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* FetishesAreWeird: As part of a metaphor, Nick offhandedly mentions finding 'little fellows who put on scuba-gear and pay big gals to [[SwallowedWhole swallow them]]' as weird.
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* RunningGag: Someone using [=WildeHopps=] as a PortmanteauCoupleName, and someone else commenting that it sounds like something else (like a pub, for example).
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* RunningGag: RunningGag:[[invoked]] Someone using [=WildeHopps=] as a PortmanteauCoupleName, and someone else commenting that it sounds like something else (like a pub, for example).
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* ToThePain: More or less Finn's whole raison d'être, prolonging his [[DeadlyEuphemism play time]] for as long as possible using his [[HiddenDepths surprisingly advanced]] medical knowledge.
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* ToThePain: ToThePain:
** More or less Finn's whole raison d'être, prolonging his [[DeadlyEuphemism play time]] for as long as possible using his [[HiddenDepths surprisingly advanced]] medical knowledge.
** More or less Finn's whole raison d'être, prolonging his [[DeadlyEuphemism play time]] for as long as possible using his [[HiddenDepths surprisingly advanced]] medical knowledge.
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The fic, written by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/WriteAnon/profile WriteAnon]] can be found in its entirety [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6413431/chapters/14682178 here]]. The fic itself is a bit on the long side and is rated a R for extreme graphic violence and mature subject matter.
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The fic, written by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/WriteAnon/profile WriteAnon]] Creator/{{WriteAnon}} can be found in its entirety [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6413431/chapters/14682178 here]]. The fic itself is a bit on the long side and is rated a R for extreme graphic violence and mature subject matter.
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A year and a half after the events of ''Disney/{{Zootopia}}'', Nick Wilde and Judy Hopps bid fond farewell to their lives as beat patrolers and take their first steps as official detectives of the Zootopia Police Department. Before long, Nick and Judy are assigned an utterly mundane break and enter as their first case. However, all is not as it seems, and soon the seemingly straightforward case spirals out of control until the detective duo find themselves embroiled in a plot to destroy Zootopia. Time is a factor and millions of lives hang in the balance; can Team Wildehopps solve the mystery and save their home?
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A year and a half after the events of ''Disney/{{Zootopia}}'', ''WesternAnimation/{{Zootopia}}'', Nick Wilde and Judy Hopps bid fond farewell to their lives as beat patrolers and take their first steps as official detectives of the Zootopia Police Department. Before long, Nick and Judy are assigned an utterly mundane break and enter as their first case. However, all is not as it seems, and soon the seemingly straightforward case spirals out of control until the detective duo find themselves embroiled in a plot to destroy Zootopia. Time is a factor and millions of lives hang in the balance; can Team Wildehopps solve the mystery and save their home?
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Now has a sequel written by [=WriteAnon=] and drawn by [=MisterMead=] (of ''Judy Is Dead'' fame) called [[http://mistermead.tumblr.com/post/156189723086/water-under-the-burrows-finally-the-first-chapter Water Under The Burrows]]. A dramatic reading in in progress [[https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/sets/audiobook-water-under-the here]]. [[https://imgur.com/a/RTBm0 A more comprehensive version is here.]]
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A dramatic reading in in progress [[https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/sets/audiobook-water-under-the here]].
Now has a sequel written by [=WriteAnon=] and drawn by [=MisterMead=] (of ''Judy Is Dead'' fame) called [[http://mistermead.tumblr.com/post/156189723086/water-under-the-burrows-finally-the-first-chapter Water Under The Burrows]]. A dramatic reading in in progress [[https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/sets/audiobook-water-under-the here]]. [[https://imgur.com/a/RTBm0 A more comprehensive version is here.]]
Now has a sequel written by [=WriteAnon=] and drawn by [=MisterMead=] (of ''Judy Is Dead'' fame) called [[http://mistermead.tumblr.com/post/156189723086/water-under-the-burrows-finally-the-first-chapter Water Under The Burrows]].
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Now has a sequel written by [=WriteAnon=] and drawn by [=MisterMead=] (of ''Judy Is Dead'' fame) called [[http://mistermead.tumblr.com/post/156189723086/water-under-the-burrows-finally-the-first-chapter Water Under The Burrows]]. A dramatic reading in in progress [[https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/sets/audiobook-water-under-the here]].
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Now has a sequel written by [=WriteAnon=] and drawn by [=MisterMead=] (of ''Judy Is Dead'' fame) called [[http://mistermead.tumblr.com/post/156189723086/water-under-the-burrows-finally-the-first-chapter Water Under The Burrows]]. A dramatic reading in in progress [[https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/sets/audiobook-water-under-the here]].
here]]. [[https://imgur.com/a/RTBm0 A more comprehensive version is here.]]
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Now has a sequel written by [=WriteAnon=] and drawn by [=MisterMead=] (of ''Judy Is Dead'' fame) called [[http://mistermead.tumblr.com/post/156189723086/water-under-the-burrows-finally-the-first-chapter Water Under The Burrows]].
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Now has a sequel written by [=WriteAnon=] and drawn by [=MisterMead=] (of ''Judy Is Dead'' fame) called [[http://mistermead.tumblr.com/post/156189723086/water-under-the-burrows-finally-the-first-chapter Water Under The Burrows]].
Burrows]]. A dramatic reading in in progress [[https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/sets/audiobook-water-under-the here]].
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* HoldYourHippogriffs: In an UnusualEuphemism way: the swears are rendered to a similar term used for animals in our world, such as "rut" and "scat".
