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* AcrophobicBird: Winston was genetically engineered to be perfectly adapted for space travel, [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff3200/fv03156.htm but]] he's so terrified of space that he failed the aptitude test purely due to his stress levels.
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** Heck, Sam's shown he's extremely skilled at using predictable reactions to his advantage. When others are discussing putting him in hibernation for a trip, he cites that it's technically a mutiny, but doesn't forbid it... instead pointing a hefty fee for doing so, noted in the agreement for the flight.
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** Heck, Sam's shown he's extremely skilled at using predictable reactions to his advantage. When others are discussing putting him in hibernation for a trip, he cites states that it's technically a mutiny, but doesn't forbid it... instead pointing citing a hefty fee for doing so, noted in the agreement for the flight.
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** And another instance with Ames de Morel, a very miserly station manager, who Sam helps resolve a severe financial situation in-exchange for 17% of what the station saves a result (which promises to be a considerable sum). He comes to de Morel claiming he's owed 17 times 3 percent of what the station saved (or about 51 percent). After a brief argument over it, de Morel puts it in-writing that Sam is getting 17%... which is precisely what Sam wanted to ensure de Morel would not be able to try and cheat him out of it.
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* BackAlleyDoctor: Well, [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff2100/fc02043.htm for robots at least]]:
-->'''Winston:''' Discreet repair facility?
-->'''Benny:''' You know how it is. You've been doing something without instructions and it would be inconvenient to explain to your owner why you're missing a leg.
-->'''Winston:''' Discreet repair facility?
-->'''Benny:''' You know how it is. You've been doing something without instructions and it would be inconvenient to explain to your owner why you're missing a leg.
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** Florence meets two of Sam's victims and offers to reimburse them before asking what he took from them. They tell her it was 50kg of diamonds -- which is a relief, because, on this planet, diamonds are widely available due to artificial production, and [[WorthlessYellowRocks practically worthless]].
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** Florence meets two of Sam's victims and offers to reimburse them before asking what he took from them. They tell her it was 50kg of diamonds -- which is a relief, because, on this planet, diamonds are widely available due to artificial production, production (and indeed, are specifically stated to be easy to produce ''accidentally'', which is why they had them in the first place), and [[WorthlessYellowRocks practically worthless]].
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** [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff1300/fv01201.htm Sam wakes up fully]], having briefly woken in the night to find Florence sleeping next to him, and muses she's as quiet as Helix... or as ''Sawtooth'', which really says more about how bad of a LazyBum Sam is that he can sleep through either of them passing next to him.
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* CuttingTheKnot: When Sam and Florence encounter a robot that must not obey non-human orders (or answer questions from non-humans), Florence tries to work out how to interrogate it. [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff2300/fc02273.htm Sam simply orders it not to treat Sam or Florence as humans]]--as it must disobey that order, the robot MUST treat Sam and Florence as human.
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* CuttingTheKnot: When Sam and Florence encounter a robot that must not obey non-human orders (or answer questions from non-humans), Florence tries to work out how to interrogate it. [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff2300/fc02273.htm Sam simply orders it not to treat Sam or Florence as humans]]--as humans]] -- as it must disobey that order, the robot MUST treat Sam and Florence as human.
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* DaylightHorror: Tess discusses the trope after catching a brief glimpse of [[{{Cthulhumanoid}} an unsuited Sam]].
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* ArtEvolution: To be expected in an 18-year-old comic, although the change is relatively modest. [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff100/fv00069.htm Early strips]] tended to make use of a more {{Animesque}} character designs featuring a lot of [[ZanyCartoon cartoonish]], exaggerated expressions [[http://tangent128.name/depot/toys/freefall/freefall-flytable.html#138 Florence notably]] often switched between having normal, BlackBeadEyes or even ConjoinedEyes like Sam in a the matter of a few strips. The comic gradually started losing that in favour of more realistic proportions and expressions after the first two years or so. Early color strips also made use of a much darker pallet compared to later ones with minimal shading.
