will go along with anything, so long as you say it's a mission?"
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* Violet trying her hands at cooking, after off-handed request from Oscar. She goes shopping for ingredients and ask shopkeeper what she needs to do with eggs ''after'' buying them... Cue [[DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength dirty kitchen]] and a dismal look from Oscar.
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* Violet trying her hands at cooking, cooking after an off-handed request from Oscar.the client. She goes shopping for ingredients and ask shopkeeper what she needs to do with eggs ''after'' buying them... Cue [[DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength dirty kitchen]] and a dismal look from Oscar.
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*Claudia trying to evade Cattleya become much funnier if you know his backstory in the novel beforehand.
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** “No! Don’t write that! I wasn’t reciting!”
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** “No! “[[VerbalBackspace No! Don’t write that! I wasn’t reciting!”reciting!]]”
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* What kind of a man who requested Auto Memories Dolls [[spoiler:''on the battlefield'']]? A [[spoiler:drunk one]].
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* What kind of a man who requested Auto Memories Dolls [[spoiler:''on the battlefield'']]? A [[spoiler:drunk one]].one]].
* From Chapter 11:
-->'''Cattleya''': "You should try this."\\
'''Violet''': "I am not hungry."\\
'''Cattleya''': "Well, you have to. It's a mission!"\\
'''Violet''': "You you really think I will go along with anything, so long as you say it's a mission?"
* From Chapter 11:
-->'''Cattleya''': "You should try this."\\
'''Violet''': "I am not hungry."\\
'''Cattleya''': "Well, you have to. It's a mission!"\\
'''Violet''': "You you really think I will go along with anything, so long as you say it's a mission?"
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** The same chapter also had Violet provide us with a rather uncommon comparison:
--> '''Violet''': "A lady or two does not truly qualify as 'heavy'. Compared to a tank, you are like a feather."\\
'''Chaser''': "What kind of comparison is that?"
--> '''Violet''': "A lady or two does not truly qualify as 'heavy'. Compared to a tank, you are like a feather."\\
'''Chaser''': "What kind of comparison is that?"
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* Violet trying her hands at cooking. cooking, after off-handed request from Oscar. She goes shopping for ingredients and ask shopkeeper what she needs to do with eggs ''after'' buying them... Cue [[DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength several broken eggs]] dirty kitchen]] and a dismal look from Oscar.
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* Violet trying her hands at cooking. Cue [[DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength several broken eggs eggs]] and a dismal look from Oscar.
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* The way [[Adorkable Leon]] ''destroys'' a loaf of bread as he [[spoiler:invites Violet to watch Alley Comet together]].
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* The way [[Adorkable [[{{Adorkable}} Leon]] ''destroys'' a loaf of bread as he [[spoiler:invites Violet to watch Alley Comet together]].
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*The way [[Adorkable Leon]] ''destroys'' a loaf of bread as he [[spoiler:invites Violet to watch Alley Comet together]].
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*Violet trying her hands at cooking. Cue several broken eggs and a dismal look from Oscar.
*The fact that Violet actually go through with Oscar's request to [[spoiler:walk on water]].
*The way [[Adorkable Leon]] ''destroys'' a loaf of bread as he [[spoiler:invites Violet to watch Alley Comet together]].
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*Violet trying her hands at cooking. Cue several broken eggs and a dismal look from Oscar.
*The fact that Violet actually go through with Oscar's request to [[spoiler:walk on water]].
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** God knows what compel them to go from sending DeathGlare at each other to sitting down for a cup of tea together at the end.
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** God knows what compel them to go from sending exchanging DeathGlare at each other to sitting down for a cup of tea together at the end.
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**Leon trying to one-up Violet's typing speed. ''One-sided'' passive-aggressive moment if there ever is one.
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*Iris trying to avoid people talking about her arms claiming it's because overworking.
*Iris trying to avoid people talking about her arms claiming it's because overworking.
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* Chalotte criticizes Violet for being utterly un-emotive. Violet's response is to stretch her own cheeks and deliberately makes funny face. It doesn't help.
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**"I'm more worried about your future than mine!"
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** [[{{Tsundere}} Chalotte]] regretting more recent letters that she [[spoiler:wrote without Violet's help]].
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** [[{{Tsundere}} Chalotte]] regretting more recent the letters that she eventually [[spoiler:wrote without Violet's help]].
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** The fact that it's [[spoiler:[[TheTease Cattleya working with Prince Damian]] on the other end. You can almost imagine the giggle both of them might have had]].
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** The fact that it's [[spoiler:[[TheTease Cattleya working with Prince Damian]] on the other end. You can almost imagine the giggle both of them might have had]].
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* The first meeting with the client, where Violet has to introduce herself twice because Chalotte would not get out of her highness' bed. The maid Alberta sends DeathGlare at a manservant in the room, who just looks away.
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* The first meeting with the client, where Violet has to introduce herself twice because Princess Chalotte would not get out of her highness' bed. bed despite [[OverlyLongGag Violet introducing herself twice]]. The maid Alberta sends DeathGlare at a manservant that was in the room, room the entire time, who just looks away.
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** [[Tsundere Chalotte]] regretting more recent letters that she [[spoiler:wrote without Violet's help]].
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** [[Tsundere [[{{Tsundere}} Chalotte]] regretting more recent letters that she [[spoiler:wrote without Violet's help]].
