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* Some of them could be chalked up as common surnames, but how does Lottes supefan Komiyama not notice that a lot of people around her (including herself) share a surname with Lottes players?
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* Some of them could be chalked up as common surnames, but how does Lottes supefan super fan Komiyama not notice that a lot of people around her (including herself) share a surname with Lottes players?
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* A lot of the story choices in "''JustForFun/AYouthLikeThis''" make more sense if you keep in mind Tomoko is adding in-universe RealitySubtext.
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* A lot of the story choices in "''JustForFun/AYouthLikeThis''" ''JustForFun/AYouthLikeThis'' make more sense if you keep in mind Tomoko is adding in-universe RealitySubtext.
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* In chapter 169, Tomoki is clearly pissed off by Sayaka's attitude but the last straw ends up being when she implies that he gets sexually aroused while playing football, besides the fact that this is a very idiotic comment, one early chapter showed that the thing that helped Tomoki play was he used to release [[ThePowerOfHate his frustrations related to his relationship with Tomoko]]. So the idea that he will get sexually aroused with Football is a major BerserkButton because he relates playing Football with his sister.
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* In chapter 169, Tomoki is clearly pissed off by Sayaka's attitude but the last straw ends up being when she implies that he gets sexually aroused while playing football, besides the fact that this is a very idiotic comment, one early chapter showed that the thing that helped Tomoki play was he used that it helped him to release [[ThePowerOfHate his frustrations related to his relationship with Tomoko]]. So the idea that he will get sexually aroused with Football is a major BerserkButton because he relates playing Football with his sister.
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* In chapter 169, Tomoki is clearly pissed off by Sayaka's attitude but the last straw ends up being when she implies that he gets sexually aroused while playing football, besides the fact that this is a very idiotic comment, one early chapter showed that the thing that helped Tomoki play was he used to release [[ThePowerOfHate his frustrations related to his relationship with Tomoko]]. So the idea that he will get sexually aroused with Football is a major BerserkButton because he relates playing Football with his sister.
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** Nemoto's character is looked down by the rest of the members of the club for her inappropriate noises for her audition. This is probably what Nemoto thought would have happened in the first two years if her friends finded out she wanted to become a voice actress.
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** Nemoto's character is looked down by the rest of the members of the club for her inappropriate noises for her audition. This is probably what Nemoto thought would have happened in the first two years if her friends finded found out she wanted to become a voice actress.
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* A lot of the story choices in "[[ShowWithinAShow A Youth Like This]]" make more sense if you keep in mind Tomoko is adding in-universe RealitySubtext.
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* A lot of the story choices in "[[ShowWithinAShow A Youth Like This]]" "''JustForFun/AYouthLikeThis''" make more sense if you keep in mind Tomoko is adding in-universe RealitySubtext.
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** Ucchi is the only actress to have more that one role, because from Tomoko's point of view she's the definiton of TheGenericGirl.
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** Ucchi is the only actress to have more that than one role, because from Tomoko's point of view she's the definiton of TheGenericGirl.
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** Asuka's character is a very blatant AuthorAvatar of Tomoko herself. So it makes sense she's the President of a small club with four members that don't do anything of value more that having a good time in high school, given this was one of Tomoko's failed goals back in Chapter 26.
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** Asuka's character is a very blatant AuthorAvatar of Tomoko herself. So it makes sense she's the President of a small club with four members that don't do anything of value more that besides having a good time in high school, given this was one of Tomoko's failed goals back in Chapter 26.
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** Yuri's character falls in love with Yoshida's character off-screen without explanation. Althought is probably related with her being the one who threw the ball [[SitcomArchNemesis that ended up killing Nemoto's character.]]
** Asuka's character also ends up repeating her second year for lack of attendance, this was another of Tomoko's failed strategies to get popular before she backed off after realizing how much Tomoki hated the idea to have classes with her.
** Asuka's character also ends up repeating her second year for lack of attendance, this was another of Tomoko's failed strategies to get popular before she backed off after realizing how much Tomoki hated the idea to have classes with her.
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** Yuri's character falls in love with Yoshida's character off-screen without explanation. Althought is probably It's likely related with her to Tomoko's belief that Mako is a lesbian, and has of late gotten quite attached and fiercely protective of Yoshida. It might also be related to Yoshida being the one who threw killed Hina's character, whom [[SitcomArchnemesis Yuri chafes against in the ball [[SitcomArchNemesis that ended up killing Nemoto's character.]]
