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-->[[spoiler: '''Dan:''' Beat it, fellas.]]
-->[[spoiler: (shoots a burst of gattling fire at the car they're hiding behind to spook the remaining two US Soldiers away)]]
-->[[spoiler: (shoots a burst of gattling fire at the car they're hiding behind to spook the remaining two US Soldiers away)]]
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-->'''Dan:''' Faye! Say something!
-->'''Faye:''' Dan...
-->'''Dan:''' ...?
-->'''Faye:''' ...stop yelling in my ear. [[OnlyAFleshWound It's just a shoulder hit]].
-->'''Faye:''' Dan...
-->'''Dan:''' ...?
-->'''Faye:''' ...stop yelling in my ear. [[OnlyAFleshWound It's just a shoulder hit]].
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-->'''Faye:''' Dan...
-->'''Dan:''' ...?
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'''Faye:''' Dan...\\
'''Dan:''' ...?\\
'''Faye:''' ...stop yelling in my ear. [[OnlyAFleshWound It's just a shoulder hit]].
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--> '''[[DrivesLikeCrazy Cain]]:''' Chance of collision was only 62%!
--> '''Charlie''': ''Only?!''
--> '''Charlie''': ''Only?!''
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'''Charlie''': ''Only?!''
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-->'''Bo''': "Tell your momma I love her".
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-->'''Bo''': "Tell Tell your momma I love her".her.
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-->'''Charlie''': "You know, it's funny, but... my briefing said this was supposed to be a ''covert'' operation.
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-->'''Charlie''': "You You know, it's funny, but... my briefing said this was supposed to be a ''covert'' operation.
** Later, when the crew meets up with the French contingent, they wonder what's taking them so long...before seeing police robot cars wildly chasing a van down a nearby highway.
-->'''[[OnlySaneMan Charlie]]''': Am I the only one who understands the meaning of the word "covert?"
-->'''[[OnlySaneMan Charlie]]''': Am I the only one who understands the meaning of the word "covert?"
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-->'''Dan:''' "Faye! Say something!"
-->'''Faye:''' "Dan..."
-->'''Dan:''' "...?"
-->'''Faye:''' "...stop yelling in my ear. [[OnlyAFleshWound It's just a shoulder hit]]."
-->'''Faye:''' "Dan..."
-->'''Dan:''' "...?"
-->'''Faye:''' "...stop yelling in my ear. [[OnlyAFleshWound It's just a shoulder hit]]."
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-->'''Dan:''' "Faye! Faye! Say something!"
something!
-->'''Faye:'''"Dan..."
-->'''Dan:''' "...?"
-->'''Faye:''' "...Dan...
-->'''Dan:''' ...?
-->'''Faye:''' ...stop yelling in my ear. [[OnlyAFleshWound It's just a shoulder hit]]."
-->'''Faye:'''
-->'''Dan:''' "...?"
-->'''Faye:''' "...
-->'''Dan:''' ...?
-->'''Faye:''' ...stop yelling in my ear. [[OnlyAFleshWound It's just a shoulder hit]].
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* When fighting the ''Spider'' early on, [[CognizantLimbs destroying all but one leg]] will reduce it to hopping around in a truly improbable fashion. [[TheDevTeamThinksOfEverything Yes, it has an entire new set of animations to account for that]]. You're ''supposed'' to shoot at the central drive unit.
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* When fighting the ''Spider'' early on, [[CognizantLimbs destroying all but one leg]] will reduce it to hopping around in a truly improbable fashion. [[TheDevTeamThinksOfEverything [[DevelopersForesight Yes, it has an entire new set of animations to account for that]]. You're ''supposed'' to shoot at the central drive unit.
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* After throwing down with the Iron Raptor when you're fighting through the sewers, Rachel plants a time bomb on a locked gate. She and Charlie casually walk away and hang off the side of a bridge to avoid the blast, but it takes Dan, Faye, and Bo a moment [[OhCrap to realize what's going on]] before they run for it.
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* The scene where Cain withdraws coolly.
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** If you choose both Rachel and Faye as your squad, they will accuse you of being perverted and you have the choice to agree or disagree with them, if you agree Rachel will give you credit for "being honest"
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** If you choose both Rachel and Faye as your squad, they will accuse you of being perverted and you have the choice to agree or disagree with them, if you agree Rachel will give you credit for "being honest"honest".
