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* VictoriasSecretCompartment: In the opening dream sequence, Katie pulls an ultrasound out of her cleavage.
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It's available on [=YouTube=] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-LXH3U0QaZk here]] and Vimeo [[https://vimeo.com/24278425 here]].
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It's available on [=YouTube=] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-LXH3U0QaZk here]] and Vimeo Platform/{{Vimeo}} [[https://vimeo.com/24278425 here]].
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Jenny, although it's a DownplayedTrope. She's a slightly annoying MotorMouth, but there's nothing really ''wrong'' with her. It's just that she's not Katie, and so Alex is utterly uninterested.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Jenny, although it's a DownplayedTrope. Jenny has an overt crush on Alex. She's a slightly annoying MotorMouth, but there's nothing really ''wrong'' with her. It's just that she's not Katie, and so Alex is utterly uninterested.
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* CatapultNightmare: Alex in the beginning. It's not a ''nightmare'', but it ''is'' a shocking dream--DreamingTheTruth about his feelings for Katie.
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* CatapultNightmare: The film opens with Alex DreamingTheTruth about his feelings for Katie, then waking and sitting upright in the beginning. bed. It's not a ''nightmare'', per se, but it ''is'' a shocking dream--DreamingTheTruth about his feelings for Katie.dream.
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* DramaticSpotlight: In "Chemistry."
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* DramaticSpotlight: In "Chemistry.""Chemistry" a spotlight is used as part of the musical number.
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* LipLockSunBlock: InvertedTrope--when they kiss during "I Know It's Wrong," you can see their faces right up ''until'' they kiss, at which point a bright gym light obscures them.
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* LipLockSunBlock: InvertedTrope--when they the leads kiss during "I Know It's Wrong," you can see their faces right up ''until'' they kiss, at which point a bright gym light obscures them.
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* NecktieLeash: The boy who draws phallic compound diagrams by their chemistry teacher.
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* NecktieLeash: The boy who draws phallic compound diagrams by and has a crush on their chemistry teacher.teacher is delighted when said teacher uses his tie to pull him to her.
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* PairTheSpares: SubvertedTrope. At the end, Mark tries to {{Invoke|dTrope}} the trope by going over, siting down next to Jenny and puting his arm around her… and she {{Defie|dTrope}}s the trope by telling him to get lost.
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* PairTheSpares: SubvertedTrope. At the end, Mark tries to {{Invoke|dTrope}} the trope by going over, siting down next to Jenny and puting putting his arm around her… and she {{Defie|dTrope}}s the trope by telling him to get lost.
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** Their school is called V.C. Andrews High School. Creator/VCAndrews was the author of ''Literature/FlowersInTheAttic'', as well as several other incestuous stories.
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** Their school is called V.C. Andrews High School. Creator/VCAndrews was the author of ''Literature/FlowersInTheAttic'', as well as several other incestuous stories.
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--->'''Alex:''' It looks like a gift from a skinhead's baby-shower.
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--->'''Alex:''' And now we come to the shirt from the late period of UsefulNotes/CharlesManson.
--->'''Katie:''' I was thinking it was more like "Baby Gap presents the Creator/TimBurton line."
--->'''Alex:''' And now we come to the shirt from the late period of UsefulNotes/CharlesManson.
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--->'''Alex:''' It looks like a gift from a skinhead's baby-shower.
--->'''Katie:'''baby-shower.\\
'''Katie:''' I was thinking it was more like "Baby Gap presents the Creator/TimBurton line."
--->'''Alex:'''"\\
'''Alex:''' And now we come to the shirt from the late period of UsefulNotes/CharlesManson.
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'''Katie:''' I was thinking it was more like "Baby Gap presents the Creator/TimBurton line.
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'''Alex:''' And now we come to the shirt from the late period of UsefulNotes/CharlesManson.
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* ExcitedShowTitle: It's not just ''Incest: The Musical'', no--it's ''Incest'''!''' The Musical''.
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''Incest! The Musical'' is a quirky 2011 RomanticComedy ShortFilm that was funded on {{Website/Indiegogo}}. It's pretty much ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: {{Twincest}} and SpontaneousChoreography.
