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* CallingTheOldManOut:
**All of Calvin and his father's grievences come to a downright ''explosive'' collision in this story, having been built up since the rewritten version of Fanfic/CanYouImagineThat. To elaborate, Dad drags the family to their awful vacation site once more, but Calvin-- take note that this is the rewritten version of Calvin that's been through '''A LOT''' more than his original-verse counterpart-- is having none of it, calling out his Dad for always doing things ''he'' wants to do with no input from his wife or son, overriding Dad's condescending arguments to the point where the latter finally snaps. Mom manages to intervene before things can get worse, but by that point Calvin is so fed up with everything that he storms off in disgust.
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!!The Rewrite contains examples of:
* CallingTheOldManOut:
**All of Calvin and his father's grievences come to a downright ''explosive'' collision in this story, having been built up since the rewritten version of Fanfic/CanYouImagineThat. To elaborate, Dad drags the family to their awful vacation site once more, but Calvin-- take note that this is the rewritten version of Calvin that's been through '''A LOT''' more than his original-verse counterpart-- is having none of it, calling out his Dad for always doing things ''he'' wants to do with no input from his wife or son, overriding Dad's condescending arguments to the point where the latter finally snaps. Mom manages to intervene before things can get worse, but by that point Calvin is so fed up with everything that he storms off in disgust.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12859278/1/Trouble-Island-REWRITTEN A rewrite]] is in progress.
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--> '''Hobbes:''' I'd say it's a tree, just like that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one…\\
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* {{Unishment}} and YouAreGrounded:
--> '''Dad:''' You're grounded. When we get to the campsite, you can't leave the tent.\\
'''Calvin:''' YAY!
--> '''Dad:''' You're grounded. When we get to the campsite, you can't leave the tent.\\
'''Calvin:''' YAY!
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* {{Unishment}} and YouAreGrounded:
--> '''Dad:''' -->'''Dad:''' You're grounded. When we get to the campsite, you can't leave the tent.\\
'''Calvin:'''YAY![[{{Unishment}} YAY!]]
'''Calvin:'''
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--> '''Calvin:''' Not that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that and that. I meant ''that''!
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* ContinuityCavalcade: Part of Chapter 5 has Calvin listing all the things he and Hobbes had done - both in the original strip and {{Garfieldodie}}'s previous fics.
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* ContinuityCavalcade: Part of Chapter 5 has Calvin listing all the things he and Hobbes had done - both in the original strip and {{Garfieldodie}}'s Creator/{{garfieldodie}}'s previous fics.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2469304/1/Trouble_Island Trouble Island]]'' is the final ScriptFic of the "CalvinAndHobbes movie" trilogy by Creator/{{garfieldodie}}, and also a part of [[Fanfic/Swing123AndGarfieldodiesCalvinverse the Calvinverse.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2469304/1/Trouble_Island Trouble Island]]'' is the final ScriptFic of the "CalvinAndHobbes "ComicStrip/CalvinAndHobbes movie" trilogy by Creator/{{garfieldodie}}, and also a part of [[Fanfic/Swing123AndGarfieldodiesCalvinverse the Calvinverse.]]
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** "You said MickeyMouse wasn't real, and there he was at [[DisneyThemeParks DisneyLand.]]"
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** "You said MickeyMouse wasn't real, and there he was at [[DisneyThemeParks [[Ride/DisneyThemeParks DisneyLand.]]"
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* AirVentEscape: Inverted - Calvin and Hobbes use the air ducts to get ''in.''
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* AirVentEscape: Inverted - AirVentPassageway: Calvin and Hobbes use the air ducts to get ''in.''in Retro's ship.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2469304/1/Trouble_Island Trouble Island]]'' is the final ScriptFic of the "CalvinAndHobbes movie" trilogy.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2469304/1/Trouble_Island Trouble Island]]'' is the final ScriptFic of the "CalvinAndHobbes movie" trilogy.
trilogy by Creator/{{garfieldodie}}, and also a part of [[Fanfic/Swing123AndGarfieldodiesCalvinverse the Calvinverse.]]