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** If you choose both Rachel and Faye as your squad, they will accuse you of being perverted and you have the choice to agree or disagree with them, if you agree Rachel will give you credit for "being honest"
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* Most of the van chase scene, especially this bit:
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* Most A good bit of the banter your team makes in the van chase scene, especially this bit:
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* The post-credits scene, in which [[spoiler:Dan catches up with Faye, guns down the robots of a US Task Force sent after Faye ''using a [[GatlingGood portable gatling]]'', and sends the two US soldiers in the Task Force running with a casual spray of fire at the car they're hiding behind.]]
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* The post-credits scene, in which [[spoiler:Dan catches up with Faye, guns down the robots of a US Task Force sent after Faye ''using a [[GatlingGood portable gatling]]'', and sends the two US soldiers in the Task Force running with a casual spray of fire at the car they're hiding behind.]]]]
* Most of the van chase scene, especially this bit:
--> '''[[DrivesLikeCrazy Cain]]:''' Chance of collision was only 62%!
--> '''Charlie''': ''Only?!''
* Most of the van chase scene, especially this bit:
--> '''[[DrivesLikeCrazy Cain]]:''' Chance of collision was only 62%!
--> '''Charlie''': ''Only?!''
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* When fighting the ''Spider'' early on, [[CognizantLimbs destroying all but one leg]] will reduce it to hopping around in a truly improbable fashion. [[TheDevTeamThinksOfEverything Yes, it has an entire new set of animations to account for that]]. You're ''supposed'' to shoot at the central drive unit.
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* When fighting the ''Spider'' early on, [[CognizantLimbs destroying all but one leg]] will reduce it to hopping around in a truly improbable fashion. [[TheDevTeamThinksOfEverything Yes, it has an entire new set of animations to account for that]]. You're ''supposed'' to shoot at the central drive unit.unit.
* The post-credits scene, in which [[spoiler:Dan catches up with Faye, guns down the robots of a US Task Force sent after Faye ''using a [[GatlingGood portable gatling]]'', and sends the two US soldiers in the Task Force running with a casual spray of fire at the car they're hiding behind.]]
* The post-credits scene, in which [[spoiler:Dan catches up with Faye, guns down the robots of a US Task Force sent after Faye ''using a [[GatlingGood portable gatling]]'', and sends the two US soldiers in the Task Force running with a casual spray of fire at the car they're hiding behind.]]
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* When fighting the ''Spider'' early on, [[CognizantLimbsdestroying all but one leg]] will reduce it to hopping around in a truly improbable fashion. [[TheDevTeamThinksOfEverything Yes, it has an entire new set of animations to account for that]]. You're ''supposed'' to shoot at the central drive unit.
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* When fighting the ''Spider'' early on, [[CognizantLimbsdestroying [[CognizantLimbs destroying all but one leg]] will reduce it to hopping around in a truly improbable fashion. [[TheDevTeamThinksOfEverything Yes, it has an entire new set of animations to account for that]]. You're ''supposed'' to shoot at the central drive unit.
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-->'''Faye:''' "...stop yelling in my ear. [[OnlyAFleshWound It's just a shoulder hit]]."
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-->'''Faye:''' "...stop yelling in my ear. [[OnlyAFleshWound It's just a shoulder hit]].""
* When fighting the ''Spider'' early on, [[CognizantLimbsdestroying all but one leg]] will reduce it to hopping around in a truly improbable fashion. [[TheDevTeamThinksOfEverything Yes, it has an entire new set of animations to account for that]]. You're ''supposed'' to shoot at the central drive unit.
* When fighting the ''Spider'' early on, [[CognizantLimbsdestroying all but one leg]] will reduce it to hopping around in a truly improbable fashion. [[TheDevTeamThinksOfEverything Yes, it has an entire new set of animations to account for that]]. You're ''supposed'' to shoot at the central drive unit.
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* The introduction to the train sequence. First is Cain's gallant rescue of Faye, which sends them crashing through the commuter train's skylight. After that, Dan jumps down and discovers that the train is fully booked with plenty of passengers. Dan attempts to calm them down stating that [[BlatantLies everything is fine and completely under control]]. They don't buy it and run away screaming.
