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* As noted by more than one fan, Pride in Judeo-Christian theology is the strongest of all the sins and considered the source of the other six; given that, it's natural that the ''Story of Evil'' is by far the largest arc in the franchise.
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* As noted by more than one fan, Pride in Judeo-Christian theology is the strongest of all the sins and considered the source of the other six; given that, it's natural that the ''Story ''Daughter of Evil'' is by far the largest arc in the franchise.
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She wasn't devastated by being raped. She was devastated by breaking partially free of his control and staying with him anyway. At least, this is what the novel itself establishes as the cause for her guilt (Ma lied about her reasons for body swapping).
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** Also, in life Lukana was said to have been the most devastated by the Duke raping her. Why exactly did she go back to him? Well, there is [[StockholmSyndrome one possibility...]]
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* Nemesis declaring herself "Master of the Hellish Yard" and singing the song representing that character despite there already being an existing character with that title actually makes sense when you consider the fact that [[spoiler:Nemesis is also Levia, who was the ''original'' Master of the Hellish Yard]].
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** Also, in life Lukana was said to have been the most devastated by the Duke raping her. Why exactly did she go back to him? Well, there is [[StockholmSyndrome one possibility...]]
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Not to be that guy who's always on your edits, but you can't really read anything in Gallerian's behavior from the infomine. Suggesting this is... kind of a stretch
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** On that note, [[spoiler:when Gallerian introduces Sleep Princess to the other sin contractors, he's very quick to correct them when they mistakenly believe her to be Eve and when Michelle starts using Eve's power on Prim. Is he trying to ''prevent'' Michelle from slipping into her Eve persona in front of him? If so, has this ''already happened'' at some point?]]
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** On that note, [[spoiler:when Gallerian introduces Sleep Princess to the other sin contractors, he's very quick to correct them when they mistakenly believe her to be Eve and when Michelle starts using Eve's power on Prim. Is he trying to ''prevent'' Michelle from slipping into her Eve persona in front of him? If so, has this ''already happened'' at some point?]]
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1. Theyr'e not genetically related. 2. They weren't raised together. You might as well say that EVERYONE in Evillious is committing incest since Behemo and Levia created them.
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** On that note, Meta and Pale were [[spoiler:both created by Seth, and thus, he's more or less their father]]. Meaning that [[spoiler:Meta and Pale's relationship was incestuous, albeit unwittingly]].
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** On that note, Meta and Pale were [[spoiler:both created by Seth, and thus, he's more or less their father]]. Meaning that [[spoiler:Meta and Pale's relationship was incestuous, albeit unwittingly]].
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* It seems a bit odd that "Five Pierrot" would be the answer song for Sloth, seeing as Lemy and Margarita seemingly had no connection to each other beyond both of them being members of Pere Noel. But then, recall that [[spoiler:Lemy is a reincarnation of Hansel and Margarita is actually Eve Moonlit, meaning that their connection runs far deeper than initially thought]].
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That's the POINT of the fridge horror. This isn't a forum.
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** In all fairness, [[spoiler:Gallerian would probably try to nip that in the bud if it happened (because come on, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even he's not THAT messed up]])]]. Though that also begs the question...how would ''he'' feel if [[spoiler:his own daughter suddenly started coming onto him]]? And then [[spoiler:possibly started acting crazy when he tried to tell her "no"]]?
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** In all fairness, [[spoiler:Gallerian would probably try to nip that in the bud if it happened (because come on, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even he's not THAT messed up]])]]. Though that also begs the question...how would ''he'' feel if [[spoiler:his own daughter suddenly started coming onto him]]? And then [[spoiler:possibly started acting crazy when he tried to tell her "no"]]?
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This is explained by the narrative in both the novel and the PV.
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* The first chapter of ''LightNovel/MasterOfTheHeavenlyYard'' is called "Epilogue" while the last one is called "Prologue". This feels a little backwards, but then, the story opens with the ''end'' of the Third Period and ends with [[spoiler:the ''beginning'' of the Fourth Period]].
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* The first chapter of ''LightNovel/MasterOfTheHeavenlyYard'' is called "Epilogue" while the last one is called "Prologue". This feels a little backwards, but then, the story opens with the ''end'' of the Third Period and ends with [[spoiler:the ''beginning'' of the Fourth Period]].
