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* Komura turns himself in to the police after getting saved from Mamoru by Aegis. When the arresting cop is filing out the paperwork, he misspells Komura's name, much to his chagrin.[[note]]Komura's first name is Eiichi, where "Eii" means sharp. "Don," which the cop writes, means dull.[[/note]]
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* Komura turns himself in to the police after getting saved from Mamoru by Aegis. When the arresting cop is filing out the paperwork, he misspells Komura's name, much to his chagrin.[[note]]Komura's first name is Eiichi, Eiichi (鋭一), where "Eii" "Ei" (鋭) means sharp. "Don," "Don" (鈍), which the cop writes, means dull.[[/note]]
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* Jesus shows up at the Trumps' abandoned warehouse driving a(n implied stolen) car to the showdown at the abandoned warehouse. Yes, Jesus took the wheel.
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** This results in a BrickJoke when Komura first meets the main cast afterward, saying that, had he stayed in jail any longer he really would have become a "Don-ichi."
* Jesus shows up at the Trumps' abandoned warehouse driving a(n implied to be stolen) car to the showdown at the abandoned warehouse. Yes, Jesus took the wheel.
* Jesus shows up at the Trumps' abandoned warehouse driving a(n implied to be stolen) car to the showdown at the abandoned warehouse. Yes, Jesus took the wheel.
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Dewicking Not So Different as it is now a disambig.
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* Whenever Genda shows he's NotSoDifferent from Mamoru, and that he's NotSoAboveItAll when it comes to retributive justice. Doubles up as HypocriticalHumor since Genda opposes the Element Network precisely for dealing retributive justice.
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* Whenever Genda shows he's NotSoDifferent not so different from Mamoru, and that he's NotSoAboveItAll when it comes to retributive justice. Doubles up as HypocriticalHumor since Genda opposes the Element Network precisely for dealing retributive justice.
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* In chapter 211, there's a funny exchange between Mamoru and Jesus that highlights how they're NotSoDifferent:
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* In chapter 211, there's a funny exchange between Mamoru and Jesus that highlights how they're NotSoDifferent:not so different:
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* From chapter 185:
** When Mamoru's group suspects Misalt is onto them, Wiseman doesn't agree:
--->'''Wiseman:''' With the information we've given them so far, the only thing they can conjecture about us is that we're idiots.
** Later, they outwit Misalt by [[TooCleverByHalf taking advantage of his cleverness]]. Misalt sees that Mamoru's group has cut off their own escape route with a rockslide and are sitting ducks at the top of the cliff, so he heads to their hiding spot... Only to arrive and find out they're nowhere in sight. Why? Because Mamoru's group simply made a U-turn, ''drove over the rocks'', and escaped.
** When Mamoru's group suspects Misalt is onto them, Wiseman doesn't agree:
--->'''Wiseman:''' With the information we've given them so far, the only thing they can conjecture about us is that we're idiots.
** Later, they outwit Misalt by [[TooCleverByHalf taking advantage of his cleverness]]. Misalt sees that Mamoru's group has cut off their own escape route with a rockslide and are sitting ducks at the top of the cliff, so he heads to their hiding spot... Only to arrive and find out they're nowhere in sight. Why? Because Mamoru's group simply made a U-turn, ''drove over the rocks'', and escaped.
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-->'''Mamoru:''' I don't want to hear any smack talk from the idiot who launched an assault on the 24 headquarters while in critical condition.
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-->'''Mamoru:''' I don't want to hear any smack talk from the idiot who launched an assault on the 24 headquarters while in critical condition.[[note]]''JESUS Sajin Kouro'', which is a sidequel to UDDUP's Aitou Academy arc, expands on what happened. Jesus was attacked and critically injured a day before the school festival. He shows up to the festival anyways, where he gets badly injured again with his old injuries reopening when the school is attacked by 24. In retaliation, he launches an assault on 24's base... where he gets [[MutilationConga shot several times in the back]] towards the end of it. All this happens over roughly 48 hours.[[/note]]
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* Komura turns himself in to the police after getting saved from Mamoru by Aegis. When the arresting cop is filing out the paperwork, this happens.
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* After going through the trouble of pretending to be "just a drunk foreigner", India drops every pretense of such after The Wall displays a show of force against the Plunderers. Genda, who was accompanying him, is beside himself.
-->'''Genda:''' ''(After hearing The Wall's name)'' Tch. Boring and commonplace name to give yourself. And now I find out you're perfectly fluent in Japanese.
* Komura turns himself in to the police after getting saved from Mamoru by Aegis. When the arresting cop is filing out the paperwork,this happens.he misspells Komura's name, much to his chagrin.[[note]]Komura's first name is Eiichi, where "Eii" means sharp. "Don," which the cop writes, means dull.[[/note]]
-->'''Genda:''' ''(After hearing The Wall's name)'' Tch. Boring and commonplace name to give yourself. And now I find out you're perfectly fluent in Japanese.