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** Several people note Retro's ThreeStooges-esque AnimeHair.
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** Several people note Retro's ThreeStooges-esque [[Film/TheThreeStooges Three Stooges-esque]] AnimeHair.
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* EverythingsBetterWithBob: One of the aliens is named Bob.
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* ShoutOut: [[StarTrek "They just went where no man has gone before."]]
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* ShoutOut: [[StarTrek [[Franchise/StarTrek "They just went where no man has gone before."]]
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** Retro does one in Chapter 10.
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* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: In a ''good'' way. Though the Imaginator is destroyed, people now realize Calvin's imagination and thus treat him a little better.
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* ThePowerOfRock: Ala ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheMovie'', though it's a full band this time.
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* CallBack: To ''Fanfic/CanYouImagineThat'':
--> '''Retro:''' You may have ruined one part, but I can make a new Imaginator. I can make more pills. I have the technology, the know-how and the cool car. You may ''try'' to stop me, but you know you won't.
* CassandraTruth: ''Finally'' subverted with Uncle Max.
--> '''Retro:''' You may have ruined one part, but I can make a new Imaginator. I can make more pills. I have the technology, the know-how and the cool car. You may ''try'' to stop me, but you know you won't.
* CassandraTruth: ''Finally'' subverted with Uncle Max.
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* {{Fainting}}: Lampshaded.
--> '''Hobbes:''' You know, if you feel the urge to pass out on the floor in shock, feel free.\\
'''Uncle Max:''' I think I will. Someone get behind me.
--> '''Hobbes:''' You know, if you feel the urge to pass out on the floor in shock, feel free.\\
'''Uncle Max:''' I think I will. Someone get behind me.
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* BreakTheCutie: Calvin, thanks to Retro's speech.
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* CrapsackWorld: Retropia.
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* {{Egopolis}}: Retropia (one of Retro's possible names for Earth under his command).
* EverythingsBetterWithBob: One of the aliens is named Bob.
* EverythingsBetterWithBob: One of the aliens is named Bob.
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** Several people note Retro's ThreeStooges-esque AnimeHair.
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* BigNo: Calvin, after [[spoiler:Hobbes is "un-imagined".]]
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* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler:Hobbes, ala ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheMovie''.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
--> '''Retro:''' Of course not! You're an idiotic child. This tiger isn't a real tiger. He's a toy powered to be real by your imagination! That's why I did the whole Dr. Griffin thing. If I separated you two and helped you realize what a lie your life has been, you'd lose confidence in yourself, and I'd eliminate you once and for all.
--> '''Retro:''' Of course not! You're an idiotic child. This tiger isn't a real tiger. He's a toy powered to be real by your imagination! That's why I did the whole Dr. Griffin thing. If I separated you two and helped you realize what a lie your life has been, you'd lose confidence in yourself, and I'd eliminate you once and for all.
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--> '''Calvin:''' Not that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that and that. I meant that!
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--> '''Calvin:''' Not that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that and that. I meant that!''that''!
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* MrImagination: Deconstructed somewhat.
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* OverlyLongGag:
--> '''Hobbes:''' I'd say it's a tree, just like that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one…\\
--> '''Calvin:''' Not that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that and that. I meant that!
--> '''Hobbes:''' I'd say it's a tree, just like that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one and that one…\\
--> '''Calvin:''' Not that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that and that. I meant that!
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* ThePlague: Retro's pills induce this.
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* SicklyGreenGlow: Anything with the pills produces this effect.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: ''With one last ditch-effort, pardon the pun, our hero takes out his blaster and fires repeatedly at the aliens.''
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* IncrediblyLamePun: IncrediblyLamePun:
--> ''With one last ditch-effort, pardon the pun, our hero takes out his blaster and fires repeatedly at the aliens.''
--> ''With one last ditch-effort, pardon the pun, our hero takes out his blaster and fires repeatedly at the aliens.''
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** "You said MickeyMouse wasn't real, and there he was at [[DisneyThemeParks DisneyLand.]]"