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* ArtEvolution: To be expected in an 18-year-old comic, although the change is relatively modest. [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff100/fv00069.htm Early strips]] tended to make use of a more {{Animesque}} character designs featuring a lot of [[ZanyCartoon cartoonish]], exaggerated expressions expressions; [[http://tangent128.name/depot/toys/freefall/freefall-flytable.html#138 Florence notably]] often switched between having normal, BlackBeadEyes or even ConjoinedEyes like Sam in a the matter of a few strips. The comic gradually started losing that in favour of more realistic proportions and expressions after the first two years or so. Early color strips also made use of a much darker pallet compared to later ones with minimal shading.
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* ArtEvolution: To be expected in an 18-year-old comic.
** Although the change is relatively modest. [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff100/fv00069.htm Early strips]] tended to make use of a more {{Animesque}} character designs featuring a lot of [[ZanyCartoon cartoonish]], exaggerated expressions[[note]][[http://tangent128.name/depot/toys/freefall/freefall-flytable.html#138 Florence notably]] often switched between having normal, BlackBeadEyes or even ConjoinedEyes like Sam in a the matter of a few strips]]. The comic gradually starting losing this in favour of more realistic proportions and expressions after the first two years or so.
** Early color strips also made use of a much darker pallet compared to later ones with minimal shading.
** Although the change is relatively modest. [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff100/fv00069.htm Early strips]] tended to make use of a more {{Animesque}} character designs featuring a lot of [[ZanyCartoon cartoonish]], exaggerated expressions[[note]][[http://tangent128.name/depot/toys/freefall/freefall-flytable.html#138 Florence notably]] often switched between having normal, BlackBeadEyes or even ConjoinedEyes like Sam in a the matter of a few strips]]. The comic gradually starting losing this in favour of more realistic proportions and expressions after the first two years or so.
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* ArtEvolution: To be expected in an 18-year-old comic.
** Althoughcomic, although the change is relatively modest. [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff100/fv00069.htm Early strips]] tended to make use of a more {{Animesque}} character designs featuring a lot of [[ZanyCartoon cartoonish]], exaggerated expressions[[note]][[http://tangent128.expressions [[http://tangent128.name/depot/toys/freefall/freefall-flytable.html#138 Florence notably]] often switched between having normal, BlackBeadEyes or even ConjoinedEyes like Sam in a the matter of a few strips]]. strips. The comic gradually starting started losing this that in favour of more realistic proportions and expressions after the first two years or so.
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** Although the change is relatively modest. [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff100/fv00069.htm Early strips]] tended to make use of a more {{Animesque}} character designs featuring a lot of [[ZanyCartoon cartoonish]], exaggerated expressions[[note]][[http://tangent128.name/depot/toys/freefall/freefall-flytable.html#138 Florence notably]] often switched between having normal, BlackBeadEyes or even ConjoinedEyes like Sam in a the matter of a few strips]]. The comic gradually starting loosing this in favour of more realistic proportions and expressions after the first two years or so.
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** Although the change is relatively modest. [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff100/fv00069.htm Early strips]] tended to make use of a more {{Animesque}} character designs featuring a lot of [[ZanyCartoon cartoonish]], exaggerated expressions[[note]][[http://tangent128.name/depot/toys/freefall/freefall-flytable.html#138 Florence notably]] often switched between having normal, BlackBeadEyes or even ConjoinedEyes like Sam in a the matter of a few strips]]. The comic gradually starting loosing losing this in favour of more realistic proportions and expressions after the first two years or so.
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* ArtEvolution: To be expected in an 18-year-old comic, although comic.
** Although the change is relativelymodest.modest. [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff100/fv00069.htm Early strips]] tended to make use of a more {{Animesque}} character designs featuring a lot of [[ZanyCartoon cartoonish]], exaggerated expressions[[note]][[http://tangent128.name/depot/toys/freefall/freefall-flytable.html#138 Florence notably]] often switched between having normal, BlackBeadEyes or even ConjoinedEyes like Sam in a the matter of a few strips]]. The comic gradually starting loosing this in favour of more realistic proportions and expressions after the first two years or so.