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Sorry but this doesn't apply; her possibly having to watch her brother being executed is horrifying enough, fridge horror has to apply to something that wasn't already terrible at first glance
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* Guillotines sometimes don't kill in the first strike. Even then, it's thought that the head is still alive for just a little bit after being severed. [[spoiler: Riliane might have had to watch her brother suffer while being executed, on top of her being the reason for his death.]]
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* mothy makes plenty of references to the real world, but sometimes these references cause confusion about how they came about in-series. An example is Riliane's last name as "d'Autriche"; out-of-universe, it's a clear reference to Marie Antoinette, but in real life Marie was called "d'Autriche" because it's French for "from Austria". In-series, though there is no Austria in Bolganio...Similarly, the [[CrystalDragonJesus Levin Church]] carries crosses but have no Jesus figure who died on one to venerate.
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* mothy makes plenty of references to the real world, but sometimes these references cause confusion about how they came about in-series. An example is Riliane's last name as "d'Autriche"; out-of-universe, it's a clear reference to Marie Antoinette, but in real life Marie was called "d'Autriche" because it's French for "from Austria". In-series, though there is no Austria in Bolganio...Similarly, the [[CrystalDragonJesus Levin Church]] carries crosses but have no Jesus figure who died on one to venerate. Even with the explanation that [[spoiler:Evillious was, in-universe, modeled after Earth,]] it still doesn't explain how some of these oddities developed.
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She had no memory of anything before being "reborn" in the doll, so her other identities have no bearing on it.
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* The Master of the Court loving Gallerian Marlon as her "father" despite not being Eve or Michelle makes sense when it's revealed that she is actually [[spoiler:Irina Clockworker, who becomes Maria Moonlit]], who had loved [[spoiler:her son, Adam Moonlit, who bears a striking resemblance to Gallerian]].
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* The Master of the Court loving Gallerian Marlon as her "father" despite not being Eve or Michelle makes sense when it's revealed that she is actually [[spoiler:Irina Clockworker, who becomes Maria Moonlit]], who had loved [[spoiler:her son, Adam Moonlit, who bears a striking resemblance to Gallerian]].
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This isn't Fridge, it's Punny Name.
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* Gallerian's name sounds similar to the word [[MeaningfulName "gallery."]] He also owns a gallery of sin vessels in Evil's Theater.
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* Gallerian's name sounds similar to the word [[ MeaningfulName "gallery."]] He also owns a gallery of sin vessels in Evil's Theater.
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* Gallerian's name sounds similar to the word [[ MeaningfulName [[MeaningfulName "gallery."]] He also owns a gallery of sin vessels in Evil's Theater.
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* Gallerian's name sounds similar to the word [[ MeaningfulName "gallery."]] He also owns a gallery of sin vessels in Evil's Theater.
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Rewriting for the ACTUAL incest case to be made, not just "they look alike"
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* Gallerian made a contract with [[spoiler: Adam Moonlit. His daughter Michelle later makes a contract with Eve and takes over her Margarita body. Adam and Eve were lovers, and not only that, Gallerian and Michelle look like them. Another incest case could very well be made...]]
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* Gallerian In the Master of the Heavenly Yard novel, it's revealed that [[spoiler:Michelle made a contract with [[spoiler: Adam Moonlit. His daughter Michelle later makes a contract with Eve Eve, and takes over using her Margarita body. Adam powers caused her to look, think and Eve were lovers, and not only that, Gallerian and Michelle look even act like them. Another incest case could very well be made...her for a time. Let's hope for her sake that she never slipped into her "Eve" mindset while being around her ''father'' Gallerian, who looks like Eve's lover Adam...]]
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* Guillotines sometimes don't kill in the first strike. Even then, it's thought that the head is still alive for just a little bit after being severed. [[spoiler: Riliane might have had to watch her brother suffer while being executed, on top of her being the reason for his death.]]
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It's not fridge if it's told explicitly to the reader.
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* mothy wrote twelve Evillious novels in total (Daughter of Evil novel series + Deadly Sins of Evil novel series). He had wanted to invoke a "clockwork" theme. He also states that that was his idea for [[spoiler: the Court ending]], since a clock goes back to where it started but that doesn't mean that the time that passed didn't happen.
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* mothy wrote twelve Evillious novels in total (Daughter of Evil novel series + Deadly Sins of Evil novel series). He had wanted to invoke a "clockwork" theme. He also states that that was his idea for [[spoiler: the Court ending]], since a clock goes back to where it started but that doesn't mean that the time that passed didn't happen.