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* AnimeHair: Lampshaded - "You bet your spiky hair it's real."
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* BrakeAngrily: Shortly after the below LongList.
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* LongList:
--> '''Calvin:''' Yeah, except for the poison ivy, dry spam, cold waters, lumpy sleeping bags, wild animals, dampness, blistering sun, blistered ankles, cuts and bruises, shortage of real food, endless rain, mosquitoes, malaria, hypothermia, pneumonia, your dumb character speeches, your dumb early-bird thing, gutting the fish, getting stuck on a boat with you yammering, the bad running distance from the tents to the canoe, the intolerable winds that occur at noon, your inability to make a campfire, actually eating what's in the duffel bag, losing half the luggage on the way home, the creepy guy at the canoe rental shack, the idiotic campfire songs, the no TV, and the fact that you can't camp to save your life, there should be no worries.
--> '''Calvin:''' Yeah, except for the poison ivy, dry spam, cold waters, lumpy sleeping bags, wild animals, dampness, blistering sun, blistered ankles, cuts and bruises, shortage of real food, endless rain, mosquitoes, malaria, hypothermia, pneumonia, your dumb character speeches, your dumb early-bird thing, gutting the fish, getting stuck on a boat with you yammering, the bad running distance from the tents to the canoe, the intolerable winds that occur at noon, your inability to make a campfire, actually eating what's in the duffel bag, losing half the luggage on the way home, the creepy guy at the canoe rental shack, the idiotic campfire songs, the no TV, and the fact that you can't camp to save your life, there should be no worries.
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* AirVentEscape: Inverted - Calvin and Hobbes use the air ducts to get ''in.''
* DoomyDoomsOfDoom: Chapter 3 - "The Vacation Spot of Doom".
* DoomyDoomsOfDoom: Chapter 3 - "The Vacation Spot of Doom".
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* GoshDarnItToHeck: Calvin actually uses the first two words in Chapter 3.
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* ExtremeOmnivore: "The couch was pretty comfy though. Tasty, too."
* IncrediblyLamePun: ''With one last ditch-effort, pardon the pun, our hero takes out his blaster and fires repeatedly at the aliens.''
* InkblotTest: Calvin undergoes one.
* ExtremeOmnivore: "The couch was pretty comfy though. Tasty, too."
* IncrediblyLamePun: ''With one last ditch-effort, pardon the pun, our hero takes out his blaster and fires repeatedly at the aliens.''
* InkblotTest: Calvin undergoes one.
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"BECAUSE, WE— I dunno."\\
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* ShoutOut: [[StarTrek "They just went where no man has gone before."]]"]]
* {{Unishment}} and YouAreGrounded:
--> '''Dad:''' You're grounded. When we get to the campsite, you can't leave the tent.\\
'''Calvin:''' YAY!
* ShoutOut: [[StarTrek "They just went where no man has gone before.
* {{Unishment}} and YouAreGrounded:
--> '''Dad:''' You're grounded. When we get to the campsite, you can't leave the tent.\\
'''Calvin:''' YAY!
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* MythologyGag: Chapter 1 is almost entirely composed of these.
* NoIndoorVoice: Lampshaded.
-->"WHOA!" Calvin shouted.\\
"WHAT WAS THAT?" shouted Hobbes.\\
"I DON'T KNOW!"\\
"MAN, WAS IT EVER FAST!"\\
"YEAH, I CAN BARELY SEE IT NOW!"\\
"I THINK I LOST MY HAT!"\\
"ME TOO!"\\
"WHAT SHOULD WE DO?"\\
"I DON'T KNOW!"\\
"HEY, WHY ARE WE YELLING?"\\
"BECAUSE, WE— I dunno."\\
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2469304/1/Trouble_Island Trouble Island]]'' is the final ScriptFic of the "CalvinAndHobbes movie" trilogy.
Calvin and Hobbes find themselves facing an old foe, so they attempt to escape their campsite... but something's up with their parents.
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Calvin and Hobbes find themselves facing an old foe, so they attempt to escape their campsite... but something's up with their parents.
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