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* During a flight as Sanya's backup, you mess with your crew for hitting on your sister by scaring the hell out of them with low-speed, low-level flying, with a few snap rolls thrown in, when from out of nowhere a previously undetected Martian fighter, which had been attempting to line up a shot on you, stalls out and crashes behind you. MoodWhiplash for your crew at its finest.
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* During a flight as Sanya's backup, you mess with bouncing her by turning off your crew for hitting engines and roaring past her, then frantically trying to get them started again while Sean and Ian are bickering and Sanya is furiously pounding on your sister by scaring the hell out of cockpit, all completely unaware.
** You get themwith low-speed, low-level flying, with a few snap rolls thrown in, started somewhere in the area of ''300 feet'', and look up to notice that Sanya is crying her heart out over it, when from out of nowhere a previously undetected Martian fighter, Martian, which had been attempting to line up a shot on you, stalls out and out, crashes behind you. you and has to bail out of his fighter. MoodWhiplash for your crew at its finest.finest.
-->"That totally counts!"
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-->"That totally counts!"
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* A scene or two later has Maloney gets fed up and tries to shoot Young. Cue a bunch of heavily armed Marines, all of which got denied shore leave by Maloney himself. This causes him and his goons to retreat only to find Hellcow at the other end of the dock. Between the two hostile groups, Maloney and Co. end up swimming back.
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* A scene or two later has Maloney gets fed up and tries to shoot Young. Cue a bunch of heavily armed Marines, all of which got denied shore leave by Maloney himself. This causes him and his goons to retreat only to find Hellcow at the other end of the dock. Between the two hostile groups, Maloney and Co. end up swimming back.back.
* "He said 'You are a gnome!", and then I punched him in the face."
* "He said 'You are a gnome!", and then I punched him in the face."
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** Then you use your final gambit, [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections claiming your girlfriend is a witch]] (true, Minna totally is), and that Mack will have major problems if she gets involved. Mack just displays a picture in his wallet: of Georgette Lemare, his girlfriend. Also a witch.
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** Then you use your final gambit, [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections claiming your girlfriend is a witch]] (true, Minna totally is), and that Mack will have major problems if she gets involved. Mack just displays a picture in his wallet: of Georgette Lemare, his girlfriend. Also a witch.witch.
* A scene or two later has Maloney gets fed up and tries to shoot Young. Cue a bunch of heavily armed Marines, all of which got denied shore leave by Maloney himself. This causes him and his goons to retreat only to find Hellcow at the other end of the dock. Between the two hostile groups, Maloney and Co. end up swimming back.
* A scene or two later has Maloney gets fed up and tries to shoot Young. Cue a bunch of heavily armed Marines, all of which got denied shore leave by Maloney himself. This causes him and his goons to retreat only to find Hellcow at the other end of the dock. Between the two hostile groups, Maloney and Co. end up swimming back.
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** First, you claim the Medal of Honor as a reason. Mack calmly pulls his own Medal of Honor out, clearly unimpressed.
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** First, you claim the Medal of Honor as a reason. Mack calmly pulls his own Medal of Honor out, [[NoSell clearly unimpressed.unimpressed]].
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** And then taking a blow to the head and '''believing''' it. You start assigning sub-conscious areas to the Witches, (Minna is Self-Control, Mio is pragmatism etc.), and when she tries to stop you, you say "Why does my self-control get such an awesome rack?"
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** And then taking a blow to the head and '''believing''' it. You start assigning sub-conscious areas to the Witches, (Minna is Self-Control, Mio is pragmatism etc.), and when she Minna tries to stop you, you say "Why does my self-control get such an awesome rack?"rack?" Out loud. In front of EVERYBODY.
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* During a flight as Sanya's backup, you mess with your crew for hitting on your sister by scaring the hell out of them with low-speed, low-level flying, with a few snap rolls thrown in, when from out of nowhere a previously undetected Martian fighter, which had been attempting to line up a shot on you, stalls out and crashes behind you. MoodWhiplash for your crew at its finest.
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* During a flight as Sanya's backup, you mess with your crew for hitting on your sister by scaring the hell out of them with low-speed, low-level flying, with a few snap rolls thrown in, when from out of nowhere a previously undetected Martian fighter, which had been attempting to line up a shot on you, stalls out and crashes behind you. MoodWhiplash for your crew at its finest.finest.
* When Maloney attempts to arrest you onboard the ''USS California'', you appeal to Commander Nicholas "Mack" Mackintosh, XO of the ''California'', for protection.
** First, you claim the Medal of Honor as a reason. Mack calmly pulls his own Medal of Honor out, clearly unimpressed.
** Next, you try to claim you're a media darling.
-->'''Mack:''' "Annoying, isn't it? They follow you everywhere, 'oh Mr. War Hero with the dashing eyepatch and the gruff demeanor, why are you so humble?"