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** Asuka's character also ends up repeating her second year for lack of attendance,this which was another one of Tomoko's failed strategies to get popular before she backed off after realizing how much Tomoki hated the idea to have classes of sharing a class with her.her.
** Asuka's character also ends up repeating her second year for lack of attendance,
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** The student council are the villains given they were the ones who rejected the idea in the first place.
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** Asuka's character is a very blatant AuthorAvatar of Tomoko herself. So it makes sense she's the President of a small club with four members that don't do anything of value more that having a good time in high school, given this was one of Tomoko's failed goals back in Chapter 26
** Asuka's character also ends up repeating her second year for lack of attendance, this was another of Tomoko's failed strategies to get popular before she backed off after realizing how much Tomoki hated the idea to have classes with her.
** Asuka's character is a very blatant AuthorAvatar of Tomoko herself. So it makes sense she's the President of a small club with four members that don't do anything of value more that having a good time in high school, given this was one of Tomoko's failed goals back in Chapter 26
** Asuka's character also ends up repeating her second year for lack of attendance, this was another of Tomoko's failed strategies to get popular before she backed off after realizing how much Tomoki hated the idea to have classes with her.
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* A lot of the story choices in "[[ShowWithinAShow A Youth Like This]]" make more sense if you keep in mind is Tomoko's perspective of herself and her friends.
adding in-universe RealitySubtext.
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**Asuka's Nemoto's character also ends up repeating is looked down by the rest of the members of the club for her second year inappropriate noises for lack of attendance, this was another of Tomoko's failed strategies to get popular before her audition. This is probably what Nemoto thought would have happened in the first two years if her friends finded out she backed off after realizing how much Tomoki hated wanted to become a voice actress.
** The student council are the villains given they were the ones who rejected the idea in the first place.
** Yuri's character is an AffectionateParody tohave classes Mako so she's an [[ExaggeratedTrope Exaggerated]] depiction of a Extroverted and a ExtremeDoormat that ends up having a RelationshipUpgrade with her.Yoshida.
** Asuka's character is a very blatant AuthorAvatar of Tomoko herself. So it makes sense she's the President of a small club with four members that don't do anything of value more that having a good time in high school, given this was one of Tomoko's failed goals back in Chapter
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** Yuri's character is an AffectionateParody to Mako so she's an [[ExaggeratedTrope Exaggerated]] Extroverted ExtremeDoormat that ends up having a RelationshipUpgrade with Yoshida.
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** Yuri's character is an AffectionateParody to Mako so she's an [[ExaggeratedTrope Exaggerated]] Extroverted ExtremeDoormat that ends up having a RelationshipUpgrade with Yoshida.
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** Asuka's character also ends up repeating her second year for lack of attendance, this was another of Tomoko's failed strategies to get popular before she backed off after realizing how much Tomoki hated the idea to have classes with her.
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** One of Uchi's characters refuses to help because she thinks the President has antisocial vibes and lacks charisma, which is probably what Tomoko believes is Uchi's opinion of her.
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** Yuri's character falls in love with Yoshida's character off-screen without explanation. Althought is probably related with she being the one who threw the ball [[SitcomArchNemesis that ended up killing Nemoto's character.]]
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** Yuri's character falls in love with Yoshida's character off-screen without explanation. Althought is probably related with she her being the one who threw the ball [[SitcomArchNemesis that ended up killing Nemoto's character.]]
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** One of Uchi's characters refuses to helo because she thinks the President has antisocial vibes and lacks charisma, which is probably what Tomoko believes Uchi thinks of her.
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** One of Uchi's characters refuses to helo help because she thinks the President has antisocial vibes and lacks charisma, which is probably what Tomoko believes Uchi thinks is Uchi's opinion of her.
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* Yuri's character in "[[ShowWithinAShow A Youth Like This]]" falls in love with Yoshida's character off-screen without explanation. Althought is probably related with she being the one who threw the ball [[SitcomArchNemesis that ended up killing Nemoto's character.]]
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* Yuri's character A lot of the story choices in "[[ShowWithinAShow A Youth Like This]]" make more sense if you keep in mind is Tomoko's perspective of herself and her friends.
