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-->"''Fuck,''" said Maggie, and Ilario knew he had it bad when his first reaction was not ''why is Maggie upset?'' or ''should we be swearing around a five year old?'', but rather ''oh, what a good idea''.
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* Bella has to spend some time away from Edward in order to [[spoiler: activate the tribe of Quielute to turn into giant wolves, thinking it's safer if he doesn't know]]. She doesn't take the separation well, and upon learning Laurent spends a lot of time away from ''his'' mate, she wonders, baffled, if he's activating a tribe of Inuits who turn into giant owls.
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* Bella has to spend some time away from Edward in order to [[spoiler: activate the tribe of Quielute Quileute to turn into giant wolves, thinking it's safer if he doesn't know]]. She doesn't take the separation well, and upon learning Laurent spends a lot of time away from ''his'' mate, she wonders, baffled, if he's activating a tribe of Inuits who turn into giant owls.
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* Bella has to spend some time away from Edward in order to [[spoiler: activate the tribe of Quielute to turn into giant wolves, thinking it's safer if he doesn't know]]. She doesn't take the separation well, and upon learning Laurent spends a lot of time away from ''his'' mate, she wonders, baffled, if he's activating a tribe of Inuits who turn into giant owls.
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** Related is Charlie's discomfort on the matter.
-->'''Charlie:''' [[spoiler: Most little girls who say they want to take over the world don't actually ''do'' it, you know.]]
-->'''Charlie:''' [[spoiler: Most little girls who say they want to take over the world don't actually ''do'' it, you know.]]
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* Bella forbids Elspeth from having children until Bella is at least forty-five (she makes it [[spoiler: ''a genuine royal decree,'' even]]). Elspeth thinks about it and points out that ''she'' had a child before her parents were forty-five.
--> "[[spoiler: I rule the world]] and I am allowed to be slightly hypocritical," my mom said loftily.
--> "[[spoiler: I rule the world]] and I am allowed to be slightly hypocritical," my mom said loftily.
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* A number of Bella's notes can be absolutely hilarious:
-->''Jasper messes with (physical) components of mood [[MemeticMutation (do not want)]]
-->''Jasper messes with (physical) components of mood [[MemeticMutation (do not want)]]
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** Not to mention the repeated references to painting nails whenever that strategy is brought up again.
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* ''Most Evil Person In The Car Award''
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-->"Look, whatever, just - I'm human. Period," said [[spoiler:Rachel]], folding her arms, and then she destroyed the borrowed clothes in a burst of fur.
-->"Look, whatever, just - I'm human. Period," said [[spoiler:Rachel]], folding her arms, and then she destroyed the borrowed clothes in a burst of fur.
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* Elspeth gets Seth to be present during [[spoiler:his parents' resurrection]] by [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome [[MundaneMadeAwesome chanting in Latin while applying makeup]]. In her very best [[EvilSoundsDeep ominous]] voice.
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* [[spoiler:The introduction to Phil and Renee]]
--> "Honey!"Phil [[spoiler:Phil]] yelled up the stairs. "There's two teenage girls, a teenage boy, and a man and a woman here with what they say is good news and no visible scriptures! They know our names! I'm a bit confused!"
--> "Honey!"
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*"Honey!" Phil yelled up the stairs. "There's two teenage girls, a teenage boy, and a man and a woman here with what they say is good news and no visible scriptures! They know our names! I'm a bit confused!"
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* [[http://luminous.elcenia.com/radiance/ch27.shtml When Cath and Ilario first meet and become mates. mates.]] [[PrecisionFStrike Maggie's reaction is priceless]].
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* Elspeth gets Seth to be present during [[spoiler:his parents' resurrection]] by [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome chanting in Latin while applying makeup]]. In her very best [[EvilIsDeep [[EvilSoundsDeep ominous]] voice.
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* Elspeth gets Seth to be present during [[spoiler:his parents' resurrection]] by promising to [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome chant chanting in Latin while applying makeup]].makeup]]. In her very best [[EvilIsDeep ominous]] voice.
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* [[DeadpanSnarker Bella]], describing eating animals.
-->Side effects include pretty eyes and less of an impulse to murder people.
-->Side effects include pretty eyes and less of an impulse to murder people.
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* Bella making Aro speechless for full four seconds [[spoiler: by revealing that she wanted Gianna to bear her children]]
* Bella making Aro speechless for full four seconds [[spoiler: by revealing that she wanted Gianna to bear her children]]
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[[DeadpanSnarker deadpan]].
-->If you could guarantee a continuous shield over anyone, then there would be absolutely nothing stopping you and Allirea from walking in the front door and assassinating everybody you didn't like and stopping to paint each other's fingernails halfwaythrough.through.
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-->If you could guarantee a continuous shield over anyone, then there would be absolutely nothing stopping you and Allirea from walking in the front door and assassinating everybody you didn't like and stopping to paint each other's fingernails halfway
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-->If you could guarantee a continuous shield over anyone, then there would be absolutely nothing stopping you and Allirea from walking in the front door and assassinating everybody you didn't like and stopping to paint each other's fingernails halfway through.
* Siobhan, to Bella, almost certainly deadpan.
-->If you could guarantee a continuous shield over anyone, then there would be absolutely nothing stopping you and Allirea from walking in the front door and assassinating everybody you didn't like and stopping to paint each other's fingernails halfway through.
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** Also Later:
-> "Ilario Trafeli," Maggie hollered, "get your pants on and be hospitable on behalf of Ireland"
** Also Later:
-> "Ilario Trafeli," Maggie hollered, "get your pants on and be hospitable on behalf of Ireland"