It was created by Kai de Mello-Folsom and Grant Reed. It stars Barrett Crake, Katy Yoder, Robyn Mack, and Tyler Mann.
It was created by Kai de Mello-Folsom and Grant Reed. It stars Barrett Crake, Katy Yoder, Robyn Mack, and Tyler Mann.
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''Incest! The Musical'' is a quirky 2011 RomanticComedy student ShortFilm that was funded on {{Website/Indiegogo}}. It's pretty much ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: {{Twincest}} and SpontaneousChoreography.
It was created by Kai de Mello-Folsom and Grant Reed. It stars Barrett Crake, Katy Yoder, Robyn Mack, and TylerMann.
Mann. It was the Thesis Film of students at Chapman University, Dodge College of Film and Media Arts.
It was created by Kai de Mello-Folsom and Grant Reed. It stars Barrett Crake, Katy Yoder, Robyn Mack, and Tyler
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** The "Cradleface" shirt
--->'''Alex:''' It looks like a gift from a skinhead's baby-shower.
--->'''Katie:''' I was thinking it was more like "Baby Gap presents the Creator/TimBurton line."
--->'''Alex:''' And now we come to the shirt from the late period of UsefulNotes/CharlesManson.
--->'''Alex:''' It looks like a gift from a skinhead's baby-shower.
--->'''Katie:''' I was thinking it was more like "Baby Gap presents the Creator/TimBurton line."
--->'''Alex:''' And now we come to the shirt from the late period of UsefulNotes/CharlesManson.
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''Incest! The Musical'' is a 2011 RomanticComedy ShortFilm that was funded on {{Website/Indiegogo}}. It's pretty much ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: {{Twincest}} and SpontaneousChoreography.
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''Incest! The Musical'' is a quirky 2011 RomanticComedy ShortFilm that was funded on {{Website/Indiegogo}}. It's pretty much ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: {{Twincest}} and SpontaneousChoreography.
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%% * BrotherSisterIncest: The premise of the film. Partially parodied, but still played fairly earnestly.
* CatapultNightmare: Alex in the beginning. It's not a ''nightmare'', but it ''is'' a shocking dream.
* CatapultNightmare: Alex in the beginning. It's not a ''nightmare'', but it ''is'' a shocking dream.
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* CatapultNightmare: Alex in the beginning. It's not a ''nightmare'', but it ''is'' a shocking
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* DarkReprise: "Chemistry" is an upbeat song about Alex and Katie getting excited about liking each other. Later at prom, Alex sings a few lines of it after Mark punches him. This time it's a sad a capella version--especially because the end of the line is left unfinished.
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* DarkReprise: "Chemistry" is an upbeat song about Alex and Katie getting excited about liking each other. Later at prom, Alex sings a few lines of it after Mark punches him. This time it's a sad a capella acapella version--especially because the end of the line is left unfinished.
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* BrotherSisterIncest[=/=]{{Twincest}}: The premise of the film. Partially parodied, but still played fairly earnestly.
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%% * BrotherSisterIncest[=/=]{{Twincest}}: BrotherSisterIncest: The premise of the film. Partially parodied, but still played fairly earnestly.
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* SpontaneousChoreography[=/=]CrowdSong: Not only is it a musical, it has ''The Musical'' right in the title! They're not going for subtlety with regard to the musical theatrics.
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* SpontaneousChoreography[=/=]CrowdSong: SpontaneousChoreography: Not only is it a musical, it has ''The Musical'' right in the title! They're not going for subtlety with regard to the musical theatrics.
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It's available on youtube [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-LXH3U0QaZk here]] and vimeo [[https://vimeo.com/24278425 here]].
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The plot revolves around Alex and Katie, who are meant for each other. Alex is student class president, and Katie is valedictorian. They're also twin brother and sister.
It's available onyoutube [=YouTube=] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-LXH3U0QaZk here]] and vimeo Vimeo [[https://vimeo.com/24278425 here]].
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* DarkReprise: "Chemistry" is an upbeat song about Alex and Katie getting excited about liking each other. Later at prom, Alex sings a few lines of it after Mark punches him. This time it's a sad acapella version--especially because the end of the line is left unfinished.