** Asuka's character is a very blatant AuthorAvatar of Tomoko herself. So it makes sense she's the President of a small club with four members that don't do anything of value more that having a good time in high school, given this was one of Tomoko's failed goals back in Chapter 26
** Asuka's character also ends up repeating her second year for lack of attendance, this was another of Tomoko's failed strategies to get popular before she backed off after realizing how much Tomoki hated the idea to have classes with her.
** One of Uchi's characters refuses to helo because she thinks the President has antisocial vibes and lacks charisma, which is probably what Tomoko believes Uchi thinks of her.
** Yuri's character is an AffectionateParody to Mako so she's an [[ExaggeratedTrope Exaggerated]] Extroverted ExtremeDoormat that ends up having a RelationshipUpgrade with Yoshida.
** Yuri's character falls in love with Yoshida's character off-screen without explanation. Althought is probably related with she being the one who threw the ball [[SitcomArchNemesis that ended up killing Nemoto's character.]]
** Asuka's character is a very blatant AuthorAvatar of Tomoko herself. So it makes sense she's the President of a small club with four members that don't do anything of value more that having a good time in high school, given this was one of Tomoko's failed goals back in Chapter 26
** Asuka's character also ends up repeating her second year for lack of attendance, this was another of Tomoko's failed strategies to get popular before she backed off after realizing how much Tomoki hated the idea to have classes with her.
** One of Uchi's characters refuses to helo because she thinks the President has antisocial vibes and lacks charisma, which is probably what Tomoko believes Uchi thinks of her.
** Yuri's character is an AffectionateParody to Mako so she's an [[ExaggeratedTrope Exaggerated]] Extroverted ExtremeDoormat that ends up having a RelationshipUpgrade with Yoshida.
** Yuri's character falls in love with Yoshida's character off-screen without explanation. Althought is probably related with she being the one who threw the ball [[SitcomArchNemesis that ended up killing Nemoto's character.]]
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* Yuri's character in "[[ShowWithinAShow A Youth Like This]]" falls in love with Yoshida's character off-screen without explanation. Althought is probably related with she being the one who threw the ball [[SitcomArchNemesis that ended up killing Nemoto's character.]]
* Yuri's character in "[[ShowWithinAShow A Youth Like This]]" falls in love with Yoshida's character off-screen without explanation. Althought is probably related with she being the one who threw the ball [[SitcomArchNemesis that ended up killing Nemoto's character.]]
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* Ucchi as well, she ended up falling in love with a girl who (to her knowledge) peeped on her in the shower, stole her panties, watched her while she slept, stalked her relentlessly, and makes a pass at just about every attractive girl she encounters. Tomoko is a ChivalrousPervert if there ever was one so is not a big deal but she could have easily have fallen in love with someone dangerous.
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** Alternatively, she could be an abusive yandere herself, if she's desperate enough.
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* Some of them could be chalked up as common surnames, but how does Lottes supefan Komiyama not notice that a lot of people around her (including herself) share a surname with Lottes players?
!!FridgeLogic
* Some of them could be chalked up as common surnames, but how does Lottes supefan Komiyama not notice that a lot of people around her (including herself) share a surname with Lottes players?
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* Tomoko has a thing for [[BastardBoyfriend abusive]] {{yandere}} men. Now it's just fantasies and video games, but when she's older...
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** Considering how her mother is known to slap her on some occassions (generally deserved), she is definitely not ''unfamiliar'' with the idea of a beloved family member hitting her...
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* Tomoko has a thing for [[BastardBoyfriend abusive]] {{yandere}} men. Now it's just fantasies and video games, but when she's older...
** Considering how her mother is known to slap her on some occassions (generally deserved), she is definitely not ''unfamiliar'' with the idea of a beloved family member hitting her...
** Additionally, just how far might she go in order to get laid? Venturing into the red-light district scared her, but again, when she's older...
** Alternatively, she could be an abusive yandere herself, if she's desperate enough.
* Tomoko has a thing for [[BastardBoyfriend abusive]] {{yandere}} men. Now it's just fantasies and video games, but when she's older...
** Considering how her mother is known to slap her on some occassions (generally deserved), she is definitely not ''unfamiliar'' with the idea of a beloved family member hitting her...
** Additionally, just how far might she go in order to get laid? Venturing into the red-light district scared her, but again, when she's older...
** Alternatively, she could be an abusive yandere herself, if she's desperate enough.