** Also, it pops up in other places, such as "I’ve got a team on it and they’re wrapping up as we bleat."
** Also, it pops up in other places, such as "I’ve got a team on it and they’re wrapping up as we bleat."
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** When confronting The Boss, a couple of large animals hold Judy down so the BigBad can do some evil gloating. [[spoiler:Turns out Bellwether thought that the conversation wasn't being recorded. Richard was able to get into the system and record her rant. As soon as this is made evident, Judy has left, with the guards on the floor.]]
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** When confronting The Boss, a couple of large animals hold Judy down so the BigBad can do some evil gloating. [[spoiler:Turns out Bellwether thought that the conversation wasn't being recorded. Richard was able to get into the system and record her rant. As soon as this is made evident, Judy has left, with incapacitated the guards on the floor.guards.]]
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* WorthyOpponent: Grigori sees Judy as one, [[spoiler: and she was able to incapacitate him, while he has been known to take down larger predators.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350: [[PortmanteauCoupleName WildeHopps?]] [[RunningGag Sounds like an old timey dance or something]] ]]
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[[caption-width-right:350: [[PortmanteauCoupleName WildeHopps?]] [[RunningGag Sounds like an old timey dance or something]] something]].]]
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Manny Beetz, you are under arrest for suspected breaking and entering, suspected burglary, possession of stolen property, resisting and evading arrest, assault on an officer of Zootopia Police Department, and (...) one parking violation.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Manny "Manny Beetz, you are under arrest for suspected breaking and entering, suspected burglary, possession of stolen property, resisting and evading arrest, assault on an officer of Zootopia Police Department, and (...) one parking violation."
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywakling: Manny Beetz, you are under arrest for suspected breaking and entering, suspected burglary, possession of stolen property, resisting and evading arrest, assault on an officer of Zootopia Police Department, and (...) one parking violation.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywakling: ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Manny Beetz, you are under arrest for suspected breaking and entering, suspected burglary, possession of stolen property, resisting and evading arrest, assault on an officer of Zootopia Police Department, and (...) one parking violation.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywakling: Manny Beetz, you are under arrest for suspected breaking and entering, suspected burglary, possession of stolen property, resisting and evading arrest, assault on an officer of Zootopia Police Department, and (...) one parking violation.
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*BodyHorror: In other, less civilized parts of the world, violent offenders are 'rounded off', a process by which their natural weapons (claws, fangs, horns, antlers, etc) are surgically removed. Grigori had the procedure done [[CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon with a pair of pliers.]]
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* CrazyHomelessPeople: Nick's old 'acting coach', Shakespeare. According to Nick, he wanders the city putting on one-man performances of the works of William Shakespeare. He's a little...odd.
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* CrazyHomelessPeople: Nick's old 'acting coach', Shakespeare. According to Nick, he wanders the city putting on one-man performances of the works of William Shakespeare. He's a little... odd.
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* ToThePain: More or less Finn's whole raison d'être, prolonging his [[DeadlyEuphemism play time]] for as long as possible using his [[HiddedDepths surprisingly advanced]] medical knowledge.
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* ToThePain: More or less Finn's whole raison d'être, prolonging his [[DeadlyEuphemism play time]] for as long as possible using his [[HiddedDepths [[HiddenDepths surprisingly advanced]] medical knowledge.
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* AffablyEvil: Every single one of the villains are charming to some extent, but Finn fits this trope the best. The ferret is quick-witted and chipper even towards people he wants to [[TortureTechnician chew on]].
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* AffablyEvil: Every single one of the villains are charming to some extent, but Finn fits this trope the best. The ferret is quick-witted even friendly and chipper even towards the people he wants to [[TortureTechnician chew on]].
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*VillainousFriendship: Elim, Finn, and Grigori all seem to genuinely like each other and enjoy each other's company.
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*ToThePain: More or less Finn's whole raison d'être, prolonging his [[DeadlyEuphemism play time]] for as long as possible using his [[HiddedDepths surprisingly advanced]] medical knowledge.
**Grigori, in the climax, vows to inflict this on Nick after the latter [[spoiler:accidentally kills Elim.]]
**Grigori, in the climax, vows to inflict this on Nick after the latter [[spoiler:accidentally kills Elim.]]
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* DamselOutOfDistress: Two times, both by Judy:
** In the climax, Finn has Judy [[spoiler:tied up to a chair. With her wits and strength, she was able to break out of the chair and even use a bit of it as an improvised weapon.]]
** When confronting The Boss, a couple of large animals hold Judy down so the BigBad can do some evil gloating. [[spoiler:Turns out Bellwether thought that the conversation wasn't being recorded. Richard was able to get into the system and record her rant. As soon as this is made evident, Judy has left, with the guards on the floor.]]
** In the climax, Finn has Judy [[spoiler:tied up to a chair. With her wits and strength, she was able to break out of the chair and even use a bit of it as an improvised weapon.]]
** When confronting The Boss, a couple of large animals hold Judy down so the BigBad can do some evil gloating. [[spoiler:Turns out Bellwether thought that the conversation wasn't being recorded. Richard was able to get into the system and record her rant. As soon as this is made evident, Judy has left, with the guards on the floor.]]
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* HoldYourHippogriffs: In a PardonMyKlingon way: the swears are rendered to a similar term used for animals in our world, such as "rut" and "scat".
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* HoldYourHippogriffs: In a PardonMyKlingon an UnusualEuphemism way: the swears are rendered to a similar term used for animals in our world, such as "rut" and "scat".
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* PunnyName: A [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dik-dik dik-dik]] named Richard Richardson. So naturally, people call him Dick-Dick.
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* HollywoodHacking: The particular specialty of Dick Dick the Dik-Dik.
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* WierdnessMagnet: Judy and Nick have earned themselves a reputation as this, and is one of the reasons they've been promoted to detective. After all, they already solved several big name cases, might as well make it their full time job. Then they get sent on a routine break in...
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