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* The Prince and the Princess eventually resort to ''flirting'' love letters, sending ''two entire nations'' into collective [[SickeninglySweethearts diabetes overload]]. Most egregious one had to be when the Prince claims that he isn't a great man himself:
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* The Prince and the Princess eventually resort to public ''flirting'' love letters, sending ''two entire nations'' into collective [[SickeninglySweethearts diabetes overload]]. Most egregious one had to be when the Prince claims that he isn't a great man himself:
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** Chalotte regretting more recent letters that she [[spoiler:wrote without Violet's help]].
** The fact that [[spoiler:Cattleya was working with Prince Damian makes this even funnier]].
** The fact that [[spoiler:Cattleya was working with Prince Damian makes this even funnier]].
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** Chalotte [[Tsundere Chalotte]] regretting more recent letters that she [[spoiler:wrote without Violet's help]].
** The fact that[[spoiler:Cattleya was it's [[spoiler:[[TheTease Cattleya working with Prince Damian makes this even funnier]].
Damian]] on the other end. You can almost imagine the giggle both of them might have had]].
** The fact that
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**The fact that [[spoiler:Cattleya was working with Prince Damian makes this even funnier]].
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* The Prince and the Princess eventually resort to ''flirting'' love letters, sending the ''two entire nation nations'' into collective [[SickeninglySweethearts diabetes overload]]. Most egregious one had to be when the Prince claims that he isn't a great man himself:
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* Where did a lowly army officer like Hodgins finds the funding for CH Postal? [[spoiler:He bet his entire fortune on [[BlackComedy his own side winning the Northeast-Southwest War]].]]
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* Where did a lowly army officer like Hodgins finds the funding for CH Postal? Postal, while he's doing his time in the army when there isn't even enough cigarettes to go around? [[spoiler:He bet his entire fortune on [[BlackComedy his own side winning the Northeast-Southwest War]].]]
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* Leon the woman-hater's [[NotSoAboveItAll reaction]] to meeting Violet for the first time..
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-->"Uwah, I feel like a parent watching my son grow up.”
** His co-workers' reaction:
-->"Uwah, I feel like a parent watching my son grow up.”
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* Leon the woman-hater's [[NotSoAboveItAll reaction]] to meeting Violet for the first time..
** His co-workers' reaction:
-->"Uwah,time.
-->'''Shahar co-worker''': "Uwah, I feel like a parent watching my son grow up.”
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-->"Uwah,
-->'''Shahar co-worker''': "Uwah, I feel like a parent watching my son grow up.”
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-->'''Prison Guard''': “[[TheGuardsMustBeCrazy Hey, what were the inspectors doing during her turn?]]”\\
-->(Violet removes more and more concealed weapons)\\
-->'''Violet''': "...The sole thing left is the fact that I myself am a living weapon, yet I cannot do my job if I am not allowed to pass, so is this all right?”
-->(Violet removes more and more concealed weapons)\\
-->'''Violet''': "...The sole thing left is the fact that I myself am a living weapon, yet I cannot do my job if I am not allowed to pass, so is this all right?”
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** Chalotte regretting what more recent letters that she wrote with less and less of [[spoiler:wrote without Violet's help.help]].
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%%*Leon the woman-hater's [[NotSoAboveItAll reaction]] to meeting Violet for the first time..
%%**His co-workers' reaction:
%%-->"Uwah, I feel like a parent watching my son grow up.”
%%**“No! Don’t write that! I wasn’t reciting!”
%%*During prison visit in Chapter 5, volume 1 when Violet reached the underground jail cell her client is located:
%%-->(Violet removes potential weapons from her luggage per staff's request)\\
%%-->'''Prison Guard''': “[[TheGuardsMustBeCrazy Hey, what were the inspectors doing during her turn?]]”\\
%%-->(Violet removes more and more concealed weapons)\\
%%-->'''Violet''': "...The sole thing left is the fact that I myself am a living weapon, yet I cannot do my job if I am not allowed to pass, so is this all right?”
%%*Where did Hodgins finds the funding to buy off CH Postal and starts his business from? He bet his entire fortune on [[BlackComedy his own side winning the Northeast-Southwest War]].
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*What kind of a man who requested Auto Memories Dolls [[spoiler:''on the battlefield'']]? A [[spoiler:drunk one]].
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* The first meeting with the client, where Violet has to introduce herself twice because Chalotte would not get out of her highness' bed. The maid Alberta sends DeathGlare at a manservant in the room, who just looks away.
* Chalotte criticizes Violet for being utterly un-emotive. Violet's response is to stretch her own cheeks and deliberately makes funny face. It doesn't help.
* Chalotte criticizes Violet for being utterly un-emotive. Violet's response is to stretch her own cheeks and deliberately makes funny face. It doesn't help.
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**Chalotte regretting what she wrote with less and less of Violet's help.
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* Princess and Prince's flirting love letters, sending the entire nation into collective [[SickeninglySweethearts diabetes overload]]. Most egregious one had to be when the Prince claims that he isn't a great man himself:
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* The Prince and the Princess and Prince's flirting eventually resort to ''flirting'' love letters, sending the entire nation into collective [[SickeninglySweethearts diabetes overload]]. Most egregious one had to be when the Prince claims that he isn't a great man himself: