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It's not Les Yay if it's an intentional gay joke.
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** He later tells her she has to learn to calm down or she'll never find a husband. Regina is fine with that, since she can just [[LesYay marry Ayesha instead]].
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** He later tells her she has to learn to calm down or she'll never find a husband. Regina is fine with that, since she can just [[LesYay marry Ayesha instead]].instead.
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* Harry mistaking the stick you bring him from the factory as a toothpick and claiming the ancients were giants at least 10 meters tall.
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* After exploring the Glass Factory at Harry's request, Ayesha brings back a large glass rod with an interesting shape. Upon presenting it to Harry, he declares that because it has a pointed tip, it MUST have been a toothpick. When Ayesha points out that it's far too big to be used like that, Harry mistaking doubles down on his theory and concludes that the stick you bring him from the factory as a toothpick and claiming only possible explanation is that [[InsaneTrollLogic the ancients were giants at least 10 meters tall.a race of 10-meter tall giants]].
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--> '''Tanya:''' I'm sure anyone you show them (underwear) to will tell you they're beautiful.
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--> '''Tanya:''' I'm sure anyone you show them (underwear) [the underwear] to will tell you they're beautiful.
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* Ayesha's battle with Keithgriff is a fight you're supposed to lose. But it is possible to beat him. However, when you do... he still leaves with the prize you were fighting over.
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* Ayesha's battle with Keithgriff is a fight you're supposed to lose. But it It is possible to beat him. However, him, but when you do... he still leaves with the prize you were fighting over.
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* Marietta tries to convince Ayesha to help her strip Ernie down only for Mister Fred to walk in and completely misinterprets it.
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* Marietta tries to convince Ayesha to help her strip Ernie down down, only for Mister Fred to walk in and completely misinterprets misinterpret it.
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I don't think it counts as a Panty Shot if it isn't onscreen
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* Ayesha is talking with Tanya when a breeze is kicked up and she gets a panty shot (offscreen). Tanya's impressed by what she sees.
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* Ayesha is talking with Tanya when a breeze is kicked up and she gets a panty shot her underwear is exposed (offscreen). Tanya's impressed by what she sees.
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Trope def-only
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* Ayesha is talking with Tanya when a breeze is kicked up and she gets a PantyShot (offscreen). Tanya's impressed by what she sees.
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* Ayesha is talking with Tanya when a breeze is kicked up and she gets a PantyShot panty shot (offscreen). Tanya's impressed by what she sees.
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* Ayesha takes a sip of alcohol for her birthday and immediately gets hammered.
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* Ayesha takes a sip of alcohol for her birthday and immediately gets hammered.hammered.
* A presumably unintentional source of comedy springs from the use of the word "slag" for the metal-based monster class. It obviously comes from the term for waste materials produced during smelting/refining ore...but in UK slang, "slag" is a sexist insult: it means a promiscuous woman with no morals or class. So when Ayesha and Regina have long dialogues about how the slags are breeding too much, or are filling in all the holes at the mines, they sound like snobs condemning the lower classes.
* A presumably unintentional source of comedy springs from the use of the word "slag" for the metal-based monster class. It obviously comes from the term for waste materials produced during smelting/refining ore...but in UK slang, "slag" is a sexist insult: it means a promiscuous woman with no morals or class. So when Ayesha and Regina have long dialogues about how the slags are breeding too much, or are filling in all the holes at the mines, they sound like snobs condemning the lower classes.
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* Marietta tries to convince Ayesha to help her strip Ernie down only for Mister Fred to walk in and completely misinterprets it.
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* Marietta tries to convince Ayesha to help her strip Ernie down only for Mister Fred to walk in and completely misinterprets it.it.
* Ayesha takes a sip of alcohol for her birthday and immediately gets hammered.
* Ayesha takes a sip of alcohol for her birthday and immediately gets hammered.
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* When Odelia has a breakdown, Keithgriff has to repair her. When he mentions that it was a opportunity and he checked her over thoroughly, she can only hang her head in embarrassment over him seeing "everything" of her and tells him to take responsiblity by becoming her new Master.
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* When Odelia has a breakdown, Keithgriff has to repair her. When he mentions that it was a opportunity and he checked her over thoroughly, she can only hang her head in embarrassment over him seeing "everything" of her and tells him to take responsiblity by becoming her new Master.Master.
* Marietta tries to convince Ayesha to help her strip Ernie down only for Mister Fred to walk in and completely misinterprets it.
* Marietta tries to convince Ayesha to help her strip Ernie down only for Mister Fred to walk in and completely misinterprets it.
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* Initially, Ayesha was hesitant to help Kyle with his prank on Juris. Then he offered her free meals and desserts, causing her to answer subconsciously that she would.
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* Initially, Ayesha was hesitant to help Kyle with his prank on Juris. Then he offered her free meals and desserts, causing her to answer subconsciously that she would.would.
* When Odelia has a breakdown, Keithgriff has to repair her. When he mentions that it was a opportunity and he checked her over thoroughly, she can only hang her head in embarrassment over him seeing "everything" of her and tells him to take responsiblity by becoming her new Master.
* When Odelia has a breakdown, Keithgriff has to repair her. When he mentions that it was a opportunity and he checked her over thoroughly, she can only hang her head in embarrassment over him seeing "everything" of her and tells him to take responsiblity by becoming her new Master.
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** He hates it so much he ''flees'' if he hears Ernie's carriage coming for him.
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* Fred freezing up when he runs into Marietta.
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* Fred freezing up when he runs into Marietta.Marietta.
* Initially, Ayesha was hesitant to help Kyle with his prank on Juris. Then he offered her free meals and desserts, causing her to answer subconsciously that she would.
* Initially, Ayesha was hesitant to help Kyle with his prank on Juris. Then he offered her free meals and desserts, causing her to answer subconsciously that she would.
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* After Ernie "recruits" Ranun to do work for him, he begs Ayesha to help him since he equates it to suffering.
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* After Ernie "recruits" Ranun to do work for him, he begs Ayesha to help him since he equates it to suffering.suffering.
* Fred freezing up when he runs into Marietta.
* Fred freezing up when he runs into Marietta.
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* Ayesha tries to teach Linca how to cook. It goes poorly, to where Marion eventually feels the pain as she's forced to endure her cooking.
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* Ayesha tries to teach Linca how to cook. It goes poorly, to where Marion eventually feels the pain as she's forced to endure her cooking.cooking.
* After Ernie "recruits" Ranun to do work for him, he begs Ayesha to help him since he equates it to suffering.
* After Ernie "recruits" Ranun to do work for him, he begs Ayesha to help him since he equates it to suffering.
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--> '''Ayesha:''' ...He took it with him. But I won... That's cheating.
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--> '''Ayesha:''' ...He took it with him. But I won... That's cheating.cheating.
* Ayesha tries to teach Linca how to cook. It goes poorly, to where Marion eventually feels the pain as she's forced to endure her cooking.
* Ayesha tries to teach Linca how to cook. It goes poorly, to where Marion eventually feels the pain as she's forced to endure her cooking.
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--> '''Juris:''' Wh-What's going on...? I feel like now I know how it feels to be hunted.... Wah!
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--> '''Juris:''' Wh-What's going on...? I feel like now I know how it feels to be hunted.... Wah!Wah!
* Ayesha's battle with Keithgriff is a fight you're supposed to lose. But it is possible to beat him. However, when you do... he still leaves with the prize you were fighting over.
--> '''Ayesha:''' ...He took it with him. But I won... That's cheating.
* Ayesha's battle with Keithgriff is a fight you're supposed to lose. But it is possible to beat him. However, when you do... he still leaves with the prize you were fighting over.
--> '''Ayesha:''' ...He took it with him. But I won... That's cheating.
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--> '''Glide:''' Hmmm... You'd make a nice partner for Regina. How about it? [[InnocentInnuendo Want to switch teams?]]
--> '''Ayesha:''' S-Switch teams?
--> '''Ayesha:''' S-Switch teams?
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* Ayesha's first meeting with Ranun is by stepping on him... ''twice''.
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** He later tells her she has to learn to calm down or she'll never find a husband. Regina is fine with that, since she can just [[LesYay marry Ayesha instead]].
--> '''Glide:''' Hmmm... You'd make a nice partner for Regina. How about it? [[InnocentInnuendo Want to switch teams?]]
--> '''Ayesha:''' S-Switch teams?
--> '''Glide:''' Hmmm... You'd make a nice partner for Regina. How about it? [[InnocentInnuendo Want to switch teams?]]
--> '''Ayesha:''' S-Switch teams?
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--> '''Ayesha:''' Whaaa... I don't need that kind of attention! Hrgh, this is so embarrassing...
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--> '''Ayesha:''' Whaaa... I don't need that kind of attention! Hrgh, this is so embarrassing...embarrassing...
* Regina has Ayesha lure Juris over to her house and then tells him to TakeOffYourClothes while Ayesha blocks the exit. They then turn him into a dress-up doll.
--> '''Juris:''' Wh-What's going on...? I feel like now I know how it feels to be hunted.... Wah!
* Regina has Ayesha lure Juris over to her house and then tells him to TakeOffYourClothes while Ayesha blocks the exit. They then turn him into a dress-up doll.
--> '''Juris:''' Wh-What's going on...? I feel like now I know how it feels to be hunted.... Wah!
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* After working for Ernie, Ranun practically runs the moment he thinks he hears his carriage coming.
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* After working for Ernie, Ranun practically runs the moment he thinks he hears his carriage coming.coming.
* Ayesha is talking with Tanya when a breeze is kicked up and she gets a PantyShot (offscreen). Tanya's impressed by what she sees.
--> '''Tanya:''' I'm sure anyone you show them (underwear) to will tell you they're beautiful.
--> '''Ayesha:''' Whaaa... I don't need that kind of attention! Hrgh, this is so embarrassing...
* Ayesha is talking with Tanya when a breeze is kicked up and she gets a PantyShot (offscreen). Tanya's impressed by what she sees.
--> '''Tanya:''' I'm sure anyone you show them (underwear) to will tell you they're beautiful.
--> '''Ayesha:''' Whaaa... I don't need that kind of attention! Hrgh, this is so embarrassing...
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* Marietta spots Keithgriff at a Baazar and tries to chase him down to talk to him, but every time she tries she runs into Harry.
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* Marietta spots Keithgriff at a Baazar and tries to chase him down to talk to him, but every time she tries she runs into Harry.Harry.
* After working for Ernie, Ranun practically runs the moment he thinks he hears his carriage coming.
* After working for Ernie, Ranun practically runs the moment he thinks he hears his carriage coming.
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-->'''Ayesha:'''But I feel like you're not overcoming anything... Nope, nothing.
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* Marietta spots Keithgriff at a Baazar and tries to chase him down to talk to him, but every time she tries she runs into Harry.
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** After beating Harry twice he ends up becoming depressed, so Ayesha tries to cheer him up... and ends up making herself his lifelong rival.
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* Harry mistaking the stick you bring him from the factory as a toothpick and claiming the ancients were giants at least 10 meters tall.
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* Harry mistaking the stick you bring him from the factory as a toothpick and claiming the ancients were giants at least 10 meters tall.tall.
* Ayesha brings up the notion of working to Ranun. He balks and makes up excuses on waiting for the wind and then makes even more excuses afterwards, leaving Ayesha with a headche.
-->'''Ayesha:'''But I feel like you're not overcoming anything... Nope, nothing.
* Ayesha brings up the notion of working to Ranun. He balks and makes up excuses on waiting for the wind and then makes even more excuses afterwards, leaving Ayesha with a headche.
-->'''Ayesha:'''But I feel like you're not overcoming anything... Nope, nothing.
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--> '''Regina:''' That still kinda hurts...
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--> '''Regina:''' That still kinda hurts...hurts...
* Harry mistaking the stick you bring him from the factory as a toothpick and claiming the ancients were giants at least 10 meters tall.
* Harry mistaking the stick you bring him from the factory as a toothpick and claiming the ancients were giants at least 10 meters tall.
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-->'''Marietta:''' Just be honest and congratulate her!
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-->'''Marietta:''' Just be honest and congratulate her!her!
* Regina brings up that Glide [[AccidentalPervert walked in on her]] after she got out of the shower naked because he didn't knock. His response:
--> '''Glide:''' Well, don't worry, your naked body was as noticeable as a pebble on the ground to me.
--> '''Regina:''' That still kinda hurts...
* Regina brings up that Glide [[AccidentalPervert walked in on her]] after she got out of the shower naked because he didn't knock. His response:
--> '''Glide:''' Well, don't worry, your naked body was as noticeable as a pebble on the ground to me.
--> '''Regina:''' That still kinda hurts...
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* Whenever Regina levels up she mentions she feels her muscles are getting stronger, but quickly backtracks.
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* Whenever Regina levels up she mentions she feels her muscles are getting stronger, but quickly backtracks.backtracks.
* When you beat Harry in the first contest he has to try and justify it:
-->'''Harry:''' Going all-out against a girl is unbecoming of a grown man, so, you know I hope you all understand.
-->'''Marietta:''' Just be honest and congratulate her!
* When you beat Harry in the first contest he has to try and justify it:
-->'''Harry:''' Going all-out against a girl is unbecoming of a grown man, so, you know I hope you all understand.
-->'''Marietta:''' Just be honest and congratulate her!
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* Whenever Regina levels up she mentions she feels her muscles are getting stronger, but quickly backtracks.
