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--> '''Crystal:''' Lightning, that was a ten minute descent! It shouldn't have been ''that'' long of a wait.\\
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--> '''[[DeadpanSnarker Percy]]:''' That theory is about as half-baked as the other two dozen you came up with this week.
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* [[LargeHam Hocus Pocus]] makes his grand, dramatic entrance to the group. Unfortunately, Lightning and Crystal aren't the only ones who haven't SeenItAll.
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* [[LargeHam Hocus Pocus]] makes his grand, dramatic entrance to the group. Unfortunately, Lightning and Crystal aren't are the only ones who haven't SeenItAll.
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* When the Grand Ruler is taking out a group of bandits, their leader is the only one left. He starts darting around at incredibly fast speeds before darting towards him...to which [[AntiClimax the Grand Ruler just grabs his head, leaving him flailing about]].
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* When the Grand Ruler is taking out a group of bandits, he takes them all out until their leader is the only one left. He starts darting around at incredibly fast speeds before darting towards him...to which [[AntiClimax the Grand Ruler just grabs his head, leaving him flailing about]].
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* After the fight against Nadir, Crystal ends up exhausted from using so much magic. After a few hours of rest at Mary Aide's hospital, she's up and raring to go.
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* After the fight against Nadir, Crystal ends up exhausted from using so much magic. After a few hours of rest at Mary Aide's hospital, she's up and raring already back to go.her perky self.
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* When Lightning and Crystal go to find Garter Variety, they approach a phoenix flower...which immediately com-busts in their faces. [[OhCrao The two proceed to panic]] until Garter shows up.
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* When Lightning and Crystal go to find Garter Variety, they approach a phoenix flower...which immediately com-busts in their faces. [[OhCrao [[OhCrap The two proceed to panic]] until Garter shows up.
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There. I had to resort to laughing at my own jokes for these examples. I hope you're happy. :P Seriously, the things I do for these trope pages.
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* Apparently, the ride from the Grand Ruler's palace to Diamond Village was too long a wait for Lightning Dawn.
--> '''Crystal:''' Lightning, that was a ten minute descent! It shouldn't have been ''that'' long of a wait.\\
'''Lightning:''' Easy for you to say! At least you can fly anywhere you want.
* When Lightning and Crystal go to find Garter Variety, they approach a phoenix flower...which immediately com-busts in their faces. [[OhCrao The two proceed to panic]] until Garter shows up.
* [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Colin]] discussing [[LukeIMightBeYourFather whether Lightning and the Grand Ruler could be related]].
--> '''[[DeadpanSnarker Percy]]:''' That theory is about as half-baked as the other two dozen you came up with this week.
* [[LargeHam Hocus Pocus]] makes his grand, dramatic entrance to the group. Unfortunately, Lightning and Crystal aren't the only ones who haven't SeenItAll.
* When the Grand Ruler is taking out a group of bandits, their leader is the only one left. He starts darting around at incredibly fast speeds before darting towards him...to which [[AntiClimax the Grand Ruler just grabs his head, leaving him flailing about]].
--> ''[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech If your mouth didn't give you away, then your lacking the element of surprise would have. Even a newborn foal would have been able to react fast enough.]]''
* After the fight against Nadir, Crystal ends up exhausted from using so much magic. After a few hours of rest at Mary Aide's hospital, she's up and raring to go.
--> '''Mary:''' She's been resting in the best bed we could find for her; she should be up and raring to go in a few more minutes.\\
''Crystal just flies right to Lightning.''\\
'''Crystal:''' So, when're we ready to go?\\
'''Mary:''' Make that a few more seconds.
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--> '''Crystal:''' Lightning, that was a ten minute descent! It shouldn't have been ''that'' long of a wait.\\
'''Lightning:''' Easy for you to say! At least you can fly anywhere you want.
* When Lightning and Crystal go to find Garter Variety, they approach a phoenix flower...which immediately com-busts in their faces. [[OhCrao The two proceed to panic]] until Garter shows up.
* [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Colin]] discussing [[LukeIMightBeYourFather whether Lightning and the Grand Ruler could be related]].
--> '''[[DeadpanSnarker Percy]]:''' That theory is about as half-baked as the other two dozen you came up with this week.