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* DarkReprise: "Chemistry" is an upbeat song about Alex and Katie getting excited about liking each other. Later at prom, Alex sings a few lines of it after Mark punches him. This time it's a sad acapella a capella version--especially because the end of the line is left unfinished.
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-->'''Alex''': Neutron walks into a bar, order a beer. The bartender smiles and says, "For you, no charge."
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-->'''Alex''': Neutron walks into a bar, order orders a beer. The bartender smiles and says, "For you, no charge."
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* ThirdTimesTheCharm: Probably unintentional, but [[spoiler:the ''first'' time Alex kisses his sister at school, Jenny sees, and she tells the school staff. The ''second'' time he kisses his sister at school, her boyfriend punches him in the face. The ''third'' time he kisses his sister at school… nobody minds and their classmates all willing become backup dancers for them.]]
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* ThirdTimesTheCharm: Probably unintentional, but [[spoiler:the ''first'' time Alex kisses his sister at school, Jenny sees, and she tells the school staff. The ''second'' time he kisses his sister at school, her boyfriend punches him in the face. The ''third'' time he kisses his sister at school… nobody minds and their classmates all willing willingly become backup dancers for them.]]
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It's available on youtube [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-LXH3U0QaZk here]] and vimeo [[https://vimeo.com/24278425 here]].
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It has 4 songs: "Wrong Kind of Love," which is Alex's song, "Ten Years," which is Katie's song, and "Chemistry," and "I Know It's Wrong," which are both [[LetsDuet duets]].
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It has 4 songs: was created by Kai de Mello-Folsom and Grant Reed. It stars Barrett Crake, Katy Yoder, Robyn Mack, and Tyler Mann.
!!! Songs
# "Wrong Kind ofLove," which is Alex's song, Love"
# "TenYears," which is Katie's song, and "Chemistry," and Years"
# "Chemistry"
# "I Know It'sWrong," which are both [[LetsDuet duets]].
Wrong"
!!! Songs
# "Wrong Kind of
# "Ten
# "Chemistry"
# "I Know It's
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** During "Ten Years", the airline company is called [[{{Pun}} Receding Airlines]].
** When Katie gets the letter announcing she's valedictorian, the address reads "240 Winslet Ave / Kensington, IN 46299" in an allusion to Creator/KateWinslet--yet another ShoutOut to ''Film/Titanic1997''.
** During "Ten Years", the airline company is called [[{{Pun}} Receding Airlines]].
** When Katie gets the letter announcing she's valedictorian, the address reads "240 Winslet Ave / Kensington, IN 46299" in an allusion to Creator/KateWinslet--yet another ShoutOut to ''Film/Titanic1997''.
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* FreezeFrameBonus:
**FreezeFrameBonus: During "Ten Years", the airline company is called [[{{Pun}} Receding Airlines]].
** When Katie gets the letter announcing she's valedictorian, the address reads "240 Winslet Ave / Kensington, IN 46299" in an allusion to Creator/KateWinslet--yet another ShoutOut to ''Film/Titanic1997''.Airlines]].
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** When Katie gets the letter announcing she's valedictorian, the address reads "240 Winslet Ave / Kensington, IN 46299" in an allusion to Creator/KateWinslet--yet another ShoutOut to ''Film/Titanic1997''.
*** When Katie gets the letter announcing she's valedictorian, the address reads "240 Winslet Ave / Kensington, IN 46299" in an allusion to Creator/KateWinslet.
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** Alex claims that "{{Series/Donny and Marie}} got away with it," "it" being incest.
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** Alex claims that claims, "{{Series/Donny and Marie}} got away with it," "it" being incest.it [incest]."
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Ethnics say hello to your saviorrrr!
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Ethnics say hello to your saviorrrr!saviorrrr!