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This is not fridge. This is "gee, isn't that neat!". Also, Nemesis having green hair is given a Hand Wave in universe so this isn't Fridge Logic anymore..
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* mothy makes plenty of references to the real world, but sometimes these references cause confusion about how they came about in-series. An example is Riliane's last name as "d'Autriche"; out-of-universe, it's a clear reference to Marie Antoinette, but in real life Marie was called "d'Autriche" because it's French for "from Austria". In-series, though there is no Austria in Bolganio...Similarly, the [[CrystalDragonJesus Levin Church]] carries crosses but have no Jesus figure who died on one to venerate.
* How does Nemesis have green hair? [[spoiler: Her father, Gallerian, is blue-haired, and presumably Marlon in origin, and her mother, MA, is black-haired and Jakokuese, at least biologically.]] Green hair in this world is strongly associated with Elphegort, and all other green-haired characters in the series are from Elphegort, or at least closely related (Eve Zvezda was Leviantan, but was implied to be Elphe in origin). For ''every'' native Elphe to have green hair, it would have to be an insanely dominant gene, so if her parents had it, their hair would have been green as well.
* The first person mothy killed off, in order of the songs made, was [[spoiler: Allen Avadonia.]] Funny enough, most of the Vocaloid fandom refers to [[spoiler: Len Kagamine, Allen's representative Vocaloid.]] as the "guy who dies in every song."
* How does Nemesis have green hair? [[spoiler: Her father, Gallerian, is blue-haired, and presumably Marlon in origin, and her mother, MA, is black-haired and Jakokuese, at least biologically.]] Green hair in this world is strongly associated with Elphegort, and all other green-haired characters in the series are from Elphegort, or at least closely related (Eve Zvezda was Leviantan, but was implied to be Elphe in origin). For ''every'' native Elphe to have green hair, it would have to be an insanely dominant gene, so if her parents had it, their hair would have been green as well.
* The first person mothy killed off, in order of the songs made, was [[spoiler: Allen Avadonia.]] Funny enough, most of the Vocaloid fandom refers to [[spoiler: Len Kagamine, Allen's representative Vocaloid.]] as the "guy who dies in every song."
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* mothy makes plenty of references to the real world, but sometimes these references cause confusion about how they came about in-series. An example is Riliane's last name as "d'Autriche"; out-of-universe, it's a clear reference to Marie Antoinette, but in real life Marie was called "d'Autriche" because it's French for "from Austria". In-series, though there is no Austria in Bolganio...Similarly, the [[CrystalDragonJesus Levin Church]] carries crosses but have no Jesus figure who died on one to venerate.
* How does Nemesis have green hair? [[spoiler: Her father, Gallerian, is blue-haired, and presumably Marlon in origin, and her mother, MA, is black-haired and Jakokuese, at least biologically.]] Green hair in this world is strongly associated with Elphegort, and all other green-haired characters in the series are from Elphegort, or at least closely related (Eve Zvezda was Leviantan, but was implied to be Elphe in origin). For ''every'' native Elphe to have green hair, it would have to be an insanely dominant gene, so if her parents had it, their hair would have been green as well.
* The first person mothy killed off, in order of the songs made, was [[spoiler: Allen Avadonia.]] Funny enough, most of the Vocaloid fandom refers to [[spoiler: Len Kagamine, Allen's representative Vocaloid.]] as the "guy who dies in every song."venerate.
* How does Nemesis have green hair? [[spoiler: Her father, Gallerian, is blue-haired, and presumably Marlon in origin, and her mother, MA, is black-haired and Jakokuese, at least biologically.]] Green hair in this world is strongly associated with Elphegort, and all other green-haired characters in the series are from Elphegort, or at least closely related (Eve Zvezda was Leviantan, but was implied to be Elphe in origin). For ''every'' native Elphe to have green hair, it would have to be an insanely dominant gene, so if her parents had it, their hair would have been green as well.
* The first person mothy killed off, in order of the songs made, was [[spoiler: Allen Avadonia.]] Funny enough, most of the Vocaloid fandom refers to [[spoiler: Len Kagamine, Allen's representative Vocaloid.]] as the "guy who dies in every song."
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* Gallerian made a contract with [[spoiler: Adam Moonlit. His daughter Michelle later makes a contract with Eve and takes over her Margarita body. Adam and Eve were lovers, and not only that, Gallerian and Michelle look like them. Another incest case could very well be made...]]
