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** "Okay lady, or whatever you are, I'm supposed to think you're a nun, but I know you're really a big ugly demon, so let's have it. (''Nun turns around, revealing a face that is [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily nothing but teeth]]'') Aha! Knew it! Big ugly demon! (''Nun stands and begins walking seductively towards him'') ...Kind of sexy, though, in a weird way. Huh."
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** "Okay lady, or "Alright, nice try lady. Or whatever you are, are. I'm supposed to think you're a nun, but I know you're really a big ugly demon, so let's have it. (''Nun turns around, revealing a face that is [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily nothing but teeth]]'') Aha! Knew it! Big ugly demon! (''Nun stands and begins walking seductively towards him'') ...Kind of sexy, though, in a weird way. Huh.Hmm."
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-->'''Eddie:''' You still upset about the banner?
-->'''Lars:''' Not anymore. I did 300 sit-ups just now to clear my mind.
-->'''Lars:''' Not anymore. I did 300 sit-ups just now to clear my mind.
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-->'''Worm:''' (''screams at Eddie'')\\
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--> '''Doviculus:''' Come to me once you grow a pair as big as your mother's.
--> ''(Doviculus leaves.)''
--> '''Eddie:''' [[ThatCameOutWrong I hope he was talking about horns.]]
--> ''(Doviculus leaves.)''
--> '''Eddie:''' [[ThatCameOutWrong I hope he was talking about horns.]]
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--> '''Guardian of Metal:''' ...
--> '''Eddie:''' (''raises eyebrow'')
--> '''Guardian of Metal:''' ...''WHAT IS IT?!''
--> '''Eddie:''' (''raises eyebrow'')
--> '''Guardian of Metal:''' ...''WHAT IS IT?!''
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--> Guardian of Metal {{sculpture|s}}: "Oh, no, who put this in here?", and when you purchase it, "I hope you're not embarrassed."
--> Ace of Hades paint job: "Oh, I hate puns."
--> Bolt Thrower: "Why don't you make someone else ride ''your'' lightning for a change?"
--> Drowned Ophelia sculpture: "Oh, the young ones and their make-up..."
--> [[VideoGame/GrimFandango Bone Wagon]] paint job: "[[ShoutOut That's]] [[VideoGame/GrimFandango grim]]."
--> Chrome paint job: "Shiiiny!"
--> Second armor augmentation: "Well ''someone's'' a little paranoid!"
--> Roman Candle combo: "It's like a pretty fountain that kills people." And when you purchase it. "Enjoy that one, you sick bastard."
--> Ace of Hades paint job: "Oh, I hate puns."
--> Bolt Thrower: "Why don't you make someone else ride ''your'' lightning for a change?"
--> Drowned Ophelia sculpture: "Oh, the young ones and their make-up..."
--> [[VideoGame/GrimFandango Bone Wagon]] paint job: "[[ShoutOut That's]] [[VideoGame/GrimFandango grim]]."
--> Chrome paint job: "Shiiiny!"
--> Second armor augmentation: "Well ''someone's'' a little paranoid!"
--> Roman Candle combo: "It's like a pretty fountain that kills people." And when you purchase it. "Enjoy that one, you sick bastard."
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-->'''Eddie''': Okay, I'll be back, covered in Metal God Love!
-->'''Guardian of Metal''': [[BrainBleach Oh god.]]
-->'''Guardian of Metal''': [[BrainBleach Oh god.]]
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--> '''Dad Bat:''' My ass is getting sunburned.
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--> '''Daughter Bat:''' Oooh, look at all the blood! (''flies into cave with brother'')
--> '''Mom Bat:''' (''kisses Eddie on the cheek'') Nice to have a man around sometimes.
--> '''Dad Bat:''' I HEARD THAT! Oh, by the way, sorry I took a shit on your head, earlier.
--> '''Eddie:''' What? When?
--> '''Dad Bat:''' Nothing.
--> '''Mom Bat:''' (''kisses Eddie on the cheek'') Nice to have a man around sometimes.
--> '''Dad Bat:''' I HEARD THAT! Oh, by the way, sorry I took a shit on your head, earlier.
--> '''Eddie:''' What? When?
--> '''Dad Bat:''' Nothing.
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--> Some bird you got there, Eddie.
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--> '''Eddie''': I TOLD YOU NOT TO CLIMB ON THAT, YOU STUPID MOTHER --\\
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-->'''Eddie''': #@&-kickers, unite!
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-->'''Baron:''' Tell me you're joking!
-->Tell him you're serious. [NOW] [LATER]
-->Tell him you're serious. [NOW] [LATER]
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-->'''Killmaster:''' But we don't go into her lair anymore... [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Lest she bite us in half, suck out our innards, and lay her eggs in our eye sockets.]]
-->'''Eddie:''' *Best facial [[OhCrap expression]] in the game part two*
-->'''Eddie:''' *Best facial [[OhCrap expression]] in the game part two*
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-->'''The Baron''': After all the fires I've set in my life, don't you think dying here is a little ironic?
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--> Guardian of Metal sculpture: "Oh, no, who put this in here?", and when you purchase it, "I hope you're not embarrassed."
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--> Guardian of Metal sculpture: {{sculpture|s}}: "Oh, no, who put this in here?", and when you purchase it, "I hope you're not embarrassed."
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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* "DECAPITATIOOOOOOON!" is extremely funny the first time. Its re-use after Eddie kills Doviculus ramps it UpToEleven by combining it with a SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome.
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* "DECAPITATIOOOOOOON!" is extremely funny the first time. Its re-use after Eddie kills Doviculus ramps it UpToEleven up to eleven by combining it with a SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome.
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* Eddie and Ophelia. [[MeadowRun Running across a meadow]] to a Music/{{Scorpions}} ballad. Staring dreamily into each other's eyes. Slaying demons with the world's goofiest smiles on their faces.
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* Eddie and Ophelia. [[MeadowRun Running across a meadow]] to a Music/{{Scorpions}} Music/{{Scorpions|Band}} ballad. Staring dreamily into each other's eyes. Slaying demons with the world's goofiest smiles on their faces.
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--> Roman Candle combo: "It's like a pretty fountain that kills people." And when you purchase it. "Enjoy that one, you sick bastard."