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* While Hachiman is looking over the business card that the private detective gave him, he notes he can barely read the text on a count of most of the space being taken up by a picture of [[Manga/OnePiece Luffy]] and he grouses that [[Manga/DetectiveConan Conan]] would have been more appropriate.
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* While Hachiman is looking over the business card that the private detective gave him, he notes he can barely read the text on a count of most of the space being taken up by a picture of [[Manga/OnePiece Luffy]] and he grouses that [[Manga/DetectiveConan [[Manga/CaseClosed Conan]] would have been more appropriate.
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* Though it was overall a pretty depressing moment overall, when Hachiman first sees that Yukino is pregnant the first thing he says is, "[[MoodWhiplash So you've been pigging out on a lot of snacks while you were alone]]." Cue DeathGlare from Yukino.
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* Though it was overall a pretty depressing moment overall, when Hachiman first sees that Yukino is pregnant the first thing he says is, "[[MoodWhiplash So you've been pigging out on a lot of snacks while you were alone]]." Cue DeathGlare from Yukino.
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* Though it was overall a pretty depressing moment overall, when Hachiman first see’s that Yukino is pregnant the first thing he says is this, “[[MoodWhiplash So you’ve been pigging out on a lot of snacks while you were alone]].” Cue DeathGlare from Yukino.
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Even for a mostly humourless fic like this there are a few moments that make you chuckle. '''Spoilers unmarked'''.
* Hachiman lamenting the fact that Saika has unarguably grown past his DudeLooksLikeALady phase; he now has a beard and smokes.
* While Hachiman is looking over the business card that the private detective gave him, he notes he can barely read the text on a count of most of the space being taken up by a picture of [[OnePiece Luffy]] and he grouses that [[DetectiveConan Conan]] would have been more appropriate.
* Hachiman and pregnant Komachi. Or really a lot of the moments between Hachiman and Komachi count as this.
* Though it was overall a pretty depressing moment overall, when Hachiman first see’s that Yukino is pregnant the first thing he says is this, “[[MoodWhiplash So you’ve been pigging out on a lot of snacks while you were alone]].” Cue DeathGlare from Yukino.
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Even for a mostly humourless fic like this there are a few moments that make you chuckle. '''Spoilers unmarked'''.
* Hachiman lamenting the fact that Saika has unarguably grown past his DudeLooksLikeALady phase; he now has a beard and smokes.
* While Hachiman is looking over the business card that the private detective gave him, he notes he can barely read the text on a count of most of the space being taken up by a picture of [[OnePiece Luffy]] and he grouses that [[DetectiveConan Conan]] would have been more appropriate.
* Hachiman and pregnant Komachi. Or really a lot of the moments between Hachiman and Komachi count as this.
* Though it was overall a pretty depressing moment overall, when Hachiman first see’s that Yukino is pregnant the first thing he says is this, “[[MoodWhiplash So you’ve been pigging out on a lot of snacks while you were alone]].” Cue DeathGlare from Yukino.