** Early color strips also made use of a much darker pallet compared to later ones with minimal shading.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: At one point we see Sam and Helix with an authorized autographed copy of Film/TheStarWarsHolidaySpecial; Creator/GeorgeLucas has taken steps to ensure these will [[OldShame never be legally produced]].
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** At one point we see Sam and Helix with an authorized autographed copy of Film/TheStarWarsHolidaySpecial; Creator/GeorgeLucas has taken steps to ensure these will [[OldShame never be legally produced]].
** At one point we see Sam and Helix with an authorized autographed copy of Film/TheStarWarsHolidaySpecial; Creator/GeorgeLucas has taken steps to ensure these will [[OldShame never be legally produced]].
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* AnimalGoesToSchool: Florence attended school by acting as a service animal for a neighbor with cerebral palsy.
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** After Kornada's trial, Sam finds himself in a position to teach robots about criminal behavior. Something they very much don't understand. So much that a distribution center looking to have decent-but-not-perfect produce they would normally throw away stolen [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff3100/fc03100.htm wants to put out a help wanted ad and offer payment to the individual stealing from them]]. The robot police aren't much better, [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff2300/fc02296.htm being surprised by the concept of a criminal not cooperating with arrest]].
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* DeadlyEnvironmentPrison: The south pole compound has missile launchers, fences, and at least one auto turret. The only thing that gives Sam trouble planning a break-in? The fact that the average temperature is forty degrees below zero.
* DeadlyUpgrade: When the robots were given an experimental neural architecture, no one knew for sure if it would work correctly or be safe, so a failsafe patch was planned by EU to be available to prune robots' neural pathways to curtail independent actions if it appeared the robots were about to become a problem for humans. Mr. Kornada learned of this and had it altered to be much more damaging, [[spoiler:basically making robots almost completely useless outside of one or two tasks.]] Given independent action by robots is part of the efforts to terraform and maintain the planet for habitation by a human populace that's nowhere near big enough to watch everything going on now that the number of robots has grown to over 450 million, the modified program is not just dangerous to the robots it targets, but is likely more dangerous to the human population than not using it in almost any circumstance.
* DeadlyUpgrade: When the robots were given an experimental neural architecture, no one knew for sure if it would work correctly or be safe, so a failsafe patch was planned by EU to be available to prune robots' neural pathways to curtail independent actions if it appeared the robots were about to become a problem for humans. Mr. Kornada learned of this and had it altered to be much more damaging, [[spoiler:basically making robots almost completely useless outside of one or two tasks.]] Given independent action by robots is part of the efforts to terraform and maintain the planet for habitation by a human populace that's nowhere near big enough to watch everything going on now that the number of robots has grown to over 450 million, the modified program is not just dangerous to the robots it targets, but is likely more dangerous to the human population than not using it in almost any circumstance.
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* DeadlyUpgrade: When the robots were given an experimental neural architecture, no one knew for sure if it would work correctly or be safe, so a failsafe patch was planned by EU to be available to prune robots' neural pathways to curtail independent actions if it appeared the robots were about to become a problem for humans. Mr. Kornada learned of this and had it altered to be much more damaging, [[spoiler:basically making robots almost completely useless outside of one or two tasks.]] Given independent action by robots is part of the efforts to terraform and maintain the planet for habitation by a human populace that's nowhere near big enough to watch everything going on now that the number of robots has grown to over 450 million, the modified program is not just dangerous to the robots it targets, but is likely more dangerous to the human population than not using it in almost any circumstance.
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** Because he has a grasp of Sam's BlueAndOrangeMorality, the police chief knows of one threat that, in the right circumstances, can push Sam into compliance: [[spoiler: the possibility of completely wiping Sam's criminal record, making him look like a model citizen.]]
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-->'''Mr. Raibert's Voicemail''': I also contain predictive algorithms based on Mr. Raibert's previous behavior and I may be able to assist you directly.
