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[''The other two give him blank looks. He goes back to sweeping.'']
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* It's not easy to spot, but after making it past the Friendship Express, Applejack looks back and dares the others to catch her. There's a shot of Twilight on the cart with an expression on her face that just screams "Hello? Pegasi pulling a cart! A train won't stop us!"
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* It's not easy to spot, but after making it past the Friendship Express, Express and being abandoned by the chauffeur stallions, Applejack looks back and dares the others to catch her. There's a shot of Twilight on the cart with an expression on her face that just screams "Hello? Pegasi pulling a cart! A train won't stop us!"
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* Twilight decides to play I Spy with the Mane Six, and spies a giant candy cane... to which [[TheCameo Scootaloo]] and another filly [[TongueOnTheFlagpole have their tongues frozen.]]
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* Twilight decides to play I Spy with the Mane Six, and spies a giant candy cane... [[FunnyBackgroundEvent to which which]] [[TheCameo Scootaloo]] and another filly [[TongueOnTheFlagpole have are stuck by their tongues frozen.tongues.]]
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* Twilight decides to play I Spy with the Mane Six, and spies a giant candy cane... to which [[TheCameo Scootaloo]] and another filly [[TongueOnTheFlagpole have their tongues frozen.]]
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* The way Rainbow Dash pulls Fluttershy to her side from off screen with one arm and proudly inflated chest when they need to save Rarity and Spike.
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* The way Rainbow Dash pulls a [[https://i.imgur.com/NJeJETg.png visibly terrified]] Fluttershy to her side from off screen with one arm and proudly inflated chest when they need to save Rarity and Spike.
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* Scootaloo's [[EpicFail attempt at bowling.]] She bucked the ball.
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* [[EpicFail Scootaloo's [[EpicFail attempt at bowling.]] She bucked the ball.
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* On hearing about the Cutie Pox, some of the ponies change into {{Hazmat suit}}s, cmplete with Radioactivity Cutie Mark.
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* On hearing about the Cutie Pox, some of the ponies change into {{Hazmat suit}}s, cmplete complete with Radioactivity Cutie Mark.
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** Her attempt at psychoanalyzing Rainbow Dash when she thinks Rainbow is angry at Applejack for some reason. Twilight puts her mane in a PrimAndProperBun, and makes Rainbow lie on a bench and talk about her "issues".
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** Her attempt at psychoanalyzing Rainbow Dash when she thinks Rainbow is angry at Applejack for some reason. Twilight puts her mane in a PrimAndProperBun, and makes Rainbow [[FreudianCouch lie on a bench bench]] and talk about her "issues".
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** '''Twilight: LOOK OUT! HERE COMES TOM!''' (''giant boulder crashes through window and nearly crushes Pinkie Pie'')
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** '''Twilight: LOOK Twilight: '''"LOOK OUT! HERE COMES TOM!''' (''giant TOM!"''' ''(giant boulder crashes through window and nearly crushes Pinkie Pie'')Pie)''
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* "I never thought this would happen... my friends... [[SuddenlyShouting HAVE TURNED INTO COMPLETE JERKS]]!!"
* Twilight's reaction to finding the elements and pretty much FORCING her friends to be the elements, and Spike to be Rainbow Dash, are hilarious.
-->'''Twilight''': Necklace, necklace, necklace, necklace, and... [[BuffySpeak big crown thingy]]! C'mon, everypony! Let's go!
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--->'''Spike''': But Twilight, aren't you missing somepony?\\
* Twilight's reaction to finding the elements and pretty much FORCING her friends to be the elements, and Spike to be Rainbow Dash, are hilarious.
-->'''Twilight''': Necklace, necklace, necklace, necklace, and... [[BuffySpeak big crown thingy]]! C'mon, everypony! Let's go!
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* "I Twilight's reaction to finding the elements, getting annoyed with everypony else not caring at all, and pretty much FORCING her friends to be the elements, and Spike to be Rainbow Dash, are hilarious.
-->'''Twilight''': I never thought this would happen... my friends... [[SuddenlyShouting HAVE TURNED INTO COMPLETEJERKS]]!!"
* Twilight's reaction to findingJERKS]]!! ''[slapping the elements and pretty much FORCING her friends to be necklaces onto the elements, and Spike to be Rainbow Dash, are hilarious.