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* The introduction to the train sequence. First is Cain's gallant rescue of Faye, which sends them crashing through the commuter train's skylight. After that, Dan jumps down and discovers that the train is fully booked with plenty of passengers. Dan attempts to calm them down stating that [[BlatantLies everything is fine and completely under control]]. They don't buy it and run away screaming.screaming.
** Later, when Faye gets shot on the train sequence, seemingly taking a bullet for Dan. It looks like an arbitrary KilledOffForReal moment for no good reason... but then;
-->'''Dan:''' "Faye! Say something!"
-->'''Faye:''' "Dan..."
-->'''Dan:''' "...?"
-->'''Faye:''' "...stop yelling in my ear. [[OnlyAFleshWound It's just a shoulder hit]]."
** Later, when Faye gets shot on the train sequence, seemingly taking a bullet for Dan. It looks like an arbitrary KilledOffForReal moment for no good reason... but then;
-->'''Dan:''' "Faye! Say something!"
-->'''Faye:''' "Dan..."
-->'''Dan:''' "...?"
-->'''Faye:''' "...stop yelling in my ear. [[OnlyAFleshWound It's just a shoulder hit]]."
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** And after that if you choose to take Bo and Faye with you, Bo will comments on Faye's... [[MaleGaze assets]].
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** And after that if you choose to take Bo and Faye with you, Bo will comments on Faye's... [[MaleGaze assets]].assets]].
* The introduction to the train sequence. First is Cain's gallant rescue of Faye, which sends them crashing through the commuter train's skylight. After that, Dan jumps down and discovers that the train is fully booked with plenty of passengers. Dan attempts to calm them down stating that [[BlatantLies everything is fine and completely under control]]. They don't buy it and run away screaming.
* The introduction to the train sequence. First is Cain's gallant rescue of Faye, which sends them crashing through the commuter train's skylight. After that, Dan jumps down and discovers that the train is fully booked with plenty of passengers. Dan attempts to calm them down stating that [[BlatantLies everything is fine and completely under control]]. They don't buy it and run away screaming.
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* Bo's line before he and Dan begin their black ops mission to Japan.
-->'''Bo''': "Tell your momma I love her".
-->'''Bo''': "Tell your momma I love her".
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** And after that if you choose to take Bo and Faye with you, Bo will comments on Fays'... [[MaleGaze assets]].
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** And after that if you choose to take Bo and Faye with you, Bo will comments on Fays'...Faye's... [[MaleGaze assets]].
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-->'''Charlie''': "You know, it's funny, but... my briefing said this was supposed to be a ''covert'' operation.
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-->'''Charlie''': "You know, it's funny, but... my briefing said this was supposed to be a ''covert'' operation.operation.
** And after that if you choose to take Bo and Faye with you, Bo will comments on Fays'... [[MaleGaze assets]].
** And after that if you choose to take Bo and Faye with you, Bo will comments on Fays'... [[MaleGaze assets]].
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* When running across a crumbling bridge, Dan makes the final jump and Bo barely catches him by one hand and struggles to pull him up to safety after which Dan suggests that Bo should work out more. Yes, the big hulking mountain of muscle that is Big Bo definitely needs to hit the gym more often.
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* When running across a crumbling bridge, Dan makes the final jump and Bo barely catches him by one hand and struggles to pull him up to safety after which Dan suggests that Bo should work out more. Yes, the big hulking mountain of muscle that is Big Bo definitely needs to hit the gym more often.often.
* In Chapter 2, if you take Rachel and Bo as your squad through the first section, Rachel will tell Bo he's tubby, to which Bo indignantly replies that his bulk is muscle, not fat.
* End of Chapter 1, after Dan lands in the public bathhouse and meets Charlie:
-->'''Charlie''': "You know, it's funny, but... my briefing said this was supposed to be a ''covert'' operation.
* In Chapter 2, if you take Rachel and Bo as your squad through the first section, Rachel will tell Bo he's tubby, to which Bo indignantly replies that his bulk is muscle, not fat.
* End of Chapter 1, after Dan lands in the public bathhouse and meets Charlie:
-->'''Charlie''': "You know, it's funny, but... my briefing said this was supposed to be a ''covert'' operation.
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