** Then you use your final gambit, [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections claiming your girlfriend is a witch]] (true, Minna totally is), and that Mack will have major problems if she gets involved. Mack just displays a picture in his wallet: of Georgette Lemare, his girlfriend. Also a witch.
* When Maloney attempts to arrest you onboard the ''USS California'', you appeal to Commander Nicholas "Mack" Mackintosh, XO of the ''California'', for protection.
** First, you claim the Medal of Honor as a reason. Mack calmly pulls his own Medal of Honor out, clearly unimpressed.
** Next, you try to claim you're a media darling.
-->'''Mack:''' "Annoying, isn't it? They follow you everywhere, 'oh Mr. War Hero with the dashing eyepatch and the gruff demeanor, why are you so humble?"
** Then you use your final gambit, [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections claiming your girlfriend is a witch]] (true, Minna totally is), and that Mack will have major problems if she gets involved. Mack just displays a picture in his wallet: of Georgette Lemare, his girlfriend. Also a witch.
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* During a flight as Sanya's backup, you mess with your crew by scaring the hell out of them with low-speed, low-level flying, with a few snap rolls thrown in, when from out of nowhere a previously unknown Martian fighter, which had been attempting to line up a shot on you, stalls out and crashes behind you. MoodWhiplash for your crew at its finest.
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* During a flight as Sanya's backup, you mess with your crew for hitting on your sister by scaring the hell out of them with low-speed, low-level flying, with a few snap rolls thrown in, when from out of nowhere a previously unknown undetected Martian fighter, which had been attempting to line up a shot on you, stalls out and crashes behind you. MoodWhiplash for your crew at its finest.
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** Lampshaded with a reader saying [[spoiler: "That's overkill, even for a Pillow fort!"]]
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** Lampshaded with a reader saying [[spoiler: "That's overkill, even for a Pillow fort!"]]fort!"]]
* During a flight as Sanya's backup, you mess with your crew by scaring the hell out of them with low-speed, low-level flying, with a few snap rolls thrown in, when from out of nowhere a previously unknown Martian fighter, which had been attempting to line up a shot on you, stalls out and crashes behind you. MoodWhiplash for your crew at its finest.
* During a flight as Sanya's backup, you mess with your crew by scaring the hell out of them with low-speed, low-level flying, with a few snap rolls thrown in, when from out of nowhere a previously unknown Martian fighter, which had been attempting to line up a shot on you, stalls out and crashes behind you. MoodWhiplash for your crew at its finest.
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** And then taking a blow to the head and believing it.
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** And then taking a blow to the head and believing it.'''believing''' it. You start assigning sub-conscious areas to the Witches, (Minna is Self-Control, Mio is pragmatism etc.), and when she tries to stop you, you say "Why does my self-control get such an awesome rack?"
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** Lampshaded with a reader saying [[spoiler: "That's overkill, even for a Pillow fort!"]]
* Right before you find [[spoiler:The Edmond Fitzgerald]] the MC is suffering from massive combat fatigue, adrenaline let down, is partially drunk and just got punched in the face by an angry, magic using Trude. You wake up, brain filled with fluff and, believing the witches are hallucinations, go on a rant about Epic-tits (Epictetus a Greek philosopher), start assigning sub-conscious areas to the Witches, (Minna is Self-Control, Mio is pragmatism etc.), and when she tries to stop you, you say "Why does my self-control get such an awesome rack?"
* Right before you find [[spoiler:The Edmond Fitzgerald]] the MC is suffering from massive combat fatigue, adrenaline let down, is partially drunk and just got punched in the face by an angry, magic using Trude. You wake up, brain filled with fluff and, believing the witches are hallucinations, go on a rant about Epic-tits (Epictetus a Greek philosopher), start assigning sub-conscious areas to the Witches, (Minna is Self-Control, Mio is pragmatism etc.), and when she tries to stop you, you say "Why does my self-control get such an awesome rack?"
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** Lampshaded with a reader saying [[spoiler: "That's overkill, even for a Pillow fort!"]]
* Right before you find [[spoiler:The Edmond Fitzgerald]] the MC is suffering from massive combat fatigue, adrenaline let down, is partially drunk and just got punched in the face by an angry, magic using Trude. You wake up, brain filled with fluff and, believing the witches are hallucinations, go on a rant about Epic-tits (Epictetus a Greek philosopher), start assigning sub-conscious areas to the Witches, (Minna is Self-Control, Mio is pragmatism etc.), and when she tries to stop you, you say "Why does my self-control get such an awesome rack?"fort!"]]
