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* HotMom: Elaine may be have gray hairs and is older than nick, but he admits she still has a strong and youthful look about her.
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* HotMom: Elaine may be have gray hairs and is older than nick, Nick, but he admits she still has a strong and youthful look about her.
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* FriendlySniper: Isaac, a kid version.
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A [[Left4Dead Left 4 Dead 2]] fanfiction by [[http://disrupted-original.deviantart.com/ Disrupted Original]] that takes place after the ending of the game. Apparently the survivors were slated to be brought to [[AllThereInTheManual a fleet of cruise ships]]. The author takes this idea and runs with it, having the cruise ship crash and/or sink into the ocean. The game's party of four becomes separated from each other. This story follows Nick as he tries to reunite with them.
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A [[Left4Dead Left 4 Dead 2]] fanfiction by [[http://disrupted-original.deviantart.com/ [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1586803/Disrupted-Original Disrupted Original]] that takes place after the ending of the game. Apparently the survivors were slated to be brought to [[AllThereInTheManual a fleet of cruise ships]]. The author takes this idea and runs with it, having the cruise ship crash and/or sink into the ocean. The game's party of four becomes separated from each other. This story follows Nick as he tries to reunite with them.
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* DeTerminator: Nick, who was willing to risk getting a brain hemorrhage after a nasty fight with a charger rather than sit and wait for his wounds to heal. To a lesser extent, Rob.
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* DeTerminator: TheDeterminator: Nick, who was willing to risk getting a brain hemorrhage after a nasty fight with a charger rather than sit and wait for his wounds to heal. To a lesser extent, Rob.
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... and I hate my keyboard.
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* ImAHumanitarian: It's never blatantly revealed, but rather hinted that a pair of survivors Nick runs into would have liked to [[WorndOfPun have him over for dinner]].
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* ImAHumanitarian: It's never blatantly revealed, but rather hinted that a pair of survivors Nick runs into would have liked to [[WorndOfPun [[WorldOfPun have him over for dinner]].
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You don\'t do cleanup by exchanging dirt for trash. Incredibly Lame Pun is for In Universe Examples only.
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* ImAHumanitarian: It's never blatantly revealed, but rather hinted that a pair of survivors Nick runs into would have liked to [[IncrediblyLamePun have him over for dinner]].
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* ImAHumanitarian: It's never blatantly revealed, but rather hinted that a pair of survivors Nick runs into would have liked to [[IncrediblyLamePun [[WorndOfPun have him over for dinner]].
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A Worldwide Punomenon cleanup
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* ImAHumanitarian: It's never blatantly revealed, but rather hinted that a pair of survivors Nick runs into would have liked to [[AWorldwidePunomenon have him over for dinner]].
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* ImAHumanitarian: It's never blatantly revealed, but rather hinted that a pair of survivors Nick runs into would have liked to [[AWorldwidePunomenon [[IncrediblyLamePun have him over for dinner]].
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* [[spoiler: ShootTheDog: For one brief, shining moment, it seemed like Nick was finally, FINALLY going to make it to the safezone. WITH Rob in tow. And then Kyle happened.]]
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** [[spoiler: Chapter 33. "I will fucking KILL YOU, Kyle."]]
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[[caption-width:350: Yes, this is [[BadassInANiceSuit Nick]]. After a sunken boat, an encounter with a Witch, and a separation from his teammates, that is.]]
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[[caption-width:300: Yes, this is [[BadassInANiceSuit Nick]]. After a sunken boat, an encounter with a Witch, and a separation from his teammates, that is.]]
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Forgot the period, champ.
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This fanfic is still in-progress, at 30+ chapters
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This fanfic is still in-progress, at 30+ chapters, and is currently on hiatus due to the author having problems with her laptop.
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This fanfic is still in-progress, at 30+ chapters, and is currently on hiatus due to the author having problems with her laptop.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Isaac's only form of humor is making ''painfully'' terrible zombie puns.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Isaac's only form of humor is making ''painfully'' terrible zombie puns. Guess how the others react.
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Correcting the update statement.
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This fanfic is still in-progress, at 30+ chapters, but it is updated regularly.
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This fanfic is still in-progress, at 30+ chapters, but it and is updated regularly.
currently on hiatus due to the author having problems with her laptop.