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* Both [[spoiler: Gumillia]] and Levia [[spoiler: whom Gumillia was friends with and her master as Elluka]] are referred to as the Master of the Hellish Yard at one point. Ironically, both are also portrayed by Gumi, with Levia [[spoiler: also being Nemesis Sudou.]]
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* How does Nemesis have green hair? [[spoiler: Her father, Gallerian, is blue-haired, and presumably Marlon in origin, and her mother, MA, is black-haired and Jakokuese, at least biologically.]] Green hair in this world is strongly associated with Elphegort, and all other green-haired characters in the series are from Elphegort, or at least closely related (Eve Zvezda was Leviantan, but was implied to be Elphe in origin). For ''every'' native Elphe to have green hair, it would have to be an insanely dominant gene, so if her parents had it, their hair would have been green as well.
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* How does Nemesis have green hair? [[spoiler: Her father, Gallerian, is blue-haired, and presumably Marlon in origin, and her mother, MA, is black-haired and Jakokuese, at least biologically.]] Green hair in this world is strongly associated with Elphegort, and all other green-haired characters in the series are from Elphegort, or at least closely related (Eve Zvezda was Leviantan, but was implied to be Elphe in origin). For ''every'' native Elphe to have green hair, it would have to be an insanely dominant gene, so if her parents had it, their hair would have been green as well.well.
* The first person mothy killed off, in order of the songs made, was [[spoiler: Allen Avadonia.]] Funny enough, most of the Vocaloid fandom refers to [[spoiler: Len Kagamine, Allen's representative Vocaloid.]] as the "guy who dies in every song."
* The first person mothy killed off, in order of the songs made, was [[spoiler: Allen Avadonia.]] Funny enough, most of the Vocaloid fandom refers to [[spoiler: Len Kagamine, Allen's representative Vocaloid.]] as the "guy who dies in every song."
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This is actually fridge logic. Editing a little though (for starters no using first person in main pages)
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* mothy makes plenty of references to the real world, but sometimes these references cause confusion about how they came about in-series. An example is Riliane's last name as "d'Autriche"; out-of-universe, it's a clear reference to Marie Antoinette, but in real life Marie was called "d'Autriche" because it's French for "from Austria". In-series, though there is no Austria in Bolganio...Similarly, the [[CrystalDragonJesus Levin Church]] carries crosses but have no Jesus figure who died on one to venerate.venerate.
* How does Nemesis have green hair? [[spoiler: Her father, Gallerian, is blue-haired, and presumably Marlon in origin, and her mother, MA, is black-haired and Jakokuese, at least biologically.]] Green hair in this world is strongly associated with Elphegort, and all other green-haired characters in the series are from Elphegort, or at least closely related (Eve Zvezda was Leviantan, but was implied to be Elphe in origin). For ''every'' native Elphe to have green hair, it would have to be an insanely dominant gene, so if her parents had it, their hair would have been green as well.
* How does Nemesis have green hair? [[spoiler: Her father, Gallerian, is blue-haired, and presumably Marlon in origin, and her mother, MA, is black-haired and Jakokuese, at least biologically.]] Green hair in this world is strongly associated with Elphegort, and all other green-haired characters in the series are from Elphegort, or at least closely related (Eve Zvezda was Leviantan, but was implied to be Elphe in origin). For ''every'' native Elphe to have green hair, it would have to be an insanely dominant gene, so if her parents had it, their hair would have been green as well.
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These aren't fridge brilliance, one is speculation and the other is reading something into a line that wasn't its intention.
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* There is a line in Seven Crimes and Punishments along the lines of ''"it began when the cursed twins released vessels of malice upon the world"''. In the context of the song and the story, it refers to Hansel and Gretel, whose HERS and BornAgainImmortality could both be considered a curse, and were responsible for creating and releasing the Seven Deadly Sins featured in the song. But in the context of our universe, it could also refer to Rilliane and Allen, whom the latter described as "cursed by fate", and whose stories the Chronicles have since expanded from.
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* There is a line in Seven Crimes and Punishments along the lines of ''"it began when the cursed twins released vessels of malice upon the world"''. In the context of the song and the story, it refers to Hansel and Gretel, whose HERS and BornAgainImmortality could both be considered a curse, and were responsible for creating and releasing the Seven Deadly Sins featured in the song. But in the context of our universe, it could also refer to Rilliane and Allen, whom the latter described as "cursed by fate", and whose stories the Chronicles have since expanded from.
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