-->'''Twilight''':others]'' Necklace, necklace, necklace, necklace, and... [[BuffySpeak big crown thingy]]! C'mon, everypony! Let's go!
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--->'''Spike''':go!\\
'''Spike''': But Twilight, aren't you missing somepony?\\
-->'''Twilight''': I never thought this would happen... my friends... [[SuddenlyShouting HAVE TURNED INTO COMPLETE
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'''Spike''': But Twilight, aren't you missing somepony?\\
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'''Twilight''': Too bad. You're Rainbow Dash. Now let's go defeat Discord so we never have to talk to each other again.\\
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'''Twilight''': Too bad. You're Rainbow Dash. Now let's go defeat Discord so we never have to talk to each other again.\\again!\\
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** '''LOOK OUT! HERE COMES TOM!''' (''giant boulder crashes through window and nearly crushes Pinkie Pie'')
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'''Rarity:''' I thought we agreed ''[[LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain never to speak of it again.]]''
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'''Rarity:''' I thought we agreed ''[[LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain never to speak of it that again.]]''
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* The group prepares to finish Discord off, Twilight gives a PreAssKickingOneLiner... and then Pinkie Pie tells everyone to wait as [[BrickJoke she drinks some more of the chocolate milk rain]]. Then growling at Discord.
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* The group prepares to finish Discord off, Twilight gives a PreAssKickingOneLiner... and then Pinkie Pie tells everyone to wait as [[BrickJoke she drinks some more of the chocolate milk rain]]. Then growling she prances back into the frame and growls at Discord.
*** So an adult male is showing interest in something intended for a younger demographic. [[PeripheryDemographic Sounds familiar...]]
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--> ''(cut to Rarity finding her diary in Sweetie Bell's bag)''
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-->'''Rarity''': Why, she's the most innocent, most lovely–
--> ''(cut to Rarity finding her diary in Sweetie Bell's bag)''
-->'''Rarity''': ''most '''EVIL''' pony in Equestria!''
-->'''Rarity''': Why, she's the most innocent, most lovely–
--> ''(cut to Rarity finding her diary in Sweetie Bell's bag)''
-->'''Rarity''': ''most '''EVIL''' pony in Equestria!''
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-->'''Luna:''' '''''OH, MOST WONDERFUL OF...''''' I mean... ''[in a soft, sweet voice:]'' oh, most wonderful of nights.
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** If one watches this scene on the Hub or Discovery Family, the TV-Y bug disappears just as Fluttershy covers herself with her hooves.
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** After the Cakes have run out of options, Pinkie finally gets her wish and Mr. Cake -- visibly resigned and concerned -- asks her whether would like babysit for them. Pinkie's reaction? She makes a big and happy grin, inhales loudly... and then she suddenly turns serious and sarcastically (and ''very cheekily'') says "I dunno. I'll have to check my schedule", before smiling smugly.
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* Rarity scolding Sweetie Belle for messing up one of her orders.
-->'''Rarity:''' Sweetie Belle, what ''am'' I going to do with you?\\
'''Sweetie Belle:''' [[MathematiciansAnswer Oh! We could paint together, we could ride bikes, play chess, sing a song, catch frogs, pillow fight]]—\\
'''Rarity:''' [[LampshadedTrope That's NOT what I meant]]!\\
'''Sweetie Belle:''' Oh.
-->'''Rarity:''' Sweetie Belle, what ''am'' I going to do with you?\\
'''Sweetie Belle:''' [[MathematiciansAnswer Oh! We could paint together, we could ride bikes, play chess, sing a song, catch frogs, pillow fight]]—\\
'''Rarity:''' [[LampshadedTrope That's NOT what I meant]]!\\
'''Sweetie Belle:''' Oh.
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* The ponies efforts to get the cake to the train, and Mr Cake fainting everytime it's in danger.
* When the other desserts are suddenly eaten, we have Pinkie Pie saying this "Now I have ''no'' idea [[BuffySpeak who-do-doned it]]!"
* "Hey, who turned out the moon?"
* When the other desserts are suddenly eaten, we have Pinkie Pie saying this "Now I have ''no'' idea [[BuffySpeak who-do-doned it]]!"
* "Hey, who turned out the moon?"
