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* SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan: {{Downplayed}}. [[GrumpyBear Zoro]] may not be the kindest person of the planet, but when he shows Luffy his HiddenHeartOfGold, she falls in love with him.
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* SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan: {{Downplayed}}. [[GrumpyBear Zoro]] Zoro may not be the kindest person of the planet, but when he shows Luffy his HiddenHeartOfGold, she falls in love with him.
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: [[TheStoic Stoic]], [[GrumpyBear cynical]] and [[{{IceKing}} cold-hearted]] Zoro is madly in love with [[NiceGirl sweet]], [[ThePollyanna optimistic]] and [[TheIngenue innocent]] Luffy.
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: [[TheStoic Stoic]], [[GrumpyBear cynical]] cynical and [[{{IceKing}} cold-hearted]] Zoro is madly in love with [[NiceGirl sweet]], [[ThePollyanna optimistic]] and [[TheIngenue innocent]] Luffy.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: {{Exaggerated}} in this story. Zoro, during his demon phase, became a ruthless and cruel fighter, willing to hurt even his own crewmates, but [[spoiler: when Luffy, who was miracolusly cured by Chopper]], arrived in the nick of time to stop his rage, his heart melt and became as gentle as a lamb.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: {{Exaggerated}} in this story. Zoro, during his demon phase, became a ruthless and cruel fighter, willing to hurt even his own crewmates, but [[spoiler: when Luffy, who was miracolusly miraculously cured by Chopper]], arrived in the nick of time to stop his rage, his heart melt and became as gentle as a lamb.
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[[MasterSwordsman Zoro]] has always been in love with [[TheCaptain Luffy]] (who's [[GenderFlip female]] in this story) since the first time he met her, [[InsecureLoveInterest but never had the courage to confess her his feelings]]. Sadly, one day, Luffy get short by a Marine Captain and Zoro goes in a RoaringRampageOfRevenge for the [[spoiler: supposed]] death of his beloved captain.
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[[MasterSwordsman Zoro]] has always been in love with [[TheCaptain Luffy]] (who's [[GenderFlip female]] in this story) since the first time he met her, [[InsecureLoveInterest but never had the courage to confess her his feelings]]. Sadly, one day, Luffy get short shot by a Marine Captain and Zoro goes in a RoaringRampageOfRevenge for the [[spoiler: supposed]] death of his beloved captain.
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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: {{Downplayed}}. Zoro may brash and cold but the true reason Luffy loves him are his selflessness, his courage and his loyalty.
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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: {{Downplayed}}. Zoro may be brash and cold but the true reason Luffy loves him are his selflessness, his courage and his loyalty.
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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: {{Downplayed}}. Zoro may brash and cold but the true reason Luffy loves him are his selflessness, his courage and his loyalty.
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* BruiserWithASoftCenter: Zoro may seem to be an extremely ruthless warrior, but he's extremely sweet towards Luffy.
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* SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan: {{Downplayed}}. [[GrumpyBear Zoro]] may not be the kindest person of the planet, but when he shows Luffy his [[HiddenHeartOfGold]], she falls in love with him.
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* SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan: {{Downplayed}}. [[GrumpyBear Zoro]] may not be the kindest person of the planet, but when he shows Luffy his [[HiddenHeartOfGold]], HiddenHeartOfGold, she falls in love with him.
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* BattleCouple: {{Implied}} with [[TedOniBlueOni Franky and Robin]].
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* BattleCouple: {{Implied}} with [[TedOniBlueOni [[RedOniBlueOni Franky and Robin]].
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* AssholeVictim: Zoro became a literally demon when Luffy was fatally wound by a {{Jerkass}} of a Marine Captain.
* BattleCouple: {{Implied}} with [[TedOniBlueOni Franky and Robin]].
* BattleCouple: {{Implied}} with [[TedOniBlueOni Franky and Robin]].
** {{Averted}} with [[LovableCoward Usopp]] who, despite his fearful nature, put on a brave face to save a wounded Luffy from the battlefield and from Zoro's RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* {{Jerkass}}: The Marines captain who [[spoiler: almost]] killed Luffy.
* {{Jerkass}}: The Marines captain who [[spoiler: almost]] killed Luffy.