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* HesJustHiding: [[spoiler:The note Nick found at Eight Springs]] makes it clear that Ellis is clinging to the hope that Nick isn't dead.
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* HesJustHiding: In-universe example. [[spoiler:The note Nick found at Eight Springs]] makes it clear that Ellis is clinging to the hope that Nick isn't dead.
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* TroublingUnchildhoodBehavior: Isaac, the twelve-year-old sniper.
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* TroublingUnchildhoodBehavior: TroublingUnchildlikeBehaviour: Isaac, the twelve-year-old sniper.
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* BeardOfSorrow: Well, several months of not shaving does that to a person.
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* BadassAndChildDuo: While Terry and Sean are more teenagers than kids, Isaac definitely counts when they're with Nick.
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No need for two potholes to the same link, yeah? Also, linking to the actual work, and not only to the artist.
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Making it more adequate. I\'ll pothole the image to the deviation later.
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Yes, this is [[BadassInANiceSuit Nick. After a sunken boat, an encounter with a Witch, and a separation from his teammates, that is.]]
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* BreakTheHaughty: Seems to be the road Nick's going down right now. Nick was a handsome, narcissistic, smug jerk ass who only looked after himself before the infection. Suddenly he is a scarred, half blind, and desperately trying to reconnect with his companions.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Seems to be the road Nick's going down right now. Nick was a handsome, narcissistic, smug jerk ass who only looked after himself before the infection. Suddenly he is a scarred, half blind, alone and desperately trying to reconnect with his companions.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Seems to be the road Nick's going down right now.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Seems to be the road Nick's going down right now. Nick was a handsome, narcissistic, smug jerk ass who only looked after himself before the infection. Suddenly he is a scarred, half blind, and desperately trying to reconnect with his companions.
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A [[Left4Dead Left 4 Dead 2]] fanfiction that takes place after the ending of the game. Apparently the survivors were slated to be brought to [[AllThereInTheManual a fleet of cruise ships]]. The author takes this idea and runs with it, having the cruise ship crash and/or sink into the ocean. The game's party of four becomes separated from each other. This story follows Nick as he tries to reunite with them.
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A [[Left4Dead Left 4 Dead 2]] fanfiction by [[http://disrupted-original.deviantart.com/ Disrupted Original]] that takes place after the ending of the game. Apparently the survivors were slated to be brought to [[AllThereInTheManual a fleet of cruise ships]]. The author takes this idea and runs with it, having the cruise ship crash and/or sink into the ocean. The game's party of four becomes separated from each other. This story follows Nick as he tries to reunite with them.
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* ScarsAreForever: Nick can certainly tell you that.
* ScarSurvey: With a face like Nick's this trope was bound to happen eventually.
* ScarSurvey: With a face like Nick's this trope was bound to happen eventually.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Nick apparently has a fear of water [[spoiler: from nearly drowning on a cruise ship]] and a 'really-he'll-piss-his-pants' fear of Witches. [[spoiler: For good reason.]]
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Nick apparently has a fear of water [[spoiler: from nearly drowning on a cruise ship]] and a 'really-he'll-piss-his-pants' fear of Witches. [[spoiler: For good reason.]]
* WordOfGod: The author has stated that in canon, [[spoiler: Amanda becomes a witch after she is abandoned.]]
* WordOfGod: The author has stated that in canon, [[spoiler: Amanda becomes a witch after she is abandoned.]]
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* ThrowTheDogABone: In chapter 28, after all the shit Nick's been through the past twenty eight chapters, the gods above must have smiled on him, when he [[spoiler: finally, ''finally'' gets laid by a fiery red head.]]
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* LeftForDead: [[spoiler: Nick does this to Amanda early on after she tries to kill him.]]
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This fanfic is still in-progress, at 20+ chapters, but it is updated regularly.
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* ImAHumanitarian: It's never blatantly revealed, but rather hinted that a pair of survivors Nick runs into would have liked to [AWorldwidePunomenon have him over for dinner]].
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* ImAHumanitarian: It's never blatantly revealed, but rather hinted that a pair of survivors Nick runs into would have liked to [AWorldwidePunomenon [[AWorldwidePunomenon have him over for dinner]].