* Right before you find [[spoiler:The Edmond Fitzgerald]] the MC is suffering from massive combat fatigue, adrenaline let down, is partially drunk and just got punched in the face by an angry, magic using Trude. You wake up, brain filled with fluff and, believing the witches are hallucinations, go on a rant about Epic-tits (Epictetus a Greek philosopher), start assigning sub-conscious areas to the Witches, (Minna is Self-Control, Mio is pragmatism etc.), and when she tries to stop you, you say "Why does my self-control get such an awesome rack?"
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* Right before you find [[spoiler:The Edmond Fitzgerald]] the MC is suffering from massive combat fatigue, adrenaline let down, is partially drunk and just got punched in the face by an angry, magic using Trude. You wake up, brain filled with fluff and, believing the witches are hallucinations, go on a rant about Epic-tits (Epictetus a Greek philosopher)
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* Right before you find [[spoiler:The Edmond Fitzgerald]] the MC is suffering from massive combat fatigue, adrenaline let down, is partially drunk and just got punched in the face by an angry, magic using Trude. You wake up, brain filled with fluff and, believing the witches are hallucinations, go on a rant about Epic-tits (Epictetus a Greek philosopher)
philosopher)philosopher), start assigning sub-conscious areas to the Witches, (Minna is Self-Control, Mio is pragmatism etc.), and when she tries to stop you, you say "Why does my self-control get such an awesome rack?"
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** Lampshaded with a reader saying [[spoiler: "That's overkill, even for a Pillow fort!"]]
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** Lampshaded with a reader saying [[spoiler: "That's overkill, even for a Pillow fort!"]]fort!"]]
* Right before you find [[spoiler:The Edmond Fitzgerald]] the MC is suffering from massive combat fatigue, adrenaline let down, is partially drunk and just got punched in the face by an angry, magic using Trude. You wake up, brain filled with fluff and, believing the witches are hallucinations, go on a rant about Epic-tits (Epictetus a Greek philosopher)
philosopher)
* Right before you find [[spoiler:The Edmond Fitzgerald]] the MC is suffering from massive combat fatigue, adrenaline let down, is partially drunk and just got punched in the face by an angry, magic using Trude. You wake up, brain filled with fluff and, believing the witches are hallucinations, go on a rant about Epic-tits (Epictetus a Greek philosopher)
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* Fans making [[Runninggags references to pillow forts]] and Planefag's methods of responding to them. [[spoiler: The first involves one getting shredded by the widow and the second? [[thereisNokilllikeoverkill Blown up by a B-17 turned bomb.]]]]
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* Fans making [[Runninggags [[RunningGag references to pillow forts]] and Planefag's methods of responding to them. [[spoiler: The first involves one getting shredded by the widow and the second? [[thereisNokilllikeoverkill Blown [[ThereisNoKillLikeOverkill blown up by a B-17 turned bomb.]]]]
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* Fans making [[Runninggag references to pillow forts]] and Planefag's methods of responding to them. [[spoiler: The first involves one getting shredded by the widow and the second? [[thereisNokilllikeoverkill Blown up by a B-17 turned bomb.]]
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* Fans making [[Runninggag [[Runninggags references to pillow forts]] and Planefag's methods of responding to them. [[spoiler: The first involves one getting shredded by the widow and the second? [[thereisNokilllikeoverkill Blown up by a B-17 turned bomb.]]]]]]
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* Fans making [[Runnginggag references to pillow forts]] and Planefag's methods of responding to them. [[spoiler: The first involves one getting shredded by the widow and the second? [[Nokilllikeoverkill Blown up by a B-17 turned bomb.]]
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* Fans making [[Runnginggag [[Runninggag references to pillow forts]] and Planefag's methods of responding to them. [[spoiler: The first involves one getting shredded by the widow and the second? [[Nokilllikeoverkill [[thereisNokilllikeoverkill Blown up by a B-17 turned bomb.]]
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* [[ItMakesSenseInContext Neon Samurai]].
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* [[ItMakesSenseInContext Neon Samurai]].Samurai]].
* Fans making [[Runnginggag references to pillow forts]] and Planefag's methods of responding to them. [[spoiler: The first involves one getting shredded by the widow and the second? [[Nokilllikeoverkill Blown up by a B-17 turned bomb.]]
**Lampshaded with a reader saying [[spoiler: "That's overkill, even for a Pillow fort!"]]
* Fans making [[Runnginggag references to pillow forts]] and Planefag's methods of responding to them. [[spoiler: The first involves one getting shredded by the widow and the second? [[Nokilllikeoverkill Blown up by a B-17 turned bomb.]]