* InsecureLoveInterest: Zoro is afraid that Luffy won't return his feelings because she would think that he wants to jeopardize their friendship.
* KarmaHoudini: The Marine captain who [[spoiler: almost]] killed Luffy gets his head cut off by Zoro and his body is thrown into the sea like if it was rubbish.
* KarmaHoudini: The Marine captain who [[spoiler: almost]] killed Luffy gets his head cut off by Zoro and his body is thrown into the sea like if it was rubbish.
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* NotSoStoic: {{Exagerrated}}. Zoro became extremely traumatize when Luffy was shot and his inner demone unleashed all of the fury he was trying to control inside himself.
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* NotSoStoic: {{Exagerrated}}. {{Exaggerated}}. Zoro became extremely traumatize traumatized when Luffy was shot and his inner demone unleashed all of the fury he was trying to control inside himself.
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* SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan: {{Downplayed}}. [[GrumpyBear Zoro]] may not be the kindest person of the planet, but when he shows Luffy his [[HiddenHeartOfGold]], she falls in love with him.
* SugarAndIcePersonality: Despite his apparently cold nature, Zoro has a huge soft spot for Luffy.
* SugarAndIcePersonality: Despite his apparently cold nature, Zoro has a huge soft spot for Luffy.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8537475/1/You net/s/8537475/1/ You are no Demon]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' fanfiction written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2572390/ Pen-Woman]]''.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: {{Exagerrated}} in this story. Zoro, during his demon phase, became a ruthless and cruel fighter, willing to hurt even his own crewmates, but [[spoiler: when Luffy, who was miracolusly cured by Chopper]], arrived in the nick of time to stop his rage, his heart melt and became as gentle as a lamb.
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* DirtyCoward: The Marine soldiers had the guts to abandon the Straw Hat Crew to Zoro's homicidal fury.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold:{{Exagerrated}} {{Exaggerated}} in this story. Zoro, during his demon phase, became a ruthless and cruel fighter, willing to hurt even his own crewmates, but [[spoiler: when Luffy, who was miracolusly cured by Chopper]], arrived in the nick of time to stop his rage, his heart melt and became as gentle as a lamb.
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* NotSoStoic: {{Exagerrated}}. Zoro became extremely traumatize when Luffy was shot and his inner demone unleashed all of the fury he was trying to control inside himself.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: The main reason of Zoro's fury was to avenge Luffy's death.
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[[MasterSwordsman Zoro]] has always been in love with [[TheCaptain Luffy]] (who's [[GenderFlip female]] in this story) since the first time he met her, [[InsecureLoveInterest but never had the courage to confess her his feelings]].
Sadly, one day, Luffy get short by a Marine Captain and Zoro goes in a RoaringRampageOfRevenge for the [[spoiler: supposed]] death of his beloved captain.
Sadly, one day, Luffy get short by a Marine Captain and Zoro goes in a RoaringRampageOfRevenge for the [[spoiler: supposed]] death of his beloved captain.
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[[MasterSwordsman Zoro]] has always been in love with [[TheCaptain Luffy]] (who's [[GenderFlip female]] in this story) since the first time he met her, [[InsecureLoveInterest but never had the courage to confess her his feelings]].
feelings]]. Sadly, one day, Luffy get short by a Marine Captain and Zoro goes in a RoaringRampageOfRevenge for the [[spoiler: supposed]] death of his beloved captain.
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: [[TheStoic Stoic]], [[GrumpyBear cynical]] and [[{{IceKing}} cold-hearted]] Zoro is madly in love with [[NiceGirl sweet]], [[ThePollyanna optimistic]] and [[TheIngenue innocent]] Luffy.
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: [[TheStoic Stoic]], [[GrumpyBear cynical]] and [[{{IceKing}} cold-hearted]] Zoro is madly in love with [[NiceGirl sweet]], [[ThePollyanna optimistic]] and [[TheIngenue innocent]] Luffy.Luffy.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: {{Exagerrated}} in this story. Zoro, during his demon phase, became a ruthless and cruel fighter, willing to hurt even his own crewmates, but [[spoiler: when Luffy, who was miracolusly cured by Chopper]], arrived in the nick of time to stop his rage, his heart melt and became as gentle as a lamb.