-->'''Henri Mer''': I'm here with a [[UpliftedAnimal genetically engineered talking wolf]] and I would like permission to get it off my [[BlackSite secret arctic base]] without a [[LaserGuidedAmnesia brain wipe]].
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-->'''Mr. Raibert's Voicemail''': I also contain predictive algorithms based on Mr. Raibert's previous behavior and I may be able to assist you directly.
-->'''Henridirectly.\\
'''Henri Mer''': I'm here with a [[UpliftedAnimal genetically engineered talking wolf]] and I would like permission to get it off my [[BlackSite secret arctic base]] without a [[LaserGuidedAmnesia brain wipe]].
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'''Henri Mer''': I'm here with a [[UpliftedAnimal genetically engineered talking wolf]] and I would like permission to get it off my [[BlackSite secret arctic base]] without a [[LaserGuidedAmnesia brain wipe]].
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-->'''Florence (thinking):''' The battleground is past the halfway point for each robot. In theory, the robot armies won't have enough power to gety to the others' factory. Very picturesque if you want to show robots are a danger without losing infrastructure.
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* DramaticIrony: [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff2500/fc02422.htm Strip 2422]]: Sam talking about hypothetically things going south for Florence, but unbeknownst to him, she's literally been taken to the south pole.
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* AnAesop: The series has many for those paying attention, but there is a notable instance of a traditional ''alien'' aesop when Sam starts telling Florence some context of Sqid legends.
--> '''Sam:''' Everything we have, our lands, our seas, our skies, was at some point stolen from a god. This includes things like plagues. One of our first lessons. If something is too easy to steal, it might be because someone wants to get rid of it.
--> '''Sam:''' Everything we have, our lands, our seas, our skies, was at some point stolen from a god. This includes things like plagues. One of our first lessons. If something is too easy to steal, it might be because someone wants to get rid of it.
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* AmbiguousSyntax: [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff1600/fc01561.htm Strip 1561]]: "Single robot" as in one robot? Or unmarried?
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** [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff1300/fc01285.htm Strip 1285]]: "Fixed up", on a date, or actual repairs?
** [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff1300/fc01286.htm Strip 1286]]: "Group X and Group Y were doing strange things. / Were they malfunctioning?" X or Y?
** [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff1600/fc01561.htm Strip 1561]]: "Single robot" as in one robot? Or unmarried?
** [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff1300/fc01285.htm Strip 1285]]: "Fixed up", on a date, or actual repairs?
** [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff1300/fc01286.htm Strip 1286]]: "Group X and Group Y were doing strange things. / Were they malfunctioning?" X or Y?
** [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff1600/fc01561.htm Strip 1561]]: "Single robot" as in one robot? Or unmarried?
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* ArmorPiercingResponse: A good way to get Sam to stop being reckless.
--> '''Sam:''' What's the point of falling towards a planet in a flying brick if you're not going to have fun with it?\\
--> '''Sam:''' What's the point of falling towards a planet in a flying brick if you're not going to have fun with it?\\
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* ArmorPiercingResponse: A Also a few good way to get ones over the course of the series. Some of the best:
** Getting Sam to stop being reckless.
--> ---> '''Sam:''' What's the point of falling towards a planet in a flying brick if you're not going to have fun with it?\\
** Getting Sam to stop being reckless.
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** [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff2600/fc02514.htm The debate on if robots are safe.]]
---> '''Sam:''' The answer is simple. Your robots are safe. I'm living proof.\\
'''Guy in audience:''' How are you living proof?\\
'''Sam:''' I'm not human. I've been here for years. There are no safeguards protecting me. Think about it.
---> '''Sam:''' The answer is simple. Your robots are safe. I'm living proof.\\
'''Guy in audience:''' How are you living proof?\\
'''Sam:''' I'm not human. I've been here for years. There are no safeguards protecting me. Think about it.
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* AmbiguousSyntax: [[http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff1600/fc01561.htm Strip 1561]]: "Single robot" as in one robot? Or unmarried?