* Komura turns himself in to the police after getting saved from Mamoru by Aegis. When the arresting cop is filing out the paperwork,
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* In chapter 211, there's a funny exchange between Mamoru and Jesus:
-->'''Jesus:''' And you're going to challenge that monster messed up like this?...
-->'''Mamoru:''' I don't want to hear any smack talk from the idiot who launched an assault on the 24 headquarters while in critical condition.
-->'''Jesus:''' And you're going to challenge that monster messed up like this?...
-->'''Mamoru:''' I don't want to hear any smack talk from the idiot who launched an assault on the 24 headquarters while in critical condition.
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* Jesus shows up at the Trumps' abandoned warehouse driving a(n implied stolen) car to the showdown at the abandoned warehouse. Yes, Jesus took the wheel.
* After a series of intense, life-or-death battles both at Aitou Academy and an abandoned warehouse in one day, what's Jesus' response to all that? Drive up and tell the students to get in the car because they shouldn't be skipping school, all with a bored expression on his face.
** Earlier, Mamoru knocked Kaizer unconscious so he can't go TriggerHappy, then carries the much-larger Kaizer around on his shoulders like it's the most natural thing to do, and he's still carrying Kaizer when Jesus pulls up.
* Whenever Genda shows he's NotSoDifferent from Mamoru, and that he's NotSoAboveItAll when it comes to retributive justice. Doubles up as HypocriticalHumor since Genda opposes the Element Network precisely for dealing retributive justice.
-->'''Genda:''' ''(About Edge Turus, with a shit-eating grin on his face)'' Hey, a scumbag like him reaps what he sows.
* In chapter 211, there's a funny exchange between Mamoru andJesus:
Jesus that highlights how they're NotSoDifferent:
-->'''Jesus:''' And you're going to challenge that monster messed up likethis?...
this?
-->'''Mamoru:''' I don't want to hear any smack talk from the idiot who launched an assault on the 24 headquarters while in criticalcondition.condition.
* Edge Turus' HumiliationConga goes all the way up to the ''final chapter'', and it's reaffirmed that exactly 0 people give a single shit about his fate.
* After a series of intense, life-or-death battles both at Aitou Academy and an abandoned warehouse in one day, what's Jesus' response to all that? Drive up and tell the students to get in the car because they shouldn't be skipping school, all with a bored expression on his face.
** Earlier, Mamoru knocked Kaizer unconscious so he can't go TriggerHappy, then carries the much-larger Kaizer around on his shoulders like it's the most natural thing to do, and he's still carrying Kaizer when Jesus pulls up.
* Whenever Genda shows he's NotSoDifferent from Mamoru, and that he's NotSoAboveItAll when it comes to retributive justice. Doubles up as HypocriticalHumor since Genda opposes the Element Network precisely for dealing retributive justice.
-->'''Genda:''' ''(About Edge Turus, with a shit-eating grin on his face)'' Hey, a scumbag like him reaps what he sows.
* In chapter 211, there's a funny exchange between Mamoru and
-->'''Jesus:''' And you're going to challenge that monster messed up like
-->'''Mamoru:''' I don't want to hear any smack talk from the idiot who launched an assault on the 24 headquarters while in critical
* Edge Turus' HumiliationConga goes all the way up to the ''final chapter'', and it's reaffirmed that exactly 0 people give a single shit about his fate.
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* In chapter 109 when after Haruka learns of Mamoru's past and hugs him, Mamoru acts extremely confused and flustered, having no idea what is going on and after the hug ends complains that
-->'''Mamoru''' I don't get what's up... That girl ain't right.
-->'''Mamoru''' I don't get what's up... That girl ain't right.
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* In chapter 109 when after Haruka learns of Mamoru's past and hugs him, 211, there's a funny exchange between Mamoru acts extremely confused and flustered, having no idea what is Jesus:
-->'''Jesus:''' And you're goingon and after the hug ends complains that
-->'''Mamoru'''to challenge that monster messed up like this?...
-->'''Mamoru:''' I don'tget what's up... That girl ain't right.want to hear any smack talk from the idiot who launched an assault on the 24 headquarters while in critical condition.
-->'''Jesus:''' And you're going
-->'''Mamoru'''
-->'''Mamoru:''' I don't
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-->'''Komura''': Am I 'Don-Ichi'?! Don't be taught characters by a {{yakuza}}!
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-->'''Komura''': Am I 'Don-Ichi'?! Don't be taught characters by a {{yakuza}}!{{yakuza}}!
* In chapter 109 when after Haruka learns of Mamoru's past and hugs him, Mamoru acts extremely confused and flustered, having no idea what is going on and after the hug ends complains that
-->'''Mamoru''' I don't get what's up... That girl ain't right.
* In chapter 109 when after Haruka learns of Mamoru's past and hugs him, Mamoru acts extremely confused and flustered, having no idea what is going on and after the hug ends complains that
-->'''Mamoru''' I don't get what's up... That girl ain't right.