* [[LargeHam Hocus Pocus]] makes his grand, dramatic entrance to the group. Unfortunately, Lightning and Crystal aren't the only ones who haven't SeenItAll.
* When the Grand Ruler is taking out a group of bandits, their leader is the only one left. He starts darting around at incredibly fast speeds before darting towards him...to which [[AntiClimax the Grand Ruler just grabs his head, leaving him flailing about]].
--> ''[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech If your mouth didn't give you away, then your lacking the element of surprise would have. Even a newborn foal would have been able to react fast enough.]]''
* After the fight against Nadir, Crystal ends up exhausted from using so much magic. After a few hours of rest at Mary Aide's hospital, she's up and raring to go.
--> '''Mary:''' She's been resting in the best bed we could find for her; she should be up and raring to go in a few more minutes.\\
''Crystal just flies right to Lightning.''\\
'''Crystal:''' So, when're we ready to go?\\
'''Mary:''' Make that a few more seconds.
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** Legendbringer of [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony [=FoS=] fame]], on the other hand, responded quite favorably. Especially on the subject of [[GenderFlip Percy]].
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** Legendbringer of [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony [[Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship [=FoS=] fame]], on the other hand, responded quite favorably. Especially on the subject of [[GenderFlip Percy]].
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** Legendbringer of [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony [=FoS=] fame]], on the other hand, responded to episode 2 quite favorably. Especially on the subject of [[GenderFlip Percy]].
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** Legendbringer of [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony [=FoS=] fame]], on the other hand, responded to episode 2 quite favorably. Especially on the subject of [[GenderFlip Percy]].
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--> "Rhymey, is a mare...Rhymey is a...he's a...[[ActuallyPrettyFunny HAHAHA!!!!]]"
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--> "Rhymey, "[[TheScrappy Rhymey]], is a mare...Rhymey is a...he's a...[[ActuallyPrettyFunny HAHAHA!!!!]]"
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* When Mykan found out about this fic, he made a comment on it, stating, "People like you (Low-lives/mockers of the net) seem to attract me like metal to a magnet. I give you this one warning: don't push your luck." This is in spite of the fact that no such mocking took place. Cute, no?
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* When Mykan found out about this fic, he made a comment on it, stating, "People like you (Low-lives/mockers of the net) seem to attract me like metal to a magnet. I give you this one warning: don't push your luck." This is in spite of the fact that no such mocking took place.this is meant to make the characters ''more'' likable. Cute, no?
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** Legendbringer of [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony FoS fame]], on the other hand, responded to episode 2 quite favorably. Especially on the subject of [[GenderFlip Percy]].
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** Legendbringer of [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony FoS [=FoS=] fame]], on the other hand, responded to episode 2 quite favorably. Especially on the subject of [[GenderFlip Percy]].
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I'm glad Legend approves of my retooling of Rhymey! ^~^
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* When Mykan found out about this fic, he made a comment on it, stating, "People like you (Low-lives/mockers of the net) seem to attract me like metal to a magnet. I give you this one warning: don't push your luck." Cute, no?
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* When Mykan found out about this fic, he made a comment on it, stating, "People like you (Low-lives/mockers of the net) seem to attract me like metal to a magnet. I give you this one warning: don't push your luck." This is in spite of the fact that no such mocking took place. Cute, no?no?
** Legendbringer of [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony FoS fame]], on the other hand, responded to episode 2 quite favorably. Especially on the subject of [[GenderFlip Percy]].
--> "Rhymey, is a mare...Rhymey is a...he's a...[[ActuallyPrettyFunny HAHAHA!!!!]]"
** Legendbringer of [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony FoS fame]], on the other hand, responded to episode 2 quite favorably. Especially on the subject of [[GenderFlip Percy]].
--> "Rhymey, is a mare...Rhymey is a...he's a...[[ActuallyPrettyFunny HAHAHA!!!!]]"
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I am soooooooo nasty!
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*When Mykan found out about this fic, he made a comment on it, stating, "People like you (Low-lives/mockers of the net) seem to attract me like metal to a magnet. I give you this one warning: don't push your luck." Cute, no?