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* PlotParallel: The main plot is about {{twincest}} couple Alex and Katie getting together. There's a TeacherStudentRomance subplot wherein the boy who draws phallic compound diagrams and their chemistry teacher get together. In the DancePartyEnding, there are several same-sex couples dancing. There's the line about how the [=PTA=] is boycotting the theater department's production of ''{{Theatre/Rent}}'' because of its "depiction of non-normative sexual relationships." There are several references to ''Film/Titanic1997''--the story of an InterClassRomance. This all builds toward the message that no consensual relationships should be categorically banned.
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* PlotParallel: The main plot is about {{twincest}} couple Alex and Katie getting together. There's a TeacherStudentRomance subplot wherein the boy who draws phallic compound diagrams and their chemistry teacher get together. In the DancePartyEnding, there are several same-sex couples dancing. There's the line about how the [=PTA=] is boycotting the theater department's production of ''{{Theatre/Rent}}'' because of its "depiction of non-normative sexual relationships." There are several references to ''Film/Titanic1997''--the story of romance with an InterClassRomance.UptownGirl. This all builds toward the message that no consensual relationships should be categorically banned.
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** When Katie gets the letter annoying she's valedictorian, the address reads "240 Winslet Ave / Kensington, IN 46299" in an allusion to Creator/KateWinslet--yet another ShoutOut to ''Film/Titanic1997''.
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** When Katie gets the letter annoying announcing she's valedictorian, the address reads "240 Winslet Ave / Kensington, IN 46299" in an allusion to Creator/KateWinslet--yet another ShoutOut to ''Film/Titanic1997''.
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* MusicalWorldHypotheses: This story pretty clearly adheres to the the Adaptation Hypothesis, meaning the songs are non-diegetic (part of the storytelling rather than part of the story). This is made apparent during "Chemistry." It starts out with just Alex and Katie singing in the hallway, but then escalates. At it's height, there are {{dramatic spotlight}}s and [[SummonBackupDancers backup dancers]]. But at the very end of the number, all that cuts away and we're left with Katie and Mark kissing, alone and in a different room than the dance scene took place in. However, this is not a ''new screen''--their kiss is the culmination of the whole song. This shows pretty clearly that--in ''this'' movie--song and dance numbers are symbolic, rather than literal in-universe events that actually happened.
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* MusicalWorldHypotheses: This story pretty clearly adheres to the the Adaptation Hypothesis, meaning the songs are non-diegetic (part of the storytelling rather than part of the story). This is made apparent during "Chemistry." It starts out with just Alex and Katie singing in the hallway, but then escalates. At it's its height, there are {{dramatic spotlight}}s and [[SummonBackupDancers backup dancers]]. But at the very end of the number, all that cuts away and we're left with Katie and Mark kissing, alone and in a different room than the dance scene took place in. However, this is not a ''new screen''--their kiss is the culmination of the whole song. This shows pretty clearly that--in ''this'' movie--song and dance numbers are symbolic, rather than literal in-universe events that actually happened.
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-->'''Principle''': And I thought I'd seen everything, and that includes an unfortunate incident last year involving one of the frogs used for dissection...
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** Their school is called V. C. Andrews High School. Creator/VCAndrews was the author of ''Literature/FlowersInTheAttic'', as well as several other incestuous stories.
** During the song "Ten Years" there's a scene where Mark is working at a Greek coffee shop called Oedi's, an allusion to ''Theatre/OedipusTheKing''. (The chalkboard says, "Try our new familial frappe!")
** During the song "Ten Years" there's a scene where Mark is working at a Greek coffee shop called Oedi's, an allusion to ''Theatre/OedipusTheKing''. (The chalkboard says, "Try our new familial frappe!")
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** Their school is called V. C. Andrews High School. Creator/VCAndrews was the author of ''Literature/FlowersInTheAttic'', as well as several other incestuous stories.
** During the song "Ten Years" there's a scene where Mark is working at a Greek coffee shop called Oedi's, an allusion to ''Theatre/OedipusTheKing''.(The The chalkboard says, "Try our new familial frappe!")frappe!"
** During the song "Ten Years" there's a scene where Mark is working at a Greek coffee shop called Oedi's, an allusion to ''Theatre/OedipusTheKing''.