**Lampshaded with a reader saying [[spoiler: "That's overkill, even for a Pillow fort!"]]
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* Trolling the marines with Yoshika and Lucchini as your wingmates, complete with [[CoolSunglasses aviator shades]] and the obligatory [[CISMiami Horatio Caine]] reference.
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* Trolling the marines with Yoshika and Lucchini as your wingmates, complete with [[CoolSunglasses [[CoolShades aviator shades]] and the obligatory [[CISMiami [[CSIMiami Horatio Caine]] reference.
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* Contending with the Bounce Witch.
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* Contending with the Bounce Witch.Witch.
* Trolling the marines with Yoshika and Lucchini as your wingmates, complete with [[CoolSunglasses aviator shades]] and the obligatory [[CISMiami Horatio Caine]] reference.
-->"... hey, you're IJN. Navy," one of the Marines says, huffing as he hauls himself over the bannister. "What gives?"
-->Miyafuji pauses, looking like her old, uncertain self.
-->You make a glasses-donning gesture with your hand.
-->She shakily applies her aviators, and the moment the slip over her eyes, she seems to stand a little taller. "Well," Miyafuji says calmly, "I guess it takes one to bounce one."
* [[ItMakesSenseInContext Neon Samurai]].
* Trolling the marines with Yoshika and Lucchini as your wingmates, complete with [[CoolSunglasses aviator shades]] and the obligatory [[CISMiami Horatio Caine]] reference.
-->"... hey, you're IJN. Navy," one of the Marines says, huffing as he hauls himself over the bannister. "What gives?"
-->Miyafuji pauses, looking like her old, uncertain self.
-->You make a glasses-donning gesture with your hand.
-->She shakily applies her aviators, and the moment the slip over her eyes, she seems to stand a little taller. "Well," Miyafuji says calmly, "I guess it takes one to bounce one."
* [[ItMakesSenseInContext Neon Samurai]].
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* The false 'game over' statistics after a particularly near-death injury.
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* The false 'game over' statistics after a particularly near-death injury.injury.
* Contending with the Bounce Witch.
* Contending with the Bounce Witch.
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* The false 'game over' statistics after a particularly close call.near-death injury.
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* Anything involving [[spoiler: Hellcow]].
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* Anything involving [[spoiler: Hellcow]].Hellcow]].
* The false 'game over' statistics after a particularly close call.
* The false 'game over' statistics after a particularly close call.
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* Anything involvinginvolving [[spoiler: Hellcow]].
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* Anything involving [[spoilers]]Hellcow[[/spoilers]].
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* Anything involving [[spoilers]]Hellcow[[/spoilers]].involving
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* Anything involving [spoilers]Hellcow[/spoilers].
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* Anything involving [spoilers]Hellcow[/spoilers].[[spoilers]]Hellcow[[/spoilers]].
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* Anything involving [spoiler]Hellcow[/spoiler].
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* Anything involving [spoiler]Hellcow[/spoiler].[spoilers]Hellcow[/spoilers].
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** After some thought, you conclude that hitting a full-grown tree would have killed you. You must have hit a '''''sapling'''''.
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** After some thought, you conclude that hitting a full-grown tree would have killed you. You must have hit a '''''sapling'''''.'''''sapling'''''.
* Anything involving [spoiler]Hellcow[/spoiler].
* Anything involving [spoiler]Hellcow[/spoiler].
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** And then taking a blow to the head and believing it.
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** And then taking a blow to the head and believing it.it.
* Pissing Sean off with risky/close maneuvers, including excessive snap-rolling, barely clearing a cliff, and, during some particularly low flying, accidentally ''hitting a tree''.
** After some thought, you conclude that hitting a full-grown tree would have killed you. You must have hit a '''''sapling'''''.
* Pissing Sean off with risky/close maneuvers, including excessive snap-rolling, barely clearing a cliff, and, during some particularly low flying, accidentally ''hitting a tree''.
** After some thought, you conclude that hitting a full-grown tree would have killed you. You must have hit a '''''sapling'''''.
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* Insisting to Sean and Ian that Kathrine is your hallucination and that there's no such thing as witches.
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* Insisting to Sean Sean, Ian and Ian that Kathrine that the latter is your hallucination and that there's no such thing as witches.
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* Insisting to Sean and Ian that Kathrine is your hallucination and that there's no such thing as witches.witches.
** And then taking a blow to the head and believing it.
** And then taking a blow to the head and believing it.
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* Young orchestrating a fight between his superior officer and his bartender.
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* Young orchestrating Orchestrating a fight between his your superior officer and his bartender.your bartender.
* Insisting to Sean and Ian that Kathrine is your hallucination and that there's no such thing as witches.
* Insisting to Sean and Ian that Kathrine is your hallucination and that there's no such thing as witches.
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