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* The ponies ponies' efforts to get the cake to the train, and Mr Cake fainting everytime {{fainting}} every time it's in danger.
danger. First they carry it normally, then Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy use ropes to support it, then Twilight puts a protective bubble around it, then Rarity holds up a safety net.
* When the other desserts are suddenly eaten, we have Pinkie Pie sayingthis this: "Now I have ''no'' idea [[BuffySpeak who-do-doned it]]!"
** Similarly, when Pinkie Pie says that they need to find out "whodunnit", Twilight corrects her: "Who ''did'' it."
* When the curtains close, Pinkie Pie says, "Hey, who turned out the moon?"
* When the other desserts are suddenly eaten, we have Pinkie Pie saying
** Similarly, when Pinkie Pie says that they need to find out "whodunnit", Twilight corrects her: "Who ''did'' it."
* When the curtains close, Pinkie Pie says, "Hey, who turned out the moon?"
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* Pinkie Pie tussles with the suspected cake thief. When she bumps into them, she says, "Are you okay, thief?"thief?".
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** Oh gag.
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** Oh gag.
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* While the remaining pegasi have returned to the ground after their mission, Fluttershy (clearly not used to going that fast) is still in the air, at a speed worthy of a Wonderbolt. Rainbow dash has to use a cloud to stop her.
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** Or maybe she's just awaiting a burst of laughter or some sort of applause for her ingenious idea... and she is disgruntled when she doesn't get one (well, on her side of the fourth wall at least).
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* Rarity's manically adorable {{Squee}} before going to the Wonderbolts derby.
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* When Rarity is designing her own outfit for the garden party, she asks Opalescence what she thinks of it. Opalescence's response is to ''[[GettingCrapPastTheRadar lick her crotch]]''.
** Which is also funny as in context, Rarity asked her a question and Opalescence didn't reply because she's a cat and doesn't speak English, but Rarity acts like she replied.
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* When Rarity is designing her own outfit for the garden party, she asks Opalescence what she thinks of it. Opalescence's response is to ''[[GettingCrapPastTheRadar lick her crotch]]''.
** Which is also funny as in context, Rarity asked her a question and Opalescence didn't reply because she's a cat and doesn't speak English,herself, but Rarity acts like she replied.
** Which is also funny as in context, Rarity asked her a question and Opalescence didn't reply because she's a cat and doesn't speak English,
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* Discord's EstablishingCharacterMoment at the entrance to the maze. Discord's dialogue in the castle had been genuinely intimidating and fairly creepy, really driving home that this was a villain greater than any the Mane 6 had yet faced. After making their wings and horns disappear, Discord dramatically appears with an evil laugh and a crack of thunder and lightning in the background...only to immediately drop the facade:
-->'''Discord:''' (''[[AffablyEvil sinister laughter turning to genuine mirth]]'') [[EvilIsPetty You should see the looks on your faces!]] ''Hilarious!''
** Meta example: judging by [[BigOMG the shocked exclamations]] of several fans in online reaction videos, this was the exact moment a number of fans realized that Discord was voiced by Creator/JohnDeLancie.[[note]]While Discord's voice had been heard in the previous scene, it was masked by a pretty significant echo effect; this is his first line where he speaks clearly.[[/note]]
-->'''Discord:''' (''[[AffablyEvil sinister laughter turning to genuine mirth]]'') [[EvilIsPetty You should see the looks on your faces!]] ''Hilarious!''
** Meta example: judging by [[BigOMG the shocked exclamations]] of several fans in online reaction videos, this was the exact moment a number of fans realized that Discord was voiced by Creator/JohnDeLancie.[[note]]While Discord's voice had been heard in the previous scene, it was masked by a pretty significant echo effect; this is his first line where he speaks clearly.[[/note]]
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** "Hi girrrrls" is always just as funny to me.as it is creepy.
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** "Hi girrrrls" is always funny to me.
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*Spike's luggage, for this long perilous quest, is just one large sandwich.
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* The new BigBad, Discord, is a wa-flying, talking continuous CrowningMomentOfFunny; when he's not being just a little bit scary.
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* Much of Applejack and Apple Bloom's interaction, when it isn't a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.
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* Much of Applejack and Apple Bloom's interaction, when it isn't a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming Moment|s}}.
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* Spike's dream about giving Rarity an ice cream house. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments And he made it just for her.]]