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-->'''Katie''': The minute you're born they tell you,\\
To grow up in a certain way.\\
To grow up in a certain way.\\
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To toughen up and follow it.\\
I know it's wrong,\\
But I just don't give a shit.
* SoUnfunnyItsFunny: Katie acknowledges that the neutron joke is terrible. But she appreciates it anyways, and when Mark ''doesn't'', that's a sign that they're ill-suited to each other.
I know it's wrong,\\
But I just don't give a shit.
* SoUnfunnyItsFunny: Katie acknowledges that the neutron joke is terrible. But she appreciates it anyways, and when Mark ''doesn't'', that's a sign that they're ill-suited to each other.
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* SoUnfunnyItsFunny: Katie acknowledges that the neutron joke is terrible. But she appreciates itanyways, anyway, and when Mark ''doesn't'', that's a sign that they're ill-suited to each other.
I know it's
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* SoUnfunnyItsFunny: Katie acknowledges that the neutron joke is terrible. But she appreciates it
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* ThirdTimesTheCharm: Probably unintentional, but [[spoiler:the ''first'' time Alex kisses his sister at school, Jenny sees, and her tells the school staff. The ''second'' time he kisses his sister at school, her boyfriend punches him in the face. The ''third'' time he kisses his sister at school… nobody minds and their classmates all willing become backup dancers for them.]]
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* ThirdTimesTheCharm: Probably unintentional, but [[spoiler:the ''first'' time Alex kisses his sister at school, Jenny sees, and her she tells the school staff. The ''second'' time he kisses his sister at school, her boyfriend punches him in the face. The ''third'' time he kisses his sister at school… nobody minds and their classmates all willing become backup dancers for them.]]
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It has 4 songs: "Wrong Kind of Love," "Ten Years," "Chemistry," and "I Know It's Wrong."
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It has 4 songs: "Wrong Kind of Love," which is Alex's song, "Ten Years," which is Katie's song, and "Chemistry," and "I Know It's Wrong."
Wrong," which are both [[LetsDuet duets]].
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* MusicalWorldHypotheses: This story pretty clearly adheres to the the Adaptation Hypothesis, meaning the songs are non-diegetic (part of the storytelling rather than part of the story). This is made apparent during "Chemistry." It starts out with just Alex and Katie singing in the hallway, but then escalates. At it's height, there are {{dramatic spotlight}}s and backup dancers. But at the very end of the number, all that cuts away and we're left with Katie and Mark kissing, alone and in a different room than the dance scene took place in. However, this is not a ''new screen''--their kiss is the culmination of the whole song. This shows pretty clearly that--in ''this'' movie--song and dance numbers are symbolic, rather than literal in-universe events that actually happened.
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* MusicalWorldHypotheses: This story pretty clearly adheres to the the Adaptation Hypothesis, meaning the songs are non-diegetic (part of the storytelling rather than part of the story). This is made apparent during "Chemistry." It starts out with just Alex and Katie singing in the hallway, but then escalates. At it's height, there are {{dramatic spotlight}}s and [[SummonBackupDancers backup dancers.dancers]]. But at the very end of the number, all that cuts away and we're left with Katie and Mark kissing, alone and in a different room than the dance scene took place in. However, this is not a ''new screen''--their kiss is the culmination of the whole song. This shows pretty clearly that--in ''this'' movie--song and dance numbers are symbolic, rather than literal in-universe events that actually happened.
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* DelayedReaction: At prom, when Alex kisses Katie, it takes Mark a few moments to parse it. He punches Alex--then apologizes--then says, "What the hell man?!"
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* RecordNeedleScratch: At prom, Alex rushes across the room to Katie and the music swells. Then he kisses her, and there's a record needle scratching to a halt, indicating not ''their'' surprise so much as the bewildered shock of everyone watching them.
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** When Katie gets the letter annoying she's valedictorian, the address reads "240 Winslet Ave / Kensington, IN 46299" in an allusion to Creator/KateWinslet.
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** When Katie gets the letter annoying she's valedictorian, the address reads "240 Winslet Ave / Kensington, IN 46299" in an allusion to Creator/KateWinslet.Creator/KateWinslet--yet another ShoutOut to ''Film/Titanic1997''.