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* [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.html#1031 "Okay, y-yeah or just...r-run into danger instead."]]
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* When Gil is attempting to get Ava and Odin in the displacement center, Odin tries to make a plan with Ava to leave the planet only to catch her running off, leading to a deadpan [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.html#1031 "Okay, y-yeah or just...r-run into danger instead."]]
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* [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.html#0677 "That's your s-second wipeout today." "Third."]]
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* Ava's attempts to threaten Odin fall flat when she breaks the tree limb she's been hung up on, leading to this exchange: [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.html#0677 "That's your s-second wipeout today." "Third."]]
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* Maggie enlists Tuls's help in snagging her new crush of the week, gushing about how great he is. [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.html#0850 Skeptical Tuls is skeptical.]]
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* Maggie enlists Tuls's help in snagging her new crush of the week, gushing about how great he is.this time "it's for real!". She's known the guy for just about a day. [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.html#0850 Skeptical Tuls is skeptical.]]
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expect a lot of small similar edits to this while I try to add context to any Weblinks Are Not Examples bullet points I find. Added context to an example that was just a link.
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* [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.html#0850 Skeptical Tuls is skeptical.]]
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* Maggie enlists Tuls's help in snagging her new crush of the week, gushing about how great he is. [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.html#0850 Skeptical Tuls is skeptical.]]
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* Like Wrathia and Pedri, Tylotung takes GREAT issue with her host. How does she show this issue? She rants about their luxury and [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2657 throws away their keytars.]]
-->'''Erios, possessed by Tylotung:''' "GO! FOUL TREASURES! RETURN FROM WHENCE YOU CAME!! BACK TO THE PEOPLES!!"
-->'''Erios, possessed by Tylotung:''' "GO! FOUL TREASURES! RETURN FROM WHENCE YOU CAME!! BACK TO THE PEOPLES!!"
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Dewicking Not So Different as it is now a disambig.
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* Not funny in context but the HypocriticalHumor of Maggie calling Ava, [[IncompatibleOrientation a bisexual girl with a crush on her,]] pathetic while [[NotSoDifferent being a heterosexual girl trying unsubtly AND unsuccessfully to convince a homosexual boy to date her.]]
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* Not funny in context but the HypocriticalHumor of Maggie calling Ava, [[IncompatibleOrientation a bisexual girl with a crush on her,]] pathetic while [[NotSoDifferent being a heterosexual girl trying unsubtly AND unsuccessfully to convince a homosexual boy to date her.]]
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* [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2562 Wrathia]] [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2563 DESPERATELY wants]] [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2565 to see]] [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2566 Pedri]] [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2567 again]]. Featuring a confused Ava who could not even begin to care less.
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* [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2562 Wrathia]] [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2563 DESPERATELY wants]] [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2565 to see]] [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2566 Pedri]] [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2567 again]]. Featuring a confused Ava who could not even begin to care less.more.