* LoveRedeems: [[spoiler: When Luffy was saved by Chopper]] and hugged Zoro when he was about to kill Sanji, Franky, Robin and Brook, the green-haired swordsman was freed from his inner demon and [[TearsOfJoy cried with joy]] for his captain's return.
* [[spoiler: OfficialCouple]]: At the end of the story, [[spoiler: Luffy returns Zoro's feeling and becomes his girlfriend]].
* ShipTease: It seems that, because of their interactions, [[GentleGiant Franky]] and [[SugarAndIcePersonality Robin]] may have feelings for each other.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Demon!Zoro is extremely ruthless and cruel and was willing to hurt his own crewmates.
* {{Yandere}}: Zoro is extremely protective of Luffy and can become extremely murderous when someone tries to hurt her.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: {{Exagerrated}} in this story. Zoro, during his demon phase, became a ruthless and cruel fighter, willing to hurt even his own crewmates, but [[spoiler: when Luffy, who was miracolusly cured by Chopper]], arrived in the nick of time to stop his rage, his heart melt and became as gentle as a lamb.
* LoveRedeems: [[spoiler: When Luffy was saved by Chopper]] and hugged Zoro when he was about to kill Sanji, Franky, Robin and Brook, the green-haired swordsman was freed from his inner demon and [[TearsOfJoy cried with joy]] for his captain's return.
* [[spoiler: OfficialCouple]]: At the end of the story, [[spoiler: Luffy returns Zoro's feeling and becomes his girlfriend]].
* ShipTease: It seems that, because of their interactions, [[GentleGiant Franky]] and [[SugarAndIcePersonality Robin]] may have feelings for each other.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Demon!Zoro is extremely ruthless and cruel and was willing to hurt his own crewmates.
* {{Yandere}}: Zoro is extremely protective of Luffy and can become extremely murderous when someone tries to hurt her.
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* BerserkButton: {{Exagerrated}}. When Zoro saw Luffy being fatally wounded by the Marine captain and thought that she was dead, his inner demon unleashed all of its fury, making him unable to distinguish a friend from a foe and making him killing everyone he meets.
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* BerserkButton: {{Exagerrated}}. When {{Exaggerated}}. Zoro saw Luffy being fatally wounded by the Marine captain doesn't take it kindly at all when someone tries to hurt Luffy.
* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: [[TheStoic Stoic]], [[GrumpyBear cynical]] andthought that she was dead, his inner demon unleashed all of its fury, making him unable to distinguish a friend from a foe [[{{IceKing}} cold-hearted]] Zoro is madly in love with [[NiceGirl sweet]], [[ThePollyanna optimistic]] and making him killing everyone he meets.[[TheIngenue innocent]] Luffy.
* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: [[TheStoic Stoic]], [[GrumpyBear cynical]] and
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[[MasterSwordsman Zoro]] has always been in love with [[TheCaptain Luffy]] (who's [[GenderFlip female]] in this story) since the first time he met her, [[InsecureLoveInterest but never had the courage to confess her his feelings]].
Sadly, one day, Luffy get short by a Marine Captain and Zoro goes in a RoaringRampageOfRevenge for the [[spoiler: supposed]] death of his beloved captain.
!!This fanfiction contains examples of:
* BerserkButton: {{Exagerrated}}. When Zoro saw Luffy being fatally wounded by the Marine captain and thought that she was dead, his inner demon unleashed all of its fury, making him unable to distinguish a friend from a foe and making him killing everyone he meets.
[[MasterSwordsman Zoro]] has always been in love with [[TheCaptain Luffy]] (who's [[GenderFlip female]] in this story) since the first time he met her, [[InsecureLoveInterest but never had the courage to confess her his feelings]].
Sadly, one day, Luffy get short by a Marine Captain and Zoro goes in a RoaringRampageOfRevenge for the [[spoiler: supposed]] death of his beloved captain.
!!This fanfiction contains examples of:
* BerserkButton: {{Exagerrated}}. When Zoro saw Luffy being fatally wounded by the Marine captain and thought that she was dead, his inner demon unleashed all of its fury, making him unable to distinguish a friend from a foe and making him killing everyone he meets.
